Okoratu wrote:

This is a marathon map with multiple difficulties so i guess this rule does not apply
And Donphin is totally related to your name as i said.

see the "unrelated to an username" part of it as well as the "Marathon maps with a single difficulty may use free naming"

I'm unsure about the part where different gamemodes come in since it's not explicitly stated anywhere

Dolphin wrote:

Okoratu wrote:

This is a marathon map with multiple difficulties so i guess this rule does not apply
And Donphin is totally related to your name as i said.

see the "unrelated to an username" part of it as well as the "Marathon maps with a single difficulty may use free naming"

I'm unsure about the part where different gamemodes come in since it's not explicitly stated anywhere

"Donphin Oni" is rankable as it could be seen as an alternate way of typing "Dolphin's Oni"

I think our best bet is to ask a BAT at this point.

Taiko diffs and Standard diffs can be separated and recognize as two individual "mapsets" so right now we have two single diff spreads in a single set.

Maeglwn wrote:

stellar maps get ranked.

1. Don't rely too much on distance snap. Distance snap limits creativity. Also, Add some more jumps to emphasize certain strong beats. Jumps can make the map more fun too.
2. Keep checking AI Mod (Ctrl+Shift+A)
3. Try to pick combo colors that match the background
4. I would decrase HP by 1 or 0.5. This is because there are lots of slider velocity changes. People will lose quite a big chunk of HP because they might not see many of them coming.
5. Don't use normal whistles (and normal sampleset in general) in the calm parts of the music, such as after 00:26:982 . The normal whistles are really annoying and don't fit with the music.
6. Execute patterns correctly/ cleanly. 00:25:746 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - imo, would look a LOT better if it was a perfect, or close to perfect, star pattern.

Kinshara wrote:

Taiko: Maybe DolphInner Oni...? Hah...ha....k bai

Kinshara wrote:

Hi

Just some metadata mod here (No Kudosu please):

General

Japanese Title: てんしょう しょうてんしょう
Tags: Add Hatsune Miku

Difficulty names

Standard: I suggest having only "Reincarnation" in the name because "Ascension Reincarnation" is too long and the song is mainly about reincarnation. Also, reincarnation implies ascension in a way (being reborn after dying).

Taiko: Maybe DolphInner Oni...? Hah...ha....k bai

Tips for Standard map

1. Don't rely too much on distance snap. Distance snap limits creativity. Also, Add some more jumps to emphasize certain strong beats. Jumps can make the map more fun too.
2. Keep checking AI Mod (Ctrl+Shift+A)
3. Try to pick combo colors that match the background
4. I would decrase HP by 1 or 0.5. This is because there are lots of slider velocity changes. People will lose quite a big chunk of HP because they might not see many of them coming.
5. Don't use normal whistles (and normal sampleset in general) in the calm parts of the music, such as after 00:26:982 . The normal whistles are really annoying and don't fit with the music.
6. Execute patterns correctly/ cleanly. 00:25:746 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - imo, would look a LOT better if it was a perfect, or close to perfect, star pattern.

Good luck :3

Also, props for being able to map such a hard song \o/

Squigly wrote:

It appears i gave kudosu because im retarded

Dolphin wrote:

Squigly wrote:

It appears i gave kudosu because im retarded

?

Zare wrote:

Welp.

Ascension Reincarnation

1. 00:10:041 (1) - my initial thought was to change this slider into 2 circle, simply to emphasize that the drums are kicking in and it would also raise the attention on the vocals on the next slider the whole map is not about vocals except when there is nothing else so i focused on the increasing and decreasing sounds of the strings, mapping the sliders up and down rather instead of mapping into the other beats.
2. 00:15:688 until 00:26:982 - i don't like your shapes and angles in this section. Yes, the spacing stays the same, but angles like 00:17:629 (9,10) - are much cleaner and simpler to play than stuff like 00:23:982 (13,1), which is a really sharp back-and-forth movement. Overall it feels like this was all just more or less randomly placed with only distance snap in mind. Consider that distance isn't the only thing that has influence on how objects feel. Additionally, the occasional stacks add weird stops that don't go well with the songs. the sliders are matched with the strings while i stack similar drum sounds and space the ones that differ ever so slightly, though it can be argued
3. 00:32:629 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - for patterns like this, you could just use the "Create Polygon Circle" tool to achieve a much cleaner image. i think i tried but couldnt get it to work ill try again <:
4. 00:36:864 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I've already talked to you about this in IRC. Try the follwing snaps, it's probably the best you can get out of this part. (1-6 is 1/6, 7 is on 1/12, the rest are on 1/8 or even 1/16. Make sure to use sliders because no one could play this accurately lol fixed, i hope its better, its a tricky section S:
   
   picture

   
5. 00:38:276 (1) - this applies to the whole map in general: wub sliders that end before the next beat would sound better if the tail was silenced or at least lowered in volume. i will do this <:
6. 00:41:805 (3) - have this end on the white tick and add a new slider at the blue tick, where this one currently ends? would fit the ... sound, better ill keep this in mind
7. 00:43:217 (6,7,8) - I'd like to see these seperated from the previous objects in the same combo, the tone they're mapped on slightly changes and it feels weird to just treat them the same as as before. You could put a NC and/or display them differently by making them straight or changing the angle/spacing to accentuate them. This is also a repeated thing throughout the map, so maybe you can just add NCs at these spots i do change the angle and spacing to make the changes more noticable i did it for all these sections that are alike but ill nc them
8. 00:51:688 (1,2,3) - snapped incorrectly: 2 should be on the white tick here and 3 would be perfect on the yellow tick at 00:52:261. I suggest to delete 3 and make 2 end on that yellow tick, you can't expect people to read 1/8 snaps. You can then add an object on the downbeat at 00:52:393. This makes sense anyway, it's a very dominant beat after all i actually disagree with this, i think its fine and with the millions of testplays ive gotten people play it perfect.
9. 00:53:041 (5) - at this point you could improve readability if you deleted 5 and 6 and placed a 1/6 with a reverse arrow on 00:53:099. Would then look like this: this aint no insane V: extra for a reason
   
   whoop

   
10. 00:55:923 (1,2,3,4) - just for clarification: why are all these 1/3? they end on 1/3
11. 00:58:923 (1,1) - get rid of one of the NCs here shouldnt it be fine? it is abiding by the rules i though S:
12. 01:00:158 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - this is seriously too hard compared to the rest of the map, it's effectively 255 BPM streaming. Reduce the amount if consecutive circles to 3 instead of 6, then add a slider with a single reverse on 01:00:335 . Also consider compressing the the srteam more so it won't be mistaken for 1/4 i dont think it can really be helped i think its more or less better this way
13. 01:02:452 (1) - Remove this NC, it doesn't really serve a purpose ok c:
14. 01:13:727 (2) - really unfitting slider, ends on string drum beat and strong vocals, so you might want ro remove this from here and place a slider at
    01:13:550 - or 01:13:903 - to have it more fitting. i didnt do vocals i did sliders and mini jump for the noticeable beats c:
15. 01:14:433 (5) - same issue as above
16. 01:18:556 (6) - ^
17. 01:19:212 (2) - ^ etc.
18. 01:29:226 (4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Nope. Way too hard when put into perspective. A lot(!!) of players that would pass the map easily would fail here or break combo. Not only is it a rather long 220 BPM stream, but it's also rather widely spaced with empasis on the strong beats.
    Reduce the spacing, add (reverse-)sliders. Keep it reasonable. but.....its my extra marathon V; i rather love this section
19. 01:30:589 (1) - and while we're at it, don't use a 1/4 slider with a single reverse in 4/4 streams, because this would land on the red tick and then the next circle is on the blue tick. this pretty much switches the entire focus of the stream and confuses the player. Add a reverse arrow, the slider will then cover a 4 1/4 ticks and the next circle will land on a white tick, starting a new 1/4 rhythm. it feels mroe natural and is easier to understand. ive seen it played fine and not but for now i would like to atleast keep this general section.
20. 01:34:271 (6) - this should be snapped on 01:34:305 - nice
21. 01:34:680 (2) - make this end on 01:34:851 - and delete 01:34:885 (3), it's overmapped. changed a bit
22. 01:36:044 (1,1,2) -
    
