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[General]
- 일단 앞에분이 말했듯이 오프셋 약간 빠릅니다. 7510 ~ 7512 정도로 하면 맞을것 같네요.

[Freely]
00:19:875 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - 살짝 어색하다는 느낌이 드네요. 음에 맞춰서 박자를 이렇게 하는편이 더 나을거라 생각함.
00:27:750 (1) - 중간에 00:27:937에 음이 있으니 1 / 2 슬라이더로 해보는건 어떤가요?
01:22:875 (2) - 이상한건 아닌데, 피아노 음이 강하니까 피아노 음에 맞추는게 낫지 않은가요?

맵을 잘만드셔서 이거밖에 못잡겠습니다. 무능력해서 죄송합니다. DX
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00:12:917 - 부터 00:13:519 - 구간의 슬라이드 박자가 이상한거 같습니다.

01:36:937 - 이 첫 슬라이더 부분을 연타로 바꾸심이 어떠십니까(개인적인 생각)
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Broccoly wrote:

UGGGHGHGH Sorry Raose I was replying to your mod and my laptop force shutdown due to battery :<
I-I don't think I can do it again.. but your mod was so so helpful. Changed some things like you said.
Thanks so much!! :)
wahhhhh :'( well glad it was helpful!!
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Ah yes, this map



Normal



  1. HP Drain 2.5 matches better because you won't expect them to fail anyways no matter what the drain you use (obviously can't use higher drain) and plus it provides much more balanced settings imo
  2. 00:10:500 (1) - I would of liked it better if you could start this slider with a slight curve, brings some more flavor to the help in my eyes because you started the previous combo the same way as this one.
  3. 00:25:500 (1,2,3) - Starting here the whistles start on white / red ticks unlike before, you might add whistles according to where those are instead of every other 1/2 beat. that being said a whistle could go to 3.
  4. 00:34:500 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This has got to be the most complex rhythm ever right? joking. but I could see many different areas where you could of simplified the rhythm maybe reverse remove circle 2 and reverse 1? at first thought I was hoping this would lead to the kiai after the spinner but noooo.
  5. 00:50:812 (5) - Start of this needs a finish , sounds awfully empty without it and those white beats that are at 00:49:500 (1,2,3) - lead to it well, and also add to end of 00:51:562 (7) - or else it sounds empty , but somewhere there has to be finishes added towards it.
  6. 00:57:750 (6) - According to your design, it would of been way if you took 00:56:062 (2) - and flipped it vertically, do it please if you haven't already done so.
  7. 01:18:750 (5,6) - I don't think there is a reason to add an extra note in replacement for the slider end, it's just not needed in my eyes, if I were you I would just extend slider 5's ending and remove 6. it just complicates the rhythm way more than needed. same for this 01:17:625 (2,3) - it's not really needed imo.
  8. 01:51:375 (5,6) - ^
  9. 01:38:625 (1) - I can understand your trying to emphasize the drums in the start? but still I think only the finishes really need to be represented here? seems just a way for you to add the drum whistle by mapping the red tick lol.
  10. 01:42:750 (6,7) - Rhythm needs revising here, I thought it was suppose to be similar to 01:42:750 (6,7) - ? and also your missing many beats here? perhaps try this? http://puu.sh/aKwDB.jpg
  11. 01:14:625 (1) - For all these spinners, the beat at 1 is really strong, you should add a circle+finish to the start of the spinner here and move the spinner towards the blue tick. like you did with 02:11:437 (3,1) -
  12. 01:59:625 (1) - ^


