Fatfan Kolek wrote:

Mod req because you poked me! :3


[Normal]

1. 00:04:245 (1,2) - Try to place sliders on strong beats. Like placing a circle on the red tick with a following slider on the white tick and a circle again on the next red tick. changed
2. 00:08:874 (1) - Short repeatsliders on blue ticks confuse new players. Try to avoid them. I will notice that but haven't found a way to fix it XD
3. 00:14:702 (5,6,7,1,2) - That whole part seems a bit hard for a Normal. :S XD
   00:50:359 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Too many circles for me. Try to place at least one slider in that part. D: Changed
   00:53:102 (1) - Let the spinner end on 00:55:159 - instead of 00:55:502 - . It's pretty damn hard for new players to instantly hit the next note after a spinner. ok

[Hard]
Check AiMod pls. There are quite a few unsnapped notes! Fixed

1. 00:07:676 (3,4) - Red tick sliders always feel strange to play if there is no special sound in the song. Place them on strong beats. (white ticks) I believe that's my offset mistake XD
2. 00:11:102 (4,5) - Same.

There are more red tick sliders. Try to fix them yourself! :3

[Insane]
Nothing found here except a few red tick sliders here aswell.

[ Aphasia ] wrote:

Quick random mod, I'm a noob LOL

[damian's Easy]

I'll avoid this for now as the mapper hasn't applied the mods.

Anyway, countdown conflict with other difficulties.

[Normal]

This is mapped really well props to you for that, Remi!

Hitsounding

1. 00:18:817 (4) Remove whistle, it makes it sound inconsistent.
2. 00:25:331 (5) Add a whistle to the slider end.
3. 00:29:788 (2) Remove whistle.
4. 00:30:131 (3) Add clap to slider ends (00:30:131 and 00:30:817). Keeps the rhythm going
5. 00:31:159 (4) Add whistle.
6. 00:47:445 (6) Remove clap. Double claps don't sound good.
7. 01:07:502 (2) Remove whistle.
8. 01:08:702 (4) Remove whistle on slider end.
9. 01:09:388 (1) If you'd like, add a whistle here. It helps emphasise on the lyrics. Add a clap to slider end.

↑ All applied

Personally, I think it's a little too note-dense in some parts like 00:36:645 (1) but the rhythm here is really obviousto 00:44:359 (6) I have trouble to placing them good..which makes it confusing for beginners. Try simplifying the beats there.

Something like this

1. 00:04:845 AIMod states "This object is too close to the previous object." Though it might just be buggy on my side cause I see no note there. So do I
2. 00:08:874 (1) Maybe change this to a 1/2 slider? Generally, 1/4s aren't used in Normal difficulties. OK
3. 00:27:045 (1) Blanket (2) better. Fixed
4. 00:25:331 (5) Try starting this slider at 00:25:502 as that's when the guitar starts. It's following the drum
5. 00:44:359 (6) Blanket (5) better. Fixed
6. 00:47:445 (6) This is confusing (stacking and too note-dense). Try making 00:47:102 (5) a repeat slider to 00:47:445. Can't place them very well
7. 01:12:302 (5) Blanket (4) better. Fixed

[Hard]

It's fine; notes flow well together, hitsounding sounds good for the most part. My only qualm with it is that... it seems too difficult for a hard. It's pretty much an easy insane the way it is now.

I suggest making this difficulty easier or renaming this to Easy Insane or something like that.


Hitsounding

1. 00:06:817 (6) Add a whistle.
2. 00:07:331 (1) Remove clap.
3. 00:07:674 (3) Remove hitsounds.
4. 00:08:018 (4) Add whistle to slider end.
5. 00:08:359 (5) Remove whistle.
6. 00:18:645 (1) Remove finish.
7. 00:32:874 (4) Add finish to slider end.
8. 00:34:931 (2) Remove clap from slider end.
   All applied

[Insane]

Sorry, I'm not experienced enough to mod Insanes

Loli -[Koinuri] wrote:

Hii mod request by PM

[Normal]
00:02:359 (2) - Try making this slider more parallel? Maybe even out the space too. It'll look nicer imo Fixed
00:05:788 (1) - It'll look better if it blankets an imaginary circle here with 00:04:931 (3), something like this Fixed

