This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, 02 November, 2014 at 01:05:05

Artist: 150P
Title: Shuuen no Shiori
Tags: IA vocaloid3 Bookmark of Demise Shuuen -Re:write- Suzumu Betsuto
BPM: 210
Filesize: 17131kb
Play Time: 03:44
Difficulties Available:

1. Betsu's Muzukashii (3.26 stars, 903 notes)
2. Betsu's Oni (4.25 stars, 1369 notes)
3. Demise (5.53 stars, 999 notes)
4. Hard (3 stars, 507 notes)
5. Insane (4.2 stars, 695 notes)
6. Normal (1.67 stars, 278 notes)

Download: 150P - Shuuen no Shiori
Download: 150P - Shuuen no Shiori (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Taiko map by Betsuto

Thanks to all people who helped this map!

Insane:
Maybe AR9 or higher 8s for insane? Could increase Demise AR to make difficulty in AR a more consistent rise.
Demise:
00:10:767 (1) - 00:15:339 (1) -
Make these slider designs more similar.
00:19:481 (4) -
Extend to 1 beat.
00:24:481 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
Weird flow, maybe try 00:24:481 (1) - Ctrl+Shift+R by -40 degrees CW and 00:25:481 (6) - Place lower
00:50:481 (7) -
Increase spacing
01:27:767 (1,2,3,4,5,1) -
Build towards center for the spinner
01:44:624 (1) -
Ctrl G or J
01:59:481 (1,2,3) -
Increase spacing
02:04:053 (1) -
Ctrl H
02:19:481 (5,6,7,8,9) -
Could make the curve of stream more gentle or place more above the hit circle before (02:19:339 (4))

So much overlapping, really interesting jumps. Fun.
Think of this as comments as you work on it. HF!

All:
Tags: bookmark of demise shuuen no shiori -re:write- IA 150P suzumu
00:01:767 - SVM 0.80
00:19:910 - SVM 1.00
00:47:481 - SVM 0.80
01:03:481 - SVM 1.00
01:51:481 - SVM 0.80
02:07:481 - SVM 1.00
02:47:481 - SVM 0.80
03:05:767 - SVM 1.00
Normal:
02:33:196 (1) - x: 256 y: 192

@Yopkyu: so useful~ overlap is beautiful ww
@yuminoyuki: fixed thing in normal. the rest seems I don't understand orz
thanks all o/

Welcome back, Yasora^^

gokugohan12468 wrote:

Welcome back, Yasora^^

ohai~

nice map
gogogo

Hi, didn't notice you were doing M4M with me.. So here i am!


Didn't like the song much, but i must commit my queue rules. So i modded it~ Cool mappings you have there!

Mei wrote:

[Demise]

1. 00:17:624 (1,2,3) - this plays better for me
   
   Picture

   
2. 00:19:053 (2,3,4) - how about this, it will make tthe map more jumpy :3 nice but I want end (3) in white tick XD
   
   Picture

   
3. 00:30:339 (6,1) - swap NC
   
4. 00:33:339 (3,4,5) - 5>3>4 is better not really understand but I guess I will try to change position
   
5. 00:38:481 (2) - move to x232 y128. it makes a better flow for me and a same distance jump there
   
6. 00:56:553 (2) - i suggest remove this note
   
7. 01:14:196 (4) - move to x260 y152
   
8. 02:19:339 (4) - move to x236 y312 weird to look for me orz
   
9. 03:41:196 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - make a jump there? such as tthis
   
   Picture

   

[Insane]

• 
  silly suggestion: try ar 8.5? how to do that D:

1. 00:14:624 (6) - this is overmapped and you should place a note in 00:14:767 eh.. just want to follow vocal ;;
   
2. 00:18:624 (4,5) - try this?
   
   Picture

   
3. 00:26:767 (1) - ctrl+g
   
4. 00:31:053 (7) - change to 1/1 slider but i don't want ignore drum sound..
   
5. 00:37:624 (2) - ctrl+g
   
6. 01:03:410 (2) - remove this and stack 1 to 2's head

nice map
gogogo

Gray Veyron wrote:

Hi, didn't notice you were doing M4M with me.. So here i am! sorry I forgot to write it in my mod lol

[> General <]

1. Remove "Shuuen" from tags, It's already on the Title. ik but the name album is like that so if I remove it will weird though
2. Title in "Demise" diff is Unresembled. uh..

[> Normal <]

1. 00:03:910 (3) - Uncurve a bit like the next or the previous slider.
2. 00:10:767 (1) - Curve for (a bit of) symmetry. > http://puu.sh/9P9h9/ceabbdd4ef.png
3. 00:27:196 (4,5) - It's kinda boring when staying on one place, try moving these two somewhere.
4. 00:40:910 (4) - Same as 00:10:767 (1) - nah, i want it reflected (3) hehe
5. 00:45:481 (1,2) - Straighty, mind you try this? > http://puu.sh/9P9I7/d8c292b6e7.png
6. 00:53:767 (4) - A little curve on this slider. still wanna reflected with (2)
7. 01:23:481 (4) - I thought you add clap on 1/4 white line, so what does this clap do here? remove it.
8. 02:00:624 (1) - Keep it's placement and curve it to blanket the circle on 02:01:481 (2) -
9. 02:28:624 (4) - Same as 01:23:481 (4) -
10. 03:38:624 (2) - Same as 00:03:910 (3) - seems boring if it curve
11. - The first part is modded so do the same thing on the part you copy-pasted.

[> Hard <]

1. 00:13:624 (3) - Blanket on the next circle? Keep it's placement but curve more. wanna do that but the beat 1/1 and the place is cramped
2. 00:16:910 (2,3,4) - The flow is strange here, at least curve the (3) slider.
3. 00:18:053 (5,6) - Same as i mentioned on Normal diff, It's kinda boring this year, even on (old) ranked maps as well. X''D
4. 00:26:767 (1) - Curve like the next slider.
5. 00:45:196 (1,2) - Uncurve or curve one of these sliders for better flowing. > http://puu.sh/9Pc2C/cbc797ff7e.png
6. 01:00:053 (1) - Same as 00:26:767 (1) - want to keep it like that
7. 01:20:481 (4) - Second dot of slider should be on x:476|y:296. no ;A;
8. 01:22:767 (3) - Move this slider to x:304|y:100 for symmetry with the previous slider.
9. 02:08:767 (1,2,1,2) - Lack of straight repeating sliders, curve one of them at least.
10. 02:53:053 (1) - Curve the slider with the next one for symmetry.
11. 03:11:339 (4,5) - Stacking here on a rhythm won't make sense with it. Unstack them or make symmetry between them.
12. 03:23:767 (6,1) - I prefer this rhythm here. > http://puu.sh/9Pc3A/64ea930360.png fix it with my way
13. - Nothing more to say in this diff.

[> Insane <]

1. 00:08:196 (7,1) - Make (1) blanketing (7)'s tail?
2. 00:25:196 (3) - Curve a bit. that's already a bit imo
3. 00:27:196 (2) - ^, for symmetry with 00:27:339 (3) -
4. 00:57:481 (4) - Reverse Selection?
5. 01:28:053 (2,3,4) - DS just differed here, is this on purpose? yeah just make it more easier
6. 01:40:910 (4) - Curve to make a half blanketed on 01:41:624 (6) -
7. 01:42:339 (1,2) - Swap NC. i follow long white tick
8. 02:01:481 (4) - Same as 00:57:481 (4) - Copy-paste, eh?
9. 03:38:196 (2) - Same as 00:25:196 (3) -
10. - I'll just say about this diff Great to avoid abusing. But seriously, it's a great diff to play!!

Didn't like the song much, but i must commit my queue rules. So i modded it~ Cool mappings you have there!

the rest are fixed
thanks both of you!

hold shift when you change your ar
surprise \^^/

Mei wrote:

hold shift when you change your ar
surprise \^^/

ic ic XD

edit: hey thanks for star!

The gap between hard and insane seems pretty big,

you might want to change the settings by using more precise decimal settings to narrow that gap.

Hi yasora. Here my mod cause you did M4M with this map MikitoP - Yonjuunana / 47 ·w·)
if you don't understand, feel free to ask me in game.
amg shuuenpro songs www

another long mod, but i don't know if this useful enough.
sorry if this mod didn't meet your expectations.
Goodluck!

blackabyss wrote:

Hi yasora. Here my mod cause you did M4M with this map MikitoP - Yonjuunana / 47 ·w·)
if you don't understand, feel free to ask me in game.
amg shuuenpro songs www

[General]

1. maybe add vocaloid3 cause IA is vocaloid 03?

[Normal]

1. feels like easy www
2. 00:26:584 (4) - x208 y64
3. 00:40:053 (3) - i think remove it cause imo, a bit off. and put a note here - 00:40:339 - but try to follow fast vocal in here ugu
4. 00:42:910 - add note here?
5. 01:01:196 - ^
6. 01:01:481 (1,2) - swap NC
7. 01:14:910 - add note?
8. 01:16:624 - ^
9. 01:56:910 - ^
10. 03:02:624 - ^
11. 03:14:910 - ^
12. 03:16:624 - ^
    added some notes by myself '3'

[Hard]

1. just my two cents, i think your SV too slow. maybe you can change it to 1.30/1.40
   or you can change the DS to 1.2x hmhm sure :''3
2. too easy for hard btw :'3
   Combo thingy:
3. 01:11:339 (5) - NC
4. 01:15:910 (5) - ^
5. 01:20:481 (4) - ^
6. 01:23:196 (4) - ^
7. 02:18:767 (1) - ^
8. 02:21:053 (4) - ^
9. 03:15:910 (4) - ^
10. 03:20:481 (4) - ^
11. 03:22:767 (1) - ^
    nothing change in here cuz if I do that combo seems will too short orz
    
    Flow, patterns & placements:
12. 00:05:481 (6) - try this? http://puu.sh/9RTFX/e8cf7bf39b.JPG
13. 00:07:053 (4,1) - too far imo nah I don't think so
14. 00:16:339 (7,1) - you can stack 7 above slide 1 no
15. just tips for using slider curve in this diff. after curve, you can make a straight slider/almost straight slider with a bit curve e.g: - 00:13:053 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/9RTJv/87f9437b36.JPG or stack like that - 00:14:196 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/9RTLb/ef2aa8c6cb.JPG easy to read i think c: (as like the part after first kiai) thanks for suggestion but I will leave it like that for now :3
16. 01:22:767 (3) - x296 y104 I change it by myself lol sorry (since try using 1.2x spacing)
17. 01:50:196 (3) - move 2 to the left ^
18. 02:33:339 (2) - http://puu.sh/9RTPr/79e4816e3e.JPG ? ^
19. 03:28:910 (4) - mind to check this out? http://puu.sh/9RTQU/3850d4e91d.JPG
20. 03:35:767 (2) - curve this slider a bit?
    