Karia's Hard



  1. 00:17:625 (1) - Extend the spinner to blue tick and add a note here, I don't think ignoring this beat is good, its not a must but its something to start with :P
  2. 01:14:625 (1) - ^
  3. 01:59:625 (1) - ^
  4. 00:20:437 (3) - Here I think its best if you ctrl+G imo, the jumps seem to major for this part and the emphasis is placed all wrong, and the issue is also with polarity.
  5. 00:34:500 (1,2,3,4) - The flow here is really weird, this whole pattern would connect more if you have zig-zag movement since you all of a sudden go left on the 4th note, which kinda breaks the flow with how the circles are mapped. http://puu.sh/aL05F.jpg that pattern That pattern leads well and connects all the notes properly and it fits together like a actual combo would.
  6. 00:47:250 (4) - Too many curved slider's here I'd prefer you curve this slider slightly, flow would be a little bit too linear if you don't curve one of these slider's a little bit anyway. http://puu.sh/aL0gL.jpg ,yeah I'd prefer that because it leads to the next note well enough in my eyes.
  7. 01:01:125 (2) - Imo, this seems unnecessary only some beats in here should be emphasized and that's the beats in the red ticks and there should be a pause between each of the notes here, that being said you should remove this note. and remove the new combo too :x
  8. 01:05:062 (2,3) - Try to make them blanket since you already curve these sliders, it would flow much better if you did here is what it should look like if you do : http://puu.sh/aL0qZ.jpg that fits better well and the design that you are already aiming for in this part and also the spacing hardly changes for this part.
  9. 01:30:281 (2,3) - Not sure about this one but change to slider to make the jump easier to play here?
  10. 01:50:062 (2) - The spacing on this is too low, there so close together and for the other part's the spacing is so high, I'd prefer you increase spacing of this note slightly, people might think it's placed on blue tick instead red.
  11. 01:52:500 (1) - I think a finish would sound better to the start of the slider than a whistle or you could add it here 01:53:812 (1) -
  12. 02:02:437 (4) - Decreasing spacing here? imo only 1 jump is needed here and that's the jump towards the next note not here, since it has a new combo and a stronger beat.
  13. 01:40:500 (1) - A finish sounds much better in the start of this.
  14. 01:53:812 (1) - ^


Freely



  1. The diff settings are lol, its better to round to the nearest half decimal here, so go from 6.9 drain to 7 and change od 7.4 to 7.5 , won't really make a difference but those settings work more.
  2. 00:07:875 (2) - I don't understand the reason why this has to be hard curved, could you remove the red point in the slider and replace it with a regular one? I think you mean't to blanket the notes here because it surely looks better that way. doesn't really affect gameplay but them blanketing fits more in this part.
  3. 00:09:375 (3) - The polarity here, is really messed your going up and up again, when the sliders are facing down, honestly it would be better if you could of flipped this slider for better flow.
  4. 00:11:437 (6,7) - Same here, polarity is weird, I would expect to jump from 7 to 6 not 6 to 7, it leads way more to the next combo than how you have it currently, too much unneeded jumps.
  5. 00:29:062 (3) - ^
  6. 00:40:312 (1,2) - Switch the new combo's here? honestly the new combo should be added towards the anti-jump for better readability in this part in my eyes.
  7. 00:43:312 (1,2) - ^
  8. 00:48:750 (4) - This jump is huge and the circles here already form a square, I think it's safe to say you can add a new combo here to seperate it from the previous.
  9. 00:54:187 (2,3) - Are you sure you want to do this? I found an alternative design you could try , here's hoping you like it at least a little bit http://puu.sh/aL1hF.jpg flows better in my eyes.
  10. 00:59:437 (5,6) - Again some of these movement aren't very intuitive, I'd rather you ctrl+g because that's more naturally how this combo would flow, you don't expect to suddenly go back to the previous note.
  11. 00:50:812 (1) - The finish makes more sense if you added it to the start of the slider rather than the end.
  12. 01:37:500 (4) - Such large pauses is going hurt drain, I would add a new combo here so there's a little bit more drain and also the jump towards here is wow. 01:38:625 (1) - Make sure remove it 01:38:625 (1) - or you can keep it if you want.
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Tari wrote:

