-Famous- wrote:

I just thought the Insane diff is too hard at a few parts.

Hinsvar wrote:

Well hello there! I'll mod your map...

...or more like giving general advices. After a little quick look at your map, I decided that it'd be better. Way better for me and you. Well okay, at least just for the Normal diff.

First, the spacing must be consistent with almost no exceptions (you'll know the exceptions later if you map long enough; one of them is when it's just impossible to place notes anywhere because of how the music goes). 00:37:903 (1,2,3) is NOT an exception, for example; you're not allowed to make the spacing inconsistent for the sake of blanketing. Also, you CAN'T make the spacing inconsistent to achieve/create symmetrical patterns.

Still in Normal, 00:00:761 (1,2,3) is very tricking because the spacing is visually the same, yet the difference is very noticeable in terms of the rhythm. 00:00:761 (1,2) are a beat apart from each other, and 00:01:475 (2,3) are half beats apart.

Then, you shouldn't really do something like 00:10:760 (2,3), where you place (3)'s head near (2)'s. It feels like you're forced to return to the spot you previously were on, which doesn't make a good thing since you're not moving a lot from your current spot. (Stacks are obviously not a problem, though.)

Also, you should start to use more curved sliders. For example, you can try making 00:22:189 (3) look like this.

Before I move on further, I think you should emphasize piano notes like 00:03:618 (1) with your custom finish hitsound. That'd be better since the spots won't make you feel weird while playing.

Hmm, then, for 00:34:332 (3,4), try this? Or just make sure (4) doesn't touch (3)'s tail.

00:47:189 (4,5) - Consider making them not touch each other, or at least make (4) overlap (5) exactly on the middle of it. That'd be neater.

The combo pattern is also not consistent, especially after the first break. I think you already know what to do here, so I'll leave that to you.

A little thing that I want to say: 02:26:832 - Why is the combo not gray here? I thought you only use it on the choruses...? And now that I think of it, why do you only use the kiai time on the last chorus? The other choruses are also quite strong, too.

Well, I just want to say that your Normal diff can be made far better than how it is now. For the Hard and Insane diffs, since they're quite okay, I'll return to the usual per-object comments.

I would rather prefer that you just modded regularly AND teach me who to make it better because looking at things like this kind of gave a me a headache trying to solve how to make it more playable.

>Hard

1. 00:00:761 (1) - There is technically nothing wrong with this, but the flow can be better if this weren't a straight/linear slider. Use something like this? Ok
2. 00:04:332 (2) - Move the node on the tail to (189,53) for a better flow here? You're obviously not using grip snap, but OK
3. 00:12:903 (3) - Move to (363,169)? You'll know why when you see it.
4. 00:12:903 (3,4) - Don't you think they are too close to each other compared to 00:12:189 (1,2,3)? OK
5. 00:24:332 (3) - Move to (336,183)? I do the x-axis, but can't really do with the y-axis because of distance snap.
6. 00:36:475 (4,5,6,7) - It's not allowed to use sliders that are silenced since they're extremely confusing, and you shouldn't try to map a silent part with something like this. Just map the vocal or something, and use a far higher volume. (Applies to the similar cases.) Really? I'll ask a BAT when they notice later about it then.
7. 00:41:118 (2) - Move to (211,143) so 00:40:760 (1,2,3)'s heads will form a triangle? But it's already a triangle...
8. 00:43:618 (1,3,4) - Try to make them not touch each other? I changed it, but it's kinda hard to because of distance snap.
9. 00:44:332 (2) - Try this? Looks and flows better. Did something else to the area
10. 00:53:618 (5,6,1) - The spacing and rhythm here makes this part confusing to play overall... Just saying. I tried...
11. 01:10:225 (3) - Move to (349,55) for a better flow? Not that I won't, I can't
12. 01:13:439 (2) - Move to (233,148), for, again, a better flow? Ah...?
13. 01:27:189 (3,4,5,6) - What's with the spacing inconsistency at the end of the pattern? OK
14. 01:37:903 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ OK
15. 01:42:189 (5) - Move to (199,33) for a better blanket? Umm... Distance snap
16. 02:07:010 (2,3,4,5) - Make them straighter like this? OK
17. 02:37:010 (6,7,8) - uh wtf what's with the spacing here. It's very unbalanced and will be very hard to read for players. Make the spacing consistent please. OK
18. 02:45:760 (4,5,1) - Any reason you suddenly decreased the spacing here? Looks odd considering the spacing you use in kiai times. Oh, god, I was think about TRakker - Rootus at the think, so my mind was not in the phrase of making a map.

>Insane

1. 00:01:653 (2) - Stack to 00:01:832 (3)'s head instead of 00:00:761 (1)'s? Flows better. Nah, pass
2. 00:07:725 (6,7) - Why not make the spacing bigger? It'd play better instead of forcing the position so 00:07:903 (7) would be stacked below 00:07:368 (4). Make a triangle
3. 00:36:475 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20) - What's with this stream? It just... feels forced compared to the song itself. (Applies to the other streams before the choruses.) Well, at least I didn't make a space every four circles like how the song sounds.
4. 00:53:796 (5) - Move to (240,175) so 00:53:439 (3,4,5) will form a triangle? It'll create a nicer flow too. OK
5. 01:01:118 (1,2,3,4) - Make them in-line with each other? You know, either move (1,3) to y:200 or (2,4) to y:192. You should know why. OK
6. 01:10:760 (5) - NC to denote that this is the beginning of a different unique pattern? OK
7. 01:36:832 (8,10) - Try to make them not touch each other? Pass
8. 01:37:189 (10,1) - Consider using a single slider shape for these two sliders. You know, make them have the same curve. Trust me, it'd play better. OK
9. 02:07:903 (1,2) - While this is kinda readable, this kind of rhythm doesn't fit the song, especially that 1/16 slider. In fact, silencing it won't help; it'd be worse since it doesn't give any feedback and is just unfitting. Consider using a single slider like the first chorus. I'll also ask the BAT about this, because I saw this somewhere else, but I don't remember...
10. 02:26:743 (1,2) - wtf? Oh, weird, how the slider move there...

Well that's it.

Your Insane is pretty good actually. I'm just kinda worried about those 1/8 jumps, though, since it's hard to differ between 3/8 and 1/4 sliders here. Also, avoid placing an object on a previous object's place too much. Try to be more dynamic!

Good luck on the way

Rad- wrote:

Hello, my part from the M4M :p

One thing i can say about the whole mapset is that the greyed combo colors really make the maps more boring, specially since you would do something like that if the map actually had a storyboard or something, this way it feels bland.

There are lots of patterns that ''stop'', it breaks the flow of the map so much, even for this kind of song, because those stops are not at the right places most of the time, try to move around more when mapping.

From 00:37:903 - to 00:59:332 and 01:46:475 - to 02:07:903 , make these kiai times, because its still a chorus. Actually, doing this makes it harder for hidden players

Normal

The whole spacing of this map is too inconsistent, many times too close (or on top of the next objects) and other times too far away. Learn to make a more stable map with proper spacing. Currently something I'm constantly working on.
There are waaay too many sliders like this 00:04:332 (2) in the whole intro, really repetitive Well, it's because I have to make the hitsounds match...
00:35:135 - - Remove this inherited point, because from 00:35:135 - to 00:37:903 - there is a huge silence, and add a Finish to that spinner Why would I want to here "PEW" in the middle of the map instead of matching it with the hitsounds?
00:56:296 (2) - Delete this slider, it starts in a really weird place for a Normal, and make 00:55:046 (1) - this slider reverse, doesnt have to fit the lyrics. all it really matters is to follow the song well, and yes, you might have to delete the inherited points you have there for the hitsounds. And most importantly, place the 00:55:046 (1) slider on x:372 y:60 with end of slider at x:188 y:68. Um... I followed SOME of that, main the slider
00:57:010 (2,3) - Place these objects closer to the previous pattern. MY GOD the timing point you gave me and the slider and circle is SO off
00:57:993 (1) - Move the start of this slider to 00:58:260 (1) Eh?
01:29:332 (5) - NC OK

Hard

This map also has really bad spacings, and would look more like an Insane map for the BPMs that it has, making your Insane look like an ''Extra'', that means that the difficulty spike is huge. Dang...
00:54:600 (6) - This slider is just too weird, specially with your wrong spacings. Delete it, and add 3 circles at: 00:54:510 (6) 00:54:689 (7) and 00:54:868 (8) , you know how you should place them. I'll ask a BAT
00:56:296 (4) - Delete this circle and place the 00:56:475 (5) - slider there instead, and new circle at 00:57:189 on top of 00:57:368 (6,7) Pass
01:20:403 (4,5,1,2,3) - Patterns like these makes me think this is an Insane. Oh, yeah. spacing
02:37:457 (7,8) - Just, no. Do like in 00:54:600 (6), its too hard to follow it as a Hard difficulty map. And you called it "weird..."
02:54:689 (6) - - Would be better for this slider to start at 02:54:510 to follow the song better, place it closer to the previous object, and maybe add a spinner at the end so the map doesnt end too suddenly. Pass

Insane

01:10:760 (5,6) - Don't think so, make it end at a blue tick and not yellow one. But someone already supported this...
01:12:546 (2) - Add an object here, probably somewhere distant, and another here 01:13:082 (4), maybe on top of 01:13:439 (6). Nothing really there
02:07:903 (1,2) - Distance is too close. Too close or too far? I'm surprised someone said it was too CLOSE.
02:11:832 (8) - Delete and reverse 02:11:475 (7) If you repeat, it doesn't really end at a good place.
02:22:189 (5) - Make it end at a blue tick. Kinda the same real as above. Except it when Chen sings "ke wo yi ran gan jue xing fu wei yi de li you," that "ran" doesn't fall on the blue tick. SO this happened.
02:30:760 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20) - Extremely bad stream, even the other 2 weren't this bad in spacing and jump. I think I fized it in a previous mod already.
02:37:814 (13) - This wont work, delete it Moved it to the next slider
02:54:332 (9,10) - End in a better way, the slider ends in an uncomfortable position and doesnt follow the song as well as it should.

Overall, you need to practice more mapping to create your own original patterns that would actually work when playing, and of course, play other maps more often to know exactly how to make a proper difficulty spread as well as map better insanes that would be fun to play. But the insane is fun to play~

[ Joey ] wrote:

Hello! I'm really sorry for the delay on the m4m!

