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Hollow Wings

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Hollow Wings 2014-08-05T15:53:55+00:00

from Scorpiour's Modding Queue

Insane

00:56:163 (3) - nc, so as 01:51:163 (3) - etc. for read jumping pattern easier
01:08:038 (1) - note+2/3 repeathing slider+note? just my taste. same patterns after this as well
01:14:288 (1) - ctrl+g, 01:15:538 (1) - ,too...?
02:28:663 (3) - 2/3 slider+note

Hard

00:18:663 (3) - 2/3 slider+note, and 03:26:163 (3) - , etc.
00:28:975 (3) - move to 00:28:871, and maybe change this to slider or add slider after this. follow the vocal should be done here imo. or, u need to larger ds between 00:28:350 (2,3) - . otherwise players can hardly catch the rhythm here in a sudden
00:40:538 (1,2) - avoid overlap like this, thou stuff like 01:35:538 (1,2) - is fine to me
03:46:683 (3) - 337,250

Normal

00:33:975 (4,1) - perfect this blanket
03:34:288 (3,4) - ^
03:40:538 (1,2) - ^

star*2

pm me when u finished checking all ur mods

good luck

Koiyuki

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Topic Starter

Koiyuki 2014-08-06T00:59:01+00:00

HW

Hollow Wings wrote:
from Scorpiour's Modding Queue

Insane
00:56:163 (3) - nc, so as 01:51:163 (3) - etc. for read jumping pattern easier nope, that's fine imo
01:08:038 (1) - note+2/3 repeathing slider+note? just my taste. same patterns after this as well hmm, nope
01:14:288 (1) - ctrl+g, 01:15:538 (1) - ,too...? nope
02:28:663 (3) - 2/3 slider+note ok changed
Hard
00:18:663 (3) - 2/3 slider+note, and 03:26:163 (3) - , etc. k
00:28:975 (3) - move to 00:28:871, and maybe change this to slider or add slider after this. follow the vocal should be done here imo. or, u need to larger ds between 00:28:350 (2,3) - . otherwise players can hardly catch the rhythm here in a sudden nope, because the following are the same rhythm and it's not so hard to catch imo
00:40:538 (1,2) - avoid overlap like this, thou stuff like 01:35:538 (1,2) - is fine to me this is also fine to me :>
03:46:683 (3) - 337,250 k
Normal
00:33:975 (4,1) - perfect this blanket
03:34:288 (3,4) - ^
03:40:538 (1,2) - ^ all fixed
star*2

pm me when u finished checking all ur mods

good luck

thanks for modding

akless

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akless 2014-08-10T15:42:14+00:00

看到上面的评论瞬间觉得自己就是个渣......感谢作者做的图

ts8zs

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Joined May 2011

ts8zs 2014-08-12T10:56:22+00:00

hey。
5544?
[Insane]
00:50:225 (5) - 408,128
00:56:371 (4) - 384,180 感觉向上过头了
01:21:788 (1) - 108,328?
01:51:371 (4) - 248,296
01:55:433 (4) - 216,324 虽然是微小的调整
02:32:413 (3,4) - 感觉这两个之间间距小了……02:32:621 (4) - 移到244,240?稍微好一些但不是很多……而且对后面的flow反而降低了些……不过功大于过这种感觉……你看着办
03:01:683 (4) - 40,312
03:12:725 (6,7,1) - lol 人性呢
03:33:663 (3) - 248,112
mtb你个御姐控lol
[Hard]
00:56:163 (2,3) - 放一起吧……
01:51:163 (2,3) - lol
[Normal]
没看出啥毛病各种1/1摸个头啊……笑

Scorpiour

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Scorpiour 2014-08-12T14:48:50+00:00

check out the mods you've not replied and poke me to mod it.

pw384

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Joined January 2012

pw384 2014-08-12T14:53:17+00:00

恭喜rank

sheela

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Joined October 2011

sheela 2014-08-12T14:54:33+00:00

Oh. I may mod it later.

