Hello!
Well, I gotta say i am disapointed, this song had potential to have an amazing map, but what i played, it just wasn't how it was supposed to be... Unfortunately, i have to say that you don't have enough skill as a mapper to pull this off, and here is why:
- The map style for this really isn't fitting for a dubstep song, even if it has slow inherited points and fast ones, the sliders themselves are the biggest problem: being round and circular. It needed some squared points or just overall having bends to fit the bassline.
- The spacing looked too simple for any Insane/Extra difficulty map, looked like a beginner map at first.
- Lots of patterns don't really follow the song that well, and just seem to be filler objects, like 02:52:197 (3,4,5) or 05:43:394 (1,2,1), i still dont get what those part were supposed to follow.
- Also there appears to be some overmapping, places like these 00:51:246 (6,7) or 01:03:511 (5) where it just adds more objects for no apparent reason (none other than making the map more difficult on purpose that is).
Lastly, it needed new combo colors, but probably an even better idea: a Storyboard. If made properly, the storyboard could be something like changing BG color to warn about sudden slider velocities or simply different bpm changes that can be too hard to read out. Or simply something more enterntaining than a static BG that didn't really fit the song :\
Well I'll just have to say this: If you really want to continue with this map, i suggest practicing alot more with pattern creativity on complicated songs, mostly dubstep, creating also lots of different sliders as experience, and most importantly, play more maps. Because if you can play this map correctly everytime, it's even easier to detect it's flaws and looking for better ways to improve it.
Sorry if I wasn't helpful at all, i tried ;_;