Ah yes, this map



Normal



  1. HP Drain 2.5 matches better because you won't expect them to fail anyways no matter what the drain you use (obviously can't use higher drain) and plus it provides much more balanced settings imo Done
  2. 00:10:500 (1) - I would of liked it better if you could start this slider with a slight curve, brings some more flavor to the help in my eyes because you started the previous combo the same way as this one. I think it fits more to be straight there
  3. 00:25:500 (1,2,3) - Starting here the whistles start on white / red ticks unlike before, you might add whistles according to where those are instead of every other 1/2 beat. that being said a whistle could go to 3. Done
  4. 00:34:500 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This has got to be the most complex rhythm ever right? joking. but I could see many different areas where you could of simplified the rhythm maybe reverse remove circle 2 and reverse 1? at first thought I was hoping this would lead to the kiai after the spinner but noooo.Woa I think the rhythm there is easy to follow.. and the pattern is easy too..
  5. 00:50:812 (5) - Start of this needs a finish , sounds awfully empty without it and those white beats that are at 00:49:500 (1,2,3) - lead to it well, and also add to end of 00:51:562 (7) - or else it sounds empty , but somewhere there has to be finishes added towards it. Added
  6. 00:57:750 (6) - According to your design, it would of been way if you took 00:56:062 (2) - and flipped it vertically, do it please if you haven't already done so. Done. good idea
  7. 01:18:750 (5,6) - I don't think there is a reason to add an extra note in replacement for the slider end, it's just not needed in my eyes, if I were you I would just extend slider 5's ending and remove 6. it just complicates the rhythm way more than needed. same for this 01:17:625 (2,3) - it's not really needed imo. I think it's more fun to add a note than just to have a slider..
  8. 01:51:375 (5,6) - ^
  9. 01:38:625 (1) - I can understand your trying to emphasize the drums in the start? but still I think only the finishes really need to be represented here? seems just a way for you to add the drum whistle by mapping the red tick lol. heh yes i wanted to emphasize
  10. 01:42:750 (6,7) - Rhythm needs revising here, I thought it was suppose to be similar to 01:42:750 (6,7) - ? and also your missing many beats here? perhaps try this? http://puu.sh/aKwDB.jpg Done. Nice
  11. 01:14:625 (1) - For all these spinners, the beat at 1 is really strong, you should add a circle+finish to the start of the spinner here and move the spinner towards the blue tick. like you did with 02:11:437 (3,1) - Done
  12. 01:59:625 (1) - ^
Done

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  1. The diff settings are lol, its better to round to the nearest half decimal here, so go from 6.9 drain to 7 and change od 7.4 to 7.5 , won't really make a difference but those settings work more. heh they have a special meaning. I'd like to keep it.
  2. 00:07:875 (2) - I don't understand the reason why this has to be hard curved, could you remove the red point in the slider and replace it with a regular one? I think you mean't to blanket the notes here because it surely looks better that way. doesn't really affect gameplay but them blanketing fits more in this part. I like how it looks. Feels more refined to me.
  3. 00:09:375 (3) - The polarity here, is really messed your going up and up again, when the sliders are facing down, honestly it would be better if you could of flipped this slider for better flow. ah yes, i had the same opinions when I ranked Cry More; well, I like how it plays.. just up and down is no fun
  4. 00:11:437 (6,7) - Same here, polarity is weird, I would expect to jump from 7 to 6 not 6 to 7, it leads way more to the next combo than how you have it currently, too much unneeded jumps. This one I fixed.
  5. 00:29:062 (3) - ^ ^
  6. 00:40:312 (1,2) - Switch the new combo's here? honestly the new combo should be added towards the anti-jump for better readability in this part in my eyes. Fixed
  7. 00:43:312 (1,2) - ^ Fixed
  8. 00:48:750 (4) - This jump is huge and the circles here already form a square, I think it's safe to say you can add a new combo here to seperate it from the previous. Fixed
  9. 00:54:187 (2,3) - Are you sure you want to do this? I found an alternative design you could try , here's hoping you like it at least a little bit http://puu.sh/aL1hF.jpg flows better in my eyes. Yeah, trying new things~ and it plays pretty well
  10. 00:59:437 (5,6) - Again some of these movement aren't very intuitive, I'd rather you ctrl+g because that's more naturally how this combo would flow, you don't expect to suddenly go back to the previous note. I think the current pattern's more fun
  11. 00:50:812 (1) - The finish makes more sense if you added it to the start of the slider rather than the end. Fixed. Good catch
  12. 01:37:500 (4) - Such large pauses is going hurt drain, I would add a new combo here so there's a little bit more drain and also the jump towards here is wow. 01:38:625 (1) - Make sure remove it 01:38:625 (1) - or you can keep it if you want.Hurting the drain was my intention. It can give the build-up feeling I want the players to experience.
Nice job using emoticons on only Karia's diff. I feel special.
Thanks for the mod bra it was helpful :)

p.s. Karia's on a trip so he'll fix his later
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Underflow wrote:

