1. Insane (4.12 stars, 662 notes)
2. Kanari's Hard (3.16 stars, 520 notes)
3. Nardo's Muzukashii (2.49 stars, 748 notes)
4. Nardo's Oni (3.35 stars, 936 notes)
5. Normal (2.19 stars, 373 notes)
6. Solar's Easy (1.62 stars, 262 notes)

-[ Asuna ]- wrote:

drop comment to support.. `3`)b GL~

Kanari wrote:

bakabaka gogooo! ~ >w<

• [Easy]
  beaMap :3
  oki.. too awewesom..

  1. 00:06:905 (2) - (104,124) , biar 00:07:367 (3) - bisa blanket
     
     SPOILER

     
     dan ofc benerin blanket sama DS'a sama 00:08:290 (4) -
     
     SPOILER

     
  2. 00:42:444 (1) - blanket ? gk sekalian blanket aja tuh ? tanggung xD
     
     SPOILER

     
  3. 00:47:059 (2) - blanket'a masih bisa ditingkatin,masih belum PF blanket :3
  4. 00:48:905 (4) - ekor'a kekiriin 1 grid jadi blanket'a ditingkatin + yang 00:49:829 (1) - bisa stack dengan benar ( `3`)b
  5. 00:50:752 (2) - blanket bisa ditingkatin.. lagipula itu prev distance'a 1.05 , jadi coba kepala'a di (168,172)
     
     SPOILER

     
  6. 00:57:213 (1) - ni ekor geser dikit , blanket'a PF Orz
     01:02:290 (2) - why 1/2 and follow vocal ? better 1/1 i guess :3 Luvakan.. jadi inget "kalo mau mod.. lihat'' dulu maksud tujuan mapper'a bikin begitu" :v tahee , i know i'm nubi
  7. 01:08:982 (2) - wee.. coba geser ke 01:08:982 - dan apa menurutmu ?
  8. 02:11:982 (2) - blanketing ?
  9. 02:25:367 (4) - curve slider biasa aja deh.. sekalian blanketing.. lagian gk enak dipandang..
  10. 02:55:829 - feel so empty.. add note pwease `^`
      
      amazennngg.. go to hell pwease..
  
  
  • [nowrmal]
    uven AiMod and check DS plz... :3
    saran mending pake 1.1 / 1.2 Ds buat normal..
    cuma saran sih :3 ,karna 1.0 sungguh teeerrlaaalu deket :3

    1. 00:18:905 (3) - blanket can be improved
    2. 00:20:752 (1) - ^
    3. 00:24:444 (1) - ^
    4. 00:28:136 (1) - ^
    5. 00:29:982 (1) - ^
    6. 00:39:675 (4,5) - owverlavved.. :v
    7. 00:58:829 (2,3) - gimana kalo (2) change ke 1/1 slider dan (3) circle di 00:59:521 - ? better imo i guess :3
    8. 01:00:213 - add circle ?
    9. 01:01:829 (2) - geser ke 01:01:598 dan kasih circle di 01:02:290 - dan jangan lupa benerin Ds'a
    10. 01:05:521 (3) - ^ sama kaya diatas.. geser trus add circle (saya mod bagian ini sama yang atas^^,karna saya kira kiai dinormal diff'a follow vocal XD)
        ya kalo enggak (not follow vocal) berarti 01:10:598 (1,2) - juga diganti :3 ( 01:10:598 (1) - 1/2 slider dan 01:10:829 (2) - geser ke 01:11:059 - dan jadiin 1/1 slider )
    11. 01:28:598 (2) - blanket ?
        
        SPOILER

        
    12. yaaa..01:15:213 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - copyan dari detik'' awal :v
    13. 01:31:367 (2) - ctrl + j trus blanket
        
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    14. 01:32:290 (1,2,3) - blanket properly ?
        
        SPOILER

        
    15. 01:34:598 (1,2,3) - benerin Ds'a dulu, lalu blanket (ntah ngapa,tapi kaya 01:35:982 (3) - pengen blanket sama (3) samar'' xD) btw 01:36:905 (4,1,2) - benerin Ds'a
        
        SPOILER

        
        
        
    16. 01:41:521 (2) - overlapped, inikan bisa kekanan tapi kenapa malah balik kekiri ?
    17. 01:47:521 (3) - reverse? atau add circle aja ? soal'a break ( 6/8 ) kelamaan menurutku xD
    18. 01:49:829 (4) - benerin Ds'a , eehh mungkin udh difix dari awal sejak check Ds di AiMod diawal mod
    19. 02:02:290 (6) - yep , reverse or add circle ?
    20. 02:08:983 (2,3) - yep, kaya di kiai pertama.. ( 00:58:829 (2,3) )
    21. 02:10:829 - add circle ?
    22. halah.. biar cepet.. kiai kedua juga copyan dari kiai pertama apa aja yang difix di kiai pertama terapin juga di sini..
    23. 02:35:982 (2) - dari pada overlap mending geser atau berdiri sekalian
    24. 02:55:829 - circle ?
    25. 03:08:290 (4) - tambah reverse'a trus hapus (5)
    26. 03:19:137 (3,1) - lihat pic aja..
        
        SPOILER

        
    27. 03:26:521 (2) - (460,224) , 03:27:675 - add circle trus benerin Ds selanjut'a
    28. 03:36:675 (3,4) - imo'a sama kaya saran gambar diatas ( 03:19:137 (3,1) - ) tapi 03:37:136 (4) - jadiin circle di 03:37:367
    29. 03:42:444 (6,7) - ^
        yowes seterus'a sampe end copyan ini xD
        lanjut aja ke hard
    
    
    • [Hard]

      1. 00:48:674 (3) - blanket ? see pic for blanket pattern
         
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         First
         
         
         Second
         
         
         Third
         
         
         btw 00:49:829 (1) - stack properly with 00:48:674 (3) -
      2. 01:58:367 (1) - blanket
         
         SPOILER

         
      3. 03:35:982 (1,2) - 1/4 ? weird `-`)a
      4. 03:41:290 (5) - ctrl + g
         
         yep Nice Hard '3')bbbbb
      
      
      • [Insane]

        1. 00:05:290 (5) - blanket can be improved
           wat..hampir mirip hard , saran banyak-banyakin circle buat insane..
           semisal 00:07:136 (4,5,6) - ini jadiin Star pattern , triangel atau sth else..
        2. 00:14:982 (4) - sekalipun insane , kalo begini tetep bikin pusing.. mending benerin distance'a atau stack aja kalo mau
        3. 00:23:059 (3,4,5,6) - ^ bikin pusing.. bnyak yang terkecoh kalo gini..
        4. 00:28:136 (5) - stack aja deh.. sama 00:28:367 (1) - dari pada begitu , jump aneh xD
        5. 00:31:136 (1) - blanket ?
        6. 00:32:982 (6) - ^ properly
        7. 00:36:213 (1) - terserah mau digimanain.. di 00:36:444 - kasih note , so 00:36:213 (1) - mau dijaiin 1/2 reverse,1/2 + 1 circle,triplet or sth else.. w/e
        8. 00:41:521 - 00:43:367 - circle here
        9. 00:51:444 (5) - ctrl + g ?
        10. 00:56:290 (8) - stack properly
        11. 00:53:982 (2) - blanket ? ya kalo mau begini.. coba usahain stack sama 00:55:136 (5) - ekor'a :v
        12. 01:02:290 (4) - stack properly
        13. 01:16:136 (4) - anak ilanggggg... xD nyempil kaya upil di pojok.. (jones)
        14. 01:20:752 (3) - blanket ?
        15. 01:22:367 (2) - stack (pala di (6) ekor di (7) ) ini kan 1/2 trus SV'a juga 2.0 jadi pas kaya'a kalo pake Ds 1.0
        16. 01:27:675 - note here
        17. 01:29:059 (6,7,8) - moovvee far awayy frooom (5) , dats make confushiit
        18. 01:30:675 (3,4,5) - `-`
        19. 01:47:752 (6) - overlapped
        20. 01:50:521 (5,2) - nice art but cuma 2 huruf ;w;
        21. 01:54:905 (1) - blanket properly
        22. 02:12:444 (3) - ^
        23. 02:13:367 (5,6,7,8,9) - bikin pake ctrl+shift+D aja..
        24. 02:17:290 (7) - blanket ?
            -__- mulai maless modding insane.. :3
        25. 02:54:905 (5) - move plz
        26. 02:57:905 (4) - deketin plz
        27. 03:02:290 (1,2,3) - move plz
            weeeeeyyaayy.. owari da...
            pwease Slider tick insane 2 (buat banyak-banyakin combo huehuehue.. karna ini slider kebanyakan Orz)
        
        
        yowes.. semoga membantu..
        ditunggu full mods dimapku.. huehuehue
        Good Luck Ian.. jyana kute.. shurelian :3
        o/