Koiyuki

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Topic Starter

Koiyuki 2014-08-12T15:04:44+00:00

ts8zs wrote:
hey。
5544?
[Insane]
00:50:225 (5) - 408,128 做了点小调整
00:56:371 (4) - 384,180 感觉向上过头了
01:21:788 (1) - 108,328?
01:51:371 (4) - 248,296 这个也稍微动了下
01:55:433 (4) - 216,324 虽然是微小的调整
02:32:413 (3,4) - 感觉这两个之间间距小了……02:32:621 (4) - 移到244,240?稍微好一些但不是很多……而且对后面的flow反而降低了些……不过功大于过这种感觉……你看着办这个我觉得问题不大
03:01:683 (4) - 40,312
03:12:725 (6,7,1) - lol 人性呢其实不难
03:33:663 (3) - 248,112
mtb你个御姐控lol lol
[Hard]
00:56:163 (2,3) - 放一起吧……
01:51:163 (2,3) - lol
[Normal]
没看出啥毛病各种1/1摸个头啊……笑

其他没回复的都是没改，因为感觉差不多其实，我1/3摆的都是0.8x，所以就keep啦
thanks for modding

Scorpiour

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Scorpiour 2014-08-13T12:17:37+00:00

Hi there~~ mod from HW's recommendation

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions

[General]

With an internal discussion, we're sure that you must add a 18+ Warning Label in your creator's word
Songs/Maps with mature lyrics/themes must be marked with a label such as "18+" in the map's thread. This game is for all ages, and so a warning is needed for younger audiences. There is currently no way to distinguish this outside of the map's thread, but this may change in the future.

[Insane]

00:14:288 (1,2,3) - i suppose whistles could be applied to these notes.
00:17:933 - perhaps you may add a note here for consistent beat
00:21:683 - ^
00:41:163 (3) - unnecessary clap i think
00:48:038 (1,2,3) - about the beat here... it's not bad, just another way you may try:
01:08:038 (1) - two sliders maybe better?
01:14:288 (1,2,1,2,1) - the beat around here is heard boring a little
01:18:038 - this part could be started from here
01:51:163 (3,4) - i'd like to apply a ctrl+g here
02:08:975 (2,1,2,1,2,1) - also boring beat o_o
02:48:060 - i may not choose to place a break here
03:29:913 (3) - ctrl+g?

[Hard]

00:14:288 (1,2,3) - Same as Insane, whistle is suggested

[Normal]

00:14:288 (3,4,5) - same

Not bad, call me back to recheck when you're ready

Koiyuki

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Topic Starter

Koiyuki 2014-08-13T14:06:44+00:00

Scorpiour wrote:
Hi there~~ mod from HW's recommendation

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions

[General]
With an internal discussion, we're sure that you must add a 18+ Warning Label in your creator's word
Songs/Maps with mature lyrics/themes must be marked with a label such as "18+" in the map's thread. This game is for all ages, and so a warning is needed for younger audiences. There is currently no way to distinguish this outside of the map's thread, but this may change in the future.
ok added
[Insane]
00:14:288 (1,2,3) - i suppose whistles could be applied to these notes. added
00:17:933 - perhaps you may add a note here for consistent beat
00:21:683 - ^ 这里不太想改pattern，00:17:933 - 前面没加是想和00:15:538 (1) - 有个照应，打起来我觉得更有节奏感，这里也是一样
00:41:163 (3) - unnecessary clap i think removed
00:48:038 (1,2,3) - about the beat here... it's not bad, just another way you may try: 都要改的话工程有点大，后面也有一段，想想我还是善良点吧:3，所以不改啦
01:08:038 (1) - two sliders maybe better? maybe better, 不过将善良进行到底，不改了
01:14:288 (1,2,1,2,1) - the beat around here is heard boring a little 因为没梗了QAQ
01:18:038 - this part could be started from here I follow the beat here so start at 01:18:663 (1) -
01:51:163 (3,4) - i'd like to apply a ctrl+g here 我感觉现在这样的flow比较好
02:08:975 (2,1,2,1,2,1) - also boring beat o_o QAQ mentioned above
02:48:060 - i may not choose to place a break here imo the break here is fine
03:29:913 (3) - ctrl+g? i keep it
[Hard]
00:14:288 (1,2,3) - Same as Insane, whistle is suggested added
[Normal]
00:14:288 (3,4,5) - same same
Not bad, call me back to recheck when you're ready

Scorpiour

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Joined May 2011

Scorpiour 2014-08-13T14:15:54+00:00

Bubbled~~!!

pw384

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pw384 2014-08-13T14:17:35+00:00

瞎了

ts8zs

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ts8zs 2014-08-13T14:51:55+00:00

提前占位庆祝:D
稍微耽误了一下你的rank进程呢,sry XD

Koiyuki

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Koiyuki 2014-08-13T14:58:21+00:00

Scorpiour wrote:
Bubbled~~!!