[General]
- 일단 앞에분이 말했듯이 오프셋 약간 빠릅니다. 7510 ~ 7512 정도로 하면 맞을것 같네요. 네 한번 오프셋잘하는친구한테 물어볼게요

[Freely]
00:19:875 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - 살짝 어색하다는 느낌이 드네요. 음에 맞춰서 박자를 이렇게 하는편이 더 나을거라 생각함. 아 그것도 좋네요. 근데 초반부라 편안한 비트로 넣고싶어서.. 나중에 한번더 생각해보겟습니다.
00:27:750 (1) - 중간에 00:27:937에 음이 있으니 1 / 2 슬라이더로 해보는건 어떤가요? Fixed.
01:22:875 (2) - 이상한건 아닌데, 피아노 음이 강하니까 피아노 음에 맞추는게 낫지 않은가요? 다른모더도 그런말을 하긴했는데.. 흠 이것도 한번 생각해보겠습니다. 그런방식으로 더좋게 바꿀아이디어가 생각나면 함 바꿔볼게요~

맵을 잘만드셔서 이거밖에 못잡겠습니다. 무능력해서 죄송합니다. DX ㅋㅋ아니에요 도움됫습니다. 감사함다!!!!

GGoMaCL wrote:

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00:12:917 - 부터 00:13:519 - 구간의 슬라이드 박자가 이상한거 같습니다. 테스트플레이어들은 별말없던데..ㅋㅋ 함의견더들어보죠

01:36:937 - 이 첫 슬라이더 부분을 연타로 바꾸심이 어떠십니까(개인적인 생각)전 저렇게 1/4점프가 더 재밌을거같아서..
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from Scorpiour's Modding Queue

Freely

  1. 00:25:125 (1,3) - just swap nc setting here, not that necessary to set nc by following the vocal track
  2. i should admit that this is a really good map, 2 stars to u

Karia's Hard

  1. 00:33:375 (2) - hmm, i'd like to stack it at the head of 00:33:562 (3) -
  2. good map, 1 extra star for this

Normal

  1. 00:15:750 (5) - 1/2 slider here's better to me
  2. 00:59:437 (3,4) - perfect this blanket (nazi
very well mapped and designed map. those rhythm and composing just force me to say nothing else to this

pm me when u finished checking all ur mods

good luck
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Hollow Wings wrote:

from Scorpiour's Modding Queue

Freely

  1. 00:25:125 (1,3) - just swap nc setting here, not that necessary to set nc by following the vocal track Fixed
  2. i should admit that this is a really good map, 2 stars to u Woww thanks!

Normal

  1. 00:15:750 (5) - 1/2 slider here's better to me ah this one I like how a circle plays,,
  2. 00:59:437 (3,4) - perfect this blanket (nazi Tried Fixing.
very well mapped and designed map. those rhythm and composing just force me to say nothing else to this Thanks a lot!!!

pm me when u finished checking all ur mods Alright.

good luck C:
Karia is on a trip, so I'll be updating his diff when he comes back
Updated my diffs~
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I'm back @3@

Shinobu Oshino wrote:

Hard
  1. 00:44:156 (3,4,5,6) - Feels really awkward to play this. Nothing else in this difficulty plays similarly and felt out of place. Well..Here is no problem imo ;w;
  2. 00:52:500 - There's a sudden change of hitsounds here, and I was really confused on my first play through.\ Sorry..I can't understand about this. This hitsound is same with others,,
  3. 00:55:875 (2) - Needs a clap hitsound, so does 00:56:625 (4) - . fixed
  4. 00:56:156 - Snare in the song with no note to represent it. There are a few examples of this in the song, but this one I feel needs it. fixed

Raose wrote:

[Karia's Hard]

the volume sounds quite loud in the very beginning, and it's louder than the kiai, which is kinda odd :/ consider lowering it to maybe... 75%? fixed myself