Neku okazaki wrote:

[Muzukashii]
00:05:521 - d The guitar pitch stays high there, so k could fit.
01:15:675 (238) - d no change for the sake of pattern consistency.
01:23:059 (260) - d ^
03:54:444 (200) - d ^

Try to follow more the sounds, the oni have the same problem Same as Muzukashii

[I]MMoRTal[S] wrote:

Hi ~ From my queue

Nardo's Muzukashii

00:50:982 (155) - d \\drum ~ As the vocal pitch is relatively high there, k would be fine imo.
00:56:521 (173) - add d \\reflec to 00:58:136 (178,179,180,181) - ... and it fit to drum As this is the first kiai, a short break here looks good.
02:06:675 (413) - add d \\^ 02:08:290 (418,419,420,421) - No change. The difficulty of the kiai time is stepped up, but a short break still works.
02:39:444 (531) - d k would be better for the high-pitched guitar.
03:27:905 (108) - add d \\^03:29:521 (113,114,115,116) - fixed

Nardo's Oni

01:05:752 (234) - k d would result in a better flow imo.
01:11:636 (259) - d k is used for following the snare sound.
02:01:021 (447,449) - delete ! Nope, I can't find any reason of deleting it.
02:45:444 (651,652) - Ctrl+G dk could follow the guitar in a way better.
03:22:252 (112,114) - delete ! same as 02:01:021 (447,449) -

Good Luck !

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-[ Asuna ]- wrote:

Yo!~
Ian jyana kute.. Shurelia.. o/
m4m right :3
sowwy for delay.. gk punya waktu.. Orz

• [nowrmal]
  uven AiMod and check DS plz... :3
  saran mending pake 1.1 / 1.2 Ds buat normal.. I think 1.0 is far enough~
  cuma saran sih :3 ,karna 1.0 sungguh teeerrlaaalu deket :3

  1. 00:18:905 (3) - blanket can be improved *Fixed*
  2. 00:20:752 (1) - ^ *Fixed*
  3. 00:24:444 (1) - ^ *Fixed*
  4. 00:28:136 (1) - ^ Not trying to be blanket on this one~
  5. 00:29:982 (1) - ^ *Fixed*
  6. 00:39:675 (4,5) - owverlavved.. :v Intentional
  7. 00:58:829 (2,3) - gimana kalo (2) change ke 1/1 slider dan (3) circle di 00:59:521 - ? better imo i guess :3 Current one is more fit imo
  8. 01:00:213 - add circle ? I'm following the piano's sound at here~
  9. 01:01:829 (2) - geser ke 01:01:598 dan kasih circle di 01:02:290 - dan jangan lupa benerin Ds'a Nope. i want to change the rhytm here
  10. 01:05:521 (3) - ^ sama kaya diatas.. geser trus add circle (saya mod bagian ini sama yang atas^^,karna saya kira kiai dinormal diff'a follow vocal XD)
      ya kalo enggak (not follow vocal) berarti 01:10:598 (1,2) - juga diganti :3 ( 01:10:598 (1) - 1/2 slider dan 01:10:829 (2) - geser ke 01:11:059 - dan jadiin 1/1 slider )^^^^^
  11. 01:28:598 (2) - blanket ? Where? .-.
      
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  12. yaaa..01:15:213 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - copyan dari detik'' awal :v
  13. 01:31:367 (2) - ctrl + j trus blanket *Changed*
      
      SPOILER

      
  14. 01:32:290 (1,2,3) - blanket properly ? *Changed*
      
      SPOILER

      
  15. 01:34:598 (1,2,3) - benerin Ds'a dulu, lalu blanket (ntah ngapa,tapi kaya 01:35:982 (3) - pengen blanket sama (3) samar'' xD) btw 01:36:905 (4,1,2) - benerin Ds'a [/color]
      
      SPOILER

      
      
      
  16. 01:41:521 (2) - overlapped, inikan bisa kekanan tapi kenapa malah balik kekiri ? *Intentional*
  17. 01:47:521 (3) - reverse? atau add circle aja ? soal'a break ( 6/8 ) kelamaan menurutku xD *Fixed*
  18. 01:49:829 (4) - benerin Ds'a , eehh mungkin udh difix dari awal sejak check Ds di AiMod diawal mod *Fixed*
  19. 02:02:290 (6) - yep , reverse or add circle ? *Fixed*
  20. 02:08:983 (2,3) - yep, kaya di kiai pertama.. ( 00:58:829 (2,3) ) What do you mean?
  21. 02:10:829 - add circle ? Nope
  22. halah.. biar cepet.. kiai kedua juga copyan dari kiai pertama apa aja yang difix di kiai pertama terapin juga di sini..
  23. 02:35:982 (2) - dari pada overlap mending geser atau berdiri sekalian *Fixed*
  24. 02:55:829 - circle ? *Added*
  25. 03:08:290 (4) - tambah reverse'a trus hapus (5) *Fixed*
  26. 03:19:137 (3,1) - lihat pic aja.. *Changed*
      
      SPOILER

      
  27. 03:26:521 (2) - (460,224) , 03:27:675 - add circle trus benerin Ds selanjut'a Nope
  28. 03:36:675 (3,4) - imo'a sama kaya saran gambar diatas ( 03:19:137 (3,1) - ) tapi 03:37:136 (4) - jadiin circle di 03:37:367 *Added*
  29. 03:42:444 (6,7) - ^ *Added*
      yowes seterus'a sampe end copyan ini xD
      lanjut aja ke hard
  
  
  
  • [Insane]

    1. 00:05:290 (5) - blanket can be improved *Fixed*
       wat..hampir mirip hard , saran banyak-banyakin circle buat insane..
       semisal 00:07:136 (4,5,6) - ini jadiin Star pattern , triangel atau sth else.. *Changed*
    2. 00:14:982 (4) - sekalipun insane , kalo begini tetep bikin pusing.. mending benerin distance'a atau stack aja kalo mau Nope
    3. 00:23:059 (3,4,5,6) - ^ bikin pusing.. bnyak yang terkecoh kalo gini.. ^^^
    4. 00:28:136 (5) - stack aja deh.. sama 00:28:367 (1) - dari pada begitu , jump aneh xD *Fixed*
    5. 00:31:136 (1) - blanket ? *Fixed*
    6. 00:32:982 (6) - ^ properly *Fixed*
    7. 00:36:213 (1) - terserah mau digimanain.. di 00:36:444 - kasih note , so 00:36:213 (1) - mau dijaiin 1/2 reverse,1/2 + 1 circle,triplet or sth else.. w/e Nope, it's already good imo
    8. 00:41:521 - 00:43:367 - circle here *Fixed*
    9. 00:51:444 (5) - ctrl + g ? *Fixed*
    10. 00:56:290 (8) - stack properly *Fixed*
    11. 00:53:982 (2) - blanket ? ya kalo mau begini.. coba usahain stack sama 00:55:136 (5) - ekor'a :v *Fixed*
    12. 01:02:290 (4) - stack properly *Fixed*
    13. 01:16:136 (4) - anak ilanggggg... xD nyempil kaya upil di pojok.. (jones) That's an intention.
    14. 01:20:752 (3) - blanket ? *Fixed*
    15. 01:22:367 (2) - stack (pala di (6) ekor di (7) ) ini kan 1/2 trus SV'a juga 2.0 jadi pas kaya'a kalo pake Ds 1.0 Nope
    16. 01:27:675 - note here Nope
    17. 01:29:059 (6,7,8) - moovvee far awayy frooom (5) , dats make confushiit That's an intention~
    18. 01:30:675 (3,4,5) - `-` ?
    19. 01:47:752 (6) - overlapped *Fixed*
    20. 01:50:521 (5,2) - nice art but cuma 2 huruf ;w;Yeah...
    21. 01:54:905 (1) - blanket properly *Fixed*
    22. 02:12:444 (3) - ^ *Fixed*
    23. 02:13:367 (5,6,7,8,9) - bikin pake ctrl+shift+D aja..
    24. 02:17:290 (7) - blanket ? Already blanket.
        -__- mulai maless modding insane.. :3
    25. 02:54:905 (5) - move plz Nope
    26. 02:57:905 (4) - deketin plz Nope
    27. 03:02:290 (1,2,3) - move plz Nope
        weeeeeyyaayy.. owari da...
        pwease Slider tick insane 2 (buat banyak-banyakin combo huehuehue.. karna ini slider kebanyakan Orz)
    
    
    yowes.. semoga membantu..
    ditunggu full mods dimapku.. huehuehue
    Good Luck Ian.. jyana kute.. shurelian :3
    o/

xLoupGarou wrote:

From . . Miramono's Modding Team

Mod Starts Here

[ Normal]

03:08:290 (4) - How about starting the slider at this point 03:08:521 - then remove one repeat after adjust the objects for DS. . like this for instance *Ok*



or if you seem that the DS is too compressed try this ..



