1. Hard (3.13 stars, 287 notes)
2. Insane (4.2 stars, 339 notes)
3. Normal (1.92 stars, 166 notes)

and Thanks for help all ~

340 wrote:

General
offset = 13499 Keep
Insane
00:23:217 (1) - finish Fix it
00:24:258 (1,2,3,4) - sampleset & additions = drum (http://puu.sh/9hHhX/613b359a31.jpg change Auto to Drum) Fix it
00:35:356 (5,6) - ^ Fix it
01:14:374 (4,5) - ^ Fix it
01:22:697 (6) - i think spinner looks better here sorry keep.
01:47:495 (8,9) - sampleset & additions = normal Fix it
02:21:050 (1) - i think that's better to overmap here (like at 02:18:362 (5,6,7,8,9)) hmm.. ok. more think about it. thanks~
Hard
00:24:258 (5) - sampleset & additions = drum Fix it
00:35:356 (3,4) - ^ Fix it
01:50:616 (1,2) - sampleset & additions = normal Fix it
02:26:686 (1) - try to rotate slider on 02:25:992 (7) - and put it here. (http://puu.sh/9hGOj/c6f79ca5fb.jpg) Fix it
02:28:940 (7) - sampleset & additions = drum Fix it

1. Since 340-kun correct the offset it has no problems
2. Kiai Time usually starts before the vocal starts (i don't care about this anyway )cuz there's nikoniko
3. don't forget to check AImod if there's unsnapped combos or kiai time

1. 01:14:539 end kiai time here !
2. 02:10:030 end kiai time !
3. 02:29:799 spinner move to 02:29:972 (just suggestions)

1. 01:24:778 (1,2,3,4,5) - nice star pattern
2. 02:07:004 (2) - remove hit circle (it's okay if you keep it)
3. 02:24:605 slider 3 and 5 can be blangket
4. 02:29:807 spinner move to 02:29:980 (suggestions)

You can keep as many as you can
Good luck on ranking!

wuzzat wrote:

Yo!From #Modreqs
Those idol's are mine... especially nikoniko

General

1. Since 340-kun correct the offset it has no problems
2. Kiai Time usually starts before the vocal starts (i don't care about this anyway )cuz there's nikoniko
3. don't forget to check AImod if there's unsnapped combos or kiai time

Normal

1. 01:14:539 end kiai time here !
2. 02:10:030 end kiai time !
3. 02:29:799 spinner move to 02:29:972 (just suggestions)

Hard

1. 01:24:778 (1,2,3,4,5) - nice star pattern
2. 02:07:004 (2) - remove hit circle (it's okay if you keep it)
3. 02:24:605 slider 3 and 5 can be blangket
4. 02:29:807 spinner move to 02:29:980 (suggestions)

For insane diff,sorry if i don't mod it.. i'm so afraid

Keep your own style of mapping,modders aren't always right.they can even ruin your map D: so be carefull!
You can keep as many as you can
Good luck on ranking!

gretay wrote:

Hi~ idols summon a noob , some suggestions

Normal

• 
  00:42:293 and 00:45:067 : add circles here (to make it similiar with the others?) If other modders want it , change. thanks
  00:48:362 move to 00:48:535 and end 00:49:576 Keep
  make a circle from 00:49:923 to 00:50:616 and "destroy" the circle between them fix.
  01:14:894 another circle here? fix.
  another slider from 01:53:738 to 01:54:431 Keep
  and short slider from 01:55:819 to 01:55:992 Keep

Hard

• 
  move 00:28:940 to 00:29:113 Keep
  slider 01:53:738 to 01:54:085 Keep
  circle 01:54:431 Keep
  Cirlce 01:55:819 and 01:55:992 Keep
  Remove 02:07:004 circle and 02:08:564 ? You'll shock other players with that sudden rapid circle (no it's me) Fix

i'll give the star for this beatmap if i get :p Oh!!
Someone said: don't trust other in this world Oh??

eINess wrote:

gretay wrote:

Hi~ idols summon a noob , some suggestions

Normal

• 
  00:42:293 and 00:45:067 : add circles here (to make it similiar with the others?) If other modders want it , change. thanks
  00:48:362 move to 00:48:535 and end 00:49:576 Keep
  make a circle from 00:49:923 to 00:50:616 and "destroy" the circle between them fix.
  01:14:894 another circle here? fix.
  another slider from 01:53:738 to 01:54:431 Keep
  and short slider from 01:55:819 to 01:55:992 Keep

Hard

• 
  move 00:28:940 to 00:29:113 Keep
  slider 01:53:738 to 01:54:085 Keep
  circle 01:54:431 Keep
  Cirlce 01:55:819 and 01:55:992 Keep
  Remove 02:07:004 circle and 02:08:564 ? You'll shock other players with that sudden rapid circle (no it's me) Fix

i'll give the star for this beatmap if i get :p Oh!!
Someone said: don't trust other in this world Oh??

Thank you for mod , gretay ~

Haha xD i'll start my star shooting practice here ~ *shoot my first kudos

Gunsillie wrote:

Hello Elness (don't you think I forgot you ^^).
It is funny you ask me to mod a map called "Snow halation", because I am currently mapping a song called "De;laytion of Snow". Really strange...

Oh well, let's get started anyway !
(You don't need to M4M, let's say I was already going to mod it :p)

///////////////
• = Important
• = Suggestion
• = Detail

I often times focus my modding on placing and shapes, so I might not notice some issues in other parts.

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[Normal]

General advice : I think it's a pretty good Normal in terms of enjoyability to play, and this rarely enough the case to be noticed !


• 00:21:657 (1,1) - There is a bit of polarity issue here, here is one among many possibility of making it clearer :

Here!

• 00:30:848 (2) - You can do a Ctrl+C of 1.
• 00:44:027 (1) - No overlapping of the previous slider.
• 00:58:246 (1) - Odd shape compared to the shape of your other sliders.
• 00:59:634 (1,2,3) - You have a symmetrical pattern, try to center it horizontally on the screen.
• 01:20:443 (1,2,3,4) - You have 2 polarity switching here, the problem is that the second one is not very readable. But by changing the first polarity the second one becomes clearer.

Like so for instance

You can either have a 1/2 slider or a circle for 2, or you can find another solution as well !

• 01:49:576 (3) - Move the shaping dot on the head to (360;260) (I took my ruler :p)
• 01:57:553 (3) - Align it with 2.
• 02:16:975 (4,1,2) - I suggest you to either remove 1 or do a rhythm like this :

Here !

[Hard]

General advice : I am less fan of it than I was with Normal, because the Normal was really better from an aesthetic standpoint, and of some rhythms an placing, but it's pretty nice nonetheless.

• 00:21:657 (1,1,2) - This rhythm doesn't feel nice here. I would rather do something like this :

Here!

• 00:28:073 (6,1,2) - This is hard to read, mostly because of where 1 is placed. I tried to make a different placing of everybody from 00:28:940 (1) to 00:30:154 (1), you should be able to see how it looks just with the picture below :

Here !