00:09:937 (4,5,6) - hmm i think it'd be better if these circles had equal spacing. i know the pitch of the music gets lower, but i think each note should be equally strong! ok, fixed
01:16:500 (1) - (and onward) - consider putting soft whistles to emphasize the piano, if possible hmm..ok, I'll consider it later
01:21:750 (1,2,3,4) - this threw me off, i thought this was a stream :/ especially since you put claps on them, i think the circle pattern could have more impact if the circles were more spread out I want the anti-jump on here,,sorry
02:03:562 (3) - hmm this overlap looks a bit messy to me D: here's an alternative: http://puu.sh/aHQx3/01fe2db99f.jpg this overlap is no problem to me,,sorry ;w;

Tari wrote:

Karia's Hard



  1. 00:17:625 (1) - Extend the spinner to blue tick and add a note here, I don't think ignoring this beat is good, its not a must but its something to start with :PYeah, I know about this beat that fits with a note..but I don't want it in this diff, sorrt
  2. 01:14:625 (1) - ^ ^
  3. 01:59:625 (1) - ^ ^
  4. 00:20:437 (3) - Here I think its best if you ctrl+G imo, the jumps seem to major for this part and the emphasis is placed all wrong, and the issue is also with polarity. Almost jumps in this diff are on strong beat I think. But about this part, I didn't put the jumps following the strong beat,,and just I want this :D
  5. 00:34:500 (1,2,3,4) - The flow here is really weird, this whole pattern would connect more if you have zig-zag movement since you all of a sudden go left on the 4th note, which kinda breaks the flow with how the circles are mapped. http://puu.sh/aL05F.jpg that pattern That pattern leads well and connects all the notes properly and it fits together like a actual combo would. fixed
  6. 00:47:250 (4) - Too many curved slider's here I'd prefer you curve this slider slightly, flow would be a little bit too linear if you don't curve one of these slider's a little bit anyway. http://puu.sh/aL0gL.jpg ,yeah I'd prefer that because it leads to the next note well enough in my eyes. Personally, there is no gap between straight's and a bit curved's. I know about the curved slider's flow is better to see, but in game, they are almost same flow imo and,,I don't want curved slider on this..Sorry
  7. 01:01:125 (2) - Imo, this seems unnecessary only some beats in here should be emphasized and that's the beats in the red ticks and there should be a pause between each of the notes here, that being said you should remove this note. and remove the new combo too :xA bit strange after removing this note to me..;w; sorry
  8. 01:05:062 (2,3) - Try to make them blanket since you already curve these sliders, it would flow much better if you did here is what it should look like if you do : http://puu.sh/aL0qZ.jpg that fits better well and the design that you are already aiming for in this part and also the spacing hardly changes for this part. Curved a bit more.
  9. 01:30:281 (2,3) - Not sure about this one but change to slider to make the jump easier to play here? Not fit the jump in here imo.. And note is better than slider to me. Sorry
  10. 01:50:062 (2) - The spacing on this is too low, there so close together and for the other part's the spacing is so high, I'd prefer you increase spacing of this note slightly, people might think it's placed on blue tick instead red. fixed
  11. 01:52:500 (1) - I think a finish would sound better to the start of the slider than a whistle or you could add it here 01:53:812 (1) - Finish on there is a bit strange imo..sorry
  12. 02:02:437 (4) - Decreasing spacing here? imo only 1 jump is needed here and that's the jump towards the next note not here, since it has a new combo and a stronger beat. fixed
  13. 01:40:500 (1) - A finish sounds much better in the start of this. fixed
  14. 01:53:812 (1) - ^ Strange to me..sorry

Hollow Wings wrote:

Karia's Hard

  1. 00:33:375 (2) - hmm, i'd like to stack it at the head of 00:33:562 (3) - stack the (2) and (3) is not good imo, cuz their beats-gap is too big,,sorry
  2. good map, 1 extra star for this :P
Thanks for modding!

osu file format v13

[General]
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All updated!
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Hi there~~ mod from HW's recommendation

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions


[Freely]
  1. 00:09:375 (3,4) - The downbeat around here is misplaced. The beat i suggest is:
  2. 00:26:062 (2) - polyline here is looked weird a little, maybe a curve is better?
  3. 00:27:562 - seems you did not follow the vocal so perhaps here could be a note placed at 256:350
  4. 00:37:125 (6,7,8,9,10) - ctrl+g for better flow?
  5. 02:10:500 (1) - maybe slider+note is better


