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Leorda
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Leorda
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 18 April 2010 at 9:18:19

Artist: Laava
Title: Wherever You Are
Source: Dance Dance Revolution UltraMix 2
Tags: DDR konami crimmiskye wmfchris orioncomet
BPM: 138
Filesize: 5307kb
Play Time: 01:40
Difficulties Available:
  1. Chris' Taiko (5 stars, 374 notes)
  2. Crimmi's Standard (2,69 stars, 89 notes)
  3. Heavy (4,45 stars, 150 notes)
  4. Light (2,25 stars, 84 notes)
  5. Orion's Oni (5 stars, 275 notes)
Download: Laava - Wherever You Are
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 4th beatmap, Now is Pending. From Dance Dance Revolution Ultramix 2 (XboX).

Update in January 05, 2010 : Added a CrimmiSkye's diff
Update in January 06, 2010 : Fix all difficulty (Lokamp's suggestion)
Update in January 07, 2010 : Change some of offset, BPM and fix all difficulty (Zekira and Breeze suggestion)
Update in January 08, 2010 : Fix all difficulty (jerico2442's suggestion), MonKy Beat added, change some diff name (Leorda's DEATH Road to Leorda's High Road)
Update in January 09, 2010 : Leorda's High Road finish, move to pending
Update in January 10, 2010 : Fix all difficulty (babble, Brezze, and Teara suggestion)
Update in January 11, 2010 : Fix all difficulty (Beuchi-chan and DJPop suggestion), SB added
Update in January 12, 2010 : Fix all difficulty (Shinxyn's suggestion)
Update in January 13, 2010 : Fix all difficulty (Sushi971's suggestion)
Update in January 16, 2010 : Fix all difficulty (yeahyeahyeahh's suggestion)
Update in January 17, 2010 : Fix all difficulty (Xgor's suggestion)
Update in January 18, 2010 : Fix all difficulty, changes some bg, add some spinner
Update in January 21, 2010 : Fix all difficulty, add some spinner-background
Update in January 22, 2010 : Fix all difficulty (Lissette's suggestion)
Update in Febuary 01, 2010 : Fix all difficulty except Crimmi's Low Road (quintitem's suggestion)
Update in Febuary 02, 2010 : Chris's Taiko and bg added
Update in Feburary 19, 2010 : Fix all difficulty except MonKy Beat (Shulin's suggestion), add some skin, changes some bg in Leorda's High Road
Update in Feburary 27, 2010 : Fix all diff (MarioBros777, happy30, fartownik suggestion)
Update in Feburary 28. 2010 : Changes some bg for Chris Taiko (redownload pls)
Update in March 01. 2010 : Delete Crimmi's Low Road, and Add a Crimmi's ReMiX, Fix Leorda's High Road and MonKy's Beat (igonerthis's suggestion) changes some diff name (Leorda's High Road to Leorda's Insane)
Update in March 02, 2010 : Fix Leorda's Insane (abalee's suggestion), Delete Crimmi's ReMiX and add Crimmi's Normal, changes some diff name (Crimmi's Low Road to Crimmi's Normal)
Update in March 20, 2010 : Fix all diff (NoHitter and Shinde suggestion), Fix the spinner (Thanks for Shinde-chan), Changes some diff name (Leorda's Insane to Insane)
Update in March 21, 2010 : Change some diff name (Crimmi's Normal -> Crimmi's Standard) (Insane -> Heavy), add an easy+ (Light+) diff, delete VanMonKy's diff. Please redownload
Update in March 27, 2010 : Fix Light+, Crimmi's Standard and Heavy (Chacha17 and pieguy1372 suggestion)
Update in March 28, 2010 : Fix all diff (RandomJibber's suggestion), changes some pattern, delete spinner-bg, spinner-metre, and spinner-circle
Update in March 29, 2010 : Add a Orion's Oni P.S WARNING! THIS DIFF IS FOR PRO PLAYER! (Especialy for H1ko, lesjuh, Gladi, CrimmiSkye, Doomsday93, youngdow, NatsumeRin, S i R i R u, and more), fix Heavy diff (soulfear's suggestion), changes the bg for Light diff, delete VanMonKy bg, Fix Light, Crimmi's Normal, Heavy diff (Midget's suggestion)
Update in March 30, 2010 : Fix Heavy and Orion's Oni (ykcarrot's suggestion)
Update in March 31, 2010 : Fix Light diff (emaal's suggestion)
Update in April 05, 2010 : Fix Light diff (Derekku Chan's suggestion)
Update in April 06, 2010 : Changes some pattern in Heavy, now Heavy is Hard diff not Insane (I'm afraid one of BAT or GMT gonna unrank this map)
Update in April 10, 2010 : Skin added by Davidz123
Update in April 18, 2010 : Fix Heavy diff (Mafiamaster's suggestion), hitcircleoverlay.png added and change the bg for Chris's Taiko
Last edited by Leorda , edited 44 times in total.
Crimmi
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Joined June 2009
Crimmi
Ok I'll Be Adding 2 or 3 diffs for you since you asked me cause this is my favorite song in the game!