(you don't need circle, of course, just there to show what I mean)
00:05:788 (4) - Remove NC Fixed
00:06:474 (1) - NC here Fixed
00:08:874 (1) - I think a single note here is better than the 1/4 slider. This is the only note that follows guitar here and feels out of place. Also too hard to read for beginners. Fixed with a 1/2 slider
00:28:759 (1) - Slight overlap looks a bit unclean >.< Maybe shift this down a bit to avoid it I use different pattern to make my map variety
00:55:674 (1,2,3,4,5) - I suggest making rhythm in this part the same as 01:06:645 (1,2,3,4,5) - because it's the same part of the music and the latter part maps to the vocal while this one maps to the drums. Mapping to the vocal is more appropriate here since most of the first half of kiai maps to the vocal. Fixed
01:12:302 (5) - NC here Fixed

[Hard]
00:11:959 (1) - Better blanket Fixed
00:15:216 (2) - I got 50 here when I first tried map because it has low distance when the whole map is pretty jumpy for a Hard map. And there's also polarity issue here, making the map somewhat hard to read. I suggest this rhythm: Good idea

00:34:417 - Note here OK
00:55:159 (1,2,3) - Not sure about these.. I think they're too hard for Hard, but then I'm pretty behind on Easy - Hard diffs, I'm not sure how difficult they're allow to be anymore >.<. >w<

Not much to say, nice map

[Insane]
I suggest sticking to combo per 2 downbeat pattern like you did with Hard diff, unless it's something that really calls for emphasis like 00:52:588 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3). The combo pattern as of now is very inconsistent. variety XD
00:15:217 (2) - Same problem as Hard It will be fine because it's INNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNSANE XDDDDDDDDDDDDD
00:26:531 (1) - Overlap doesn't look really nice But really flow XD
00:58:245 (7) - Make this 2 notes, or a note then slider. 00:58:417 has a vocal and doesn't fit sitting on the slider end. Following the drum here, I will consider it.

Good luck ranking this map! Mangaka-san to Assistant-san to so funny \XD/ I agree~!

samplefish wrote:

hi from pm request!

[General]
need to add damian to tags and preferably also info page. please specify his username, the account damian has not been active for a year, which is probably not him.


[Normal]
i feel that stacking should be similar in rhythm. in the first half o the song you have these 00:27:731 (2,3) - which have a 1/2 space in between them. later on you have these 00:52:417 (6,7) - with a 1/4 space. i think this can be confusing. Fixed

00:02:359 (2,1) - distance Fixed
00:04:074 (1,2) - distance Errr...trying to find a new way
00:08:017 (3,4) - feels a bit off in terms of rhythm Following the durms
00:08:874 (1,2) - distance Fixed
00:09:902 (3,4) - i dont see a reason for stacking these really Just make symmetry :3
00:16:245 (1,2) - a little hard for normal, i expect to see this kind of thing in hards XD

[Hard]
00:26:874 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this part stands out a lot to me, it is considerably harder than the rest of the map. the combo of 2 triples into a jump is a bit too much, also considering its not in the kiai of the song. its ok, but i would tone it down The kiai part is a little bit easy...

nice map >w<

[Insane]
00:53:102 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - very confusing and sudden increase in difficulty, perhaps the most difficult part of the song. this pattern was very confusing for me as 00:53:102 (1,2,3) - from 1 to 2 is double distance as 2 to 3. i could not read this at all first time through. i would put the 1 and 2 closer than the 3 for readability. Just regard it as 3 single tap

also nice map.

good luck! Thx !

-Suishou Sekai- wrote:

[Normal]
00:04:074 (1) - Ctrl+G 改了（这是不是更难读了。。;w;）
00:16:588 (2,3) - 合并 有点难读 这一拍太明显了啊。。看看别人怎么说
00:57:731 (4) - 拉长1/4拍 这里居然短了。。感觉ZZ
这个normal不太敢摸 我感觉对于normal 这样的节奏过难了 QAQ我平时看的好多NM都比这个难啊

[Hard]
00:10:931 (3) - 没包好 包好感觉太弯
00:04:074 (3,4,5,6) - 音量建议从小变大 这样太突然 Good idea
00:59:788 (5,6) - 加大间距 好

