zj0924 wrote:

吃不吃益达我就不吃 挺喜欢这首歌的，摸了一晚上了。应该是我摸的最认真的一张图了（虽然你只让我摸一个难度，鉴于你对我图的帮助很大，就选择全摸了）只是希望能够帮到你，让你的图变的更加好！
[damian's Easy]

• 没有问题，只是一些美观方面上的建议

1. 00:33:902 (1) - 可以包的更好ok
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2. :09:217 (4) - 这个怎么样？ ok
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[Normal]

1. 00:07:674 (3) - 感觉有点多余，可能会导致新手在5这里抢拍。 这已经是Normal难度了，需要有些这种锻炼强双对换指反应的梗
2. 00:18:474 (3) - 叠着感觉不好，包围圈太多，而后面一下子00:19:674 (5,6) - 有点突然，对新手不是很友好XD Normal希望能让新手们尽量锻炼到吧
3. 00:24:988 (3) - 节奏有点迷惑，对新手不是很友好，拖到前面那根白线？你这样摆如果是想要跟vocal的话，推荐这样 同上
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4. 00:55:674 (1) -
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   包下好看点
5. 01:16:417 (4) - 逼死强迫症，文明观球可以双blanket喔 Blanket 不是一定要跟圆弧重叠才好看的，有时候可以选择比圆弧稍微弧度少一些或者多一些，也是看跟图整体的flow，还有个人爱好。
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[Hard]

1. 00:02:702 (3,1) - 空这么多感觉有点不自然，这么下节奏你看怎样 跟INSANE同步的节奏
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2. 00:04:759 (6,4) - 这个问题不大，可以选择无视，只是建议作如下一系列调整，00:04:759 (6) - 挤到滑条不大好看，这样改后00:05:445 (4) - 有点偏左了，因为距离已经够远了 个人喜好，因为我这样摆打着很顺手而且这种遮挡是我喜欢的。。
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3. 00:23:617 (3,4) - 由于之前反跳这里重叠会给人一种不舒服的感觉，建议34分开构成三角形过渡下 我是尽量不要用重复的梗
4. 00:28:073 (2,3) - 3到4的角度略大……试试这样的？反正34距离没变，只是flow更好了 正三角形
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5. 00:28:931 (1,2,3,4) - 这样排有点违和，可能因为第一个vocal在上个滑条尾，我暂时也没想到好的排法，试试类似这种的？我喜欢现在的节奏。
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6. 00:59:788 (5,6) - 这里节奏和前后没有不同啊（都是1/2），为什么要碰到一点？视觉DS不整齐了。注意物件上的距离要一致XD 这种重叠是我的喜好
7. 01:05:102 (4) - 还是建议不叠一起，分开形成三角形更有表现力 这种梗是随意的，我比较喜欢这种因为HDDT起来很酷炫
8. color=#0000FF]你这样后面一个滑条的头部没有在前面的延长线的方向[/color]
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9. 01:08:359 (3,76 y144 物距统一下比较好 我把5拉近了

[Insane]