Insane
This is the most difficult 84 bpm song I have ever seen lol I've seen HARDER
00:02:189 - Remove the whistle here, it sounds better Believe me when I say, this but actually sound BETTER with headphones.
00:07:725 (6,7) - I know you are trying to stack these, but the distance just doesn't feel good. Putting 6 at (414, 220) looks better Fized it before coming to this mod.
00:20:046 (10,11,12) - Maintain same distance OK
00:25:582 (10,11,12,13) - I don't hear a reason to add jumps like this. There are no heavy beats I'll put the thought aside for now, and think about it in another mod.
00:29:332 (1) - ctrl + g Pass
00:37:189 (13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20) - I like these, but I would prefer them closer together: http://puu.sh/agr3f/28d6b4c0ba.jpg Also the combo runs too high. Cut it in half Why
01:45:760 (12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) - ^ Is your computer like... 1024x768 or something...?
00:38:618 (3) - ctrl + g OK
00:39:332 (5,6,7) - maintain same distance OK
00:42:546 (8,9,10) - The distance in this combo makes it really confusing. Especially this distance: 00:42:903 (9,10) - it's way too far. I highly recommend using distance snap for this combo. VUT
00:54:332 (7,8) - same problem here. It should be more obvious that this is a 1/8 note Actually more like 1/16, but Imma keep it as it is.
00:57:635 (8,9,10) - Doesn't sound like a stream belongs here. Only needs a note here: 00:57:725 Matches back voicing
01:01:118 (1,2,3,4) - Confusing distance snap again What?
01:10:760 (5,6) - Wowww this distance is huge. I highly recommend lowering it Nuuu, someone like it like this~
02:02:903 (9,10) - ^ If people know the some, if should be easy.
02:22:189 (5,6) - ^ No problem here
02:12:725 (2) - eh, I don't see a reason for this Did something with a previous mod.
02:27:010 (2) - this note is in the middle of a slider. probably an accident Yeah, that's right.
02:54:868 - This is better imo; http://puu.sh/agrR4/f67b767abe.jpg But I don't like spinner in my insane maps... It's not fair that someone can get an extra 1000 points because they can spin well like SiLvIa...
I think you should prioritize distance snap more more often, rather than trying to stack in this diff.
Your combos also run a little high
Really fun difficulty, especially for a low bpm song. Eh~

I would mod the rest of the difficulties, but I am really busy with other mods to do at the moment, and your mod was kind of short on mine =/
If I have free time, I'll come back and mod the other diffs.
I hope you understand.

1. why your BG 1023x767? should change 1024x768.
2. why you used tag ',' ? this is not need imo.
3. remove widescreen support all diff. because you not used SB.
   

1. Normal diff AR6... i think really high this. try AR5.
2. 00:12:189 (3,4,5) - these overlaps. looks bad. so, normal diff don't overlaps better.
3. 00:15:046 (1,2) - ^
4. 00:20:760 (1) - add clap slider head.
5. 00:21:475 (2) - add clap slider reverse.
6. 00:35:046 (4) - i want clap.
7. 02:37:189 (4) - add clap. really fit.

1. 00:51:475 (6) - add clap.
2. 02:05:046 (3) - spacing close imo.
3. 02:24:332 (2) - add clap slider head.
   

1. 00:37:189 (13) - add NC..
2. 01:45:760 (12) - ^
3. 02:31:475 (13) - ^

P o M u T a wrote:

Hey Ya!

[General]

1. why your BG 1023x767? should change 1024x768. It's only one pixel difference...
2. why you used tag ',' ? this is not need imo. OK
3. remove widescreen support all diff. because you not used SB. It's not on!! How many people are saying this!?
   

[Normal]

1. Normal diff AR6... i think really high this. try AR5. OK
2. 00:12:189 (3,4,5) - these overlaps. looks bad. so, normal diff don't overlaps better. OK
3. 00:15:046 (1,2) - ^ OK
4. 00:20:760 (1) - add clap slider head. OK
5. 00:21:475 (2) - add clap slider reverse. OK
6. 00:35:046 (4) - i want clap. You sound so demanding~
7. 02:37:189 (4) - add clap. really fit. Oops, forgot about that.

[Hard]

1. 00:51:475 (6) - add clap. How in the world do I miss thing ese!?
2. 02:05:046 (3) - spacing close imo. OK
3. 02:24:332 (2) - add clap slider head. OK
   

[Insane]

1. 00:37:189 (13) - add NC..
2. 01:45:760 (12) - ^
3. 02:31:475 (13) - ^
   Why?...

map is fine!
also, nice song /
good luck -APXH
regards

-APXH wrote:

P o M u T a wrote:

Hey Ya!

[General]

1. remove widescreen support all diff. because you not used SB. It's not on!! How many people are saying this!?
   

SPOILER

VeeLaHee104 wrote:

-APXH wrote:

[General]

1. remove widescreen support all diff. because you not used SB. It's not on!! How many people are saying this!?
   

it's off only on insane, the first 2 diff is on.

SPOILER

no kudos
came here because i like the song ^^ star~

truonant wrote:

Hello M4M~ from my Mod Queue

none


00:19:332 (1) – adding NC could help increase the readability Not really looking for that, but I'll add this to the list of thing I plan on asking a bat.

SPOILER

00:25:046 (7) – NC – helps increase readability
00:37:189 (1) – NC
01:22:189 (7) – NC
01:27:903 (7) – NC
01:33:796 (7) – NC
01:45:760 (12) – NC
02:31:475 (13) – NC

00:20:760 (1,2) – try stacking slider head and circle on top of 00:23:082 (6) OK, but this was a LOT of changing around
00:32:903 (3) – stack perfectly on slider head of 00:32:189 (1) – (turn off grid snap to fine tune) OK, but I'm used to using grid snap
00:33:082 (4) – stack perfectly on slider tail of 00:32:189 (1) – (turn off grid snap to fine tune) Same as above
00:35:760 (2) – stack perfectly on 00:35:046 (1) – (turn off grid snap to fine tune) I'll pass for now
00:57:903 (1) - could be blanketed better - http://puu.sh/ajWM3/cf3ff7a926.jpg - don’t forget to adjust 00:59:153 (4) after It's how it is now
01:18:618 (3) – stack perfectly on 01:16:653 (7) Only has to move the end point one up~
01:43:618 (1) – could be blankted better on slider head 01:42:903 (7) It's fine now


00:09:332 (1) – could be blanketed better OK
00:26:475 (1) – blanket on slider tail of 00:25:760 (7) - http://puu.sh/ajYY1/26df311da4.jpg OK
00:43:618 (1) - could be blanketed better OK
00:50:760 (5) - ^ It's fine now
02:29:332 (1) - ^ OK
02:35:760 (3) – blanket on 02:36:653 (5) OK
02:41:475 (3) - could be blanketed better OK
02:44:332 (3) - ^ OK
02:50:760 (3) - ^ OK



00:40:046 (2) – could be blanketed better. Use ctrl+G on 00:37:903 (1) to fix - http://puu.sh/ajZFR/50563cc371.jpg OK
00:52:903 (6) - ^ OK
00:56:118 (2) – blanket slider head of 00:57:189 (3) - http://puu.sh/ajZQy/ee64ab6af8.jpg You mean the end, right?
01:15:046 (5) - could be blanketed better Not really looking to blanket here
01:32:189 (3,4) – Perhaps use sliders that blanket slider tail of 01:30:760 (2) - http://puu.sh/ajZZO/454c97b05c.jpg OK
02:17:903 (3) - could be blanketed better OK
02:21:475 (2) - ^ http://puu.sh/ak0mA/0e969128bf.jpg OK
02:34:332 (2) - ^ use ctrl + g on 02:32:189 (1) to fix - http://puu.sh/ak0rs/3aea32fbcb.jpg Um... I gues...?
02:39:332 (3) – blanket on slider tail of 02:38:618 (2) OK
02:43:618 (1) – blanket on slider head of 02:42:189 (6) Actually, not looking to blanket this.

P o M u T a wrote:

WHY NC? TOO LONG.

Pjecoo wrote:

Hi, as requested from my queue.

Normal
01:25:760 (2) - Kinda big jump for this diff. Put it little bit closer to each other. (1) -> (2).
02:41:475 (4) - Same ^^ (3) -> (4). But that's what the distance snap did...
02:46:475 (3,4) - It's cool but it's too far from each other. Same reason as above
02:47:903 (5,6) - Same - try to make DS like for (4,5). It is...

Hard
00:13:618 (4,5) - Put them little bit closer to each other. Distance snap.
01:22:010 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - HO-HO-HO-HORY SHITTU, this is totally confusing. I can play this without miss but others who's gonna try it may fail, 'cause it's confusing. It's up to you, if you remove it, or leave it like it is. If you want to remove, don't make it so confusing. OK

Everything else seems fine to me.

Hope that'll helps
If not, then sorry
Good Luck![/color]

Churcheell wrote:

Hello!