03:38:290 (2) - Same as above, I don't this 3 repeats is nice for this song XD*Ok*

Well, That's All . . . Good Luck~

xLoupGarou wrote:

From . . Miramono's Modding Team

Mod Starts Here

[Nardo's Muzukashii]

00:09:213 (23) - Change to k D would be better for the stressed sound.

00:42:444 (125) - ^ ^

00:53:521 (164) - ^ ^

01:08:290 (213) - ^ ^

01:18:906 (247) - ^ The pitch of the music increases at 01:19:136 (248) - , so d k could fit.

01:19:136 (248) - Change to d ^

01:19:367 (249) - Change to k Same as 00:09:213 (23) -

01:48:905 (347) - ^ ^

01:52:598 (360) - ^ ^

02:23:290 (473) - Change to d 02:23:290 (473,474,475) - have the same vocal pitch, so k k k would be fine.

02:30:675 (499) - ^ Same as ^

02:44:059 (544) - ^ No change as the guitar pitch increases.

02:44:290 (545) - Change to k Same as 00:09:213 (23) -

03:02:752 (18) - ^ d would be better as the vocal pitch drops.

03:14:982 (59,60) - Change to d k k could fit the vocal pitch well.

03:15:444 (61) - Change to k Same as 00:09:213 (23) -

03:17:521 (70) - ^ ^

03:24:906 (97) - ^ ^

03:39:675 (152) - ^ ^

03:50:752 (190) - ^ ^

03:57:675 (210) - ^ d k could fit the pitch of the music.

03:57:906 (211) - Change to d ^

Well, That's All . . . Good Luck~

-[ Asuna ]- wrote:

beaMap :3
oki.. too awewesom..
00:06:905 (2) - (104,124) , biar 00:07:367 (3) - bisa blanket (wah bingung juga itu blanket sebelah mananya o_o)
dan ofc benerin blanket sama DS'a sama 00:08:290 (4) - (sip deh betulin dikit)
00:42:444 (1) - blanket ? gk sekalian blanket aja tuh ? tanggung xD (sengaja, soalnya saya pake style slider 38 degree rotation, jadi ya ga selamanya perlu diblanket~)
00:47:059 (2) - blanket'a masih bisa ditingkatin,masih belum PF blanket :3 (woke)
00:48:905 (4) - ekor'a kekiriin 1 grid jadi blanket'a ditingkatin + yang 00:49:829 (1) - bisa stack dengan benar ( `3`)b (sip deh, detil amat wkwkw)
00:50:752 (2) - blanket bisa ditingkatin.. lagipula itu prev distance'a 1.05 , jadi coba kepala'a di (168,172) (fixed cara sendiri)
00:57:213 (1) - ni ekor geser dikit , blanket'a PF Orz (kurang curve kali itu slidernya, fixed anyway)
01:02:290 (2) - why 1/2 and follow vocal ? better 1/1 i guess :3 Luvakan.. jadi inget "kalo mau mod.. lihat'' dulu maksud tujuan mapper'a bikin begitu" :v tahee , i know i'm nubi (haha iya soalnya sengaja buat penekanan bunyi di red tick, ga berarti ngikutin vokal juga)
01:08:982 (2) - wee.. coba geser ke 01:08:982 - dan apa menurutmu ? (sengaja, soalnya kalo mulai slider di red tick agak susah buat newbie, biarpun ada pengecualian juga sih)
02:11:982 (2) - blanketing ? (no thanks \o/)
02:25:367 (4) - curve slider biasa aja deh.. sekalian blanketing.. lagian gk enak dipandang.. (hm, bentuk panah juga oke imo)
02:55:829 - feel so empty.. add note pwease `^`(kan ngikutin instrumen, jadi gabisa add note sembarangan hue)

amazennngg.. go to hell pwease.. (lol runs)

MidSoul wrote:

hi(｡･ω･)ﾉ”
from taiko modding queue, request from Shurelia. thanks!　こちらこそ、ありがとう～！>‿<)o

[Nardo's Muzukashii]

00:22:829 (64) - rem
・from drums, but like 00:29:982 (85,86) - , its good for remove. fixed

01:32:983 (291) - rem
・same as ^ ^

[Nardo's Oni]

01:05:521 (232,233,234,235,236) - kdddk,kkddk,ddkkk
・sounds better for base or vocal. I'll keep this first, for consistency as 03:36:906 (182,183,184,185,186) -

02:01:367 (450) - k
・for vocal and snare, base. fixed

02:34:829 (601) - k
・from vocal pitch.
・because 02:31:598 (585,,,595) - and 02:34:136 (597,598,599,600) - from vocal, this fit best. fixed

02:42:444 - try add k?
・from guitar fixed

03:22:598 (115) - k
・same as 02:34:829 (601) - fixed


this.. easy but really good taiko map, hope this get rank..((｡･ω･)ﾉ”☆

Byakugan249 wrote:

[Normal]
00:01:829 (1) - consider moving this down a bit for a smoother look in terms of transition during gameplay.*Fixed*
00:04:367 (1,2) - there's an easier way to do this. remove this and do this rhythm instead . it'll be a lot smoother to follow and easy to follow as well during gameplay.Sound's Good to me. *Changed*
00:13:367 (1) - maybe 2 circles could work here instead of a 1/1 slider for more effect in the BGM during gameplay?*Changed*
00:14:059 (2,1) - this transition feels awkward with the repeat of (2) in the way. instead you should do a a 1/1 slider and a circle starting at 00:14:290 - for an easier transition in this part of the song during gameplay.Indeed. *changed*
00:30:444 (2,3,1) - 2 issues: this pattern looks cluttered and the spacing from (3,1) is inconsistent. either do this or do this instead. this pattern is stacked on the beginning of 00:29:059 (2) - , so for this one it'll make a triangular pattern. the 1st one would be a safe route and you'd go for neatness instead.
00:36:213 (1) - remove the claps at the sliderbody, and the end of the slider. it breaks consistency in the clap pattern and it sounds bad to follow during gameplay.*Fixed*
00:38:521 (2,4,5) - this overlap looks and plays bad to follow during gameplay since it'd disturb players. for this one, do this instead so that it'll look a lot smoother to follow and neater during gameplay.Looks Great! *Changed*
00:44:752 (3,1,2,3,1) - this transition is too sharp and feels forced to follow during gameplay. try doing this for that smoothness in this pattern during gameplay.Yes. *Fixed*
00:57:213 (2) - remove the clap at the beginning and at the end. same reason as 00:36:213 - .*Fixed*
01:15:213 (1) - i highly suggest that you put this near the middle so that players would get to this note in time after the spinner.[/color]
01:33:675 (3) - consider flipping this horizontally because this transition isn't straightforward and it feels a bit awkward to follow since it's facing the opposite direction.*Fixed*
01:40:598 (1) - don't do this in a normal diff. this will be hard to read for players since they don't know when this repeat slider ends. use a 1/2 repeat slider or a 1/1 slider to follow the drums in an easier way during gameplay.Ah, Okay.
01:41:521 (2) - add a finish at the beginning of this slider. it'll emphasize the cymbals in this part of the song during gameplay.*Added*
01:48:675 (1) - same as above, but add it at the end.Alright.
02:36:675 (3,4) - same as 00:44:752 - . this time do this instead.*Fixed*
03:15:444 (5) - add a finish at the beginning. same reason as 01:41:521 - . *Added*
03:24:675 (2) - same as above, but at the repeat. Yeah. *Added*
03:35:982 (2) - you have to move this down because it doesn't look good at all when a note is touching the HP bar during gameplay.*Fixed*
03:43:367 (1) - same as 03:15:444 - .*Fixed*
03:52:368 (4) - same as 03:35:982 - .*Fixed*
you need to make your patterns neater, and smoother. ik this is your 1st time, but if you wanna make this fun, you have to make the transitions smoother to follow, as well as your rhythm selections. don't rely on the vocals too much since it'd play awkwardly. follow the drums and vocals equally to make this a fun diff.Thanks for the Advice!