[Karia's Hard]
  1. 01:42:937 (2) - it's looked confused a little..maybe use NC or something else to make it more recognizable?
  2. 01:43:875 (2,3,4,1) - suddenly claps here heard weird slightly. also 01:54:562 (3,4,5) - 01:57:562 (2,3) -


[Normal]
  1. 00:27:750 (1,2) - a repeat here maybe better
  2. 00:29:812 (3,4) - could be combined to one slider i suppose, also 00:32:812 (3,4) - , 00:50:812 (5,6) - ..etc.. which could reduce the overall difficulty of your map slightly.
  3. 00:37:125 (6,7) - 01:29:625 (3,4) - also this kinda pattern.. i really concern the difficulty of this diff.
  4. 02:11:718 (1) - 1/4 is close, use 1/2 in E/N at least, also 02:17:343 (1) -


The difficulty of Normal is an issue, but generally the mapset if good. Try to find several more mod to resolve it, and call me back to recheck when you're ready :)
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woww thanks a lot!! I'll be fixing it tomorrow (have a flight today) C:
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Scorpiour wrote:

[Karia's Hard]
  1. 01:42:937 (2) - it's looked confused a little..maybe use NC or something else to make it more recognizable? Hmm,,already 01:42:750 (1,2,3) this anti-pattern has the NC. So (2) need not it imo, sorry
  2. 01:43:875 (2,3,4,1) - suddenly claps here heard weird slightly. also 01:54:562 (3,4,5) - 01:57:562 (2,3) - fixed
Thanks for modding!

노멀 커스텀11이 필요없어졌네요,,지워주세요 ㅎㅎ


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Tags:のぶなが Nobunaga Anipop ParkMemme Karia
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440,48,107625,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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108,231,109031,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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460,56,111375,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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272,104,112125,1,8,0:0:0:0:
284,184,112312,1,2,0:0:0:0:
300,264,112500,6,0,L|292:348,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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197,339,113156,2,0,P|140:356|84:336,1,120,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,276,113625,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,176,113812,6,0,B|104:112|72:68|72:68|128:72,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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300,48,114562,2,0,L|344:52,2,40,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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240,132,115312,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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252,60,117562,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,92,117750,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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28,88,118312,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,119625,12,8,120750,0:0:0:0:
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352,156,121875,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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92,100,122812,6,0,L|100:272,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,192,123375,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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160,340,123937,1,2,0:0:0:0:
252,264,124125,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,284,124312,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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484,264,124875,2,0,L|476:136,1,120,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,112,125250,2,0,L|456:32,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,40,125625,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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64,224,126937,1,2,0:0:0:0:
58,243,127031,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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posted

Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there~~ mod from HW's recommendation

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions


[Freely]
  1. 00:09:375 (3,4) - The downbeat around here is misplaced. The beat i suggest is:
    I tried changing it, but i really like the current rhythm better... I'll keep thinking
  2. 00:26:062 (2) - polyline here is looked weird a little, maybe a curve is better? giving some diversity in slider shapes hehe
  3. 00:27:562 - seems you did not follow the vocal so perhaps here could be a note placed at 256:350 I'd like that part to be relaxed and calm.
  4. 00:37:125 (6,7,8,9,10) - ctrl+g for better flow? I saw many testplays and no misses there at all :)
  5. 02:10:500 (1) - maybe slider+note is better Did that on the pattern right after.. thought I'd make the rhythm different


[Normal]
  1. 00:27:750 (1,2) - a repeat here maybe better Fixed
  2. 00:29:812 (3,4) - could be combined to one slider i suppose, also 00:32:812 (3,4) - , 00:50:812 (5,6) - ..etc.. which could reduce the overall difficulty of your map slightly. 00:50:812 (5,6) fixed this like you said.
  3. 00:37:125 (6,7) - 01:29:625 (3,4) - also this kinda pattern.. i really concern the difficulty of this diff. I think it's fine... I'll get more opinions.
  4. 02:11:718 (1) - 1/4 is close, use 1/2 in E/N at least, also 02:17:343 (1) - Fixed


