[General]
So few circles in your maps until Insane. Kinda boring.

[Easy]
00:26:701 (1) - This spinner is awkward. Since you have no sounds on it, it's just kind of there with nothing really going on in the music. I'd just delete it.
Why do you have a break if you mapped through it in the Hard/Insane?

[Normal]
00:04:057 (2,1) - What is this doing in a Normal? Follow the music, firstly. Secondly, don't use advanced techniques in lower level maps.
Why do you have a break if you mapped through it in the Hard/Insane?

[Hard]
Wow. This difficulty jump is HUGE. Map a real Hard diff and rename this to Insane please.
00:59:298 (1,1,1) - Please don't new combo spam
01:01:461 (1,2,1,1,1,2,1,1,1) - ^
01:24:249 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This doesn't really play that well. The stop and go with a constant rhythm when you stop with the vocal, but keep going with the rhythm on the drum part but not moving really flows poorly. I recommend you remove the circles between the sliders. That or remove the sliders and use double circles instead.

[Insane]
Rename this to Extra.
00:08:096 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing is suddenly rather high for a fairly subdued part of the song.
00:32:903 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - Please don't new combo spam
00:36:942 (1) - What is this following? The strong beat in the music is at 00:37:086 -
00:40:692 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - I'm not really sure what you're trying to follow here, pattern-wise.
00:42:134 (1,2) - And after all those jumps, this feels waaaay too close. The pacing and flow feels broken.
00:42:855 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Please don't new combo spam
00:48:480 (1,1,1) - I still highly recommend that you use a slider considering that both of these have different rhythms. Also don't new combo spam.
00:53:096 (1,1) - New combo spammmm. I'm not going to point them out anymore.
01:11:413 (1) - Slider end is unsnapped

You really need to fix the broken difficulty spread before you push this to re-rank. Let me know when you get the new difficulty in and I'll give it a look-over.

So sad.......我的mania成绩。。。

还是祝早日rerank

Done
漏的滑条静音我给补上了
http://puu.sh/9DBI2/ec769b1919.zip

Garven wrote:

[General]
So few circles in your maps until Insane. Kinda boring. If I use more circles instead of sliders, difficulty will increase. It is not even a definite Easy and Normal now.

[Easy]
00:26:701 (1) - This spinner is awkward. Since you have no sounds on it, it's just kind of there with nothing really going on in the music. I'd just delete it. OK.
Why do you have a break if you mapped through it in the Hard/Insane? Was for making it easier, but I mapped it at last.

[Normal]
00:04:057 (2,1) - What is this doing in a Normal? Follow the music, firstly. Secondly, don't use advanced techniques in lower level maps. Fixed.
Why do you have a break if you mapped through it in the Hard/Insane? Same as above.

[Hard]
Wow. This difficulty jump is HUGE. Map a real Hard diff and rename this to Insane please.
00:59:298 (1,1,1) - Please don't new combo spam This New Combo Setting is used for players to read the map easier. Using this pattern without New Combo is somehow too difficult especially in Hard. Besides, many mappers use this. Why not for me ?
01:01:461 (1,2,1,1,1,2,1,1,1) - ^ Same as above.
01:24:249 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This doesn't really play that well. The stop and go with a constant rhythm when you stop with the vocal, but keep going with the rhythm on the drum part but not moving really flows poorly. I recommend you remove the circles between the sliders. That or remove the sliders and use double circles instead. OK.

[Insane]
Rename this to Extra. Another Name.
00:08:096 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing is suddenly rather high for a fairly subdued part of the song. No. This is used to hint players that map is becoming difficult. Besides, this part is faster and the rhythm is stronger than previous.
00:32:903 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - Please don't new combo spam Well, maybe in this diff I will use fewer New Combo since it is ok for player to read the map harder.
00:36:942 (1) - What is this following? The strong beat in the music is at 00:37:086 - Fixed.
00:40:692 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - I'm not really sure what you're trying to follow here, pattern-wise. You don't hear the piano here?
00:42:134 (1,2) - And after all those jumps, this feels waaaay too close. The pacing and flow feels broken. Fixed.
00:42:855 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Please don't new combo spam OK. It won't hurt a lot.
00:48:480 (1,1,1) - I still highly recommend that you use a slider considering that both of these have different rhythms. Also don't new combo spam. In fact. These three sounds are REALLY strong. Using sliders will hurt the feeling of hitting. Just as you said in General, somehow boring. If there is definite snap of these sounds, I won't use the slider on 00:53:096 (1) - ,either.
00:53:096 (1,1) - New combo spammmm. I'm not going to point them out anymore. These rhythm are special so it is ok to stay like this. But it is ok to be fixed, too, since this is Extra now.
01:11:413 (1) - Slider end is unsnapped fixed.