oh and your timing is a bit off

try BPM 137.75

And This is my Diff's BG:


Download: Laava - Wherever You Are (Leorda) [Crimmi's Low Road].osu
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
Leorda
Thanks CrimmiSkye!

But you need remap your diff to 01:39:580
If done, PM Me
Lokamp
2,530 posts
Joined January 2009
Lokamp
Crimmi's Low Road
00:57:763 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - timing here is quite weird... Fix it, please.

Leorda's Road
[General] I don't think beat streams always fits this mode... even sliders can be useful, too...
00:49:052 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - Timing, again, to be fixed

It's time to fix timing for this map, or playing this will be disappointing for players...
Let's hope about improvement with a star.
Leorda
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Topic Starter
Leorda

Lokamp wrote:

Crimmi's Low Road
00:57:763 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - timing here is quite weird... Fix it, please.
FIXED BY ME

Leorda's Road
[General] I don't think beat streams always fits this mode... even sliders can be useful, too...
00:49:052 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - Timing, again, to be fixed
I'm sorry I don't know what you mean?

It's time to fix timing for this map, or playing this will be disappointing for players...
Let's hope about improvement with a star.
Zekira
9,233 posts
Joined September 2008
Zekira
WHAT THE FREAKING HELL IS THIS TIMING D:

You're fortunate this is in WIP, or else I would've put this on deathcross faster than I could say 'what the freaking hell is this timing' ! o_o

Offset: 22940
BPM: 138

Can't mod with faulty timing, go fix go go

But even without the mod, I saw some non-symmetrical sliders. Go fix those. (like 00:38:592 (5) on Crimmi's diff)
Vanmonky
986 posts
Joined June 2009
Vanmonky
Hold on! I'm making a diff for this song. Wait for me, alright?
Breeze
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Breeze
Emm, this map looked werid to me

[Leorda's DEATH Road]
00:50:359 (4,5,6,7) - what's these?!

I'm sorry I don't know how to mod this map
and also, no kds to me
Leorda
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Topic Starter
Leorda

Zekira wrote:

WHAT THE FREAKING HELL IS THIS TIMING D:

You're fortunate this is in WIP, or else I would've put this on deathcross faster than I could say 'what the freaking hell is this timing' ! o_o

Offset: 22940
BPM: 138

Can't mod with faulty timing, go fix go go

But even without the mod, I saw some non-symmetrical sliders. Go fix those. (like 00:38:592 (5) on Crimmi's diff)
FIXED

Breeze wrote:

Emm, this map looked werid to me

[Leorda's DEATH Road]
00:50:359 (4,5,6,7) - what's these?!

I'm sorry I don't know how to mod this map
and also, no kds to me
FIXED
您真差劲！
Breeze
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Breeze

Leorda wrote:

FIXED 您真差劲
oops, sorry about that. I'm not good at timing, I think Zekira gived you right BPM
or you could post your map to here:
Unable to find the BPM/offset of your map? Post here.
BAT could help you with your BPM
yes, the BPM of this map is hard to handle D:
After you got the proper BPM, I would like rechek it
sorry :cry:
jericho2442
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jericho2442
first off, map the WHOLE song this is waaaaaaaaaaaay too short

i will fast mod what there is anyway

[Easy]
00:31:635 (2) - line up with the 5 in the combo before, then fix spacing in this combo, its a lil out
00:43:809 (5) - line with (2)
shorten your combo's, easy diffs are meant to be small combo's


[Leorda's DEATH Road]
.......it feels very very empty, map more into the song so it feels better to play, also this is not DEATH ROAD, that name does not suit it, its not really that hard at all
00:39:026 (4) - new combo
00:47:939 (1) - horrable place for a spinner, map something else here
00:52:070 (7,8) - both of these sliders a too short and feel horrid, make them longer so they end on the blue ticks
00:55:005 (10) - new combo

________________________

..........really map more
Crimmi
1,947 posts
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Crimmi
update of my diff

Download: Laava - Wherever You Are (Leorda) [Crimmi's Low Road].osu
Vanmonky
986 posts
Joined June 2009
Vanmonky
Done.

