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96Neko - Yoshiwara Lament

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Koiyuki
Sellenite

Sellenite wrote:

第一次摸1/3
这个不错啊

[Insane]
  1. 00:41:267 (4) - 尾巴加clap然后00:41:475 (5) - 取消clap?换个节奏,不用听上去全是连打声,而且后面也有01:36:163 (3,4,5,6) - ,创创新? 好 听起来不错
  2. 01:21:475 (7) - 删去更能体现出01:21:371 (6) - 这个的音乐 考虑了下还是keep了
  3. 01:43:975 (4) - 尾巴再加上clap?造成一段促音,后面也是 比较喜欢目前这样 感觉有节奏感
  4. 03:22:308 (4,5) - 这两个ctrl+g吧,不用特意来回flow,统一方向就挺好了
[Hard]
  1. 03:13:038 (1) - 小跳一下?172,244
  2. 03:41:163 (3,1) - 交换NC?按现在对称的NC法和曲子的段落应该是交换NC比较好 nope
[Normal]
  1. nothing to say

xLoupGarou

xLoupGarou wrote:

From . . Miramono's Modding Team


[ Normal]
00:44:913 (2) - How about tilting the slider like 20 or 30°? for instance . . make another change



01:13:038 (3) - Suggestion : I dont like this,...



02:08:038 (3) - Another Suggestion : ^



02:36:788 (1) - And another suggestion XD : ^



03:28:038 (1) - How about curving it like this 03:27:413 (4) keep

[ Hard]
00:35:538 (1) - Curve your silder on is part

03:18:038 (3) - Apply NC ok


Very Nice Map, I like it . Have a Star and Good Luck! :)

thanks for modding~
Baihe House
这游戏好难玩,打你的insane手指都跳舞了,acc不上90%~ ;w;!!!

[Normal]
  1. 用01:41:788 (1) -包住01:43:038 (2) - 是不是美观一点?0.0
  2. 没唱的部分可以适当blank把
[Hard]
  1. 好像没有转圈也 0.0 是故意的吗
[Insane]
  1. 也是没有转圈w
  2. 00:25:121 (7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4) - 组合起来感觉不是很美观,不过有可玩性,可以考虑00:25:538 (1,2,3,4) - 这4个note叠在一起。
  3. 03:12:413 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - 为什么这么叼,这种梗都想到了;w;

insane从视觉方面还是觉得乱,不过呢可能主要是丰富可玩性把w 善用距离的变化这方面做的不错~
kamisamaaa
M4M还债
[general]
其实感觉ar都偏高。虽然BPM有192 但是是三分拍 其实相当于144BPM。所以insane ar8-8.5 hard ar7左右比较合适吧 (我才不会说是因为ar8.8我DT不了的原因)
[insane]
00:06:371 (4) - 这个我怎么总是感觉慢了一点 有点违和 但是放慢了听节奏有没错 错觉?
00:25:121 (7,8,9,10) - 这四个音两个一组不太一样 这么放成一排不太好 不如前两个组成2连和前面那个做成一个梗 然后后面两个note换成滑条 这样能体现出音乐差别 而且和后面那几个anti-jump也能更好区分一些
00:36:163 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 直接用更大的间距啊 最好是note略微分离不要有遮挡那种距离! 感觉在这里超级合适 要不然这里这么重的一串 和前面你那些2连区分不开啊 而且也没特色 像玲爷一样那种大间距才是真的爽~(我说的是这种
00:45:433 (3,1,2) - 虽然明白你的想法 但是觉得好难看 顺便 后面呢写也建议和上面一样的大间距。。。像maware的那种感觉?
01:20:746 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这里感觉没啥值得距离渐增的地方。。
03:12:725 (6,7,1) - 略蠢。
03:21:996 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 你这个渐增怎么和前面不一样 前面是0.8x 1.0x 1.2x 你这里变成0.65x 0.8x 0.95x了
别的也没啥说的了 就是感觉音效很带感但是图没那么带感。其实还好啦
Irie Miyuki
把tag里的vocaloid换成utau吧 原曲就是重音的所以和v家没关系 no kd for this post
Topic Starter
Koiyuki
冰冻黄瓜

kamisamaaa wrote:

M4M还债
[general]
其实感觉ar都偏高。虽然BPM有192 但是是三分拍 其实相当于144BPM。所以insane ar8-8.5 hard ar7左右比较合适吧 (我才不会说是因为ar8.8我DT不了的原因) 妥,改8.5了
[insane]
00:06:371 (4) - 这个我怎么总是感觉慢了一点 有点违和 但是放慢了听节奏有没错 错觉? 错觉
00:25:121 (7,8,9,10) - 这四个音两个一组不太一样 这么放成一排不太好 不如前两个组成2连和前面那个做成一个梗 然后后面两个note换成滑条 这样能体现出音乐差别 而且和后面那几个anti-jump也能更好区分一些 懒改
00:36:163 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 直接用更大的间距啊 最好是note略微分离不要有遮挡那种距离! 感觉在这里超级合适 要不然这里这么重的一串 和前面你那些2连区分不开啊 而且也没特色 像玲爷一样那种大间距才是真的爽~(我说的是这种这图我就想弄正常点,所以间距保持,稍微动了下位置
00:45:433 (3,1,2) - 虽然明白你的想法 但是觉得好难看 顺便 后面呢写也建议和上面一样的大间距。。。像maware的那种感觉?no
01:20:746 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这里感觉没啥值得距离渐增的地方。。是没啥,我喜欢
03:12:725 (6,7,1) - 略蠢。 huehue
03:21:996 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 你这个渐增怎么和前面不一样 前面是0.8x 1.0x 1.2x 你这里变成0.65x 0.8x 0.95x了 莫名,改回来了
别的也没啥说的了 就是感觉音效很带感但是图没那么带感。其实还好啦 :D

百合屋

Baihe House wrote:

这游戏好难玩,打你的insane手指都跳舞了,acc不上90%~ ;w;!!!~

[Normal]
  1. 用01:41:788 (1) -包住01:43:038 (2) - 是不是美观一点?0.0 两个一组的同类滑条,所以不改啦
  2. 没唱的部分可以适当blank把
[Hard]
  1. 好像没有转圈也 0.0 是故意的吗 为啥一定要有啊
[Insane]
  1. 也是没有转圈w
  2. 00:25:121 (7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4) - 组合起来感觉不是很美观,不过有可玩性,可以考虑00:25:538 (1,2,3,4) - 这4个note叠在一起。 叠起来会因为stack而变位置的,所以不改
  3. 03:12:413 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - 为什么这么叼,这种梗都想到了;w; ;w;

insane从视觉方面还是觉得乱,不过呢可能主要是丰富可玩性把w 善用距离的变化这方面做的不错~

Irie Miyuki wrote:

把tag里的vocaloid换成utau吧 原曲就是重音的所以和v家没关系 no kd for this post
ok, thanks

thanks for modding~
Hollow Wings
from Scorpiour's Modding Queue

Insane

  1. 00:56:163 (3) - nc, so as 01:51:163 (3) - etc. for read jumping pattern easier
  2. 01:08:038 (1) - note+2/3 repeathing slider+note? just my taste. same patterns after this as well
  3. 01:14:288 (1) - ctrl+g, 01:15:538 (1) - ,too...?
  4. 02:28:663 (3) - 2/3 slider+note

Hard

  1. 00:18:663 (3) - 2/3 slider+note, and 03:26:163 (3) - , etc.
  2. 00:28:975 (3) - move to 00:28:871, and maybe change this to slider or add slider after this. follow the vocal should be done here imo. or, u need to larger ds between 00:28:350 (2,3) - . otherwise players can hardly catch the rhythm here in a sudden
  3. 00:40:538 (1,2) - avoid overlap like this, thou stuff like 01:35:538 (1,2) - is fine to me
  4. 03:46:683 (3) - 337,250