    Rhythm, beats & hitsounds:
21. 00:04:339 (3) - i think this should be like this :' http://puu.sh/9RTRW/3fcb379f72.JPG sure but i want (4) is reverse slider :3
22. 00:05:481 (7) - if you like, this slider can started here - 00:05:624 - nah
23. 00:15:339 (4) - finish on the head? too loud imo
24. 01:37:767 (1) - ^ ^
25. 02:53:053 (1) - this should be started here - 02:53:196 - and make this slider 1/1 with reverse but if I start slider at there will be weird to click since piano sound start from red tick

[Insane]

• Combo thingy:

1. 00:18:767 (5,1) - swap NC no cuz (5) -> (1) is jump
2. 00:50:767 (4) - NC I guess better add in next one
3. 00:51:481 (1) - remove NC
4. 01:00:053 (5) - NC nah
5. 01:03:910 (1) - remove NC
6. 01:04:481 (6,1) - swap NC nn,, no
7. 01:54:767 (4) - NC same as before
8. 01:55:481 (1) - remove NC
9. 01:59:339 (6,1) - swap NC no
10. 02:01:767 (5) - NC ^
11. 02:06:339 (5) - ^ ^
12. 02:07:339 (1,2) - swap NC nah (7) -> (1) is jump
13. 02:07:910 (1) - remove NC
14. 02:08:481 (6) - NC nc in next one
15. 02:25:624 (1) - ^ no
16. 02:57:624 (5,1) - swap NC ^
17. 03:01:053 (5,1) - swap NC ^
18. 03:11:339 (5) - NC ^
19. 03:20:481 (6) - ^ ^
20. 03:34:196 (4,1) - swap NC ^
21. 03:36:481 (5,1) - ^ ^
22. 03:37:624 (6,1) - ^
23. 03:38:767 (6,1) - ^
24. 03:39:910 (5) - NC
    sry for nc abuse orz orz
    
    Flow, patterns & placements:
25. 00:30:624 (6) - make this slider curve abit like this? http://puu.sh/9RTEP/e21f6134f5.JPG
26. 00:33:196 (3,4) - make better blanket
27. 00:34:624 (5,1) - ^ imo that's already good..
28. 00:38:767 (2) - nudge this slider tail 3 to the left
29. just some blanket minor issue, please re-check for better improvement blanket.
30. 01:34:624 (6) - same as - 00:30:624 (6) -
31. 02:18:481 (4) - make this slider straight or you can turn it into curve slider?
32. 03:41:196 (1,2) - replace slider 1 with copyed slider 2 and then ctrl+g? same shape is bored orz
    
    Rhythm, beats & hitsounds:
33. 00:15:339 (1) - finish on the head? no
34. 01:04:481 (1) - ^ ^
35. 02:51:910 (1) - ^ ^
36. 03:42:339 - consider to add spinner here until - 03:45:767 -

[Demise]

• Combo thingy:

1. 00:48:339 (1) - remove NC jump and for variation(?)
2. 00:48:624 (7,1) - swap NC ^
3. 00:49:196 (1) - remove NC no
4. 00:52:910 (1) - ^ ^
5. 00:53:196 (7,1) - swap NC ^
6. 00:53:767 (1) - remove NC ^
7. 02:07:053 (1) - ^ jump
8. 03:02:910 (1) - remove NC? for 1,2,3 pattern
9. 03:28:481 (4,1) - swap NC
10. 03:31:910 (1,2) - ^ no
11. 03:32:339 (1) - remove NC ^
12. 03:32:624 - NC? ^
    
    Flow, patterns & placements:
13. 00:05:767 (6,7,8) - try this for better flow? http://puu.sh/9RTkG/e514846015.JPG
14. 00:17:624 (1) - http://puu.sh/9RTra/caa52dffc5.JPG too curve I guess
15. 00:45:196 (1) - move this slider tail point 3 to the left
16. 01:11:339 (1,2) - i think slider 1 should be copyed from slider 2 and ctrl+g nah
17. 01:32:481 (2,3) - blanket this? already but.. orz
18. 01:50:267 (1,2) - try this? http://puu.sh/9RTvX/7ff83c3702.JPG
    
    Rhythm, beats & hitsounds:
19. 01:37:767 (3) - finish on the head? nah
20. 02:07:767 (2) - ^ ^

another long mod, but i don't know if this useful enough.
sorry if this mod didn't meet your expectations.
Goodluck!

thanks for mod and star :3!

Tari wrote:

The gap between hard and insane seems pretty big,

you might want to change the settings by using more precise decimal settings to narrow that gap.

try to increasing setting by 0.5 but.. seems still same orz

hi ! From there t/221655 !



Normal

01:40:339 (2) - Move this one a little top left, close to the violets notes before

02:27:481 (2) - Space this one and the next slider

And you should add an orange combo color to fit with the oranges/red scenes, instead of the green combo ^^

I can't mod higher difficulties when i can't even play them so .. Bye, and sorry for the short work :/

Hegatrek wrote:

hi ! From there t/221655 !

Normal

01:40:339 (2) - Move this one a little top left, close to the violets notes before yea spacing error xD

02:27:481 (2) - Space this one and the next slider I don't understand ;A;

And you should add an orange combo color to fit with the oranges/red scenes, instead of the green combo ^^ I will think again later

I can't mod higher difficulties when i can't even play them so .. Bye, and sorry for the short work :/

thank you :3

Yasora wrote:

I don't understand ;A;

These two are too close

Hi from my queue


Normal

02:37:410 - break time should be at 02:38:196 like this

03:42:339 (1) - spinner should end at 03:51:481



Hard

00:28:624 (1,2,3) - I think do like this is better to follow the rhythm

02:37:410 - break time should be at 02:38:196 like this

03:42:339 (1) - spinner should end at 03:51:481



Insane

02:37:410 - break time should be at 02:38:196 like this

03:22:481 (4) - convert the slider to stream to follow the rhythm
03:42:339 (1) - spinner should end at 03:51:481



Demise

01:55:124 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - It's look like overmapped, i think do like this is better

02:37:410 - break time should be at 02:38:196 like this


Nice map!

Good luck

- H i N a - wrote:

Hi from my queue


Normal

02:37:410 - break time should be at 02:38:196 like this

SPOILER

03:42:339 (1) - spinner should end at 03:51:481



Hard

00:28:624 (1,2,3) - I think do like this is better to follow the rhythm

SPOILER

02:37:410 - break time should be at 02:38:196 like this

SPOILER

03:42:339 (1) - spinner should end at 03:51:481



Insane

02:37:410 - break time should be at 02:38:196 like this

SPOILER

03:22:481 (4) - convert the slider to stream to follow the rhythm i know, but seems I want it more easier (:3 for me
03:42:339 (1) - spinner should end at 03:51:481



Demise

01:55:124 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - It's look like overmapped, i think do like this is better I change it with another way :3

SPOILER

02:37:410 - break time should be at 02:38:196 like this

SPOILER

Nice map!

Good luck

thanks for mod!

Came as requested.

General:

-You have Widescreen Support on in Normal/Hard/Insane, but not in Demise. Since you don't use an Storyboard, you should disable it on every diff.

Hard/Insane/Demise:

-During Kiai you have several whistles around there. You should remove them (honestly, I don't think they fit).
-Insane was (for me) your best one.

...that's all (too few ). Quite nice map you got there!

LixRei wrote:

Came as requested.

General:

-You have Widescreen Support on in Normal/Hard/Insane, but not in Demise. Since you don't use an Storyboard, you should disable it on every diff. ok

Hard/Insane/Demise:

-During Kiai you have several whistles around there. You should remove them (honestly, I don't think they fit). I try to following lyrics in here ;w;
-Insane was (for me) your best one.

...that's all (too few ). Quite nice map you got there!

thank you!

[-Sophie-] wrote:

[Normal]
00:30:910 - Add Note here um,, I think it will too much circles in there
03:41:481 - Sounds off following drum sound
[Hard]
00:04:624 (4) - Sounds off following vocal 'nii' thing
01:23:767 - Stream sounds weird imo it's not but may change if another modder mention this again
01:28:196 - Remove the slider, move spinner over sounds weird 2 me orz
02:28:910 (3) - Stream sounds weird same as before
02:33:339 - Remove the slider, move spinner over ^
03:23:767 -Stream sounds weird ^
03:32:339 - Shouldn't be a reverse slider changed into circles
[Insane]
00:05:339 (1,2) - Replace this with stream nah..
00:29:053 (4,5) - Just make the reverse here want 2 add a bit stream in here
02:48:053 - Shouldn't lead to other slider for better flow imo
[Demise]
Looks ok!

thanks for mod!