Here's my bg. Is it fit to the song..?



Download: Laava - Wherever You Are (Leorda) [MoNky's BeaT].osu
Leorda
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Topic Starter
Leorda

VanMoNky wrote:

Done.

Here's my bg. Is it fit to the song..?
[attachment=1:5ed76]VanMoNky bg.jpg[/attachment:5ed76]
Thanks for diff
but your bg is..... not fit....
Vanmonky
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Vanmonky
Oh.. lol
I'll try to find the other bg
Breeze
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Breeze
I got a BPM : 138.1 (138 for now is prety good)
offset : 331 (anyway, 22940 is available)

Then after you changed BPM, a recheck

[General]
  1. Delete osb.file please
  2. Reduce VanMoNky's and CrimmiSkye's BG to 800x600 pixel, that's enough to a BG
  3. 2 you are wherever should not add to tag, deltete them
  4. All timing section have a 31ms off (except for [MoNky's BeaT])since you have changed your offset, anyway, it's not a big deal
[Crimmi's Low Road]
  1. 00:31:635 (2) - 1 grid right (lv3) to make it stack well with the start of 00:29:896 (5)
  2. 00:33:374 (5,6...) - 3 grid left and 1 grid down (lv3) maybe
  3. 00:43:809 (5) - make it overlapped with (2) please
[MoNky's BeaT]
  1. 01:13:157 (4,5) - end of them didn't overlapped, turn off grid snap and fix them maybe
[Leorda's High Road]
  1. 00:57:722 - from then on...awesome, one suggetion : lower hitsound a bit, it sounds loud

Now it looked fine ：P
have a star
Vanmonky
986 posts
Joined June 2009
Vanmonky
1024 x 768 is allowed to be used as bg. Leorda, do not reduce my background.
Fixed.

Download: Laava - Wherever You Are (Leorda) [MoNky's BeaT].osu
Breeze
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Breeze

VanMoNky wrote:

1024 x 768 is allowed to be used as bg. Leorda, do not reduce my background.
Fixed.
yup, it's just a suggetion.
low pixel could reduce the capacity of osz.file.
All right, I do a nazi mod X(
Breeze
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Breeze
EDIT : oops, bad net post 3 times, sorry
Last edited by Breeze , edited 1 time in total.
Breeze
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Breeze
EDIT : So sorry to post 3 times...holy crap my poor net >:(
Babble
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Babble
Crimmi's Low Road
Looks good, but kiai time at the end is too long. End it at 01:12:070

Monkey's Beat
01:12:070 - SB warning for x2 speed

Leorda's High Road
00:57:722 Wow, add a x2 speed SB and might wanna lower distance spacing... alot o_o just for the x2 part. Wait, is x2 speed supposed to go through the rest of the song? Might wanna fix that and cut it short.
End kiai at same spot I told crimmi to.

Nice map, star
Vanmonky
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Vanmonky
Don't think so it needs warning. :oops:
AngelHoney
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AngelHoney
High Road

00:29:026 - add a note ?
00:29:244 (7) - remove the clap from the startings
00:30:222 (2) - remove ?
00:37:505 (1,2) - Move 1 grid (↑↓←→)
00:37:505 (1) - end at the 00:37:722 ?
00:37:939 (2) - ^
00:39:461 - add a note ?
00:39:896 - ^
00:58:592 (7) - new combo ?
01:01:961 (9) - ^
01:01:961 (9) - ^
01:02:831 (17) - ^
01:07:070 (5) - ^
01:22:939 (9) - ^
01:26:635 (2) - new combo
01:32:505 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23) - no good...lol...(i think try to change it..
01:37:070 (2,3) - new combo ? or 01:36:635 (1,2,3) - 123456
Score is too low... 1,293,690...

Crimmi's Low Road

nice~

MoNky's BeaT

nice~

Great map !!!(i like your BG~

star&kudosu (moe moe...XD
Teara
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Teara
[Crimmi's Low Road]

00:49:461 (3) - Slightly offscreen
00:52:505 (5) - ^

Rest if fine, a very nice diff :3 Good Job!

[MoNky's BeaT]

SB x2 parts please

Rest is fine :) good job too.

[Leorda's High Road]

Everything is nice and fine until

00:57:722 (1) - Till end.

Sorry, I don't like this spacing.

