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Taneda Risa - Wareta Ringo (TV edit) [CatchTheBeat]

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Topic Starter
mingmichael
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, January 03, 2016 at 6:36:40 PM

Artist: Taneda Risa
Title: Wareta Ringo (TV edit)
Source: 新世界より
Tags: From the New World ShinSekai Yori Cracked Apple Watanabe Saki Original Soundtrack ending ed
BPM: 120
Filesize: 15335kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. Cup (1.38 stars, 161 notes)
  2. Platter (2.69 stars, 313 notes)
  3. Rain (3.25 stars, 350 notes)
  4. Salad (1.83 stars, 214 notes)


Download: Taneda Risa - Wareta Ringo (TV edit)
Download: Taneda Risa - Wareta Ringo (TV edit) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#2 CtB mapset
it's an old map, so don't expect much
i changed my mapping style. hope it'll be better
mp3 was taken from senritsu's map
video was take from colin hou's map
: me
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-[ Asuna ]-
new (tv size) ctb mavset... `3`)b GL~ ming
Topic Starter
mingmichael
thanks :P
and i just changed the newest BG with high definition quality too!
Senritsu
kalo ini kerank sebelum map gw gw bunuh lo
gl btw
Topic Starter
mingmichael

Senritsu wrote:

kalo ini kerank sebelum map gw gw bunuh lo
gl btw
eh tau2nya map gua yang duluan kerank lollll map elu juga bentar lagi kebubble toh ww and thanks btw
Spectator
Rain

00:00:186 (1,2,3,4,5) - how about this or this ?
00:04:686 (1) - you don't need to have NC here. cuz you don't have it on 01:24:686 (4)
00:06:686 (1) - ^
00:07:811 (8) - Move this one to x:40 to have a little hdash here
00:15:811 (5) - Move this note to x:415
00:16:186 (1,2,3,4,5) - same with 00:00:186 (1,2,3,4,5)
00:38:061 (5,6,7,8) - kinda tricky part. I think this can be a good way too
00:39:686 (2) - instead of 1/2 slider, you have to use 1/6 notes or something here
01:08:311 (4) - x:280
01:18:436 - try to add note here, and move spinner to 01:18:561 or 01:18:686
01:26:936 (3,4,5) - try this
01:22:436 (1,3,6,7) - same as 01:20:436, the reason why I suggest these whistles is to have a consistency with first part of the song
01:24:436 (3,5,6,7) - ^
01:26:436 (1,3,6,9) - ^
Platter

00:07:686 (8,9) - this jump is kinda tricky to catch, try to use hdash here. (or you can reduce it too)
00:13:811 (8) - x:96?
00:19:811 (7) - move this to x:296, it seems much better
00:39:811 (2) - move this note to x:236. You can add 1/6 here, but not a necessary. because it's a platter
00:55:811 (2) - x:288
01:18:436 - try to add note here, and move spinner to 01:18:561 or 01:18:686
01:20:436 - same as rain, you need whistles here
Salad

00:01:686 (6,7) - this kind of jump isn't really suitable to salad, try to reduce it
00:03:686 (7,8) - same as ^
00:29:936 (3,4,1) - how about this?
00:54:436 (1,2) - try avoid using these 1/4 triplets, you should use 1/2 here match with the song
01:18:436 (1) - same as rain and platter
01:27:811 (7) - I prefer hdash here
Cup

00:09:686 (4) - how about using horizontal slider here? something like this
00:54:436 (1,2) - Reduce the distance just a little. It's kinda wide for cup
00:56:811 - I guess you have forgotten to add hitsounds after this part.
01:16:436 (6) - remove NC and add NC on 01:16:811 (1)

