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jockeytiyan
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, March 30, 2010 at 6:12:23 PM

Artist: Eiko Shimamiya
Title: Super Scription of Data
Source: Higurashi no Naku Koro ni Rei
Tags: Ost Visual Novel Anime Teara Alvisto
BPM: 110
Filesize: 5173kb
Play Time: 02:19
Difficulties Available:
  1. alvisto's Hard (4.82 stars, 300 notes)
  2. Easy (1.82 stars, 50 notes)
  3. Insane (4.93 stars, 431 notes)
  4. Teara's Normal (3.69 stars, 172 notes)
Download: Eiko Shimamiya - Super Scription of Data
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My first map.

I'd thank the whole #mod for helping on this map. And thanks to some certain people who helped me when I had difficulties on this map.
Ephemeral
Tiding over star priority due to BSS error.
Fuuko
Fuuko's mod DEKIMASHITA! <33'

I am kinda lazy to bug around with red and blue...so I will post everything just like "something you should check".

Teara

00:43:745 (5); New combo.
00:48:108; Add a note.
00:58:472 (3); New combo.
01:51:108 (5); ^
01:52:199 (1); Remove new combo.

The end is a bit...weird. Why don't add a spinner or something?
Alvisto

End kiai.
JT

...Argh. This is awesomeness.
But it's 3:40 song...this is tiring as hell, and it's a hard diff...maybe you should consider reducing it? Well, you don't have to, actually, but think about all the nab players like me. ;_;
And that's it. Star~, and keep up the good work. <3'

PS: STFU, DON'T EXPECT BAD COMMENTS IF YOUR MAPS ARE WAY TOO AWESOME.
alvisto
As far as I know, the kiao issue of not ending at the appropiate place is not a real problem, but I have fixed it nonetheless.

Also added a tag in my diff.

Also remap a certain verse in my diff too.

Download: Eiko Shimamiya - Super Scription of Data (jockeytiyan) [alvisto's Hard].osu
arien666
[Teara's Normal]
01:26:56(2) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid up with using lv2 grid?
02:03:92(5,6,7) - [Suggestion] Distance seems little different but you can skip them XD

[alvisto's Hard]
00:49:47(3) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid up?
01:32:56(2) - ^
01:50:83(4) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid left?

[Hard]
Seems ok :3

Good song!
And good luck XD

Here's my star :3
Topic Starter
jockeytiyan

arken1015 wrote:

[alvisto's Hard]
00:49:47(3) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid up? This is the only one that I didn't follow. Sorry, but I think the placement is ok for this part.
01:32:56(2) - ^ Done
01:50:83(4) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid left? Done
Alvis asked me to do the mods myself. He's probably busy doing some schoolwork right now.
NoHitter
LOL. You got the full submit wrongly?
Here's my star from before
Alice
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Andrea
New "Detailed" modding style for help maps <3

You don't have to follow my post, remember there are not directions, but suggestions!

[File Checking...]

Background: Yes.
Source: Yes.
Tags: Yes. (Capitalize all the tags, please.)
File Size: 11,4MB/24,00MB

[Overall]

All seems good.

[Difficulties]

[Teara's Normal]

Spacing is too high for the most easier difficulty. Reduce it?

00:47:001 (5,6) - Adjust spacing.
01:32:056 (1,2) - Hard to notice for new players and hard to click.

02:16:074 (1) - Remove new combo.

[alvisto's Hard]

00:40:074 (6) - Partially offscreen.
02:17:056 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This change of spacing is really hard to read.


