1. Set offset at 988

1. You should map these parts: 00:05:788 and 00:06:131
2. 00:31:159 (1,2) - Fix blanket
3. 00:39:902 (2,3) - ^
4. 00:44:874 (1,3) - ^

[ Zzz ] wrote:

Hi~ Remilia_CO ( My modding queue t/142356/start=150 )

damian's Easy

1. 00:00:645 - Green Line 00:00:988 (1) - Here
2. 00:08:874 (4) - Add Circle , Like the photo not change.( Beat )
   
3. 01:00:645 - Add Whistle
4. 01:16:417 (6) - Add Finish
5. 01:17:702 - Green Line 01:17:788 - Here but 01:18:988 (1) - This is Correct
6. 00:18:817 (4) - ~ 00:53:102 (2) - The whistle do not think you need much.( Most of Delete )
   All fixed, last one just make a part of change

Normal

1. 00:02:017 - Green Line 00:02:359 (3) - Here
2. 00:15:902 (3) - Add Clap
3. 00:24:302 (2,4,5) - Delete Whistle
4. 00:48:988 (3) - Same
5. 01:05:445 (5,6) - Head Whistle
6. 00:16:588 (1) - Delete Green Line
7. 00:17:788 (2) - Green Line 00:17:445 (1) - Here
8. 00:20:188 - Delete Green Line
   All fixed

[ Zzz ] wrote:

xD ( continue mod :3 )


>ㅅ<~!! Good Hard :3

Hard

1. 00:00:988 (1) - Delete Clap , Add Finish
2. 00:02:117 - Green Line 00:02:188 (2) - Here
3. 00:06:817 (2) - Change ( Whistle > Clap )
4. 00:10:931 (3) - Add Clap :3
5. 00:11:617 - Same
6. 00:28:931 (1,1,2,3) - Too difficult. Do not block I've seen same pattern in other's hard so just wait to see..
   All fixed

Hmm.. Difficulty spread too much. 3.61 > 5.12 .. Insane Difficulty > Extra Change
Add 4.3 ~ 4.7Star Insane Difficulty.

Insane

1. 00:08:873 (1,4) - Swap NC
2. 00:17:445 (1,2) - Same
3. 00:15:730 (1,2,3,4,5) - Suggestions Looks good, let me thing about it
4. 00:18:645 (7) - Delete Finish
5. 00:25:674 (7) - NC
6. 00:39:388 (4) - Same
7. 00:40:074 (1) - Delete NC
8. 00:40:759 (3) - Same
9. 00:43:503 (4) - NC
10. 00:51:216 (2) - Delete Finish
11. 00:51:388 (1) - Add Clap
12. 00:55:159 (1,2,3) - Add Clap ( All ) : D
13. 01:00:988 (1,2) - Swap NC
14. 01:14:702 (7) - Add Clap
15. 01:17:103 (5,6) - Add Clap ( All ) : D
    All fixed

Ringating wrote:

the video looks pretty bad, so here is a new one (480p, h264 encoding, ~20 MB)

no kds

Neil Leo wrote:

From my modding queue, as you requested:
Hi Ringating!
[General]

1. Set offset at 988

[Mei's Hard]

1. You should map these parts: 00:05:788 and 00:06:131not going tro map here since no drum
2. 00:31:159 (1,2) - Fix blanket
3. 00:39:902 (2,3) - ^
4. 00:44:874 (1,3) - ^

Nerova Riuz GX wrote:

Mei's Hard

• 00:04:417 (2,3,4,5) - 要不要考慮一下把3放到4的位置，然後把4放到5的開頭？ 一樣有重疊，但是感覺不太一樣。这样有点跳，不太好呢
  00:14:017 (2) - 讓整個滑條都放在grid裡面现在的也不算出界吧，我觉得勉强ssafe
  00:30:302 (2) - 稍微往右邊一點？
  00:39:902 (2) - 可以考慮下換到3的開頭去听音乐感觉叠在尾巴上好些
  00:47:445 (5) - 這裡是唯一出現1/4滑條的地方，不打算換成三連嗎？
  00:53:102 (1) - 把轉圈結束的點拉到這裡，或是在這裡多加上一個note也可以，然後加上Hitsound。(個人意見)
  00:55:674 (1,2) - 這裡不管怎麼聽就是不大對勁。 換成這樣試試？
  