But its mapped well, and pro players will have fun with this one I bet.

I do however suggest you lower distance, its is realllly hard to do.

SB x2 parts too please
DJPop
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3,549 posts
Here since the beginning
DJPop
~Crimmi's Low Road~
Offset: 331
00:00:331 - set volume to 75
00:31:635 (2,3) - move right 1 grid (Lv3)
00:32:505 (4,5) - move right 2 grid (Lv3)
00:38:592 (5) - new combo
00:57:691 - move this timing section to 00:57:287 and set volume to 75

~MoNky's BeaT~
Offset: 331
00:02:070 (9) - new combo
00:05:548 (9) - ^
00:09:026 (6) - ^
00:49:679 (1) - remove new combo
00:51:200 (5) - new combo
00:54:353 (5) - ^
00:55:113 (8) - remove new combo
01:11:635 to end - silence all sliderticks

~Leorda's High Road~
00:00:331 - set volume to 50
00:57:680 to end - WTH!?
01:39:390 (1) - move ending 1/6 right


+Star
Beuchi
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Beuchi
Hi hi! :)

Here are some suggestions for your map. Of course you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me~

Let's go!!

~All diffs~
- Change offset to 329 on all diffs.
- Delete "you are wherever" from tags. It's the song title so it's a bit obvious :P

~Crimmi's Low Road~
- Add more hitsounds.

00:29:894 (5) - Overlap this with (1)
00:31:633 (2) - Overlap this with (5) of the previous combo.
00:33:372 (6) - Move this to fit perfectly the space between (4,5)
00:43:807 (5) - Overlap this with (2)
00:46:850 (8) - Make this a horizontal reflection of (6)
00:49:459 (3) - Offscreen.
00:52:502 (5) - ^
01:08:155 (6) - Overlap this with (1)
01:31:633 (8) - Flip vertically to fit symmetry.
01:35:111 (4) - Overlap this with (1)

~MoNky's BeaT~
- White Hitcircles are a bit hard to read. Consider changing the color oxo

01:12:070 (1) - Make a SB Warning for this 2x bpm section.

~Leorda's High Road~
- Sorry if I'm being rude but I find the section from 00:57:680 to the end horrible... I would remap it or at least decrease the spacing if you're keeping the 2x bpm part... :(

00:57:680 (1) - Make a SB Warning for this 2x bpm section.
01:32:438 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23) - OMG Way too long combo... Make some of them New Combo...

Nice map, but I reaaaally hate that 2x bpm part on High Road diff :S (I don't know if that part is rankeable, though...) Anyways, have a nice *star*
Leorda
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Topic Starter
Leorda
Thanks everyone!
DJPop : all fixed
Beuchi-chan : all fixed Sexy!

Wait VanMonky's respond
Vanmonky
986 posts
Joined June 2009
Vanmonky
Done. Beuchi, sorry but I don't want to change the color.

Download: 11909 Laava - Wherever You Are.rar
Leorda
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Topic Starter
Leorda

AngelHoney wrote:

High Road

00:29:026 - add a note ?
00:29:244 (7) - remove the clap from the startings
00:30:222 (2) - remove ?
00:37:505 (1,2) - Move 1 grid (↑↓←→)
00:37:505 (1) - end at the 00:37:722 ?
00:37:939 (2) - ^
00:39:461 - add a note ?
00:39:896 - ^
00:58:592 (7) - new combo ?
01:01:961 (9) - ^
01:01:961 (9) - ^
01:02:831 (17) - ^
01:07:070 (5) - ^
01:22:939 (9) - ^
01:26:635 (2) - new combo
01:32:505 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23) - no good...lol...(i think try to change it..
01:37:070 (2,3) - new combo ? or 01:36:635 (1,2,3) - 123456
Score is too low... 1,293,690...

Crimmi's Low Road

nice~

MoNky's BeaT

nice~

Great map !!!(i like your BG~

star&kudosu (moe moe...XD
FIXED

>////<
Shinxyn
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Shinxyn
Okay.... lets see...
First of all make either I downloaded an older version of the .osb, or you need to remove it, since the .osb applies to all diffs, and the "Untitled.png" 2x warning is on all the diffs (for me~)(Full submit to update .osb)

Crimmi's-
placement is [Easy] diff worthy.... hitsounds.... don't really make sense, they sorta appear, then disappear...