Normal

  1. 00:33:975 (4,1) - perfect this blanket
  2. 03:34:288 (3,4) - ^
  3. 03:40:538 (1,2) - ^
star*2

pm me when u finished checking all ur mods

good luck
Topic Starter
Koiyuki
HW

Hollow Wings wrote:

from Scorpiour's Modding Queue

Insane

  1. 00:56:163 (3) - nc, so as 01:51:163 (3) - etc. for read jumping pattern easier nope, that's fine imo
  2. 01:08:038 (1) - note+2/3 repeathing slider+note? just my taste. same patterns after this as well hmm, nope
  3. 01:14:288 (1) - ctrl+g, 01:15:538 (1) - ,too...? nope
  4. 02:28:663 (3) - 2/3 slider+note ok changed

Hard

  1. 00:18:663 (3) - 2/3 slider+note, and 03:26:163 (3) - , etc. k
  2. 00:28:975 (3) - move to 00:28:871, and maybe change this to slider or add slider after this. follow the vocal should be done here imo. or, u need to larger ds between 00:28:350 (2,3) - . otherwise players can hardly catch the rhythm here in a sudden nope, because the following are the same rhythm and it's not so hard to catch imo
  3. 00:40:538 (1,2) - avoid overlap like this, thou stuff like 01:35:538 (1,2) - is fine to me this is also fine to me :>
  4. 03:46:683 (3) - 337,250 k

Normal

  1. 00:33:975 (4,1) - perfect this blanket
  2. 03:34:288 (3,4) - ^
  3. 03:40:538 (1,2) - ^ all fixed
star*2

pm me when u finished checking all ur mods

good luck

thanks for modding
akless
看到上面的评论瞬间觉得自己就是个渣......感谢作者做的图
ts8zs
hey。
5544?
[Insane]
00:50:225 (5) - 408,128
00:56:371 (4) - 384,180 感觉向上过头了
01:21:788 (1) - 108,328?
01:51:371 (4) - 248,296
01:55:433 (4) - 216,324 虽然是微小的调整
02:32:413 (3,4) - 感觉这两个之间间距小了……02:32:621 (4) - 移到244,240?稍微好一些但不是很多……而且对后面的flow反而降低了些……不过功大于过这种感觉……你看着办
03:01:683 (4) - 40,312
03:12:725 (6,7,1) - lol 人性呢
03:33:663 (3) - 248,112
mtb你个御姐控lol
[Hard]
00:56:163 (2,3) - 放一起吧……
01:51:163 (2,3) - lol
[Normal]
没看出啥毛病各种1/1摸个头啊……笑
Scorpiour
check out the mods you've not replied and poke me to mod it.
pw384
恭喜rank
sheela
Oh. I may mod it later.
Topic Starter
Koiyuki

ts8zs wrote:

hey。
5544?
[Insane]
00:50:225 (5) - 408,128 做了点小调整
00:56:371 (4) - 384,180 感觉向上过头了
01:21:788 (1) - 108,328?
01:51:371 (4) - 248,296 这个也稍微动了下
01:55:433 (4) - 216,324 虽然是微小的调整
02:32:413 (3,4) - 感觉这两个之间间距小了……02:32:621 (4) - 移到244,240?稍微好一些但不是很多……而且对后面的flow反而降低了些……不过功大于过这种感觉……你看着办 这个我觉得问题不大
03:01:683 (4) - 40,312
03:12:725 (6,7,1) - lol 人性呢 其实不难
03:33:663 (3) - 248,112
mtb你个御姐控lol lol
[Hard]
00:56:163 (2,3) - 放一起吧……
01:51:163 (2,3) - lol
[Normal]
没看出啥毛病各种1/1摸个头啊……笑
其他没回复的都是没改,因为感觉差不多其实,我1/3摆的都是0.8x,所以就keep啦
thanks for modding
Scorpiour
Hi there~~ mod from HW's recommendation