You really need to fix the broken difficulty spread before you push this to re-rank. Let me know when you get the new difficulty in and I'll give it a look-over. OK.

Done.

Sorry though be happy that there will be a proper spread >wo though you have to remember this isnt a guideline this is a rule since you need a reasonable gap between the diffs >.<

Did some IRC followup mostly concerning detailing why the spread is unacceptable from the N -> H still and some detail cleanup on the other maps. Get some mods on the new Insane and call me back!

As yf_bmp QQ req.

[yf's Insane]

00:01:173 (1) - 注意這個音效組和音量，一個是S:C1，另一個是S，我建議用S:C1 (音量50%)比較好，滑條聲靜音一下較佳。
00:09:249 (1,2,3) - 如果這是要做簡單向ins，這個間距似乎有點遠。(4.xx間距..)
00:21:509 (6,7,8,9) - 這四個放在這裡好像有點亂..(overlap到23了，我想player打HD應該有點坑)
00:25:115 (6) - 這個間距前面3連有跳，后面那3連反而沒跳有點奇怪，不如前后保持同距就好? 這樣比較好讀。
00:27:134 (2,4) - 這兩個vocal應該是能加whistle，可以試試。
00:44:153 (1) - 這個slider有點太靠邊了有點突兀，我覺得還是左上移動一些。
00:45:884 (3) - ^ (試試(116|24)? 我覺得這音聽起來沒跳點，所以放近些?)
00:48:192 (7,1) - 感覺這間距很容易miss here.
00:54:249 (1) - 間距2.6有點far，試試(500|212)?
00:59:297 (3,4) - 這邊的節奏我建議跟vocal似乎也可以，ctrl+g交換節奏試試?
01:14:874 (2,1) - 1/4 slider跳有點遠，放上一些?
01:22:807 (3,1,2) - 節奏應該是跟01:20:788 (5) - 一樣? 跟vocal吧。
01:24:538 (2,3) - 這邊怎麼就跟了vocal，而前面竟然是跟鼓點?
01:26:269 (5) - 太靠左上了，移近一點吧。

希望這數條能改善你的map quality，早日rebubbled. GL。

其实挺好的 jump很爽

[yf's Insane]
00:08:096 (1,2,3,4) - 00:10:403 (1,2,3,4) - 节奏相同的话, 4的snap尽量一样把
00:21:797 (1) - 好怪的滑条
00:40:115 (4,5) - 这个snap不好
00:48:480 (1) - 这里三声是重鼓音 用note三角形或是什么的怎么样? 不要滑条
00:53:096 (1) - ^
01:04:922 (1) - 呃呃呃呃,,
01:28:865 (1) - ^

good luck

D:
多么帅的图
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标签怎么两个yf_bmp
00:12:134 (9) - 不NC一下？
00:25:259 (7) - 在这里NC，下一个去掉？
00:31:317 (1) - 加音效？
00:42:134 (3) - antijump建议NC
00:51:365 (5,2) - 包一下？
01:07:519 (2,3) - 建议修一下blanket
01:16:749 (8) - 这么高亢的歌声NC一下吧，况且这个cb对比附近的来看也是有些long。。。。
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Good Luck！

有点乱 还要摸吗 我怕被打啊

[yf]
Tick rate 2 fits this song best
00:54:105 (5) - Just make them circles
00:58:865 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - These feel really off... the jumps should be happening with the vocals, if anything. Also that you have a constant rhythm going through here also contributes to the flow confusion.
01:07:519 (2) - Slider end is unsnapped
01:12:134 (3) - ^
01:17:038 (6) - ^
01:24:249 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - The same thing going on here from last time. I really suggest you try a different pattern design here.

[Dream]
01:17:326 (1) - I think instead of returning to a stack with this, having it more in the left and center field would flow much better. The upward movement just didn't have a good feeling to it.
01:19:346 (7) - Try not to cover a slider so much with hit objects

Edit:

@yf: My problem with the patterns is more the timing of your jumps. Since you're using stacks to sliders -> jump, they'd feel a lot better if you time them with the vocals instead of right after the vocals. That you also change your jump pattern for the final 01:00:884 (5) - slider on each instance also makes things unintuitive.

dududuuu -stalking garven-

gogogo

This is much better now. Thanks for fixing up the spread!

Rebubbled!

Re-Ranked!

Re-Iked!

gratz :3

Good

Dream:01:11:846 (4) - Maybe lack of clap.

Anyway Re-gratz!

终于。。。。。。。。嘉文还是没能献出他的的红心

This kind of map is the reason why:

I WANT TO MOD ALL 5.3+ STAR MAPS BEFORE THEY GET RANKED.
I WANT TO MOD ALL HARD MAPS BEFORE THEY GET RANKED.

Gratz!