Hi! Mod from my queue!

General:
There is nothing wrong with the mapset as I can see, however I would suggest you to change the red color, it blends too much with the background.

Combo colors must not blend in with the map's background/storyboard/video.

Normal:

The mod for this difficulty will probably be kind of nazi sorry about that, but in my opinion that's one of the ways how you could improve this difficulty :3

00:01:767 (1,2) - this doesn't look nice, try to improve the blanket, middle point: x:232 y:280, end point: x:216 y:232 (for 00:02:767 (2) - this slider) - http://puu.sh/9XGEk/cb9ade2e4c.jpg (afterwards you'll have to replace 00:03:481 (3) - a little bit)
00:03:481 (3,1) - same as above ^ - http://puu.sh/9XHmm/9d6cb3b6fe.jpg
00:14:339 (1,2) - same ^ middle point: x:408 y:84 - end point: x:476 y:84 (for slider (1)) then replace 00:15:481 (2) - a little bit because of the distance
00:27:196 (4,5) - ^ 00:27:767 (5) - end point: x:40 y:100
01:06:624 (2,3,4) - ^ 01:07:196 (3) - middle point: x:140 y:304 - end point: x:208 y:292 - http://puu.sh/9XHI4/fa28a27546.jpg
01:10:053 (1) - add finish to the beginning of the slider, it will fit better because there is a finish sound in the music too
01:11:767 (2) - move the end point of the slider to x:296 y:60 the blanket will look nicer
02:15:196 (1) - add finish to the beginning of the slider, same reason as 01:10:053 (1) -
02:53:767 (2,3) - improve the blanket 02:55:481 (3) - move the middle point of the slider to: x:160 y:116 - end point to x:224 y:84 - http://puu.sh/9XIcR/4c149b389a.jpg
03:10:053 (1,2) - same as above ^ 03:10:053 (1) - move the end point of the slider to x:312 y:312 - http://puu.sh/9XIjQ/f36a483a87.jpg
03:32:624 (1) - I think you could make this look nicer, and also because of the standard ranking criteria

Slider anchors/nodes must not be used to manipulate slider speeds

it would be safer to change this a little bit, an example - http://puu.sh/9XKog/ed557c4768.jpg or maybe http://puu.sh/9XKLM/3dc338d1c5.jpg
03:35:196 (4) - add finish to the beginning of the slider because there is a finish sound in the music too

Hard:
00:02:624 (3) - this would feel better to play if you replaced it here 00:02:481 - because of the vocals
00:03:767 (1) - same as above ^ replace it here 00:03:624 (1) - because of the vocals, I know there is something in the music so that's why you put those notes there, but imo it really plays better if you follow the vocals there especially because 00:02:767 (4,2) - these 2 notes will get a bigger emphasis
00:02:767 (4,2) - add finish to the beginning of both sliders, the music also has these loud sounds so it will fit
00:05:053 (5) - same as above ^ add finish because of the same reason
00:07:339 (1,1,1) - same for these ^
00:11:767 (4,1) - this feels weird to play in my opinion, why don't you try something like this? http://puu.sh/9XSQz/6dfb8b7d1a.jpg - it feels a lot better to play imo
00:34:910 (4,5,6) - I think this plays better and it follows the vocals better as well - http://puu.sh/9XYgt/69f810e671.jpg
00:49:481 (5,1) - small thing but you could make this look nicer - http://puu.sh/9Y91t/8e2bd43a87.jpg
01:07:339 (4,5) - this plays a little weird, maybe because you start the slider on the red tick, maybe you could try this - http://puu.sh/9Y9iv/2450d1502b.jpg or this - http://puu.sh/9Y9ne/2e4009cd45.jpg
02:05:196 (1,2) - again small thing but you could make this look nicer - http://puu.sh/9Y9Az/9f87bb55d2.jpg
02:09:196 (2,1,2) - I think you could improve the flow here because of this http://puu.sh/9Y9Ie/748a09894b.jpg - so I would suggest you to do something like this - http://puu.sh/9Y9KR/0d063beee0.jpg - http://puu.sh/9Y9P7/9318cb066f.jpg
02:21:767 (6,1) - again a small thing but this would look nicer if (6) and (1) didn't reach like this: http://puu.sh/9Y9VM/a61c547258.jpg and afterwards you can just change 02:22:910 (3) - accordingly --> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1787376
02:32:910 (1,2) - again nazi stuff but you can also make this look nicer: http://puu.sh/9Yadj/727c2db2ff.jpg
02:50:624 (6) - this is similar to what I have said at the beginning, put it here 02:50:481 - it follows the vocals better (and this part isn't so loud anyway so following the vocals would be better in my opinion)
03:28:196 - add hit circle? it might play better, it follow the vocals better so it won't feel empty
03:30:624 (4) - you should shorten this slider because there is a big beat in the middle of the slider that you don't hit and it feels weird to play, try a reverse slider maybe? - http://puu.sh/9YaMo/bcd1511067.jpg or this - http://puu.sh/9YaRZ/9e5d1c6caa.jpg
03:39:910 (1) - add finish to the beginning of the slider, it fits to the song
03:41:767 (6) - this is confusing and it would also fit better if you added a hit circle instead of the last repeat because it plays better and there is a big beat that should be emphasized with a hit circle - http://puu.sh/9Yb1h/0f20df1b4b.jpg (and add finish to the hit circle)

Insane:

00:21:481 (2) - this is only my opinion but while playing this confused me, so unstack it? http://puu.sh/9YcwI/dae11cf7df.jpg - I think it will still flow nicely and it won't be confusing, but of course it's an insane so "confusing" is not that big of a reason, it's up to you
00:34:910 (6) - add new combo because this feels like it's similar to 00:36:053 (1) - but you didn't place a nc so to make it consistent I would recommend to add nc
01:33:196 (1,2) - nazi but blanket could be improved here - http://puu.sh/9Yd5E/148496128f.jpg
02:06:339 (5) - why don't you shorten this and add a hit circle? it will fit better to the vocals, and this is an insane anyway so it's not a problem and you can also hear a beat in the music in the middle of the slider, so it will fit nicely imo :3 - http://puu.sh/9Ydma/e003db72c8.jpg
02:10:624 (4,1) - I personally don't really like the flow here because - http://puu.sh/9YdZF/c9fbde6bb6.jpg - so you could try a little bit different pattern maybe? well just an example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1787500 and http://puu.sh/9Yeei/0d56b68839.jpg
03:01:910 (3) - nazi again but put this a few grids down to make it a nicer blanket - http://puu.sh/9Yerj/1fcf8f4c79.jpg
03:41:910 (4) - try this http://puu.sh/9YeBn/3682bd6796.jpg - it feels better to play because the music has a loud sound there which should be emphasized with a hit circle and not with a slider end, it feels good to hit it (also add finish to the hit circle)

Hitsounds:
That's all for insane, it's a pretty nice diff, I enjoyed playing it!

Demise:
00:26:767 (1,2) - this doesn't look nice imo (in my opinion) so try to place it differently, example: http://puu.sh/9YhVc/046def9d69.jpg
00:41:767 (1) - this would flow better imo if it had a different direction, like this: http://puu.sh/9Yi5w/2f81c2af52.jpg
02:12:767 (6,1) - try to avoid overlaps like this, they don't look nice imo >.< this looks a lot better :3 http://puu.sh/9YiEY/3959db9a22.jpg
02:56:410 - add hit circle? there is a soft but fast sound in the music, so I think adding a hit circle here would fit pretty well
02:59:839 - same as above ^ add hit circle
03:47:196 (2,3) - I this doesn't flow well, so I would suggest this - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1787658 - because http://puu.sh/9YjbV/49180439c5.jpg --> http://puu.sh/9YjfG/3eb0833031.jpg

Hitsounds:

I can't really say anything else about this difficulty, I'm too noob to play it X_X

I hope my mod will be helpful, good luck!

Heey~ From my queue

[General]
I think Insane with 4.2 stars to suddenly jump to an extra of 5.5 is too big o-o Just my 2 cents so yea

[Hard]
00:15:339 (4) - bend towards the left instead of right?
00:17:624 (4) - Curve this more
00:26:767 (1,2) - ^
01:37:767 (1) - quite a jump even for hard
02:09:767 (1) - Ctrl + G
02:16:481 (4) - Why not curve this?
02:23:339 (4) - ^
02:23:767 (5) - not mirror with 02:22:910 (3) -
02:27:910 (1) - not perfect
02:57:624 (4) - Curve inside (left)?
02:59:910 (4) - curve this maybe
03:08:339 (2,3,4) - keep the same ds
03:30:624 (4) - NC here instead?
03:31:196 (1) - so no nc here if u take ^
03:34:196 (3) - curve more?
03:42:339 (1) - this is pretty short..

[Insane]
00:58:196 (6) - stack with 00:56:339 (5) -
01:09:053 (1) - shape looks awkward
01:40:910 (4) - ctrl + g?
01:42:339 (1) - curve more?
01:43:481 (1) - ^
01:49:767 (3) - Ctrl + G
01:54:481 (3) - unnecessary overlap
02:02:624 (8) - Ctrl + G
02:17:624 (1) - end this further up http://puu.sh/9YjDS/3d95b7b348.jpg
02:18:767 (1) - sth like this? http://puu.sh/9Yk0k/6a44850f9e.jpg
02:47:481 (1) - Music gets softer here so u could slow down SV to 0.75x or sth?
02:53:481 (1,2,3) - Not parallel
02:49:624 (1) - blanket
02:52:339 (2,4) - ^
03:03:767 (2) - Ctrl + G
03:15:481 (3) - ^
03:42:339 (1) - a bit short

[Demise]
00:02:767 (1) - curve more
00:06:910 (3) - (44,44) or sth?
00:08:053 (3) - (160, 352) ? ^ (these 2 are just suggestions)
00:09:624 (1) - blanket?
00:19:053 (2,4) - put it somewhere like (296, 192) and blanket with 00:19:196 (3) -
00:23:339 (1) - Ctrl + G
00:36:339 (2,4,5,6) - weird shape.
00:41:767 (1) - blanket
01:05:053 (7,8,9) - Ctrl + G
01:06:767 (1) - blanket more
01:07:910 (1) - ^
01:09:053 (1) - ^
01:52:481 (6) - crooked shape (and stack with 01:53:696 (7) -) so (448,240)
02:07:767 (2) - Ctrl + G
02:14:196 (1) - curve more?
02:54:196 (1) - blanket this more
03:10:481 (2) - put in middle? (256, 192)
03:20:481 (1) - not good mirror of 03:20:767 (2) - (Ctrl + >)
03:51:481 (3) - Don't think you need this

Fun jumps ^^ GL with ur map!

