that was an awful mod, dont ever start off saying something like that ever again. if you cant see where i was going with any of this then i think you should question yourself because apparently everyone else can. though i have been trying to find a storyboard. i never overmap, everything you pointed out was completely wrong, just dont take a map like mine next time please. clearly its too much.I wasn't actually trying to mod it, I can't mod a map that doesn't play well at all. And if you think you can actuallly make something like a new style of map, then sorry to crush your dreams, but it doesn't look like you are any close to that. I would ofc respect your map if it at least plays well, but overall it's just boring to play and so uninspiring. And i am always being completely honest about this.
And you should really take notice of bad criticism, because negative feedback is still feedback and can still be used as a way of improvement.