As requested by mail, sorry for the delay :3

Insane

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The main problem i can see here is that the combos are very long and the HP drain is kinda high. They don't really go well together because at parts you fail if you miss a couple of notes. Suggesting the following changes This map is NOT suppose to be easy for ANYONE. Even WubWoofWolf or SnowWhite.:

HP = 6.5 and:

SPOILER

00:07:903 - NC
00:14:332 - ^
00:19:332 - ^
00:25:046 - ^
00:36:475 - ^
00:37:189 - ^
00:48:260 - ^

You get the idea, most of the combos that go up to about 12 might benefit from a NC inbetween

OR HP = 6
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00:37:189 - Gap is a bit big here given the small timeframe. Close the gap a bit. You can still keep the same pattern but just make the gap a little smaller, or remove a circle on each half of the stream to widen the time gap OK
02:31:475 - ^

OTHER than that, i think this map is pretty beautiful, well done

If you like i can mod the other difficulties, but i'm best at modding harder difficulties. Send me a mail

FlobuFlobs wrote:

Since i cant mod hard/normals/easy one diff mod

insane

1. AR8,5 should be enough for this Difficulty
2. 00:38:796 - 00:38:885 - they are doing nothing
3. 00:49:868 - ^
4. 00:52:725 - ^
5. 01:50:225 - 01:50:314 - ^
6. 01:58:439 - ^
7. 02:10:225 - 02:10:314 - ^
8. 02:13:082 - 02:13:171 - ^
9. 02:21:653 - 02:21:743 - ^
10. 01:47:368 - 01:47:457 - ^ am i missing something? xD There's a beatmap called "Rohi - Kakuzetsu Thanatos." In Pokie's difficulty, there's a sliderslide7 where it's a normal deafault hitsounds combines with some drum. The normal-sliderslide3 is the same concept.
11. Use more different circle colour's at the beginninjg, it really hard to read sometimes WAT HOW
12. 00:12:903 - how about this timline here to emphasize the vocals a bit better? OK
13. 00:16:118 (1) - slider here too, same reason as ^ Eh?
14. 00:10:403 - ^
15. 00:37:100 (12) - is there a reason for this big spacing here? DON"T TRUST ANYONE IN THIS EARTH
16. 00:37:903 (1) - ^
17. 00:54:868 - how about this here? it old one sounds off Pass
18. 00:55:314 - change this slider like that? otherwise the 2 section would be useless and like this you are emphazising both beats
19. 01:45:046 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,1) - i dont get this 1/4 spacing, its horrible to play. its destroying this really nice map
20. 02:30:760 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,1) - just no ^
21. 02:49:064 (11,1) - Looks like 1/2
22. Are not fully stacked circles like these 02:32:189 (1,3) - intentional? Yep

Faan wrote:

From my modding m4m req sorry for like 5 weeks wait (exaggeration)

Normal:
01:17:903 (1) - DS OK
01:26:475 (3) - ^ It's fine, apparently
01:32:189 (3) - ^ OK
01:29:332 (1) - ^ It's fine, apparently
01:37:903 (4) - ^ symmetry though Huh?
01:47:189 (2) - at the start I thought it was because KIAI you wanted to reduce DS.... then I was wrong Most of the map, if not all is already in distance snap.
01:55:760 (5) - DS Changed
02:26:832 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - keep in mind this is 'normal" OK
02:42:189 (6,1) - blanket OK
02:46:475 (3,4,5,6) - DS better OK
02:49:332 (1,2) - curve 1 more Eh?

Hard:
00:14:332 (5) - slightly off the grid I'd be more of a problem is it was OFF the grid as a whole
00:20:046 (8) - maybe NC Nah
00:21:475 (2,3,4) - sure? Fixed
00:40:582 (6) - NC instead Pass
00:51:475 (6) - NC Pass
00:55:046 (1) - 392,296 for first point after sharp turn Just redid slider as a whole
01:15:046 (1) - ugly overlap Fixed

skinnyjimmy wrote:

Hi! Here's the mod from my queue

I'm still a little new to modding, so don't expect much

[Insane]

00:01:832 (3) - Move this to blanket the first slider better, you can see it is not in the middle Because of the stacking of slider 1 and circle 2, it actually moves location when in actual play, if you actually played the map...

00:13:618 (6,7) - These notes kind of disrupt the flow of the song here, consider moving somewhere else on the map It's fine

00:23:796 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This part is very confusing, consider more spacing on these notes please Made it more visible

00:35:760 (2) - Space this note out a little farther, so people can read it easier, because people will think that you click it right after the first slider, because its right on top of it, if you understand what im saying I can read it. Plus, I'm not the best Insane PLAYER, so there are PLENTIFULY amounts of people that can.

00:37:903 Why is there no Kiai time here? Too flashy...

00:40:760 (1) - Really bad spot for this note imo, consider moving it to 216, 148. It flows a lot better here

00:42:546 (8) - There's no reason for this to be a 1/8 slider, but 00:42:903 (9) - should be, just not 8 It's more like 3/4, but whatever

00:47:903 (6,7) - This is a very awkward sequence here, consider changing this pattenr up a bit If you look at slider 3, it kinda looks like a continuation.

00:52:189 (1) - This shouldn't be so close to 9 because they are the same distance apart on the timeline, if that makes sense, make it more readable with more spacing It's a triangle~

00:59:332 (1) - This slider will definitely break people's combos if they havent played your map before, i agree that it should be slowed down, but not by that much, so change the slider velocity to .50, and make it a return slider. ALSO move it to 124, 40 to better blanket 00:58:618 (3) Pass, and yes, I have PLAYED the map.

00:59:332 (1) - if you do this ^ you will need to add a clap at the head of this slider at 01:00:760 You think I would already have known that?

01:45:671 (11,12) - I think this slider gap is a bit to big Could someone tell me that to Lan Wings, then?

01:46:385 (19,1) - This is WAYYYYYY to big of a gap, and placement of 1 makes this extremely difficult to hit, try to keep it in line with the stream, heres an example

https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1900070

01:46:475 I believe Kiai time is appropriate here Still to flashy. I usually don't use it until the end, most of the time

01:56:118 (5) - spacing issue here, make it a little farther so it's easier to read Moved

02:07:903 (1) - like the same issue as before, its slowed down to much, people would never expect it, so change the SV, and make the note a little longer I already have this on my list of things to ask a BAT.

02:31:385 (12,13) - the stream gap is to big here OK

02:32:100 (20,1) - to big of a gap here too OK

02:32:725 (2) - try to avoid overlapping notes, unless its completely necessary Well, just be grateful I didn't have the end of the slider NEXT to the circle in sequence.

Well that's it for my mod! Hopefully this helped you a little bit

Really nice song, I like it

GL with this map!

1. 00:37:189 (13) - I can accept the little jump, but better put a new combo from here
2. 00:42:546 (8) - NC also here. You use the same spacing of the current combo, yet the notes haven't it and it's confusing for the player. Adding a NC solves it imo
3. 01:10:760 (1,2) - Such a jump o.O
4. 01:12:189 (1) - Since the notes have the same time space between them better remove NC
5. 01:13:260 (3) - Put here the previous NC
6. 01:45:760 (12) - You really need a NC here (already explained above)
7. 02:08:618 (2) - Why so far away from the previous note?
8. 02:31:475 (13) - Once again you need a NC
9. Why the black combos? They're really out of place imo

1. 00:26:475 (1,2) - What's this o.O? You can't do such a jump on a Hard diff
2. 00:40:582 (6) - The NC goes here and not 00:40:760 (1) here
3. 00:46:296 (5) - Same ^
4. 00:59:332 (1) - Every 2 ticks (or decide you how much) decrease the volume

1. 02:06:475 (1) - It doesn't fit the song imo

[-MrSergio-] wrote:

Hi there :3 Here's my mod from my modding queue requested centuries ago :3 (I know I'm a lot late, sorry)

[Insane]

1. 00:37:189 (13) - I can accept the little jump, but better put a new combo from here OK. I also applied this to the other times
2. 00:42:546 (8) - NC also here. You use the same spacing of the current combo, yet the notes haven't it and it's confusing for the player. Adding a NC solves it imo From which slider to which slider?
3. 01:10:760 (1,2) - Such a jump o.O Try telling that to Hollow Wings
4. 01:12:189 (1) - Since the notes have the same time space between them better remove NC I thought it was originally confusing. I think someone already pointed out that, though.
5. 01:13:260 (3) - Put here the previous NC
6. 01:45:760 (12) - You really need a NC here (already explained above) Did that already
7. 02:08:618 (2) - Why so far away from the previous note? I ask the BAT
8. 02:31:475 (13) - Once again you need a NC OK
9. Why the black combos? They're really out of place imo I have that for now; I'll make a decision when I get home from vacation.

[Hard]

1. 00:26:475 (1,2) - What's this o.O? You can't do such a jump on a Hard diff Oh, how did that happen in the first place?
2. 00:40:582 (6) - The NC goes here and not 00:40:760 (1) here I put the new combo here mainly because of "bass?"
3. 00:46:296 (5) - Same ^ ^
4. 00:59:332 (1) - Every 2 ticks (or decide you how much) decrease the volume Pass. I don't like having the sound of the spinner in such nice songs, or any of my beatmaps in general.

[Normal]

1. 02:06:475 (1) - It doesn't fit the song imo How so?

That's all from me, see ya

Hi from SoGa's Modding Queue

[General]

1. No Prob.

[Normal]

1. 00:43:618 (1,2) - Fix Blancket?
2. 01:46:475 (1) - x:152 y:128
   
   Good

[Hard]

1. 00:44:868 (3) - Stack?
2. 02:32:189 (1,2,3,4) - Not flow
3. 02:43:975 (2) - Ctrl + G ?

[Insane]

1. 02:41:475 (3,5) - Ctrrl + G?
   
   Nothing more

Sry for this poor mod.

SoGa wrote:

Hi from SoGa's Modding Queue

[General]

1. No Prob.

[Normal]

1. 00:43:618 (1,2) - Fix Blancket? OK
2. 01:46:475 (1) - x:152 y:128 OK
   
   Good

[Hard]

1. 00:44:868 (3) - Stack? Distance snap won't let me.
2. 02:32:189 (1,2,3,4) - Not flow
3. 02:43:975 (2) - Ctrl + G ? OK

[Insane]

1. 02:41:475 (3,5) - Ctrrl + G? Nah
   
   Nothing more

Sry for this poor mod.

Hollow Wings wrote:

from Scorpiour's Modding Queue

Chinese song? one star in advance www Yay~

General

1. combo color 2 and 3 r too similiar, plz change one for easier reading sets So... Much... Work...

Insane

1. 00:00:761 (1,3) - perfect this blanket Actually, it looks fine in actual play:
   
2. 00:04:510 (3,5) - blanket OK
3. 00:10:225 (3,5) - ^, maybe check these detail or nazi issues by urself Fixed
4. 00:25:046 (7) - nc Pass
5. 00:27:903 (5,6) - don't overlap 6's arrow OK
6. 02:24:332 (3,5) - same as above OK
7. rhythms' good to me, thou composings' too random. just map and mod more map, and see other normal or even pro mappers how they deal with their composing in organizations

Hard

1. 00:21:653 (3,4) - stack at 00:19:510 (6,7) - and move 00:21:475 (2) - to make a regular triangle here OK
2. 01:33:975 (7,8) - avoid this overlap OK
3. 02:33:260 (6,7) - maybe blanket attempted try to make it a blanket.
4. almost same words in insane diff

Normal

1. 01:39:332 (5,1) - don't overlap that arrow OK
2. 01:52:189 (1,2) - nearly touched, maybe spread them I spread them out, but not by a lot because of distance snap.