Mystyk wrote:

Hi! Mod from my queue!

General:
There is nothing wrong with the mapset as I can see, however I would suggest you to change the red color, it blends too much with the background.

Combo colors must not blend in with the map's background/storyboard/video.

Normal:

The mod for this difficulty will probably be kind of nazi sorry about that, but in my opinion that's one of the ways how you could improve this difficulty :3

00:01:767 (1,2) - this doesn't look nice, try to improve the blanket, middle point: x:232 y:280, end point: x:216 y:232 (for 00:02:767 (2) - this slider) - http://puu.sh/9XGEk/cb9ade2e4c.jpg (afterwards you'll have to replace 00:03:481 (3) - a little bit)
00:03:481 (3,1) - same as above ^ - http://puu.sh/9XHmm/9d6cb3b6fe.jpg
00:14:339 (1,2) - same ^ middle point: x:408 y:84 - end point: x:476 y:84 (for slider (1)) then replace 00:15:481 (2) - a little bit because of the distance
00:27:196 (4,5) - ^ 00:27:767 (5) - end point: x:40 y:100
01:06:624 (2,3,4) - ^ 01:07:196 (3) - middle point: x:140 y:304 - end point: x:208 y:292 - http://puu.sh/9XHI4/fa28a27546.jpg
01:10:053 (1) - add finish to the beginning of the slider, it will fit better because there is a finish sound in the music too
01:11:767 (2) - move the end point of the slider to x:296 y:60 the blanket will look nicer
02:15:196 (1) - add finish to the beginning of the slider, same reason as 01:10:053 (1) -
02:53:767 (2,3) - improve the blanket 02:55:481 (3) - move the middle point of the slider to: x:160 y:116 - end point to x:224 y:84 - http://puu.sh/9XIcR/4c149b389a.jpg
03:10:053 (1,2) - same as above ^ 03:10:053 (1) - move the end point of the slider to x:312 y:312 - http://puu.sh/9XIjQ/f36a483a87.jpg
03:32:624 (1) - I think you could make this look nicer, and also because of the standard ranking criteria

Slider anchors/nodes must not be used to manipulate slider speeds

it would be safer to change this a little bit, an example - http://puu.sh/9XKog/ed557c4768.jpg or maybe http://puu.sh/9XKLM/3dc338d1c5.jpg
03:35:196 (4) - add finish to the beginning of the slider because there is a finish sound in the music too

Hard:
00:02:624 (3) - this would feel better to play if you replaced it here 00:02:481 - because of the vocals changed it with slider
00:03:767 (1) - same as above ^ replace it here 00:03:624 (1) - because of the vocals, I know there is something in the music so that's why you put those notes there, but imo it really plays better if you follow the vocals there especially because 00:02:767 (4,2) - these 2 notes will get a bigger emphasis
00:02:767 (4,2) - add finish to the beginning of both sliders, the music also has these loud sounds so it will fit buutt I want it only whistle in this part xD
00:05:053 (5) - same as above ^ add finish because of the same reason ^
00:07:339 (1,1,1) - same for these ^ ^
00:11:767 (4,1) - this feels weird to play in my opinion, why don't you try something like this? http://puu.sh/9XSQz/6dfb8b7d1a.jpg - it feels a lot better to play imo
00:34:910 (4,5,6) - I think this plays better and it follows the vocals better as well - http://puu.sh/9XYgt/69f810e671.jpg
00:49:481 (5,1) - small thing but you could make this look nicer - http://puu.sh/9Y91t/8e2bd43a87.jpg
01:07:339 (4,5) - this plays a little weird, maybe because you start the slider on the red tick, maybe you could try this - http://puu.sh/9Y9iv/2450d1502b.jpg or this - http://puu.sh/9Y9ne/2e4009cd45.jpg
02:05:196 (1,2) - again small thing but you could make this look nicer - http://puu.sh/9Y9Az/9f87bb55d2.jpg
02:09:196 (2,1,2) - I think you could improve the flow here because of this http://puu.sh/9Y9Ie/748a09894b.jpg - so I would suggest you to do something like this - http://puu.sh/9Y9KR/0d063beee0.jpg - http://puu.sh/9Y9P7/9318cb066f.jpg
02:21:767 (6,1) - again a small thing but this would look nicer if (6) and (1) didn't reach like this: http://puu.sh/9Y9VM/a61c547258.jpg and afterwards you can just change 02:22:910 (3) - accordingly --> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1787376
02:32:910 (1,2) - again nazi stuff but you can also make this look nicer: http://puu.sh/9Yadj/727c2db2ff.jpg nn, will keep it like this tehe
02:50:624 (6) - this is similar to what I have said at the beginning, put it here 02:50:481 - it follows the vocals better (and this part isn't so loud anyway so following the vocals would be better in my opinion) change it reverse slider :3
03:28:196 - add hit circle? it might play better, it follow the vocals better so it won't feel empty
03:30:624 (4) - you should shorten this slider because there is a big beat in the middle of the slider that you don't hit and it feels weird to play, try a reverse slider maybe? - http://puu.sh/9YaMo/bcd1511067.jpg or this - http://puu.sh/9YaRZ/9e5d1c6caa.jpg
03:39:910 (1) - add finish to the beginning of the slider, it fits to the song
03:41:767 (6) - this is confusing and it would also fit better if you added a hit circle instead of the last repeat because it plays better and there is a big beat that should be emphasized with a hit circle - http://puu.sh/9Yb1h/0f20df1b4b.jpg (and add finish to the hit circle)

Insane:

00:21:481 (2) - this is only my opinion but while playing this confused me, so unstack it? http://puu.sh/9YcwI/dae11cf7df.jpg - I think it will still flow nicely and it won't be confusing, but of course it's an insane so "confusing" is not that big of a reason, it's up to you
00:34:910 (6) - add new combo because this feels like it's similar to 00:36:053 (1) - but you didn't place a nc so to make it consistent I would recommend to add nc
01:33:196 (1,2) - nazi but blanket could be improved here - http://puu.sh/9Yd5E/148496128f.jpg
02:06:339 (5) - why don't you shorten this and add a hit circle? it will fit better to the vocals, and this is an insane anyway so it's not a problem and you can also hear a beat in the music in the middle of the slider, so it will fit nicely imo :3 - http://puu.sh/9Ydma/e003db72c8.jpg not bad idea but I still like it like this :3
02:10:624 (4,1) - I personally don't really like the flow here because - http://puu.sh/9YdZF/c9fbde6bb6.jpg - so you could try a little bit different pattern maybe? well just an example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1787500 and http://puu.sh/9Yeei/0d56b68839.jpg try to change 2nd one with my way
03:01:910 (3) - nazi again but put this a few grids down to make it a nicer blanket - http://puu.sh/9Yerj/1fcf8f4c79.jpg
03:41:910 (4) - try this http://puu.sh/9YeBn/3682bd6796.jpg - it feels better to play because the music has a loud sound there which should be emphasized with a hit circle and not with a slider end, it feels good to hit it (also add finish to the hit circle) dunno why I want it reverse xD

Hitsounds:

SPOILER

Add finish to the beginning of the sliders (or hit circles), because you can hear loud sounds in the music too and there some a bigger emphasis in the vocals too at these places:
00:02:767 (4) -
00:03:910 (1) -
00:05:053 (4) -
00:07:339 (4) -
00:08:481 (1) -
00:09:624 (1) -
00:11:910 (1) -
00:13:053 (1) -
00:14:196 (1) -
00:15:339 (1) -
00:16:481 (1) -
00:17:624 (1) -
as I said before I want keep this part just whistle (:3

00:19:196 (1,2) - use soft sampleset on these objects, because the music isn't loud here, so normal sampleset doesn't sound nice

00:22:196 (1) - add finish to the beginning of the slider because of the reason I have already mentioned nah
00:26:767 (1) - ^ ^
02:08:481 (6) - ^ ^
03:39:910 (1) - ^

That's all for insane, it's a pretty nice diff, I enjoyed playing it!

Demise:
00:26:767 (1,2) - this doesn't look nice imo (in my opinion) so try to place it differently, example: http://puu.sh/9YhVc/046def9d69.jpg
00:41:767 (1) - this would flow better imo if it had a different direction, like this: http://puu.sh/9Yi5w/2f81c2af52.jpg
02:12:767 (6,1) - try to avoid overlaps like this, they don't look nice imo >.< this looks a lot better :3 http://puu.sh/9YiEY/3959db9a22.jpg
02:56:410 - add hit circle? there is a soft but fast sound in the music, so I think adding a hit circle here would fit pretty well but the current seems more fit to follow vocal :''
02:59:839 - same as above ^ add hit circle ^
03:47:196 (2,3) - I this doesn't flow well, so I would suggest this - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1787658 - because http://puu.sh/9YjbV/49180439c5.jpg --> http://puu.sh/9YjfG/3eb0833031.jpg

Hitsounds:

SPOILER

Add finish to the beginning of these sliders, same reason that I said in the Insane difficulty
00:02:767 (1) -
00:03:910 (1) -
00:05:053 (1) -
00:07:339 (1) -
etc...I think you know what I mean so try to follow these just like on Insane, but if it's unclear just ask me and I'll try to point out all of them!
same as in insane lol
00:19:196 (3,4) - use soft sampleset (similar to what I've already mentioned in the previous diff)

I can't really say anything else about this difficulty, I'm too noob to play it X_X it's fine :''3

I hope my mod will be helpful, good luck!