[Insane]
00:03:444 (1,2,3) - this upwards transition feels uncomfortable to follow since there's nothing that feels smooth to follow. instead do something like this to make it look and feel smoother to follow during gameplay.Alright. Fixed
00:09:213 (4,1) - the NC should be at (4) because this is where the BGM changes and (1)'s NC should be removed for that purpose.*Fixed*
00:14:521 (3,4) - this would be pretty hard to read, especially for experienced players because it's so close, people can mistake this for a 1/2 pattern. either stack it, or space it out to make it readable to follow during gameplay.Okay , I change this one.
00:15:905 (6,7) - stack these notes on 00:14:982 (4) - like this for neatness in this pattern. if you don't like this, then do this to keep things safe.*Fixed* By my own way.
00:19:021 (5) - this circle ruins the calmness of this part of the song. remove it for that purpose, and it doesn't follow anything in the music.Yes.. *Removed*
00:22:598 (2,3,4) - same idea as 00:14:521 - , but space it out to make it more readable during gameplay.Alright. *Fixed*
00:30:444 (5,6) - ^*Changed*
00:31:136 (1) - replace the clap for a finish for emphasis in the cymbals. the clap sounds awkward and inconsistent during gameplay.*Fixed*
00:34:829 (3) - this transition feels awkward to follow because of how this slider is facing away from the circle. i really think you should flip it like this so that it'll be a lot smoother to follow during gameplay IMO.Okay, I'll do that.
00:42:213 (2) - if you wanna make this slider look nice and flowy, then do this for that purpose. follow the points carefully to see where to put it.Thanks, I'll use this.
00:44:059 (2) - for this one, switch to grid level 3 and do something like this for neatness in symmetry.*Fixed*
00:59:982 (3,4,5) - the gap between these notes should be equal because it'll emphasize the bass more effectively. (4,5)'s spacing breaks consistency in spacing during gameplay.*Fixed*
01:09:905 (1) - the multiplier here feels unnecessary because it feels like the flow has suddenly stopped. remove it and stick to the current multiplier to keep the flow steady.Yes.. *Fixed*
01:11:059 (3) - add a finish at the beginning for emphasis in the cymbals.*Added*
01:14:752 (1,2,3) - consider making this symmetrical for a smooth transition in this combo like this. you can increase the spacing, but don't increase it beyond 1.6x. that feels too forced IMO.*Fixed*
01:28:598 (5,6,7,8) - patterns like these can confuse and play uncomfortably for players, so for this one, i highly suggest that you space out (5,6) for readability purposes.Alright. I'll do that
01:30:213 (2,3,4) - ^*Fixed*
01:44:059 (8,1) - ^*Fixed*
01:47:752 (6) - consider removing the whistle in the sliderbody because it sounds too distracting to follow during gameplay.*Fixed*
01:54:213 (2) - same as 01:11:059 - .*Fixed*
01:57:905 (5) - NC here. this is where the lyrics change in this part of the song.*Fixed*
02:15:444 (3) - this feels too sharp to follow during gameplay. for this one, do this. same reason as 00:44:059 - .*Fixed*
02:23:752 (3) - same idea as above, but make it look like this.]Ah, yes.. This is better. Thanks
02:29:174 (5) - delete this note because it doesn't follow anything in the music.*Removed*
02:35:521 (1) - same as 02:15:444 - . like this.Ah, yes.. This is better. Thanks
02:54:213 (3,4,5) - same as 00:14:521 - .*Fixed*
03:01:829 (2,1) - ^*Fixed*
03:05:752 (1,2,3) - the spacing is too far out to be readable for a triplet. reduce the spacing so that it'll be more readable to follow during gameplay.I'll Stack this.
03:15:444 (5) - same as 01;11:059 - .*Added*
03:27:675 (3,4) - same as 00:14:521 - .Fixed by my own way
03:44:982 (5) - consider a NC here. similar reason as 01:57:905 - , but this follows the BGM.*Fixed*
03:49:136 (4) - ^*Fixed*
03:53:521 (6) - ^*Fixed*
your aesthetics and hitsounding need more improvement here. get more mods to make this map even better.

and that's all i got. GL and don't give up on this map .

Byakugan249 wrote:

hey~ i'm here from my queue .

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: Should be fixed/highly suggested.
Green: Suggestion.
Blue: Comments, Advice or Other.

[General]
CLEAR~!

[Solar's Easy]
00:06:905 (2,3,4) - consider moving these notes like this for a better transition for beginners during gameplay. (fixed)
00:09:213 (1,2,3) - adjust this combo to look like this mainly because of (1). it'd flow a lot better if it was symmetrical while at the same time, blanketing the next note during gameplay. (fixed, forgot about the blanket orz)
00:17:521 (2,3) - remove (3) and add a repeat on (2). this could be heard to read for beginners since the 1/2 transition could be too sudden for beginners during gameplay. (I tried to make an Easy+ but I would consider if it really have to be changed later)
00:24:905 (2,3) - ^
00:27:213 (5) - i highly suggest that you use a 1/1 slider here. 1/2 repeats could surprise beginners during gameplay. (umkay)
00:28:598 (2,3) - same as 00:17:521, also this transition feels awkward to follow since it's not straightforward during gameplay. if you keep this, than move (3) up, aligning to the end of (2) to keep the flow steady in this part. (how should I put it, a straightforward pattern doesn't look that good for me, I'll try to consider later)
00:31:829 (2,3,4) - this would be tough to follow for beginners mainly because of the 1/2 transitions. yes the BPM is low enough, but that doesn't mean beginners would react to it in time. i highly suggest that you remove this and do a 2/1 slider and a circle to follow the music more properly and it'll be a lot easier to follow during gameplay. (fixed)
00:34:829 (6) - delete this circle. yes it follows the music, but this circle can come up too quickly for beginners during gameplay. (sure)
00:36:675 (3,4) - for this one remove this and replace this for a 3/2 repeat slider at 00:36:905 - . same reason as 00:31:829 - . (I don't think that's that hard to follow though, I'll gather some more opinion for the time being)
00:39:675 (2) - i highly suggest that you move and adjust this slider to look like this for a steady transition during gameplay. (fixed with my own way)
00:44:059 (3) - i think you're forgetting a finish at the beginning. add it for that emphasis in the cymbals during gameplay. (fixed, thanks)
00:45:675 (5) - same as 00:39:675 - .
00:47:059 (2,3) - same as 00:36:675 - .
00:56:290 (4) - consider flipping this so that you can blanket the previous slider for neatness and a steady transition during gameplay. (fixed)
00:58:598 (2,3,4,5) - this is too much for an easy diff. it may look easy to you, but to beginners it could make them feel uncomfortable to follow during gameplay. for this one, use this rhythm instead. it'll follow the music and flow smoothly to the song for beginners during gameplay. (fixed)
01:02:290 (2,3) - replace this for a circle and a 1/1 slider. same reason as above. (fixed)
01:12:444 (2,3,4) - consider doing this for better symmetry like i mentioned at 00:09:213 - , as well as a steady flow during gameplay. (I think I'll keep my own pattern, thanks for the suggestion though)
01:42:444 (2) - i suggest that you flip this slider horizontally to blanket the previous slider's end. (I think it's fine the way it is)
01:46:829 (3,4,5) - for this one, replace this for a 1/1 repeat slider and a circle. same reason as 00:58:598 - . (I'll keep it until I can find a better way to fix it ><)
01:54:213 (3) - same as 00:44:059 - . (fixed)
01:57:905 (3) - this has to be a 1/1 slider starting at 01:58:136 - . same reason as 00:58:598 - . (fixed)
02:02:752 (4) - same as 01:42:444 - .
02:21:213 (4) - add a finish here. you'd be emphasizing the cymbals if you do. (okay)
02:49:829 (1,1) - this is too close for beginners to recover after this spinners. even though you're giving a 1/1 window, that doesn't mean they can recover in time for the next note since it can come up too quickly during gameplay. for this one, give a 3/1 window so that beginners can have plenty of time to recover for the next note, and it'll make the BGM "stand out" more during gameplay. it should look like this. (I'm still not that sure myself, I'll try to gather opinion before considering)
03:02:752 (1,1,2) - here as well. again, this is too close for beginners to recover during gameplay. instead of a 3/1 window, give it a 2/1 window. in other words, this. same reason as above.
03:15:444 (3) - flip this vertically instead. because this slider is "away" from the circle, it doesn't show a straight path to this pattern, breaking the sense of flow during gameplay. (it's not that severe in my opinion, unless if it's really out of the route)
03:41:982 (4) - finish at the end. same reason as 02:21:213 - . (fixed)
03:43:367 (1,1) - same as 02:49:829 - .
not bad, but with the rhythm you chose, for example the 1/2 transitions makes it feel like a light normal. you need to highly consider making this easier so that it'll play comfortably for beginners. it may play comfortably for you, but think of how beginners/1st timers would react to this on their 1st try, and be in the beginners' shoes when they play this as well for the 1st time.