[Insane]
00:04:417 (4,5,6) - 这三个可以开ds 3456平行四边形
00:19:845 (2) - 上下颠倒一下flow更好 前一个滑条是往上的，这个突然往下感觉有点别扭啊
00:37:502 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 这里和后一段音乐无关 不用开ds 好
00:52:073 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 整首歌都这么简单 这里突然这么大跳 XD歌曲的高潮呀
主歌部分很多跳 到了kiai部分突然大堆大堆的滑条 感觉主次颠倒了 主歌大多单点三组跳，副歌基本都是单点+三连连续跳。。

ktgster wrote:

[General]

Add in tags "The Comic Artist and His Assistants," since that is the english translation of the anime Fixed
Disable countdown and letterboxing in all difficulties. Fixed

[Insane]

Overall, a huge amount of questionable NC's that seem to follow too much on patterning and not on the song. Due to this, your NC's look like they are randomly spammed on some notes. The map structure breaks flow a lot and this whole difficulty focuses too much on patterning and not more on the song. I didn't list many since this one difficulty mod would be very long.
Take a read on this text that can improve your maps musically and playability

00:00:817 (1,2) - you're emphasizing the cymbals in this part. The sliderend is basically hitting nothing since you're using the fade out for the body. Change this to two circles. This also makes 00:02:016 (1) a bit less daunting to see Fixed
00:02:016 (1,2,3) - make these equal, there is no reason to not to since the vocals are using the same pitch basically Fixed
00:04:074 (3) - the clap really doesn't fit here considering this 00:04:245 is a different sound which fits the claps much better. I suggest you remove it
00:04:931 (1,2,3) - what you did here lessens the power in this note since a triple does not really feel like you are playing a singular strong note. These two notes 00:05:017 (2,3) are what I would call borderline overmapping so it might be good to remove these two and do something else with 1 like a slider
00:05:274 - this should a circle
00:06:131 (6,7,8,9) - this is just a snare really. With this volume, it feels like you overmapped this. Make this quieter and if possible, use 1/8 instead of 1/4 1/8 ? that will be real overmapping..
00:07:332 (3,5) - improper blanket I didn't use blanket here because it's too curve with blanket
00:09:217 (4) - this just plays awkward since you really can't hear the downbeat here and the jump just makes that feeling more obvious I didn't put this one at first but I found that would be much awkward
00:14:617 - I have no idea why you didn't add a note here I didn't hear any drum here..
00:14:702 (1,2) - in the song, the tone and the rhythm don't really change a lot here. What you did here use 3/2 to seperate the two notes here with a pretty bad anti-jump. This feels contradictory with the song. Fixed
00:15:730 (1,6) - shouldn't these NC's be switched? Fixed
00:16:588 (1,4) - ^
00:17:017 (2) - pointless overmapping since there is no sound here awkward with only one note here
00:17:274 - instead, place a note here. This just feels empty without one A pause before the main vocal start
00:17:787 (1) - remove the NC if you did the NCing suggestions Redistributed the NC on this part
00:18:301 (1,3) - nazi, fix the stacking (x + 1, y + 1) Fixed
00:19:159 (4,5) - this just seems to break your flow by just doing a back and forth technique. I suggest you avoid this.
00:19:159 (4,5,1) - if you lower the 1, you can form the triangle with 4,5
00:23:274 (2,1) - flow again Fixed
00:29:274 (1) - overlap looks bad although if you did change this, you would need to move some blankets around You mean the overlap with the end of slider? actually it doesn't work in real playing
00:32:873 (5) - Ctrl + G to improve flow and maybe move 00:33:216 (1) somewhere
00:33:902 (4,1) - I question this anti-jump tbh. Make it farther? Fixed
00:40:073 (3,4) - you followed the vocals a lot so this feels contradictory to what you did in the first 40 seconds It is the beginning of the part all following drums
00:42:818 (3) - if you did a 3/4 slider here, why didn't you do it in the above line. Make them the same part since you really don't need to have a variety of rhythms when its the same part repeated in this one section I'm usually avoiding to use same rhythm over and over again except I can't find other rhythm or breaking the flow
00:44:359 - no hitsound to emphasize this? Fixed
00:44:874 (1) - it's bad to ignore sounds that are strong enough to hear them. Make this 1/2. but the vocal is much stronger
00:49:331 (1,2) - is there really any need for this 3/4 slider. You had an excuse with 00:48:645 (2,3) but not here since this sliderend hits nothing and emphasizes basically nothing
00:52:073 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - incredible spike difficulty increase. Every jump is too big compared to the rest of the map and the 1/4 sliders don't help. Heck, the kiai is actually easier than this when literally it has a higher pitch than this part. Change some of the 1/4 sliders to circles and lower the spacing for each pattern. You better fix this if you want a balanced difficulty spread. I'm considering to do ctrl+s to that and replace all the overlap of them
00:58:245 (7,1) - I prefer if you stacked this instead Because of the time, it will be no big effect, and now has a same ds with the notes later
00:59:617 (6) - lower this slider a bit Fixed
01:01:331 (2) - weird slider design that really just looks bad, use a curve that blankets 01:00:645 (1) instead It blanket both 1 and 4 in later
01:03:645 (1) - please do not NC a blue tick note unless you have a very good reason. Also don't stack this note with the slider on top. Nothing in the song indicates a triple like this Fixed, this note is coming from another modder's suggestion(I thought that's broccoly) XD
01:05:787 (5) - increase spacing to emphasize the song better Fixed
01:08:016 (2) - avoid the overlap. Unnessecary and unneeded since this is the only time you do this Why not? QAQ I like sometimes overlap by any good flow
01:08:016 (2) - add note here and move the spinner to the next blue tick, shorten that by two ticks spinner?