• 打不了，对于5星以上map的跳不是很懂，随便说些吧仅供参考（仅个人观点，不代表你是错的，只是觉得自己打起来可能会顺一点）

1. 00:25:502 (2) - 244 76? 构成一个角
2. 00:26:531 (1) - 碰到滑条不好吧，已经insane了干脆分开点，移到396 60之类的地方？ flow也好点 个人爱好
3. 00:27:902 (5) - 往上一点？244 240？否则感觉跳的太突然了 正三角形
4. 00:29:102 (2,3) - ctrl+g爽一点？之前的flow是竖着来，所以现在改成横着来
5. 00:34:588 (1,2,3,4) - 根据背景音乐，这个梗怎么样 。。。感觉不错，我请教一下别人
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6. 00:35:959 (7,1) - 距离有点近了，结合我前面改的梗。改下滑条弧度用下反跳，00:36:645 (1,2,3,4) - 如图所示，千万要强调00:37:159 (4,1) - 的距离，一定要足够远 4跟1的时间差距太大，基本上怎么摆好看就怎么摆，因为flow到4这里就结束了，后面的1是新开的flow。 然后前面的滑条，再之前一个滑条已经是朝上开口的了，所以这一个应该朝下造成平衡感，除非是有NOTE或者滑条另外在上面或者下面构成整体平衡感
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7. 00:39:045 (2,3) - 这样顺一点 根据不同读图方式朝着哪个方向弯其实没有区别，我主要是想做个遮挡，并且想跟后面的滑条构成一个尖锐的角度做一个反弹的感觉
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8. 00:39:388 (4,5) - 逼死强迫症,没叠好，xy差了1，还有很多类似的地方，无伤大雅。你开心就好XD fixed orz 这就是关了grid snap作图的下场
9. 00:53:102 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) -首先赞一下这个神梗，是这张图让人印象最深刻的地方，正因为如此我觉得摆的可以再好一点。比如00:54:817 (2) - 这个可以再往上去一点，和之前保持一致？或者一组一组之间间距固定，只变角度？或许是距离越来越远。具体我不清楚怎么改，因为打不来这么大的跳，只是觉得这里还可以再好一点，做好神梗我觉得花再长时间都值得…… 00:52:759 (2,2,2,2,3) - 注意我这几个NOTE的排列，DS加上位置交换的实际应用，另外你可以看看我这个图的这个梗也是一样：https://osu.ppy.sh/s/18314201:21:545 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 还有 01:26:345 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2)
10. 00:59:531 (5) - x396 y136? 个人爱好，我一般避免这种的NOTE突出来
11. 01:00:653 - 这个叠01:00:988 (1) - 怎么样，感觉原来的flow不大好 我的一个备选方案是把01:00:645 (1) - 叠到01:00:988 (1)的位置，然后把01:02:188 (5) - 放到原来的位置
    图后半部分质量挺高的，没感觉有什么不顺的地方

美丽，祝早日rank，GL！

zj0924 wrote:

[Mei's Hard]
感觉最大的问题还是节奏，可能与我下节奏的方式有些不同让我觉得有些违和，不代表你一定下错了XD

1. 00:01:331 (2,3) - 建议23叠一起配合vocal
2. 00:04:759 (4) - 建议叠23上突出后面那个重音叠三个感觉太弱智了.-.我感觉现在的好
3. 00:27:045 (1) - 不平行感觉不好看，选一个00:25:674 (1,4) -平行吧。平行太死板了，这是用的对称
4. 00:29:617 (4) - 弯太多了感觉不好看，把3往上一点，这样就有空隙了23的flow会变差，这里的意思是想让4的尾巴被3包
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5. 00:33:559 (4,1) - 平行更好看死板
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6. 00:36:988 (3,4) - 个人觉得34分开更有表现力太难
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7. 00:39:388 (1,2) - 建议2叠滑条尾上，因为是一个音效，分开的话滑条尾那一下感觉没有存在感而且放在后面滑条头上感觉怪怪的
8. 00:41:102 (2,3) - 节奏下的有点违和，我会尽量把鼓放在滑条头或用单点。这里我会选择这样根据你说的改了下
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9. 00:41:445 (3) - blanket
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10. 00:42:131 (5,6) - 同上00:39:388 (1,2)，但这里觉得把6放到5右下一点比叠在滑条尾好
11. 00:44:017 (2,3) - 建议加whistle加了finish
12. 00:45:388 (3) - 没包好看起来好就行了，这个地方要是想用缩圈对其的话角度会变得很平，不好
13. 00:46:245 (1,2,3,4,5) - 还是vocal过渡到鼓的问题，感觉00:46:759 (2,3,4) - 节奏没下好。建议做这一系列的改动。。。不觉得，我觉得你这看起来就难打
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14. 00:48:131 (2,3,4,1,3,4) - 感觉这几个重叠很奇怪，我觉得还是节奏没下好no
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15. 00:50:702 (2) - 这里节奏还是有点怪如果不想改把00:51:217 (3) -叠2的尾巴上。建议这样 不想塞满，我现在的刚好鼓不缺不漏
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16. 00:55:502 (1) - 这个有点多余的感觉，考虑删除，如果同意下面的改法，这个可以不删，本来问题就不大
17. 00:55:674 (2,1) - kial第一个重音用单点并叠起来有些违和，建议这样改，因为你后面重音也是用滑条我感觉没问题
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18. 01:05:102 (4,5,1) - 既然45是半重叠，51也应该半重叠比较好吧看上去不会太乱。其实我觉得把5去掉更好，这样过渡就自然许多，一会鼓一会vocal要求挺高，01:05:102 (4) - 滑条尾毕竟还有一下鼓声，可是放在滑条尾上鼓的表现力较弱，所以不建议这里vocal转鼓。如果不想改，那就试试换成单点单点更难，这里用不用ds来下我只是看心情的我感觉都不乱，现在的改了后面排版还要调，治至于滑条尾巴的情况，只要有5玩家就不会觉得4被弱化了
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    况且还有更难的hard难度，所以我觉得打起来顺畅更重要