• 00:32:928 (1,2,3,4) - Odd shapes. Having Bézier curves is fine (I guess), but having them so discrete is strange.
• 00:35:009 (1,2,3,4,5) - You could look for a better-looking pattern.
• 00:42:639 (5) - No need for a Bézier curve I think.
• 00:55:125 (8) - This is not recommended. I used to use this kind of sliders, but apparently we should not, and I think a posteriori that it can almost always be replaced by something less "oldie".
• 00:57:900 (1) - You should consider breaking the symmetry because people will expect a jump here, which is actually not the case.
• 01:02:928 (5) - Would fit the vocal better if it were placed at 01:02:885.
• 01:06:223 (1,3) - See above, I don't think doing this is so bad, it's up to you.
• 01:09:345 (1,2,3) - This rhythm doesn't really fit into the music, try to rework it.
• 01:16:454 (4,7) - These sliders are really long !
• 01:22:004 (5,6) - You could replace these with circles.
• 02:03:796 (3) - You can overlap 02:02:755 (3)
• 02:04:836 (1) - You can overlap 02:03:449 (2)
• 02:25:298 (5,6,7) - You can look for a better flow :

Like so for instance

[Insane]

General advice : This one has generally a nice flow and a good aesthetic, although some parts are strange to play.

• 00:21:657 (1) - I would really see a rhythm like pasted below play better :

Here !

• 00:25:298 (7,8) - These circles don't really fit the flow because you have to catch 00:25:645 (1) then. Maybe place them in the upper part of the grid ?
• 00:36:743 (3) - Snapping ?
• 00:38:824 (1) - Overlapping 6 looks and play fine.
• 00:44:027 (1) - If you do something like this, you can really overlap 5.
• 00:50:963 (1) - The shape should end in the direction of the stream.
• 01:06:570 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - These "Death Jumps" hurt a lot because there is no flow which can allow you to make them well, since it was broken by the 4->1 overlap.
• 01:52:004 (1,2) - You could replace one of these (or both) with a stream.
• 02:06:917 (1,2,3) - This triplet (the single one of the map ?) is really unexpected and thus, hard to read.
• 02:20:270 (1,2,3,4,5) - Strange pattern, but nothing illegal^^

1. Let's try to reduce the video, because it have 19,4MB on it. Maybe reducing the quality could be better? If the video sucked after you reduce it (maybe to bad quality), then try to find a new video

1. 00:23:217 (1,2,3,4) - Don't make stack in Normal or if you want to put it then reduce it.
2. 00:31:888 (3,4) - ^
3. 00:36:050 (1) - Maybe disable the curve whistle sound could be better.
4. 00:39:518 (2,3) - Don't make stack in Normal.
5. 01:48:189 (2,3) - Blanket it please.
6. 01:58:940 (1,1) - Don't make stack in Normal.
7. 02:16:975 (4,1) - Bad overlap.
8. 02:20:790 (1,2) - Try to blanket it?
9. Maybe make a consistent rhythm for Normal? Based on this.
   

   Shiro wrote:

   Try to give yourself something to focus on, either vocals or drums, and try to be consistent and stick to it.

10. That's all for this diff.

1. Maybe i can advice some blanket here, also i don't have much suggestion because i don't want to destroy the map with my bad suggestion.
2. 00:36:050 (1,2) - Maybe a blanket here? So it looked nice.
3. 00:44:027 (1,2,3,4) - Did you do this on purpose? The sliders didn't straight.
4. 00:58:246 (1,2) - Blanket would be nicer.
5. 00:59:113 (4,5) - Why you don't blanket it? It have a nice place.
6. 01:15:934 (2,3,4) - Bad blanket, maybe another idea?
7. 02:07:957 (5) - Aw that whistle curve sound, think to disable it.
8. 02:16:108 (2,3) - Maybe another blanket here?
9. 02:24:605 (3,4,5) - The sliders stack each other, i don't recommend this.
10. Okay that's all

1. I'm scared to mod this diff, because i don't know much about Insane. Better not to mod it than I mod it with my idea right now. Sorry for that.

Phoenixphi wrote:

Hi..
This is my mod, also i love Kotori so much
Hope you like it

[General]

1. Let's try to reduce the video, because it have 19,4MB on it. Maybe reducing the quality could be better? If the video sucked after you reduce it (maybe to bad quality), then try to find a new video

[Normal]

1. 00:23:217 (1,2,3,4) - Don't make stack in Normal or if you want to put it then reduce it.
2. 00:31:888 (3,4) - ^
3. 00:36:050 (1) - Maybe disable the curve whistle sound could be better.
4. 00:39:518 (2,3) - Don't make stack in Normal.
5. 01:48:189 (2,3) - Blanket it please.
6. 01:58:940 (1,1) - Don't make stack in Normal.
7. 02:16:975 (4,1) - Bad overlap.
8. 02:20:790 (1,2) - Try to blanket it?
9. Maybe make a consistent rhythm for Normal? Based on this.
   

   Shiro wrote:

   Try to give yourself something to focus on, either vocals or drums, and try to be consistent and stick to it.

10. That's all for this diff.

[Hard]

1. Maybe i can advice some blanket here, also i don't have much suggestion because i don't want to destroy the map with my bad suggestion.
2. 00:36:050 (1,2) - Maybe a blanket here? So it looked nice.
3. 00:44:027 (1,2,3,4) - Did you do this on purpose? The sliders didn't straight.
4. 00:58:246 (1,2) - Blanket would be nicer.
5. 00:59:113 (4,5) - Why you don't blanket it? It have a nice place.
6. 01:15:934 (2,3,4) - Bad blanket, maybe another idea?
7. 02:07:957 (5) - Aw that whistle curve sound, think to disable it.
8. 02:16:108 (2,3) - Maybe another blanket here?
9. 02:24:605 (3,4,5) - The sliders stack each other, i don't recommend this.
10. Okay that's all

[insane]

1. I'm scared to mod this diff, because i don't know much about Insane. Better not to mod it than I mod it with my idea right now. Sorry for that.

Okay that's all from my mod. Hope you use my suggestion.
If you don't use any of it, then it is a lesson for me.

Ganbatte!!

MisakiYuri wrote:

Hello....from modding queue...

Normal

00:42:079 add something here?
00:44:859^
I might just be being picky, but maybe circle size too? your choice.

Hard

00:50:872 Maybe this slider velocity change isn't necessary?
I'm sorry If you can't find anything helpful here. It's already a great beatmap and I'm a beginner modder, so it is hard for me to look deep down into a map.

HabiHolic wrote:

>_> here is modding

[General]

비디오 파일 크기가 큽니다. 비디오는 20메가를 초과하면 안됩니다. // 비디오 편집하는 법을 몰라서... 다른맵에서 가져온거라 어찌할 방법이...

[Normal]

00:16:801 (2) - 이 슬라이더 박자가 안맞는데 00:17:316 - 여기서 끝내는게 어떠세요
00:21:657 (1) - 모양이 너무 어설프네요. 다듬으시거나 아얘 지워버리고 다시 만들어주세요
00:24:085 (4) - 이곳에 소프트 피니쉬만 들어가 있으니까 약간 히트사운드가 심심한 느낌이 듭니다. Additions 을 노멀로 바꾸시면 허전하지 않을겁니다. 혹시 잘 모르실것 같아서 사진도 첨부하겠습니다. 형광펜으로 칠한부분을 바꾸시면됩니다.