[Hard]

00:39:051 (2) - Hidden slider.
00:40:060 (2) - ^
02:24:010 (1,2,3,4,5) - Unexpected change of spacing.
02:27:092 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
Topic Starter
jockeytiyan
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
EEeee
Teara's Normal
02:19:047 (1) - make this end at 02:23:835 (also add a finish)
that should be it, nice work

alvisto's Hard
Jumps looked a bit weird, but i guess they are fine, nice diff

Hard
ewww, oh god, this diff is so nasty, eww, get it away, , , , :P j/k
00:39:051 (2) - this is illegal, hidden slider, i missed it on first try :(
00:40:060 (2) - ^
02:48:010 (6) - new combo here, or at 11 either one
that's all

nice dude
Topic Starter
jockeytiyan

EEeee wrote:

Hard
ewww, oh god, this diff is so nasty, eww, get it away, , , , :P j/k Just tell me if you don't like my diff. >.> j/k
00:39:051 (2) - this is illegal, hidden slider, i missed it on first try :( Fixed
00:40:060 (2) - ^ ^
02:48:010 (6) - new combo here, or at 11 either one ^
that's all

nice dude



osuplayer111 wrote:

[Hard]

00:39:051 (2) - Hidden slider. Fixed
00:40:060 (2) - ^ Fixed
02:24:010 (1,2,3,4,5) - Unexpected change of spacing. Fixed but retained a minor jump
02:27:092 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ ^
alvisto

Alice Margatroid wrote:

alvisto
02:17:563 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - They got me kinda confused.. I don't really get them but nevermind I suppose?

osuplayer111 wrote:

00:40:074 (6) - Partially offscreen.
02:17:056 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This change of spacing is really hard to read.
Fix the offscreen stuff.

The change of spacing is really intended, but since I see 2 objections now, I think it would be better if I change it. :3

Updated diff passed thru msn.
Topic Starter
jockeytiyan

Alice Margatroid wrote:

I'll try to do my best for my diff.. (btw i'm at about 20%, and it's more like an insane, as planned) :P
Hopefully, yours will be an awesome map. ;) Keep it carefully as planned, ok?
Teara
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: Eiko Shimamiya - Super Scription of Data (jockeytiyan) [Teara's Normal].osu
Kerensa
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Topic Starter
jockeytiyan
I don't want to change alvisto's BG. >.>

I've chosen that for him and FYI, it's one of the main points in the anime/manga/VN where I got the music from.

Though, thanks for the mod. :3
NoHitter
Overall
Crop the .mp3
Actually here's the one I made.
Tell me if you want me to do it again. (What specific time to crop it too)

Download: Super Scription of Data.mp3
Topic Starter
jockeytiyan

NoHItter wrote:

Overall
Crop the .mp3
Actually here's the one I made.
Tell me if you want me to do it again. (What specific time to crop it too)
Cropping the .mp3 = Remapping my own diff.

I won't risk such things. I'd rather be flamed by BAT on the face right now rather than not let my map get singled out.
Jinxy
[Teara]
Its on 1/6 but its snapped to 1/4. Change the divisor back to 1/4.

[alvisto]
I skipped this.

[Hard]
Nothing. Starred.
An-Don
yeah well its good >.>'
I was blind so i found nothing cause i could play all of them easily..
probably cause of the other mods.
wasn't much help since I'm only a beginner XD
star~
Alice
Download: Eiko Shimamiya - Super Scription of Data (jockeytiyan) [Alice's Insane].osu

Yuck.

Add this to folder:

(wp)
and SB:


Also SB could be not diff specified, so if you could diff specify it for my diff it would be better.. lol


Xgor
[Teara]
More Hitsounds please... (Everything after 00:43:047 (4) aren't hitsounded)

[Alvisto]
DSJCIABHJCBI THE SPACING IS JSIJDO!
Also plase lower the Overall difficulty allot and te HP drain a bit

[Hard]
Background :P
Well.... It don't have the perfect proportions and give me a black border :( (Resize it maybe)
The kiai time fountains feels a bit stupid at some parts and i recommend you remove it.

[Alice]
Lower the Overall difficulty GAAHHH!
01:36:038 (2) - I think this sliders like this is unrankible due to you can't see where it starts.