Euny wrote:

[*]00:02:359 (1) - add finish at the slider's head?replaced by whistle
[*]00:14:017 (2,3) - recheck blanket~!umm i like current one
[*]00:33:902 (1) - how about makes more same angle as 00:33:559 (4) this?i prefer symmetric here

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[*]00:50:359 (1) - add clap at the slider's head?replaced by normal finish
[*]01:15:559 (2) - place it on x285y241 for better flow and makes blanket?ummm i prefer current one

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[/notice][/list]
!

Krauv wrote:

]00:02:188 (5) - stack under (4)?well i like it stack on 1
00:20:874 (3) - could blanket (4) better
00:40:074 (3) - ^ with (1)
00:55:845 (1) - remove NC
01:03:731 (4) - could blanket (3) better
01:16:074 (3) - consider blanketing (2)

while i fixed some of these blanket issue

1. Set offset at 988

1. You should map these parts: 00:05:788 and 00:06:131
2. 00:31:159 (1,2) - Fix blanket
3. 00:39:902 (2,3) - ^
4. 00:44:874 (1,3) - ^

[ Zzz ] wrote:

Hi~ Remilia_CO ( My modding queue t/142356/start=150 )

damian's Easy

1. 00:00:645 - Green Line 00:00:988 (1) - Here
2. 00:08:874 (4) - Add Circle , Like the photo not change.( Beat )
   
3. 01:00:645 - Add Whistle
4. 01:16:417 (6) - Add Finish
5. 01:17:702 - Green Line 01:17:788 - Here but 01:18:988 (1) - This is Correct
6. 00:18:817 (4) - ~ 00:53:102 (2) - The whistle do not think you need much.( Most of Delete )
   All fixed, last one just make a part of change

Normal

1. 00:02:017 - Green Line 00:02:359 (3) - Here
2. 00:15:902 (3) - Add Clap
3. 00:24:302 (2,4,5) - Delete Whistle
4. 00:48:988 (3) - Same
5. 01:05:445 (5,6) - Head Whistle
6. 00:16:588 (1) - Delete Green Line
7. 00:17:788 (2) - Green Line 00:17:445 (1) - Here
8. 00:20:188 - Delete Green Line
   All fixed

[ Zzz ] wrote:

xD ( continue mod :3 )


>ㅅ<~!! Good Hard :3

Hard

1. 00:00:988 (1) - Delete Clap , Add Finish
2. 00:02:117 - Green Line 00:02:188 (2) - Here
3. 00:06:817 (2) - Change ( Whistle > Clap )
4. 00:10:931 (3) - Add Clap :3
5. 00:11:617 - Same
6. 00:28:931 (1,1,2,3) - Too difficult. Do not block I've seen same pattern in other's hard so just wait to see..
   All fixed

Hmm.. Difficulty spread too much. 3.61 > 5.12 .. Insane Difficulty > Extra Change
Add 4.3 ~ 4.7Star Insane Difficulty.

Insane

1. 00:08:873 (1,4) - Swap NC
2. 00:17:445 (1,2) - Same
3. 00:15:730 (1,2,3,4,5) - Suggestions Looks good, let me thing about it
4. 00:18:645 (7) - Delete Finish
5. 00:25:674 (7) - NC
6. 00:39:388 (4) - Same
7. 00:40:074 (1) - Delete NC
8. 00:40:759 (3) - Same
9. 00:43:503 (4) - NC
10. 00:51:216 (2) - Delete Finish
11. 00:51:388 (1) - Add Clap
12. 00:55:159 (1,2,3) - Add Clap ( All ) : D
13. 01:00:988 (1,2) - Swap NC
14. 01:14:702 (7) - Add Clap
15. 01:17:103 (5,6) - Add Clap ( All ) : D
    All fixed