  01:09:902 (2) - 試著讓整個note都落在grid裡面没必要啊= =
  
  最後，也稍微檢查一下AiMod......確定完全沒有問題了。

這張圖做得很好
希望可以ranked，加油

osu file format v14

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Countdown: 0
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GridSize: 4
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TitleUnicode:純粋なフジュンブツ (TV Size)
Artist:StylipS
ArtistUnicode:StylipS
Creator:Remilia_CO
Version:Mei's Hard
Source:マンガ家さんとアシスタントさんと
Tags:Mangaka-san to Assistant-san The Comic Artist and His Assistants damian_q opening Mei
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192,260,65445,6,0,P|208:216|204:164,2,77.0000023498536,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,204,65959,2,0,P|92:240|-8:204,1,154.000004699707
4,124,66474,1,8,0:0:0:0:
4,124,66645,6,0,L|180:112,1,154.000004699707,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,100,67159,2,0,P|260:52|260:16,2,77.0000023498536,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,272,67845,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,204,68017,6,0,B|288:192|288:192|416:216,1,154.000004699707
364,300,68531,2,0,L|264:280,2,77.0000023498536,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,356,69045,1,0,0:0:0:0:
496,288,69217,1,8,0:0:0:0:
496,288,69388,6,0,P|492:224|496:132,1,154.000004699707
512,44,69902,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,88,70074,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,88,70245,2,0,P|376:72|264:76,1,154.000004699707,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,160,70759,6,0,B|248:216|248:216|260:240|260:240|252:324,1,154.000004699707
172,360,71274,2,0,L|80:364,1,77.0000023498536,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,304,71617,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,184,71959,1,8,0:0:0:0:
40,48,72302,6,0,P|32:120|32:152,1,77.0000023498536,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,204,72645,2,0,P|104:244|224:232,1,154.000004699707,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,180,73159,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,180,73331,2,0,L|348:176,1,77.0000023498536,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,84,73674,6,0,P|288:104|208:60,2,154.000004699707,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,28,74531,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,120,74702,2,0,L|436:208,1,77.0000023498536,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
465,284,75045,6,0,B|416:292|384:272|384:272|380:312|340:336,1,154.000004699707,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,348,75559,2,0,B|232:272|288:272|256:176,1,154.000004699707
212,116,76074,2,0,P|176:148|172:204,1,77.0000023498536,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,264,76417,5,12,0:0:0:0:
328,316,76759,1,8,0:0:0:0:
284,136,77102,2,8,P|276:88|280:52,1,77.0000023498536
364,92,77445,2,8,P|372:140|368:176,1,77.0000023498536
256,192,77788,12,4,78988,0:0:0:0:

Megurine Luka wrote:

道理我都懂，但是现在的new mapper为什么都这么可怕？

[Hard+]

00:04:417 (4,5,6) - 做个等腰的？感觉形状有点别扭 fixed 中间那个note摆歪了
00:07:674 (5,6) - 其实就节奏上不太时候走这种对拉的slider，更适合这样↓ fixed

00:11:102 (4) - 同理.. fixed
00:19:331 (3) - 尽量不要overlap啦这种...也没啥需要overlap的必要... 改了
00:33:902 (4) - 建议NC 跟后面那个swap了
00:41:445 (3) - ctrl+G试试？好

好像也没啥好mod的..就是以后在flow上大概还是要多考虑一下嗯~ 谢谢=w=

Kagamine Ren wrote:

这图好啊，号被作图被ban


new page！

Jemmmmy wrote:

[hard+]
00:04:931 - 节奏
00:06:131 -
00:37:674 (4) - 跟3,5的间距相等咯
00:50:017 (3) -
01:03:388 (4) -
01:04:588 (2,4) - 分开点 感觉再分开就太跳了啊。。
00:41:788 (4) - 弯点
00:44:189 (7,8) - 都用直滑条

All fixed

• 
  Tag 【Mangaka-san to Assistant-san】→【Mangaka san to Assistant】

• 
  00:39:902 (2) - (3)Stack
  
  img

  
  00:44:702 (3,4) - (4)Remove. add 1/1 Slider
  
  img

  