good map!
Topic Starter
mingmichael
Rain

00:00:186 (1,2,3,4,5) - how about this or this ? ahh i keep mine xD because the current one gives more comfortable with C-stream hehee
00:04:686 (1) - you don't need to have NC here. cuz you don't have it on 01:24:686 (4)
00:06:686 (1) - ^ applied these!
00:07:811 (8) - Move this one to x:40 to have a little hdash here i didn't plan to use HDash on there xD ah sorry
00:15:811 (5) - Move this note to x:415 same ^
00:16:186 (1,2,3,4,5) - same with 00:00:186 (1,2,3,4,5) ahh same too xD
00:38:061 (5,6,7,8) - kinda tricky part. I think this can be a good way too hmm let i consider this again. i deliberate used that hasrh HDash there xD this harsh HDash will really support the strong pitch sound which comes out on 00:38:311 - before it's break
00:39:686 (2) - instead of 1/2 slider, you have to use 1/6 notes or something here it should use 1/2 @@
01:08:311 (4) - x:280 i used the mirror-pattern with 01:07:436 (1,2) - xD so 01:07:936 (3,4) - can't be moved. sorry ;w; btw i know that you moved it to give a balance distance between 01:07:936 (3,4,5) - hehe xD
01:18:436 - try to add note here, and move spinner to 01:18:561 or 01:18:686 hmm sorry i have decided to put the spinner on there @@ i will keep mine on here
01:26:936 (3,4,5) - try this hmm the current one isn't problem i guess. keep mine /.\
01:22:436 (1,3,6,7) - same as 01:20:436, the reason why I suggest these whistles is to have a consistency with first part of the song hmm but sorry i don't agree with it because 01:20:436 - until end doesn't have the bass or kick sound (i dunno what sounds is that TTwTT which need whistle). you can compare it with the first part and the last part. the instrument sounds are different there
01:24:436 (3,5,6,7) - ^
01:26:436 (1,3,6,9) - ^ same too ;w;
Platter

00:07:686 (8,9) - this jump is kinda tricky to catch, try to use hdash here. (or you can reduce it too) agree. moved a bit~
00:13:811 (8) - x:96? nope xD i used copy-paste with 00:13:686 (7) -
00:19:811 (7) - move this to x:296, it seems much better aha nice~
00:39:811 (2) - move this note to x:236. You can add 1/6 here, but not a necessary. because it's a platter okay~
00:55:811 (2) - x:288 okay~!
01:18:436 - try to add note here, and move spinner to 01:18:561 or 01:18:686
01:20:436 - same as rain, you need whistles here aahh sorry same like rain too ;w;
Salad

00:01:686 (6,7) - this kind of jump isn't really suitable to salad, try to reduce it
00:03:686 (7,8) - same as ^ hmm i will consider this again. i have asked a testplay to my friend who are noob in ctb and he can catch it with dash and he said that the jumps are interesting /.\ i'll keep mine for a while here
00:29:936 (3,4,1) - how about this? changed a bit here
00:54:436 (1,2) - try avoid using these 1/4 triplets, you should use 1/2 here match with the song i just wanted to used a different kind on notes there xD keep mine with triplets there
01:18:436 (1) - same as rain and platter same /.\
01:27:811 (7) - I prefer hdash here salad isn't allowed to used HDash. it's totally unrankable ;w;
Cup

00:09:686 (4) - how about using horizontal slider here? something like this
00:54:436 (1,2) - Reduce the distance just a little. It's kinda wide for cup okay~
00:56:811 - I guess you have forgotten to add hitsounds after this part. aahh yes xD added hehee
01:16:436 (6) - remove NC and add NC on 01:16:811 (1) i keep mine here for some reason for NC >~< hm

good map!
thanks for the mods! :D
Senritsu
samain tagsnya sama mapset gw aja ming, daripada ada yang protes nanti lel
uhh and this is actually an ending not opening. . .
-[ Asuna ]-
gumenese...
lupe kalo ada yang req mod.. :3

*go to editing

EDIT : ditunda dulu mod'a
sowwy ada urusan mendadak.. o/ mungkin nnti malem atau besok pagi.. xD
Ja~
Lanturn
Don't forget to go off senritsu's map for the metadata mingmichael... Or.. I... will.. hunt.. you.. down :D (TV Size) isn't correct.
Ollapeu


Hi! Mod as requested. ^w^

General:

  1. Remove ''Widescreen Support''. You don't have SB.
  2. Remove ''Letterbox during breaks''. There is no break.
  3. Imo Your preview point should start here: 00:39:436 It fits here perfectly.
  4. Would You like to change those default colours to custom ones?

Cup

first of all, change HP to 3.

00:08:936 (2) - I suggest to change it to repeat slider (*with ctrl+g* x:256). Of course then delete (3). After that, move this short slider to = x:136. Final pattern should look like this. It could be more interesting pattern than the previous one.
00:17:936 (5) - What do You think to make here a longer slider. You need to delete (6) then. It would fit here better, because there is a pretty long voice sound.
00:45:686 (2) - It feels too far away from previous slider (1). Try to reduce the distance (creating more certain/sure pattern for a player).
01:13:186 (2) - It's an unnecessary thing I guess. Delete it and lengthen (1) slider. Something like this. It gives You an easier rhythm which is better for an easy difficulty.