Ringating wrote:

the video looks pretty bad, so here is a new one (480p, h264 encoding, ~20 MB)

no kds

Neil Leo wrote:

From my modding queue, as you requested:
Hi Ringating!
[General]

1. Set offset at 988

[Mei's Hard]

1. You should map these parts: 00:05:788 and 00:06:131not going tro map here since no drum
2. 00:31:159 (1,2) - Fix blanket
3. 00:39:902 (2,3) - ^
4. 00:44:874 (1,3) - ^

Nerova Riuz GX wrote:

Mei's Hard

• 00:04:417 (2,3,4,5) - 要不要考慮一下把3放到4的位置，然後把4放到5的開頭？ 一樣有重疊，但是感覺不太一樣。这样有点跳，不太好呢
  00:14:017 (2) - 讓整個滑條都放在grid裡面现在的也不算出界吧，我觉得勉强ssafe
  00:30:302 (2) - 稍微往右邊一點？
  00:39:902 (2) - 可以考慮下換到3的開頭去听音乐感觉叠在尾巴上好些
  00:47:445 (5) - 這裡是唯一出現1/4滑條的地方，不打算換成三連嗎？
  00:53:102 (1) - 把轉圈結束的點拉到這裡，或是在這裡多加上一個note也可以，然後加上Hitsound。(個人意見)
  00:55:674 (1,2) - 這裡不管怎麼聽就是不大對勁。 換成這樣試試？
  
  01:09:902 (2) - 試著讓整個note都落在grid裡面没必要啊= =
  
  最後，也稍微檢查一下AiMod......確定完全沒有問題了。

這張圖做得很好
希望可以ranked，加油

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256,192,77788,12,4,78988,0:0:0:0:

Megurine Luka wrote:

道理我都懂，但是现在的new mapper为什么都这么可怕？

[Hard+]

00:04:417 (4,5,6) - 做个等腰的？感觉形状有点别扭 fixed 中间那个note摆歪了
00:07:674 (5,6) - 其实就节奏上不太时候走这种对拉的slider，更适合这样↓ fixed

00:11:102 (4) - 同理.. fixed
00:19:331 (3) - 尽量不要overlap啦这种...也没啥需要overlap的必要... 改了
00:33:902 (4) - 建议NC 跟后面那个swap了
00:41:445 (3) - ctrl+G试试？好

好像也没啥好mod的..就是以后在flow上大概还是要多考虑一下嗯~ 谢谢=w=

Kagamine Ren wrote:

这图好啊，号被作图被ban


new page！

Jemmmmy wrote:

[hard+]
00:04:931 - 节奏
00:06:131 -
00:37:674 (4) - 跟3,5的间距相等咯
00:50:017 (3) -
01:03:388 (4) -
01:04:588 (2,4) - 分开点 感觉再分开就太跳了啊。。
00:41:788 (4) - 弯点
00:44:189 (7,8) - 都用直滑条

All fixed

• 
  Tag 【Mangaka-san to Assistant-san】→【Mangaka san to Assistant】

• 
  00:39:902 (2) - (3)Stack
  
  img

  
  00:44:702 (3,4) - (4)Remove. add 1/1 Slider
  
  img

  

• 
  00:19:331 (3) - Ctrl G
  00:44:017 (5,6,7,8) - it's not rhythmically correct. try use this
  
  img

  
  00:48:131 (5) - Ctrl G
  00:57:046 (2) - ^

• 
  HP +1
  
  00:06:217 (6,7,8) - Remove.I can't confirm this rhythm.
  00:44:017 (2,3,4,5) - it's not rhythmically correct. try use this
  
  img

  
  00:45:388 (2) - no clap
  00:45:474 (3) - add circle
  01:17:788 (1,1) - My suggestion.
  
  img

  

-Maruk- wrote:

request from my queue

[General]

• 
  Tag 【Mangaka-san to Assistant-san】→【Mangaka san to Assistant】 Why.. seems other mappers use it
  
  
  [Hard +]
  [list:1337]
  00:19:331 (3) - Ctrl G feel odd
  00:44:017 (5,6,7,8) - it's not rhythmically correct. try use this made change
  
  img

  
  00:48:131 (5) - Ctrl G It won't fit the DS constancy oh my mistake, It just an accident, I'll fix it
  00:57:046 (2) - ^ ^

[Insane]

• 
  HP +1 really? I will look
  
  00:06:217 (6,7,8) - Remove.I can't confirm this rhythm. I'll wait to see
  00:44:017 (2,3,4,5) - it's not rhythmically correct. try use this made change
  
  img

  
  00:45:388 (2) - no clap fixed
  00:45:474 (3) - add circle ??? I don't understand what do you mean here...
  01:17:788 (1,1) - My suggestion. hmmm..I'll wait to see
  
  img

  

Good luck~

-Bakari- wrote:

We've had an IRC conversation about the map.