Gaia wrote:

Heey~ From my queue

[General]
I think Insane with 4.2 stars to suddenly jump to an extra of 5.5 is too big o-o Just my 2 cents so yea I guess it's fine since extra diff orz

[Hard]
00:15:339 (4) - bend towards the left instead of right?
00:17:624 (4) - Curve this more I don't like it's too curve xD
00:26:767 (1,2) - ^ ^
01:37:767 (1) - quite a jump even for hard
02:09:767 (1) - Ctrl + G fixed from Mystyk's mod
02:16:481 (4) - Why not curve this? cuz it will seems boring
02:23:339 (4) - ^ ^
02:23:767 (5) - not mirror with 02:22:910 (3) - indeed
02:27:910 (1) - not perfect ;w;
02:57:624 (4) - Curve inside (left)?
02:59:910 (4) - curve this maybe no
03:08:339 (2,3,4) - keep the same ds already?
03:30:624 (4) - NC here instead?
03:31:196 (1) - so no nc here if u take ^
03:34:196 (3) - curve more? nah
03:42:339 (1) - this is pretty short.. xD

[Insane]
00:58:196 (6) - stack with 00:56:339 (5) - it will have weird spacing imo
01:09:053 (1) - shape looks awkward lol always forgot to change this
01:40:910 (4) - ctrl + g? no
01:42:339 (1) - curve more? ^
01:43:481 (1) - ^ ^
01:49:767 (3) - Ctrl + G ^
01:54:481 (3) - unnecessary overlap it's hard to place it in another place
02:02:624 (8) - Ctrl + G no
02:17:624 (1) - end this further up http://puu.sh/9YjDS/3d95b7b348.jpg move it a bit up
02:18:767 (1) - sth like this? http://puu.sh/9Yk0k/6a44850f9e.jpg nice but I don't want :'3
02:47:481 (1) - Music gets softer here so u could slow down SV to 0.75x or sth? um.. nah
02:53:481 (1,2,3) - Not parallel indeed
02:49:624 (1) - blanket no
02:52:339 (2,4) - ^ ^
03:03:767 (2) - Ctrl + G ^
03:15:481 (3) - ^ ^
03:42:339 (1) - a bit short wanna keep it like in hard diff

[Demise]
00:02:767 (1) - curve more honestly I don't really like too curve slider :''
00:06:910 (3) - (44,44) or sth? nah ;A;
00:08:053 (3) - (160, 352) ? ^ (these 2 are just suggestions) ^
00:09:624 (1) - blanket? ^
00:19:053 (2,4) - put it somewhere like (296, 192) and blanket with 00:19:196 (3) - wanna keep it like this
00:23:339 (1) - Ctrl + G looks weird orz
00:36:339 (2,4,5,6) - weird shape. (4,5,6) is triangle and nothing to do with (2) o.o
00:41:767 (1) - blanket
01:05:053 (7,8,9) - Ctrl + G
01:06:767 (1) - blanket more no
01:07:910 (1) - ^ no
01:09:053 (1) - ^ no
01:52:481 (6) - crooked shape (and stack with 01:53:696 (7) -) so (448,240) weird for me :''(
02:07:767 (2) - Ctrl + G no
02:14:196 (1) - curve more? ^
02:54:196 (1) - blanket this more
03:10:481 (2) - put in middle? (256, 192) move a bit by myself
03:20:481 (1) - not good mirror of 03:20:767 (2) - (Ctrl + >)
03:51:481 (3) - Don't think you need this why?

Fun jumps ^^ GL with ur map!

thanks a lot both of you XD

NM~

Normal

1. 00:05:624 considering adding a 1/2 reversed slider here? it follows the vocals though
2. 00:30:053(2,3,4) those beats didnt follows the vocals, i think 1/2 sliders at 00:29:910 and the rest http://puu.sh/a2tKE/69943c98f7.jpg
3. 00:32:481 add a 1/2 slider here to fill akeward gap?
4. 00:36:053 ^
5. 00:58:339 ^
6. 00:58:624(1) i think u should move it too 00:58:767, the vocals suits there better
7. 01:00:339(3) Same issues, move to 01:00:053
8. 01:17:767 add a note here? a beat would be nice to make the players expected that was there
   same issues towards this diffs, so i pointed out a few
   

Hard

• 
  seems nice to me

hope this little mod helps a bit

Celizavia wrote:

NM~

Normal

1. 00:05:624 considering adding a 1/2 reversed slider here? it follows the vocals though trying to avoid 1/2 in here (since bpm is high)
2. 00:30:053(2,3,4) those beats didnt follows the vocals, i think 1/2 sliders at 00:29:910 and the rest http://puu.sh/a2tKE/69943c98f7.jpg ik, but it will more easier for normal :3
3. 00:32:481 add a 1/2 slider here to fill akeward gap? mm I guess more better if changed (2) into slider
4. 00:36:053 ^ same as 00:05:624
5. 00:58:339 ^ ^
6. 00:58:624(1) i think u should move it too 00:58:767, the vocals suits there better ^
7. 01:00:339(3) Same issues, move to 01:00:053 same as 00:32:481
8. 01:17:767 add a note here? a beat would be nice to make the players expected that was there
   same issues towards this diffs, so i pointed out a few
   

Hard

• 
  seems nice to me

hope this little mod helps a bit

thank you!

Modding this soon~

Hey! I modded your Normal and Hard.
Well, here's my mod:


Well, that's that.
Very good mapset so far. Keep it up!
Good Luck!

LizeKotze wrote:

Hey! I modded your Normal and Hard.
Well, here's my mod:

Normal:
1) 00:14:339~ Remove NC here, and then add NC here: 00:15:481. no, cuz I make previous and next combo (1-5) so.. :3
2) 00:18:910~ I suggest rather straightening this slider, so that it looks something like this:

Picture

It'll support the previous sliders more. Remember to also keep distance snap in mind if you decide to make this change.
3) 00:34:624~ NC here, and then remove NC here: 00:35:196. same as 00:14:339
4) 00:44:910~ NC here, and then remove NC here: 00:45:481. ^
5) 01:05:196~ Maybe NC here? no need imo
6) 01:21:481~ NC here. (It'll fit in with the music better)
7) 01:23:481~ NC here, then it will be like this hitcircle: 01:28:053. um, will keep it non-nc
8) 01:38:624~ NC here, and then remove NC here: 01:39:196. no
9) 01:42:624~ Remove NC here, and then add NC here: 01:43:196. ^
10) 01:48:910~ NC here, and then remove NC here: 01:49:481.^
11) 02:09:767~ Maybe NC here? ^
12) 02:26:624~ NC here.
13) 02:28:624~ NC here. no
14) 02:51:481~ NC here, and then remove NC here: 02:52:053.
15) 03:00:624~ Maybe NC here? no
16) 03:23:481~ NC here. ^
17) 03:40:910~ NC here. ^
I know it's a lot of new combo suggestions, but it's just my opinion.

Hard:
1) 00:15:339~ NC here.
2) 00:17:624~ NC here.
3) 00:18:910~ I suggest removing this slider and this hitcircle: 00:19:624 and replacing them with a spinner that reaches this point: 00:19:624. (It's just my opinion.) I don't think it's fit orz
4) 00:21:053~ NC here. no
5) 00:23:339~ NC here. ^
6) 00:25:624~ NC here. ^
7) 00:27:910~ NC here. ^
8) 01:01:196~ Maybe NC here as well? ^
9) 01:04:767~ NC here. ^
10) 01:23:767~ I don't really like this triplet. Maybe a repetitive slider instead? k since some people bothering with this :''v
Like this:

Picture

11) 02:21:053~ NC here. ^
12) 02:24:339~ Remove NC here, and then add NC here: 02:24:481. ^
13) 02:26:767~ NC here. ^
14) 02:28:910~ A repetitive slider instead?
Like this again:

Picture

Just my opinion.
15) 02:50:767~ Remove NC here, and then add NC here: 02:51:910. no
16) 03:23:767~ Repetitive slider again instead?
17) 03:29:624~ Add a hitcircle here? (The flow sort of gets disrupted without a hitcircle at that point) changed it w/ another way
18) 03:41:767~ NC here. no

Well, that's that.
Very good mapset so far. Keep it up!
Good Luck!

thank you!

hell ya new page combo

Mao wrote:

Mod request by ingame PM making a new post to make it better for you to reply :V

1. Unrankable Issue/Highly Suggested
2. Comment/Opinion

General

1. Clean :3

Normal

1. Please let the spinners after the Kiais start 1/2 earlier since the sound starts there and you just didn't do that in the other diffs since you've mapped the tick by another hitobject. But being blank here makes the spinner feel late.
2. 00:04:624 (2) - Perhaps you can move this a bit lower to improve the flow here since this would cause a way smoother cursor movement.
3. 00:11:481 (2) - Move this to 165|170 to get a better flow from 00:10:767 (1) - 's curve into the object due to it following the Slider's path (:
4. 00:19:624 - I'm not sure if it's just me but I'd add a note here in order to 1. Cover the drums as well as the Voclas here and to 2. get the polarity better which would make it much more readable here imo.
5. 00:24:339 (3) - The Music here is basically the same as at 00:19:910 (1) - where you've mapped the red tick which would feel here way better as well if you ask me since ignoring this red tick feels so off >.<
   
   Screenshot

   
6. 00:57:481 (2,3,4) - /Minor/ - Try to move these a bit to the upper right to get them into a line in order to improve the flow slightly.
   