SPOILER

00:50:963 (1,1) - 흐름이 이상하네요 00:50:963 (1) - 이 스피너 그냥 00:52:350 - 이곳까지 늘리시고 00:52:697 (1) - 요건 삭제하시고 00:53:044 - 여기에만 노트를 추가하는건 어떤가요?

00:58:246 (4,1) - 뉴콤보 체인지
01:02:408 (2) - 많이 어색하므로 리듬감있게 다시 짜보세요
01:08:998 (4,1) - 뉴콤보 체인지
01:11:772 (4) - 통일성 없이 여기에는 뉴콤이 안들어갔네요 여기에도 뉴콤보
01:56:859 (2) - Ctrl + h Ctrl + j Ctrl + g 순차적으로 하신후에 디스턴스 맞춰주시면 보기에 더 좋아보여요
01:59:287 (1) - 여긴 뉴콤보 필요 없어보입니다.
02:01:715 (4) - 시작부분에 클랩 빼먹으신건가요? 아니면 일부러 넣지 않으신건가요 전 클랩을 사용하는게 맞다고 봅니다.
02:02:755 (1) - 휘슬빼고 클랩이 어울릴듯요
02:07:264 (4) - 뉴콤보 추가
02:13:507 - clap?

히트사운드가 너무 엉망이네요. 어울릴만한 곳에는 안들어가 있는 느낌이고 안어울리는 곳에 들어가 있는 느낌이예요 조만간 히트사운드 수정하시길 바랍니다.

[Hard]

00:19:402 (1) - 매치가 잘 안되는것 같네요 00:20:270 (2) - 얘랑 똑같이 하는게 나아보여요
00:27:379 (4) - 디스턴스 맞추셔야 할듯요


히트사운드 손보시고 다시 불러주세요
지금 상태에서는 모딩이 불가능할듯합니다.

Sonnyc wrote:

힛사 그렇게 까지 심각한 느낌은 아닌것 같은데,,

Sonnyc wrote:

힛사 그렇게 까지 심각한 느낌은 아닌것 같은데,,

Did IRC mod. The mapper has the log.