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions


[General]
  1. With an internal discussion, we're sure that you must add a 18+ Warning Label in your creator's word
    Songs/Maps with mature lyrics/themes must be marked with a label such as "18+" in the map's thread. This game is for all ages, and so a warning is needed for younger audiences. There is currently no way to distinguish this outside of the map's thread, but this may change in the future.
[Insane]
  1. 00:14:288 (1,2,3) - i suppose whistles could be applied to these notes.
  2. 00:17:933 - perhaps you may add a note here for consistent beat
  3. 00:21:683 - ^
  4. 00:41:163 (3) - unnecessary clap i think
  5. 00:48:038 (1,2,3) - about the beat here... it's not bad, just another way you may try:
  6. 01:08:038 (1) - two sliders maybe better?
  7. 01:14:288 (1,2,1,2,1) - the beat around here is heard boring a little
  8. 01:18:038 - this part could be started from here
  9. 01:51:163 (3,4) - i'd like to apply a ctrl+g here
  10. 02:08:975 (2,1,2,1,2,1) - also boring beat o_o
  11. 02:48:060 - i may not choose to place a break here
  12. 03:29:913 (3) - ctrl+g?
[Hard]
  1. 00:14:288 (1,2,3) - Same as Insane, whistle is suggested
[Normal]
  1. 00:14:288 (3,4,5) - same
Not bad, call me back to recheck when you're ready
Topic Starter
Koiyuki

Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there~~ mod from HW's recommendation

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions


[General]
  1. With an internal discussion, we're sure that you must add a 18+ Warning Label in your creator's word
    Songs/Maps with mature lyrics/themes must be marked with a label such as "18+" in the map's thread. This game is for all ages, and so a warning is needed for younger audiences. There is currently no way to distinguish this outside of the map's thread, but this may change in the future.
ok added
[Insane]
  1. 00:14:288 (1,2,3) - i suppose whistles could be applied to these notes. added
  2. 00:17:933 - perhaps you may add a note here for consistent beat
  3. 00:21:683 - ^ 这里不太想改pattern,00:17:933 - 前面没加是想和00:15:538 (1) - 有个照应,打起来我觉得更有节奏感,这里也是一样
  4. 00:41:163 (3) - unnecessary clap i think removed
  5. 00:48:038 (1,2,3) - about the beat here... it's not bad, just another way you may try: 都要改的话工程有点大,后面也有一段,想想我还是善良点吧:3,所以不改啦
  6. 01:08:038 (1) - two sliders maybe better? maybe better, 不过将善良进行到底,不改了
  7. 01:14:288 (1,2,1,2,1) - the beat around here is heard boring a little 因为没梗了QAQ
  8. 01:18:038 - this part could be started from here I follow the beat here so start at 01:18:663 (1) -
  9. 01:51:163 (3,4) - i'd like to apply a ctrl+g here 我感觉现在这样的flow比较好
  10. 02:08:975 (2,1,2,1,2,1) - also boring beat o_o QAQ mentioned above
  11. 02:48:060 - i may not choose to place a break here imo the break here is fine
  12. 03:29:913 (3) - ctrl+g? i keep it
[Hard]
  1. 00:14:288 (1,2,3) - Same as Insane, whistle is suggested added
[Normal]
  1. 00:14:288 (3,4,5) - same same
Not bad, call me back to recheck when you're ready
Scorpiour
Bubbled~~!!
pw384
瞎了
ts8zs
提前占位庆祝:D
稍微耽误了一下你的rank进程呢,sry XD
Topic Starter
Koiyuki

Scorpiour wrote:

Bubbled~~!!
Thanks sco~

ts8zs wrote:

提前占位庆祝:D
稍微耽误了一下你的rank进程呢,sry XD
没事,你也加油撒
sheela
Go go go~
Atrue
这么快… 哭哭… 要是不AFK我也想做的说… ;w;
Fycho
[Mod Info]
  1. Black: Suggestions
  2. Bold: Important things. You should consider
  3. Red: Unrankable issues. You Must Fix

[General]

