1. Advanced (4.06 stars, 321 notes)
2. Beginner (2.46 stars, 192 notes)
3. Tearless Moscow (4.62 stars, 418 notes)

Shinxyn wrote:

:3
no bg yet~ No BG ? Hrmm... strange....

Beginner-
The beginning hitsounds got tiring to listen to cuz it just keeps going in the same pattern, but then again, its Beginner (easy)...
Ehh... good enough, the map gets kinda repeatative and boring, but leave that for doubletime~
Yea, Beginner = easy, yea, can't do much about it eh ? xD

Advanced-
01:08:05 (1,2,3) - with all the whistles around... was this little no-whistle gap on purpose? No, I forgot to put a whistle here. ;_;
02:43:04 - add note for the sake of breaking this long only-white-tick pattern (and to the music) Done. =D

Tearless Moscow-
00:22:04 - I assume the sliderslide sound is on purpose since the timing panel isn't custom... is it...? eh, anyways, if so, please lower volume so its kinda like 00:55:65 (6,7)'s? Yea, on purpose, so, I lowered it now. =P Done for Advanced too
01:01:45 (4,5,6) - hmm, these (this, 02:21:45 (4,5,6),and 02:36:65 (4,5,6)) have hitsounds, these- 01:07:85 (5,1,2) and 01:52:65 (7,8,9) don't, even though they sound pretty much the same, which is right? Orz, the latter 2 parts that you mentioned should have whistles with lower volume on them, Hence, fixed.
01:16:04 to 01:19:24 - no whistle gap? xD Missed that.
01:30:85 (1) - I don't think this sliderslide whistle was on purpose, since 01:32:45 (1) - doesn't have one, or should it? Lol, you have a great ear and eye ! Coz previosuly whistle slide was there for both sliders, but then I decided to remove them, and I forgot to remove this particular one. ;_; Thanks~
01:56:45 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - the only 1/2-next-to-each-other jumps in the map... >_> just pointing out how it doesn't fit the rest of map, but its fine for hard(er) diff Yea, you clearly expressed my doubt about this jump. I will keep this in mind since I myself also think it's kinda "ridiculous" jump. xD
02:09:25 (10) - remove sliderslide whistle? Done
02:34:05 (5) - get rid of first whistle on slider? (whistle+clap mixed) Yea, done ! =D

Not sure, but I don't think I like the whistle+custom chime It's triangle I believe ? xD hitsound mixes.... one of the two is enough, since both hitsounds are brought out in this song... or maybe it's just too much whistles o_o; EXACTLY my worry out there, coz my initial final product was virtually "whistle" less, but then I thought, Hrmmm...., let's try some whistles on ? In the end, I guess I had hitsound overdose hours ago until I was on whistle-mapping trance. Lol. I will sure keep this in mind, and then re-listen again some other day to see whether I still think it is suitable or it's disgusting. Right now, it stays on the middle for me.... xD

I type too much for little things I typed too much for little things too. ;_;

osu_CN_yaya wrote:

Tearless Moscow
00:22:05 (7) - slider结尾finish , 20%volume
00:38:85 (7) - slider结尾mute
01:04:05 (5) - no whistle
01:05:65 (3) - ^
01:07:25 (3) - ^ 以上的hitsound都跟了你的suggestion. ;p
01:19:65 (6) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1061 你的建议是不错，但是我觉得我的也是行得通，而且如果我照你的建议改的话，怕design会乱掉。 xD
01:23:25 (7) - 开头no whistle Remove 了，也remove了其他类似的地方。=D
01:26:35 - 加个note。因为图刚开始这样做的。同样的音乐下最好做成同样的节奏。 认同。加了。。。
01:46:45 (9) - slider结尾finish 认同。过后我还会再看看那里还可以加finish. xD

advance
-1 overall
00:28:45 (6) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1063 ignore placement 你的建议我是在tearless moscow difficulty那边用过了，所以不大想这边又再重复多一次pattern. =D
00:33:25 (2) - 结尾mute
01:04:05 (5,2,2) - no whistle
02:44:45 (1,2) - 两个结尾都用whistle
02:46:05 (1) - finish 这样好听了许多，谢谢！
02:55:65 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1064 好吧，就跟tearless moscow difficulty一样


貌似是高中时候的爱歌了。~ 是啊。。。。 xD 难道你之前有听过这首歌吗？
你的Map也越来越好了。 谢谢，我在学习和进步着，仍需要很多前辈的指导。

osuplayer111 wrote:

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Background: No. (Have you added it? If yes, full submit again please.) Yea, I will~ <3
Source: No. (Find some source if possible.)
Tags: Yes.
File Size: 3,81MB/24,00MB

[Overall]

Timing: BPM: 150,00 - Offset: 4.456 (Remember to resnap all notes.) Your offset sounds NICE ! I will use +6ms then... Thanks~

[Beginner]

01:06:005 (1) - Remove new combo. Done.
02:12:045 (1) - Don't silence this spinner. A finish hitsounds is better. Agree !