Rest is fine. Nice and clear diff. ;3

Salad

First of all, change HP to 4. If You changed the previous one. Now it looks better (Cup - HP3, Salad - HP4, Platter - HP5, Rain - HP6). :)

00:01:811 (7) - Distance from (6) is too large. It doesn't feel good with this AR. The best thing You can do, is move it to = x:128.
  1. 00:03:811 (8) - spacing = x:304.
  2. 00:05:811 (6) - spacing = x:136.
  3. 00:07:811 (7) - spacing = x:280.
  4. 00:09:686 (5) - spacing = x:152.
  5. 00:11:686 (5) - spacing = x:360.
  6. 00:13:686 (5) - spacing = x:440.
  7. 00:17:686 (5,6) - spacing = x:120.
  8. 00:19:686 (5,6) - spacing = x:392.
  9. 01:21:811 (6) - spacing = x:160.
  10. 01:23:811 (7) - spacing = x:392.
  11. 01:25:811 (6) - spacing = x:112.
  12. 01:27:811 (7) - spacing = x:296.

00:27:186 (2) - Maybe change a shape of this slider a little bit (more horizontal). After that, move (3) = x:192 a little further from (2). Imo current spacing is too small. With this change, pattern would be more interesting.
00:31:686 (3) - ^ but here move only (3) a little further from (2). It could be = x:264.
00:56:436 (5) - This jump is too big. Try to reduce the distance, really, move it to = x:104. There You still have a Dash, but smaller and easier, which is more correct (Dash).

Patterns are clear, nice diff.

Platter

00:01:686 (6,7) - Current pattern is not too intuitive. I suggest to do ctrl+g and x:160.
00:05:686 (7,8) - ^ = ctrl+g and x:168.
00:16:186 (1) - Maybe make it more movable? Replace this slider to notes. Player will stay at the one place, which is not very interesting.
(1) = x:272, (2) = x:296, (3) = x:312, (4) = x:296, (5) = x:272.

00:34:186 (5) - For me it would look better with a bigger space/break between (4) and (5). so... move it to = x:312.

I very like this style of mapping. It's clear and more readable, rest of the patterns is fine. So.. I didn't find more issues. Well done. ^w^

Rain

00:17:811 (7) - I don't like this space between (7) and (6). It feels weird. So, move it to = x:216. With this change, pattern looks more clearly.
00:44:436 (1) - I think You should change a shape of this slider. Can be confused for those Players, who want to get ''SS''. So, it could be more simple. Something like this? The pattern still willl be movable, but in easier form.

I didn't find more issues. Very interesting Rain. :D

Star for You! :arrow:


Topic Starter
mingmichael
samain tagsnya sama mapset gw aja ming, daripada ada yang protes nanti lel
uhh and this is actually an ending not opening. . .
yoyoy ganti `-` ribet kalo nanti sih anu dateng terus komplen tentang judul lagi wakakak
and ofc change the opening to be ending `-` sumpah lupa hahahahah keingetnya ending molo

gumenese...
lupe kalo ada yang req mod.. :3

*go to editing

EDIT : ditunda dulu mod'a
sowwy ada urusan mendadak.. o/ mungkin nnti malem atau besok pagi.. xD
Ja~
sante aja ngemodnya mo kapan aja boleh :Pyang penting ngemod ye wkwkwkw

Don't forget to go off senritsu's map for the metadata mingmichael... Or.. I... will.. hunt.. you.. down :D (TV Size) isn't correct.
hahahh sure, thanks lanturn! xDDD do not hunt meh down ;w; ww senritsu has told me before in her previous post (with indonesian) to change the title to be it hehee



Hi! Mod as requested. ^w^

General:

  1. Remove ''Widescreen Support''. You don't have SB. removed it
  2. Remove ''Letterbox during breaks''. There is no break. removed it too
  3. Imo Your preview point should start here: 00:39:436 It fits here perfectly.i think that 00:40:248 - is the best point to be started xD
  4. Would You like to change those default colours to custom ones? huahh changed this by myself xD

Cup

first of all, change HP to 3.