Guu wrote:

Normal

00:00:988 (1,2) - 错开的位置有点微妙。。。要么重叠，要么再分开一点 啊啊啊啊我之前煞笔了移动了滑条忘记移动NOTE了QAQ
00:04:931 (3) - 建议滑条尾提前到红线，后面再加一个note。毕竟这里节奏很强烈 Good Idea
00:10:245 (4) - 改成一个短滑条会更带感 我草神建议！！
00:11:959 (1) - 这里高音，滑条可以再下点功夫，改改形状什么的 我试试
00:27:045 (1,2) - 中间红线上再加个note？ 太鬼畜
01:09:388 (1) - 和上面第二条一样，滑条尾提前到红线，再加个note。这里节奏不够强
01:15:731 (2) - 推荐滑条头部提前到01:15:559 好提议，但是摆不好看放弃惹QAQ

Hard

00:29:959 (1,2,3) - 这里大部分白线都没有放在需要点击的物件上感觉不是很爽，你看看改成这样如何http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1736836 滑条前面加NOTE我用得太多了QAQ
00:52:417 (3,4) - 最后是三声强鼓点，建议用三个单点，前面滑条带过 好 改了发现前面的节奏就乱了

Insane

00:33:902 (4,1) - 这中间miss了一个节奏？ 这里本来就是空的啊
00:34:587 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - 柑橘排列不美啊 为了flow只能牺牲排列酱惹QAQ
00:37:502 (1) - 离3远一点，和后面的note一起排成扇形吧。2的位置也调整下 待定
00:57:731 (5,7,1) - 最好完全错开或重叠，叠一半不太漂酿 半重叠是我的爱好啊QAAQ

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爷爷泥好触，过渡那段跳得太美窝不敢看qwq XDDD我居然能摆出这种梗

xLoupGarou wrote:

From xLoupGarou's Modding Queue


[General]

How about setting a Kiai Time on Easy?
Q: Why are there so many timing points Easy than the other Diffs? XD I really don't know XD

Normal

00:06:474 Remove NC? OK
00:10:558 Blanket? maybe it makes symmetry with later things

Hard

HP Drain - 6 OK
AR - 7 maybe? haha I like AR8 hard
00:28:931 Remove NC? ok
00:34:558 ^ I will keep it and see
01:17:788 ^ ^

That's All
Good Luck~ Thx XD

sheela901 wrote:

Yo.

General

1. Only Insane has "The Comic Artist and His Assistants damian_q" in the tags. Put it to every difficulty. OK
2. Replace the background by this one: http://puu.sh/9CrKG/6df628f227.jpg I remade the image so it could have a better quality, and a better dimension. That was really really really really helpful! I love you!