"你的世界“ is actually "your world" in English, and "into your world" is "进入你的世界" in Chinese lol Actually, I've been battling my head about this. I got the English title from this Wikipedia article. However, if I get noticed by a Chinese speaking XAT, I'll try asking if they can give a re-check.

good luck

TheDizzeY wrote:

Good day from rakutenshi mod que~
[Insane]
00:19:332 (7) - NC
00:23:618 (1) - Stack with (3)
00:47:189 (3) - Replace with circles
01:16:118 (5,6) - Turn into 1 slider
[Hard]
00:34:332 (5,1) - Blanket Well, I made it blanket the end of slider 5 because of distance snap.
00:40:403 (6) - add a circle
00:44:868 (3) - Stack with (1) slider's end OK
00:54:600 (6) - Curve
02:14:689 (6) - Stack with (1)

Kloyd wrote:

[Insane]

01:32:010 (10) - put this on 140:220, it might help feel the note 'pulled' Pass
01:34:689 (12) - try this. it might have better flow http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1995941 Pass
01:58:260 (3) - try ctrl+G? OK
02:05:046 (7) - again Half-pass
02:53:439 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - i think antijump is more suitable for the atmosphere of the song. This is jumpy?

[Hard]
00:20:046 (8,9,10) - should shape like 00:19:332 (5,6,7) OK
01:23:618 (1) - 228:220 OK
01:38:618 (3,4,5) - try this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1995949 OK
02:39:332 (3) - a circle is needed before imo... if u put circle on 02:39:332 (3) - , u might change the position of this slider. remember
02:51:832 (4) - drastic antijump need ncs Pass

GL

CDFA wrote:

edgy signatures for the best of the best

Insane:
00:01:653 (2,3) - This spacing is super weird to start off with since it's so big.
00:07:546 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - This is probably gonna set up how the rest of this mod is gonna go so uh. . . uh, yeah. When dealing with slow music, the way to make it enjoyable isn't to overmap it. That would be bad. Bad bad. What you need to do is give it momentum without having players feeling like they're playing a much faster map. I always like to link people this map when I'm talking about that: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/97488. The map is super jumpy, yeah, but I never feel rushed to do anything. I never feel like it's overmapped and that I'm working harder than I should be. With this map, I'm working much harder than I should. Because of this statement, I won't point out jump issues unless they're either incredibly crucial, or i feel i need to point it out. But mostly, I want you to take it on your part to look at the map and evaluate how to not make it seem harder than it should be. I changed 10, but this is coming from a person who ctrl+c, ctrl+v, reverses and flips a whole phrase of a chorus of a beatmap and doesn't know how to snap timing points correctly.
00:19:332 (7,8,9) - Patterns like this usually don't work unless there's some vocal cue for the sudden jump back.
00:20:046 (10) - a A what?
00:37:903 - You know, the slider speed here isn't that bad. So it looks like your verses are the issue in this map. Granted, it still isn't great, but it makes a little more sense.
00:42:546 (8,9) - but y the extension I changed 8, but learn how to spell why properly...
00:54:332 (7) - The odd thing about this extension is that you're spacing out the note after farther than the note before.
00:57:635 (8,9,10) - Not really neccesary
00:59:421 (1) - nope. nah. ni. it doesn't even really go with the music tbh so Changed spacing
01:24:153 (2) - Overlaps like this usually don't look very nice and make the map look very cluttered.
01:32:010 (10,1) - are you just like screwing with me now or making you know how us mappers with SO much experience but no ranked maps feel with a BAT gets a mapped ranked with SO MANY COMPLAINS FLOODING IN THE COMMENTS of the beatmap.
02:06:118 (10,11,1) - go ahead and play this in the editor and tell me that that plays nicely. because it probably doesn't. What computer do you own...
02:54:689 (10) - there's not really syllables here so don't emphasize it if they don't exist.

Are there strokes of genius in this map? Sure. The choruses can be very nice at times with the higher sv and stuff, but the main issue is that the map tries too hard to be too. . . for lack of better word, hard .

Hard:
00:30:225 (2,3) - no i was enjoying the consistent spacing pls no Fixed
00:48:618 (6,7) - Is there any way you could re-adjust this to make it more readable? Fixed
01:04:332 (2,3,4) - Suddenly down to lower spacing than the beginning? Fixed
01:40:403 (6,1) - go ahead and play this in the editor and tell me that it plays well What computer do you own...
02:02:010 (3,4) - have a re-thought processing of this spacing and justify why you did this, and if you can't do it logically, then change it Changed, something happened to the spacing during the making
02:54:689 (6) - Same as insane

Normal:
00:30:046 (4) - NC
As a general comment, a lot of people don't like having stacks in beginner diffs. I don't see what the problem is, but be aware of it and possibly change it.

if 95% of mappers could just remember that insane diffs don't have to be jump fests than 95% of mappers would be better mappers. Yeah, but there's a reason why people can't possibly FL Amamiya Yuko, [ HalLoWeeN ], or AngelHoney's maps.

1. Just saw you've gotten BAT mods....but still, I'm weary about the DS that comes up in AiMod.

1. 00:05:046 (3) - I don't think long linear sliders are fitting for the song. Consider something smoother. Even a slight curve to the slider would benefit the mood of the song.
2. 00:10:774 (4) - ^
3. 00:26:475 (1) - Fix Blanket.
4. 00:36:475 (4) - Like this. What you at the moment doesn't fit the song.
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:57:546 (7) - Just copy and reverse (4). Looks odd as it is now.
6. 01:07:189 (2, 3) - ugly overlay. Try this
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 01:20:403 - I would remap this entire area. Circle spams that are just within the DS between each other but with no underlining pattern damages the quality of the your map.
8. 01:33:618 - SPace these evenly compared to the DS previous

1. 00:00:761 (1) - I went thru a bit of your map already. Not sure why this is the way it is. If you are trying to blanket. The edge is off.
2. 00:05:046 (5) - Blanket.
3. 00:10:760 (5) - ^
4. 00:12:546 (3) - Looks better if you continue with the flow like this.
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:37:189 (1) - This is probably an unnecessary jump. Overall, some of your jumps just don't fit the song I think. If you break this up the way you did, it makes the map choppy for a smooth ballad.
6. 01:11:385 (2) - This has like no ranked appeal. Its not fun to lose your combo to jumps that are unreasoanble.
7. 01:17:189 (9) - Ctrl + G for flow. You switch from windmill/alternating ovals to choppy slider breaks. Hurts the smoothness of the song.
8. 02:37:189 (11) - Reverse curve of the slider. for better flow.
9. 02:41:475 (3) - Ctrl + G
10. 02:42:189 (5) - ^

The Girls wrote:

Hi Nana~ from Nana's Mod Queue

[Normal]

1. Just saw you've gotten BAT mods....but still, I'm weary about the DS that comes up in AiMod. I would be worried about the distance for the Normal and the Hard. On top of that, despire all me effort to change, IT DOESN'T CHANGE THE MESSAGE.

[Hard]

1. 00:05:046 (3) - I don't think long linear sliders are fitting for the song. Consider something smoother. Even a slight curve to the slider would benefit the mood of the song. OK
2. 00:10:774 (4) - ^ OK
3. 00:26:475 (1) - Fix Blanket. It blankets the end of the previous slider
4. 00:36:475 (4) - Like this. What you at the moment doesn't fit the song. OK
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:57:546 (7) - Just copy and reverse (4). Looks odd as it is now. How?
6. 01:07:189 (2, 3) - ugly overlay. Try this Oh, didn't know that happened.
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 01:20:403 - I would remap this entire area. Circle spams that are just within the DS between each other but with no underlining pattern damages the quality of the your map. Well, blame SM.
8. 01:33:618 - SPace these evenly compared to the DS previous OK

[Insane]

1. 00:00:761 (1) - I went thru a bit of your map already. Not sure why this is the way it is. If you are trying to blanket. The edge is off. Refer to my feedback from Hollow Wings.
2. 00:05:046 (5) - Blanket. OK
3. 00:10:760 (5) - ^ OK
4. 00:12:546 (3) - Looks better if you continue with the flow like this. How?
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:37:189 (1) - This is probably an unnecessary jump. Overall, some of your jumps just don't fit the song I think. If you break this up the way you did, it makes the map choppy for a smooth ballad. Well, at least I didn't divide it fourths...
6. 01:11:385 (2) - This has like no ranked appeal. Its not fun to lose your combo to jumps that are unreasoanble. https://osu.ppy.sh/s/100348 *Cough* *Cough* There's no difference.
7. 01:17:189 (9) - Ctrl + G for flow. You switch from windmill/alternating ovals to choppy slider breaks. Hurts the smoothness of the song.
8. 02:37:189 (11) - Reverse curve of the slider. for better flow. There were modders who told my to switch this between, so I just got sick of hearing it.
9. 02:41:475 (3) - Ctrl + G
10. 02:42:189 (5) - ^

1. Your current BG size is 1023x767 which it isn't rankeable by the rules. It must be 1024x768.
2. Make shorter your combos, it's kinda difficult to read while playing. Try putting NC in downbeats.

1. Make shorter your combos, it's kinda difficult to read while playing. Try putting NC in downbeats.
2. Circles or notes CAN'T be silenced, it needs to be audible to all people. Use volume 20% instead of 10% or 5%.
3. 00:19:332 - NC here
4. 00:25:046 - Here too
5. 01:11:475 (2,1) - This 1/8 jump is really unnecessary, also break the your flow.
6. 01:16:475 (1) - NC
7. 01:22:189 (1) - ^
8. 01:27:903 (1) - ^
9. 01:33:618 (1) - ^
10. 01:36:475 (1) - ^
11. 01:39:332 (1) - ^
12. 02:07:903 (1,2) - The transition of these notes is kinda awkward because of the different SVs. Consider this point!
    
    Won't bother you with NCs haha this diff seems so funny to play.

1. 00:22:189 (5,1) - Fix the distance of these notes.
2. 00:35:939 (2) - NC because rhythm changes.
3. 01:04:689 (4,5) - Stack better this note
4. 01:06:475 (1) - I suggest you move the slider's tail a bit down to make a better flow.
5. 01:30:582 (2,3) - Can you make something like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2054729
6. 01:45:760 (5) - NC for same reason of above><
7. 01:58:260 (2,3,4) - Did you change the DS intentionally here? Use the same than the rest of the diff
8. 02:31:475 (1) - NC

1. 00:06:475 (1) - NC, because it was too long.
2. 00:35:225 (1) - Move this spinner to the next blue point, it's difficult for a beginner that sudden spinner.
3. 00:57:993 (1) - ^
4. 01:20:760 (3) - Improve the flow placing this note like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2054766 and obviously, fix the other notes as well!
5. 01:47:189 (2,4) - polish the blankets http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2054775 ; http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2054776
6. 01:55:760 (1) - NC here because the pattern was too long
7. 02:01:117 (5) - NC because downbeat
8. 02:29:421 (1) - You know what would I say here!
9. 02:34:332 (2) - Polish this blanket better!