• 
  00:19:331 (3) - Ctrl G
  00:44:017 (5,6,7,8) - it's not rhythmically correct. try use this
  
  img

  
  00:48:131 (5) - Ctrl G
  00:57:046 (2) - ^

• 
  HP +1
  
  00:06:217 (6,7,8) - Remove.I can't confirm this rhythm.
  00:44:017 (2,3,4,5) - it's not rhythmically correct. try use this
  
  img

  
  00:45:388 (2) - no clap
  00:45:474 (3) - add circle
  01:17:788 (1,1) - My suggestion.
  
  img

  

-Maruk- wrote:

request from my queue

[General]

• 
  Tag 【Mangaka-san to Assistant-san】→【Mangaka san to Assistant】 Why.. seems other mappers use it
  
  
  [Hard +]
  [list:1337]
  00:19:331 (3) - Ctrl G feel odd
  00:44:017 (5,6,7,8) - it's not rhythmically correct. try use this made change
  
  img

  
  00:48:131 (5) - Ctrl G It won't fit the DS constancy oh my mistake, It just an accident, I'll fix it
  00:57:046 (2) - ^ ^

[Insane]

• 
  HP +1 really? I will look
  
  00:06:217 (6,7,8) - Remove.I can't confirm this rhythm. I'll wait to see
  00:44:017 (2,3,4,5) - it's not rhythmically correct. try use this made change
  
  img

  
  00:45:388 (2) - no clap fixed
  00:45:474 (3) - add circle ??? I don't understand what do you mean here...
  01:17:788 (1,1) - My suggestion. hmmm..I'll wait to see
  
  img

  

Good luck~

-Bakari- wrote:

We've had an IRC conversation about the map.

Changed some stuff including patterns and diff settings. Unfortunately, I've lost the log.

Personally, I feel like Easy might need more attention, but the rest of the set is more or less fine. Good luck!