Changed some stuff including patterns and diff settings. Unfortunately, I've lost the log.

Personally, I feel like Easy might need more attention, but the rest of the set is more or less fine. Good luck!

log

2015-03-03 00:42 Remilia_CO: thanks！ XD
2015-03-03 00:42 -Bakari-: downloading
2015-03-03 00:43 Remilia_CO: It's a little bit big since I changed the bacground video.
2015-03-03 00:46 -Bakari-: Sorry, I crashed :c
2015-03-03 00:46 Remilia_CO: orz
2015-03-03 00:46 Remilia_CO: XD do you need my np again?
2015-03-03 00:47 -Bakari-: nah, I've got the map already
2015-03-03 00:47 Remilia_CO: ok
2015-03-03 00:51 -Bakari-: Easy diff leacks readability in some patterns.
2015-03-03 00:51 Remilia_CO: oh?
2015-03-03 00:52 -Bakari-: Since it's made for beginners, patterns should be sight-readable even for low-skilled players
2015-03-03 00:52 -Bakari-: 00:03:731 (3,4) - (4)'s tail can be hit by mistake just because it is too close to the previous object
2015-03-03 00:52 Remilia_CO: ok
2015-03-03 00:53 -Bakari-: 00:32:531 (4,1) - kind of the same thing happens here, the reverse-arrow probably will mislead beginners
2015-03-03 00:53 -Bakari-: 00:38:017 (3,2) - I doubt players would even notice (1).
2015-03-03 00:54 Remilia_CO: 00:39:388 (1) - this?
2015-03-03 00:55 -Bakari-: yes.
2015-03-03 00:55 -Bakari-: something like [http://puu.sh/gjpSn.jpg this] would be more readable. but you can change it any way you want to
2015-03-03 00:56 Remilia_CO: ok I'm changing it
2015-03-03 00:56 -Bakari-: I also disagree with the combo colours. Why would anyone keep just the blue ones when the BG obviously has more colours?
2015-03-03 00:57 Remilia_CO: for which ?
2015-03-03 00:57 -Bakari-: For the Easy.
2015-03-03 00:58 -Bakari-: All I see is just two blue combo colours. Let's just copy them from your Normal?
2015-03-03 00:58 Remilia_CO: I mean the blue ones you say..
2015-03-03 00:58 Remilia_CO: oh
2015-03-03 00:58 Remilia_CO: I got it
2015-03-03 00:58 Remilia_CO: i will do that
2015-03-03 01:00 -Bakari-: Also, the comboing might need some attention
2015-03-03 01:00 -Bakari-: Sometimes 00:36:645 (1,2,3) - combos are really short, sometimes 00:39:388 (1,2,3,4) - sometimes they are twice longer
2015-03-03 01:01 Remilia_CO: I was comboing with the lyrics orz
2015-03-03 01:02 -Bakari-: well, it's just my opinion. I'm not forcing you to change anything
2015-03-03 01:03 -Bakari-: Oh, and I'd set AR3
2015-03-03 01:03 -Bakari-: the BPM is fast, it'd make so much sense to have a faster AR
2015-03-03 01:03 Remilia_CO: ok
2015-03-03 01:05 -Bakari-: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/443205 StylipS - Junsui na Fujunbutsu (TV Size) [Normal]]
2015-03-03 01:05 -Bakari-: Probably you should set CS to 3,5,
2015-03-03 01:05 -Bakari-: Personally, I think it looks better with CS3,5
2015-03-03 01:05 Remilia_CO: let me see
2015-03-03 01:06 -Bakari-: 00:00:988 (1) - try to map it to the vocals, such a long gap after the first circle is quite confusing
2015-03-03 01:06 -Bakari-: + it's been mapped this way in the Easy
2015-03-03 01:07 Remilia_CO: so add a note after the first slider right?