Thanks sco~

ts8zs wrote:
提前占位庆祝:D
稍微耽误了一下你的rank进程呢,sry XD

没事，你也加油撒

sheela

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Joined October 2011

sheela 2014-08-13T16:26:40+00:00

Go go go~

Atrue

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Atrue 2014-08-21T08:45:31+00:00

这么快… 哭哭… 要是不AFK我也想做的说… ;w;

Fycho

Global Moderator

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Joined August 2012

Fycho 2014-08-28T10:02:44+00:00

[Mod Info]

Black: Suggestions
Bold: Important things. You should consider
Red: Unrankable issues. You Must Fix

[General]

Fine

[Insane]

AR8.7 fits the difficulty better, some patterns in ar8.5 look messy.
00:27:413 (3) -–remove clap at sliderend, it’s the kick drum in music not snare drum, so you don’t need to add it. For the same reason, 00:30:225 -00:32:725 -00:35:225 -
00:41:163 (3) –missing clap, it’s the same drum as 00:19:913 -, also add clap at 00:41:475 (5) – and 00:41:579 (6)-sliderend which are the same.
01:18:663 (1,2) –soft custom7’s hitnormal fits here better. 02:13:663 (1,2) -
01:15:538 (1,2) –both of them ctrl+g will make the flow more natural from01:14:288 (1,2) -
01:43:350 (2) –missing clap
01:36:475 (5) –and 01:36:579 (6) –sliderend add clap, same reason
02:16:371 (6,7,1) – make them in a line, just move 02:16:475 (7) –to(397,280)
02:36:788 –volume is a little small here, I sugget you change to50%, can’t hear the soft-whistle you added…
03:14:288 -03:15:538 –again, soft-custom7’s hitnormal fits better imo

[Hard]

00:24:392 (2) –remove clap from sliderend, it’s not snare drum
01:21:788 (1) –remove clap only keep finish, the clap souns a little weird here.
01:43:350 (2) –missing clap

[Normal]

00:14:288 (3,4,5,6) –stack is hard for such bpm’s lowest diff imo, I highly recommend you not stack them
00:25:538 (1,2) –rhythm is a bit odd here, maybe following music not the drum will be better, http://puu.sh/bbfku/95d1ea6fb2.jpg, in high diffs following drum is fine because rhythm is variety
. Also, your normal diff almost follow 1/1 drums which is really boring, so this may give more interest to it.
00:56:788 (1) –this is a little soon after the spinner, I recommend you move this to the center to let new players easy to catch (避免像小船那图那样被针对)
01:43:350 –missing clap!
02:56:788 (1,2) –why not add clap like03:21:788 (1,2) -

Call me back after you reply this.

Koiyuki

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Topic Starter

Koiyuki 2014-08-28T11:14:11+00:00

Fycho wrote:
[Insane]
01:18:663 (1,2) –soft custom7’s hitnormal fits here better. 02:13:663 (1,2) - imo sc1 is better here, i keep this
02:16:371 (6,7,1) – make them in a line, just move 02:16:475 (7) –to(397,280) i have made 02:15:538 (1,4,1) - in one line here...
03:14:288 -03:15:538 –again, soft-custom7’s hitnormal fits better imo same above

Call me back after you reply this.

Others all fixed
02:56:788 - here add clap in all diffs
thanks

Last edited by Koiyuki 2014-08-28T11:38:42+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Senritsu

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Senritsu 2014-08-28T11:16:28+00:00

add iris to tag, since this song is at her album.
~~and it's 96Neko not 96neko?~~
gl with rank! very enthusiastic to see more 96neko song at osu! /ovo/

Koiyuki

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Koiyuki 2014-08-28T11:35:44+00:00

Thanks Senritsu!
add tag: アイリス iris
because the song is from this album.

Fycho

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Fycho 2014-08-28T14:02:53+00:00

Rechecked by irc, fixed some tiny things and hitsounds, 96neko is pretty nice<3

Ranked.