01:56 No Dap: 지금 해드릴까요
01:56 eINess: 아 네네
01:56 eINess: 링크 다시드려요?
01:57 No Dap: 넵
01:57 *eINess is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/434980 u's - Snow halation (TV Size)]
01:57 No Dap: 저
01:57 No Dap: 중간에 자주튕길테니 채팅로그 님이좀 올려주세용
01:57 eINess: 로그요?
01:57 eINess: 어떻게올려요..?
01:58 No Dap: ./savelog
01:58 No Dap: 다 끝나면
01:58 eINess: 아하
01:58 eINess: 넵
01:59 No Dap: 00:21:657 (1,1,2) - 
01:59 No Dap: 이거 너무 어려워요
01:59 No Dap: 언랭수준
01:59 eINess: 노멀요?
01:59 No Dap: 네
02:00 eINess: 12번 좀 중앙으로 옮길까요?
02:00 No Dap: 그냥 스피너를 빼시는게
02:01 No Dap: 긴슬라이더 하나 모양내셔서
02:01 eINess: 원래 긴슬라였는데 ㅋㅋ;;
02:01 eINess: W자로 모양냈는데 하비님이 모양바꾸래서 
02:02 No Dap: 모양을 잘내보세요 ㅋㅋ
02:02 No Dap: 그건 저도 잘 못해서 도와드리진 못하네요
02:02 eINess: 그냥 둥글게 할래요. ㅋㅋ; 스킬이 딸리니
02:02 No Dap: 노말이나 이지는
02:03 No Dap: 스피너후에 회복시간이 있어야되요
02:03 eINess: http://puu.sh/9uNlP/d55bae19e7.jpg
02:03 eINess: 요래 괜찮아요?
02:03 No Dap: 끝나자마자 바로 노트나오면 
02:03 No Dap: 초보자들은 절대못쳐요
02:03 eINess: 아하
02:03 No Dap: 좋매요
02:03 No Dap: 좋네요
02:03 No Dap: 디스턴스 잘맞추시고 다음노트랑도
02:04 No Dap: 00:14:547 (2,1) - 
02:04 No Dap: 이거 담요 좀더 잘하셧으면 좋을듯
02:05 No Dap: 00:24:605 - 클랩삭제
02:05 No Dap: 00:26:339 - 클랩추가
02:06 No Dap: 00:20:270 (3) - 뉴콤 하셔야할듯 앞 패턴과 맞추기 위해
02:07 eINess: 지금 뉴콤 넣는데 2번 뒤에 
02:07 eINess: http://puu.sh/9uNGg/d7cc6c7f7c.jpg
02:07 eINess: 3번 리듬에 맞출라고 딸려있는데 저건 그냥 납둬요?
02:07 No Dap: 네
02:07 eINess: 네네
02:08 No Dap: 00:29:807 - 여기부터 클랩 잘못 넣으셧네요
02:08 No Dap: 클랩추가하시고
02:08 No Dap: 클랩패턴 엉망되셧네요 이부분
02:09 eINess: 아 그래요..?
02:09 No Dap: 00:30:501 - 
02:09 eINess: 하비님이 이것떄문에 엉망이럣나
02:09 No Dap: 00:31:194 - 
02:09 No Dap: 00:31:888 - 
02:09 No Dap: 여기에 있어야 되요
02:09 No Dap: 다른곳삭제
02:09 No Dap: 00:32:928 - 여기도
02:10 eINess: 마지막부분
02:10 eINess: 클렙있는데 지우라는거죠?
02:12 No Dap: 네
02:13 eINess: 00:32:061 (4) -  그럼 이슬라는 아예 사운드없이해요?
02:13 No Dap: 00:35:009 - 
02:13 No Dap: 클랩이 좋을듯
02:13 No Dap: 머리에 휘슬넣으시는게 좋네요
02:14 eINess: 이미 휘슬아니에요?
02:14 No Dap: 00:37:090 (2) - 요부분도
02:14 No Dap: 완전 망치셧네요
02:14 No Dap: 저한텐 없다고 뜨는데 있으면 상관없구요
02:14 eINess: 히익
02:14 eINess: 방금 고치면서 넣었나보다 그럼
02:15 eINess: 힛사가 왤캐 어려운지... ㅠ
02:16 No Dap: ㅋㅋ
02:19 eINess: 소니님은 괜찮다고했는데 다 의견이 달라서 누구말을 들어야할지도 난처함..
02:21 No Dap: 소니님이 누구죠
02:21 No Dap: 00:50:616 - 
02:21 No Dap: 00:49:923 - 
02:21 No Dap: 클랩 추가해주세요
02:22 No Dap: 힛사 별거 없어요
02:22 No Dap: 그냥 음악에 맞춰 넣으면됨...
02:22 No Dap: 들리는대로
02:22 eINess: 그게 힘들어요..흑..ㅠ
02:22 eINess: 소니님 이분요
02:22 eINess: http://puu.sh/9uOJy/87b874c1be.png
02:22 No Dap: 아 손닉님
02:22 No Dap: 이거 힛사안되요 근대 ㅋㅋ
02:22 eINess: ㅇㅇ?
02:23 eINess: 네?
02:23 eINess: 그게 무슨소립니까?!
02:23 No Dap: 너무 불규칙적이라서
02:23 No Dap: 언랭임
02:23 eINess: 케헥
02:33 No Dap: 다 고치셧나요
02:33 eINess: 아직요
02:34 eINess: 님이 말해주신데만요
02:34 eINess: 뭘 어찌 해야할지 난감함...
02:34 No Dap: 제가 노트북 고치면 대신 해드릴순있는데
02:34 eINess: 헐 대신이라니..
02:34 eINess: 소니님한태 물어봤더니
02:35 eINess: 이상한건 몇개있는건 맞으니까 그건만 고치라던데
02:35 eINess: 뭐가 뭔지...
02:35 eINess: 프로분들은 그냥 느낌이 오시나 
02:35 No Dap: 대부분 키아이가
02:35 No Dap: 안맞내요
02:35 eINess: 키아이는 뭐에요 근데
02:35 No Dap: 01:57:986 - 이부분
02:35 No Dap: 00:23:478 - 여기처럼 하시는게 어떤지?
02:36 No Dap: 밑에
02:36 No Dap: 주황색 구간
02:36 No Dap: 클라이막스부분이라고 하죠
02:36 eINess: 기아이 전부분이라 넣기 별로싫은데 흠..
02:36 eINess: 흐음 넣는것도 좋은데
02:36 No Dap: 전이니까 넣어야죠
02:37 eINess: 그런가
02:37 No Dap: 클라이막스로 향하는데
02:37 eINess: 넣죠 뭐 그럼 
02:37 No Dap: 약하면
02:37 No Dap: 안되죠.
02:37 eINess: 아..
02:38 eINess:  댔다
02:39 *No Dap is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/435506 u's - Snow halation (TV Size) [Hard]]
02:39 eINess: 하드하드
02:39 No Dap: 00:20:270 - 휘슬 빼먹으신듯.
02:40 No Dap: 00:51:397 - 이부분은
02:40 No Dap: 왠지 슬라변속이 안어울리니ㅡㄴ 느낌이네요.
02:41 eINess: 아 어떤분도 그랬는데
02:41 eINess: 흐음..
02:41 eINess: 일단 생각해둘꼐요
02:41 No Dap: `00:53:824 - 여기 뉴콤 해주셔야할듯.
02:41 No Dap: 뒷부분이랑 안맞네요
02:41 eINess: 4번슬라요?
02:41 No Dap: 네
02:42 No Dap: 00:57:379 (4,5) - 
02:42 No Dap: 01:02:235 - 
02:43 eINess: 클렙넣으라고요?
02:44 No Dap: 01:57:627 - 
02:44 No Dap: 위와 같은 의견
02:45 eINess: 아 뒷부분
02:45 eINess: 00:57:206 (3,4,5,1) - 이건 않바꿀래요
02:45 No Dap:  /np
02:45 *No Dap is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/434979 u's - Snow halation (TV Size) [Insane]]
02:48 No Dap: 음..
02:48 No Dap: 솔직한 개인적인 의견을 드리자면
02:48 No Dap: 노말과 하드는 모딩받으시면 충분히 랭크될거같은데
02:49 No Dap: 인센은 많이 필요할듯.
02:49 No Dap: 흐름이 너무 안좋네여
02:50 eINess: 엥 ? 그래요?
02:50 eINess: 뭐지 해준사람들은 인센이 가장났댔는데 ㅋㅋ
02:51 eINess: 큰일이네 사람들 의견이 다 달라..
02:51 No Dap: 누가그래요
02:52 eINess: 그냥 아는분들다요
02:52 eINess: 테스트분들도그랬고 모딩분도 그랬고
02:52 eINess: 하비님은 아예않해서
02:52 eINess: 몰르겟고
02:52 No Dap: 보통
02:52 No Dap: 맵이 싫다곤않하죠 예의상
02:52 eINess: 그런거구만;;
02:53 No Dap: 뭐 그래도 제 개인적인 의견이니
02:53 No Dap: 틀릴수도 있지만 플레이어 입장에서 봐도 흐름은 안좋네요
02:53 eINess: 팡님한태 묻고올꼐요
02:56 No Dap: Pang?
02:56 eINess: 네
02:59 eINess: http://puu.sh/9uRDo/cab9f3cba1.jpg
03:00 eINess: http://puu.sh/9uRGh/f7f26c09b6.jpg
03:00 eINess: 요래 말하심
03:00 No Dap: 네
03:01 eINess: 결국 팡님 대답도 애매모호... 
03:01 eINess: ㅋㅋ 이게아닌데 
03:01 No Dap: 흐름 안좋아요
03:01 No Dap: 각도가
03:01 No Dap: 아주
03:01 No Dap: 손목이 꺾여버릴듯 
03:03 eINess: 그정도라니 ㄷㄷ;; 
03:06 No Dap: 몇가지
03:06 No Dap: 예를 드릴까요
03:06 eINess: 맵이요? 저야 좋죠 뭐 
03:06 No Dap: 인세인은 풀모딩하면 너무 오래걸릴거같으니
03:06 No Dap: 몇가지 예만 드릴개용
03:06 eINess: 풀모딩은 하비님이랑 코펭님한태 :D
03:10 No Dap: 00:24:605 (5,6) - 
03:10 No Dap: 이런거
03:10 No Dap: 너무 붙어있어요.
03:10 eINess: 붙어있다고요?
03:10 No Dap: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1718755
03:10 eINess: 시작지점은 완전 먼데
03:10 No Dap: 이정도는 떼어놓으셔야
03:10 No Dap: 아뇨
03:10 eINess: 아..어렵지않아요?
03:10 No Dap: 그런거보지마시고
03:10 No Dap: 인세인인데
03:10 No Dap: 그런거보지마시고
03:11 eINess: 아 그런가..
03:11 No Dap: 커서에를보세요
03:11 No Dap: 이동할때 각이
03:11 No Dap: 얼마나 불편한지 아까처럼하면
03:11 No Dap: 00:27:900 - 
03:11 No Dap: 이런건 리딩하기 힘드니까 뉴콤보
03:12 No Dap:  00:29:460 (6) - 
03:12 No Dap: 이런것도
03:12 No Dap: 밑으로 원그리듯이 내려가다가
03:12 No Dap: 갑자기 위로 올라가면 각안좋아요
03:12 eINess:  아..
03:12 No Dap: `https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1718758
03:12 No Dap: 이렇게하면
03:13 No Dap: 원그리던 흐름이 계속 유지되면서
03:13 No Dap: 플레이할때 좋져
03:13 eINess: 오우..
03:14 eINess: 역시 경험이 많은 사람은 달르네
03:14 No Dap: 00:38:098 - 
03:14 No Dap: 삼각점프 많으신데
03:14 No Dap: 계속 같은곳에서 반복되면 지루해요
03:14 eINess: 어디다 옮겨야하지..
03:14 No Dap: 6각별을
03:14 No Dap: 만든다던지
03:15 eINess: 너무 구석쪾이라 DS 좁아질탠데 갑자기..
03:15 eINess: 00:27:379 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 여거처럼 만들면않돼요?
03:16 No Dap: 아뇨
03:16 No Dap: 6각형해보세요
03:20 No Dap: 00:56:512 (5,6,7) - 
03:20 No Dap: 이런건 좀더 잘 다듬으시는게 좋을듯
03:20 No Dap: 머리 간격이 불일정
03:20 No Dap: 01:02:061 - 
03:21 No Dap: 이런건 플레이하기 좀 힘들지만 
03:21 No Dap: 고치기 싫으시면 두셔도됨
03:21 eINess: 흐음..
03:22 eINess: 아까 6각형에서 막혀서 고민중이라 이건 패스할래요
03:22 No Dap: 01:53:738 (2) - 
03:22 No Dap: crtl g rㅏ 흐름좋아요
03:23 eINess: 대칭 유지하고싶은데 켘
03:23 No Dap: 02:09:172 - 
03:23 No Dap: 이런건 뉴콤
03:23 No Dap: 대칭이잖아요
03:23 No Dap: 컨트롤 g해도
03:23 eINess: 시작지점도 똑같이하고싶어서..
03:24 eINess: 근데 컨트롤 G 않한게 더좋아보이느데
03:24 No Dap: 모양<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<흐름
03:24 eINess: :3
03:24 No Dap: 02:27:553 - 
03:24 No Dap: 이것도 첨에말한거처럼 좀더 거리 넓히시는게 좋을듯
03:26 eINess: http://puu.sh/9uTJA/5a37b37849.jpg
03:26 eINess: 이러면 돼죠?
03:26 No Dap: 아주좋아요
03:26 No Dap: 스레드애 포스트할테니
03:26 No Dap: 채팅로그좀 올려주세욥
03:27 eINess: 재가 채팅 로그 올려도되요?
03:27 No Dap: 안그러면 쿠도스 못받게해서 증거없다고
03:27 No Dap: 네
03:27 eINess: 님이 올려야 되는거아닌가 흐음..
03:27 No Dap: 아니에요
03:27 eINess: 알았어요 일단 올릴꼐요
03:27 eINess: 그 방법이
03:27 eINess: ./savelog ?
03:27 eINess: 점뺴고
03:27 No Dap: 네