That's what i found when i skimmed through this map
*star*
Topic Starter
jockeytiyan

Xgor wrote:

[Hard]
Background :P
Well.... It don't have the perfect proportions and give me a black border :( (Resize it maybe)
The kiai time fountains feels a bit stupid at some parts and i recommend you remove it.
Could you please elaborate the parts? I don't feel like removing all of them. >.>
jmaeshawn
Hi :)

Here's the fixed background, like you asked for on IRC:)

Sorry I had to crop out Oishi :(



Hope it helps you :)
Xgor

jockeytiyan wrote:

Xgor wrote:

[Hard]
Background :P
Well.... It don't have the perfect proportions and give me a black border :( (Resize it maybe)
The kiai time fountains feels a bit stupid at some parts and i recommend you remove it.
Could you please elaborate the parts? I don't feel like removing all of them. >.>
Well there is a rule about kiai time
Do not overuse kiai time (general rule is one toggle per minute of playable length). Do not use kiai time just for fountains unless you are doing this extremely rarely. Kiai time is meant to accent chorus sections. You can toggle it off and on halfway through the chorus if that looks good, but using it constantly every 4-8 beats is just stupid.
The kiai on this diff is just for fountains and there is 9 kiai fountains on this difficulty.
I think that you should use the same kiai time placement as Alice's Insane.
UtsukimiJerry
Alice

Xgor wrote:

[Alice]
Lower the Overall difficulty GAAHHH!
01:36:038 (2) - I think this sliders like this is unrankible due to you can't see where it starts.
Seriously overall fitted the song I think >:
BTW
THERE'S A STORYBOARDED ARROW NORMALLY SO IT IS RANKABLE FFFFFF
GladiOol
Alice's Insane
  1. 00:41:835 (Timing Section) - I'm note sure if it's alloud to have so 'soft' hitsounds you can barely hear them.
  2. (nazi) 01:35:563 (10) - Move one grid level to the left (Grid level 3 / Most precise)
  3. 01:42:245 (Timing Section) - Same as 00:41:835
  4. (nazi) 01:53:835 (6) - Move one grid level up.
  5. 01:57:654 (x) - Extra note (?)
  6. (nazi) 02:18:381 (4) - Move one grid level down.
Alvisto's Hard
  1. 00:57:654 (1) - Remove new combo (?)
Hard
  1. Seems fine~
Teara's Normal
  1. Decrease overall difficulty by 2 o_o it's normal!
Starred~
Topic Starter
jockeytiyan
Darn...Gladi didn't find the BG sexy...>.>
ShaggoN
Blue: Sugestion. Not necessary, but should take good effects.
Green: Notification or cosmetic thing. May, but don't have to be changed.
Orange: Should be fixed.
Red: Have to be fixed.

[Teara's Normal]
  1. 01:00:381 (6) - This slider is ugly. I mean not curved well
[alvisto's Hard]
Perfect

[Hard]
  1. 03:14:835 (7) - VERY little detail. Move this note one grid down. 6-7 will then have the same distance like 5-6
Perfect

[Alice's Insane]
  1. 02:01:608 (1) - Why new combo?
Love this stage

Awesome beatmap Starrr'd :D
Topic Starter
jockeytiyan

ShaggoN wrote:

[Hard]
  1. 03:14:835 (7) - VERY little detail. Move this note one grid down. 6-7 will then have the same distance like 5-6
Perfect

Awesome beatmap Starrr'd :D

Checked:

Distance Snap on, Grid Snap on: No Problem

Distance Snap on, Grid Snap off: Moved the note one grid up.


So yeah, I'm not going to follow it. I'll just settle with DS + GS on.
BananasGoMoo
[Teara's Normal]
More like a hard. If you want to make it a normal, i'd lower the drain a little and the OD
02:19:744 (1) - should be moved 1/2 beat ahead and be reduced by 1/2 beat at the end
02:19:744 (x) - put a hitcircle where the spinner started

[alvisto's Hard]
Fine.

[Hard]
i think you have to shrink the BG a bit, because i had to set it manually, it wasnt working when i dl'd it.
other than that, fine.