    click

    
23. 01:38:226 (1) - more fitting rhythm for the measure starting here: nuh
    
    haihai

    
24. 01:49:589 (2,3,4,5) - this is actually pretty cool ;D
25. 01:52:135 (4) - make this end on 01:52:305 - nice catch
26. 01:53:203 (8) - why isn't this snapped on the white tick? It should be fixed
27. 01:53:942 (2,3) - and these should both be snapped 1/8 later done and done
28. 01:54:589 (5) - excuse me but this one just doesn't look good, visually. Try to make the curves mor clean and less crunched i dont know why i left it like that to begin with LOL
29. 02:04:953 (2) - the problem with kicksliders like this is that you can't hit them late, because that will instantly result in a sliderbreak. At least make this 1/8 slider instead of 1/16. owo
30. 02:10:764 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - same issue as the beginning, there seems to be no thoughts behind these shapes and movements. Try to get some structure in here, use sliderpairings by mirroring them, or use symmetrical patterns (that don't mess with the spacing ofc) or other stuff that seems less random. well, the thought behind these is to move up or down with the music not so much make it look symetrical
31. 02:34:903 - why do you just skip the white tick here? there's vocals that want to be mapped never mapped to vocals
32. 02:36:315 (1) - delete NC, also,I would map this one as two circles on the white and red tick here to fit the vocals. done
33. 02:40:727 (1,2) - swap NC? because of what I explained earlier in the first part. not seeing the problem here
34. 02:47:139 (3) - this one ending on a strong downbeat feels really wrong, try to shorten the slider and add something on the downbeat i like it c:
35. 02:47:962 (1) - why these NCs again sv changes? i would think i would need to here S:
36. 02:49:374 (8) - add NC here changed a bit
37. 02:50:962 (1,1) - remove both NCs here pretty colors
38. 02:52:903 (6) - same issue about supershort kicksliders as before, make this a tad longer thats half the fun of the map though ;D
39. 02:53:609 (1) - i can understand this NC here because it's on a rather strong vocalish change but why 02:53:786 (1,1) - these too? get rid of them v:
40. 02:55:021 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - same as the other 1/6 stream i addressed iz gud
41. 02:58:197 (4) - add NC k
42. 02:57:491 (2) - slider too short it plays like a regular note
43. 03:00:668 (6) - you might want a NC here did et
44. 03:16:889 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - yep, this is way too hard again ive never had problems here unless people cant stream it, im not making my extra easier for people who cant stream
45. 03:18:809 (1) - too short, it also has one reverse arrow too much. took away the 1 reverse, but i keep it ;v
46. 03:22:626 (5) - consider a NC here ye
47. 03:29:717 (1) - remove NC i think it makes sense, it gets quite a bit slower
48. 03:30:399 (2) - shouldn't this be 1/6? indeedly do
49. 03:33:717 (7) - exchange this with a circle and add a slider on 03:33:808 - simpyl to go with the vocals better but what i mapped goes with the music better
50. 03:34:626 (1) - repeated issue with the kickslider looks gud
51. 03:51:675 (2) - ^
52. 05:02:955 (1,2) - unfitting sliders, make them both have 2 reverses to fit the rhythm. i hope i made it better, its an awkward part to map
53. 05:03:364 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - stream is too long and could use some NCs :D
54. 05:04:864 (1) - I'd say this kickslider is actually okay because it's emphsaizing the distorted sounds so well ;D
55. 05:11:954 (1,2) - this slowdown is a little awkward, the song doesn't really suggest it imo. You didn't use slowdowns like this in other parts where this sound is used, either. in my opinion the sounds expressed represent more of a slower section
56. 05:21:312 (1) - remove NC its much slower though V;
57. 05:22:819 (3) - for correct snap, place on 05:22:819 - done did it
58. 05:23:629 (2) - this would feel better if it was snapped on 05:23:629 - changed some
59. 05:31:747 (1) - make 1/8 changed
60. 05:43:041 (4) - ^

Okay so. Let me get this clear, after checking through this in its entirety: It's not ready for rank. I has to focus on so many different things, I'm bound to have missed issues, even majore ones. New Comboing, Rhythms, correct beat snapping. Tbh I couldn't even pay a lot of attention to the spacing.
You have a few nice ideas that would also go well with the song, but placement seems poor at times. It's also inconsistent. And, what's kind of the most important thing.
It's not hitsounded. Hitsounds are required for anything that's supposed to be ranked, so you better get on with that.

I strongly advice to get a bunch of mods more before attempting to get a Bubble, preferably from modders that pay attention to more than just the surface.

That being said, this is not necessarily a bad map. It's very interesting to play, and if it gets a bit more cleaned up and polished with proper hitsounding, it can be great.

Zare wrote:

as a player
and a mapper

these streams are too hard.
I have no problems with hard maps (Snow Note is one of my favourite mappers ever), but this specific map is relatively easy up until these streams kick in and kill 90% of all the players that would pass the map otherwise. This is not a good design choice. You're creating something for players to play, not for players to die on.

additionally, not every slider velocity change warrants a NC. It might be a nice feature when the change is really extreme and when it's combined with an extra combo color just for that slider speed, but in your case, you did neither use the SV changes nor the NCs consistently.

silmarilen wrote:

the problem for me is not so much the speed or the length of the streams, but the shape. especially the one at 03:16:998
it's fine that you want to do those sudden direction changes because of the bass in the music, but i think this is too extreme.

KSHR wrote:

no kds


Artist: きくお
Romanized^: Kikuo
Title: てんしょう　しょうてんしょう
Romanized^: Ten Sho Sho Ten Sho


This romanized title is against the rule about the way of romanization that was recently moved to the Rules category, but I found a source that says it's correct on Kikuo's facebook. Therefore we should respect and use it in the romanized title field.

Dainesl wrote:

Please also use the Japanese title in Dolphin's Inner Oni; it's currently conflicting because you have no Japanese title in there.

electrolytes wrote:

players enjoying the map up to that point, then insta-failing.

electrolytes wrote:

So I love the way you've mapped the dubstep parts, but I agree with the others about the full-measure 220bpm streams. You need to figure out some way to decrease the difficulty there while maintaining the intensity of the map. I'm around rank 29000 right now and can pass the other parts of the map fairly easily, but those streams have players like Kynan, in the top 50, saying they kill. That is an enormous difficulty spike. In a ranked scenario, there'd be a whole lot of players enjoying the map up to that point, then insta-failing.

Squigly wrote:

electrolytes wrote:

kynan actually does great on them nearly everytime so i dunno what he sayin >W>

1. tags suggetion:
   vocaloid
   hatsune miku
   DubSteloid
2. remove "kikuo" from tags. it's already written in airtist

1. 00:41:805 (3) - end at 00:42:158- . or how about this?
   
2. 00:52:746 (4) - NC?
3. 00:59:452 (3) - ^
4. 01:42:726 (4) - out of play-field
5. 01:55:135 (6) - ^
6. 01:48:862 (3) - I prefer slider: 01:48:862~01:48:930
7. 02:01:305 (6) - end at 02:01:680
8. 02:10:253 (8,9) - I prefer not to stack
9. 02:59:668 (5) - object isn't snapped!
10. 03:02:433- add a note

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~

[General]

1. tags suggetion:
   vocaloid
   hatsune miku
   DubSteloid
2. remove "kikuo" from tags. it's already written in airtist

[Ascension Reincarnation]

1. 00:41:805 (3) - end at 00:42:158- . or how about this? the release of the note is on the blue tick if anything i should change it to add another slider but im keeping it the way it is
   
2. 00:52:746 (4) - NC? i dont think it really calls for one there
3. 00:59:452 (3) - ^ ok
4. 01:42:726 (4) - out of play-field if im not mistaken things can be out of the square a bit and still be in the playing field
5. 01:55:135 (6) - ^
6. 01:48:862 (3) - I prefer slider: 01:48:862~01:48:930 its basically just white noise that is dissipating after a big hit so keeping it just like that is fine, plus it stays consistent to the other parts similar to this
7. 02:01:305 (6) - end at 02:01:680 i put it on the 1/16 purple tick nice catch
8. 02:10:253 (8,9) - I prefer not to stack i do believe its fine, people just shouldnt over react when they see it, its just a small slider is all
9. 02:59:668 (5) - object isn't snapped! thank you i dont see how i keep having un snapped objects S: quite silly of me
10. 03:02:433- add a note i repeated the slider v:

there are many timing points and SV changings in this map. Nevertheless, your rhythm coodination is very nice!!!
although I couldn't clear, it really moved me
star for you ~☆
~Good Luck~

1. The beginning has tons of the same sliders rotated by random angles (they may look logical enough for each pair of two adjacent sliders, but the whole pattern, for example, 00:07:217 (1,2,3,4) - or 00:08:629 (1,2,3,4) - , looks random). Then it gets only worse, because you love to use the same curve, slightly altering it and putting many sliders of the same type in a row. I mean, that wouldn't be this bad, if the whole map didn't consist solely of these sliders.
2. Your patterns need polishing. As said above, the sliders look randomly placed and don't fit each other (example, moved all three to the same starting point and removed a note or 2 inbetween: http://puu.sh/btgvV/9454816761.jpg)
3. The movement also seems to be random sometimes; some of your jumps, such as 00:21:335 (1,2,3,4) - , or
4. The whistling and wobbling sounds you mapped caused your sliders to both look and play random. You can say they follow the music, and yes, they do, but asdflujksdfa;uilsfdgbn,sdfgbn,mfdsgbn,dsfg oh well there goes my bitching about patterns and their appearance (removed a couple of ssentences each of which had the word "random")

TicClick wrote:

So this is my presonal opinion, which you may find very subjective: I would stay away from the map.

Why?

1. The beginning has tons of the same sliders rotated by random angles (they may look logical enough for each pair of two adjacent sliders, but the whole pattern, for example, 00:07:217 (1,2,3,4) - or 00:08:629 (1,2,3,4) - , looks random). Then it gets only worse, because you love to use the same curve, slightly altering it and putting many sliders of the same type in a row. I mean, that wouldn't be this bad, if the whole map didn't consist solely of these sliders.
2. Your patterns need polishing. As said above, the sliders look randomly placed and don't fit each other (example, moved all three to the same starting point and removed a note or 2 inbetween: http://puu.sh/btgvV/9454816761.jpg)
3. The movement also seems to be random sometimes; some of your jumps, such as 00:21:335 (1,2,3,4) - , or
4. The whistling and wobbling sounds you mapped caused your sliders to both look and play random. You can say they follow the music, and yes, they do, but asdflujksdfa;uilsfdgbn,sdfgbn,mfdsgbn,dsfg oh well there goes my bitching about patterns and their appearance (removed a couple of ssentences each of which had the word "random")

In fact, there are a few of patterns I enjoyed to look at, but they're quite rare. For example, 01:49:135 (1,2,3,4,5) - or the whole part between 04:24:230 and 05:04:864, but only because of extremely low note density (you can observe very few objects at the same time). And again, things like 02:10:764 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - kill even this little bit of charm your map has. It's not even about the pattern itself, it's more about how frequently you use it and how messy it looks due to angle and spacing difference. And this is only one of the things I am unhappy with.