[Advanced]

01:13:025 (2,3) - Adjust this spacing. Done, I hope ? xD
02:15:005 (1) - Don't silence this spinner. A finish hitsounds is better. Agreed !
03:03:025 (1) - Remove new combo. Done.
03:04:045 (3) - New combo.
03:04:085 (1) - Remove new combo. Agreed !
03:13:025 (1,2,3) - Unexpected change of spacing. Hrmm.... I will keep that in mind for this because actually when you are playing, the notes are quite intuitive to play. ;p

[Tearless Moscow]

02:07:025 (5) - New combo. Done.
02:58:005 (5) - ^ Yea, ^.^
03:13:025 (1,2,3) - Same as Advanced.Same as Advanced.

haisha_ wrote:

Normal:
01:39:650 [6] one tiny square to the right. Done !
01:53:250 [1] ^ but up one. Done too !
02:27:650 [5] ^ to the left. xD This will distort the design, hence, a "no" here... :3

ADvanced:
00:26:456 [2]one tiny square up
02:10:856 [3] ^ down.
02:11:656 [6] ^ up.
All done. :3
Tearless:
02:07:650 [6]new combo? Yea, I start the new combo earlier actually.
02:50:850 [2,3,4]why so differnt D: same spacing pelase >_<;;
03:14:850 [3]one tiny square down.
All done.
WAHHH ~ i really liek this ~ WAHHH I am glad you like this... ^.^

star star star ~

alan_629_6 wrote:

U know la...

Beginner
00:44:045 (4,5,6) - incongruent to 00:42:085 (1,2,3)
02:00:005 (1,2,3,4,5) - should it be this way?
02:02:085 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this too XD

not bad!


Advance
00:34:085 (5) - elongate to here? or better without the sound
00:55:065 (6,7) - remove the finish sound?
00:58:005 (1) - add the finish sound here?
02:15:025 (1) - better move at this point. i think BAT will say again XD
03:14:085 (3) - may be the slider can slower a bit so that match to background music

nice!


Tearless Moscow
00:34:085 (5) - silent please
00:55:065 (6,7) - same as advance
01:22:085 (6) - design some pattern
02:42:085 (6) - ^
03:08:005 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ???
03:14:085 (3) - same as advance
03:19:065 (1) - should end in white tick?

excellent!!!

nice map. it will be the best if the singer and the song can be better XD
Gambatte kudasai!!!

Kytoxid wrote:

[Beginner]

01:53:025 (1,2,3,4,5) - Vertically flip the entire pattern, and center it?

abalee wrote:

00:22:05 (7) - @ Tearless Moscow : like shinxyn, i prefer this slider silent.

03:19:65 (1) - @ Tearless Moscow & Advanced : end on 03:22:85 (next white line)?

gdeath wrote:

All fine except extra osb file.
no kds
star

Breeze wrote:

Can't download in school, so no mod, sorry

shoot a big star

Alace wrote:

pretty good~

jockeytiyan wrote:

Ehhh...you know Alvis, I really didn't want to mod your map because it's already good. So I'll just give out some suggestions. Suggestions are always welcomed ! ^.^

I suggest that you get one hitsound from the map itself and make it louder for a bit such as this 00:17:065. Hrm... that would be over-hitsounding. I am scared of hitsound overdose, lol.


Beginner:

01:23:025 (5) - One more reverse arrow can do. ^^ Nice suggestion. Used.
01:45:045 (4) - Add a beat here. No red tick notes for Beginner. ;p
01:56:005 (6) - ^ Nice suggestion. Used.
02:06:005 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I know this isn't your mapping style but can you align them? I'm not suggesting it actually, just giving out an idea that might turn out good. Intended, sorry... ;_;
02:44:045 (6) - Add a beat here. Added 1 more reverse with finish hitsound.


Advanced:

01:07:065 (3) - Move 3 grids left and 5 grids up. Move to somewhere else, seems crowded to me too. xD
01:23:025 (7) - One more reverse arrow or add a beat on the white tick after this slider Nice suggestion. Done
01:50:005 (2) - The timing bar on this one should have a lesser volume. Return it to the previous volume after the slider. Yea, agree.
03:19:065 (1) - You can end the spinner here 03:22:589 Yea, agree, betterer, done.