The difficulty of Normal is an issue, but generally the mapset if good. Try to find several more mod to resolve it, and call me back to recheck when you're ready :)
Alright, thanks for the mod!! I'll try to get some more mods on Normal
posted
IRC Modded the Normal diff~
01:49 Priti: up for irc mod on Normal?
01:49 Broccoly: oh hey sure
01:50 *Priti is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/459326 Memme - Again [Normal]]
01:50 Priti: HOLY SHIT THESE HITSOUNDS ARE TOO LOUD
01:50 Broccoly: oh are they?
01:50 Priti: yes
01:50 Priti: my ears are ded
01:50 Priti: and I'm a person who likes strong hitsounds
01:51 Priti: like, in all parts but the calm ones
01:51 Priti: it's just too loud
01:52 Broccoly: http://puu.sh/aSMRQ/b70a0f3586.png
01:52 Broccoly: my setting's like this
01:52 Broccoly: not that i like loud hitsounds lol
01:52 Priti: wait
01:52 Priti: how did u get to that window
01:52 Broccoly: guess it depends on the user's setting
01:52 Broccoly: http://puu.sh/aSMVI/8350b73499.png
01:52 Priti: oh found it
01:52 Priti: idk
01:53 Priti: 00:17:625 (1) - This type of shiz pisses me off
01:53 Broccoly: scorpiour told me to get some mods for normal cuz he thinks it's kinda hard
01:53 Priti: There's no actual impact on where the spinner starts
01:53 Priti: since spinners don't actually have play impact
01:53 Priti: unlike circles or slider starts
01:53 Priti: maybe do something like this?
01:54 Priti: http://puu.sh/aSN2N.png
01:54 Priti: Also, the spinner doesn't allow enough recovery time
01:54 Priti: maybe end it at 00:19:500 - And start the mapping at 00:20:250
01:55 Broccoly: 00:19:500 (1) - since this is close to the center i think they have enough time to aim
01:55 Priti: They don't spin near the center
01:56 Priti: They go crazy when they see a spinner
01:56 Priti: trust me.
01:56 Broccoly: hmm
01:56 Priti: so yea
01:56 Priti: 2/1 is more ideal
01:56 Priti: 00:27:750 (1) - ew lonely combo
01:57 Priti: 00:30:375 (4) - This note isn't really needed, the pattern is intense enough and this circle doesn't emphasise much to be required.
01:57 Priti: 00:33:375 (4) - Same here
01:57 Broccoly: so just delete them?
01:57 Priti: 00:37:500 (1) - Same thing with the impact and recovery time
01:57 Priti: Yea
01:57 Priti: and rearrange the patterns accordingly
01:57 Priti: bcuz spacing
01:57 Broccoly: god yeah the spacing
01:57 Broccoly: need to move everything after
01:57 Priti: also
01:58 Priti: The way you use stacks here is super tricky
01:58 Priti: sometimes it's 1/1 sometimes it's 1/2
01:58 Priti: which makes this REALLY hard to read
01:58 Priti: also
01:58 Priti: 00:35:812 (4,5) - This is a total dick to read for new players
01:58 Broccoly: hmm ok
01:59 Broccoly: fixed
01:59 Priti: The rhythms usually aren't what makes this hard
01:59 Priti: It's the reading and the spinner recovery times
01:59 Priti: 01:27:000 (1,1,1,1) - Is this really needed? it makes it much more confusing to read
02:00 Broccoly: i wanted to emphasize the climax of the piano solo
02:00 Priti: ah
02:00 Priti: makes sense.
02:00 Broccoly: reading-wise i don't think it's that hard to read is it?
02:00 Priti: 01:27:000 (1) - 01:27:750 (1) - Add whistles then?
02:00 Priti: Works well with the pitch
02:00 Priti: 01:40:125 (4,2) - Is this supposed to be a blanket lol
02:01 Priti: 01:47:625 (3,4) - I don't know why, but I have a feeling people will read this as 1/2
02:01 Broccoly: oh no
02:01 Priti: 01:59:718 (1) - Recovery
02:02 Priti: 02:17:437 (1) - Most unneeded fadeout spinner ever
02:02 Priti: same for all diffs
02:02 Priti: this fadeout spinner doesn't fit.
02:02 Priti: think of it like this:
02:02 Priti: What do you do in a spinner?
02:02 Broccoly: spin
02:02 Priti: Move your cursor like crazy
02:02 Priti: super fast
02:02 Priti: It's not fitting for a really calm fadeout
02:03 Priti: Also, the fadeout isn't clear so you can't actually end it at a proper spot
02:03 Priti: just removing the spinner will make it nicer.
02:03 Priti: trust me
02:03 Priti: and it's not like you need to force in a spinner, there are enough spinners to prevent score ties
02:03 Broccoly: how about i remove it just from Normal
02:04 Priti: thing is
02:04 Priti: it doesn't fit the song at all
02:04 Priti: btw it ends 1/1 too late on Freely diff
02:04 Priti: but yea
02:04 Priti: Does it make sense with the music
02:04 Priti: to spin super fast
02:04 Priti: for such a calm note fadeout?
02:05 Broccoly: i mean
02:05 Broccoly: there are lots of other maps with calm fadeout which uses spinners
02:05 Priti: Doesn't mean you should ^^
02:05 Priti: It's something people really shouldn't do.
02:05 Broccoly: i know, but to me personally it fits..
02:05 Priti: how come?
02:06 Broccoly: it feels natural to me
02:06 Broccoly: well
02:06 Priti: Because of what people are used to do?
02:06 Priti: ah
02:06 Priti: Well, would you rather make sense or just go with the hoard
02:06 Broccoly: not only because of that
02:06 Broccoly: how do you spin
02:06 Priti: center
02:06 Priti: but it's a fast motion
02:06 Priti: for a calm sound
02:06 Priti: it's like putting a deathstream in the ending of this song
02:06 Broccoly: do you fast over 400?
02:06 Priti: it doesn't make sense
02:06 Broccoly: spin*
02:06 Priti: I personally don't
02:07 Priti: but I know people who do something like that
02:07 Broccoly: yeah me neither
02:07 Priti: and tbh over 250
02:07 Priti: is too fast for this anyways
02:07 Priti: in general, the whole spinning motion doesn't fit this, it mainly fits a windup
02:07 Broccoly: mmmmmm
02:07 Priti: but meh, whatever, guess I can't convince everyone to do the same as me.
02:07 Priti: But yea
02:07 Priti: just go over the diff
02:08 Priti: try to clean off some unneeded circles
02:08 Priti: fix the spinner recovery
02:08 Broccoly: alright
02:08 Priti: and readability of stacks
02:08 Priti: good luck :3
posted
Applied Priti's mod. Decreased some circles as much as I could.. removed spinner at the end. some slider+circle pattern changed to one slider.
Updated
posted
hihi! from queue :)
only Normal Diff mod!