Normal

1. 00:05:788 (4) - Move this to x:282 y:56, so it could be on the same line with the tail of 00:04:931 (3) . I changed it by another way
2. 00:06:474 (1) - This slider got overlap by the previous. So, I suggest to move to x:269 y:248. If you do, move 00:07:159 (1) to x:340 y:351.
   00:07:674 (2) - to x:174 y:349
   00:07:845 (3) - to x:127 y:323. Good idea
3. 00:07:159 (1) - Remove the new combo. ok
4. 00:08:874 (1) - Move the slider to x:133 y:36, and move the last point to x:190 y:41. It'll make an okay pattern. Also, remove the new combo, and add it to 00:09:217 (2) . GOOD!!
5. 00:13:331 (3) - Flip it horizontally. I just feel like it. It makes symmetry with 00:10:588 (4)
6. 00:15:902 (3) - Remove this slider. It sounds better. There's the continuously drum here
7. 00:38:702 (6,7) - Remove 00:39:045 (7) , and for 00:38:702 (6) , continue the slider to 00:39:045 . I feel that the pattern was a bit hard. two heavy drums here
8. 00:59:274 (2) - Move this slider to x:255 y:288. It won't hide the head of 00:59:788 (3) . ok
9. 01:10:245 (2) - Move this slider to x:237 y:73. It's for the same reason as above. ok

Hard

1. 00:05:017 (2) - Remove this note. I'm not sure if there's any beat here. Keep it and see
2. 00:06:474 (7) - Add a new combo here, remove it to 00:07:331 (1) . Also, just move it to x:237 y:77, so it could be closer to the previous slider. I like it as now
3. 00:21:903 (2) - Move this to x:172 y:63, so it could have the same distance between. ok

Insane

1. 00:05:017 (2) - Same here. Remove this note, since I think there's no beat. Keep it and see
2. 00:35:273 (1) - Move this slider to x:97 y:101? It won't overlap. but feels not patterning anymore with those two slider 00:35:616 (2,3)

I'm a newbie at modding hard and insane difficulties, so there's not much suggestions. Ask me questions regarding to the mods if you don't understand something. Good Luck on ranking this map. Thx XD

wcx19911123 wrote:

[General]
make tags the same in all diffs please, remember to put guest user name into it
now you need to write the guest user name into creator's words, this is a must now
cancel wildscreen support and letterbox during breaks, they're useless

FIXED

[Normal]
00:16:245 - better to move the NC to 00:16:588 - , the rhythm can be easier to read imo
00:38:531 (5) - I suggest to remove this note, or the rhythm is too hard for a Normal diff imo

FIXED

[Hard]
00:17:788 - better to move the NC to 00:17:445 - , the anti-jump can be easier to read
00:52:245 (2,3,4) - how about using a 1/2 slider and 3 circles? using circles to follow the drums is better than sliders imo
01:11:959 - 01:14:017 - missed clap?

FIXED

[Insane]
OD or HP+1 please, the current setting is too low.. fixed
00:17:445 - add finish? fixed
00:52:588 - 00:55:674 - this part is too hard to play imo, it's already an Extra diff part imo.. hope you can make the spacing(especially the 1/4 jumps) smaller Can I just use ctrl+S?


hitsounds need to be improved in all diff(especially Easy diff) imo.. some of them doesn't fit the song orz
difficulty gap between Normal and Hard is too big imo, hope you can find some others' opinions on it

wcx19911123 wrote:

[damian's easy]
I suggest AR+1, current setting is too low imo fix
00:00:988 - add finish? no,it's,inappropriate
00:04:931 - end the slider here to follow the vocal? you can also add finish here fix
00:27:045 (1) - I suggest to use circles/sliders here, the spinner is too short imo, hard to play for newbies fix,instead of 2 note
this diff seems need much more works.. you'd better to re-hitsound the whole map(see how's hitsounds working in other diffs)
fix,need some time...

tm1209 wrote:

EZ
00:00:988 (1) - 这里我感觉也可以从1/2节前就开始 或者这个地方加个note 也可以什么都不用搞 看你咯 不知道要怎么改，算了..
00:33:902 (1,2) - 00:35:274 (2,3) - 感觉两个note中间还能加个note 更好的切合vocal 第一个加了不好看，第二个加了不符合DS，所以都不加了
00:38:017 (5,6,1) - 5和1没包好 我感觉还好啊，微调了一下位置
slider tick rate 可以改成2 fix
音效也能做一做 给我一些时间让我研究一下音效...
弱比只能找这么多东西了 强迫症简直不能多说 因为大错误已经让前面的modder改完了...