log

2015-03-03 00:42 Remilia_CO: thanks！ XD
2015-03-03 00:42 -Bakari-: downloading
2015-03-03 00:43 Remilia_CO: It's a little bit big since I changed the bacground video.
2015-03-03 00:46 -Bakari-: Sorry, I crashed :c
2015-03-03 00:46 Remilia_CO: orz
2015-03-03 00:46 Remilia_CO: XD do you need my np again?
2015-03-03 00:47 -Bakari-: nah, I've got the map already
2015-03-03 00:47 Remilia_CO: ok
2015-03-03 00:51 -Bakari-: Easy diff leacks readability in some patterns.
2015-03-03 00:51 Remilia_CO: oh?
2015-03-03 00:52 -Bakari-: Since it's made for beginners, patterns should be sight-readable even for low-skilled players
2015-03-03 00:52 -Bakari-: 00:03:731 (3,4) - (4)'s tail can be hit by mistake just because it is too close to the previous object
2015-03-03 00:52 Remilia_CO: ok
2015-03-03 00:53 -Bakari-: 00:32:531 (4,1) - kind of the same thing happens here, the reverse-arrow probably will mislead beginners
2015-03-03 00:53 -Bakari-: 00:38:017 (3,2) - I doubt players would even notice (1).
2015-03-03 00:54 Remilia_CO: 00:39:388 (1) - this?
2015-03-03 00:55 -Bakari-: yes.
2015-03-03 00:55 -Bakari-: something like [http://puu.sh/gjpSn.jpg this] would be more readable. but you can change it any way you want to
2015-03-03 00:56 Remilia_CO: ok I'm changing it
2015-03-03 00:56 -Bakari-: I also disagree with the combo colours. Why would anyone keep just the blue ones when the BG obviously has more colours?
2015-03-03 00:57 Remilia_CO: for which ?
2015-03-03 00:57 -Bakari-: For the Easy.
2015-03-03 00:58 -Bakari-: All I see is just two blue combo colours. Let's just copy them from your Normal?
2015-03-03 00:58 Remilia_CO: I mean the blue ones you say..
2015-03-03 00:58 Remilia_CO: oh
2015-03-03 00:58 Remilia_CO: I got it
2015-03-03 00:58 Remilia_CO: i will do that
2015-03-03 01:00 -Bakari-: Also, the comboing might need some attention
2015-03-03 01:00 -Bakari-: Sometimes 00:36:645 (1,2,3) - combos are really short, sometimes 00:39:388 (1,2,3,4) - sometimes they are twice longer
2015-03-03 01:01 Remilia_CO: I was comboing with the lyrics orz
2015-03-03 01:02 -Bakari-: well, it's just my opinion. I'm not forcing you to change anything
2015-03-03 01:03 -Bakari-: Oh, and I'd set AR3
2015-03-03 01:03 -Bakari-: the BPM is fast, it'd make so much sense to have a faster AR
2015-03-03 01:03 Remilia_CO: ok
2015-03-03 01:05 -Bakari-: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/443205 StylipS - Junsui na Fujunbutsu (TV Size) [Normal]]
2015-03-03 01:05 -Bakari-: Probably you should set CS to 3,5,
2015-03-03 01:05 -Bakari-: Personally, I think it looks better with CS3,5
2015-03-03 01:05 Remilia_CO: let me see
2015-03-03 01:06 -Bakari-: 00:00:988 (1) - try to map it to the vocals, such a long gap after the first circle is quite confusing
2015-03-03 01:06 -Bakari-: + it's been mapped this way in the Easy
2015-03-03 01:07 Remilia_CO: so add a note after the first slider right?
2015-03-03 01:07 -Bakari-: replace the first circle with a slider*
2015-03-03 01:08 Remilia_CO: mei's hard?
2015-03-03 01:08 -Bakari-: Normal
2015-03-03 01:09 Remilia_CO: I'll take a look
2015-03-03 01:09 Remilia_CO: I'm still in Easy orz
2015-03-03 01:10 -Bakari-: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/651710 StylipS - Junsui na Fujunbutsu (TV Size) [Mei's Hard]]
2015-03-03 01:10 -Bakari-: Since this is easier Hard, probably Mei shouldn't use triplets here
2015-03-03 01:11 Remilia_CO: triplets in hard is not common?
2015-03-03 01:12 -Bakari-: it is common, but not in our case
2015-03-03 01:12 -Bakari-: You have a set of two Hards
2015-03-03 01:12 -Bakari-: one (Mei's) is easier
2015-03-03 01:12 -Bakari-: the second one is harder
2015-03-03 01:12 -Bakari-: that is why it's better if we avoid triplets in Mei's diff
2015-03-03 01:13 Remilia_CO: I look the whole diff.. there is only one triplet in the Hard. could it be an exception?
2015-03-03 01:14 -Bakari-: if there is just one triplet, than we should remove it for sure
2015-03-03 01:14 -Bakari-: It breaks the consistency and might confuse players
2015-03-03 01:14 Remilia_CO: that make sense
2015-03-03 01:14 Remilia_CO: let me ask him
2015-03-03 01:15 -Bakari-: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/653317 StylipS - Junsui na Fujunbutsu (TV Size) [Hard+]]
2015-03-03 01:15 -Bakari-: 00:53:102 (1,1) - try to finish the spinner earlier. so, players will have some time to recover after it.
2015-03-03 01:15 Remilia_CO: could we replace the triplet as a short, reverse slider?
2015-03-03 01:16 -Bakari-: yes
2015-03-03 01:16 Remilia_CO: the ranking criteria is not allow Hard have object following spinner in 1/2?
2015-03-03 01:18 -Bakari-: if I remember correctly, that's true
2015-03-03 01:18 Remilia_CO: ok
2015-03-03 01:20 -Bakari-: Your Insane looks fine
2015-03-03 01:20 -Bakari-: though I feel like some 1/4s (00:06:131 (5,6,7,8) - for example) are overmapped
2015-03-03 01:20 Remilia_CO: ok
2015-03-03 01:20 Remilia_CO: orz I removed alot
2015-03-03 01:20 Remilia_CO: but this one I want it to be a trigger of main song..
2015-03-03 01:20 Remilia_CO: it that not allowed?
2015-03-03 01:21 -Bakari-: It is up to BNs. Some are okay with it, some are not.
2015-03-03 01:21 Remilia_CO: oh.
2015-03-03 01:22 Remilia_CO: who do you suggest me to find for a final check?
2015-03-03 01:23 -Bakari-: Whoever who agrees to check it
2015-03-03 01:23 Remilia_CO: . but who do you think will be more ok with my map?
2015-03-03 01:24 -Bakari-: I have no idea, just ask people to testplay and see if they like it or not
2015-03-03 01:25 Remilia_CO: ok, thx
2015-03-03 01:25 Remilia_CO: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2842383
2015-03-03 01:25 -Bakari-: no prob
2015-03-03 01:25 Remilia_CO: normal how about this
2015-03-03 01:25 -Bakari-: I'd use Ctrl+G on (1)
2015-03-03 01:26 Remilia_CO: but that will break the DS?
2015-03-03 01:26 -Bakari-: That'll be a stack. Stacks are fine
2015-03-03 01:26 Remilia_CO: ok
2015-03-03 01:27 -Bakari-: and that's pretty much it.
2015-03-03 01:27 Remilia_CO: ok
2015-03-03 01:27 Remilia_CO: thank you for checking!