00:08:936 (2) - I suggest to change it to repeat slider (*with ctrl+g* x:256). Of course then delete (3). After that, move this short slider to = x:136. Final pattern should look like this. It could be more interesting pattern than the previous one. nice idea! but well it's not my mapping style actually xD and for the Cup, i try to make a easier pattern with same directions. yah for the example you can see that 00:08:436 (1,2,3) - has a same direction to left
00:17:936 (5) - What do You think to make here a longer slider. You need to delete (6) then. It would fit here better, because there is a pretty long voice sound. hmm well i will consider this again later. btw nice idea!
00:45:686 (2) - It feels too far away from previous slider (1). Try to reduce the distance (creating more certain/sure pattern for a player). moved to the left a bit~
01:13:186 (2) - It's an unnecessary thing I guess. Delete it and lengthen (1) slider. Something like this. It gives You an easier rhythm which is better for an easy difficulty. actually it follows the vocal which stops on 01:13:186 - and a constant beat on 01:13:311 - . so i used 1/2 slider there. well i keep mine here

Rest is fine. Nice and clear diff. ;3

Salad

First of all, change HP to 4. If You changed the previous one. Now it looks better (Cup - HP3, Salad - HP4, Platter - HP5, Rain - HP6). :)

00:01:811 (7) - Distance from (6) is too large. It doesn't feel good with this AR. The best thing You can do, is move it to = x:128.
Spacing things similar to the previous point ^
  1. 00:03:811 (8) - spacing = x:304.
  2. 00:05:811 (6) - spacing = x:136.
  3. 00:07:811 (7) - spacing = x:280.
  4. 00:09:686 (5) - spacing = x:152.
  5. 00:11:686 (5) - spacing = x:360.
  6. 00:13:686 (5) - spacing = x:440.
  7. 00:17:686 (5,6) - spacing = x:120.
  8. 00:19:686 (5,6) - spacing = x:392.
  9. 01:21:811 (6) - spacing = x:160.
  10. 01:23:811 (7) - spacing = x:392.
  11. 01:25:811 (6) - spacing = x:112.
  12. 01:27:811 (7) - spacing = x:296.
sorry about these. before i asked a mod, i have asked my friend (who are noob ctb) to play this and he could catch them notes. yeah actually those notes need a dash, but i have measure them and it's not hard to be catched. so sorry i keep mine here
00:27:186 (2) - Maybe change a shape of this slider a little bit (more horizontal). After that, move (3) = x:192 a little further from (2). Imo current spacing is too small. With this change, pattern would be more interesting. changed something by myself here :P
00:31:686 (3) - ^ but here move only (3) a little further from (2). It could be = x:264. nope and i didn't change the slider too >< well i don't like the different direction note like you suggested there and i prefer with the same direction for the slider with the note
00:56:436 (5) - This jump is too big. Try to reduce the distance, really, move it to = x:104. There You still have a Dash, but smaller and easier, which is more correct (Dash). sure!

Patterns are clear, nice diff.

Platter

00:01:686 (6,7) - Current pattern is not too intuitive. I suggest to do ctrl+g and x:160.
00:05:686 (7,8) - ^ = ctrl+g and x:168. hm let i consider these again later. nice idea btw
00:16:186 (1) - Maybe make it more movable? Replace this slider to notes. Player will stay at the one place, which is not very interesting.
(1) = x:272, (2) = x:296, (3) = x:312, (4) = x:296, (5) = x:272.
i have thought it before to make some movements by using C-shape stream xD but i think the stand pattern is nice there. so i keep mine here
Editor

While Playing

00:34:186 (5) - For me it would look better with a bigger space/break between (4) and (5). so... move it to = x:312. nah agree. moved it

I very like this style of mapping. It's clear and more readable, rest of the patterns is fine. So.. I didn't find more issues. Well done. ^w^

Rain

00:17:811 (7) - I don't like this space between (7) and (6). It feels weird. So, move it to = x:216. With this change, pattern looks more clearly. owh that jump xD well i agree with you about this, but let i consider about this again
00:44:436 (1) - I think You should change a shape of this slider. Can be confused for those Players, who want to get ''SS''. So, it could be more simple. Something like this? The pattern still willl be movable, but in easier form. agree. changed the slider by myself here :P

I didn't find more issues. Very interesting Rain. :D

Star for You! :arrow:


thanks a lot for the mods! they are really useful!
and btw i changed the HP (cup-salad-platter-rain) to be 4-5-6-7
Serena-
in-game request~

[Cup]
I can't mod this diff cuz i don't even know how to map Cups ;w;

[Salad]
00:27:186 (2) - how about deleting 00:27:686 (3) - this and finish the slider there? supposed to be easy :D
00:31:186 (2) - ^
00:40:811 (1) - im not sure what part you mapped here, but vocal ends here 00:41:061 - (just telling you xD i can't hear anything on the red tick) and same goes with 00:44:811 (1) - 00:52:811 (1) -
00:41:561 (3) - how about ctrl+(rotate 90 degrees counterclockwise), to make it the same as 00:40:811 (1,2) - and same goes with other same patterns xD
00:45:561 (3) - ^ and move 00:45:936 (4) - to x:80?