   Screenshot

   
7. 01:03:481 (2) - The rhythm here sounds so extremely weird since you've mapped the ticks with the smallest emphasis on them. There's almost nothing played neither by instruments nor vocals on these ticks. Maybe you can try somthing like:
   
   Screenshot

   
8. 01:10:053 (1) - Perhaps you can move this a bit to the lower left for a better following of the curve with the Slider to improve the overall movement.
   
   Screenshot

   
9. 01:19:196 (3) - Meh, too low Ds to the previous object considering your normal DS is 1,00.
10. 01:35:767 (1) - Check your DS.
11. 01:36:624 (2) - This comes a bit rapid if you ask me which ruins the flow of the pattern. Try to move it lower so that you have a fluent transition from the previous slider into it.
12. 01:40:053 (2) - Maybe it's just me but ignoring the beat here feels pretty weird since the note on it is rather strong. If you can agree with me try something like this.
13. 02:03:767 (2) - DS to the next object is quite high
14. 02:58:339 (2) - /Minor/ - Why isn't this placed on the coordinate's origin which is 256|192? Also the symmetry between 02:56:624 (1,3) - is messed up as you can see if you CTRL+H
15. 02:58:910 (3) - The rhythm here sounds really messed up since there's nothing on the big white tick that could be mapped which makes it sound off since the tick where the instruments are is 1/2 before.
    
    Screenshot

    
16. 03:20:053 (2) - Even out your Spacing here
17. Sorry for the nazi mod but as Mystyk already said, this is way better to adjust the diff. Also I don't know, the song provides a very hard to map rhythm but some parts of the rhythm you've mapped are not reasonable to me. If I'm wrong (maybe because I'm tired) call me ingame and we can discuss that a bit.
    
    ► All suggestions mentioned for the original parts go for copy & pasted (and maybe slightly changed) parts as well so that I don't have to repeat myself ;b

Hard

1. 00:15:339 (4) - /Minor/ - Try to move this note more right to get a fluent transition by letting it follow the slider's track.
2. 00:18:910 (1) - /Highly Suggested/ - Meh, the rhythm here is so weird due to some important notes being ignored. I've provided a suggestion in the Screenshot below. First of all that 1/2 Slider follows the Instrument, the 1/1 Slider then follows the Hold of the Vocals. I don't really understand what you were following here...it sounds so unfitting ;_;
   
   Screenshot

   
3. 00:29:767 (2) - Hm, this sound seems rather unimportant to me since it's really quiet and not that recognizable while playing other than the red ticks next to it. These are kinda strong which makes it feel weird that you've ignored them. I'd go for something as seen below since it represents the instruments as well as the vocals and drums way better here. (This stuff happens all over the section and makes it rhythm feel rather weird to me but since you are consistent with it should make it okay :/)
   
   Screenshot

   
4. 00:35:767 (7) - Perhaps you can move this a bit to the right like this to improve the flow into 1 by giving the player a smooth transition.
5. 00:39:767 (4) - Maybe it's just me but a CTRL+H'd version of this would flow way better in my eyes
6. 00:49:767 (1) - This would be pretty neat if you could rearrange it a bit so that it forms a pentagon with the previous objects. Just an idea here, nothing you have to apply but it would be cool imo (:
   
   Screenshot

   
7. 01:13:196 (3) - Maybe you can try to relocate this a bit to get an oval-/"O"-shaped Pattern with 01:13:481 (4,5) - here.
   
   Screenshot

   
8. 01:18:910 (1,2) - The transition here plays really harsh since it's not really fluent but a bit rapid instead if you ask me. The are two ways to change this to improve the flow: 1. Get a wavy movement by placing a CTRL+J'd verion of the Slider or 2. Rotate the Slider and get a circular movement.
   
   Screenshot

   
   
9. 01:21:910 - Considering that you've always mapped drums or vocals on beats like this I'd do it here as well for the sake of consistency.
   
   Screenshot

   
10. 01:27:767 (1,2) - /Comment/ - Well, if you already place a finish on 2's tail then don't you agree that the note is so strong that it should be clicked? If you want to, please try [url=http://puu.sh/a5cOH/bccb20b76f.jpg]this[/ulr]. seems weird for me :<
11. 01:42:053 (5,1) - Maybe it's just me but I think the higher DS between these two doesn't really make sense since 1 isn't that strong that it would need such a special emphasis :<
12. 01:46:910 (1) - A symmetrical Slider would fit the symmetrical pattern very well, don't you think so? :3 Try out the code :b
    
    Code

    316,44,106910,6,0,B|260:28|260:28|188:52,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

13. 02:05:624 (2) - /Minor/ - First of all adjust the spacing a bit. It looks like it's touching the previous slider which doesn't really fit the hard as you've used gaps between all the Objects. Second thing is that I'd personally place 02:05:624 (2,3) - higher so that it's easier to play considering the player has to turn downwards pretty fast here.
    
    Screenshot

    
14. 02:15:339 (1) - Hm, the jump felt rather unintuitive to me due to the unexpected fast tapping here. Well, you could make it a bit more natural if you'd flip it vertically to make the transition not almost horizontal since this feels pretty rough ;w;
    
    Screenshot

    
15. 02:32:910 (1,2) - Same as I've said for 01:27:767 (1,2) - same too
16. 02:47:481 (1) - /Highly Suggested/ - I was extremely surprised after the break to have this sharp turn at the start of the Slider x-x Please consider to try something not so "steep". I recommend you to change this since it was really unexpected to play. (My suggestion would be this but I guess you can do something better there than I can :V)
17. 02:53:053 (1) - Uhm, what happened to this Slider? Why the hell is it 5/4, that doesn't make sense within the music here...
18. 03:23:481 (2,3) - Try to get a bigger spacing between these since it looks kinda weird ingame due to Stack Leniency.
19. Very well done flow. Love this diff <3

Insane

1. 00:12:910 (4) - Put this to 420|289 to 1. get it into a line with 00:12:767 (3,4,1) - which would look way better and 2. to get due to this line the flow into 00:13:053 (1) - more intuitive.
2. 00:17:196 (3,4,5,1) - Get the Spacing consistent here to improve the square. (Place 5 at 385|62)
3. 00:18:053 (2,3) - Maybe it's just me but I'd actually switch them for a better flow due to a smoother turn from 1 into 2 as seen on the arrows in the Screenshot below.
   
   Screenshot

   
4. 00:34:481 (4) - Consider to place that at 282|340 to improve the jump into 00:34:624 (5) - by giving the playera lower range of moving to the left so that he has to focus more onto the jump upwards which would improve the flow a lot here.
5. 00:43:196 (2,3,4) - Wah, the wavy movement between 2 and 4 over 3 feels really odd. Try to place 00:43:481 (3) - at 244|211 to improve the flow here a lot! <:
6. 01:02:339 (5,6,7) - The flow here didn't work that well to me to be honst :< The problem is that 01:02:910 (7) - is slowing the player down since s/he expects a zigzag pattern here, but for a zigzag pattern 01:02:910 (7) - should be lower. So either you put 01:02:767 (6,7) - in a line with 5's tail or place 7 lower, like this.
7. 01:08:624 (4) - Perhaps you can place this a bit higher to let its track follow the curve provided by 01:08:339 (2,3) - for a smoother flow here.
   
   Screenshot

   
8. 01:14:624 (4) - I know that this is part of a triangle but I'd suggest you to move it more right to introduce the jump to the right better. As it is now it feels really unexpected and unnatural to me :/
9. 01:34:053 (3,4,5) - Please even out the spacing here since there's no reason for the spacing between 3 and 4 being bigger than the one between 4 and 5 since 5 is the strongest beat here. The second thing I'd like you to do is not having the curve the circles are placed in so strong as this kills the flow here for me and makes it play weird. To solve both Problems place 01:34:339 (5) - at 378|268.
10. 01:37:053 (6,7) - The rhythm here sounds really messed up due to 01:37:339 - being ignored but the quiet 01:37:196 - being mapped. Try to CTRL+G them in terms of rhythm. (You can also leave the placement as it is after CTRL+G'ing since the flow is actually pretty good like this o-o)
    
    Screenshot

    
11. 01:42:767 (2) - Meh, try to CTRL+J this for an intuitive wavy movement here.
12. 02:11:624 (4) - Try to rotate this about 25° (Selection Centre) to improve the flow here. The transition slows the player down in order to get the tail right which makes it feel pretty harsh.
13. 02:48:481 (1) - /Minor/ - Consider to move the last anchor point of this Slider to 424|464 in order to make it face 02:48:910 (2) - directly to get a smooth flow into it. I guess y: 164 o-o
14. 03:34:624 (1,2,3,4,5) - /Comment/ - As you can see if you CTRL+H, the symmetry is messed up. Since I have no idea if this was intentional I'll mark this as a comment~
15. Nice Insane, very clean :3 Not much to say here :V Don't forget to check the copy&pasted sections yourself though.
    
    
    ► All suggestions mentioned for the original parts go for copy & pasted (and maybe slightly changed) parts as well so that I don't have to repeat myself ;b

Demise

1. 00:06:053 (8,1) - The transition between this two object slows the player down which feel unnatural due to the emphasis on (1). Consider to enlarge the spacing to 1,7 or 1,8 as you did for the previous ones. You could also try to rearrange the pattern like this by using rotated Sliders (:
2. 00:11:196 (2) - Why does this Slider have 4 Anchorpoints? I don't really see a reason for this here tbh. Try to get a normal 3 anchor point curve here and maybe adjust it a bit as seen in the Screenshot below for a better flow into the following Curve.
   