HabiHolic wrote:

어제 모딩을 했으나. 힛사때문에 진행을 못하였습니다.
노답님이 조언해주신대로 힛사모딩을 고쳤으니 오늘 내로 모딩하겠습니다.

Sonnyc wrote:

아 맞다

내 모딩 로그

HabiHolic wrote:

Alright 2nd check here

[Normal]

00:33:275 (1) - 클랩 추가해주세요. 허전한 느낌이 들어서
00:36:050 (1) - 여긴 딱히 뉴콤보 필요 없을듯요
00:42:293 (2,3) - 디스턴스 확인해주세요. 그냥봐도 안맞는거 같아요
00:50:963 (1) - 피니쉬 추가
00:53:391 (2) - 같은 박자에 같은 리듬인데 디스턴스가 왜이리 넓죠 수정바랍니다.

[Hard]

00:41:946 (3) - 그냉 간격 일정하게 맞춰주세요 점프도 아니고 뭐도 아닌 애매한 것이기 때문에 반드시 수정하셔야 합니다.
01:05:530 (6) - Ctrl + g? 하시는게 어떠신가요 치기 굉장히 편하고 흐름도 좋아집니다.
01:05:876 (7) - ^ (마찬가지)
01:10:732 (5) - 시작부분에는 휘슬대신 클랩으로 바꿔 넣으시는게 좋을겁니다.

[Insane]

00:27:033 (5) - 모양 제안입니다. 확실히 옆으로 휘면 더 흐름이 괜찮아집니다.

SPOILER

Sonnyc wrote:

아 맞다

내 모딩 로그

ZLOdeuka- wrote:

Hi, m4m req.

[General]

1) BG widescreen but it is not visible in the game. either reduce bg or tick the settings here http://puu.sh/9vW1Q/a0aea50c66.jpg fix it

2) map size exceeds 24MB ok.

3) break length exceeds 20 seconds. it's really long.I suggest you either cut mp3 or spinner start here 01:25:645 and finish here 01:29:807 and spinner start here 01:45:067 and finish here 01:46:454 and 01:47:842 add circle or slider (for Normal and Hard) fix it

Kiai time

incorrect setup kiai time.

00:52:350 - start kiai 01:14:547 - finish kiai fix it
01:58:940 - start kiai 02:10:038 - finish kiai fix it

[Normal]

1) 00:58:940 (2,3) - broken distance. turn Distans snap and place it fix it
2) 01:48:535 (2,3) - ^ should be placed slightly further apart keep
3) 00:18:362 (1,2) - sliders are not readable. replace it http://puu.sh/9vXdB/0e50f03e55.jpg fix it
4) 00:58:940 (2) -it does not look one thread, ctrl+h - it would be better keep
5) 01:57:553 (3) - new combo fix it
6) 02:28:073 (3) - ^ fix it

[Hard]

1) 00:18:709 (5,6) - swap them http://puu.sh/9vXDr/e1995dc165.jpg fix it
2) 01:25:559 (1) - start here 01:25:645 keep
3) 01:47:842 add circle keep
4) 02:19:749 (5) - new combo fix it
5) 02:21:050 (1) - start here 02:21:137 keep

[Insane]

1) 00:57:900 (1,2) - looks as if it's made by accident. Place Circle at the beginning of the slider keep
2) 01:22:350 (5,6) - spacing. fix it
3) 01:25:559 (1) - start here 01:25:645 keep
4) 01:53:391 (1) - 1 grid down fix it
5) 02:04:836 (2,3) - uncomfortable to play. They should be one stream http://puu.sh/9vY5T/0acd52520f.jpg fix it
6) 02:21:050 (1) - start here 02:21:137 keep

Done ~
good luck

M4M from your queue?

1. you should work on your blankets :O like i said in the hard diff. since theres a couple here ill avoid blanket mods
2. 02:13:160 (1) - make this point to 02:12:813 (3) - for better flow?
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:19:402 (1,2) - blanket better? you can use the approach circle to help you
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:24:258 (5,1) - separate these a bit to give more space? it will also make it easier to read 00:24:605 (1) -
3. 00:31:888 (6,1) - move these sliders around for better flow
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:50:963 (1) - end slider at 00:51:483 - at the vocal?
5. 00:58:593 (2) - make this face the other way for better flow?
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:14:894 (1) - move NC. no reason to have NC here
7. 02:24:605 (3,5) - blanket better?