[Platter]
quite a calm song how about ar od 7.5?
00:07:686 (8,9) - make this a HD to make it same as 00:03:436 (6,7) -
looks good!

[Rain]
how about ar 8.5?
I didn't find any errors here but it really reminds me of the Platter diff(maybe thats why xD)

maybe change some patterns at the beginning xD




star cuz i don't think that my mod helped you xDD
Topic Starter
mingmichael
in-game request~

[Cup]
I can't mod this diff cuz i don't even know how to map Cups ;w;

[Salad]
00:27:186 (2) - how about deleting 00:27:686 (3) - this and finish the slider there? supposed to be easy :D
00:31:186 (2) - ^ ah nice idea! changes these
00:40:811 (1) - im not sure what part you mapped here, but vocal ends here 00:41:061 - (just telling you xD i can't hear anything on the red tick) and same goes with 00:44:811 (1) - 00:52:811 (1) - okay lets i explain this~ i made instrument-vocal-instrument-vocal pattern on the kiai part. first you can see from 00:40:436 - until 00:41:936 - . mostly the pattern follows the drum hits there. and the second from 00:42:436 - until 00:44:436 - follows the vocals with easy 1/2 patterns. and the next patterns will be instrument-vocal again until 01:12:436 - which the new part comes out~ i have decided to use these kind of patterns before i uploaded this, so i will keep this :P
00:41:561 (3) - how about ctrl+(rotate 90 degrees counterclockwise), to make it the same as 00:40:811 (1,2) - and same goes with other same patterns xD i think the current one is okay with a vertical slider xD
00:45:561 (3) - ^ and move 00:45:936 (4) - to x:80? keep mine here. it's a bit harsh to put it to x:80 IMO @@

[Platter]
quite a calm song how about ar od 7.5? nope :3 i just want to use a normal OD without coma ww
00:07:686 (8,9) - make this a HD to make it same as 00:03:436 (6,7) - they are different xD i used a HDash on 00:03:436 (6,7) - because (7)'s sound should be emphasize with the HDash. you can compare that sound with 00:07:811 (9) - :3
looks good!

[Rain]
how about ar 8.5? nope to :3 same reason like platter hihii
I didn't find any errors here but it really reminds me of the Platter diff(maybe thats why xD)

maybe change some patterns at the beginning xD yeah i used a similar pattern for the beginning part xD but platter has the easier pattern than rain




star cuz i don't think that my mod helped you xDD
thanks a lot for the mods and also the stars! xD
-[ Asuna ]-
GGOOOMMEENN...

Suuppppeerrr laaaaattteeeeeeeee....

m(_ _)m


[Cup]
00:14:436 (1) - remove reverse,jadiin dua slider aja ?
00:21:186 - bisa add note disini ?
01:07:436 (2,3,4) - slider ? sma kaya 01:06:436 (1) - atau.. malah 01:06:436 (1) - yang dipendekin trus kasih reverse ?
01:08:436 (5,1,2,3) - - hhmm.. menurutku imo'a boring.. coba ini
http://puu.sh/aj7eh/928c4ab495.jpg
01:12:811 (1,2) - gk fit buat cup.. remove (2) dan reverse (1) ? atau kaya 01:16:811 (1,2) -


[Salad]
00:01:061 - add note ? lupakan
00:01:811 (7) - entah ngapa part yang begini semua'a.. agak susah ditangkep.. udh space cuma 1/4, distance'a lebih jauh dari yang 1/2..
gk susah banget sih.. tapi mungkin pemula sering miss disini.. coba kurangi distance'a 1 grid (walaupun jadi gk butuh dash),kan pake small grid jadi kurang lebih 0.2x . atau renggangin distance antara (1,2,3,4,5,6) kaya dibagian akhir map
dibagian ini 4.3 kekananin 1 grid jadi 4.1 , coba terapin kesemua bagian yang seperti ini. pake distance'a 4.1-an lah
00:09:186 (1,2,3,4) - dan 00:10:436 (1,2,3,4) - gk fit ke music.. coba ini
00:13:436 (4) - x:312
00:15:436 (4) - ^ ini mirror kan :3
00:17:936 (6) - x:184 / 192
00:19:936 (6) - ^ mirror juga jadi ya samain deh.. (bukan tempat'a sama di x:184 ato 192,tapi distance'a)
00:20:936 (3) - vv
00:30:436 (1) - ctrl+g ?
00:34:436 (1) - x:416
00:59:936 (5) - slider better i guess :3
01:12:186 (4) - x:240