MoNky's-
This map had a nice peaceful pace... till the 2x section....... seriously, I don't feel there is any need for a 2x section in the song in general ;-;! (though it's better than High Road's x_x)
01:27:939 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - theses are really extreme jumps for this diff :(
Aside from those two, the maps fine

Leorda's- the 2x section......okay... NO
I may not be a pro player, but I can tell that's unlikely possible for LOTS of players!
If you wanna make it more possible, I highly suggest you increase overall diff (so the notes don't cluster too much at once), and make the circle size bigger (I'd prefer between Large and Medium... but don't keep it this size)... not that it musically makes ANY sense to add streams of 1/4 notes in this slowish song >_>
00:37:477 (1,2) - ehh, just make it 1/2 sliders, short 1/4 sliders like these don't really fit
01:39:390 (1) - end this on 01:40:980 (the 1/3 beat)... assuming you're ending on the piano
Aren't warning supposed to appear BEFORE the danger happens?
Though seriously, the speed change makes no sense, and I doubt people would have "fun" playing this unless they aren't serious.... I may be wrong, so ask a pro to test this as it is >_>
Leorda
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Topic Starter
Leorda

Shinxyn wrote:

Okay.... lets see...
First of all make either I downloaded an older version of the .osb, or you need to remove it, since the .osb applies to all diffs, and the "Untitled.png" 2x warning is on all the diffs (for me~)(Full submit to update .osb)

Crimmi's- (FIXED)
placement is [Easy] diff worthy.... hitsounds.... don't really make sense, they sorta appear, then disappear...

MoNky's- (WAITING HE'S RESPOND
This map had a nice peaceful pace... till the 2x section....... seriously, I don't feel there is any need for a 2x section in the song in general ;-;! (though it's better than High Road's x_x)
01:27:939 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - theses are really extreme jumps for this diff :(
Aside from those two, the maps fine

Leorda's- the 2x section......okay... NO (ALL FIXED, BUT THIS DIFF FOR PRO)
I may not be a pro player, but I can tell that's unlikely possible for LOTS of players!
If you wanna make it more possible, I highly suggest you increase overall diff (so the notes don't cluster too much at once), and make the circle size bigger (I'd prefer between Large and Medium... but don't keep it this size)... not that it musically makes ANY sense to add streams of 1/4 notes in this slowish song >_>
00:37:477 (1,2) - ehh, just make it 1/2 sliders, short 1/4 sliders like these don't really fit
01:39:390 (1) - end this on 01:40:980 (the 1/3 beat)... assuming you're ending on the piano
Aren't warning supposed to appear BEFORE the danger happens?
Though seriously, the speed change makes no sense, and I doubt people would have "fun" playing this unless they aren't serious.... I may be wrong, so ask a pro to test this as it is >_>
Fixed.......
Vanmonky
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Vanmonky
Then.. how about this?

Download: Laava - Wherever You Are (Leorda) [MoNky's BeaT].osu
Sushi
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Sushi
Timing's different through difficulties. FIX IT.
BPM : 138.
Offset : 330
Do not forget to resnap

[Crimmi's]
Check AIMod (Ctrl+Shift+A) lot of unsanapped notes
00:32:505 (4,5) - symetry
00:43:374 (4) - stack better on previous (3)
Make SB diff specific, we have a warning but no difference.
00:57:722 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - symetry
01:01:200 (1,2) - align?
01:07:287 (4,5,6) - align. move 5 1 grid down
01:12:505 (2,5) - symetry

[Leorda's]
Check AIMod (Ctrl+Shift+A) lot of unsanapped notes
Timing is obviously off on that diff.
i really don't like the 2xspeed part :(

[Monky's]
same thing about the SB
and this 2X SPEED is really big.
but Monky's diff is fine :)

Star, but fix these.get it better. NAO
Leorda
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Topic Starter
Leorda

Sushi971 wrote:

Timing's different through difficulties. FIX IT. ALL FIX
BPM : 138.
Offset : 330
Do not forget to resnap

[Crimmi's] ALL FIXED
Check AIMod (Ctrl+Shift+A) lot of unsanapped notes
00:32:505 (4,5) - symetry
00:43:374 (4) - stack better on previous (3)
Make SB diff specific, we have a warning but no difference.
00:57:722 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - symetry
01:01:200 (1,2) - align?
01:07:287 (4,5,6) - align. move 5 1 grid down
01:12:505 (2,5) - symetry

[Leorda's]
Check AIMod (Ctrl+Shift+A) lot of unsanapped notes FIXED
Timing is obviously off on that diff.
i really don't like the 2xspeed part :( :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry:

[Monky's]
same thing about the SB
and this 2X SPEED is really big.
but Monky's diff is fine :)

Star, but fix these.get it better. NAO
yeahyeahyeahhh
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yeahyeahyeahhh
MoNky's BeaT

>> First off, I don't think the BIG 2x speed sign is needed. The flashing 2X sign you have in the back is good enough. The big sign is REALLY distracting!
>> 01:25:983 - Lose the 2x BG here please!
>> 01:36:635 (1) - Ugly jump, comes out of no where. Suggest making it closer.