HouseForever wrote:

GENERAL:

It downloaded 2 times the Harddiff.. dunnow why

EASY:

There are very nice blankets here.

00:09:213 (1) Its not perfectly symmetrical
01:01:367 (1,2) Make 1 a hitcircle and a slider between the sliders tail and 2
01:12:444 (2) It isnt perfectly symmetrical
01:14:290 (4) Transfer it into one hitcircle and one slider
01:16:136 (2) ^
02:20:059 (3) This one isnt perfectly symmetrical
02:23:059 (2) Put the red sliderticks in a way, that the first one is at 02:23:290 and the second one at 02:23:521. It fits to the vocals
03:31:367 (4,1) The blanket is not perfect

I will edit this post soon, I have to leave my computer now... its important Today in the evening I will finish the mod.
Now Im back, lets go

NORMAL:

Maybe do more Blankets in the difficulty
Maybe dont always follow a direction, when slider meet. Turn the boath sliders in opposite directions, so it gives you more opportunities.

00:18:905 (3) Put this exactly like 1 on the other side of 2
00:38:752 (1,2) Use a turned version of 2 for 1
00:39:444 (2,3,4) DS-Mistake
03:33:675 (4,5) Something like this doesnt look very nice. Change the direction of 5 or put 5 a little bit down, so it continues the curve. You made it often
03:45:906 (1,2) Fix the blanket

HARD:

00:03:675 (1) should be here 00:03:905 (1)
00:04:136 (2) should begin here 00:04:367 (2) fits the rythm better
00:56:521 (4,5) Fix blanket
01:11:752 (6) Put it to x:348 y:120
01:40:598 (1) I think converting it to 2 hitcircles would be much easier to play
02:22:136 (1,2,3) Fix Blanket
03:04:829 (2,3) ^

The rythm is good, but you should check all of your blankets again and make them perfect like its done in EASY.

INSANE:

00:01:829 (1,2,3) Check the distance between 1,2/2,3
00:16:136 (7,1) Fix Blanket
00:46:829 (3,4,5) Make it more beautiful
00:51:213 (4) Put it onto x:270,y:122 (You can adjust the position of hitcircles more precisely holding Shift)
00:54:213 (3,4,5) 4 isnt in the middle of 3 and 5
01:40:482 (2,3,4,5,1) its kinda weird. there should be a slider from 5's tail to 1's head
01:54:905 (1,2,3) Compared to the other parts of the song its too hard
02:52:136 (3,4) The distance is too short
02:59:752 (3) Bend it more to the right
03:38:752 (1,2,3,4) The distances are not the same. You should use DS here, too, not because it would be too hard, but it looks better
03:40:367 (3,4,5) ^
That was it EASY is nearly perfect, the rest needs a little bit precise overlooking. Overlook the blankets and the distances between hitcircles.

NeviltiS wrote:

Hi~ from my queue

[Nardo's Muzukashii]
02:29:290 (492,493) - remove? (It looks good also reduce the Notes little because after the chorus has been completed.) As the drum sounds are quite obvious, following them would be fine.

[Nardo's Oni]
00:51:098 (172) - d? fixed
02:46:021 (659) - k? d could result in a better flow imo.

Good map! I'll throw a star.
Good luck!

NeviltiS wrote:

Hi~ from my queue

[Nardo's Muzukashii]
02:29:290 (492,493) - remove? (It looks good also reduce the Notes little because after the chorus has been completed.)

[Nardo's Oni]
00:51:098 (172) - d?
02:46:021 (659) - k?

Good map! I'll throw a star.
Good luck!

1. add tag opening

1. 00:01:829 - add Greenline Vol 40%
2. 00:31:367 - add Greenline Vol 50%
3. 01:11:982 - Vol 40～50%
4. 02:22:598 - Voldown plz
5. 03:46:136 - add Greenline Vol 60%
6. 00:17:521 (2,3) - melody follow try thiis
   SPOILER

   
7. 00:24:905 (2,3) - ^
8. 01:27:675 (2,3) - ^
9. 00:28:598 (2,3) - Sound of reverse
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 01:35:059 (2,3) - ^
11. 01:38:752 (2,3) - ^
12. 01:45:213 (1,2) - Sound of reverse
    
    SPOILER

    
    00:45:675 (5) - I think that we should put NC from Kiai time
    
    SPOILER

    
13. 01:00:444 (4) - ^
14. 01:55:829 (5) - ^
15. 03:16:598 (4) - ^
16. 03:00:444 (2,3) - 03:00:675 - I want to extend the sound of here
    
    SPOILER

    
17. 03:02:752 (1) - additions Drum clap or CS4 Clap

1. SV1.4 high Rate 1.2 is best
2. Remake 12 per DS is lower than Easy
3. I think preferable to use a more 1/1 slider is good
4. Long mod...Normal & Insane continue in the future

1. 00:42:445 (1) - add Finish hed
2. 00:53:290 (6) - same NC
3. 01:36:444 (1) - blanket
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:40:598 (1,2,3,4) - This is a bit difficult try this
   
   SPOILER

   
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:45:213 (1) - add whistle
6. 01:52:136 (5) - add finish end
7. 02:04:598 - incompatibility add circle and whistle?
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 02:52:136 - must not Greenline & kiai flash
9. 02:57:905 (2) - whistle hed 02:57:675 (1) - delete whistle
10. 03:03:905 (3) - whistle end
11. 03:17:405 (7) - same NC

rew0825 wrote:

Hi from my mod requeue

[ Nardo's Muzukashii]

1. 01:53:752 (362) - k Retained for consistency as 00:43:598 (128) -

[ Nardo's Oni]

1. 00:51:098 (171,172) - ctrl+g kdk could fit the snare at 00:51:213 (173) - while matching the vocal pitch.
2. 01:02:636 (219) - move to 01:03:098 I think both positions are fine.
3. 01:05:521 (232) - k Nope, the vocal has the same pitch as 01:05:290 (231) -
4. 03:36:906 (182) - k same as ^

