hi.
• 00:28:519 (110,115,125) - try changing them to
d, follows the drum beat well imo
OK•00:36:944 (158,159) - swap, follows the music and vocal which has beat at 00:36:944 (158) - , while the vocal is high here 00:37:149 (159) -
OK• 00:42:183 (181) - change to
d also, for following the beat drum.
OK• 00:53:793 (229,230) - swap, for following the vocal. 00:53:793 (229) - is higher than 00:54:204 (230) -
OK• 00:54:409 (231) - remove this? well i personally don't like this note being here, since it follows nothing. @@
OK• 00:56:259 (239) - try removing this, you're following the vocal. it stops there
no, I am not preferring a break here• 00:58:108 (250) - ^
^• 00:59:341 ~ 00:59:546 make this
kkd, follows the vocal well ww
not really fit imo• 01:00:368 try making it something like
this. imo follows the vocal and music more ww
I can't see it• 01:02:834 (277) - change to
d, follows the beat drum well.
nope, I use k to represent the drum here• 01:03:656 (282) - sounds weird having it here, since you're following the vocal, and there's nothing can be heard there. suggest removing this note
I beat can be heard here• 01:03:964 (283) - change to
d for following the song, idk if it's piano or string or whatever
I prefer a k here• 01:04:478 (286,290,293) - add finish there, the music is pretty strong. should be emphasized with finish
OK• 01:07:252 add a note here, since it's empty, and the music is still playing, which increasing from a low density to a high one
OK• 01:09:204 ~ 01:10:848 try something like
this. 01:10:231 (316,317,318) - and 01:10:642 (319,320,321) - has the same vocal, but different pitch. so making them mirroring like this is better, and sounds good. as for the pattern before it, because the string ends at 01:09:204, so stop it there, and begin another new pattern with following the vocal now.
• 01:12:697 (332) - remove, because vocal ends at 01:12:492
OK• 01:13:930 (337) - move to 01:14:033 for following the vocal and music
No, missing a beat if I remove it• 01:15:163 (344,349) - remove, because you're following the vocal. >w>
Indeed, I am not really following the vocal• 01:16:602 (349,350) - swap, then del the 01:16:807 (350) - . no vocal there, and 01:16:396 (348,349) - has the same pitch, and almost the same accent. xD
OK• 01:20:094 ~ 01:20:711 - try using
this as the pattern? well, suits the music and vocal well tho. 01:20:814 (374) - is optional, you may add it or no, but i suggest adding it because leaving it empty is weird
ok• 01:26:978 add
d, then remove the finish at 01:27:081 (405) -, doesn't need to be emphasized, the different between 01:26:875 (403,404,405) - itself has identify that the last note is strong and different from the others.
ok• 01:29:135 (412) - change to
k to suits the vocal's pitch, and 01:29:957 (414) - to
d for the same reason as that.
current one is fine imo• 01:34:889 ~ 01:36:122
i'm sorry i remapped this part www try making it simpler like
this, follows the music and vocal
OK• 01:40:026 (455) - change to
d, because it has the lower vocal pitch than 01:39:615 (453,454) -
OK• 01:41:670 (465,466) - swap, to make 01:41:875 (466) - follows the music, as well as for
k rhyhtm consistency
OK• 01:42:183 ~ 01:43:930 - got this pattern by accident, but it sounds actually good. lols
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1972184 OK• 01:44:957 (482) - change to
d for a better pattern.
OK• 01:49:067 remove the note here, since there's nothing on the music. try changing the pattern to
this? OK• 01:55:437 (535) - remove, because no music or vocal can be heard making a new sound there
OK• 01:54:820 ~ 01:55:231
kdd k for following the music and vocal. remove 01:55:437 because nothing can be heard
OK• 01:58:724 (546) - remove, as the same reason as above
OK• 01:59:957 (553) - move to 02:00:060 and change to
d, as the previous mod aboveee idk where, for following the vocal and music better
OK• 02:08:382 (583) - remove, same reason as somewhere above
OKthe kiai part is also the same as before, need to emphasize on vocal and music more, not making own forced pattern ww i will leave it to you ;3 • 02:57:800 probably add a
d here for following the music? the violin one lols
OK• 03:05:300 (23) - remove, because no sound can be heard. 03:05:505 (24) - change to
k for following the bass. 03:05:916 (26,27) - change both to
d for following the bass too.
OK• 03:07:971 (35) - remove because of the same reason as above
OK• 03:12:697 (53,54) - swap. on 53, can be heard that the beat is pretty loud, while 54 can be heard that the vocal starts on a high pitch
OK• 03:22:765 (92,93,94,95,96,97) - change to
kkd d k d k k d for bettern pattern, and also follows the music
• 03:29:135 (121) - remove, as the reason is stated almost there
• 03:37:766 (16) - definitely change to
k, because it has higher pitch than 03:38:177 (17) -
the following kiai may also look at my mod at the first kiai. too tired to re-mod, i will leave ming with them wwww