NormalHad a nice mod for this but then accidentally closed my brower ;A;
while boil it down to the most improtant parts with some examples
1.Avoid skipping downbeats00:19:311 (3) - 00:49:533 (2) - 01:16:199 (4) - 01:55:311 (3) -
2.Try spicing it up a bit using 1/2's00:49:533 (2) - shorting this to the red tick and then mapping the downbeat would work fairly well
00:57:088 (3) - additionally, I feel like mapping out the vocals here using 1/2 might work too
3.The obligatory nazi blankets00:53:977 (3,1) - 02:06:422 (4,1) - these ones are particularly bad ><
4. spacingggg02:49:088 (4,1,2,3) -
Hard00:14:422 (1,2,3,4,1) - plays kinda awkward, flow is meh
00:29:755 (6) - would make this two circles, vocals feel strong enough to support two 1/2's
00:32:422 (2,3,4) - why not ahve these follow vocals too?
00:44:866 (5,6,7) - see if this rythm works for
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/307008100:49:533 (4) - would rather have something clickable on this
00:57:088 (3) - I'd rather not have this all covered by one repeat, vocals feel so strong so this feels kinda underwhelming to me. especially since you did the same thing in the Normal ><
01:04:199 (5) - perhaps make this a little less off-screen
01:17:311 (2) - feels kinda odd, why stop following vocals all of the sudden?
01:32:644 (1,2,3) - why not go for some symmetry between these :c
01:37:977 (1,2,3) - overlaps look kinda ugly ><
02:01:977 (3,1) - ^
02:04:422 (5) - again, I feel like this downbeat should have something clickable on it
02:07:755 (4) - ^
02:49:088 (1,2) - oobligatory nazi blanket
Insane00:18:199 (1) - might just be me, but I feel like these double repeats do not really work all the well in higher Diffs, especially since they can use 1/4 or even 1/4 to emphasize stuff
00:54:866 (6,7,1) - feels way to close ><
00:57:088 (5,1) - ^
Spacing throughout the kiai feels a bit confusing. Certains patterns are not very paced out while others are, eventhough the song doesn't increase or decrease in difficulty01:19:977 (1) - feels REALLY odd
01:21:533 (5) - feels odd to have the downbeat on the end of the slider
01:38:199 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - why not space these out a little more. also might want to try and come up with something more creative than just a curve :c
01:43:977 (5,1) - obligatory nazi stack
02:08:199 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - huh these seem pretty harsh
02:40:199 (1,2,3) - just saying, angles like these are usually fairly uncomfortable to play. can keep this for the art-sy effect, just my two cents
02:45:755 (2) - odd. why not properly follow the vocals like you did before?
02:52:422 (8,1) - try putting some more distance in between these?