Good luck

1. 00:17:521 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Remove Clap & Finish
   during this section, the whistle should be on the 1.3 beat
2. 00:36:905 (3) - Remove Clap hed
3. 00:37:367 (1) - Remove Clap end
4. 00:44:059 (2,3,4,7,8) - Remove Clap all
5. 00:46:136 - 01:11:982 - during this section, the soft-default whistle should be on the 1.3 beat
   Where there is hit Finish as it is
6. 00:59:982 (3,4,7,8) - Remove Clap
7. 01:06:213 (1) - Remove Finish meddle end
8. 01:07:367 (2) - Remove Clap
9. 01:26:752 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1) - Remove Clap
   during this section, the whistle should be on the 1.3 beat
10. 01:33:675 (4) -is fine though
11. 01:41:521 (2) - add finish hed
12. 01:44:521 (1) - remove clap all
13. 01:47:059 (4) - Remove Clap hed
14. 01:54:213 (2) - Remove Clap middle
15. 01:55:367 (3) - Remove Clap hed
16. 01:56:059 (5,6) - Remove Clap
17. 01:56:290 - 02:22:598 - Same as 1
18. 02:02:290 (3) - add clap hed
19. 02:02:752 (4) - Remove Clap end
20. 02:03:444 (1,2) - Remove Clap
21. 02:09:675 (2) - Remove Clap end & add whistle
22. 02:10:598 (4) - add whistle
23. 02:13:829 (3) - Remove Clap
24. 02:23:059 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - during this section, the Clap should be on the 2.4 beat
25. 02:36:559 (4,5,6) - Remove Clap
26. 03:02:752 (3) - Remove Finish
27. 03:06:444 - 03:43:136 - Same as 1
28. 03:10:367 (1) - Remove Clap middle
29. 03:20:290 (4) - Remove Clap
30. 03:23:752 (7) - Remove Clap end
31. 03:28:598 (7) - Remove Clap hed&end add hed finish
32. 03:30:444 (4) - Remove Clap hed
33. 03:31:136 (1,3,6,7) - Remove Clap
34. 03:35:059 (7) - Remove Clap
35. 03:38:752 (1) - Remove Clap
36. 03:43:021 (3,4) - Remove Clap
    
    
    
37. 01:27:213 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - This arrangement is not possible in this rhythm I strongly recommend a change of sound
38. 01:50:521 (5,3) - It is difficult to this rate change also read in discomfort...Another Pattern
39. 03:17:059 (2,3,4) - 1/4 music 03:17:175 - add note

ReallyFastCat wrote:

Hey! From my modding queue!

[General]
- Set AudioLeadIn to 500 in every .osu file it's already good now
- Set slider tick rate to 2 (all diffs)

[Normal]
00:44:752 (3,1) - Bad overlap it's stil readable
00:57:213 (2) - A normal curve would be better here (Just remove the red anchor) okay...
02:23:521 (3,4,5) - Why change the spacing here? oh sorry.. thanks
03:18:444 (2,3) - Blanket these okay
03:33:444 (3,4) - Improve blanket done

[Insane]
00:19:827 (3) - Not snapped Oh my... Thanks
01:00:444 (5,6,7,8,1) - Move (8) to x323 y299 Alright
01:02:521 (5,6) - Blanket fixed
01:03:213 (7,8) - ^ ]done
01:56:059 (5,6,1) - Make this a straight line ]fixed
02:54:213 (3,4) - Stack these? The spacing is really confusing right now ]alright


Good luck with the map! ^o^

Xelasto wrote:

Hello! from my modding queue Hi~

Normal

00:30:905 (1) - This is a very uneven blanket Ah, yes. Fixed
00:37:367 (2) - Blanket 1 better i don't know but.. i think i intended to do this.
00:39:675 (2,3) - Copy 3 of 2 it's already a copied slider
00:55:367 (5) - Blanket better done
00:59:290 (4) - ^ it's already well blanketed
00:59:982 (1) - No NC this is for matching with the vocal
01:03:213 (4) - Blanket better Already fine for me
01:15:213 (1) - No NC NCed so player can know that these objects are stacked
02:01:367 (4) - Move the middle point up 2 this one already fine.. i think
02:17:752 (7) - NC here, not on the slider same reason with the previous NC mod
03:08:060 (3) - Blanket better doing this intentional
03:30:675 (2) - ^ already fine
03:53:291 (1,3) - Overlap these 2 fixed

Quite a good difficulty, just some blanket problems

Sorry. I'm not going to mod insane It's okay~

Very great map. Awesome use of sliders. Good luck on your map. Sorry I didn't find much. This is a very high quality map.

ts8zs wrote:

My earphones was broken,maybe there are some nonsense in it.
offset 1813(-16) This will be considered by Shurelia.
[Nardo's Oni]
01:02:059 (215) - d k would be better since the vocal is higher-pitched than 01:01:598 (214) -
01:08:982 (248) - k d could result in a better emphasis of the next higher-pitched note at 01:09:444 (249) -
02:45:098 (651) - del I followed the guitar sound there.
03:22:252 (112) - k d would sound better imo.
[Nardo's Muzukashii]
01:41:290 (317) - del? fixed

some nonsense

02:29:290 (491,492,493) - ddd fixed
02:31:598 (499,500,501) - d k Retained to map the background sound there.
03:16:713 (66,67) - del? fixed in an alternative way.
03:25:136 (98,99,100) - k k fixed
03:39:906 (153,154) - k k fixed

255,144,66197,2,0,B|296:144|296:144|336:192|392:176,1,140
368,96,66889,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,116,67120,2,0,P|469:182|449:248,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
388,308,67813,6,8,P|319:308|253:285,1,140,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

448,256,114197,2,0,B|448:224|448:224|480:172|441:119,1,140

200,224,122274,2,0,B|235:194|228:137|228:137|254:85,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

414,319,140736,6,0,B|346:307|346:307|284:365|218:313,1,210,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

231,358,188044,2,0,B|271:329|262:270|262:270|286:228,1,140

336,304,194505,2,0,B|276:305|251:259|251:259|204:244,1,140

24,296,221274,2,0,B|64:348|128:328|128:328|168:328,1,140

288,204,142120,6,0,P|256:152|164:136,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,240,142813,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,344,143043,2,0,P|104:308|80:240,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

472,32,155505,6,8,B|432:72|452:124|452:124|472:176|440:220,1,200

pkhg wrote:

hii Shurelia =w=/ Hi pkhg <3

[General]
Your current BG is 1365x768, so here's the new one in 1366x768. Yeah, the people even complain about these little things :/ Ah, yes.. Thanks for the correction!

[Normal]

00:22:582 (1) - remove nc okay
00:30:889 (1,2) - swap nc and remove from this 00:32:274 (1) - okay~
00:38:274 (3,4,1) - I dont recommend stacks on easiest diffs, isnt hard but its up to you :3 Removed (4) , because it's easier XD
00:41:966 (1,2) - - swap nc, 00:43:813 (1,2) - same and remove from here 00:45:428 (1) - done
01:06:197 (4,5,6) - better blanket looks better , Thanks

255,144,66197,2,0,B|296:144|296:144|336:192|392:176,1,140
368,96,66889,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,116,67120,2,0,P|469:182|449:248,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
388,308,67813,6,8,P|319:308|253:285,1,140,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

01:11:736 (1,1) - You need around 750ms after a spinner to place a note. More info here >wo ah.. yes.. Fixed , Thanks
01:41:043 (1) - clap on tail instead of head Should be a "Finish", but fixed XD
01:48:428 (3,4,1) - you know xD but remember, its up to you same XD
01:54:197 (2) - better blanket fixed!, Thanks

448,256,114197,2,0,B|448:224|448:224|480:172|441:119,1,140

01:52:120 (1) - same as 00:41:966 (1,2) :3 done
02:02:274 (6) - better shape done

200,224,122274,2,0,B|235:194|228:137|228:137|254:85,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

02:03:197 (7,1) - maybe you can unstack these done :3
02:20:736 (1,2) - better blanket done

414,319,140736,6,0,B|346:307|346:307|284:365|218:313,1,210,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

03:02:274 (4) - Improve the shape fixed
03:08:044 (3) - blanket fixed, Thanks

231,358,188044,2,0,B|271:329|262:270|262:270|286:228,1,140

03:13:351 (7) - up to you I'm keeping this one ><
03:14:505 (2) - blanket fixed~

336,304,194505,2,0,B|276:305|251:259|251:259|204:244,1,140

03:17:505 (1) - move the 2nd slider point 2 grids left done XD
03:28:582 (2) - finish on head added :3
03:30:659 (2) - rotate -11o from selection centre Thanks you
03:32:274 (1,2) - (2) is too far from (1) ah.. right. Fixed thanks
03:38:274 - feels empty, maybe you can do something nice here :3 done XD hope you like it
03:39:659 (1) - finish on head added
03:41:274 (4) - better blanket Fixed

24,296,221274,2,0,B|64:348|128:328|128:328|168:328,1,140

03:56:505 (1,3) - swap nc fixed, Thanks

[Insane]

00:37:351 (1) - remove nc okay~
00:42:197 (2) - split into circle + 1/2 slider okay
01:17:274 (2) - delete the middle point and add it again, right now looks like a really old slider xD fixed
01:38:274 (4) - add nc, here too 01:38:966 (3) - done
01:41:505 (2) - finish on head added
02:01:351 (1) - remove nc done
02:03:197 (9) - move to x204 y228 done
02:17:966 (8,9) - (8) is too close to (9) fixed
02:35:505 (1) - better shape done