  • Fine

[Insane]
  1. AR8.7 fits the difficulty better, some patterns in ar8.5 look messy.
  2. 00:27:413 (3) -–remove clap at sliderend, it’s the kick drum in music not snare drum, so you don’t need to add it. For the same reason, 00:30:225 -00:32:725 -00:35:225 -
  3. 00:41:163 (3) –missing clap, it’s the same drum as 00:19:913 -, also add clap at 00:41:475 (5) – and 00:41:579 (6)-sliderend which are the same.
  4. 01:18:663 (1,2) –soft custom7’s hitnormal fits here better. 02:13:663 (1,2) -
  5. 01:15:538 (1,2) –both of them ctrl+g will make the flow more natural from01:14:288 (1,2) -
  6. 01:43:350 (2) –missing clap
  7. 01:36:475 (5) –and 01:36:579 (6) –sliderend add clap, same reason
  8. 02:16:371 (6,7,1) – make them in a line, just move 02:16:475 (7) –to(397,280)
  9. 02:36:788 –volume is a little small here, I sugget you change to50%, can’t hear the soft-whistle you added…
  10. 03:14:288 -03:15:538 –again, soft-custom7’s hitnormal fits better imo

[Hard]
  1. 00:24:392 (2) –remove clap from sliderend, it’s not snare drum
  2. 01:21:788 (1) –remove clap only keep finish, the clap souns a little weird here.
  3. 01:43:350 (2) –missing clap

[Normal]
  1. 00:14:288 (3,4,5,6) –stack is hard for such bpm’s lowest diff imo, I highly recommend you not stack them
  2. 00:25:538 (1,2) –rhythm is a bit odd here, maybe following music not the drum will be better, http://puu.sh/bbfku/95d1ea6fb2.jpg, in high diffs following drum is fine because rhythm is variety
    . Also, your normal diff almost follow 1/1 drums which is really boring, so this may give more interest to it.
  3. 00:56:788 (1) –this is a little soon after the spinner, I recommend you move this to the center to let new players easy to catch (避免像小船那图那样被针对)
  4. 01:43:350 –missing clap!
  5. 02:56:788 (1,2) –why not add clap like03:21:788 (1,2) -

Call me back after you reply this.
Topic Starter
Koiyuki

Fycho wrote:

[Insane]
  1. 01:18:663 (1,2) –soft custom7’s hitnormal fits here better. 02:13:663 (1,2) - imo sc1 is better here, i keep this
  2. 02:16:371 (6,7,1) – make them in a line, just move 02:16:475 (7) –to(397,280) i have made 02:15:538 (1,4,1) - in one line here...
  3. 03:14:288 -03:15:538 –again, soft-custom7’s hitnormal fits better imo same above

Call me back after you reply this.
Others all fixed
02:56:788 - here add clap in all diffs
thanks
Senritsu
add iris to tag, since this song is at her album.
and it's 96Neko not 96neko?
gl with rank! very enthusiastic to see more 96neko song at osu! /ovo/
Topic Starter
Koiyuki
Thanks Senritsu!
add tag: アイリス iris
because the song is from this album.
Fycho
Rechecked by irc, fixed some tiny things and hitsounds, 96neko is pretty nice<3

Ranked.
Topic Starter
Koiyuki
Thanks Fycho >3<
ts8zs
grats
Satellite
Nice
Senritsu
96neko is love
96neko is life
96neko is needed more at osu!
/runs
gratz! www
Kyouren
Nice~ Gratz~
[ Mephisto ]
o.o
litoluna
omedetou!!
Topic Starter
Koiyuki
\o/ thank you all~
toara_fict
Gratz Yuki :3
sheela
Yay!
Natteke
ah, if I knew you were mapping this I'd offer you our collab with happy30, grats
Topic Starter
Koiyuki

Natteke wrote:

ah, if I knew you were mapping this I'd offer you our collab with happy30, grats
ah.. thanks
Sellenite
achievement success:no unqualified!
ts8zs

Sellenite wrote:

achievement success:no unqualified!
grats lol
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