2015-03-03 01:07 -Bakari-: replace the first circle with a slider*
2015-03-03 01:08 Remilia_CO: mei's hard?
2015-03-03 01:08 -Bakari-: Normal
2015-03-03 01:09 Remilia_CO: I'll take a look
2015-03-03 01:09 Remilia_CO: I'm still in Easy orz
2015-03-03 01:10 -Bakari-: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/651710 StylipS - Junsui na Fujunbutsu (TV Size) [Mei's Hard]]
2015-03-03 01:10 -Bakari-: Since this is easier Hard, probably Mei shouldn't use triplets here
2015-03-03 01:11 Remilia_CO: triplets in hard is not common?
2015-03-03 01:12 -Bakari-: it is common, but not in our case
2015-03-03 01:12 -Bakari-: You have a set of two Hards
2015-03-03 01:12 -Bakari-: one (Mei's) is easier
2015-03-03 01:12 -Bakari-: the second one is harder
2015-03-03 01:12 -Bakari-: that is why it's better if we avoid triplets in Mei's diff
2015-03-03 01:13 Remilia_CO: I look the whole diff.. there is only one triplet in the Hard. could it be an exception?
2015-03-03 01:14 -Bakari-: if there is just one triplet, than we should remove it for sure
2015-03-03 01:14 -Bakari-: It breaks the consistency and might confuse players
2015-03-03 01:14 Remilia_CO: that make sense
2015-03-03 01:14 Remilia_CO: let me ask him
2015-03-03 01:15 -Bakari-: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/653317 StylipS - Junsui na Fujunbutsu (TV Size) [Hard+]]
2015-03-03 01:15 -Bakari-: 00:53:102 (1,1) - try to finish the spinner earlier. so, players will have some time to recover after it.
2015-03-03 01:15 Remilia_CO: could we replace the triplet as a short, reverse slider?
2015-03-03 01:16 -Bakari-: yes
2015-03-03 01:16 Remilia_CO: the ranking criteria is not allow Hard have object following spinner in 1/2?
2015-03-03 01:18 -Bakari-: if I remember correctly, that's true
2015-03-03 01:18 Remilia_CO: ok
2015-03-03 01:20 -Bakari-: Your Insane looks fine
2015-03-03 01:20 -Bakari-: though I feel like some 1/4s (00:06:131 (5,6,7,8) - for example) are overmapped
2015-03-03 01:20 Remilia_CO: ok
2015-03-03 01:20 Remilia_CO: orz I removed alot
2015-03-03 01:20 Remilia_CO: but this one I want it to be a trigger of main song..
2015-03-03 01:20 Remilia_CO: it that not allowed?
2015-03-03 01:21 -Bakari-: It is up to BNs. Some are okay with it, some are not.
2015-03-03 01:21 Remilia_CO: oh.
2015-03-03 01:22 Remilia_CO: who do you suggest me to find for a final check?
2015-03-03 01:23 -Bakari-: Whoever who agrees to check it
2015-03-03 01:23 Remilia_CO: . but who do you think will be more ok with my map?
2015-03-03 01:24 -Bakari-: I have no idea, just ask people to testplay and see if they like it or not
2015-03-03 01:25 Remilia_CO: ok, thx
2015-03-03 01:25 Remilia_CO: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2842383
2015-03-03 01:25 -Bakari-: no prob
2015-03-03 01:25 Remilia_CO: normal how about this
2015-03-03 01:25 -Bakari-: I'd use Ctrl+G on (1)
2015-03-03 01:26 Remilia_CO: but that will break the DS?
2015-03-03 01:26 -Bakari-: That'll be a stack. Stacks are fine
2015-03-03 01:26 Remilia_CO: ok
2015-03-03 01:27 -Bakari-: and that's pretty much it.
2015-03-03 01:27 Remilia_CO: ok
2015-03-03 01:27 Remilia_CO: thank you for checking!