Leodra's High Beat

>> Why is offset different from MoNky's BeaT? All diff should have the same offset
>> I'm not going to mod this map because the 2x section is just.. unintuitive and dumb. Doesn't go with the song at all and sounds horrible with the wrong offset. Please redo these parts.

Crimmi's Low Road

>> Remove the 2x sign from this diff.
Leorda
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Topic Starter
Leorda

yeahyeahyeahhh wrote:

MoNky's BeaT

>> First off, I don't think the BIG 2x speed sign is needed. The flashing 2X sign you have in the back is good enough. The big sign is REALLY distracting!
>> 01:25:983 - Lose the 2x BG here please!
>> 01:36:635 (1) - Ugly jump, comes out of no where. Suggest making it closer.

Leodra's High Beat

>> Why is offset different from MoNky's BeaT? All diff should have the same offset
>> I'm not going to mod this map because the 2x section is just.. unintuitive and dumb. Doesn't go with the song at all and sounds horrible with the wrong offset. Please redo these parts.

Crimmi's Low Road

>> Remove the 2x sign from this diff.
I'm very sorry for your inconvenience about 2x part, if you don't like it, so I decided to delete all part in 2x section and I want to set the inherited BPM to 1x and make an object again in kiai part (Leorda's High Road). I'm very sooooo sorry
Leorda
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Topic Starter
Leorda
ALL DONE
Waiting VanMonKy's respond
Vanmonky
986 posts
Joined June 2009
Vanmonky
Well done.

Download: Laava - Wherever You Are (Leorda) [MoNky's BeaT].osu
Vanmonky
986 posts
Joined June 2009
Vanmonky
[General]
Add "vanmonky" and "crimmiskye" to the tags. [!]

[Leorda's High Road]
1. The volume is too soft. Increase it.
2. A bit overmapped in my opinion.
3. Uncheck the "Letterbox during breaks" option in the Song Setup > Storyboarding.
00:42:503 - The break is odd. Map it.
00:55:873 - Add note here.
01:00:329 (11) - Spacing error.
01:12:069 - The break is odd. Map it.
01:37:938 - Add break here.
01:39:460 (1) - Silence the spinner.
Last edited by Vanmonky , edited 1 time in total.
Xgor
Elite Mapper
2,534 posts
Joined April 2009
Xgor
[All difficulties]
I think DDR and Konami is the only tags you need

[Crimmi]
Please use the kiai time from VanMoNky's difficulty
00:32:503 (4,5,6,7) - Add claps at all the circles and the end of the slider
00:41:199 (2,3) - Add whistle
00:47:286 (9) - Add clap at the end of the slider
00:48:590 (1) - Add clap
This diff lack hitsounds... add more.

[Leorda]
Please use the kiai time from VanMoNky's difficulty
I dislike the breaks here... I would prefer if you mapped them.
I hate those silenced spinners >:(
Also those 2K bonus spinners are pretty stupid

[VanMoNky]
The best of the 3 diffiulities, even if the x2 is pretty stupid.
01:40:983 (1) - Please remove this spinner and add a circle at the when the spinner started before.


*star*
Vanmonky
986 posts
Joined June 2009
Vanmonky
Added a note there, but didn't remove the spinner.

Download: Laava - Wherever You Are (Leorda) [MoNky's BeaT].osu
AngelHoney
2,155 posts
Joined May 2009
AngelHoney
MoNky's BeaT

01:40:983 (1) - end at the 01:42:939 or other ?
Overall Difficulty +1 ?

Leorda's High Road

Slider Tick Rate 1 ?
i dont like this combo colours...
(look test'diff>.<)

Download: Laava - Wherever You Are (Leorda) [test3].osu
GladiOol
4,475 posts
Joined August 2008
GladiOol
[General]

The tags are all wrong. Don't add things as the song title back in the tags, since it's already in song title. Don't add same scource as tag, that's just wrong also. Add things like Van MoNky and Crimmi, since they made a diff. for you etc.
Offset in Van MoNky's diff. is 331, in the other diff's 330. Please make all 330.