[Alice's Insane]
Also fine.

+Star
jericho2442
you could cut the last min of the mp3 off if you wanted

[Normal]
01:29:017 (3) - new combo would be nice here

[Alice's Insane]
01:36:381 (2) - unrankable slider due to not knowing which way it will go
02:20:017 (2) - unrankable slider due to not knowing which way it will go

_____________________--
overall great beatmaps, well worth a star, great job :)
Teara
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: Eiko Shimamiya - Super Scription of Data (jockeytiyan) [Teara's Normal].osu
Alice

jericho2442 wrote:

[Alice's Insane]
01:36:381 (2) - unrankable slider due to not knowing which way it will go
02:20:017 (2) - unrankable slider due to not knowing which way it will go
I have a ranked beatmap with a slider like this.
As long as there's a storyboarded arrow, it's ok, come on T_T

Most of the things are fixed.Download: Eiko Shimamiya - Super Scription of Data (jockeytiyan) [Alice's Insane].osu
blissfulyoshi
You should probably put all of the usernames in every single tag slot to keep the maps linked together.
Remove "Higurashi" and "Rei" from the tags because they are already in the source.

Teara's Normal:
Combo mod: (I did not exactly understand how you added new combos, so I am making a lot of guesses in this mod and may have skipped over things)
00:52:199 (9) - new combo to follow lyrics

alvisto's Hard
y is this the only diff with a slider tick rate of 1? Please make it 2 like the other diffs

Normal mod:
01:00:926 (1) to 01:06:927 (6) - the repetition of this pattern many times got boring for me

Combo mod:
01:40:199 (5) - new combo to be consistent with 01:41:290 (1)

Timing section mod:
00:41:42 - there are two timing sections here, please remove 1
02:02:00 - make this timing section have the same hitsound volume as the previous one

Hard:
Normal mod:
01:36:108 - the ending of this section felt a little abrupt since you do not map the last word

Combo mod:
02:09:108 (1,2) - fits the lyrics better if you remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 2
02:10:744 (7) - new combo for the lyrics
03:18:654 (1,2) - fits the lyrics better if you remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 2

Alice's Insane
I don't see an arrow.png in the folder, so please do a full resubmit.

Normal mod:
01:53:835 (6) - stack on 4

Combo mod: (same concept as Teara's Normal)
00:47:699 (9,1) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 9 to fit the lyrics and music better
00:58:335 (1,2) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 2 to fit the lyrics better
01:19:745 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - feels better if you add new combos here like you did at 01:28:199 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4)
02:12:517 (7,1) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 7 to fit the lyrics better

=============
Nice map. Star.
anonymous_old
23:34 < jockeytiyan> 01:36:381 (2) -
23:34 < jockeytiyan> 02:20:017 (2) -
23:34 < jockeytiyan> these 2 sliders
23:34 < strager> uhh
23:34 < strager> Sorry but I cannot and will not support that type of slider.

Sorry, Alice~
alvisto

blissfulyoshi wrote:

alvisto's Hard
y is this the only diff with a slider tick rate of 1? Please make it 2 like the other diffs Imho, it just sounds not right to me. xD Hence, no change. :)

Normal mod:
01:00:926 (1) to 01:06:927 (6) - the repetition of this pattern many times got boring for me Revamped it. =D

Combo mod:
01:40:199 (5) - new combo to be consistent with 01:41:290 (1) Done.

Timing section mod:
00:41:42 - there are two timing sections here, please remove 1 Changed to make this timing section useful.
02:02:00 - make this timing section have the same hitsound volume as the previous one ^
Thanks for the mod guys. ^.^

Download: Eiko Shimamiya - Super Scription of Data (jockeytiyan) [alvisto's Hard].osu
Topic Starter
jockeytiyan

blissfulyoshi wrote:

alvisto's Hard
y is this the only diff with a slider tick rate of 1? Please make it 2 like the other diffs
Well, it was his choice to make the slider tick. And I also tried to check it with slider tick rate of 2. It sounded very awfully wrong, trust me, I wouldn't want this to get changed. :P

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Hard:
Normal mod:
01:36:108 - the ending of this section felt a little abrupt since you do not map the last word Added 2 notes after it. It still seems abrupt but it should make it lesser anti-climatic. And I didn't want to put a spinner at the end since I'm not mapping it with the lyrics.