Sorry for disappointing, if anything has hit you, but I don't like it.

Before you ask, yes, I went through the whole map and didn't change my view for a second.

Sognux wrote:

Sorry but i literally can't mod this song :S

Jerry wrote:

10 SHO SHO and another 10 SHO? THAT MAKES 30 SHOs

SHO SHO SHO SHO SHO SHO SHO SHO SHO SHO SHO SHO SHO SHO SHO SHO SHO SHO SHO SHO SHO SHO SHO SHO SHO SHO SHO SHO SHO SHO

• [Donphin Inner Oni]

1. 00:21:070 (102,103) - swap these two so that it makes a consistent rhythm with 00:19:570 -, 00:18:158 -, and 00:16:746 - ? You have to realize that in the song there's a kick sample on 103 so kkd is best suited.
   
   
2. 00:24:864 (128) - change to don to maintain the consistency of the d d k d d d rhythm like what you did for 00:21:335 (104,105,106,107,108,109) - and 00:22:746 (113,114,115,116,118,119) - In a greater context, the current patterns fits (and flows) better.
   
   
3. 00:25:305 - Almost the same reason as the first suggestion, add a don here to keep the consistency of the kdk rhythm at 00:23:805 (121,122,123) - and 00:22:393 (110,111,112) - (You can also delete the kat at 00:25:482 - to emphasize more on the kdk, but that's entirely up to you :3) No, because I mapped to the reversed (or faded-in) snare smaple that ends (or lands) on 133.
   
   
4. 00:30:511 - The transition from the 1/1 single notes towards the patterns starting from here with the 1/4 triplets are a little too sudden imo. Try moving 00:30:776 - to 00:30:158 - so that there is a smooth flow of transition here? I added some 1/2 prior to the triplets.
   
   
5. 00:32:541 - Try deleting this so that the don at 00:32:629 - is able to give more emphasis on that loud sound here in the music? (I dunno what's that sound called lol, a siren perhaps?) what do you mean "loud" its barely audible unless you've made your soundcard emphasize the bass in an equalizer.
   
   
6. 01:07:041 - There is an audible high pitched piano sound here, change this note to a kat to accompany it? I'm not mapping to the piano here, I'm mapping the wubwubwubuuubwubbwuuuuuub
   
   
7. 01:08:629 - This sound in the music is slightly higher pitched than 01:08:452 -, so I would suggest that you change it to a kat so that the difference of pitch can be shown It doesn't fit because of the k kdk prior. This right here flows best becuase it already transitioned into following the piano.
   
   
8. 02:10:253 - Change the 1/4 ddk here to kdd so that the kat is consistent with the kat rhythm? This doesn't fit the music at all.
   
   
9. 02:29:162 - I suggest leaving a gap here by deleting this note. I don't really have a very good reason to support my suggestion for this, but it just makes the pattern flow smoother and better somehow. For me, at least o3o I disagree.
   
   
10. 03:16:889 - The stream here starts a little too early in my opinion, the really fast bass (or drum, I dunno) sound starts at 03:17:169 -, So I really think you should start the stream from there so that it sounds more natural. Delete 03:16:959 - and 03:17:099 - ? Clean your ears, the snare roll obviously starts on the beat prior.
    
    
11. 03:14:722 - This final d d d k d d d k pattern before the the long stream doesn't have enough buildup imo, I suggest adding a few notes as a "warning signal" for players that the stream is coming. Try adding dons at these parts : 03:14:804 -, 03:15:462 -, 03:16:086 -, 03:16:679 - That's stupid, and I don't agree with that at all. Adding dons at those places just makes the whole sections, and as if the similar section way prior to this isn't warning enough? You'd think players would expect another stream like this if there was one in a similar part of the song earlier on. No.
    
    
12. 04:43:295 (24,25,26) - Since you have this k k d here, I would advice that you keep the consistency going by applying the kkd patterns at these parts as well by adding two 1/4 kats : 04:47:073 -, 04:50:211 -, 04:52:874 -, 04:55:170 -, 04:57:364 -.
    (There is one small problem with this suggestion though, adding all of these will make the kdddk at 04:58:591 - sound out of place, and I don't know how to fix this in a way that doesn't disrupt the style of mapping that you're going for, so I'll just leave it to you. Sorry :< ) There aren't any other parts like this. At least not any with a significant volume.
    
    
    
    
13. 04:24:230 - Nightmare fuel omg Sleep well.

Well, that's all from me! Great job with the sexy streams in the kiai btw, I really love them <33 Despite the fact that I can't FC them

pkk wrote:

wtf is this

Dolphin wrote:

alert alert: puush doesn't like unicode, so you need to make sure to fix it every time you update lmao

pkk wrote:

why

irc with squigly

17:51 Squigly: THAT DOESNT LOOK LIKE MODDING MY MAP TO ME
17:51 Squigly: OAIDYAIDUTBNGDAVJ H
17:51 Squigly: 333::::<><><
17:51 pkk: you're in luck
17:51 pkk: your proclamation of love to me reminded me to mod oracle's map
17:51 Squigly: o:
17:51 Squigly: LOL
17:54 Squigly: well gl
17:54 Squigly: i cant wait for mods to come in for my ten sho map
17:54 Squigly: because then i can get my bubble
17:54 Squigly: and 2nd bubble
17:54 Squigly: and rankly doo
17:54 Squigly: ive got everything all set bb gurl!
17:54 Squigly: dftdftu
17:54 pkk: what
17:55 pkk: ;ahdfjsdfjalfj
17:55 Squigly: i have 3 bats ready to get my map up for rank
17:55 pkk: LOL
17:55 pkk: rip
17:55 Squigly: ;v;
17:55 Squigly: i mean
17:55 Squigly: i just need some mods
17:55 Squigly: thats all
17:55 Squigly: its mostly fine at the moment
17:55 Squigly: some little things that can be changed
17:56 pkk: i don't really like modding because people expect too much
17:56 Squigly: and surely its ok for rank
17:56 Squigly: nono
17:56 Squigly: its ok
17:56 pkk: and when I look at what I write
17:56 pkk: i think to myself
17:56 pkk: wtf is that the best i can do
17:56 pkk: i suck
17:56 Squigly: i mean, if you dont think it will be that good of a mod then i wont harass you man
17:56 Squigly: its ok
17:56 Squigly: c:
17:56 pkk: and i click post and hope to jesus that it's not cloudsplash's map that im posting on
17:56 Squigly: really im fine with a not pro mod
17:56 Squigly: i just hate the people who think they are pro and give a shit mod
17:56 Squigly: so i hope you dont worry aobut that
17:57 Squigly: LOL
17:57 Squigly: cloudspash
17:57 Squigly: does he bash people? D:
17:57 pkk: nah it's just an inside joke
17:57 Squigly: TELL ME ALL YOUR SECRETS
17:57 pkk: since oracle didn't apply the previous two mods
17:57 pkk: ill start on your map
17:57 Squigly:
17:57 Squigly: cool c:
17:58 pkk: if I die please take 10% of my kudosu
17:58 pkk: and give the rest to kibb
17:59 Squigly: yes pls bb
17:59 Squigly: (secretely its all mine)
18:00 *pkk is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/451362 Kikuo - Ten Sho Sho Ten Sho [Ascension Reincarnation]]
18:00 pkk: go on editor real quick to fix some small things
18:00 pkk: 00:10:746 (3,1) - blanket pls to make it prettier
18:02 Squigly: ill blanket your mom if you dont watch it kid
18:02 pkk: watch your mouth kid
18:03 pkk: who do you think you're talking to
18:03 pkk: do you wanna get spanked
18:03 Squigly: yers
18:03 Squigly: actually
18:03 pkk: 00:11:099 (4,2) - if you can, just space them out because these sliders are actually straight and not gay
18:03 Squigly: that blanket would look kinda ugly imo considering it would overlap
18:03 Squigly: ok ok
18:03 pkk: i don't mean blanekt around the tail
18:03 Squigly: to be honest
18:03 pkk: i mean the body
18:03 Squigly: i dont think i really want to change these
18:04 Squigly: they mostly over lap
18:04 pkk: alright
18:04 Squigly: but if i changed them than my purpose would be absoleet ;w;
18:04 Squigly: absolete
18:04 Squigly: spelling hard
18:05 Squigly: i actually did change a few angles though
18:05 pkk: see if you can NC soemwhere in 00:25:393 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) -
18:05 pkk: I just think that double digit combo numbers looks really ugly
18:06 Squigly: yeah
18:06 Squigly: they do
18:06 Squigly: i put it on the 7
18:06 pkk: 00:35:452 (9) - NC here like you did at 00:26:982 (1) -
18:06 Squigly: but
18:06 Squigly: ;_;
18:07 Squigly: that was because new combo
18:07 Squigly: whereas that ends on the note
18:07 Squigly: so would that make sense?
18:07 Squigly: >:
18:07 pkk: yea
18:07 pkk: 00:38:276 (1,2,3) - different spacing here?
18:08 Squigly: fized
18:08 Squigly: fixed
18:08 Squigly: god typing man im going to die
18:08 pkk: 00:39:246 (3) - this isn't snapped to 1/4 or 1/6
18:08 pkk: rip
18:08 Squigly: its 1/8
18:08 Squigly: c:
18:09 Squigly: because someone complaing
18:09 pkk: I think 1/4 is better
18:09 Squigly: complained about there being the 2 short sliders
18:09 Squigly: yeah
18:09 Squigly: ill change tht back
18:10 pkk: 00:41:452 (2,3) - hm move this so that (3) isn't touching (1)
18:10 pkk: increased spacing will create emphasis at 00:41:452 (2) -
18:10 pkk: vroom vroom
18:10 pkk: http://gyazo.com/742a83a42db24a47338bf75b721ac732
18:10 Squigly: hmmm
18:11 Squigly: well
18:11 Squigly: to be fair i made the beginning much more lax
18:11 Squigly: lemme think
18:11 pkk: it's not a huge difficulty spike
18:12 Squigly: i know
18:12 Squigly: but the thing i went for was readability, not to say that isnt easy to read
18:12 pkk: personally I think it's fine
18:12 pkk: rhythm is sort of predictable in this song imo
18:12 pkk: like you didn't randomly put 1/6 or anything
18:13 Squigly: uh
18:13 Squigly: yeah i didnt
18:13 Squigly: but
18:13 Squigly: the music is pretty unpredictable
18:13 Squigly: thats why people say it shouldnt be mapped
18:14 Squigly: but i think im going to keep it because i kept the spacing similar throught that section
18:14 pkk: 00:51:335 (7,8,1) - and then you have this
18:14 pkk: should probably reduce spacing on that jump
18:15 Squigly: in that respect i guess i will change the previous
18:15 Squigly: but i started making things harder the more it progressed
18:15 Squigly: onl slightly
18:15 pkk: ok
18:15 Squigly: and then it leveled
18:16 Squigly: so yeah i did change that other part
18:16 pkk: k
18:17 pkk: 00:54:688 (2,1) -
18:17 pkk: you can stack circle on the slider head to make it neater
18:18 Squigly: k bb
18:18 pkk: when you compare spacing at 01:06:335 (4,1) - to spacing between 01:05:805 (1,2,3,4) - \
18:18 pkk: there should be more space between 01:06:335 (4,1) -
18:18 pkk: since there is a long vocal at 01:06:510 - and emphasized piano note
18:20 Squigly: i like it liek dat tho V:
18:20 Squigly: because of the dissipating effect of the wub
18:20 Squigly: i tried to correlate it
18:20 Squigly: to the spacing
18:21 pkk: 01:29:498 - hmm I think preview time here is better than the current one
18:21 pkk: people get to hear the lead-in to the chorus and the chorus
18:21 Squigly: yeah
18:21 Squigly: ill do that
18:22 Squigly: c:
18:23 pkk: 01:31:680 (3,1) - maybe switch NC here so it ends up on beginning of kiai time
18:23 pkk: nvm sv change op
18:23 pkk: in that case you can just NC 01:31:680 (3) -
18:24 pkk: 01:34:317 (3,4,1,2) - idk this is pretty hard to play
18:24 Squigly: ok ;v;
18:24 pkk: nvm
18:24 Squigly: well its supposed to be the hardest section in a sense
18:24 Squigly: and
18:24 Squigly: people breeze through it
18:25 pkk: 01:34:498 (4) - consider moving to x 204 y 228
18:25 pkk: you can adjust 01:34:589 (1,2) - accordingly
18:25 pkk: this way you get a forwards arc between 01:34:317 (3,4,1) -
18:26 pkk: and 01:34:498 (4) - stacks on top of the body of 01:35:226 (4) -
18:26 pkk: http://puu.sh/bQq0u/a072729a3e.jpg
18:28 pkk: 01:36:498 (1,2) - i'd just copy one shape and ctrl+h ctrl+j so they mirror each other
18:29 pkk: 01:37:680 (2) - move it a bit left/up so it doesn't touch the slider, I think it looks nicer
18:29 Squigly: i made it more or less
18:29 Squigly: a straight angle
18:29 Squigly: instead of a curve pattern
18:30 Squigly: and barely
18:30 Squigly: because its such a touchy section ;_;
18:30 pkk: 02:04:953 (2) - wow free combo
18:30 pkk: $$$$$44
18:30 Squigly: lol
18:31 pkk: 02:08:722 (5) - maybe combo here
18:32 Squigly: i actually think that section is ok o:
18:34 pkk: 02:56:433 (1) - http://puu.sh/bQqyY/4faefbb430.jpg ?
18:34 pkk: I just think that the different curves on 02:55:727 (1,1) - looks a bit weird, maybe you could make them mirror each other
18:34 Squigly: what is that
18:35 pkk: what
18:35 pkk: oh it's a suggestion
18:35 Squigly: that jpg
18:35 Squigly: i did straight sliders for very indifferent sounds
18:36 Squigly: there was a way i did it but i dont quite remember anymore tbh
18:36 Squigly: different sounds*
18:36 Squigly: why i said indifferent i have no idea
18:37 pkk: 04:24:230 (1) - best
18:38 pkk: 04:36:726 (1,1,1) - I think the flow is too direct ehre
18:38 Squigly: do you like that section?
18:38 pkk: I would shape 04:38:180 (1) - differently
18:38 Squigly: do you know why i did it?
18:38 pkk: yea the rhythm in the section is good
18:38 Squigly: its because the audio stereo switches from side to side
18:38 Squigly: so i mapped it that way
18:38 Squigly: not perfectly but
18:38 Squigly: i did regardless
18:40 pkk: anyways I think that's it
18:40 pkk: only thing that bugs me is the object placement
18:40 pkk: but you told me before you had to make it easy to read or something
18:40 Squigly: yeah
18:40 Squigly: the idea was for flow and readability
18:41 Squigly: but i agree
18:41 pkk: honestly if you made it look better this map would be next level
18:41 Squigly: thanks for mod sexy <3
18:41 Squigly: i cant
18:41 Squigly: thats why people didnt map it
18:41 Squigly: its really hard
18:41 pkk: gg now i feel like mapping it
18:41 pkk: but i won't because im too lazy

Gaia wrote:

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irc log

21:19 Gaia: 00:09:688 (4) - STILL REJECTED?
21:20 Squigly: ye
21:20 Squigly: <3
21:20 Gaia: k
21:20 *Gaia is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/451362 Kikuo - Ten Sho Sho Ten Sho [Ascension Reincarnation]]
21:20 Squigly: no but really i was going to keep that section and disregard the overlaps
21:20 Squigly: sorry
21:20 Gaia: 00:22:570 (6) - a back and forth pattern
21:20 Gaia: wud be good
21:20 Gaia: http://puu.sh/bQMkS/9be92107ba.jpg
21:20 Squigly: its the same sound
21:20 Squigly: so i kept it a stack
21:21 Squigly: because nothing changes musically
21:21 Gaia: psh
21:21 Squigly: no reason for variation
21:21 Gaia: 00:24:864 (4) - wuts this
21:21 Squigly: do you hear the string
21:21 Gaia: i mean
21:21 Gaia: placement
21:21 Gaia: wise
21:21 Squigly: i only ever changed the sliders to match one other similar noise
21:21 Gaia: put it like
21:21 Gaia: vertically down
21:21 Squigly: oh
21:22 Squigly: nono i see what you mean
21:22 Gaia: id do this
21:22 Gaia: http://puu.sh/bQMpE/e3390a08c4.jpg
21:22 Gaia: or sth
21:22 Squigly: what
21:22 Squigly: why
21:22 Squigly: that isnt what i was going for
21:22 Gaia: but
21:23 Squigly: even though its kinda strange i wanted to keep it like this
21:23 Gaia: wau
21:23 Squigly: though im not afraid to change placement
21:23 Squigly: thats beyond the original concept i had
21:23 Gaia: that triangle thing u have
21:23 Gaia: meh
21:23 Squigly: sorta
21:24 Squigly: this aint your map ;w;
21:24 Squigly: ;wwwwwwwwww;
21:24 Gaia: lmao
21:24 Gaia: 00:46:746 (1) -
21:24 Gaia: wot
21:24 Squigly: ; w ;
21:24 Squigly: well it fits
21:24 Gaia: er
21:24 Squigly: i did a slider after as a dissipating effect
21:24 Gaia: not to me imo
21:25 Squigly: hm
21:25 Squigly: well thats the first time ive literally ever heard someone say something about it
21:25 Gaia: use like
21:25 Gaia: idk
21:25 Gaia: 1/8
21:25 Gaia: did u use 1/12
21:25 Squigly: thats too little
21:25 Squigly: yes
21:25 Squigly: 1/8 might work
21:25 Squigly: actually lemme see
21:25 Squigly: i thought you meant the slider as a whole
21:26 Squigly: i was going to cry
21:26 Gaia: nah
21:26 Gaia: 00:50:629 (3,4) - move these a bit
21:26 Gaia: flows better
21:26 Gaia: http://puu.sh/bQMGM/b927f24783.jpg
21:27 Gaia: little blanketing with 4 and 5 too i guess
21:27 Squigly: yeah ill change that placement a bit
21:27 Gaia: 00:53:041 (2,3,4) - extra dont overlap doesnt look gud
21:27 Gaia: 00:54:864 (3) - plz
21:28 Gaia: 01:00:511 (7) - and whys this one in 1/6 instead lmao
21:28 Gaia: oh nvm
21:28 Gaia: ignore that
21:28 Squigly: lol
21:28 Squigly: overlaps happen in this map
21:29 Squigly: let me kinda explain this
21:29 Gaia: yo wtf
21:29 Squigly: i distance snap near all of the map
21:29 Squigly: for flow and playability
21:29 Gaia: 01:03:511 (5) - u know how trolly this is
21:29 Gaia: and ye keep talking
21:29 Squigly: it plays easy
21:29 Squigly: but
21:29 Squigly: i did it so it plays perfect
21:29 Squigly: because other wise it would be shit and over mapped
21:29 Gaia: rip
21:29 Squigly: it has so many different timings and things going on
21:29 Gaia: im just asking for
21:29 Gaia: like
21:29 Squigly: thats why many dont want to map this
21:29 Gaia: a 2 pixel shift tho
21:29 Gaia: ;A;
21:30 Squigly: well
21:30 Squigly: it changes a lot since the spacing is held consistent in some way
21:30 Squigly: to me at the very least
21:30 Gaia: welp
21:30 Gaia: but u know
21:30 Gaia: cuz of ur sv change
21:30 Squigly: nono its ok
21:30 Squigly: i am still changing things lol
21:30 Gaia: ds gets recked too
21:31 Squigly: i know
21:31 Gaia: good example here 01:03:688 (1,2,1) -
21:31 Squigly: yes
21:31 Squigly: but i did that
21:31 Squigly: intentionally with those parts really
21:31 Squigly: same sounds get same things generally
21:31 Squigly: though im not perfect
21:31 Squigly: i put a ton of thought into this map
21:32 Gaia: do u have
21:32 Gaia: default skin in editor
21:32 Gaia: or ur own
21:32 Squigly: im using asphyxia's
21:32 Squigly: with default sounds
21:33 Gaia: m
21:33 Gaia: k
21:33 Gaia: 01:46:407 (6,1) -
21:33 Squigly: ?
21:33 Gaia: personal i guess but doesnt look 2 good
21:33 Squigly: whats wrong D:
21:33 Gaia: i dont like
21:34 Gaia: having similar shapes right after another
21:34 Squigly: this map is all same curve sliders
21:34 Squigly: i kept them clean
21:34 Squigly: because it was basically clean sounding
21:34 Squigly: anything that sounded unclean i made new sliders for
21:34 Squigly: or repeating sliders
21:35 Squigly: this is why i dont answer mods v.v
21:35 Gaia: wait u said u ds'd everything
21:35 Squigly: i always explain everything too much
21:35 Squigly: nearly everything
21:36 Squigly: not everything but mostly yes
21:36 Gaia: 02:04:953 (2) - wtfff
21:36 Squigly: as pkk said
21:36 Squigly: free combo
21:36 Squigly: $$$$$
21:36 Squigly: :^)
21:36 Squigly: if it fits it ships
21:36 Gaia: LOL
21:36 Gaia: LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL
21:36 Gaia: PK
21:36 Gaia: its also
21:36 Gaia: free ticket to
21:36 Gaia: losing ur combo
21:37 Squigly: sorta
21:37 Squigly: dont lose combo then
21:37 Squigly: if you mess up its your own damn fault m8
21:37 Gaia: wau
21:37 Squigly: it simply is
21:37 Squigly: look if someone has already fced hr on this
21:37 Squigly: then i dunt wanna hear shiiuuuttt
21:37 Squigly: c^:
21:38 Gaia: 02:21:065 (4) - mover a bit up 4 flow
21:38 Gaia: pls
21:39 Squigly: i did
21:39 Squigly: <4
21:39 Gaia: how did u do ur ncs
21:39 Squigly: every sv change
21:39 Gaia: i saw this so 02:44:433 (2) -
21:39 Squigly: and others
21:39 Gaia: hm
21:39 Squigly: yeah
21:39 Squigly: not quite sure
21:39 Squigly: im conflicted there
21:40 Gaia: rip
21:40 Gaia: 02:49:727 (4,1) - pls slider blanket
21:40 Squigly: ;_;;;;
21:40 Squigly: is it hot?
21:40 Gaia: nop
21:40 Squigly: oh
21:40 Squigly: its not that good
21:40 Squigly: aw
21:41 Gaia: do u know what im talking bout tho
21:41 Gaia: lol
21:41 Squigly: i fixed it
21:41 Squigly: but
21:41 Squigly: what
21:41 Gaia: o ok
21:41 Gaia: then nvm
21:42 Squigly: yo
21:42 Squigly: im tired
21:42 Squigly: dont do dis
21:42 Squigly: its an irc mod ;;;; __ ;
21:42 Gaia: lol
21:43 Gaia: 03:39:728 (4,5,6) - this shapee
21:43 Gaia: and spacing
21:44 Gaia: fk man
21:44 Gaia: why alternate 1/6 and 1/4
21:44 Gaia: its hella confusing
21:44 Squigly: i changed it a bit
21:44 Squigly: um
21:44 Squigly: because the song does
21:44 Squigly: nah
21:44 Squigly: it plays ok
21:44 Gaia: yeah i know
21:44 Gaia: but its trolly to play
21:45 Squigly: nah
21:45 Squigly: well
21:45 Squigly: i guess
21:45 Squigly: its fun to play
21:45 Squigly: so
21:45 Gaia: lmao
21:45 Squigly: thats why its here at all
21:45 Squigly: i wouldnt try for this if people didnt love it
21:46 Gaia: 04:14:630 (1) - finish at the enddoesnt fit the quiet mood
21:46 Squigly: i changed it to normal soft hit
21:46 Squigly: with whistle
21:47 Gaia: well as long as its not as loud
21:47 Squigly: no u
21:47 Gaia: no me
21:47 Gaia: 04:24:230 (1) - i laughed
21:48 Squigly: you love it
21:49 Gaia: you're increasing sv
21:49 Gaia: but its still the same length
21:49 Gaia: op
21:49 Squigly: yep
21:50 Squigly:
21:50 Gaia: ggeeez
21:50 Gaia: 05:40:218 (1) - pls up like 2 pixels to cure my ocd ness
21:51 Squigly: :^)
21:51 Gaia: 05:45:512 (1) -
21:51 Squigly: NAH
21:51 Squigly: ;^)
21:51 Gaia: u should really
21:51 Gaia: get the drum beat at 05:45:688
21:52 Squigly: ok ill put a note in the middle of it
21:52 Squigly: 4080 stle
21:52 Gaia: 05:52:577 (1) - y not kick sliders
21:52 Gaia: bass drop
21:52 Gaia: something clickable everytime
21:52 Gaia: 05:53:177 - here basically
21:53 Squigly: that shit was hard to time at the end man
21:53 Gaia: lmao
21:53 Squigly: actually i think its ok
21:53 Gaia: it plays awkwardly
21:53 Squigly: uh
21:54 Squigly: it is played perfectly by everyone
21:54 Gaia: so ok
21:54 Squigly: the rhythm is awkward though
21:54 Gaia: the consistency u love so much
21:54 Gaia: 05:52:577 (1) - 05:52:910 (2) -
21:54 Gaia: same sound
21:54 Gaia: different rhythm in timeline
21:54 Gaia: JUST SAYING
21:55 Squigly: ye
21:55 Squigly: ey you wanna map dis shiut boi
21:55 Squigly: VVV:::/?/
21:55 Gaia: no
21:55 Squigly: lol
21:55 Squigly: these mods im getting are getting smaller though so this is making me happy
21:55 Gaia: ill make a 8 star easy
21:56 Squigly: do you think im getting it soon to be ready for first bubble? V:
21:56 Gaia: idk mang
21:56 Gaia: i sux at modding extra
21:56 Gaia: LOL
21:56 Squigly: lol
21:56 Gaia: if u go look at my mods
21:56 Gaia: Easy
21:56 Gaia: a whole list
21:56 Squigly: gg
21:57 Gaia: Normal another list
21:57 Squigly: get that mad KD flow bruh
21:57 Gaia: Hard smaller list
21:57 Gaia: Insane is like normal sized i guess
21:57 Gaia: extra
21:57 Gaia: - bad flow the end
21:57 Gaia: idk lmao
21:57 Squigly: its fine
21:57 Squigly: honestly
21:57 Squigly: but yes
21:57 Squigly: i see what you meant
21:58 Squigly: honestly
21:58 Squigly: that wasnt that bad
21:58 Squigly: even though i always say otherwise to suggestions
21:58 Squigly: i changed a lot of the way things look
21:58 Gaia: mmk
21:58 Squigly: CCCC::::::
21:58 Gaia: so
21:58 Gaia: kds plz
21:59 Gaia: har har har
21:59 Squigly: lol
21:59 Gaia: yo u wiped ur box
21:59 Gaia: http://puu.sh/bQOA7/e27a0f62ed.jpg
21:59 Gaia: RIP
21:59 Squigly: wtf
21:59 Squigly: NO I DIDNT
22:00 Gaia: rip in peace

P A N wrote:

testplay

yea, it flow to play.