472,32,155505,6,8,B|432:72|452:124|452:124|472:176|440:220,1,200

03:16:120 (1,2) - dont sacrifice rhythm for a pattern :c o. okay ><
03:31:813 (4,5,6,7,1) - make it curved or linear. Right now its a bit ugly ;w; fixed
03:40:351 (3) - move the 2nd slider point to x424 y192 done
03:42:197 (1) - move the 2nd red point 1 grid down fixed

That's all :3

Good luck Shurelia >w<

1. 00:16:582 - Coba kurangi volume di sini untuk mengikuti musiknya jadi 50%.
2. 00:12:428 (4,1) - 1.04x DS? Gak nampak sih bedanya, emang, cuma kalau bisa ya dibikin konsisten spacing-nya...
3. 00:30:889 - 00:31:351 - Coba pake inherited timing point dengan volume 55 sama 60 persen di dua tempat ini (secara berurutan). Alasannya sama seperti pada saran pertama.
4. 01:04:120 - Kenapa clap ini gak terus dipake aja di white tick ke-2 dan ke-4 tiap birama sepanjang kiai, mengingat pas dengan instrumen yang dimainkan?
5. 01:41:043 - Coba pake finish Soft di sini, dan pake finish Normal di 01:41:043 dengan volume yang direndahkan (50% deh)? Kombinasi dua finish ini pas untuk menekankan bunyi cymbal yang ada.
6. 01:55:351 (4) - Ini sedikit bersentuhan dengan 01:53:505 (2) (biarpun cuma nampak sesaat waktu bermain, tapi tetep aja terasa sih), jadi coba pindahin ke (68,228)? Dan coba pakai finish sama clap dengan volume yang lebih rendah dari biasanya untuk mengikuti instrumen yang dimainkan di sini?
7. 03:15:428 - Err bentar, kok gak pake finish? (Tahu sendiri lah kenapa saya ngomong gini.)
8. 03:42:428 - ^

1. Melihat SV yang dipakai dan intensitas objek di sini, coba pakai AR4,5?
2. 00:04:120 (4) - Pindahin ke (252,324) biar spacing lebih konsisten di sini?
3. 00:12:889 (8) - Err kenapa pake finish? Di sini rasanya terlalu sunyi buat ditambahin satu finish...
4. 00:44:736 (3,1) - Slider (3) nimpa (1) waktu bermain, dan ini kelihatan gak rapi banget. Coba deh pindahin ke mana gitu biar ini nggak terjadi.
5. 00:47:043 (2) - Kenapa tiba-tiba ada slider yang kayak gini? Melihat 00:46:120 (1,3) yang bentuknya lengkung biasa aja, kenapa nggak ini juga biar flow lebih bagus dan gak terkesan random?
6. 00:52:120 (6,1) - Inkonsistensi dalam spacing.
7. 00:58:582 (3,4) - ^
8. 01:15:659 (1) - Ini gak perlu NC kok. Gak ada alasan buat nambahin itu di sini. Dan kenapa ada clap di seluruh slider, bukan cuma di ekornya?
9. 01:26:735 (8) - Eh, kok ini gak ada finish...
10. 01:32:274 (1,2) - 1,08x DS? Default-nya 1,2x kan...
11. 01:35:505 (2,3) - ...Ini tahu sendiri lah ya kenapa. (Pokoknya perhatiin aja masalah spacing dari awal sampai akhir di map ini.)
12. 01:41:505 - Sama dengan 01:26:735 (8). (Masalah cymbal yang gak ditandain finish juga tolong diperhatiin sendiri yah; mod ini bakal kepanjangan dan membosankan kalau ditulis satu-satu.)
13. 02:20:736 (1,2) - Blanket di sini masih kurang sempurna tuh o.o
14. 03:07:351 (2,3) - ^
15. 02:51:659 - 03:02:736 - Bagian ini terasa... aneh aja dimainin. Peletakan dan bentuk slider kadang terasa random dan... ya, agak susah sih kalau mau dideskripsikan secara detil. Coba deh bagian ini diperlambat SV-nya dan dirapiin desainnya.
16. 03:11:505 (4,6) - Gak sekalian dibikin simetris aja biar kelihatan lebih rapi?
17. 03:15:428 - Ah, ini serius gak mau di-map? Terasa kosong banget sih kalau dibiarin gak di-map...

1. 01:55:351 (4) - Why no finish to emphasize the cymbal here?
2. 01:59:505 (4,5,1) - Inconsistent spacing.
3. 02:29:274 (5,6,1,2,3) - ^ (The spacing is inconsistent while playing due to the automatic stacking. Just move 02:29:505 (1,2,3) to (183,354) to fix this.)
4. 02:56:966 - Add a whistle to accentuate the piano note?
5. 03:01:813 - ^

1. 00:07:813 (5,6,7,8,9) - Flow di sini agak aneh karena gerakan di 00:07:813 (5,6,7) yang terkesan lurus tapi dikit membelok, diikuti dengan 00:08:505 (7,8,9) yang di (8,9)-nya terasa kurang natural karena arah gerakan dari (8) ke kepala (9) tidak sesuai dengan lengkungan pada slider (9) itu sendiri.
2. 00:11:966 (7,8,9,10) - Flow pattern ini juga terbilang kurang nyaman karena gerakan kursor yang diperluin. Kasusnya mirip 00:07:813 (5,6,7) lah.
3. 00:16:120 (9,1,2,1,2,3,4) - (9) ke (1) yang pertama mestinya bisa dibikin jump untuk menekankan instrumen yang keras itu. Terus buat (2,3,4), kenapa harus tiba-tiba spacing-nya jadi gede? Dan kenapa perlu nggak konsisten seperti ini? Flow juga terasa terlalu lurus sehingga rasanya kaku ketika dimainkan.
4. 00:23:043 (7,8,9,10,1) - Ini bisa dikatakan menjebak banget karena spacing secara visual terlihat sama tapi ternyata dari (8) ke (9) waktunya lebih sedikit daripada (7) - (8).
5. 00:46:813 (3,4,5) - Coba deh minimal (4) dibikin agar posisinya tepat di tengah-tengah lingkaran (3) dan (5). Sekarang kesannya kurang rapi dan tidak begitu enak dilihat.
6. 00:58:582 (4,5,1) - Melihat posisi (1)... Ini kesannya kurang tempat sehingga (1) diletakkan sebagaimana yang terlihat sekarang, padahal sebenarnya masih banyak ruang untuk dipakai toh?

Hinsvar wrote:

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>Normal

1. Melihat SV yang dipakai dan intensitas objek di sini, coba pakai AR4,5? Hmm.. Ntar saya pertimbangkan dulu deh..
2. 00:04:120 (4) - Pindahin ke (252,324) biar spacing lebih konsisten di sini? yes.. oh my.. why there's so many inconsistent at this diff ;;
3. 00:12:889 (8) - Err kenapa pake finish? Di sini rasanya terlalu sunyi buat ditambahin satu finish... changed to whistle then?
4. 00:44:736 (3,1) - Slider (3) nimpa (1) waktu bermain, dan ini kelihatan gak rapi banget. Coba deh pindahin ke mana gitu biar ini nggak terjadi. fixed
5. 00:47:043 (2) - Kenapa tiba-tiba ada slider yang kayak gini? Melihat 00:46:120 (1,3) yang bentuknya lengkung biasa aja, kenapa nggak ini juga biar flow lebih bagus dan gak terkesan random? hmm... yeah.. changed.
6. 00:52:120 (6,1) - Inkonsistensi dalam spacing. done
7. 00:58:582 (3,4) - ^ done
8. 01:15:659 (1) - Ini gak perlu NC kok. Gak ada alasan buat nambahin itu di sini. Dan kenapa ada clap di seluruh slider, bukan cuma di ekornya? kinda not know what this supposed to be mean.. I'll pm you later.
9. 01:26:735 (8) - Eh, kok ini gak ada finish... added
10. 01:32:274 (1,2) - 1,08x DS? Default-nya 1,2x kan... fixed
11. 01:35:505 (2,3) - ...Ini tahu sendiri lah ya kenapa. (Pokoknya perhatiin aja masalah spacing dari awal sampai akhir di map ini.) done
12. 01:41:505 - Sama dengan 01:26:735 (8). (Masalah cymbal yang gak ditandain finish juga tolong diperhatiin sendiri yah; mod ini bakal kepanjangan dan membosankan kalau ditulis satu-satu.) done, and okay~
13. 02:20:736 (1,2) - Blanket di sini masih kurang sempurna tuh o.o done
14. 03:07:351 (2,3) - ^done, i think...
15. 02:51:659 - 03:02:736 - Bagian ini terasa... aneh aja dimainin. Peletakan dan bentuk slider kadang terasa random dan... ya, agak susah sih kalau mau dideskripsikan secara detil. Coba deh bagian ini diperlambat SV-nya dan dirapiin desainnya. udah cukup enak sih buat saya, dan penempatannya juga gara2 dipaksa untuk mempertahankan konsitensi Distancenya.. tapi ntar saya pikirkan lagi..
16. 03:11:505 (4,6) - Gak sekalian dibikin simetris aja biar kelihatan lebih rapi? buat ngalihin ujung slidernya ke object selanjutnya.
17. 03:15:428 - Ah, ini serius gak mau di-map? Terasa kosong banget sih kalau dibiarin gak di-map... okay..