Combo mod:
02:09:108 (1,2) - fits the lyrics better if you remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 2
02:10:744 (7) - new combo for the lyrics
03:18:654 (1,2) - fits the lyrics better if you remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 2
At first, it wasn't my intent to follow the lyrics, but your mod gave me a better idea to follow combos with the lyrics. Thanks. :3

strager wrote:

23:34 < jockeytiyan> 01:36:381 (2) -
23:34 < jockeytiyan> 02:20:017 (2) -
23:34 < jockeytiyan> these 2 sliders
23:34 < strager> uhh
23:34 < strager> Sorry but I cannot and will not support that type of slider.

Sorry, Alice~
uhmmm...yeah. The first part of this conversation was about me asking strager to SB your diff, Alice. So yeah, please forgive me if I can't SB because I really don't know how to.
Alice
Just ADD arrow.png in the folder, then tick the diff specify thing <_< and then fullsubmit
I already SBed it..
Also, I'll check mods later
Mashley
Only one difficulty is in the download. Do a full submit then contact me so I can mod.
Topic Starter
jockeytiyan

Agent Spin Here wrote:

Only one difficulty is in the download. Do a full submit then contact me so I can mod.
Did you confuse this with the "other" map? The thread says it has all the diffs and nobody has complained yet. :P
NoHitter
Add alvisto and Teara to the Tags since they contributed a guest diff.

Alice's Insane
Why do I see note and slider spam here?
You didn't see anything!

Anyway, try varying the sliders. Don't just stick with ) - shaped, and | - shaped sliders

01:36:861 (2) - IMO, slider is ugly...
02:20:017 (2) - ^
NoHitter
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: Super Scription of Data.mp3
Alice
Alice's Insane
Why do I see note and slider spam here? lolfunny, isn't every maps made of notes and sliders, and sometimes spinners? c'mon.
You didn't see anything!

Anyway, try varying the sliders. Don't just stick with ) - shaped, and | - shaped sliders 00:37:745, 01:15:381 lol zigzag, and, it's hard to vary sliders in such a "note and slider spam", inventing a new slider shape every milliseconds is not something easy~ ):

01:36:861 (2) - IMO, slider is ugly...
02:20:017 (2) - ^ Wait wasn't I supposed to vary the sliders?
No fixes here~
NoHitter
You could have made it look better...
DJPop
~Teara's Normal~
Add some Kiai times.
00:53:017 (11) - new combo
01:12:381 (1) - remove new combo
01:12:926 (2) - new combo

~alvisto's Hard~
No major issues.

~Hard~
01:17:290 (7) - new combo
02:24:108 (1,2,3,4,5) - whoa!! D:

~Alice's Insane~
Reduce overall levels, it's too high.
00:47:699 (9) - new combo
00:53:835 (7) - clap??
01:35:835 (11) - new combo
01:36:108 (1) - remove new combo
03:12:108 (2) - remove hitwhistle
03:29:563 (1) - remove new combo


+Star
GabrielRKF
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
vytalibus
I can't believe everyone let [alvisto's Hard]'s random spacing through. Jumps are way abused in this difficulty.

[Hard]

02:43:744 (1,2,3,4,5) - Quite a jumpy pattern.
02:48:108 (1,2,3,4) - ^

[Alice's Insane]

Holy crap very high overall. Lower this.

Third kiai section doesn't make sense. I suggest removing this.

01:36:381 (2) - Confusing slider in terms of where to go. Make the path clearer by moving the start point and end point away from each other, OR make a storyboarded warning like the one for 02:20:017 (2).
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