[Platter]
00:05:811 (8) - x:96
00:07:811 (9) - x:408 biar Hdash
00:08:811 - add note ?
00:18:311 (8) - x:7 dan miringin aja.. nnti Hdasg ke (1)
00:21:811 (5) - x:416
00:24:436 (1) - ctrl + g dan 00:25:186 (2) - ini juga.. jadi zigzag keluar bukan kedalem
00:26:061 (5,6) - 2 grid kekiri
00:27:186 (2) - ctrl + g
00:27:686 (3) - stack sama kepala
00:28:186 (5) - x:384
00:35:186 (2,3,5) - ^^
00:38:061 (4,5) - 2 grid kekanan
00:40:936 (2) - x:480
00:41:936 (7) - x:344
00:42:186 (8) - x:144
00:44:936 (2) - x:200
00:45:561 (5,6) - ctrl + g
00:48:936 (2) - x:16
00:49:186 (3,4) - x:200
00:49:561 (5,6) - x:336
00:49:936 (7) - ctrl + g
00:50:436 (1) - x;56
00:52:936 (2) - x:272
00:53:561 (5,6) - ctrl + g
00:53:936 (7) - x:232
00:54:561 (2,3) - x:104
00:56:936 (2) - :x:272
01:04:936 (2) - x:256
01:05:561 (5,6) - ctrl + g
01:05:936 (7) - x:296
01:08:936 (2) - x:504
01:10:561 (2,3) - 2 grid ke kanan
01:11:561 (2,3) - ^ kekiri
01:13:186 (5) - 90 derajat ?
01:21:561 - add note at x:176 ?

[Rain]
00:01:561 - note ?
00:05:061 - note ? rain banyak''kin combo.. ikutin rythme'a dengan detail ?karna gk ada overdose..
00:21:686 (4) - x:176
00:21:811 (5) - x:416 for Hdash
00:34:061 (6,7) - lurusin dulu (7)nya lalu move ke x:24
00:38:186 (6) - x:192 , 00:38:311 (7) - x:128
00:44:936 (2) - x:224 , 00:47:311 (3) - x;192
00:52:936 (2) - x:208
00:53:561 (5,6) - ctrl + g ?
00:54:811 (2) - ^
01:01:311 (5) - slider , trus hapus (6) , 01:01:686 (6) - x:432
01:00:311 (4,2,3,6,7,2,6,7) - pertama distance 2 grid , dan selanjut'a 3 grid


Yep.. Gomen gk punya banyak waktu.. xD
semoga membantu.. sowwy telat banget.. banyak urusan irl
good luck~ ming

EDIT : 500 Post \o/ rythme incarnate :v
Topic Starter
mingmichael
GGOOOMMEENN...

Suuppppeerrr laaaaattteeeeeeeee....

m(_ _)m


[Cup]
00:14:436 (1) - remove reverse,jadiin dua slider aja ? nope. yang skarang ini juga flow sama lagunya pake reverse slider
00:21:186 - bisa add note disini ? nopenope
01:07:436 (2,3,4) - slider ? sma kaya 01:06:436 (1) - atau.. malah 01:06:436 (1) - yang dipendekin trus kasih reverse ? nope btw itu juga ga harus sama .-.
01:08:436 (5,1,2,3) - - hhmm.. menurutku imo'a boring.. coba ini nope. yang skarang toh juga ga apa. yang penting sederhana lol
http://puu.sh/aj7eh/928c4ab495.jpg
01:12:811 (1,2) - gk fit buat cup.. remove (2) dan reverse (1) ? atau kaya 01:16:811 (1,2) - woke