Cloudchaser wrote:

Hi, M4M request from my queue!

General

1. Your current BG size is 1023x767 which it isn't rankeable by the rules. It must be 1024x768.
2. Make shorter your combos, it's kinda difficult to read while playing. Try putting NC in downbeats.

Insane

1. Make shorter your combos, it's kinda difficult to read while playing. Try putting NC in downbeats.
2. Circles or notes CAN'T be silenced, it needs to be audible to all people. Use volume 20% instead of 10% or 5%.
3. 00:19:332 - NC here
4. 00:25:046 - Here too
5. 01:11:475 (2,1) - This 1/8 jump is really unnecessary, also break the your flow. OK
6. 01:16:475 (1) - NC
7. 01:22:189 (1) - ^
8. 01:27:903 (1) - ^
9. 01:33:618 (1) - ^
10. 01:36:475 (1) - ^
11. 01:39:332 (1) - ^
12. 02:07:903 (1,2) - The transition of these notes is kinda awkward because of the different SVs. Consider this point!
    
    Won't bother you with NCs haha this diff seems so funny to play.

Hard

1. 00:22:189 (5,1) - Fix the distance of these notes. Added two notes to make it "less awkward."
2. 00:35:939 (2) - NC because rhythm changes.
3. 01:04:689 (4,5) - Stack better this note
4. 01:06:475 (1) - I suggest you move the slider's tail a bit down to make a better flow. Made it uncurved
5. 01:30:582 (2,3) - Can you make something like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2054729 OK
6. 01:45:760 (5) - NC for same reason of above><
7. 01:58:260 (2,3,4) - Did you change the DS intentionally here? Use the same than the rest of the diff I can't even...
8. 02:31:475 (1) - NC

Normal

1. 00:06:475 (1) - NC, because it was too long.
2. 00:35:225 (1) - Move this spinner to the next blue point, it's difficult for a beginner that sudden spinner.
3. 00:57:993 (1) - ^
4. 01:20:760 (3) - Improve the flow placing this note like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2054766 and obviously, fix the other notes as well! OK
5. 01:47:189 (2,4) - polish the blankets http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2054775 ; http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2054776 OK
6. 01:55:760 (1) - NC here because the pattern was too long
7. 02:01:117 (5) - NC because downbeat
8. 02:29:421 (1) - You know what would I say here!
9. 02:34:332 (2) - Polish this blanket better! OK

My best wishes to your map! :3

1. About your black combo colour there is current a discussion about it : p/3368166 , also I feel that colour doesn't fit your BG
2. your bg have weird dimensions, 1023x767 ---> 1024x768
3. Tick rate 2 fit this song best!

1. 00:05:046 (5) - try to don't end sliders in stanzas, since the one at 00:06:475 - should be mapped as a circle or slider head, due to that place is where a new section in the music/vocals is starting
2. 00:10:225 why are you ignoring this drum, but mapping the same one in 00:10:582
3. 00:11:832 (7) - why no whistles? since you added one in 00:13:260 (5) - which is similar to the one that I'm pointing
4. 00:12:903 (4) - ^
5. 00:16:475 (5) - exactly the same as 00:05:046
6. 00:18:260 (2,3) - this kind of manual stacks doesn't play good, since them look like antijumps, when them are not >:
7. 00:37:100 (12,1) - I'm not really a fan of this stream jumps in this calm song >: (there are other cases)
8. 00:42:546 (8) - a single circle will fit the music better, since there is nothing in the tail of this slider (there are a lot of other cases)
9. 00:59:332 (1) - well this slider is really unexpected, 0.50 sv will work better, when thest playing I broke combo cause of this
10. 01:36:832 (8,10) - are these kinds of overlaps on purpose? since them doesn't look nice, to be honest
11. 01:45:046 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - same with stream jumps, plus the straight shape make them feel too fast for the song
12. 02:06:118 (10,11) - this 1/8 jumps really don't fit this kind of song IMO
13. 02:07:903 (1,2) - atleast use different colours for slowdowns and speed up , since this unreadable D:, plus tick rate 1 don't help too much here
14. 02:12:725 (2) - this should be in 1/8 according to the music
15. 02:30:760 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - same opinion about other streams, probably having curve shapes and not stream jumps wil fit better this song
16. 02:37:546 (12,13) - this 1/8 jumps are really surprising, since they look like 1/4 spacing
17. 02:11:475 (7) - 02:12:903 (3) - those slider are really weird to play, due to where you snap the end, is better if you keep them in 1/8
18. 02:54:689 (10) - this object is almost inaudible, if there is nothing in the music, the don't map it :c

1. OD +1
2. 00:22:189 (5,6,7,1) - not a really fan of this, since is kinda not nice when playing, not a big prob tho!
3. 00:28:975 this beat is kinda important to be ignored >:
4. 00:34:332 (5,1,2,3) - why the overlaps? space this properly
5. 01:21:296 (3,6) - your diff is going really clean, but some overlaps like this one are not nice IMO
6. 01:38:618 (3,4) - ^
7. 01:46:475 (1,2,3) - make the spacing consistent here?
8. 01:49:332 (1,2,3) - ^
9. 02:14:689 (6,1) - is this manual stack on purpose? since look not nice (maybe just me)
10. 02:26:832 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - spacing?
11. 02:30:760 (4,5,6,7,1) - I prefer how this was done before, this look kinda difficult for a hard diff
12. 02:37:457 (7) - what is this slider following? is really confused, it should start in 02:37:546
13. 02:54:689 same as insane, make this audible or remove it, will be better

1. 00:12:903 (4,5) - if posible try to don't overlap objects like this, just cuz doesn't look nice
2. 00:13:618 (5,1) - this kind of patterns will be really confused to play for new players, try to avoid using antijumps and stacks as posible, (since you don't have an easy diff)
3. 00:34:332 (3,4) - this 1/4 pattern probably will be not acceptable, since the transition slider/circle at this gap in the timeline will be really hard to play for newplayers
4. 00:54:332 (8,1) - just for example this one is ok, since the transition is slider to slider
5. 00:37:903 (1) - probaby too soon after a spinner
6. 00:45:046 (2,3,4) - spacing
7. 00:55:046 (1,2,3) - ^
8. well your spacing is really inconsistent in this diff and this is the ¨easy¨ diff in the set, even if labeled as ¨Normal¨ you must keep the spacing the same all the way
9. 01:12:903 (1) - same as 00:37:903
10. 01:46:475 (1) - ^
11. 01:53:439 (2,3) - I prefer if you remove , but maybe just me , actually I'm kinda unsure about this one
12. 01:56:832 (8,9) - don't use different gaps in stacks, use all 1/2 or al 1/4, but not both, cuz this will be really confused to play for a newbie
13. 02:32:189 (1) - probably too soon after a spinner
14. 02:37:189 (4,1) - same about stacks as 01:56:832
15. 02:54:689 (5) - same as the other diff

Natsu wrote:

M4M from my Queue

General:

1. About your black combo colour there is current a discussion about it : p/3368166 , also I feel that colour doesn't fit your BG I changed the colour, but it'll still remain the darkest.
2. your bg have weird dimensions, 1023x767 ---> 1024x768 Changed
3. Tick rate 2 fit this song best! I usually try avoiding using the tick.

Insane:

1. 00:05:046 (5) - try to don't end sliders in stanzas, since the one at 00:06:475 - should be mapped as a circle or slider head, due to that place is where a new section in the music/vocals is starting OK
2. 00:10:225 why are you ignoring this drum, but mapping the same one in 00:10:582 How'd that get there...
3. 00:11:832 (7) - why no whistles? since you added one in 00:13:260 (5) - which is similar to the one that I'm pointing Yeah, but that doesn't follow what's happening with the back drums
4. 00:12:903 (4) - ^ Fixed
5. 00:16:475 (5) - exactly the same as 00:05:046 OK
6. 00:18:260 (2,3) - this kind of manual stacks doesn't play good, since them look like antijumps, when them are not >: Kinda felt like it fitted Lay's drag of words
7. 00:37:100 (12,1) - I'm not really a fan of this stream jumps in this calm song >: (there are other cases) The original was broken up by 4
8. 00:42:546 (8) - a single circle will fit the music better, since there is nothing in the tail of this slider (there are a lot of other cases) Why do you think the volume is 15%?
9. 00:59:332 (1) - well this slider is really unexpected, 0.50 sv will work better, when thest playing I broke combo cause of this
10. 01:36:832 (8,10) - are these kinds of overlaps on purpose? since them doesn't look nice, to be honest Some of them just stayed how they were during other mods, some of them are on purpose for a feeling
11. 01:45:046 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - same with stream jumps, plus the straight shape make them feel too fast for the song
12. 02:06:118 (10,11) - this 1/8 jumps really don't fit this kind of song IMO Fixed
13. 02:07:903 (1,2) - atleast use different colours for slowdowns and speed up , since this unreadable D:, plus tick rate 1 don't help too much here OK
14. 02:12:725 (2) - this should be in 1/8 according to the music This followed Luhan's vocal delay
15. 02:30:760 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - same opinion about other streams, probably having curve shapes and not stream jumps wil fit better this song
16. 02:37:546 (12,13) - this 1/8 jumps are really surprising, since they look like 1/4 spacing 13 was originally under 12.
17. 02:11:475 (7) - 02:12:903 (3) - those slider are really weird to play, due to where you snap the end, is better if you keep them in 1/8 Well, than blame Luhan for not singing "on beat."
18. 02:54:689 (10) - this object is almost inaudible, if there is nothing in the music, the don't map it :c Well, there's the fading out, so I added 5%.