Aka wrote:

yo, as requested


general stuff

・im not sure if you need the same anime title in tags since you have it as source.. add opening btw fixed
・hard and insane diffs are pretty good in my point of view.. while easier difficulties require a lot of hitsounding and rhythm improvements. also yeah im going to agree with wcx that difficulty gap between Normal and Hard is too big.. =w= hope i can help you


damian's easy

・rename no damian's Easy? o.o not really a must but just to keep consistency(?) in difficulty names fixed
・this diff itself is hitsounded pretty strangely: you have ignored a lot of places where clap hitsound would fit perfectly and placed whistles where they dont really dont fit/: fixed
i would really reccomend you to use Custom 1 Soft Sampleset (S:C1) as used at another difficulties. in the beatmap folder there is a soft-hitclap and would be cool if you could use this for the hitsounding of your Easy difficulty. fixed


・00:00:988 (1) - add finish to emphasize that loud sound in music, thats really odd not to have any hitsound on such place fixed
・00:02:359 (2,3) - try to add Normal Sampleset (at the left side of screen/shift+w) on the head of these sliders. this part sounds pretty empty without hitsounding fixed
・00:00:988 (1,2) - if you tried to make a symmetry there, then you'd better just copy (1) then use ctrl+h, ctrl+g. it will make them perfectly symmetrical fixed
・btw, Easy difficulties are supposed to be mapped with one distance snap. like, if you started to map your diff with 1.0x then you should end it with 1.0x as well. check out spacing between your elements one more time and fix them. yes
umm, so if you will use my suggestion about copy and paste (1) slider, the spacing between those sliders wont be 1.0x so to fix this you can place (1) on x:128 y:64 and then do what i told you above. placing of (2) should be x:336 y:198
・00:06:474 (1) - add finish on head? owo fixed
・01:15:045 (3,4) - imo but this blanket looks not pretty >: maybe you can add one more point between those red ones to make it more solid http://puu.sh/9Rnxj/7e78d25f4e.jpg or make 2nd red as white one to make this blanket looks perfect can't see the picture QAQ
・00:09:217 (4,1,2,3,1) - carefully with such rhythm. this one doesnt sound good. 00:06:474 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - also this one as well. would be better if you could add there more 2/1 sliders like you did it in kiai and before kiai parts and make these parts easier. maybe try something like this?

SPOILER

Also can't see picture
・00:16:245 (3,4) - usually objects in Easy difficulties start from white tick because those which are on red ones are more difficult to feel and less obvious to click on. try shorten (2) slider and place new slider like on the screenshot below so this end of the slider will go on this red tick. (4) plays fine actually as it is

SPOILER

・00:17:445 (1) - (end) 00:18:474 (3) - 00:22:588 (2,2) - use hitsound on such sounds like these, why all of them have nothing ;_; like clap from S:C1 clap or normal sampleset. these places need hitsounding! fixed
・00:18:817 (4,1,2) - those whistles sound really lonely because you've used them a lot in only this part and didnt use anywhere else.
・00:25:674 (5) - comboing is pretty long, consider set a NC there
・00:28:417 (1,1) - would be better if you start a slider when phrase in lyrics start as well but not finish it like this imho
・00:39:388 (6) - fix pls

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・00:53:102 (1) - time between spinner and slider after it is really short. when i was watching new players playing difficulties where not much time for catching next object after spinner they just dont manage to move mouse so fast as they just sliderbreak or miss at all. i'd highly recommend you to delete this spinner and map this part. shorten this spinner would make no sense as it will be too short. maybe try something like this:

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・01:00:645 (5) - NC somewhere there. pretty long combo fixed
・01:04:417 (1,2,1) - fix spacing. it should be 1.0x fixed
・01:10:588 (4) - this slider ends on big white tick and a kind of knocks you out from rhythm. try something like this?