   Screenshot

   
3. 00:16:053 (3,4,5) - Meh, the rhythm feels a bit weird since there's no sound at 00:16:196 - . Mapping this with a Circle feels so wrong. If you really want to keep it map it at least with a Slider's Tail but I'd prefer a 1/1 Slider as seen in the Screenshot below.
   
   Screenshot

   
4. 00:19:910 (1) - Try to move this slightly to the lower right as seen in the Screenshot to adjust the flow from 00:19:624 (4) - into this here. This would also create a neat circular shape together with 00:19:196 (3) - !
   
   Screenshot

   
5. 00:28:624 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Your Spacing is kinda messed up. Try to adjust it a bit since it looks a bit messy >.<
6. 00:33:767 (1,2,3) - Try to listen closely to the music here. Maybe you can agree that there's a way louder note at 00:33:981 - instead of 00:33:839 - so it makes this sound really weird.
   
   Screenshot

   
7. 00:37:910 (5,6,7) - Please consider to reduce the spacing of this triplet since this plays really bad due to the so fast unintuitive movement because there wasn't such fast triplet movement on similiar parts in this section before ;_; Maybe it's just me though :/
8. 00:46:339 (2) - Try to make the curve a bit stronger here (so that it looks like a 90° rotation of 00:46:624 (3) - ) to 1. make the turn a bit stronger as well to give a better feeling for the following objects and 2. to make this not look that much like 00:46:053 (4) - since that looks a bit "blocky" to me.
   
   Screenshot

   
9. 00:51:910 (1,2,3) - perhaps you can move this a bit higher so that the Slider's curve follows the movement of the previous objects for a smoother flow here.
   
   Screenshot

   
10. 00:56:124 (5,6) - The spacing between these two notes is 0,30 larger than the spacing of the overall stream which makes the notes just touch so slightly. This looks really messy so please fix the spacing here :/
11. 01:20:767 (2) - Try to move this a bit higher (somewhere around 200|280) so that 1 points onto the slider which would result into a more fluent turn downwards.
12. 01:22:767 (1) - /Minor/ - I don't know if this shape is on purpose but I'd definitely adjust it so that it is a smooth wave shape. Try to keep the first and the third line parallel to do that.
    
    Screenshot

    
13. 01:23:481 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Messed up stream spacing, this looks very very messy so I'm marking this as highly suggested. Try either to use a constant distance snap or "Convert Slider to Stream". (Not going to list this for further streams, check them yourself please ^^")
14. 01:27:767 (1,3) - /Minor/ - If you CTRL+H them and see that the symmetry is messed up. If it was thought to be symmetrical please fix this :/ (Same goes for 02:32:910 (1,3) - )
15. 01:38:053 (4,5,6,7) - It would be really cool if you could rearrange them a bit as a Square. Nothing you have to fix, just an idea to tidy the pattern up a bit (:
    
    Screenshot

    
16. 01:42:053 (5) - I'm not sure if it's just me but I think the really strong curve shape doesn't fit the shape of 01:41:624 (2) - which makes this look a bit out of place :V Maybe you could try to replace it with a 30° rotated version of 01:41:624 (2) - ?
    
    Screenshot

    
17. 01:51:196 (7) - Hm, the short spacing here doesn't work for me since it slows me down due to that rather fast movement between 01:50:910 (5,6) - . Please consider to CTRL+G 01:51:196 (7) - . That would fit the pattern way better and would also even out the spacing a bit! c:
18. 01:54:910 (5,6,7) - Maybe you can try to use a bigger spacing to 01:55:339 (1) - in order to make the movement more natural after the stop for the triplet. I had actually trouble with playing that due to the really slowing down low spacing here ;/
    
    Screenshot

    
19. 02:06:696 (3) - Maybe it's just me but I'd rather see this Circle at 02:06:553 - sinced the note there in terms of the drums is way stronger so that it feels weird to ignore such a "strong" (it isn't that strong but stronger than the other one) but map such a quiet noise :/
20. 02:10:910 (1) - As you might agree with me the note at 02:10:910 - is really strong since it's the start of the kiai so why don't you emphasize it by giving it a bigger spacing from 02:10:910 (1) - ? All the previous ones had a bigger spacing even though they weren't such important notes which makes this feel pretty weird :/
21. 02:16:481 (1) - In my opinion this shape doesn't really fit the other ones in the Kiai as you've mostly used curved or line#ish shapes for your Slider.
    
    Screenshot

    
22. 02:27:624 (5,6,7) - /Minor/ - Messed up 1/4 Spacing looks really ugly ingame :V
23. 03:00:196 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Just an idea here: How about placing these in a giant triangle by moving 03:00:339 (2,4,5) - to y:92 and by lowering the positions of 03:00:910 (6,1) - like this. That would be really cool imo! (: wait not really understand this lol
24. 03:07:481 (4,5,6) - This comes way too rapid after the pretty big jump from 03:07:339 (3) - which makes the play pretty bad. The reason why it is so rapid is that it goes back left in such a small angle. It would be way more intuitive if you'd left it go to the right with a wider range for the player to react.
    
    Screenshot

    
25. 03:14:839 (4,5) - If you listen closely you can hear the there is no sound (or such a quiet unrecognizable one) where you've mapped 4 and 5. I'd suggest a 1/1 Slider starting at 3's position to cover the vocal's hold for a way better feeling rhythm here.
    
    Screenshot

    
26. 03:33:910 (4) - Move this to 180|320 for: 1. An Improval in flow because now the Slider track follows the curve of the previous Circles as seen here and 2. to create an equal triangle with 03:34:196 (1,2) - as well as a diamond including these and 03:33:767 (3) - .
27. You've done an overall great job on this diff. Even though that some patterns need to be tidied up imo. (:

Please reply! I hope it was helpful and good luck! :3

thanks a lot XD
btw not yet fix anything in normal, wanna discuss it though since not really confident about dat diff :''

Hello there from my modding queue

[General]
Check letter box during breaks because your map has break time

[Demise]
00:44:624 (4) - NC
00:57:196 (4) - ^
01:38:624 (8) - NC then delete NC 01:38:910 (1) -
02:01:196 (5) - NC
02:55:910 (3) - NC

[Insane]
If my NC suggestions aren't useful ignore it
00:05:339 (1,2) - How about convert to stream?
00:32:624 (5) - NC
00:44:053 (1) - Delete NC then NC 00:44:481 (2) -
00:48:624 (1) - Delete NC then NC 00:49:053 (2) -
00:53:196 (1) - Delete NC then NC 00:53:624 (2) -
00:57:767 (5) - NC
01:00:053 (5) - ^
01:02:339 (5) - ^
01:15:910 (5) - ^
01:32:624 (2,3) - How about convert to stream?
01:34:339 (5) - NC
01:38:910 (6) - ^
01:48:053 (1) - Delete NC then NC 01:48:481 (2) -
01:50:910 (7,8) - How about convert to stream?
01:52:624 (1) - Delete NC then NC 01:53:053 (2) -
01:57:196 (1) - Delete NC then NC 01:57:624 (2) -
02:57:624 (5) - NC and delete NC 02:58:053 (1) -
02:58:767 (4) - NC
03:00:767 (3) - NC
03:11:339 (5) - ^
03:32:624 (2) - How about convert to stream?
The patterns are okay

[Normal]
00:48:624 (2,4) - Make these look same
skip NC mod

[Hard]
Patterns are fine but skip NC mod

[Overall]
I skip NC mod on normal and hard or they will be too much mod on NC , it's just somehow look like the same idea of where to NC in Insane
Also I give this map a star, good map

Good luck

CelsiusLK wrote:

Hello there from my modding queue

[General]
Check letter box during breaks because your map has break time

[Demise]
00:44:624 (4) - NC no
00:57:196 (4) - ^ ^
01:38:624 (8) - NC then delete NC 01:38:910 (1) -
02:01:196 (5) - NC no
02:55:910 (3) - NC ^

[Insane]
If my NC suggestions aren't useful ignore it
00:05:339 (1,2) - How about convert to stream? I like slider like this :''3
00:32:624 (5) - NC no
00:44:053 (1) - Delete NC then NC 00:44:481 (2) -
00:48:624 (1) - Delete NC then NC 00:49:053 (2) - no
00:53:196 (1) - Delete NC then NC 00:53:624 (2) - ^
00:57:767 (5) - NC ^
01:00:053 (5) - ^ ^
01:02:339 (5) - ^ ^
01:15:910 (5) - ^ ^
01:32:624 (2,3) - How about convert to stream? ^
01:34:339 (5) - NC ^
01:38:910 (6) - ^ ^
01:48:053 (1) - Delete NC then NC 01:48:481 (2) -
01:50:910 (7,8) - How about convert to stream? no
01:52:624 (1) - Delete NC then NC 01:53:053 (2) - ^
01:57:196 (1) - Delete NC then NC 01:57:624 (2) - ^
02:57:624 (5) - NC and delete NC 02:58:053 (1) - ^
02:58:767 (4) - NC ^
03:00:767 (3) - NC ^
03:11:339 (5) - ^ ^
03:32:624 (2) - How about convert to stream? ^
The patterns are okay

[Normal]
00:48:624 (2,4) - Make these look same changed that part lol
skip NC mod

[Hard]
Patterns are fine but skip NC mod

[Overall]
I skip NC mod on normal and hard or they will be too much mod on NC , it's just somehow look like the same idea of where to NC in Insane
Also I give this map a star, good map

Good luck

thank you for mod and star!