-Maruk- wrote:

request from my queue



[Mei's Hard]

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  00:39:902 (2) - (3)Stackcurrent one fits music better
  
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  00:44:702 (3,4) - (4)Remove. add 1/1 Slider?they plays the same
  
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1. Maybe delete tv size from the title and add "tv size" to tags instead since the official album doesn't has that in title official source ( look at cd section ) also maybe add "animation" to tags since the official anime logo (?) in the official site state that
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2. Uncheck widescreen support , you don't have sb so widescreensupport isn't that necessary imo
3. Add audio lead in around 1200-1400 should be okay for this

1. 00:05:274 (2,3) - idk but I thinkthis jumps pretty a bit looks like insane here so try lower spacing so it fit hard a bit
2. 00:10:417 (2) - place this at x344 y240 ? so flow will feel a bit reasonable for hard+ here
3. 00:13:845 (6,7) - Same as the first suggestion
4. 00:16:244 (4,1) - I think stack sound a bit better here , imo overlap like this is not really good
5. 00:19:331 (3) - Try move this around a bit so , it will not overlap with 00:19:159 (2) -
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6. 00:20:874 (2) - Ctrl+G this would make the flow here a bit better 00:20:531 (1,2) -
7. 00:21:903 (2,3) - Same as first suggestion you can use jumps in hard+ but try not to make the jumps a bit big try to maintain ds ( the yellow number on upper right corner of the editor ) around 1.5-2.1 that should be a good range of jumps for hard+ imo
8. 00:39:045 (4,5) - Should make spacing consistent here , I don't see a reason to use jumps here
9. 00:55:159 (1,2,3) - 1/4 sliders is not recommend in hard+ since it play and read kinda hard imo and you even make the flow here a bit hard to that really make this hard+ looks not like hard+
10. 00:57:046 (2) - Ctrl+G ? better flow
11. 01:00:645 (7,2) - Aesthetic- improve stack here
    
    imo this hard+ looks like insane lol but that just me idk when I play this diff it feel like I'm playing insane
    so how about rename this diff to insane and rename the current insane to custom diff name that sound a bit better idea imo

fuyuyu- wrote:

Hi~ from my queue

[General]

• Asked Qat and that's fine

[Hard+]

1. I suggest change diff name to Light Insane. XD I asked some QAT and now is fine
2. 00:06:131 (1) - lower the volume? (-10~15%) ok
3. 00:09:559 (1) - Remove NC ok
4. 00:11:102 (4) - Ctrl+R -20°? I think flow is better ok changed back because It looks bad,,
   
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5. 00:19:159 (2,3) - slider body is too near ok
   
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6. 00:20:874 (2) - Ctrl+G ok break the constancy with follow things
7. 00:28:416 (4) - add NC / 00:28:931 (1) - remove NC ok
8. 00:30:817 (3,1) - too near. 00:31:502 (1,2) - Ctrl +G I think mine was better
9. 00:31:845 (3,4) - Ctrl+G I think mine was better because if I do so it will break the flow with following one
10. 00:36:474 - add note? 00:35:959 (3,1) - too near. this distance doesn't really affect playing
11. 00:43:502 (4) - add NC I think mine was better fixed
12. 00:46:074 - same as 00:36:474 I don't like fulfill the all rhythms
13. 00:57:046 (2) - Ctrl+G I like this
14. 01:02:531 (1) - remove NC / 01:02:702 (2) - add NC

fixed

good luck~

CelsiusLK wrote:

[General]

1. Maybe delete tv size from the title and add "tv size" to tags instead since the official album doesn't has that in title It doesn't matter imo XDofficial source ( look at cd section ) also maybe add "animation" to tags since the official anime logo Ok(?) in the official site state that
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2. Uncheck widescreen support , you don't have sb so widescreensupport isn't that necessary imo I didn't use that actually..
3. Add audio lead in around 1200-1400 should be okay for this The game will automatically add period so don't worry about that

Since you stated in your post that you want mod only on hard+ so here you are

[Hard+]