Hard:

1. OD +1 I intend to have the HP and OD the same for all difficulties.
2. 00:22:189 (5,6,7,1) - not a really fan of this, since is kinda not nice when playing, not a big prob tho!
3. 00:28:975 this beat is kinda important to be ignored >: I thought when Chen sung " zhi shi xiang he ni yi qi zou", the zou fell on 00:28:885
4. 00:34:332 (5,1,2,3) - why the overlaps? space this properly But that's what the distance snap did...
5. 01:21:296 (3,6) - your diff is going really clean, but some overlaps like this one are not nice IMO Fixed
6. 01:38:618 (3,4) - ^ DS
7. 01:46:475 (1,2,3) - make the spacing consistent here? DS
8. 01:49:332 (1,2,3) - ^ DS
9. 02:14:689 (6,1) - is this manual stack on purpose? since look not nice (maybe just me) Made it more visible.
10. 02:26:832 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - spacing? DS
11. 02:30:760 (4,5,6,7,1) - I prefer how this was done before, this look kinda difficult for a hard diff I'm not sure if you see the repition between difficulties...
12. 02:37:457 (7) - what is this slider following? is really confused, it should start in 02:37:546 [/color]
13. 02:54:689 same as insane, make this audible or remove it, will be better

Normal:

1. 00:12:903 (4,5) - if posible try to don't overlap objects like this, just cuz doesn't look nice Pointed down
2. 00:13:618 (5,1) - this kind of patterns will be really confused to play for new players, try to avoid using antijumps and stacks as posible, (since you don't have an easy diff)
3. 00:34:332 (3,4) - this 1/4 pattern probably will be not acceptable, since the transition slider/circle at this gap in the timeline will be really hard to play for newplayers Fixed
4. 00:54:332 (8,1) - just for example this one is ok, since the transition is slider to slider
5. 00:37:903 (1) - probaby too soon after a spinner OK
6. 00:45:046 (2,3,4) - spacing I'm not kidding when I say that this is what DS gave me.
7. 00:55:046 (1,2,3) - ^ OK
8. well your spacing is really inconsistent in this diff and this is the ¨easy¨ diff in the set, even if labeled as ¨Normal¨ you must keep the spacing the same all the way
9. 01:12:903 (1) - same as 00:37:903 Can't really do that since if already has a clap.
10. 01:46:475 (1) - ^
11. 01:53:439 (2,3) - I prefer if you remove , but maybe just me , actually I'm kinda unsure about this one I'll keep this on thought.
12. 01:56:832 (8,9) - don't use different gaps in stacks, use all 1/2 or al 1/4, but not both, cuz this will be really confused to play for a newbie Fixed
13. 02:32:189 (1) - probably too soon after a spinner
14. 02:37:189 (4,1) - same about stacks as 01:56:832 OK
15. 02:54:689 (5) - same as the other diff OK

I think you can work more on insane and normal >:, anyways GL Yeah, I know that...

-APXH wrote:

Natsu wrote:

M4M from my Queue

General:

1. Tick rate 2 fit this song best! I usually try avoiding using the tick.

kakifly wrote:

m4m from my queue

Normal

- look at aimod ( ctrl + shift + A) and fix all your distance issues; in normal's and easy's consistent distance is important I actually did that before checking this mod.
- tone down your difficulty settings a bit; since you don't have an easy its best to make normal 'easier'
- 00:01:475 (2) - listened to this note a bunch of times; i think the head and the repeat should both have a clap; not just the repeat Both of the heads have a whistle, the repeats has a clap.
- 00:35:135 (1) - start this at least 1/4 after the previous note; the spinner is really sudden and can distract the player easily OK
00:37:903 (1) - why no kiai here? you have a kiai at 02:32:189 (1) - of which the music is the same so it would only make sense to add one here as well I usually save the Kiai for last in all of my songs.
- 00:41:475 (3,1) - overlap looks bad OK
- 02:32:189 (1) - add note to emphasize the bass? Isn't already there?
- 00:57:993 (1) - same as 00:35:135 (1) OK
- 01:09:332 (1) - not sure if this spinner ends too late; there is a specific milisecond requirement for easier diffs from the end of a spinner to the next note ; check with an experienced modder on this It's on a white point...
- 01:12:903 (1,2,3,4) - stacking could be confusing for beginners IMO so try to avoid 1/2 stacking if you can OK
- 01:37:903 (4,5) - stack is off OK
- 01:46:475 (1) - starting here; i also recommend having kiai, dont be discouraged if aimod tells you that kiai covers more than x/x of the mapset, also this part; same music as 00:37:903 (1) - but the rhythm is a lot more dense; it would be cool if you even-ed out the diff a bit :3 Pass
- 00:37:903 (1) - add note? A slider's already there
- 01:53:439 (2) - i dont recommend this; you didnt do this with earlier parts that had the same music; also it could be a bit sudden & hard to play
-02:29:421 (1) - same as 00:35:135 (1) I'll ask about it
- 02:54:689 (5) - remove this; i dont see the point in it, you should just add a circle at 02:54:689 - and add clap It's there because it follows when Luhan sings "Tian tang zai sui shi he sui di

diff still needs some work; but its getting there~ work on having more consistency, especially on rhythm and spacing, for some parts of the song; specifically the beginning you are missing a good opportunity to map the piano; which is more dominant but you decide to map the bass drum sound or whatever it is; remember that this is the bass; its not the major part of the music; just a background sound to keep a good tempo for the song
I did a lot of changes... Wow it's looks different from when I first submitted it...

Hard

- diff spread from normal to hard is a bit much; i really suggest making hard just a bit easier I would be more concerned if you pointed about the difference between the Hard and the Insane (1.71 star difference). There's only a 1.29 star difference between the Normal and the Hard.
- 00:06:475 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this part is a bit overmapped, following every syllable in the vocals isn't always the best idea and really inconsistent with the other parts, That's why there's mostly sliders~
- 00:11:832 - try something like this to fit the piano OK

SPOILER

- 00:17:903 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - please map the piano here; this is too much >< I can do this with a mouse (I'm a tablet player, can CANNOT use the mouse at all).
- 00:21:475 (2,3,4) - this should be a 1/2 slider OK
- ill stop mentioning these overmapped vocal parts; its up to you if you want to work through your mapset fixing these and making a rhythm that makes more sense and is consistent with the rest of the song (you have these nice relaxing 1/1 sliders then suddenly a bunch of 1/4's it really breaks the nice 'melody' in this slow song); but i really hope you keep this in mind even though it will take some work it will make your mapset so much better, trust me.
- please keep a consistent spacing! for example 00:35:046 (1,2,3,4) - and 00:32:189 (1,2,3) - and 00:00:761 (1,2,3) - all are 1/4 apart, the SV didnt change but the spacing changed?? why? ill try to mention the ones i find but of course im human i wont find them all, since the spacing slowly rises then drops (?) if that makes sense.. I used AI mod for this, but had to ignore the one that were impossible to change because of the distance snap.
- 00:43:618 (1,3) - stack is off Fixed
- 00:55:046 (1) - looks weird.. a simple curved slider would work Pass
- 01:10:760 (5,1) - stack the slider heads? Pass
- 01:16:832 (8,1) - overlap looks bad Fixed(?)
- 01:38:618 (3,4,5) - spacing Fixed
- 01:49:332 (1,2,3) - ^ Fixed
- 01:58:260 (2,3) - ^ Already in distance snap
- heres another example of what i mean 02:02:010 (3,4) - these are around x1.3 spacing (1/4 beat apart) and then these 02:02:546 (5,6) - are like x1.6;(also 1/4 beat apart) i dont notice a damatic change in the music so the distance shouldnt change Fixed
- 02:03:618 (1,2) - spacing changed again LOL pls use distance snap and keep to one distance Distance snap actually pushed it further...
- 02:24:689 (4,5) - spacing v.s. 02:27:189 (4,5) - spacing v.s. 02:28:618 (8,9) - spacing xD Fixed
- 02:32:368 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - inconsistent rhythm again; the rhythm gets really dense compared to other similar parts Fixed
- 02:41:475 (3,5) - stack is off This one should be fine. I'll ask around.
- 02:54:689 - same as normal

think i repeated myself enough on the consistent spacing & rhythm; work on these and you'll improve the map a lot~ good luck!

wcx19911123 wrote:

[General]
sliderslide and slidertick being silenced in a same hitsound group is not allowed, I suggest you to use 5% volume instead
soft-hitnormal and soft-hitnormal2, they are the same as default hitsounds, please remove them Removed found a loophole though.
I think you need to use the 44b file instead of soft-slidertick2 and soft-sliderslide2, but don't forget the first suggestion above How to I do that?
make sure you used every hitosund file in the map, there're many duplicate files in the folder I did this because of different hitsound combinations. Mainly in the finishes.
hope you can confirm the metadata. the title "你的世界" in romanised should be "NI DE SHI JIE" but not translate into english if it has no official english title, please also check the artist besides this.. Check this link for my reference. If it was EXO has a whole, then I would have put in "EXO." However, since it's just EXO-M (Luhan (Who in recent news is filing a lawsuit. Aih, Imma cry...), Chen, Lay and Xiumin), then it'd just be EXO-M.
please find some timing pro to check the offset, I think it would increase a bit, like +8, but I'm not sure.. +6

[Normal]
00:12:903 (4) - out of screen Fixed
00:47:903 (5,1) - this anti-jump is a bit hard to read imo, hope you can change to normal spacing, or just add a note at 00:49:689 OK
00:56:118 (2,3) - they can blanket better Fixed
02:54:689 (5) - don't repeat it? the rhythm would be better imo It'd be weird if I ended it on a non-white point, in my opinion

[Hard]
00:36:475 - I suggest to add NC here, for better reading the anti-jump OK
00:38:439 - for same reason, I suggest you move the NC from 00:37:903 - to here It's like that because it's the beginning of a new part of the music. I'll just move the second circle.
01:24:510 - add a note here? it fits the song imo OK
01:30:225 - ^ OK
02:41:475 (3,5) - they can stack better Fixed
02:54:689 (6) - same as Normal ^

[Insane]
00:59:332 (1) - this slider is too slow, use 0.5x speed is enough Then the slider wouldn't end on the x-axis.
01:45:671 (11,1,8,1) - this 2 jumps are too huge, they're much more hard than the average of this diff's difficulty.. spacing like 00:37:189 - is enough I made each of the streams smaller in terms of the jump and the size of the stream, including the first one.
02:07:903 (1,1) - same as before, 0.5x and 1.5x speed are enough imo Kept the .25, changed to 1.5.
02:31:385 (12,1) - this jump is a bit huge too Changed
02:54:689 (10) - same ^

you have many creativity on mapping, but some basic skills are not that adept..
remember to check your hitsounds.. I think it may be some unused ones but I'm a bit lazy to check them unless I want to bubble it