Hi from Charlotte's　Taiko Modding Queue

d
k
D(big d)
K(big k)

Betsu's Muzukashii

SV1.5→1.4 OD6→OD4or5 HP6→5
Song Setup→Design→Letter box (uncheck)

00:28:481 (130) - change k
02:35:624 (774) - ^

Betsu's Oni

SV1.5→1.4
Song Setup→Design→Letter box (uncheck)

01:05:272 - add k
02:06:624 (757) - change k
02:06:767 (759) - change d
02:06:910 (761) - change k
02:10:624 (792) - change k

It is a great overall

good luck

Hi. Taiko Mod request from Yasora.

[ about]

1. d is don note
2. k is kat note
3. D is Finish don note
4. K is Finish kat note
   
   
5. Purple is UnRankable , Please change
6. Green is I would strongly recommend
7. black is Pointed out that

[ General]

1. all recheck this
   
   
2. SV : 1.5 => 1.4
   
   
3. BG : Change Video => BG

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[ Betsu's Oni]

1. 00:28:696 - add note here ( have drum sound. )
   
   
   
2. 00:46:196 (263,264) - swap ( 00:46:339 (264) - have Cymbals? sounds. )
   
   
   
3. 00:56:339 (320) - Change d ( 00:56:339 (320,321) - some sounds. )
   
   
   
4. 01:27:481 (523) - Change k ? ( have Cymbals? sounds. )
   
   
   
5. 01:50:196 (664,665,666,667) - if you follow drum sound => swap ? ( if vocal follow => no change plz. )
   
   
   
6. 02:10:053 (783) - d ( not k sounds. this note d )
   
   
   
7. 02:19:410 (851) - delete & 02:19:553 - 02:19:696 - add k here ? ( Want to follow drum sound >< )
   
   
   
8. 02:40:624 - add k here ? ( 02:40:339 (991,992) - some sounds. )
   
   
   
9. 03:22:553 (121) - why k ? this note d.

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Muzu is fine.

Good Luck ~ :3

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Good Luck ~

Mod request from my Queue





Nice mapset, I like it. Good luck!

-Famous- wrote:

Mod request from my Queue

Normal

1. The distance seems too close. Maybe try a distance that's larger than one. seems fine like this for me o3o
2. 00:13:196 (4,5) - Seems like blanket. Try to blanket 00:12:053 (3,4).
3. 00:32:339 (4) - Add NC and remove NC 00:32:624 (1)? That's easier to read, because of the longer break between the notes. But I'm not sure about it.
4. 00:33:481 (3) - Add NC, same reason as above.
5. Suggestion: add NC 00:34:624 (3); remove NC 00:34:910 (1); add NC 00:36:910 (5); remove NC 00:37:196 (1); add NC 00:39:196 (5); remove NC 00:39:481 (1). That fits more to the singing.
6. 01:15:767 and 01:16:910 feels like a note is missing. try to following vocal in here..
7. 01:21:481 (2) - is a little bit close to 01:20:624 (1).
8. 01:33:196 to 02:37:196 - Did you copy & paste the whole part? If yes, copy & paste it again after the changes.
9. 03:42:339 (1) - I guess the spinner is too short for Normal. Enpoint: 03:45:767? seems too long, changed until 03:44:481 instead

Hard

1. The spacing between 00:12:339 (2,3) and 00:13:624 (3,4) is too small.
2. 01:02:053 (6,1) - Blanket. it's not blanket from beginning..
3. 01:10:053 (7,1) - The spacing is too huge. Compare it with 01:10:624 (2,3).
4. 01:12:910 (2,3) - The spacing is too small again.
5. 01:39:624 (6,1) - Spacing too big.

Insane

Looks fine, except some blankets:

1. 00:32:624 (5,6) - Blanket.
2. 00:54:339 (3,4) - Make better blanket.
3. 00:57:196 (3) - Move to x:92 ; y:156. Blanket looks better.
4. 00:57:481 (4,5) - Fix blanket.
5. 00:59:624 (3,4) - ^
6. 01:02:767 (6,7) - ^
7. 01:48:053 (6,1) - ^
8. 02:04:053 (5) - Move the last slider point to x:300 ; y:48 for better blanekt fix it by myself

Demise

Nothing to say, except 03:14:624 (1,2,3,4,1,2). Sounds wrong to me.why? I heard a bit fast drum sound in there o.o

Nice mapset, I like it. Good luck!

thank you :3!

for taiko modders, pls be patience for waiting betsu' reply..

here I come ~
a lot of fix

Betsu's Muzukashii : http://puu.sh/ahy1v/8fae8ffd23.osu
Betsu's Oni : http://puu.sh/ahy4e/91306bd913.osu

Thanks XD

updated~

Taiko mod from mod queue request ~

From my modding queue~

[Insane]

That's all I see c: Good luck with ranking~

hey:3
[Demise]
01:55:910 (1,2,3) - ds
02:05:339 (2,3) - swap
03:01:624 (3) - 368,264
03:10:053 (6) - 348,92
03:33:624 (2) - 140,328
03:51:481 (3) - del
[Insane]
00:05:339 (1,2) - sv x0.75
02:32:910 (1,2,3,4) - Ctrl+J
02:59:196 (5) - del slider whistle
Normal's sliderslide make it default

lazy._.

Moo-Chan wrote:

From my modding queue~

[Insane]

1. I think you should make it AR9 too fast imo
2. 00:26:767 (1,2) - Blanket this not aim to blanket that..
3. 00:45:196 (1,2) - ^^ ^
4. 02:58:624 (3,4,5) - ^^ ^
5. 02:59:196 (5) - Sounds like there's a whistle on this slider that shouldn't be there
6. 03:42:339 (1) - Should drag this out to 03:45:767 and then make the ending of this spinner quieter changed into 03:44:481 instead (consistency with other diff

That's all I see c: Good luck with ranking~

ts8zs wrote:

hey:3
[Demise]
01:55:910 (1,2,3) - ds
02:05:339 (2,3) - swap seems weird
03:01:624 (3) - 368,264 ^
03:10:053 (6) - 348,92
03:33:624 (2) - 140,328 too far
03:51:481 (3) - del music end in there..
[Insane]
00:05:339 (1,2) - sv x0.75 will weird though
02:32:910 (1,2,3,4) - Ctrl+J
02:59:196 (5) - del slider whistle
Normal's sliderslide make it default how..

lazy._. lol it's fine

thanks both of you!

new page comboer

omg yes a shuuen map ;;w;;

hi yasora.i think you should probably add suzumu to the tags since he wrote the lyrics

good luck /o/

[Muzukashii]
00:40:624 (193) - k | Have diferent sound
01:50:481 (550,551,552) - Make it 1/2 | 1/4 alone sees bad
02:28:339 - Add d

Good map, I see good the oni ~

Normal's sliderslide make it default how..
del normal-sliderslide

koronyanko wrote:

omg yes a shuuen map ;;w;;

hi yasora.i think you should probably add suzumu to the tags since he wrote the lyrics

good luck /o/

sure why not

ts8zs wrote:

Normal's sliderslide make it default how..
del normal-sliderslide

ic ic lol sorry that was stupid question yea...

From my queue.

Normal:
00:14:339 (1) - maybe move on 00:14:624, add note on 00:14:339 and move NC on this note from 00:14:624 ?
02:48:910 - add note?
03:10:053 (2) - remove this pattern;
03:09:196 (1) - remove NC;
03:05:767 (1) - repainted in red color (do it only if you have made changes here 03:10:053 (2) and here 03:09:196 (1));

Hard:
00:21:624 (5) - remove this pattern and add note on 00:21:767;
01:05:767 - 01:24:053 - too many whistles, a bit hurt to listen.
02:10:910 - 02:29:196 - ^
03:05:767 - 03:24:053 - ^
03:38:910 (4) - add whistle on slider's start;

Insane:
01:05:767 - 01:24:053 - same as in hard. I think that here you are using whistles fairly too often.
02:10:910 - 02:29:196 - ^
03:05:767 - 03:24:053 - ^

Demise:
Same as in previous diffs. (about whistles, I think they should used here a little sparingly).


sorry for poor mod. I am not doing this within one year.

Verlaren wrote:

From my queue.

Normal:
00:14:339 (1) - maybe move on 00:14:624, add note on 00:14:339 and move NC on this note from 00:14:624 ? sounds weird for me
02:48:910 - add note?
03:10:053 (2) - remove this pattern; following vocal..
03:09:196 (1) - remove NC; no
03:05:767 (1) - repainted in red color (do it only if you have made changes here 03:10:053 (2) and here 03:09:196 (1));

Hard:
00:21:624 (5) - remove this pattern and add note on 00:21:767; nuu
01:05:767 - 01:24:053 - too many whistles, a bit hurt to listen. but it follow the vocal ;-;
02:10:910 - 02:29:196 - ^ ^
03:05:767 - 03:24:053 - ^ ^
03:38:910 (4) - add whistle on slider's start; it will be not consistent..

Insane:
01:05:767 - 01:24:053 - same as in hard. I think that here you are using whistles fairly too often. same too lol sorry ;-;
02:10:910 - 02:29:196 - ^
03:05:767 - 03:24:053 - ^

Demise:
Same as in previous diffs. (about whistles, I think they should used here a little sparingly).


sorry for poor mod. I am not doing this within one year. wow..

thank you!



stuck again in BSS ;-;

Thanks for Mod :3

Muzu : http://puu.sh/aqw97/1619fa0e79.osu
Oni : http://puu.sh/aqwaF/8fbe280d2e.osu

updated~

Requested in my modding queue : t/229105





Sorry if you got this mod quite late after the request, I had problems that I won't go into here.
Also my mod is full of suggestions because the map lacks any technical problems at all, but I just don't like this mapping style and it was very hard to not be lazy. Hope it somewhat helped anyway.

will reply when I'm home (at holiday right now ;w;)