Buat Insane... overall bener-bener bisa dibikin lebih baik lagi. Yang sekarang secara teknis rankable, tapi design sama flow masih bisa diperbagus. Beberapa contoh bagian yang bisa dipermak:

1. 00:07:813 (5,6,7,8,9) - Flow di sini agak aneh karena gerakan di 00:07:813 (5,6,7) yang terkesan lurus tapi dikit membelok, diikuti dengan 00:08:505 (7,8,9) yang di (8,9)-nya terasa kurang natural karena arah gerakan dari (8) ke kepala (9) tidak sesuai dengan lengkungan pada slider (9) itu sendiri. done
2. 00:11:966 (7,8,9,10) - Flow pattern ini juga terbilang kurang nyaman karena gerakan kursor yang diperluin. Kasusnya mirip 00:07:813 (5,6,7) lah. done
3. 00:16:120 (9,1,2,1,2,3,4) - (9) ke (1) yang pertama mestinya bisa dibikin jump untuk menekankan instrumen yang keras itu. Terus buat (2,3,4), kenapa harus tiba-tiba spacing-nya jadi gede? Dan kenapa perlu nggak konsisten seperti ini? Flow juga terasa terlalu lurus sehingga rasanya kaku ketika dimainkan. okay
4. 00:23:043 (7,8,9,10,1) - Ini bisa dikatakan menjebak banget karena spacing secara visual terlihat sama tapi ternyata dari (8) ke (9) waktunya lebih sedikit daripada (7) - (8). fixed
5. 00:46:813 (3,4,5) - Coba deh minimal (4) dibikin agar posisinya tepat di tengah-tengah lingkaran (3) dan (5). Sekarang kesannya kurang rapi dan tidak begitu enak dilihat. iya benar.. XD, makasih
6. 00:58:582 (4,5,1) - Melihat posisi (1)... Ini kesannya kurang tempat sehingga (1) diletakkan sebagaimana yang terlihat sekarang, padahal sebenarnya masih banyak ruang untuk dipakai toh? mudah2an lebih baik sekarang

Normal juga masih bisa di-improve dari segi desain dan flow, walaupun udah tergolong lumayan bagus bila dibandingkan dengan Normal.

Overall map ini oke-oke aja, cuma Normal sama Insane sendiri masih bisa dibikin lebih baik

Good luck!

Laurier wrote:

yo yo

General
Clean

Normal
00:14:043 - you should add note. the space is breaking the rhythm. よーし
00:37:351 (2) - you missed blanket. please move to more bottom. はい
00:39:659 (2) - correct this curve. http://puu.sh/eP5er/acd3ce05de.jpg わかったわ
01:26:735 (8) - add finish はい
01:32:274 (1) - remove NC from follow the your pattern. done
01:55:582 (1) - dont need NC. you didnt NC to 00:45:428 (3,4,5) - fixed
02:01:351 (4) - same as 00:39:659 (2) - はい
02:07:351 - why partition kiai at here. 02:10:120 - should be partition at here. done
03:28:582 - same thing as above. done


Insane

00:23:966 (1) - why don't use slow slider ? its same sounds pattern as 00:16:582 (1) - yes you should keep to pattern. done
00:56:505 (9) - add note here. for example stack on head of 00:55:120 (5) - done
01:11:736 (4,5) - please make steream. the sound is fit to them.いいよ
01:38:736 (3) - add note with follow the strong beat.
01:43:120 (6) - add NC
[*]01:45:428 (10) - ^
[*]01:46:351 (1) - remove NC
[*]01:47:043 (1) - add NC added all
01:58:582 (3,4,5,6,7) - please try this pattern. it will more fit the song. http://puu.sh/ePazJ/52a92564c9.jpg http://puu.sh/ePaBD/88c2c2b2ad.jpg Okay
02:27:659 (1) - it should make more jump as 02:27:197 (3,4) - maybe move 02:27:659 (1) - to stack on 02:28:120 (2) - it will be better.done
03:01:813 (1,2,3) - make a triangle ? Looks will be the better http://puu.sh/ePb6f/eccf7a106f.jpg done
please correct kiai if you corrected in normal.

Hinsvar wrote:

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pkhg wrote:

hii Shurelia =w=/

[Solar's Easy]

00:17:505 (2) - from this to 00:30:428 (4) - every 4 white ticks, you can add a soft-whistle, like Shurelia did on Insane. Use 35% volume in this section too. (I have my own volume pattern here so..)
00:31:813 (2) - forgot a clap here~ (oh right, fixed)
00:55:813 - to 00:59:966 - you didn't put claps, do it every 2 white ticks like the previous parts :3 (done~)
01:02:274 (2) - 01:03:197 (4) - add claps (fixed)
01:09:197 (2) - make it 1/1, so it's end will be here 01:09:659 - add clap on tail if you do it (fixed)
03:41:966 (4) - finish on tail, not head (fixed with my own way)

That's all :3

Good luck Shurelia >w<

>Solar's Easy

1. 00:16:582 - Coba kurangi volume di sini untuk mengikuti musiknya jadi 50%. (woke)
2. 00:12:428 (4,1) - 1.04x DS? Gak nampak sih bedanya, emang, cuma kalau bisa ya dibikin konsisten spacing-nya... (woops)
3. 00:30:889 - 00:31:351 - Coba pake inherited timing point dengan volume 55 sama 60 persen di dua tempat ini (secara berurutan). Alasannya sama seperti pada saran pertama. (fixed)
4. 01:04:120 - Kenapa clap ini gak terus dipake aja di white tick ke-2 dan ke-4 tiap birama sepanjang kiai, mengingat pas dengan instrumen yang dimainkan? (wdw ketinggalan maap)
5. 01:41:043 - Coba pake finish Soft di sini, dan pake finish Normal di 01:41:043 dengan volume yang direndahkan (50% deh)? Kombinasi dua finish ini pas untuk menekankan bunyi cymbal yang ada. (saya masih seneng cara saya sih mz)
6. 01:55:351 (4) - Ini sedikit bersentuhan dengan 01:53:505 (2) (biarpun cuma nampak sesaat waktu bermain, tapi tetep aja terasa sih), jadi coba pindahin ke (68,228)? Dan coba pakai finish sama clap dengan volume yang lebih rendah dari biasanya untuk mengikuti instrumen yang dimainkan di sini? (fixed)
7. 03:15:428 - Err bentar, kok gak pake finish? (Tahu sendiri lah kenapa saya ngomong gini.) (fixed, kebiasaan lupa hhe)
8. 03:42:428 - ^

Laurier wrote:

yo

Solar's Easy
00:55:120 (3) - how about make a blanket like this ? http://puu.sh/eP3wP/355f9ba025.jpg (fixed)
01:02:274 (2,3) - the flow is seems bad. move to more bottom because the aim is going to down. http://puu.sh/eP3JL/b89e0f5ec7.jpg (いい提案です）
01:09:197 (2,3) - the pattern is a bit hard to beginners. delete 3 and makes 2 is more longer. maybe good to beginners if you using more longer slider. (fixed with my own way)
01:40:582 (4) - I don't think to good about overlap like this. please move to more top. (fixed)