1. Check AImod, some issue about preview point

1. 00:00:767 (1,3) - blanket better
2. 00:24:338 (4,7) - add nc, kinda hard to read
3. 00:36:481 (5) - nc
4. 00:37:016 (11,12) - add a 1/4 slider here (see picture), can easier for player
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:37:730 (7,8) - ^
6. 00:38:802 - missed this voice, i think it should not ignored
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 00:41:124 (3) - put it to x252 y324 and ctrl+g 00:41:124 (3,4) - ? imo it can be a good flow
8. 00:59:338 (1) - this slider maybe slow too suddenly, i suggest improve it to x0.50
9. 01:22:195 (7) - nc
10. 01:33:624 (6) - ^
11. 01:45:588 (10,11,7,8) - 1/4slider too
12. 01:47:374 - same as 00:38:802 -
13. 01:50:231 -
14. 02:07:909 (1) - slow too suddenly
15. 02:08:624 (1) - unsnapped at the tail
16. 02:08:624 (1) - imo it's almost unreadable, nobody know it's a very fast slider, player could think it's same as 02:07:909 (1) - a slow slider, i think slow down this slider can solve this issue
17. 02:31:302 (11,12,7,8) - 1/4 slider

1. OD,HP,AR -1

Kawaiwkyik wrote:

[General]

1. Check AImod, some issue about preview point

[Insane]

1. 00:00:767 (1,3) - blanket better This was on purpose because of the objects move when overlapped.
2. 00:24:338 (4,7) - add nc, kinda hard to read Pass
3. 00:36:481 (5) - nc OK
4. 00:37:016 (11,12) - add a 1/4 slider here (see picture), can easier for player I can name 5 different maps that do this.
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:37:730 (7,8) - ^
6. 00:38:802 - missed this voice, i think it should not ignored Pardon?
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 00:41:124 (3) - put it to x252 y324 and ctrl+g 00:41:124 (3,4) - ? imo it can be a good flow I just moved the 3rd circle
8. 00:59:338 (1) - this slider maybe slow too suddenly, i suggest improve it to x0.50
9. 01:22:195 (7) - nc
10. 01:33:624 (6) - ^
11. 01:45:588 (10,11,7,8) - 1/4slider too ^
12. 01:47:374 - same as 00:38:802 (After reading the comment for 5 minutes), oh, I put the normal slide here, it's has the bass.
13. 01:50:231 ^
14. 02:07:909 (1) - slow too suddenly
15. 02:08:624 (1) - unsnapped at the tail Fixed
16. 02:08:624 (1) - imo it's almost unreadable, nobody know it's a very fast slider, player could think it's same as 02:07:909 (1) - a slow slider, i think slow down this slider can solve this issue Changed shape
17. 02:31:302 (11,12,7,8) - 1/4 slider ^

[Normal]

1. OD,HP,AR -1 OK

other diff were fine for me
good luck

Kawaiwkyik wrote:

it's true
imo using headphones is better than speaker

neonat wrote:

Easy This is normal...

00:02:909 (4) - NC here, this is the start of the phrase, like 00:15:052 (1) There's a large gap between Luhan's "Hao shang" and Lay's "Shuang yan."
00:04:338 (2,3,5) - in this pattern, you can make the spacing between them equal for better presentation OK
00:13:624 (5) - shift it to cover the previous object better, I was still using distance snap for this: Literally just moved up by ONE box because of distance snap

SPOILER

00:21:481 (2,3) - both sliders move in the upwards direction, which feels off, especially in Normal I thought 2 was going down
00:35:231 (1) - end the spinner at 00:37:195 - ending at 00:36:838 seems weird because it ends when the lead-in vocals to the chorus start, which is not as solid in beat as when you end it when the first held vocal comes OK
00:47:909 (5,1,2) - blanket OK
01:46:481 (1,2) - ^ OK
01:53:445 (2,3) - this is a peculiar rhythm to use here in the simplest Difficulty, could you use either 1/2 or 1/1 beats when using circle + slider, it's not like the rhythm is used when a slider ends or something, which is easy to tell and hit OK
02:03:624 (1,2) - improve the blanket OK
02:22:909 (3) - tilt it like 02:24:338 (5) OK
02:38:624 (2,3) - blanket them The end is already

Hard

00:27:374 (2,3,2,3) - these should be similar to 00:33:088 (2,3) - either they space or touch each other OK
00:36:124 (3,1) - you should space these out, or stack completely This part was recommended (I think) by wcx19911123
00:43:624 (1,2) - blanket isn't perfect Fixed(?)
01:23:624 (1,2) - shift 01:24:516 (2) - this doesn't look good OK
01:30:052 (1,2) - overlap them as much as how a slider like 01:30:766 (4) would have it's ends overlap each other OK
01:50:588 (4,5) - don't allow them to overlap: OK

SPOILER

01:58:266 (2,3) - angle them so they don't look like they touch, it just looks not as good when it's like this
01:59:159 (3,6) - similar thing about not touching each other OK
02:02:016 (3,5) - ^ OK
02:53:802 (4,5) - place 02:54:159 (5) elsewhere, this doesn't look great OK

Insane

00:02:909 (4) - NC here instead, as mentioned in Easy ^
00:10:231 (3,5) - doesn't blanket nicely Moved 4
00:22:195 (5,6) - ^ This one should be fine
00:31:124 (6,7,1,2) - this a pattern as a whole doesn't move smoothly, especially due to 00:32:195 (1,2) Moved 2
01:10:766 (1,2) - I don't see a reason why these sliders needed to be extended Because of the background music in the music (that makes sense, right?
01:13:266 (3,6) - don't overlap OK
02:48:981 (11,1) - ^ OK


The jump in difficulty from Hard and Insane is too much, the change in Jumps, Spacing and Streams and just too big



Good Luck

1. none.

1. Personally I don't recommend you to change sv in lowest diff. It might be too hard for beginners.
2. Also 1.3x spacing might be too big I guess.
   
3. 00:30:766 (5,6) - They are placed too close. move them apart will looks better.
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:15:052 (5) - blanket can be improved.
   
   example

   
5. 01:26:481 (4,5) - since you kept 1.3x spacing in the whole map, this 1.0x spacing is too small. Rotate 4 15° clockwise could help.
   
   example

   
6. 01:29:338 (1) - after fix 01:26:481 (4) - , don't forget to copy it and ctrl+h here
7. 02:26:838 (1) - spacing mistake I guess? fix it to 1.3x please
8. 02:28:624 (5,1) - This spinner is too close to the note. Please let it begin at blueline at least.
9. 02:49:338 (1,2) - This looks awkward imo. Try some other shapes of 2?
   
   example

   
10. Well, maybe you need to map an easy diff for beginners. This diff's placement it a little off for beginners.

• Generally I recommend you to pay more attention to placement in this diff. Especially for spacings.

1. 00:11:838 (5,6,1) - these notes are touching each other. and it looks quite different from apart notes like 00:08:624 (7,8,9) - . To make your map looks better, I suggest you to keep consistency of these spacings. For here I recommend you to move these notes apart.
   
   exapmle

   
2. 00:23:266 (4,5,1) - same to 00:11:838 (5,6,1) - .
   
   example

   
3. 00:49:338 (1) - compared with other paterns it seems too close to 2. I suggest you move it further.
   
   example

   
4. 00:51:481 (6,7,8,9) - and this spacing seems too huge imo. The song didn't give such a feeling here, so reduce the spacing would be better.
   
   example

   
5. 01:01:481 (1,2,3) - This is a relative peaceful part, so I suggest you to reduce the spacing. Now it's even bigger than those in kiai and it feels a bit unexpected.
   
   example

   
6. 01:24:516 (2) - for consistency, you can move it apart from 1 and it will look better.
7. 01:39:159 (4,5) - ^
8. 01:53:624 (5,6) - because 01:52:909 (3,4) - is 1/2, player may read this as 1/2 too. I recommend you to move 6 away so players won't misread it.
   
   example

   
9. 01:55:766 (3,4) - same as 01:53:624 (5,6) - .

• To be honest, I feel this diff is unnecessarily overmapped. The song doesn't provide a tense rhythm with so many 1/8s. Besides, huge jumps doesn't fit most parts of this song imo.

1. Some of your patterns seems not reasonable enough imo.
2. 00:46:302 (8) - Unnecessary big jump imo. I strongly recommend you to stack it to 00:46:481 (1) - ‘s head to reduce the spacing.
3. 00:46:838 (2) - ^. move it to x268 y196 could make it play better and create a nice blanket.
4. 01:10:766 (1,2) - Since you muted slider ends, this 1/4 jump seems making not much sense. I suggest you shorten them, let them end at blue lines.
5. 01:20:409 (7) - This jump is acceptable, but it still feels a bit too far. Maybe you can move it to x156 y116 and make 01:20:231 (6,7,1) - a triangle?
   
   exapmle

   
6. 01:35:231 (1,2,3,4) - ...if you really want to make jumping patterns, I recommend you to put jumps at tenser places. A peaceful part like here doesn't match with jumps imo.
7. 01:41:481 (3) - The flow between 3 and 4 can be improved. I suggest move 3 to x468 y60 to make it flow better.
   
   example

   
8. 01:45:052 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - well, this is really off. stream jumps like this could be a difficulty spike. please change this to a simpler stream.
9. 01:53:445 (4) - flow can be improved imo. Try move 4 to x84 y328?
   
   example

   
10. 02:30:766 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - same to 01:45:052 .
    
    Current Insane also has a difficulty gap with Hard. If you are going to make this set ranked, I think you should reduce at least half of the jumps and the streams in this diff, honestly.
    
    Anyway, your hitsound and idea are still quite impressive imo. Good luck!

imoutosan wrote:

From queue. Sorry for delay. I'm sorry for MY delay.

Bold = please think it over carefully

[General]

1. none.

[Normal]

1. Personally I don't recommend you to change sv in lowest diff. It might be too hard for beginners.
2. Also 1.3x spacing might be too big I guess.
   
3. 00:30:766 (5,6) - They are placed too close. move them apart will looks better. Moved end of slider 6
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:15:052 (5) - blanket can be improved. ok
   
   example

   
5. 01:26:481 (4,5) - since you kept 1.3x spacing in the whole map, this 1.0x spacing is too small. Rotate 4 15° clockwise could help. I thought it was already in 1.3 spacing
   
   example

   
6. 01:29:338 (1) - after fix 01:26:481 (4) - , don't forget to copy it and ctrl+h here
7. 02:26:838 (1) - spacing mistake I guess? fix it to 1.3x please ok
8. 02:28:624 (5,1) - This spinner is too close to the note. Please let it begin at blueline at least. ok
9. 02:49:338 (1,2) - This looks awkward imo. Try some other shapes of 2? ok
   
   example

   
10. Well, maybe you need to map an easy diff for beginners. This diff's placement it a little off for beginners.

[Hard]

• Generally I recommend you to pay more attention to placement in this diff. Especially for spacings.

1. 00:11:838 (5,6,1) - these notes are touching each other. and it looks quite different from apart notes like 00:08:624 (7,8,9) - . To make your map looks better, I suggest you to keep consistency of these spacings. For here I recommend you to move these notes apart. ok
   
   exapmle

   
2. 00:23:266 (4,5,1) - same to 00:11:838 (5,6,1) - . ok
   
   example

   
3. 00:49:338 (1) - compared with other paterns it seems too close to 2. I suggest you move it further. ok
   
   example

   
4. 00:51:481 (6,7,8,9) - and this spacing seems too huge imo. The song didn't give such a feeling here, so reduce the spacing would be better. ok
   
   example

   
5. 01:01:481 (1,2,3) - This is a relative peaceful part, so I suggest you to reduce the spacing. Now it's even bigger than those in kiai and it feels a bit unexpected. ok
   
   example

   
6. 01:24:516 (2) - for consistency, you can move it apart from 1 and it will look better. Spacing
7. 01:39:159 (4,5) - ^ Spacing
8. 01:53:624 (5,6) - because 01:52:909 (3,4) - is 1/2, player may read this as 1/2 too. I recommend you to move 6 away so players won't misread it. ok
   
   example

   
9. 01:55:766 (3,4) - same as 01:53:624 (5,6) - .

ok

[Insane]

• To be honest, I feel this diff is unnecessarily overmapped. The song doesn't provide a tense rhythm with so many 1/8s. Besides, huge jumps doesn't fit most parts of this song imo. Yeah, but have you SEEN yamemasita's scores?

1. Some of your patterns seems not reasonable enough imo.
2. 00:46:302 (8) - Unnecessary big jump imo. I strongly recommend you to stack it to 00:46:481 (1) - ‘s head to reduce the spacing. ok
3. 00:46:838 (2) - ^. move it to x268 y196 could make it play better and create a nice blanket. ok
4. 01:10:766 (1,2) - Since you muted slider ends, this 1/4 jump seems making not much sense. I suggest you shorten them, let them end at blue lines. Pass
5. 01:20:409 (7) - This jump is acceptable, but it still feels a bit too far. Maybe you can move it to x156 y116 and make 01:20:231 (6,7,1) - a triangle? ok
   
   exapmle

   
6. 01:35:231 (1,2,3,4) - ...if you really want to make jumping patterns, I recommend you to put jumps at tenser places. A peaceful part like here doesn't match with jumps imo. ok
7. 01:41:481 (3) - The flow between 3 and 4 can be improved. I suggest move 3 to x468 y60 to make it flow better. Just made a triangle.
   
   example

   
8. 01:45:052 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - well, this is really off. stream jumps like this could be a difficulty spike. please change this to a simpler stream. ok
9. 01:53:445 (4) - flow can be improved imo. Try move 4 to x84 y328? ok
   
   example

   
10. 02:30:766 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - same to 01:45:052 . ok
    
    Current Insane also has a difficulty gap with Hard. If you are going to make this set ranked, I think you should reduce at least half of the jumps and the streams in this diff, honestly.
    
    Anyway, your hitsound and idea are still quite impressive imo. Good luck!

1. 00:08:624 (10) - try deleting this note, I don't think there should be a sound there
2. 00:10:409 (4,5) - check for stacking ( I assume you wanted these stacked rather than just a little overlapping like the rest of the map, because they are super close. If you actually just wanted a little overlap then just move it out a little more)
3. 00:18:266 (3,4) - this placement is weird, its the same 1/4 timing as before so why are they overlapping? try ctrl+g on 4, or simply move it away / stack
4. 00:32:731 (2,3) - try ctrl + g on this, I think it would flow better
5. 00:36:481 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i don't know... the jumps between this stream? There's no drastic change or major sound between each of the groups of 4 notes to indicate that, rather it is gradually increasing. So maybe you can try a pattern like this? http://puu.sh/iNioJ/792c73ce20.jpg (accelerating by increasing spacing, rather than stream jumps)
6. 00:38:624 (3) - Generally recommend to not use hitsounds for slider ticks. There's some other places that have this too so please check! Taken straight from the ranking criteria, "Slider tick hitsounds are discouraged. If you want to use them, then make sure that their volume is balanced (i.e. notably quieter than regular hitsounds). A very loud slider tick, especially when only used once or twice, would be extremely jarring."
7. 00:52:016 (9,1) - do you want to blanket this?
8. 00:53:981 (6,7,8) - Please change the spacing here. 1/4 spacing is smaller than the 1/8, making it very confusing
9. 01:03:624 (1,2) - check stacking
10. 01:12:195 - I think we should lower the spacing a bit in this section, comparing this to the next section 01:46:481 - which is the actual chorus, this has larger spacing and higher note density making it much harder when it is just the verse. I'll leave it up to you which ones you want to change though
11. 01:13:445 (4,5) - more space between overlapping notes, this looks like you messed up a stack xD
12. 01:29:338 (1,2) - maybe make this an overlap too since everything else around it was lol
13. 01:38:624 (3) - missing a whistle here?
14. 01:45:052 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - same as 00:36:481
15. 01:55:052 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - so weird to have not stack and then stack! ;_;
16. 02:02:909 (9,10) - maybe ctrl + g on 10?
17. 02:07:909 (1,1) - .25 to 2x ... please lessen the SV difference or most people will miss here on the first try lol
18. 02:09:874 (2,3) - more space between the overlapping notes
19. 02:11:481 (7,8) - too far apart, compare this 1/8 to the 1/4 like 02:10:052 (3,4) -
20. 02:22:195 (5,6) - too far
21. 02:30:766 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - same as 00:36:481
22. 02:37:552 (12,13,1) - understand that there is actually only 1/8 time to jump between 13 and 1 because it is not a slider... If anything 13 should be stacked on top of 1, not under 12
23. 02:38:445 (2,3,4) - why not just make it simple lol
24. 02:48:624 (10,11) - so far

eeezzzeee wrote:

Hi, from your M4M request
Sorry for the delay

[Insane]
Did you mute the combobreak? I don't know if that will be allowed lol Removed
Why using so much overlapping? Some of them don't look very good imo Like, point them out...
Please be careful about 1/4 vs 1/8 spacing, yes its playable because its a slider but its not good to read Same as above
Try OD 7.5 or 8 ok

1. 00:08:624 (10) - try deleting this note, I don't think there should be a sound there There is, just listen to the actual mp3
2. 00:10:409 (4,5) - check for stacking ( I assume you wanted these stacked rather than just a little overlapping like the rest of the map, because they are super close. If you actually just wanted a little overlap then just move it out a little more) Fixed(?)
3. 00:18:266 (3,4) - this placement is weird, its the same 1/4 timing as before so why are they overlapping? try ctrl+g on 4, or simply move it away / stack Changed put into a different position
4. 00:32:731 (2,3) - try ctrl + g on this, I think it would flow better Pass, this was on purpose
5. 00:36:481 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i don't know... the jumps between this stream? There's no drastic change or major sound between each of the groups of 4 notes to indicate that, rather it is gradually increasing. So maybe you can try a pattern like this? http://puu.sh/iNioJ/792c73ce20.jpg (accelerating by increasing spacing, rather than stream jumps) I actually might take that idea. Thank you!
6. 00:38:624 (3) - Generally recommend to not use hitsounds for slider ticks. There's some other places that have this too so please check! Taken straight from the ranking criteria, "Slider tick hitsounds are discouraged. If you want to use them, then make sure that their volume is balanced (i.e. notably quieter than regular hitsounds). A very loud slider tick, especially when only used once or twice, would be extremely jarring." This idea was taken from Rohi - Kakuzetsu Thanatos, where the Pokie difficulty does the same thing.
7. 00:52:016 (9,1) - do you want to blanket this? Yes
8. 00:53:981 (6,7,8) - Please change the spacing here. 1/4 spacing is smaller than the 1/8, making it very confusing OK
9. 01:03:624 (1,2) - check stacking Did already when the staking implant for the editor same in place.
10. 01:12:195 - I think we should lower the spacing a bit in this section, comparing this to the next section 01:46:481 - which is the actual chorus, this has larger spacing and higher note density making it much harder when it is just the verse. I'll leave it up to you which ones you want to change though Changed in many places
11. 01:13:445 (4,5) - more space between overlapping notes, this looks like you messed up a stack xD Pass
12. 01:29:338 (1,2) - maybe make this an overlap too since everything else around it was lol ok
13. 01:38:624 (3) - missing a whistle here? You probably should have mentioned the end side of the slider
14. 01:45:052 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - same as 00:36:481 ok
15. 01:55:052 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - so weird to have not stack and then stack! ;_; Fixed
16. 02:02:909 (9,10) - maybe ctrl + g on 10? Pass
17. 02:07:909 (1,1) - .25 to 2x ... please lessen the SV difference or most people will miss here on the first try lol Then explain HW's maps...
18. 02:09:874 (2,3) - more space between the overlapping notes ok
19. 02:11:481 (7,8) - too far apart, compare this 1/8 to the 1/4 like 02:10:052 (3,4) Should be fine
20. 02:22:195 (5,6) - too far Should be fine
21. 02:30:766 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - same as 00:36:481 ok
22. 02:37:552 (12,13,1) - understand that there is actually only 1/8 time to jump between 13 and 1 because it is not a slider... If anything 13 should be stacked on top of 1, not under 12 Changed location
23. 02:38:445 (2,3,4) - why not just make it simple lol For me, I see that it differentiates between the softer and the louder echo.
24. 02:48:624 (10,11) - so far Ok

That's all. Despite all the stuff I had to complain about I think its quite fun.
The difficulty spread is questionable though, maybe it needs a light insane between hard and insane. Good luck!