[MoNky's Beat]
  1. 00:03:157 (4) - Add clap here.
  2. 00:03:374 (5) - Remove clap from ending of slider. (It doesn't hear nice at all)
  3. 00:10:113 (3) - Add clap here.
  4. 00:10:330 (4) - Remove clap from ending of slider.
  5. 00:55:113 (8) - New combo here (?)
  6. 01:18:374 (6) - Ugly slider~
[Leorda's High Road]

Why put your own name in your own difficulty of your own map? Doesn't make sense.
I really don't like the background. It doesn't fit the song at all. Van MoNky's background suites way better, maybe use that one (?)
  1. 00:46:634 - Add extra note here (!)
  2. Please shorten Kiai, it's way too long now. Maybe make it like Van MoNky's kiai (?)
[Crimmi's Low Road]

Background is also here silly, please change.
  1. Shorten kiai~
Starred~
Vanmonky
986 posts
Joined June 2009
Vanmonky

Gladi wrote:

[General]

The tags are all wrong. Don't add things as the song title back in the tags, since it's already in song title. Don't add same scource as tag, that's just wrong also. Add things like Van MoNky and Crimmi, since they made a diff. for you etc.
Offset in Van MoNky's diff. is 331, in the other diff's 330. Please make all 330. [Done.]

[MoNky's Beat]
  1. 00:03:157 (4) - Add clap here. [No. Did this on purpose.]
  2. 00:03:374 (5) - Remove clap from ending of slider. (It doesn't hear nice at all) [No. Did this on purpose.]
  3. 00:10:113 (3) - Add clap here. [No. Did this on purpose.]
  4. 00:10:330 (4) - Remove clap from ending of slider. [No. Did this on purpose.]
  5. 00:55:113 (8) - New combo here (?) [No. Seems better without new combo in streams.]
  6. 01:18:374 (6) - Ugly slider~ [Don't think so since the pattern is like horizontal.]
Download: Laava - Wherever You Are (Leorda) [MoNky's BeaT].osu
Crimmi
1,947 posts
Joined June 2009
Crimmi
ok here's my new bg =]

YGOkid8
osu! Alumni
2,729 posts
Joined February 2009
YGOkid8
Kiai Time for all diffs. should start at the same place. Start at 00:57:721.

MoNky's BeaT
Star difficulty is lower than Leorda's High Road, yet Maximum Score is higher? Is that allowed? O_o

And I'll have to pass on the Guest Diff. offer.
Vanmonky
986 posts
Joined June 2009
Vanmonky
Of course it's allowed.
Doomsday
Featured Artist
1,961 posts
Joined July 2008
Doomsday
  1. Timing seems fine
[CRIMMI'S LONG ROAD]

All good

[LEORDA'S HIGH ROAD]

00:54:025 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Why not put these is a stream instead on right angles like they are now? Like it is now, it doesn't look good, and is awkward to play
00:56:199 (1,1,1) - What an evil jump, but it really doesn't fit in my eyes. I'd shrink these jumps down if you can.

[MONKY'S BEAT]

01:27:287 (7,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - Like in Leorda's diff, these are evil, and also feel out of place. They are not as awkward as Leorda's jumps are to me, but I'd still tone these down if you can.

Not too bad. Some dodgy patterns here and there but its solid overall.

Starred
Kytoxid
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Joined April 2009
Kytoxid
[General]

.osb file references a non-existant file.
Please include spinner-metre.png and spinner-background.png if you choose to add a custom spinner-circle.png; if you'd like, just copy the template skin ones.
Resize spinner-circle.png to 666x666px?

Both countdown and letterboxing are inconsistent across all 3 diffs; please fix.

MoNky's BeaT has a 1ms difference in timing.

Remember to re-snap your timing sections too after a timing change; the most important ones are the kiai triggers, to make sure they're properly timed.

[Crimmi's Low Road] (is it a crummy road? I hope not.)

01:12:069 (1) - Remember, for notes after spinners; they must be 2 grids below the centre to be truly centered in play mode.

Played pretty smoothly for me.

[Leorda's High Road]

00:56:199 (1,1,1,1) - Please don't.
01:11:851 (1) - Map this, don't just put a spinner here.
01:37:721 - Break's a little short.
01:41:199 - Unused timing section.

[MoNky's BeaT]

Ending jumps are a bit extreme, but otherwise cool. Only recommendation would be to change the white combo colours; they're hard to read on the current background, and blind during kiai.