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and thats all. just pay more attention to your hitsounding and how easy and readable your rhythm is. it can be a good diff after it


normal

the diff looks overall good but pretty clamped because of low distance snap and pretty high slider velocity. i'd recommend u to remade diff by just using 1.0x

・00:04:931 (3,4) - (end of (3)) emphasize sounds it music by placing your custom claps there already made a different change
・00:07:159 (2,3,4) - 1/2 rhythm starts from the middle of your (2) slider. either remove (3) or make it something like this

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・00:09:902 (2,3) - ^ same. your 1/2 slider (3) doesnt fit there at all. it should be placed there 00:10:074 -
・00:16:245 (4,1) - 00:17:445 (1,2) - 00:18:474 (3,4) - in this part you have such stuff quite often. unstack at least one of those circles to make the whole part less clamped and more variable, you have a whole field! fixed
・00:31:159 (4,1) - unstack at least there (4) for the same reason as above ;w; fixed
・00:46:588 (4) - forgot clap on head fixed
00:48:131 (2) - on tail fixed
00:48:988 (3) - on reverse fixed
00:50:017 (4) - fixed
00:51:731 (5) - tail fixed
・00:52:588 (7) - feels empty without any hitsounds, place them fixed
・01:04:074 (1,2) - swap NCs?

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hard

mm.. so as difficulty gap between Normal and Hard is too big would be better if you could make it less big by making the spacing of this difficulty more obvious.. i mean make there less jumps and keep the spacing 1.0x (or 1.1x .. not sure what you were using often) MORE often. atm this diff look like 2nd insane.. uwu i wont mention any spacing stuff

・00:04:931 (1,2,3) - honestly i dont hear any sounds to make this triplet logically placed here.. D: Because the background Instrumental music is being loud and HI, so I decide to make one more note here to fit the emotion
・00:06:474 (7) - NC! fixed
・00:07:331 (1) - remove fixed
・00:08:874 (1,2,3) - sometimes your comboing feels inconsistent. sometimes u have pretty long combos and sometimes something like this, really short ones. fix those? the rhythm is being emphasizing
・00:10:931 (3) - 00:11:445 (5) - 00:11:959 (1) - NC goes with those finishes
・00:22:931 (1,2) - swap NCs, 00:23:617 (1) - add there, pause before there...
・00:28:416 (4,1) - swap NC, let people read the (4) slider more easily after (1,2,3) pattern 1234 will be a pattern, if I swap the NC will make like a extra slider here
・00:25:331 (1) - remove... aah i really cant understand your logic of NC there ;w; ;w; I tried and looks better
・00:35:959 (3) - clap on the tail.. ghh.. i wont link any missed clap okay? just rewatch the diff once again, its short and won't take much time fixed all hit sound
・00:55:159 (1,2,3) - such pattern in Hard is way toooo sudden considering the time after spinner and ..well the pattern itself. i'd highly recommend you to make this easier by replacing to 1/2 reverse slider Can't see the picture QAQ

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・00:55:674 (1) - finish suits better than whistle. a kind of loooooooud sound there fixed
・01:17:103 (5,6,1) - the flow which goes to (5) feels not really good. maybe just round it like this? Picture...

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insane

fix your missed claps, you forgot to add often

・00:04:931 (1,2,3) - same as hard uwu
・00:06:131 (6,7,8,9,1) - and the same ;w; it look good and maybe plays good but this stream is invented, no such sounds music.. you can replace this as a slider to fit this dooown sound

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・00:06:474 (1,2) - aaah also that overlap look to good >: what about just palce your (2) some grids down to aviod it?
・00:11:788 (9,1) - this flows not smooth =w= maybe you could improve the flow there by rounding (1) like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1774715 or placing (9) somewhere else
・00:14:530 (10,1) - try to make those flow mooore smooth like i linked above ^ >:

↑pictures can't see..QAQ

・00:26:531 (1) - this guy feels really awkward as a half of it is overlapped of just ended slider. im not really a fan of it.. I'm trying to use many different type of pattern to make my map more versatile QAQ
・00:22:931 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - SO MUCH NEW INCONSISTENT COMBOS DUDE DO SOMETHING CONSISTENT PLS FIX ;W; XD I think it's good dealing with it is the highest point of the whole song
like:

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00:23:617 (1) - remove
00:24:645 (1,2) - swap
00:24:988 (1) - remove
00:25:331 (1) -
00:26:531 (1) -
00:26:874 (9) - add!
00:27:388 (1) - remove
00:27:902 (1) -
00:28:417 (11) - add!
00:28:932 (1) - remove
00:29:274 (1) - reeeemove
00:30:817 (1) -