1. 00:18:709 (3) - point this from 00:18:535 (2) - for better flow? may also move 00:19:402 (4) - for symmetry
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:18:709 (3) - theres a strong piano at 00:19:056 - so i think it would be better to remove the reverse and addhitcircle at 00:19:056 - for an antijump
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:25:125 - there is a stronger vocal here i think it would would be a better rhythm for the music if you tried this
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:25:819 - you skipped over strong vocal here. maybe use a a 1/2 slider to represent it? and then place a hitcircle at 00:25:645 - to catch the previous vocal
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:28:073 (2,3) - ctrl-g? to have better flow both from 00:27:379 (1,2,3) - and to 00:28:420 (1) - ?
6. 00:42:986 (2,3,4,5) - have the same distance between these?
7. 00:57:726 - add note to catch the drum? it will also give a stronger effect to the anti jump at 00:57:900 (1) -
8. 01:02:755 - add note to catch strong guitar hit here
9. 01:02:928 (6,1) - blanket?
10. 01:07:957 (3,6) - overlapping these like this might be confusing for some people since they happen in a short time. try unstacking them a bit like this?
    SPOILER

    
11. 01:11:772 (2,4) - try not to overlap
12. 01:22:350 (5) - drag and end slider at 01:22:697 - ? the vocal is being held and there is a second vocal at 01:22:697 - , which would make a better end for the tail with a 1/2 spacing to the next note
13. 01:25:559 (1) - start spinner at 01:25:645 - since another guitar starts playing there?
14. 01:45:067 - theres a finish sound that would match this perfectly ._." but i dont know how to use puush.. so if you have time to check, download https://osu.ppy.sh/s/174926 and take the "soft-hitfinish" and see if you would like to use that instead~
15. 01:47:842 (9,1) - swap NC. strong guitar sound and new section starts at 01:47:842 - . using it to color triangles is less important imo'
16. 01:49:576 (3) - ctrl-j for better flow?
17. 02:07:957 (5) - ctrl-g for better flow?

Kihhou wrote:

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa A M4M from your queue?

[Normal]

1. you should work on your blankets :O like i said in the hard diff. since theres a couple here ill avoid blanket mods
2. 02:13:160 (1) - make this point to 02:12:813 (3) - for better flow?
   SPOILER

   

[Hard]

1. 00:19:402 (1,2) - blanket better? you can use the approach circle to help you
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:24:258 (5,1) - separate these a bit to give more space? it will also make it easier to read 00:24:605 (1) -
3. 00:31:888 (6,1) - move these sliders around for better flow
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:50:963 (1) - end slider at 00:51:483 - at the vocal?
5. 00:58:593 (2) - make this face the other way for better flow?
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:14:894 (1) - move NC. no reason to have NC here
7. 02:24:605 (3,5) - blanket better?

[Insane]

1. 00:18:709 (3) - point this from 00:18:535 (2) - for better flow? may also move 00:19:402 (4) - for symmetry
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:18:709 (3) - theres a strong piano at 00:19:056 - so i think it would be better to remove the reverse and addhitcircle at 00:19:056 - for an antijump
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:25:125 - there is a stronger vocal here i think it would would be a better rhythm for the music if you tried this
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:25:819 - you skipped over strong vocal here. maybe use a a 1/2 slider to represent it? and then place a hitcircle at 00:25:645 - to catch the previous vocal
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:28:073 (2,3) - ctrl-g? to have better flow both from 00:27:379 (1,2,3) - and to 00:28:420 (1) - ?
6. 00:42:986 (2,3,4,5) - have the same distance between these?
7. 00:57:726 - add note to catch the drum? it will also give a stronger effect to the anti jump at 00:57:900 (1) -
8. 01:02:755 - add note to catch strong guitar hit here
9. 01:02:928 (6,1) - blanket?
10. 01:07:957 (3,6) - overlapping these like this might be confusing for some people since they happen in a short time. try unstacking them a bit like this?
    SPOILER

    
11. 01:11:772 (2,4) - try not to overlap
12. 01:22:350 (5) - drag and end slider at 01:22:697 - ? the vocal is being held and there is a second vocal at 01:22:697 - , which would make a better end for the tail with a 1/2 spacing to the next note
13. 01:25:559 (1) - start spinner at 01:25:645 - since another guitar starts playing there?
14. 01:45:067 - theres a finish sound that would match this perfectly ._." but i dont know how to use puush.. so if you have time to check, download https://osu.ppy.sh/s/174926 and take the "soft-hitfinish" and see if you would like to use that instead~
15. 01:47:842 (9,1) - swap NC. strong guitar sound and new section starts at 01:47:842 - . using it to color triangles is less important imo'
16. 01:49:576 (3) - ctrl-j for better flow?
17. 02:07:957 (5) - ctrl-g for better flow?

good luck~

Polar Storm wrote:

hi, nice beatmap, just one thing, i would put OD on the insane a bit lower, maybe 6,5 or 7 to match the difficulty of your map. same with hard, put it on 5 maybe instead of 6

zigizigiefe wrote:

[Hard]
00:15:241 (1,2,3) - Spacing problem.Try to keep equal fix it.
00:18:709 (3,4) - This is intertwined. nooh.
00:27:900 (1) - Remove NC. keep
00:21:657 (1) - Remove NC. keep
00:36:397 (2,3) - Blanket better. keep


Sorry I'm new in modding.I may a few faults.

Vinc_Angel wrote:

Hi eINess, I'm here for modding your map that had requested on my modding queue.

[General]
Offset must be on 1014 for looking better. no. this offset is not match vocal's vocie.
Size of file is more than 24 MB. Please make it below 24 MB with lowering video size, like lowering bitrate or resize the video (Because it would broke the rules) look this. It's not matter. http://puu.sh/9ABtN/6e1b9ea81d.jpg
First Kiai must be started at 00:52:343. keep. it's not match Rhythm
Second Kiai must be started at 01:58:933. keep. it's not match Rhythm

[Normal]
01:13:153 (3) - Look worst and too long slider. Must be changed to be like this (3,4) http://puu.sh/9AtDV/827dd11bb4.jpg noop. follow better now.
01:22:170 (3) - Move circle into 01:22:343 fix it.
01:22:517 (4) - Move circle into 01:22:517 fix it.
01:47:835 (4) - Make to new combo why? It's not start here.
01:48:182 (1) - Cancel new combo // ^
*note : If you used auto snapping and auto scale after you change offset like this http://puu.sh/9AvNZ/6d41d661e4.png , you must check every bit of map


[Hard]
01:02:054 (2,3) - It look like not sync with the major of bg sound. Change it into one slider like this http://puu.sh/9AuOG/fc95acace2.jpg keep. I dont want broken snap.
01:02:575 (4) - Change it into slider from 01:02:582 until 01:02:755 keep
01:56:852 until 01:57:372 - Please add slider or circle based on drum sound. Don't leave them empty.
keep. Haphazard circle and put the slider will be a problem.
*note : If you used auto snapping and auto scale after you change offset like this http://puu.sh/9AvNZ/6d41d661e4.png , you must check every bit of map like this - 00:51:476 (1) - because it look weird, so try to scale this again)

[Insane]
00:01:014 until 00:10:552 - Please add circle and slider based on piano sound. I;m not change offset.
00:10:725 - Add Spinner until 00:12:112 why? It's not start here.
00:21:650 (1) - This spinner look weird because too long. Please make it to be like this http://puu.sh/9AweE/8321bfe905.jpg
following vocal's voice. you may hear that.
01:55:812 - Add Circle noop
01:55:985 - ^ noop
01:58:066 (4) - Slider too long. Please short it until 01:58:239. following vocal's voice.
02:21:043 (1) - Spiner look weird. Please change it into slider and circle based on band sound. keep. Is not a problem at all.
*note : If you used auto snapping and auto scale after you change offset like this http://puu.sh/9AvNZ/6d41d661e4.png , you must check every bit of map


(note : all of my mod is based on my new offset. The offset is 1014, not 13507).