Star~
kino77
909 posts
Joined March 2009
kino77
Hi Leorda~ :)
Nice map~

The hitsound seems a little bit lound to me,turn down?

[Leorda's High Road]
00:30:982 (5) - Remove clap?
00:47:721 (13) - Clap?
01:05:112 (3) - ^
01:05:982 (7) - ^
01:06:851 (2) - ^
01:07:721 (4) - ^
01:20:764 (2) - Remove clap at the end?

Others looks cool~
Star~
blissfulyoshi
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Joined July 2008
blissfulyoshi
As Kytoxid said, you .osb file refers to a file called "Untitled.png" that does not exist in your song folder. Please add an Untitled.png to your map or remove the .osb file pls

Crimmi's Low Road: fine (It seems most of your combos are used to differentiate your style at that point, so I modded based off that assumption)

Leorda's High Road:
Normal mod:
00:56:199 (1,1,1) - this jump felt a little random in regards to the song to me

Timing section mod:
01:41:199 - unneeded timing section, please remove

MoNky's BeaT:
(I know you haven't had time to fix this your diff yet, so this is just a reminder)Only difficulty with offset 331, so please change it 330 like the other diffs and resnap.
The white combo color + kiai is pretty hard to see against your background

Combo mod:
During the early middle section, you keep on changing how many line of lyrics pass before you add new combos
00:32:070 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 2 lines of lyrics
00:42:504 (1,2,3,4,5) - 1 line of lyrics
00:47:722 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 2 lines of lyrics except notice how the similar lyrics in the first example are now separated
I just wish this area was consistent in combos

======================
Overall nice map. Star.
Vanmonky
986 posts
Joined June 2009
Vanmonky
Done. Looks like Leorda hasn't upload my newest diff version yet.

blissfulyoshi wrote:

MoNky's BeaT:
Combo mod:
During the early middle section, you keep on changing how many line of lyrics pass before you add new combos
00:32:070 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 2 lines of lyrics
00:42:504 (1,2,3,4,5) - 1 line of lyrics
00:47:722 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 2 lines of lyrics except notice how the similar lyrics in the first example are now separated
I just wish this area was consistent in combos
Well. Don't think it's a really big combo problem. Since they fir to the notes placement. I think they are okay.

Download: Laava - Wherever You Are (Leorda) [MoNky's BeaT].osu
Lissette
osu! Alumni
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Joined July 2008
Lissette
That spinner bothers me @.@ cuz I can't see the cursor
Why do you have offset 331 in MoNky's BeaT and 330 in the others diff? 330 work fine

Crimmi's Low Road
fine

Leorda's High Road
00:50:764 (1) - remove?
00:57:069 (4) - put this far apart from prev (3)

MoNky's BeaT
nice diff :) love the BG xP
01:11:635 - why you have two inherited timing sections in the same second @.@
01:25:548 - same here
01:39:678 - add note?
01:40:983 (1) - move half beat later (dont forget to shorten it) and add note

Star!
Vanmonky
986 posts
Joined June 2009
Vanmonky

Lissette wrote:

That spinner bothers me @.@ cuz I can't see the cursor
Why do you have offset 331 in MoNky's BeaT and 330 in the others diff? 330 work fine [That's because Leorda hasn't upload my diff yet.]

MoNky's BeaT
nice diff :) love the BG xP
01:11:635 - why you have two inherited timing sections in the same second @.@ I know what I'm doing ^^
01:25:548 - same here I know what I'm doing ^^
01:39:678 - add note? Nope. That's odd.
01:40:983 (1) - move half beat later (dont forget to shorten it) and add note I've done this even before you modded the diff. Well, Leorda hasn't upload it. Yet.
DeadAlready
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Joined August 2008
DeadAlready
I got request pm so I come here~ 0.0

[Leorda's High Road]
I think pattern is good enough XD
but I think maybe hitsounds use 70%~80% like [Crimmi's Low Road] will be better XD?

[MoNky's BeaT]
00:55:873 (15) - This note... I think it's a little hidden when I play... 0.0
maybe change it to like this will be better 0.0?
SPOILER

That's all...
In fact I am not good in mod. Orz
So I don't know why you pm me to mod this map. lol but it's ok.
And these just advices, if you don't want to fix, that's ok. :D It's still a good map XD

Final, star >w</
Leorda
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Topic Starter
Leorda

quintitem wrote:

I got request pm so I come here~ 0.0
So I don't know why you pm me to mod this map. lol but it's ok.
I'm sorry I thought you accepting the mod request, sorry about that
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