01:52:407 (5,6) - I think this rhythm.. still can be improved? it might be similar with this?
02:00:998 (5,6,7) - change to this? similar with 03:48:666 (2,3)
03:54:861 (1,1,1,1) - don't add whistle? ;w;

:X

Squigly wrote:

p a n i lob u

P A N wrote:

Squigly wrote:

p a n i lob u

what do you mean lol

Smug- wrote:

modding because I can't remember how the order of the name goes

00:05:452 (3) - perhaps change this to a circle
00:05:805 (4) - if not this ^ I would space this circle a bit more from the slider
00:07:217 (1) - whistles absent from here on
00:12:511 (6) - I would ctrl+G this and stack 00:12:335 (4,5) - on it so that the bounce leads into the next slider
00:38:275 - I think there needs to be a red timing point here to fix up the downbeat
00:39:864 (6) - Move this to where 00:39:688 (5) - is. Extend the length of course
00:44:717 (2) - I would change this to a circle on 00:44:805 -
00:48:863 (6) - I think it'd be cool if you put a slow slider here instead
00:51:982 (2) - ctrl+G feels better and fits the wub wub better imo
01:01:658 - You should simplify the beat here http://puu.sh/bZJ9T/cd7441d94c.jpg
01:10:129 (2) - this should be starting at 01:10:040 - instead
01:57:862 (3) - NC
02:10:764 - I really think this speeding up section should be replaced with circles instead of sliders. This means the player can actually feel the music speeding up and have to adjust their timing accordingly which I think is a really nice touch
02:44:433 (2) - NC

Most stuff from here is pretty good, but there are a few obvious blanketable things that look off because they're not perfectly blanketed
Good luck~

pkk wrote:

Ten Sho Sho Ten Sho

66 * 11 = 666

squigly confirmed as feg jk rank this pls

pkk wrote:

Ten Sho Sho Ten Sho

Ten Ten
Two Tens
2 * 10 = 20

Ten Sho
Sho has three letters in it
Ten Sho has six letters in it
3 * 20 + 6 = 66

Ten Sho
Ten + Sho
Ten + 1
10 + 1 = 11

66 * 11 = 666

squigly confirmed as feg jk rank this pls

Kinshara wrote:

pkk wrote:

Ten Sho Sho Ten Sho

Ten Ten
Two Tens
2 * 10 = 20

Ten Sho
Sho has three letters in it
Ten Sho has six letters in it
3 * 20 + 6 = 66

Ten Sho
Ten + Sho
Ten + 1
10 + 1 = 11

66 * 11 = 666

squigly confirmed as feg jk rank this pls

Sadly 66*11 does not equal 666 lol. It equals 726.

pkk wrote:

Ten Sho Sho Ten Sho

Ten Ten
Two Tens
2 * 10 = 20

Ten Sho
Sho has three letters in it
Ten Sho has six letters in it
3 * 20 + 6 = 66

Ten Sho
Sho has three letters in it
3 * 20 = 60

Ten
10 + 1 = 10


60* 10 + 66 = 666

pkk confirmed sux at math jk rank this pls

Kibbleru wrote:

pkk wrote:

Ten Sho Sho Ten Sho

Ten Ten
Two Tens
2 * 10 = 20

Ten Sho
Sho has three letters in it
Ten Sho has six letters in it
3 * 20 + 6 = 66

Ten Sho
Sho has three letters in it
3 * 20 = 60

Ten
10 + 1 = 10


60* 10 + 66 = 666

pkk confirmed sux at math jk rank this pls

leme fix this for u

Kibbleru wrote:

did an irc mod but i lost the logs cuz my computer was made by flying pigs

fixed a timing point etc,

pkk wrote:

66 * 11 = 666

Gaia wrote:

Ten Sho Sho Ten Sho
2 Tens 3 Sho's
2*10*3 = 60

5 letters but 2 different words
60 + 5*2 = 70

You're fgt #1

70 - 1 = 69

69 is the zodiac sign for cancer, this map gave 5 people cancer . you also need 2 people for a 69
69*2*5 = 690

There are 15 people in Strawberry mousse but 2 are fgts
690 + 15(-2) = 660

there are 3 letters in pkk and this is the 2nd satan post here

660 + 3*2 = 666

squigly confirmed fgt jk where thes the rank

Stefan wrote:

keheheheheqwer


SUP W/ THESE RED LINES YO


[Donphin Inner Oni]
00:05:629 (6,12) - They feels quite overmapped and sounds/plays like fillers, please consider to remove them. Removed 12. I can hear the music box tune on 6 so I'm not removing it.
00:31:393 (156,157,158,159,160,161,162,163,164) - That doesn't fit to the music anyhow. I already have personal reluctance to 00:29:805 (145,146,147,148,149,150,151,152,153,154,155) but the focus is on the background music which barely - but still - to hear so I leave this. But after 00:31:393 that really doesn't fit and sounds overmapped. Please do only keep the notes fitting to the beats of the song. I can hear the synthesizer just fine, I don't get your point? No change.
01:21:572 (525) - That note needs a fix since it looks badly increased in its velocity. A green line with 0.97 ~ 0.98x SV (quite hard to say which one is better but I tend to 0.97x) will fix this. ok (although i didnt mind it too much)
01:40:544 (672) - This is 1/3. Please move it to 01:40:498. eh, ok.
01:43:226 (694) - I find a k here really really good. How do you think? bad flow with the pattern in place, no.
01:47:498 (730,732) - I guess swapping would be more that what you actually want to map here since there is nothing really high on 01:47:498 while 01:47:635 fits better for this. The current pattern has the best flow for it though, changing it would make it awkward imo.
01:48:771 (743) - k for the hard beat ok
01:49:953 (751) - k since the sound is similar to 01:49:589 (747,748,749). ok
02:00:680 (832) - also k here, for similar reason like 01:43:226 (694). again no.
02:29:073 (966,967) - Consider removing them to have a better emphasis to the music. I don't understand how this would emphasize the music more. No
02:42:315 (1078,1079) - They sounds pretty awkward as d in that style how you've mapped the streams and what are you following. do them as k instead. changing these to kats would make this whole pattern a dozen times more dull and uninteresting, leaving this as is for more intriguing rhythm.
02:44:668 (1101) - What does this note actually follows? It plays not that good at all. removed it, though it followed the synthesizer.
03:06:315 (1281,1282,1283,1284,1285,1286) - Would personally perfer to map this as kkddkkdd to fit with the vocals. vocals be a shit \o/ (i dont do vocal mapping)
03:14:382 - Add a green line with 0.97x SV that 03:14:382 (1324) doesn't randomly has a higher spacing to 03:14:293 (1323). ok
03:17:169 - ^ with 0.98x this time. that makes this whole stream look cramped and horrid. nty
03:48:046 (1610) - k here? again no
03:57:851 (1667) - There is no need to hold this note as the only with d on that sound. this is a d to transition into following the music box melody tyvm.
04:58:659 (71,72,73) - I honestly don't feel anything fitting here which would represent these notes here. They should be removed. nothing except the very obvious snare roll? no change.
05:07:136 (143,144) - How about making one of them as d? Either (143) or (144) should be d but not both together, else it kinda sounds bad again. lol this would imply me following the vocals, which i am not. the 1/3 kats are following the more vague sound in the background!
05:11:499 (189,190) - ^ no again.
05:13:181 (211) - This is 1/3. Please move it to 05:13:227. oops x2
05:17:545 (254) - ^ to 05:17:590. oops x3
05:30:424 (379) - that sounds really spamy, please remove this note to make this Stream anyhow enjoyable to play. what do you mean "make it enjoyable to play" this stream is the shit yo. Honestly though I personally think this stream is completely fine, it follows the music the same way I have previously, the only difference is that its extended to tie all of the sounds together.


rip my ears

Well, to be honest sometimes I've got the feeling that the pattern, especially the (very) long Streams followed weird or completely new things which makes it look quite inconsistent. That actually isn't an issue but I think a little consistency - which is already there some parts - wouldn't really hurt that much. Besides of that what I've noticed the green lines for the SV increase/decrease should be more consistent. And the last point are wrong placed beats. I've named some but I feel I forgot some to name, however this never should be in a map to map on the wrong beat. the map is consistent in the sense that each similar part of the music is mapped the same way except for the very end where I spruced it up more to make it feel more rewarding and to give it more of a climax.

Dolphin wrote:

are we there yet

Stefan wrote:

Rip my ears...

1. What do you think about using the original BG of the song? in my opinion would be cool somehow, just in case that you wanna use it here the link, it's already resized so don't worry about that.
2. You should remove Kikuo from tags because it's already in the artist.
3. Respect your title I guess it should be てんしょう しょうてんしょう (Extended mix) because the official album has it like this way.
   
   
   Cover (Track 11)

   
   
   Source: きくおミク3
4. Every difficulty has a inconsistency in timing sections so be carefully about that because it is unrankable.

1. 00:04:394 (1) - What do you think about using a finish on the head of the slider? it sounds nice imo.
2. 00:05:452 (3) - This is kinda overmapped since there isn't a noticeable sound so I would recommend removing this slider and place a simple note.
3. 00:18:335 (6) - Same as above.
4. 00:20:452 (1) - This new combo is kinda short compared to the previous one so would be ideal consider removing it from here.
5. 00:58:923 (1,1) - ^
6. 00:38:011 (9) - I guess this is a weird rhythm to map as well but still I can hear that this slider should be end at 00:38:157 - (You have to use a manual snapping for this) but I'm a very nice person so I've made this for you...
   