-Maruk- wrote:

request from my queue



[Mei's Hard]

• 
  00:39:902 (2) - (3)Stackcurrent one fits music better
  
  img

  
  00:44:702 (3,4) - (4)Remove. add 1/1 Slider?they plays the same
  
  img

  

1. Maybe delete tv size from the title and add "tv size" to tags instead since the official album doesn't has that in title official source ( look at cd section ) also maybe add "animation" to tags since the official anime logo (?) in the official site state that
   SPOILER

   
2. Uncheck widescreen support , you don't have sb so widescreensupport isn't that necessary imo
3. Add audio lead in around 1200-1400 should be okay for this

1. 00:05:274 (2,3) - idk but I thinkthis jumps pretty a bit looks like insane here so try lower spacing so it fit hard a bit
2. 00:10:417 (2) - place this at x344 y240 ? so flow will feel a bit reasonable for hard+ here
3. 00:13:845 (6,7) - Same as the first suggestion
4. 00:16:244 (4,1) - I think stack sound a bit better here , imo overlap like this is not really good
5. 00:19:331 (3) - Try move this around a bit so , it will not overlap with 00:19:159 (2) -
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:20:874 (2) - Ctrl+G this would make the flow here a bit better 00:20:531 (1,2) -
7. 00:21:903 (2,3) - Same as first suggestion you can use jumps in hard+ but try not to make the jumps a bit big try to maintain ds ( the yellow number on upper right corner of the editor ) around 1.5-2.1 that should be a good range of jumps for hard+ imo
8. 00:39:045 (4,5) - Should make spacing consistent here , I don't see a reason to use jumps here
9. 00:55:159 (1,2,3) - 1/4 sliders is not recommend in hard+ since it play and read kinda hard imo and you even make the flow here a bit hard to that really make this hard+ looks not like hard+
10. 00:57:046 (2) - Ctrl+G ? better flow
11. 01:00:645 (7,2) - Aesthetic- improve stack here
    
    imo this hard+ looks like insane lol but that just me idk when I play this diff it feel like I'm playing insane
    so how about rename this diff to insane and rename the current insane to custom diff name that sound a bit better idea imo

fuyuyu- wrote:

Hi~ from my queue

[General]

• Asked Qat and that's fine

[Hard+]

1. I suggest change diff name to Light Insane. XD I asked some QAT and now is fine
2. 00:06:131 (1) - lower the volume? (-10~15%) ok
3. 00:09:559 (1) - Remove NC ok
4. 00:11:102 (4) - Ctrl+R -20°? I think flow is better ok changed back because It looks bad,,
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:19:159 (2,3) - slider body is too near ok
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:20:874 (2) - Ctrl+G ok break the constancy with follow things
7. 00:28:416 (4) - add NC / 00:28:931 (1) - remove NC ok
8. 00:30:817 (3,1) - too near. 00:31:502 (1,2) - Ctrl +G I think mine was better
9. 00:31:845 (3,4) - Ctrl+G I think mine was better because if I do so it will break the flow with following one
10. 00:36:474 - add note? 00:35:959 (3,1) - too near. this distance doesn't really affect playing
11. 00:43:502 (4) - add NC I think mine was better fixed
12. 00:46:074 - same as 00:36:474 I don't like fulfill the all rhythms
13. 00:57:046 (2) - Ctrl+G I like this
14. 01:02:531 (1) - remove NC / 01:02:702 (2) - add NC

fixed

good luck~

CelsiusLK wrote:

[General]

1. Maybe delete tv size from the title and add "tv size" to tags instead since the official album doesn't has that in title It doesn't matter imo XDofficial source ( look at cd section ) also maybe add "animation" to tags since the official anime logo Ok(?) in the official site state that
   SPOILER

   
2. Uncheck widescreen support , you don't have sb so widescreensupport isn't that necessary imo I didn't use that actually..
3. Add audio lead in around 1200-1400 should be okay for this The game will automatically add period so don't worry about that

Since you stated in your post that you want mod only on hard+ so here you are

[Hard+]

1. 00:05:274 (2,3) - idk but I thinkthis jumps pretty a bit looks like insane here so try lower spacing so it fit hard a bit It's actually have become a Insane.. I have thought change diff names but Hard+ is ok
2. 00:10:417 (2) - place this at x344 y240 ? so flow will feel a bit reasonable for hard+ here But the whole graph won't look good
3. 00:13:845 (6,7) - Same as the first suggestion ^
4. 00:16:244 (4,1) - I think stack sound a bit better here , imo overlap like this is not really good I'll think about that
5. 00:19:331 (3) - Try move this around a bit so , it will not overlap with 00:19:159 (2) - fixed
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:20:874 (2) - Ctrl+G this would make the flow here a bit better 00:20:531 (1,2) - It's the same type of flow with 00:21:731 (1,2,3) - so I would like to see
7. 00:21:903 (2,3) - Same as first suggestion you can use jumps in hard+ but try not to make the jumps a bit big try to maintain ds ( the yellow number on upper right corner of the editor ) around 1.5-2.1 that should be a good range of jumps for hard+ imo XD it's a Hard+, not Hard
8. 00:39:045 (4,5) - Should make spacing consistent here , I don't see a reason to use jumps here fixed
9. 00:55:159 (1,2,3) - 1/4 sliders is not recommend in hard+ since it play and read kinda hard imo and you even make the flow here a bit hard to that really make this hard+ looks not like hard+ XD
10. 00:57:046 (2) - Ctrl+G ? better flow No difference imo
11. 01:00:645 (7,2) - Aesthetic- improve stack here fixed
    
    imo this hard+ looks like insane lol but that just me idk when I play this diff it feel like I'm playing insane XD I'm going to ask someone
    so how about rename this diff to insane and rename the current insane to custom diff name that sound a bit better idea imo

good luck

Loneight wrote:

o/, 抱歉遲了這麼久...
Request from PM

• 
  黑色 只是建議,不喜歡可以略過~OAO
  藍色 是建議改掉
  紅色 是unrankable

[Easy]

1. 00:11:274 (1,2) - 交換NC, 然後刪掉00:12:645 (1) - 的NC, 我認為00:11:274 (1) - 不需要用到NC去提醒, 感覺跟前面的sliders都是同一部分, 而後面刪NC是因為可以讓人好判斷
2. 00:16:245 (4) - 這裡NC一下, 原因是節奏突然壓在紅線上了(換句話說不同), newbie可能會難以判斷

~

[Normal]

1. 00:02:359 (2) - 建議NC, 畢竟是剛開始, 而且在完全沒有提示下出現了1/1 slider stack, 會讓newbie難以讀圖, NC起來會比較容易, 就像這個00:14:359 (4,1) -
2. 00:47:445 (6,1) - 我的話會讓交換NC, 畢竟stack再一起又是1/2, 縮小的圈圈顏色若不同又相近, 容易讓人判斷失誤

~

[Mei's Hard]

1. 00:26:702 (4) - 感覺用3/4 slider比較適合這段呢, 對一個重度跟隨drum的人來說w

good job!

[Insane]

1. 00:05:274 (2,4) - 如果你願意的話, 這兩個都NC, 好判斷1/1 stack之後又緊接著1次1/2跳+1/1 stack, 而Impurity是因為AR高所以我認為ok, 我不會說我在兩個難度裡看到相同的梗

還不錯的Insane!

[Impurity]

1. 01:16:931 (4) - 考慮NC?