Those will miss lots of beats QAQ
・00:28:073 (9,10,1) - btw this jump is way toooooooo huge, comparing to the spacing you were using all the time uwumade a change XD
00:29:274 (4,5,6) - same, pretty big imo @.@ would be better if you could move (5) a bit closer to (4) but the object spreading will be awkward ;w;
・00:32:873 (5) - what about to add a bit curve to this slider? owo you were using smooth sliders all the time and now this straight apperars, he looks kinda nuuuuu >: orz tried different ways but all become weird..
・00:58:245 (7) - better to start slider/note there instead of finishing it. phrase in lyrics starts exactly from here and it would be more natural to click there but there is a really heavy beat so I think this one is better...

aand thats all from me i think..
the diff is pretty good, really. just make sure you didnt miss any claps and make NC more logical ;w;

good luck!

Zweib wrote:

To damian_q
帮修了一遍，如果需要给kds，不需要请无视

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Atrue wrote:

只看了看图，简单一说
N-H spread是个问题，你的N感觉SV有点快然后AR又不高，hard三连挺多（其实你hard做得挺好的），然后normal节奏比较散导致sr不是很高。 其实实话讲我觉得normal的节奏有待加强。 很多地方音轨混了。你在高难度里面这样玩是没问题的，可是低难度玩这个就会觉得不知道跟的是什么。
Easy我觉得怎么说呢……有些细节还能做得更好，尤其是锯齿滑条我觉得可以用的少一点
Insane 在少数地方还能把flow做得更好，不过不是啥影响rank的主要因素。

综上所述，想办法弥补一下N-H gap是当务之急
我建议在找泡之前稍微找两个mod来做一下最后的polish。
metadata我没看，这个还是自行确认一下；然后要是有video，tvsize加个video挺好的，仅仅是建议~

ts8zs wrote:

粉色用调色板右上角的那个怎么样。。。 这些全是有点暗的亮色。。换一个那得把全都换了。。感觉还是算了QAQ
[Insane]
00:08:873 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这什么梗
00:17:445 (10,1) - swap NC
话说NC整理一下吧有点乱。。。小梗就不要用NC拆了……
长白线NC吧 orz NC以后再说吧。。不太会整。
[Hard]
除了NC还不错。。。 =w=
[Normal]
00:09:902 (2,3) - 这节奏抓得有点诡异 orz
00:27:045 (1,2) - 因为2和3的stack所以editor所见非所得我觉得blanket可以修一下 我把之前的滑条弧度改了下，包容范围更大了
00:44:359 (6) - blanket fixed
[damian]
00:09:217 (4) - ... 改了。。
00:12:645 (1) - ...... 这个感觉还不算难看，先留着
01:12:988 (2) - ......... 改了。。QAQ
01:05:445 (5) - 1.1x? fixed

果然提高作图水平就得多打图。。。马克一下，回家再看。。话说这话是在对我说？

PolkaMocha wrote:

Sup from my modding queue. This is all solely my opinion as both a mapper and a player. I hate forcing people to change things. My wording may sound demanding, but please know these are ALL suggestions.

I will mod easy and normal as instructed.

General

The combo colours aren't the same for each difficulty.


Easy:

00:09:217 NC Fixed

00:11:959 (8) This overlapping doesn't look good. but that's the best way I have now..

00:11:274 NC Fixed

00:20:188 NC Fixed

00:22:931 (1) (2) could be blanketed. Trying to make some change..

00:31:159 NC Fixed

00:36:645 NC Fixed

01:06:645 Kiai time reflash would look good here Fixed, I just forgot to make it like Insane's

01:12:988 (2) (3) (4) This overlapping might be difficult for early players. Let's see how other modder's opinion..

01:15:045 NC This NC in previous one is come up with the high-time of BGM..

Normal:

00:09:902 (2) (3) This stack is strange I have seen it in some other Normals.. so just wait for other modders' opinion

00:39:388 (1) This doesn't look good. Center the kink to make it neater. I like this shape and need to use it to balance with the following objects.. orz so just wait to look..

01:06:645 Kiai time reflash would look good here Yes I will do that