[Salad]
00:01:061 - add note ? lupakan no note ahahha
00:01:811 (7) - entah ngapa part yang begini semua'a.. agak susah ditangkep.. udh space cuma 1/4, distance'a lebih jauh dari yang 1/2..
gk susah banget sih.. tapi mungkin pemula sering miss disini.. coba kurangi distance'a 1 grid (walaupun jadi gk butuh dash),kan pake small grid jadi kurang lebih 0.2x . atau renggangin distance antara (1,2,3,4,5,6) kaya dibagian akhir map
dibagian ini 4.3 kekananin 1 grid jadi 4.1 , coba terapin kesemua bagian yang seperti ini. pake distance'a 4.1-an lah nope. sengaja emang aku buat rada susah tangkep (ga susah juga sih). aku uda minta temen ku yang noob ctb banget (newbie sih lebih tepatnya) buat testplay, dan itu semua note2 dashnya ketangkep dan dia bilang jadi seru itu semua. oke aku coba kecilin dikit lagi deh distance antar note yang jump itu
00:09:186 (1,2,3,4) - dan 00:10:436 (1,2,3,4) - gk fit ke music.. coba ini ga fit? fit jelas koq itu wkwk. no changes
00:13:436 (4) - x:312
00:15:436 (4) - ^ ini mirror kan :3 iyup tapi no changes ww butuh jump
00:17:936 (6) - x:184 / 192 ah ga ga. distance dari note sebelomnya cukup jauh (terlebih sebelomnya itu 1/4)
00:19:936 (6) - ^ mirror juga jadi ya samain deh.. (bukan tempat'a sama di x:184 ato 192,tapi distance'a) ga mirror koq .-.
00:20:936 (3) - vv nope. yang skarang juga ga apa
00:30:436 (1) - ctrl+g ? ga bisa. harus searah sama (4) yang sebelomnya biar lebih ngeflow 00:30:186 (4,1) -
00:34:436 (1) - x:416 pindahin 00:34:186 (4) - ke x:284
00:59:936 (5) - slider better i guess :3 nope. at least disana harus ada 1/1 break
01:12:186 (4) - x:240 sengaja buat jump dash di 01:12:186 (4,5) -

[Platter]
00:05:811 (8) - x:96
00:07:811 (9) - x:408 biar Hdash
00:08:811 - add note ?
00:18:311 (8) - x:7 dan miringin aja.. nnti Hdasg ke (1)
00:21:811 (5) - x:416
00:24:436 (1) - ctrl + g dan 00:25:186 (2) - ini juga.. jadi zigzag keluar bukan kedalem
00:26:061 (5,6) - 2 grid kekiri
00:27:186 (2) - ctrl + g
00:27:686 (3) - stack sama kepala
00:28:186 (5) - x:384
00:35:186 (2,3,5) - ^^
00:38:061 (4,5) - 2 grid kekanan
00:40:936 (2) - x:480
00:41:936 (7) - x:344
00:42:186 (8) - x:144
00:44:936 (2) - x:200
00:45:561 (5,6) - ctrl + g
00:48:936 (2) - x:16
00:49:186 (3,4) - x:200
00:49:561 (5,6) - x:336
00:49:936 (7) - ctrl + g
00:50:436 (1) - x;56
00:52:936 (2) - x:272
00:53:561 (5,6) - ctrl + g
00:53:936 (7) - x:232
00:54:561 (2,3) - x:104
00:56:936 (2) - :x:272
01:04:936 (2) - x:256
01:05:561 (5,6) - ctrl + g
01:05:936 (7) - x:296
01:08:936 (2) - x:504
01:10:561 (2,3) - 2 grid ke kanan
01:11:561 (2,3) - ^ kekiri
01:13:186 (5) - 90 derajat ?
01:21:561 - add note at x:176 ? eh buset hahahaha ini ngemod atau remap? no changes btw

[Rain]
00:01:561 - note ?
00:05:061 - note ? rain banyak''kin combo.. ikutin rythme'a dengan detail ?karna gk ada overdose.. lah bukan berarti rain harus consist note banyak o.o untuk sekarang aku ga nambah/kurangin note satupun
00:21:686 (4) - x:176 it should be a jump with dash
00:21:811 (5) - x:416 for Hdash ga ada reason buat ngasih HDash disana, toh lagunya juga calm biasa2 aja (ga ada tekanan instrument yang keras atau suara apapun yang keras)
00:34:061 (6,7) - lurusin dulu (7)nya lalu move ke x:24 lah mana bisa, itu buat C-shape 4plets
00:38:186 (6) - x:192 , 00:38:311 (7) - x:128
00:44:936 (2) - x:224 , 00:47:311 (3) - x;192 egh no changes
00:52:936 (2) - x:208 lah harsh banget jumpnya itu ;_; keep mine here
00:53:561 (5,6) - ctrl + g ? ga bisa. mirror pattern sama 00:53:186 (3,4) -
00:54:811 (2) - ^ ga bisa banget (aku ga suka stream macem gitu juga lol). harus ngeflow searah yang di 00:54:436 (1,2,3) -
01:01:311 (5) - slider , trus hapus (6) , 01:01:686 (6) - x:432 slider again? nono
01:00:311 (4,2,3,6,7,2,6,7) - pertama distance 2 grid , dan selanjut'a 3 grid nope. skarang punya juga ga apa koq