~

That's all
call me back after checking
感覺沒什麼好說的www...已經跟kodora商量好了

Remilia_CO wrote:

说实话我的NC技术真心惨不忍睹。。

1. 00:53:102 - Remove break here, unneeded tbh

1. 00:06:474 (1,2,3,4,5) - This doesn't follow music well imo but I don't know what does, since the music is complicated here.

1. 00:20:874 (2) - Ctrl-G?
2. 00:24:988 (3,1,2) - Ctrl-G 00:24:988 (3) - and then ctrl-G 00:25:331 (1,2) - ?
3. 00:36:645 (1) - You should change these to circles to emphasize these strong sounds.
4. 00:49:331 (1) - Should be 1/2 slider to follow vocals
5. 00:49:674 (2,3) - Vocals are 3/4 at 00:49:931 though

1. 00:09:045 (8,1,2) - 00:09:045 is a strong sound but the other two are not, so it would be better to emphasize the strong sound with a slider and delete 00:09:218 (1,2) -
2. 00:28:417 (1) - A wave slider will flow better here:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:39:388 to 00:44:874 - This is a slower part of the music so you should use lower SV here.
4. 00:49:331 (1) - Should be 1/2 slider to follow vocals
5. 00:49:674 (2,3) - Vocals are 3/4 at 00:49:931 though
6. 00:58:417 (8,1) - Stack is hard to tell here, I would space apart
7. 00:59:788Why are you mapping this to a slider repeat? This is a strong vocal with finish, so you really need a clickable object here.
8. 01:03:045 (3,4) - It's more intuitive to follow vocals here:
   

xxdeathx wrote:

Hey, you wanted M4M in my queue even though it looks like you've gotten several other BN's, so I'll offer my suggestions.

[Easy]

1. 00:53:102 - Remove break here, unneeded tbh

I think it doesn't matter XD
Why is this called a Normal? By all accounts, it's mapped like an Easy. it went over 1.5 stars

[Normal]

1. 00:06:474 (1,2,3,4,5) - This doesn't follow music well imo but I don't know what does, since the music is complicated here.

Drum basically

[Hard]
good

[Insane]

1. 00:20:874 (2) - Ctrl-G? it's the same flow with the following pattern
2. 00:24:988 (3,1,2) - Ctrl-G 00:24:988 (3) - and then ctrl-G 00:25:331 (1,2) - ? Flow becomes awkward imo
3. 00:36:645 (1) - You should change these to circles to emphasize these strong sounds. the 2nd sond isn't that strong so I choose slider
4. 00:49:331 (1) - Should be 1/2 slider to follow vocals It's a point the rhythm switch from following vocals to following beats
5. 00:49:674 (2,3) - Vocals are 3/4 at 00:49:931 though But the patterns won't look good

[Impurity]

1. 00:09:045 (8,1,2) - 00:09:045 is a strong sound but the other two are not, so it would be better to emphasize the strong sound with a slider and delete 00:09:218 (1,2) - those are following the drum
2. 00:28:417 (1) - A wave slider will flow better here: I feel it's no different and mine was looks better
   
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3. 00:39:388 to 00:44:874 - This is a slower part of the music so you should use lower SV here. Because it becomes slower so I choose to use more sliders, and feels like decrease the SV will break the flow
4. 00:49:331 (1) - Should be 1/2 slider to follow vocals The pattern here has already been switched to follow the beats not vocals
5. 00:49:674 (2,3) - Vocals are 3/4 at 00:49:931 though ^
6. 00:58:417 (8,1) - Stack is hard to tell here, I would space apart hmmm, I tried different patterns but not that flow as this one
7. 00:59:788Why are you mapping this to a slider repeat? This is a strong vocal with finish, so you really need a clickable object here. When I play it I feel add a click will messed up the rhythm, so I change it to a reverse slider to use the reverse as a collide, which both emphasize the rhythm and avoid a click here
8. 01:03:045 (3,4) - It's more intuitive to follow vocals here: 01:03:731 (1) - there is already a long slider here so I think using another long slider will make the rhythm feels a awkward pause(comparing with surrounding rhythm)
   

-Tochi wrote:

Graattzz! owo

I was going to look at it, but seems like it's ranked!