   [HitObjects]
   384,192,38011,2,0,L|376:260,1,58

7. 00:38:276 (1,2,3) - To be honest it doesn't flow or fits quite right, it's a bit weird to play so I would say that do something like this.
8. 00:40:304 - You should add something here for consistency with the previous part that has the same rhythm.
9. 00:40:746 (4) - Please don't use 1/4 when the music is in 1/2 beats cause this can be kinda random sometimes tbh.
10. 00:41:099 (1) - Same as bove.
11. 00:47:629 (1) - ^
12. 00:41:805 (3) - should be end at 00:42:157 - it's better imo.
13. 01:00:158 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Maybe it's just me but from my perspective would be better to replace it by a few sliders that have multiple repetitions since as it is now could be quite difficult to hit.
14. 01:29:498 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Yeah it's nice but is a bit confusing and uncomfortable to play since the shape of the stream is a bit difficult to follow, so my recommendation would be to make another type of shape here.
15. 03:16:889 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - ^
16. 02:04:953 (2) - Wow... this is quite difficult to read and in sometimes is kinda weird so I feel that 1/8 is enough at this part.
17. 02:52:903 (6,7,2,3,5) - ^ 03:34:626 (1) - ^
18. 02:10:253 (8,9,10) - Spacing here is confusing, what about to replace it by three circles?
19. 04:02:926 (1) - Finish instead whistle?
20. 05:04:864 (1,1) - I love it ♥
21. 01:55:135 (6) - the object's end is offscreen so do something different here to avoid this problem.
22. 06:02:177 (1,1) - Urankable because it doesn't have a enough time after one spinner, would be better end the spinner here 06:04:923 - imo.

Gero wrote:

Placeholder...

brb modding ~

EDIT:

Stefan wrote:

Rip my ears...

General

1. What do you think about using the original BG of the song? in my opinion would be cool somehow, just in case that you wanna use it here the link, it's already resized so don't worry about that.
2. You should remove Kikuo from tags because it's already in the artist.
3. Respect your title I guess it should be てんしょう しょうてんしょう (Extended mix) because the official album has it like this way.
   
   
   Cover (Track 11)

   
   
   Source: きくおミク3
4. Every difficulty has a inconsistency in timing sections so be carefully about that because it is unrankable.

please show me where btw D:

Ascension Reincarnation

There is has only 511 ms of audio lead-in, so would be ideal if you consider to add 1500 ms or something.

1. 00:04:394 (1) - What do you think about using a finish on the head of the slider? it sounds nice imo. it does c:
2. 00:05:452 (3) - This is kinda overmapped since there isn't a noticeable sound so I would recommend removing this slider and place a simple note. there is a sound there, in fact i under mapped that section
3. 00:18:335 (6) - Same as above. those little touches are for the whatever sound is made i cant remember the name, its a really quick noise
4. 00:20:452 (1) - This new combo is kinda short compared to the previous one so would be ideal consider removing it from here. i did combos like this because of the SV changes
5. 00:58:923 (1,1) - ^
6. 00:38:011 (9) - I guess this is a weird rhythm to map as well but still I can hear that this slider should be end at 00:38:157 - (You have to use a manual snapping for this) but I'm a very nice person so I've made this for you... in all honesty, i sat down with a bat, i forgot who it was forgive me, what we found was that what i have put is the best, and i did compare to yours rest assured, but there are like 2 noises here and i chose the one that went along with the previous as opposed to the echo, its a nearly impossible part to map because its just nonsense.
   

   [HitObjects][/color]
   384,192,38011,2,0,L|376:260,1,58

7. 00:38:276 (1,2,3) - To be honest it doesn't flow or fits quite right, it's a bit weird to play so I would say that do something like this. [color=#BF00FF]i tried to not do any repeating sliders in here if necessary because in my opinion that would kinda ruin the feel i was attempting to go for, though i do see why you suggested it c:
8. 00:40:304 - You should add something here for consistency with the previous part that has the same rhythm. changed to a short slider same position, it actualyl kinda gives it a nifty effect because the next hit is a big snare
9. 00:40:746 (4) - Please don't use 1/4 when the music is in 1/2 beats cause this can be kinda random sometimes tbh. i dont know quite what you mean, but the lead in to another slider gives enough clues as to when to hit the next note, it shouldnt have to be prepared automatically for a player to assume something if thats what you mean
10. 00:41:099 (1) - Same as bove.
11. 00:47:629 (1) - ^
12. 00:41:805 (3) - should be end at 00:42:157 - it's better imo. i do know why you would do that but i didnt follow the drum, it would be misleading if i did and would sound kinda awkward to me
13. 01:00:158 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Maybe it's just me but from my perspective would be better to replace it by a few sliders that have multiple repetitions since as it is now could be quite difficult to hit. if it were anything but this song and map in general i probably would, but it fits SO well that there is no way i can remove the 1/6 streams, they arent even that hard to hit tbh, just gotta have that PACE c;
14. 01:29:498 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Yeah it's nice but is a bit confusing and uncomfortable to play since the shape of the stream is a bit difficult to follow, so my recommendation would be to make another type of shape here. my trademark for the map ;_; its rather fun and brings a nice challenge from the nice slow increase in bpm, its a high point in the map
15. 03:16:889 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - ^
16. 02:04:953 (2) - Wow... this is quite difficult to read and in sometimes is kinda weird so I feel that 1/8 is enough at this part. i did change 1/8 for a few other sliders in regards to this, i do not think the others are applicable for such changes right? S:
17. 02:52:903 (6,7,2,3,5) - ^ 03:34:626 (1) - ^
18. 02:10:253 (8,9,10) - Spacing here is confusing, what about to replace it by three circles? i made sure it was perfectly readable, and basically everyone passes this part easily and well done so i dont think a change is necessary, the slider is also a consistency to the sound repeated
19. 04:02:926 (1) - Finish instead whistle? i did c:
20. 05:04:864 (1,1) - I love it ♥ \:D/
21. 01:55:135 (6) - the object's end is offscreen so do something different here to avoid this problem. you know i remember it being asked about by others because it does appear to be offscreen but i also looked myself and it was just onscreen when in that box view so im not quite sure about that, regardless i mulled over ideas to change it and i dont want to really do it because i would have to change a bit of the flow and might cause it to look messy.
22. 06:02:177 (1,1) - Urankable because it doesn't have a enough time after one spinner, would be better end the spinner here 06:04:923 - imo. im not quite sure about this either, not a single bat has said anything about it but you might be right, im still going to ask about it because its a nice little finisher, even if all i have to do is change the spinner length a bit, it does make the feel a lot more different

Best of luck ~

Gero wrote:

Every difficulty has a inconsistency in timing sections so be carefully about that because it is unrankable.

DakeDekaane wrote:

Probably going to mod this today before Squigly comes and appear next to my bed at night.

First offset should be on 00:00:158 - woah thats weird. fixed it.
And I think the metronome resets on 05:01:046 - , not in 05:05:409 - didn't change this on my end so that it wouldnt go against the stupid ranking criteria rule about different timing points etc. I'll fix it. Squigly needs to see this.

00:36:864 (174,175,176,177,178,179,180) - This stream feels a bit weird as the rest of the wubs aren't mapped, so it gives a feeling of emptyness there. Also, 00:37:041 (177) - would fit better as a don imo. i think i fixed it http://puu.sh/cKg7u/660a28af22.png
01:29:294 (570,572) - I think these notes are a bit intrusive, as the stream in the music itself begins in 01:29:498 (573), so it'd be better to remove them, and making 01:29:362 (571) - a don. omg already said no to this in prior mods: turn up that volume, you can hear the snare roll!!
01:30:862 - A note is missing here, preferrably a kat. ok
01:31:544 - ^ made this a don for better flow
02:22:258 (948,949,950,951,952,953,954) - I don't think these notes deserve big notes, as they're really weak sounds. whaaat, the trumpet is all HUM HUMM HUMM imo. it fits.
02:28:807 (962,968) - Probably remove these two to accentuate vocals better. vocals?
02:36:050 (1016,1017,1018,1020,1022) - Something similar, I think the stream here is overdone, and there's no wub to justify it, actually, the wub starts in 02:36:668 - eh, i can accept this.
03:13:648 (1317,1318) - Shouldn't this be d k? This breaks a bit the flow you've been doing here. im following the high pitched percussion sound and offers neat variety.
03:16:959 (1339,1341) - Remove these notes, the actual stream begins in 03:17:169 - , being earlier just doesn't fit the song nicely. no.
05:26:012 (334) - Probably remove this note to separate the vocal phrases? ...vocals?
05:31:482 (391,392,393) - ^ hahahaha

wubs song are indeed hard to map properly, yet you did a good job here, but I feel some parts are a bit overmapped, like:
00:55:217 (325,326,327,328,329,330,331,332,333,334,335,336,337,338,339,340,341,342,343,344,345,346,347,348,349) - , this part could have 00:55:305 (326,328,334,342) - removed to let the streams begin along with the more noticeable wubs, making more sense. removed like 2 notes but not much is changed sorry i didnt like the idea of removing so many notes because the map feels so naked if i do that.
Similar with 00:58:658 (359) - in the corresponding stream. this stream makes complete sense imo.
01:35:021 (623,625) - ^Similar. nty i like the flow i got going already
01:47:430 (729,731) - ^ this one is especially good come on D:
02:42:050 (1073,1074,1075) - ^ removed a few here.
03:35:513 (1509,1510,1511) - ^ same as the other fast wub stream
03:57:851 (1665) - I think this should be a kat to keep consistency with 03:55:429 (1662,1663) - and similar notes. no, like i already said in a prior mod, i started with the snare (the only audible sound to map) and faded it into the music box melody to offer variety and not kat spam.
05:23:277 - 05:33:159 - The two big streams here should be cutted somewhere, the song has calmed down a bit so it's a bit contradictory the map getting harder here. the song is still very noisy and wubby and still keeps up a decent pace and since its like the very end of the song it works a really great and rewarding climax.

Probably I'm missing some more streams, but these were the ones who I think are somehow killing the song, having a few breaks would help to emphasize and differentiate better on what are you following, but I think you already know this

That'd be all I have to say about the diff.

VINXIS wrote:

in tags add "drumstep" and "gllitch hop"
it's not just dubstep rip

no kd (or kd if you honestly think this is actually a mod lol)

here have 2 stars

1. Red - Unrankable issue, you must fixed
2. Purple - Highly recommended, consider to use it
3. Black - Suggestion, feel free to fixed or not
4. Gray - Personal preference

1. Uninherited timing points conflict between two diffs.
2. Ascension Reincarnation: 00:00:511 - Different Volumes between timing point and inherited point. Removed useless inherited point then make timing point 5% volume
3. 01:10:746 - same as above
4. Disabled widescreen support since you didn't have storyboard
5. overall volume can increase 20-30%, now is too quiet

1. 00:14:981 - 15% is way to low for me, it is nearly silence, the gasp to 60% is big too. plz increase the volume
2. 00:17:452 (2) - remove finish
3. 00:37:217 (7) - from 00:37:216 - to 00:37:392 - rhythm gives 1/6, but from 00:37:392 - to 00:37:569 - it is 1/4 so you should break this slider into an 1/6 one + 1/4 one
4. 01:00:511 (7) - same as above
5. 01:42:726 (4) - from 01:43:135 - more likes 1/3 (not exactly, maybe 1/3 + 1/2 start from 01:43:317 - works better)
6. 02:52:197 (3,4,5) - must be end at 1/6
7. 03:30:399 (2) - from 03:30:808 - is 1/4
8. 03:47:692 (5) - before 03:47:958 - is 1/6 (i'm quite unsure about this)
9. 05:37:041 (1,2) - must be end at 1/6
10. 06:02:177 (1) - spinner end too closed to note

OniJAM wrote:

1. Red - Unrankable issue, you must fixed
2. Purple - Highly recommended, consider to use it
3. Black - Suggestion, feel free to fixed or not
4. Gray - Personal preference

[General]

1. Uninherited timing points conflict between two diffs.
2. Ascension Reincarnation: 00:00:511 - Different Volumes between timing point and inherited point. Removed useless inherited point then make timing point 5% volume
3. 01:10:746 - same as above
4. Disabled widescreen support since you didn't have storyboard
5. overall volume can increase 20-30%, now is too quiet this is one of the things i didnt change but might because i think it's fine.

[ Ascension Reincarnation]

1. 00:14:981 - 15% is way to low for me, it is nearly silence, the gasp to 60% is big too. plz increase the volume i did this to accent the music that follows after, i rather like the effect, if it ever becomes a real problem i could change but im keeping it for now. c:
2. 00:17:452 (2) - remove finish
3. 00:37:217 (7) - from 00:37:216 - to 00:37:392 - rhythm gives 1/6, but from 00:37:392 - to 00:37:569 - it is 1/4 so you should break this slider into an 1/6 one + 1/4 one keeping the way it is, i do believe it is as good as it is going to get
4. 01:00:511 (7) - same as above its quite a different motion in the song and i think the notes into the slider work just fine.
5. 01:42:726 (4) - from 01:43:135 - more likes 1/3 (not exactly, maybe 1/3 + 1/2 start from 01:43:317 - works better) i think it is best to keep it as is
6. 02:52:197 (3,4,5) - must be end at 1/6
7. 03:30:399 (2) - from 03:30:808 - is 1/4 i just made the whole thing 1/4 for ease
8. 03:47:692 (5) - before 03:47:958 - is 1/6 (i'm quite unsure about this) made it 1/3
9. 05:37:041 (1,2) - must be end at 1/6
10. 06:02:177 (1) - spinner end too closed to note

ive been wondering about this, and no one ever really cared except 1 bat, others others have said its a neat way to end it, so ill look further into it, i want it to stay ;w;

Hitsounds should be checked, I'm lazy to point out all of them, sorry. Just unranked issues' check. And since Dolphin didn't reply to neonat's mods, I think I don't want to mod at present, you can call me again if taiko were fixed. Good luck!

00:14:982 (62) - having this as k would be better, the pitch of the cello is higher here, as compared to the vocals starting low I don't think it's as right as you think it is; the pitches are both low.
00:53:188 (315) - remove this note, this gives more impact to the very strong beat at 00:53:099 (314) The wubbing continues here, hence why the stream doesn't cut.
01:43:680 (706) - why is this d when the change in only at 01:43:862 (708) - ? Doubtful about that. Won't change for the time being. The best thing to me is that he wanted to have alternating colors per beat and separating the kick to the rest.
02:01:135 (844) - ^ Same goes here.
02:18:371 (938,939,940) - strings' pitch goes up and then down once again, use dkd instead? The two kats here are to represent a sidestickish sound followed by a hihat.
02:33:374 (1002,1008) - I don't know if there are any others before or after these ones, but I'm pretty sure they should be snapped to 1/4 Ummm... 1008 is on a faint sound. 1002 is on an even fainter sound. But they do have a base. I need to verify whether they're on 1/3 or 1/4, though.
03:03:491 (1259,1260) - both change to k to go with the pitch change in the music, or at least have 03:03:491 (1259) change for the rise in pitch, as after that the pitch steadily goes down 03:03:668 (1260,1261) I think here the thought process is... not the pitch but the wubbing. In that case, 1259 and 1261 would get katted.

lolcubes wrote:

[STDandard]

I see 1/12 snap. I guarantee something is wrongly snapped. Just double check everything. :p

00:39:511 (4,5) - I'd refrain from using such patterns, at least in the beginning. It's slightly tricky to hit cause of the rhythm change. in a sense that was the idea, the beginning is a small transition into the harder stuff in the map, no sense in keeping totally easy i would think
00:53:569 (5) - Wrong snap. Should be on 1/6 i agree that it could end on 1/6 but for the sake of it being best to keep it on 1/4 ill keep it, because it also isnt entirely wrong with a 1/4 snap for the end.
00:57:158 (2) - I'd just remove and extend (1) to this timeline. Don't try to follow everything cause things get messy, less is more. i think this part isnt really messy and plays and looks fine.
00:58:746 (2,1,1,2) - While these play ok cause they are sliders, they totally make you unable to read the rhythm that's coming. Shouldn't mix 1/6 and 1/4 like this (1/4 comes after these). that is what the map is about, that section is something that is upheld, it isnt up to me to dumb down the map for the player, it can be read and played fine, just gotta work for it
01:09:335 (1,2) - Regardless of the background sounds here, the rhythm would suggest to make the first slider shorter and 2nd start on a white tick. actually good catch, there was a section later on where i made the 2nd slider later to better match what was more intense, so i made the 2nd slider on the red tick
01:29:498 (5) - New combo. ye ;w;
01:34:135 (2) - Cool or not, easy to play or not, this should be a circle, it sounds and play much better. Nothing on the end yeah sure i can do that, but i do hope you see why i did it to begin with ;u;
01:43:862 (2) - Why extend? Just shorten it by 1/6. That slider tick is dumb imo. i did it for you bb
01:48:248 (1) - Wrong snap. Should start on a 1/6 tick just before. Should also end it at 01:48:498. nice, i also made it a blanket since i apparently didnt blanket it lol
02:19:845 (1) - Combo consistency? Remove nc. i did it for the new sv, i rather think it should be ok yeah?
03:17:169 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - New combo on start and ewwwwww, make it playable for mouse pls. The pattern isn't that of a problem, it's the speed that makes it exceptionally difficult. A huge difficulty spike in the map. essentially this is meant to be a huge spike in difficulty, its a huge build up to the very peak of the map, iw ould very much like to keep this part as i always mention, i think it is a rather fun pattern to play ;v;
03:29:172 (1) - If you end it on a 1/6 tick just before, the rhythm will feel just right. i think it is fine this way.
03:35:172 (3) - ^ ^
03:36:808 (1) - Should make it longer so it snaps to 1/6 C:
03:38:400 (7) - Will stop pointing out these, while technically it doesn't matter much cause they are sliders, lets just be rhythmically correct and adjust the ending so it ends on 1/6? Check similar upcoming sliders too. id rather keep these types just 1/4, i dont use the 1/6 unless its for a specific pattern of play
03:45:834 (2,3,1,1) - ^ i fixed it up a bit
06:02:177 (1) - Should end it a bit earlier. Just so the circle is easier to notice. how about a 1/6 earlier ;wwww;

Overall, everything plays ok cause sliders, but many are wrongly snapped, that's the only technical error that really needs to be addressed and rechecked all the time. 1/12 makes it easier to resnap 1/6 and 1/4, but it's a lazy move and errors will arise.

[Donphin's Taiko Hi]
I like this. What I didn't like is some of the dddkkkd patterns which can be really hard to hit on higher bpm, but then again I'm noob.
Rhythmically, dddkkkd fits 1/6 rhythms much better than 1/4 (in most cases), so if you feel like you could change some, I'd be glad.
Rest is fine imo, on a quick look. (I didn't check for all of the snapping though, should be checked for sure).

Kamidachi wrote:

Many unfs. Can I give an unf instead of a star? :c