Tearless Moscow :'( (WHY DOES IT HAVE TO BE TEARLESS?! T_T) Moscow is a place.

00:06:035 (3) - Remove this.
00:13:015 (2) - ^
01:26:035 (3) - ^ No for all the remove suggestions. xD
03:19:065 (1) - You can end the spinner here 03:22:589 Done too.


I miss aniki...

1. Source:可以写她们专辑的名称XD,不写也行啦

1. 00:39:656 (1-6) - 前面是0.5XBPM,这里又是连续的1XBPM...第一次大概容易miss吧XD 不过也不是什么大问题,玩第二次就不会miss了lol
2. 02:14:856 end of spinner - no finish here

1. nazi mod no.1 00:12:056 (6) - offscreen note, 可能会有BAT抱怨XD
2. 01:00:456 (2,3) - 第一次也是有点confused,我就以为是00:58:856 (5)这种slider, 不过可能只是我自己有这个感觉XD

Breeze wrote:

今天早上终于把map下下来了lol
Let's mod go go go ! YAY !

[General]

1. Source:可以写她们专辑的名称XD,不写也行啦

不知道要怎样翻译《见习爱神》。。。 难道love apprentice ? orz

[Advanced]

1. 00:39:656 (1-6) - 前面是0.5XBPM,这里又是连续的1XBPM...第一次大概容易miss吧XD 不过也不是什么大问题,玩第二次就不会miss了lol ^.^
2. 02:14:856 end of spinner - no finish here

Removed finish... :3

[Tearless Moscow]

1. nazi mod no.1 00:12:056 (6) - offscreen note, 可能会有BAT抱怨XD Fixed. XD
2. 01:00:456 (2,3) - 第一次也是有点confused,我就以为是00:58:856 (5)这种slider, 不过可能只是我自己有这个感觉XD

^.^"""

Great map Thanks !
Twins~XD Breeze~~

blissfulyoshi wrote:

If you know the album name, please put it as the source

Beginner:
Why is the offset in this diff different than the other diffs, please make all 3 diffs have the same offset Oops. fixed. xD

Combo mod:
00:55:250 (1,2) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 3 to keep your pattern of 8 whole notes a combo for the previous combo Remove 1, add at 2 instead. ;p

Advanced
Combo mod:
00:27:656 (4) - new combo for lyrics xD Actually they are 1 sentence. xD
01:38:856 (1) - remove new combos to follow the lyrics better Done, coz I also notice at the latter parts I don't do new combos for similar patterns.
02:26:056 (3) - new combo for lyrics Done.

Timing section mod:
00:22:05 - make a quarter note earlier
00:55:65 - make a quarter note earlier
02:44:25 - unneeded timing section
Done for all those. xD

Tearless Moscow

will finish modding soon.

Crazy Jay wrote:

wow,you did a good job~~~~~
for all the third color is too dark,please change(I didn't redownload it,or you have changed BG?) I actually changed the BG already... xD It's easier to see I guess ? xD

[Advanced]
02:17:856 - add a note? I know there's a "drum" there, but I have asked several normal players test play it, and because that "drum" is not synched to any vocals, hence, they will late in pressing it. Hence, no changes are done. ;p

Really a good map
+star

(什么时候开始做下一站天后呀？慢歌我不知道会不会做>_>先试试看吧，我倒是想做八十块环游世界）
我也是以为我不会做慢歌，但是做做一下就上瘾了xD 我要做时再PM你吧! ^.^ al2e10也会加入我们xD. Hehehe

Breeze wrote:

做下一站天后的话算我一个XD

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Tearless Moscow
Combo mod:
02:26:056 (4) - new combo to be consistent with 01:06:056 (1)

Timing section mod:
00:55:65 - make a quarter note earlier
01:50:05 - ^
01:58:85 - ^
02:18:05 - ^

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Nice map. Star.

gdeath wrote:

ahh...have a look

Larto wrote:

Offset: 4,446

what a beautiful mapset <3 You're one of my favourite mappers <3333

alvisto wrote:

gdeath wrote:

ahh...have a look

However, your 3rd pic is really pretty. Would you mind if I use it on my other map instead, which is the V conclusion map ?

Skyripper wrote:

k ranked

qieqie wrote:

:roll:
Although I already get an ss in last diff
But plz check the note in 01:09:046 ,
I think it should be placed at 01:08:946

drazure wrote:

I love this song but can't seem to download the map for some reason.
Anyone know why?