I hope your map got ranked. ^^

Inahime wrote:

Normal:
01:20:443 (1) - I think if you lower this slider to 01:20:790 and put a circle in 01:20:963 .It'll get better // sorry keep. add hit sound here.
Hard:
00:25:645 (5), 00:25:992 (6) - maybe put whistle? // rework hit sound all diffs know~

~My first mod I know that this is bad, but I don't speak english and never done it ~

[-MrSergio-] wrote:

Let's see....like you requested in #modreqs, here's a mod for you

[Insane]

00:17:842 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - I think these notes should go all in the same combo // ok.
00:19:402 (5,6,7,1,2,3) - Same ^ // ok.
00:23:911 (3,4) - Why not a new combo? // ok.
00:27:900 (1,2,3) - Put them clockwise // ok.
00:35:356 (5,6) - i know you tried to repeat the triangle here too, but I think moving them to (296;284) (x;y) would fit better (try to put them this way and see yourself) // sorry this place awkward for me. D:
00:57:900 (1) - This is the end of the previous combo. Put the new combo on 00:58:246 (2) // ok.
01:56:165 (1,2) - On these two sliders you put the hitsounds on the wrong spot. Put the hitsounds only on sliders' start and remove them from their end
// Nice idea. . fix it.
02:09:171 (1) - It's somehow awkward, but I don't have any ideas to how to replace it, sorry :/ // sorry keep. I want overlap parttern.
02:28:940 (2) - Add one more repeat // GOOD.

[Hard]

00:24:258 (5) - i think it should go in the next combo // ok.
00:28:940 (1,2) - These should go in the previous combo // ok.
00:32:061 (1) - Why all alone this slider? Put it in the previous combo // this trak going 0.8x
|¯ 00:48:535 - Add note
| 00:48:709 (2) - Put a slider --- >
|_ 00:49:056 (3) - Put a slider

// nice idea

00:53:391 (3) - Stack this properly (it's 0.02 afar from 00:54:085 (2) 's end) // ok.
01:52:004 (3,4,1) - All together in the same combo // ok.
02:01:368 (7) - This isn't stacked properly with 02:00:674 (5) // ok.
02:20:963 (10) - Remove this note: --> //sorry keep.
(Adjust spinner's length after moving these notes)

02:28:073 (4,5) - Combo on its own // ok.
02:28:767 (6,7) - Same ^ // ok.
02:28:940 (7) - Add a repeat // ok.

[Normal]

00:23:911 (3,4) - Combo on its own // ok.
00:37:784 (4) - New combo // sorry keep
00:38:478 (5) - Put it in the next combo // sorry keep
01:03:449 (3) - Press Q // ok.

01:20:443 (1,2) - Why? Shorten the first slider, add a note to 01:21:137 , shorten the second slider and add a note to 01:22:524 :

01:22:871 (1) - Start: 01:22:871 Finish: 01:24:258
01:24:952 (1) - -->
( 01:29:807 End of spinner)

change this part , thanks for good idea

01:52:697 (3,1) - Combo on its own // ok.
01:54:778 (2) - Press Q // ok.
01:58:246 (3,4) - Combo on its own // ok.
02:29:807 (1) - End of spinner: 02:33:275 // sorry keep

I like the song, it's really beautiful me too o3o
Good Luck with this

Fast wrote:

노말하고 하드 전체적으로 디스턴스가 왔다갔다하지만 맵은 좋네요.. 모딩하려고왔는데 지적할부분이없습니다

Kritikally wrote:

Quick IRC mod:

SPOILER

2014-07-08 13:30 Kritikally: check AiMod on Hard, some snapping issues
2014-07-08 13:31 eINess: it not matter
2014-07-08 13:31 Kritikally: k
2014-07-08 13:31 Kritikally: 00:32:061 (1)
2014-07-08 13:31 Kritikally: maybe end that slider a half beat early and place a circle at its current end?
2014-07-08 13:32 Kritikally: feels like it would make more sense and be more natural to play through
2014-07-08 13:32 eINess: I want following dram ; _ ;
2014-07-08 13:33 Kritikally: ?
2014-07-08 13:34 eINess: this place hear only base
2014-07-08 13:34 eINess: isn't it?
2014-07-08 13:34 eINess: I want following dram sound lol
2014-07-08 13:35 Kritikally: oh, the kicks
2014-07-08 13:35 eINess: ; _ ;
2014-07-08 13:35 Kritikally: you would still be following the kick
2014-07-08 13:35 Kritikally: but also accentuate the ending of the vocals in that section
2014-07-08 13:36 eINess: i almost match dram sound so i don't want other sound for playing , If i change it . maybe most palyer are confused for this
2014-07-08 13:36 Kritikally: okay
2014-07-08 13:37 Kritikally: I might recommend removing the grey combo group (changing the color of it)
2014-07-08 13:37 eINess: D: . ok. i'll think about it.
2014-07-08 13:37 Kritikally: grey resembles the color of targets already hit and can be incredibly confusing, especially at this bpm/difficulty
2014-07-08 13:38 eINess: but movie is so bright xD
2014-07-08 13:38 Kritikally: try a different lighter color, perhaps?
2014-07-08 13:38 eINess: ; _ ; . other said same that , i'll change it.
2014-07-08 13:39 Kritikally: k
2014-07-08 13:40 Kritikally: 01:20:443 (1) -
2014-07-08 13:41 Kritikally: the approach circle triggers at exactly the same time one would click the slider
2014-07-08 13:41 Kritikally: for an overlapping target, seems easy to overlook
2014-07-08 13:42 eINess: it's ok. no promblem playing
2014-07-08 13:42 Kritikally: k
2014-07-08 13:42 Kritikally: I'll take your word for it
2014-07-08 13:43 eINess: ; _ ;
2014-07-08 13:45 Kritikally: Insane:
2014-07-08 13:45 Kritikally: 00:46:454 (7)
2014-07-08 13:45 Kritikally: since you're following the guitar riff, turn that into a slider that goes til the red tick
2014-07-08 13:45 Kritikally: as the note is held for that duration
2014-07-08 13:46 Kritikally: never mind, you're following the vocals
2014-07-08 13:46 eINess: 00:46:454 (7) - here. sound is so strong D:
2014-07-08 13:46 Kritikally: you're right
2014-07-08 13:46 eINess: like end ?
2014-07-08 13:46 eINess: lol
2014-07-08 13:46 Kritikally: I was tunnelling on the guitar riff as opposed to the vocals
2014-07-08 13:46 eINess: i want more slider but
2014-07-08 13:46 eINess: yea
2014-07-08 13:47 Kritikally: they're on point with the vocals, no issues there, I'll carry on
2014-07-08 13:47 eINess: but i match raum ; _ ; sorry
2014-07-08 13:47 eINess: lol
2014-07-08 13:47 eINess: k
2014-07-08 13:51 Kritikally: 01:00:674 (3)
2014-07-08 13:52 Kritikally: that slider seems too long, maybe change it to two smaller sliders, e.g.:

2014-07-08 13:55 eINess: ok.
2014-07-08 13:55 Kritikally: and that's all I can find on the Insane one
2014-07-08 13:55 Kritikally: your Normal difficulty is spot on, no issues there
2014-07-08 13:56 Kritikally: other than maybe the timing of a couple 16th notes that could be too hard given the tempo
2014-07-08 13:56 eINess:
2014-07-08 13:56 eINess: ok. thanks~
2014-07-08 13:57 Kritikally: again, consider removing the grey-colored group from all difficulties (or at least hard and insane)
2014-07-08 13:57 Kritikally: make it a green or literally any other color (other than white, of course)
2014-07-08 13:57 eINess: more think it D: , thanks mod~
2014-07-08 13:57 Kritikally: yw <3
2014-07-08 13:57 Kritikally: I'll post log
2014-07-08 13:57 eINess: green is not match lol
2014-07-08 13:57 eINess: ok.
2014-07-08 13:57 eINess: thanks a lot
2014-07-08 13:57 Kritikally: was just giving a random example
2014-07-08 13:57 Kritikally: you're welcome ♥
2014-07-08 13:58 eINess:

1. Your video looks pixelated and I'm sure that you can get a better-quality version of this video. Try to look for it!
2. The same thing as I've mentioned above happens with your BG, I'm sure that there're some nicer ones. So, I tried to get some better ones. How do you like this or that one?
3. Please, disable the letterboxes during breaks. They kinda hurt your video and don't look really good.
4. Your kiais are inconsistent, please, try to fix it and keep them consistent. It is important to keep the spread consistent. ths may help you to fix it.
5. 01:25:819 (1) - this spinner is way too long. It seems really boring in harder diffs and gives too much spinning in the Normal. Try to remov it, it doesn't sound really necessary here, anyway.
   Note: if you remove the spinner, probably you'll have to remove 01:42:293 (1) - this one, as well. Both the spinner and 01:45:761 (1) - the beats here sound overmapped and aren't really needed here. Since there're no beats in music, they can confuse players a lot.
6. Try to increase volume of your hitsounds? The soft-hitnormal.wav during kiais is almost inaudible.

1. AR4 will match better with your diff settings and slider velocity. Also, it will make your spread more balanced. I highly recommend you to use it.
2. 00:21:657 (2,3) - minor - the transition here feels rather uncomfortable and forced. Try to make your flow softer? Here's an example of what you can do to make it look/play better
   Note: 00:58:246 (1,2) - pretty similar thing happens here. Please, take your time and try to improve your flow a bit, I'm sure that you'll be able to make your patterns look better!
3. 00:33:275 (1) - the way how you switch from vocals to the music is rather hard to understand. To make the transition from red ticks to the white ones more readable, try to place an 1/1 slider at 00:32:928. Example
   Note: see this guide if you are unsure about this pattern.
4. 00:49:576 - the downbeat here sounds way too strong, I'm sure that it deserves a circle, so your rhythm will be more understandable and logical. Try to finish 00:48:362 (3) - this slider at 00:49:229 - and then place a circle with a new combo 00:49:576 - there. THis way, you'll have a clear and playable transition from vocals to drums and the strong beat will be pointed out. Example
5. 00:50:963 (1) - the spinner here doen't really match with the vocals and music. You can map this part easily and make it much more pleasant and fitting.See if it sounds better to you.
6. 01:02:755 - ignoring this beat doesn't sound right to me. I'd rather go with something like 1/1 slider and one more 1/1 slider. example. This way, it matches perfectly with the music and plays easily.
   Note: don't forget to remove NC from 01:03:796 (1) - since it won't be necessary anymore.
7. 01:06:223 (5) - try to add a new combo here, this combo chain seems to be too long and breaks your consistent comboing.
8. 01:58:940 (1,2) - since both 01:57:553 (1,2) - and 01:58:246 (1,2) - were 1/2 stacks, some players may misread 01:58:940 (1,2) - as 1/2 stack as well. To avoid that confusion, try to unstack 01:58:940 (1,2).
   
   I'd recommend you to work more on your rhythm and flow, I like what you've got here so far, but it still needs some improvements!

1. There are lots of minor (x0,1 ~ x0,3) spacing changes, they are noticeable but thye don't work as jumps since the DS changes are too minor. In general, they make your spacing appear quite random and might bug some players. Try to get rid of some of them and/or keep only the most important ones with higher DS.
   Note: 00:41:252 (1,2,3,4,5) - here's an example of those DS changes, if you need one.
2. Try to use CS 3,5 here, it will make your spread more balanced. (N - 3 / H - 3,5 / I - 4) CS3 seems too big for that diff and makes it look a bit too easy, I think.
3. 00:21:830 - even though you follow vocals, you shouldn't ignore music completely. The loud pano beat here sounds really confuising and makes 00:21:657 (1) - really uncomfortable to play. I'm highly suggesting you to start trhe slider at 00:21:830 - this point to make it more reasonable and playable.
4. 00:49:402 (1) - since the drum/bass kicks in at 00:49:576 - the spinner shouls start at 00:49:402 (1) - as well. Starting it easier makes no sense with the song and feels random.
5. 01:47:148 (4,5) - these two objects are clearly overmapped and 01:45:414 (1,2,3) - these, probably, are overmapped as well. Perhaps, you shuld finish the break later and avoid overmapping since it feels really confusing as it is now.
   
   The only thinh that really bugs me here is those minor spacing changes, apart from this, the diff seems okay. Try to get more opinions on it, please. the diff itself is quite alright, but it may need some more modding and some more improvements.

1. 00:21:830 - the downbeat is here, and for the hardest diff, I wouldn't igore it so easily.
2. 00:29:113 (4,5) - to add some variety and emphasize the piano, try to make a jump here. Something like this would work good, imo.
3. 00:49:576 - same was with the hard diff, the spinner is off music.
   Note: it may not be noticeable instandard, but it is way too easy to spot in o!m/taiko. And since the diff is playable in these modes, you probably should fix that.
4. 00:50:963 (1) - I feel uncomfortable with this slider, it doesn't represent the song as it should. Listen, 00:51:483 - vocals and 00:51:137 - music. I'd rather go with something different and try to point out the missed beats/vocals.
   Note: 01:02:235 - same here, you ignre qute a lot of important beats and it really bugs me.
5. 01:22:871 (6) - holding this slider for so long will make players bored or nervous. try to break it into 3 or more sliders, so, players will keep moving?example
   
   I feel uncomfortable with the way how you ignore the instruments in some patterns, also I did not really like how the flow breaks in patterns like 01:08:998 (7,1) - when players "feel" your flow and it suddenly breaks, it feels rather tricky and confusing. At the same time, I liked a couple of your aideas, they were rally great, like 01:14:894 - the slowdown here, for example. All in all, you should pay more attention to your rhythm and flow and if you do it - this will be a really awesome diff!