Yep.. Gomen gk punya banyak waktu.. xD
semoga membantu.. sowwy telat banget.. banyak urusan irl
good luck~ ming

EDIT : 500 Post \o/ rythme incarnate :v
huehuehue thanks buat modnya xD
-[ Asuna ]-
weee.. beda map style ..
kalo nge-mod ribet.. xD
fun jump easy catch sama flow.. trlalu beda
:3 lol~
ma ii .. gomen gk terlalu membantooooo...
cevet cevet sih.. gk vunya vanyak waktu :v
terlalu sibuk irl Orz
Senritsu
No need to rush for a mod, it's not an assignment or anything that's a must. ^^
Dan karna orang punya style mapping yang berbeda (ofc), jangan samain mapping stylemu sama kaya mappernya.
Kita (modder), cuma cari yang menurut kita kurang pas di map itu, tapi itu bukan berarti bahwa semua yang nggak pas harus dibetulin.
Kita juga harus tau mappernya ngikutin apa, dan kita harus ikutin karna itu stylenya mereka,, bukan mapper yang ikutin moddernya. XDb
Topic Starter
mingmichael
yaps sependapat sama melo senritsu. ini hanya "mod" bukan pekerjaan yang wajib kita kerjain jadinya ga usa terburu2 :3
@senritsu : you gave me a star for my mapset but you didn't do it for yours ww and anyway thanks huehuee xD
Kurokami
Mod requested. o/

[Cup]

00:18:436 (6) - How about making this similar to (5) and place in a mirrored position?
00:40:436 (3,1) - To be honest this part would be better with two sliders. 1st: 00:40:436 - 00:40:811, 2nd: 00:41:061 - 00:41:311. Since the lyrics is something like Seno kaze and you placed the sliderstart to "no" which gives an awkward feeling.
00:49:311 (2,3,4) - There is nothing bad about this just giving a suggestion how make higher variety of rhythm. This can be converted into one long slider which is good for the easiest diff. :3 There are too many of these ( I counted 5) so it would be good to change some of them.
01:12:436 - The kiai should end here. There is nothing onward which needs to be hld.

Nice diff aside from these.

[Salad]

00:01:686 (6,7) - Its good to have jumps at these points but this is the start of the map so it should be a bit easier. Honestly I don't want to see 1/4s on easier diffs but for now it is really fitting so if you can move these closer a bit only at the beginning it would be nice. Seeing 1/4 is shocking enough for a starter player not speaking about the jumps.
00:20:936 (3) - Slider+circle combination would be better imo.

Thats all here. Again a nice diff.

[Platter]

01:06:936 (3) - Move this back to x344 would be nice. That way the pattern will be similar to a double triangle.
01:07:811 (2) - ^
01:23:686 (8,9) - This jump is completely breaks the flow. Yes, it can be fc'd but not really confortable to play it. Move closer to the previous not with a few grid please. (Same with the next similar one later.)

Nice work here too. Almost fc'd at first try but my jump was too short. orz Hard but not exactly at the same time and fits perfectly into the spread. :3

[Rain]

00:20:311 (7) - Unique bit since this is the only one of these kind on your map and it breaks the Flow a bit how about to make it vertical? I won't gives too much difference to the actual pattern but gives a more comfortable looking during play. And it will be consistent with 00:23:436 (6).
01:01:561 (6,7) - Move these to the left with a few grid. Its hard to handle a sudden distance change after all these jumps.
01:17:936 (6,7) - This one needs a very good timing. Move (7) one or two grid to the left to make it a little easier to catch.
01:27:686 (8,9) - Making the last HDash a little be higher is not bad since you don't need to move after it. x:32 for (9) would be good.

This diff is a bit stands out from the mapset with these jumps since you basically don't have HDash on Platter. Maybe it is fine but I would like to see one more diff between Platter/Rain and rename this to Overdose. Well, forget it. Good diff.
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I dunno if I really need to say something here. Nice spread and really ready for ranking from my point of view. Good luck and star. o/
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