[Normal]
  1. 00:14:062 (2) - In order to improve the flow from 00:13:500 (1) ,let the slightly curved slider?
  2. 00:22:500 (1) - Since this Slider is overlaying on 00:22:125 (5) ,I think it is a little difficult to read :? move it to x:64,y:25 ?
  3. 00:53:812 (3) - remove whistle at end?
    02:02:812 (3) - ^
  4. 01:00:937 (6) - add finish? Might forget put?
  5. 01:29:812 (3,4) - add whistle use additions soft?
  6. 01:27:375 (1,1,1) - Is this NC necessary?
  7. 01:40:875 (2) - blanket?
  8. 02:11:437 (3) - remove clap at end and add finish?


Good luck :oops:
posted

ShiraKai wrote:

hihi! from queue :)
only Normal Diff mod!

[Normal]
  1. 00:14:062 (2) - In order to improve the flow from 00:13:500 (1) ,let the slightly curved slider? sorry i like the shape now..
  2. 00:22:500 (1) - Since this Slider is overlaying on 00:22:125 (5) ,I think it is a little difficult to read :? move it to x:64,y:25 ? I think it's okay
  3. 00:53:812 (3) - remove whistle at end? done
    02:02:812 (3) - ^ done
  4. 01:00:937 (6) - add finish? Might forget put? good catch. thanks!
  5. 01:29:812 (3,4) - add whistle use additions soft? done
  6. 01:27:375 (1,1,1) - Is this NC necessary? i want to emphasize the climax of the piano solo
  7. 01:40:875 (2) - blanket? i don't intend to
  8. 02:11:437 (3) - remove clap at end and add finish? Done


Good luck :oops:
Thanks a lot~~~ :)
posted
Changed Normal's AR3.5 to 3, and polished up some patterns.
posted
Bubbled~~!!
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