1. 00:05:274 (2,3) - idk but I thinkthis jumps pretty a bit looks like insane here so try lower spacing so it fit hard a bit It's actually have become a Insane.. I have thought change diff names but Hard+ is ok
2. 00:10:417 (2) - place this at x344 y240 ? so flow will feel a bit reasonable for hard+ here But the whole graph won't look good
3. 00:13:845 (6,7) - Same as the first suggestion ^
4. 00:16:244 (4,1) - I think stack sound a bit better here , imo overlap like this is not really good I'll think about that
5. 00:19:331 (3) - Try move this around a bit so , it will not overlap with 00:19:159 (2) - fixed
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6. 00:20:874 (2) - Ctrl+G this would make the flow here a bit better 00:20:531 (1,2) - It's the same type of flow with 00:21:731 (1,2,3) - so I would like to see
7. 00:21:903 (2,3) - Same as first suggestion you can use jumps in hard+ but try not to make the jumps a bit big try to maintain ds ( the yellow number on upper right corner of the editor ) around 1.5-2.1 that should be a good range of jumps for hard+ imo XD it's a Hard+, not Hard
8. 00:39:045 (4,5) - Should make spacing consistent here , I don't see a reason to use jumps here fixed
9. 00:55:159 (1,2,3) - 1/4 sliders is not recommend in hard+ since it play and read kinda hard imo and you even make the flow here a bit hard to that really make this hard+ looks not like hard+ XD
10. 00:57:046 (2) - Ctrl+G ? better flow No difference imo
11. 01:00:645 (7,2) - Aesthetic- improve stack here fixed
    
    imo this hard+ looks like insane lol but that just me idk when I play this diff it feel like I'm playing insane XD I'm going to ask someone
    so how about rename this diff to insane and rename the current insane to custom diff name that sound a bit better idea imo

good luck

Loneight wrote:

o/, 抱歉遲了這麼久...
Request from PM

• 
  黑色 只是建議,不喜歡可以略過~OAO
  藍色 是建議改掉
  紅色 是unrankable

[Easy]

1. 00:11:274 (1,2) - 交換NC, 然後刪掉00:12:645 (1) - 的NC, 我認為00:11:274 (1) - 不需要用到NC去提醒, 感覺跟前面的sliders都是同一部分, 而後面刪NC是因為可以讓人好判斷
2. 00:16:245 (4) - 這裡NC一下, 原因是節奏突然壓在紅線上了(換句話說不同), newbie可能會難以判斷

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[Normal]

1. 00:02:359 (2) - 建議NC, 畢竟是剛開始, 而且在完全沒有提示下出現了1/1 slider stack, 會讓newbie難以讀圖, NC起來會比較容易, 就像這個00:14:359 (4,1) -
2. 00:47:445 (6,1) - 我的話會讓交換NC, 畢竟stack再一起又是1/2, 縮小的圈圈顏色若不同又相近, 容易讓人判斷失誤

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[Mei's Hard]

1. 00:26:702 (4) - 感覺用3/4 slider比較適合這段呢, 對一個重度跟隨drum的人來說w

good job!

[Insane]

1. 00:05:274 (2,4) - 如果你願意的話, 這兩個都NC, 好判斷1/1 stack之後又緊接著1次1/2跳+1/1 stack, 而Impurity是因為AR高所以我認為ok, 我不會說我在兩個難度裡看到相同的梗

還不錯的Insane!

[Impurity]

1. 01:16:931 (4) - 考慮NC?

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That's all
call me back after checking
感覺沒什麼好說的www...已經跟kodora商量好了

Remilia_CO wrote:

说实话我的NC技术真心惨不忍睹。。

1. 00:53:102 - Remove break here, unneeded tbh

1. 00:06:474 (1,2,3,4,5) - This doesn't follow music well imo but I don't know what does, since the music is complicated here.

1. 00:20:874 (2) - Ctrl-G?
2. 00:24:988 (3,1,2) - Ctrl-G 00:24:988 (3) - and then ctrl-G 00:25:331 (1,2) - ?
3. 00:36:645 (1) - You should change these to circles to emphasize these strong sounds.
4. 00:49:331 (1) - Should be 1/2 slider to follow vocals
5. 00:49:674 (2,3) - Vocals are 3/4 at 00:49:931 though

1. 00:09:045 (8,1,2) - 00:09:045 is a strong sound but the other two are not, so it would be better to emphasize the strong sound with a slider and delete 00:09:218 (1,2) -
2. 00:28:417 (1) - A wave slider will flow better here:
   
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3. 00:39:388 to 00:44:874 - This is a slower part of the music so you should use lower SV here.
4. 00:49:331 (1) - Should be 1/2 slider to follow vocals
5. 00:49:674 (2,3) - Vocals are 3/4 at 00:49:931 though
6. 00:58:417 (8,1) - Stack is hard to tell here, I would space apart
7. 00:59:788Why are you mapping this to a slider repeat? This is a strong vocal with finish, so you really need a clickable object here.
8. 01:03:045 (3,4) - It's more intuitive to follow vocals here: