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BoA - MASAYUME CHASING [Taiko|Osu]

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xChippy
1,941 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
xChippy
Hinsvar

Hinsvar wrote:

Yo; modding here!

*Bolded = Unrankable or very, very strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems. Also note that hitsound suggestions on a diff may apply on similar parts of the song and the other diffs of the mapset.

>Easy
  1. 00:14:317 - Add a whistle? Seems to be fitting with the drum in the song. ok
  2. 00:15:480 (1,2) - If you look at this carefully, you can make (1) blanket (2) a little better. Move (2) to (182,314)? done
  3. 00:22:922 - I don't feel the need of the finish here. It doesn't follow anything in the song and it just feels quite intrusive. okay
  4. 00:29:201 - Same suggestion as 00:14:317. done
  5. 00:30:364 (1) - And the same as 00:22:922. nope this one here fits imo, aswell cuz of the introduction of a new section in the song
  6. 00:28:503 (3,1,2,3) - With how you place 00:31:294 (3), the flow here becomes quite weird. Try something like donethis?
  7. 00:31:294 (3,4,5) - Uh, I think the spacing here is a little inconsistent, but it's still quite noticeable. done
  8. 00:37:806 (1,2) - Select the two of them then move to (210,343)? Gives a better flow from 00:35:945 (2). done
  9. 00:48:038 (4) - Move to (244,321) for, again, a better flow from 00:47:108 (3)? 00:47:108 (3,1) very slightly touch each other and it's briefly visible while playing btw. ok fxed
  10. 00:49:899 (2,3) - More spacing inconsistency? done
  11. 01:03:852 (1,3) - It's weird to see a slider's tail only partially overlapped by another slider's body. Try to move (1) to (110,248). I suppose you mean move (3) xD and yea fixed
  12. 01:14:085 - What's with the clap here? I think this is a bit too much. imo it fits so prefer to keep as is, as the stream in the music indicates this
>Insane
  1. 00:08:038 (1,2,3,4) - For some reason, I found this pattern to be weird. Probably because of its odd flow or something. Try something like this? hmm not sure about this tho, in-game this flows smoothly, well atleast for me o-o keeping it for now
Well yeah... not much to be said! This map is quite cool~

Good luck on the way 8-)

_Stan

_Stan wrote:

Hi, from my queue

[Easy]
00:37:806 (1,2) - blanket done
I think EZ is ok~

[Insane]
00:37:341 (5,6,1) - make slider's snap same with the snap between 5 & 6 uuuh ok I guess
01:09:434 (1,2) - aligning nah prefer it like this

your map is great. GOOD LUCK! :) :)

Thanks for modding both of you~~!!
Ujimatsu Chiya
2,480 posts
Joined December 2013
Ujimatsu Chiya
From my queues. https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/3196017#p3196017

Red : Must Fix. ( Unranked )
Blue : I Recommendation it.
Black : My personal opinion.
[General]
  1. cheak Easy and normal , cheak widescreen support. match other diffs please.
  2. Tittle change please. " 正夢 CHASING " http://puu.sh/9S8ut/0b97e12bfe.png
  3. BoA is Korean singer. how about change Singer's name to " 보아 " http://puu.sh/9Sbad/5fc7395f8a.png
    But It is a personal opinion. (Korea!!)
  4. This song is not yet a full album, So TV Size is not included in.
    Because the full album yet know whether this is due to how the released. or add tag (TV Size).
[Insane]
  1. 00:14:550 (1,2) - Follow us do this change better.
    SPOILER
  2. 00:22:457 (3) - overlap with 00:21:759 (2) tail.
  3. 00:26:876 (2,3) - how about this?
    SPOILER
  4. 00:46:178 (3) - ctrl+G
  5. 00:53:620 (3) - ^
  6. 01:13:155 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Start circle stream ? like ctrl + G?

    ♡
[Lanturn's Hard]
  1. 00:02:457 (1,1) - Would not it be nice if the same shape? // this 00:00:597 (1) - and 00:04:317 (1) -
  2. 00:18:271 (4,5) - How about this? and overlap (5) circle in (4) slider's head.
    SPOILER
  3. 00:44:318 (6,7,8,9) - how about this?
    SPOILER
  4. 00:46:643 (4) - ^
    SPOILER
  5. 00:51:062 (2) - ctrl + G , more better following.
  6. 00:53:620 (3) - Blank (4) circle
  7. 00:55:945 (5) - Would more comfortable to follow?
    SPOILER
[Xinely's Normal]
  1. 00:21:062 (3) - remove tail hitsound (Whistle)
  2. 00:37:109 (6) - overlap (4) circle.
  3. 00:43:387 - Just my opinion , How about add circle? Put the drum is so strong that I think it is more natural than I perceive it. :lol:
  4. 01:17:574 (1,2,3) - move cnter !!!!
[Easy]
  1. No problem for me. :D
    HR,DT,FL

    o3o
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Cool song and Nice mapset it is 8-)

Please go to rank Baka xChippy. <3
I love your map. >v<

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Lanturn
osu! Alumni
3,912 posts
Joined March 2012
Lanturn

eINess wrote:

[General]
  1. Tittle change please. " 正夢 CHASING " http://puu.sh/9S8ut/0b97e12bfe.png | I'm not sure on this. every source I've looked at (VGMDB, Official BoA site, and the CD covers. It is never referred as 正夢 over MASAYUME. 正夢 would be good for a tag as well.
  2. BoA is Korean singer. how about change Singer's name to " 보아 " http://puu.sh/9Sbad/5fc7395f8a.png | This is another thing I'm not so sure of as well. BoA is known as BoA everywhere, instead of 보아. Her Korean site even uses BoA. This would be another good tag. "Kwon Boa (Korean: 권보아, Chinese: 權寶兒/权宝儿, Japanese: クォン·ボア, born November 5, 1986),[2] commonly stylized and known by her stage name BoA,[3] which is a backronym for Beat of Angel,[citation needed] is a South Korean singer and actress active in South Korea, Japan, and the United States.[4][5][6] She is referred to as the Queen of Korean Pop.[6][7][8]" - Wikipedia <-- lots of good tags ;)
    But It is a personal opinion. (Korea!!)
  3. This song is not yet a full album, So TV Size is not included in. I still haven't found a source for TV Size either, so we have to remove it for now.
    Because the full album yet know whether this is due to how the released. or add tag (TV Size).
Sources I used for above:
http://vgmdb.net/album/45920
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/BoA
http://avex.jp/boa/
http://avex.jp/boa/discography/ <-- literally 4 CDs for this song lol.


Mod response
[Lanturn's Hard]
  1. 00:02:457 (1,1) - Would not it be nice if the same shape? // this 00:00:597 (1) - and 00:04:317 (1) - I have this to mix well with 00:06:178 (1) - (Curve Straight Curve Straight (with reverses on the 2nd set))
  2. 00:18:271 (4,5) - How about this? and overlap (5) circle in (4) slider's head. I actually prefer the jump how it is, and I also am not a fan of slider stacking on notes directly after the slider back on its head.
  3. 00:44:318 (6,7,8,9) - how about this? Ah, I think the current pattern plays nicely and gives the song a unique touch.
  4. 00:46:643 (4) - ^ Nice. changed this.
  5. 00:51:062 (2) - ctrl + G , more better following. I supposed. Changed.
  6. 00:53:620 (3) - Blank (4) circle Not sure what you mean here. If you mean make the hitsound on (4) a blank, then I don't want to because it maintains consistency with the other similar parts in the song.
  7. 00:55:945 (5) - Would more comfortable to follow? Good stuff, I changed this and also edited some notes around this to make it even more comfortable. thanks o/

Thanks for the mod!

SPOILER
osu file format v13

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PreviewTime: 44201
Countdown: 0
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[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
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Title:MASAYUME CHASING (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:MASAYUME CHASING (TV Size)
Artist:BoA
ArtistUnicode:BoA
Creator:xChippy
Version:Lanturn's Hard
Source:Fairy Tail
Tags:opening CXu Lanturn Xinely フェアリーテイル
BeatmapID:426548
BeatmapSetID:176805

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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
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xChippy
1,941 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
xChippy

eINess wrote:

From my queues. p/3196017#p3196017

Red : Must Fix. ( Unranked )
Blue : I Recommendation it.
Black : My personal opinion.
[General]
  1. cheak Easy and normal , cheak widescreen support. match other diffs please.
  2. Tittle change please. " 正夢 CHASING " http://puu.sh/9S8ut/0b97e12bfe.png
  3. BoA is Korean singer. how about change Singer's name to " 보아 " http://puu.sh/9Sbad/5fc7395f8a.png
    But It is a personal opinion. (Korea!!)
  4. This song is not yet a full album, So TV Size is not included in.
    Because the full album yet know whether this is due to how the released. or add tag (TV Size).
Hmmm See Lanturns post XD

[Insane]
  1. 00:14:550 (1,2) - Follow us do this change better. did something similiar
    SPOILER
  2. 00:22:457 (3) - overlap with 00:21:759 (2) tail. doesnt really look neat to me :/ so nope
  3. 00:26:876 (2,3) - how about this? ok
    SPOILER
  4. 00:46:178 (3) - ctrl+G ok
  5. 00:53:620 (3) - ^ ok
  6. 01:13:155 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Start circle stream ? like ctrl + G? prefer to start slider ;w;

    ♡
    wwwww
[Easy]
  1. No problem for me. :D
    HR,DT,FL

    o3o
    =w=b
=====================================================================


Cool song and Nice mapset it is 8-)

Please go to rank Baka xChippy. <3
I love your map. >v<

.
Thank you for modding! srry for being late OAO.
Rare
1,118 posts
Joined August 2010
Rare
from my modding queue
sry for the delay.

[Easy]
00:11:759 (1) - pref change to SC:2 whistle.
00:28:503 (3) - pref same grid up to end point. http://puu.sh/aklqk.jpg
01:05:713 (3) - i wonder hard to see repeat point for beginner.

[Xinely]
00:07:341 (3) - start at 00:07:573 - here. i like this pattern.

[Lanturn]
00:30:131 (8) - normal clap isn't fit to music. remove clap to head.
01:07:108 (5,6,7,8,1) - not fit to music 5 stream. pref triplets.

[Insane]
00:06:876 (4) - end this at 00:07:341 - . because 1/4 is not fit to music.


sinch playing
[Easy]
nothing to say.

[Xinely's Normal]
nothing to say.

[Lanturn's Hard]
00:33:155 (3,1) - just a little hard to read for Hard player

[Insane]
00:06:876 (4) - imo this slider should end at 00:07:341 for comfortable play
00:15:945 (2) - hard to read for 1st play
00:22:457 (3) - ^
00:30:829 (2) - ^
00:29:434 (1,2) - hard to read.
00:58:503 (2) - ^
00:44:783 (5) - this distance too hard
00:58:271 (1) - ^
00:59:666 (1) - ^
00:59:666 (1,2,3,4) - i dont suppose to say its hard, but this sliders should be more fine.
Lanturn
osu! Alumni
3,912 posts
Joined March 2012
Lanturn

Rare wrote:

00:30:131 (8) - normal clap isn't fit to music. remove clap to head.
01:07:108 (5,6,7,8,1) - not fit to music 5 stream. pref triplets.
Fixed both of these. Though removed the normal hit on the first one

Rare wrote:

00:33:155 (3,1) - just a little hard to read for Hard player
I don't think there is a problem with this. If people playing a hard difficulty can't read this then they shouldn't be playing hards in the first place.

SPOILER
osu file format v13

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 44201
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:MASAYUME CHASING
TitleUnicode:MASAYUME CHASING
Artist:BoA
ArtistUnicode:BoA
Creator:xChippy
Version:Lanturn's Hard
Source:Fairy Tail
Tags:opening CXu Lanturn Xinely フェアリーテイル 보아 Tv Size 正夢
BeatmapID:426548
BeatmapSetID:176805

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

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Thanks for the mod!
xChippy
1,941 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
xChippy

Rare wrote:

from my modding queue
sry for the delay.

[Easy]
00:11:759 (1) - pref change to SC:2 whistle. done
00:28:503 (3) - pref same grid up to end point. http://puu.sh/aklqk.jpg done
01:05:713 (3) - i wonder hard to see repeat point for beginner. I'll ask some more opinions but it should be fine considering the gap

[Insane]
00:06:876 (4) - end this at 00:07:341 - . because 1/4 is not fit to music. done

sinch playing
[Easy]
nothing to say.

[Insane]
00:06:876 (4) - imo this slider should end at 00:07:341 for comfortable play done
00:15:945 (2) - hard to read for 1st play
00:22:457 (3) - ^
00:30:829 (2) - ^
00:29:434 (1,2) - hard to read.
00:58:503 (2) - ^
00:44:783 (5) - this distance too hard
00:58:271 (1) - ^
00:59:666 (1) - ^
00:59:666 (1,2,3,4) - i dont suppose to say its hard, but this sliders should be more fine.
Sorry but I have to disagree with the rest here. The AR makes those gaps very easy to read and those distances are pretty much nothing as the bpm is kind of low aswell.
Thanks for modding!!
Hollow Wings
1,514 posts
Joined July 2010
Hollow Wings
from Scorpiour's Modding Queue

Insane

  1. 00:14:783 i highly recommend u add a note here, free to set its position. or, spread 00:14:550 (1,2) - with larger ds, the drum beats here express various rhythm style, make sure the pattern easy to read rather than snap ds
  2. 01:12:690 (6) - larger ds, change its shape a bit maybe
  3. 01:13:387 (2) - maybe ctrl+g
  4. 01:16:876 (1,2,3,4) - why not trapezoid here? like 01:20:596 (1,2,3,4) - did? lol
  5. generally good thou

Lanturn's Hard

  1. 00:24:550 (4,4) - try to stack them with blanket kept?
  2. 00:35:015 (3,4) - blanket?

Xinely's Normal

  1. 00:35:713 (4,6) - stack?

Easy

  1. 00:48:969 (1,2) - blanket each other?
  2. 01:01:992 (4,5) - avoid this overlap
a star for those rhythm set

good luck
Lanturn
osu! Alumni
3,912 posts
Joined March 2012
Lanturn
Thanks Hollow Wings. I fixed both.

I managed to find a way to stack the first mod like prevoius modders have been asking so that's nice to have that fixed. Also nice idea for the second one.

SPOILER
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xChippy
1,941 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
xChippy

Hollow Wings wrote:

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  1. 00:14:783 i highly recommend u add a note here, free to set its position. or, spread 00:14:550 (1,2) - with larger ds, the drum beats here express various rhythm style, make sure the pattern easy to read rather than snap ds went with larger DS
  2. 01:12:690 (6) - larger ds, change its shape a bit maybe done
  3. 01:13:387 (2) - maybe ctrl+g prefer the current as it flows better to (3) :3
  4. 01:16:876 (1,2,3,4) - why not trapezoid here? like 01:20:596 (1,2,3,4) - did? lol cuz Heart xD
  5. generally good thou

Easy

  1. 00:48:969 (1,2) - blanket each other? yep
  2. 01:01:992 (4,5) - avoid this overlap done
a star for those rhythm set

good luck
Srry for the late reply!
Thanks for modding! 8-)
Merkou
2 posts
Joined April 2013
Merkou
Thanks for mapping this song!
I love the background.
mingmichael
1,720 posts
Joined May 2012
mingmichael
hihii

Red ~> unrakable issue, must be changed
Blue ~> highly suggested, consider to use it
Black ~> suggestion, just free to choose it


====================


[ Muzukashii]

General
☞ okay!

Notes Structure
☞ okay!

Notes
• change 00:08:038 - to be kat. well i know that you want to follow the drum hit with don, don't you? yeah it's nice, but after i consider again 00:08:038 - will be much better with a kat because this kat will follow the drum sound like you did on 00:07:806 - (the drum comes out there and you put kat there because of the ooo-triplet) and i think you did it because you want to follow the piano sounds. so that's why because you have put kat for that drum hit, it'll be better to put it too on 00:08:038 - . and the second, this kat will make the consistent pattern. look this

it's from 00:08:038 - until 00:12:690 -

• ofc it will keep the o o o o o there that you used and it'll be better and more interesting too IMO

• delete 00:30:596 - . well i deleted this to give a break after the finisher which comes out on 00:30:364 - and a break after the 1/2 notes and triplets+doublets note from 00:28:503 -
actually there isn't any sounds come out on 00:30:596 - and it's not really necessary to be added a note. same like 00:15:713 - that you didn't put any notes on there

• move 00:32:457 - to 00:31:992 -. it will follow the vocal clearly there

• move 00:39:899 - to 00:39:434 - . same reason like above ^

• delete 00:45:480 - . i deleted this to give a little break after the 1/2 patterns which are added by triplets and doublets. and i deleted this to make the vocal (which is "chasing") clearly by using single notes only. ofc this's more affective and more interesting too

• move 00:53:852 - to 00:54:783 - . i moved this to make the vocals clearly on 00:52:690 - ; 00:53:155 - and 00:53:620 - with the single notes. same like the previous reason like above actually becoz actually they have a same part of song

• delete 00:59:783 - and change 00:59:899 - to be don. well i know that you want to add a triplet there and it flows nice too~ but after i consider again, this triplet is quite hard because the next notes after it are finisher+doublets and some 1/2 notes on the red strikes. probably this pattern will confusing the taiko players. so that's why i just delete 00:59:783 - so the player can be a bit relax before the more complicated pattern comes out

• 01:07:224 - and 01:07:341 - same like above ^

• same on 01:13:503 - . delete it and change 01:13:387 - to be don and 01:13:852 - to be kat. i deleted it because it's quite confusing again for having triplet+5-plets from 01:13:155 - until end. so i delete the triplet to keep the 5-plets on the last part because the last 5-plets well to follow the last part of the song, so it'll be better to keep it. and then i change 01:13:387 - to be don and 01:13:852 - to be kat to keep the vocal pattern which you used. for the example like 00:58:271 - ~ 00:58:969 -


====================


[ Oni]

General
☞ okay!

Notes Structure
☞ there are some parts which consist streams a bit hard and it will make the spread diff between Muzu~Oni will be bad a bit. the suggestions are in the Notes box

☞ ah about the SV changes. some of the are too low and too hard to be played by the non-mod taiko players. try these :
00:00:597 - 0.80x
00:07:573 - 0.90x
00:41:992 - 0.90x
01:16:876 - 0.80x
00:45:248 - and 00:52:690 - 1.15x

Notes
• don on 00:33:155 - . beside for the low vocal (actually the vocal has dropped a bit and become a bit lower than 00:32:690 - ), this don will keep your o o o o patterns on 1/1 from 00:30:364 - . you can look this for the pattern that i mean :

it's from 00:30:364 - until 00:35:015 - . of course this pattern is more interesting to be played because it sounds like we play the beat of the drum while playing

• don on 00:35:713 - for the dropping vocal sound again. and also this will give a better pattern too which is o o o o o o o

• same on 00:40:596 - . change it to be don

• from 00:56:410 - until 01:00:131 - the patterns are actually hard and if we compare with the muzu diff, the spread diff isn't really well. okay look these


Oni~Muzukashii

Muzukashii just contains a simple pattern of 1/2 and with one triplet there (it'll not a triplet if chippy uses my mod). but on your Oni contains triplets and a long 1/2 streams. well i know that you want to follow the instruments and actually it's nice~ but after considering again for the spread diff, this should simplify a bit. well i have some suggestions below to simplify it a bit :
1. delete 00:57:224 - . actually it will be same like 00:48:969 - ~ 00:49:899 -
2. change 00:57:573 - to be don. but it's up to you on here because you actually want to follow the vocal with kat, don't you? but i would prefer with don to make the pattern a well (same like 00:48:969 - ~ 00:50:364 - )
3. delete 00:58:387 - and change 00:58:503 - ~ 00:58:736 - to be ooo-triplet
4. delete 00:58:852 - and 00:59:085 - , and change 00:58:969 - to be don (for the dropping vocal and it becomes lower than the previous notes)
5. change 00:59:201 - to be kat
6. delete 00:59:783 - and 01:00:015 -
7. you can add a finisher on 01:00:131 - to emphasize the vocal~ but it's up to you
you can look this if you're confused with the explanations above

• a finisher on 01:02:922 - . well yah we know that the finisher on the last pattern of 1/4 is allowed now. but i don't really recommend to use it on here because it's just two 1/4 notes actually. and even the note before the finisher comes has a different note from the finisher, it will be a bit hard to be played (even the BPM is 129). consider for the taiko players who will play your diff if they play with DT. ofc this oO pattern will be a bit confusing for them
just keep the finisher on 01:03:387 - is alright for the last "Hey Hey"

• same like above 01:10:364 - ^

• same again on the last part (01:12:922 - ~ end) for the stream. yah i know you want to follow the instruments, but consider again for this long stream if we compare with the Muzu for the spread diff. okay again i have some suggestions here :

actually the pattern is same like 00:58:038 - ~ 01:00:131 - because of the same vocals too. so why don't use a same pattern? :P actually it's interesting pattern

• you can add a finisher on 01:15:015 - to emphasize the last vocal


====================


that's all from me. actually Muzukashii is already well but the Oni a bit improvement for the long stream. remember for having a good spread diff between the taikos. it's the most important.
call me back if you have done it :P
xChippy
1,941 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
xChippy

mingmichael wrote:

hihii

Red ~> unrakable issue, must be changed
Blue ~> highly suggested, consider to use it
Black ~> suggestion, just free to choose it


====================


[ Muzukashii]

General
☞ okay!

Notes Structure
☞ okay!

Notes
• change 00:08:038 - to be kat. well i know that you want to follow the drum hit with don, don't you? yeah it's nice, but after i consider again 00:08:038 - will be much better with a kat because this kat will follow the drum sound like you did on 00:07:806 - (the drum comes out there and you put kat there because of the ooo-triplet) and i think you did it because you want to follow the piano sounds. so that's why because you have put kat for that drum hit, it'll be better to put it too on 00:08:038 - . and the second, this kat will make the consistent pattern. look this

it's from 00:08:038 - until 00:12:690 - fixed~

• ofc it will keep the o o o o o there that you used and it'll be better and more interesting too IMO

• delete 00:30:596 - . well i deleted this to give a break after the finisher which comes out on 00:30:364 - and a break after the 1/2 notes and triplets+doublets note from 00:28:503 -
actually there isn't any sounds come out on 00:30:596 - and it's not really necessary to be added a note. same like 00:15:713 - that you didn't put any notes on there fixed

• move 00:32:457 - to 00:31:992 -. it will follow the vocal clearly there done

• move 00:39:899 - to 00:39:434 - . same reason like above ^ done

• delete 00:45:480 - . i deleted this to give a little break after the 1/2 patterns which are added by triplets and doublets. and i deleted this to make the vocal (which is "chasing") clearly by using single notes only. ofc this's more affective and more interesting too done

• move 00:53:852 - to 00:54:783 - . i moved this to make the vocals clearly on 00:52:690 - ; 00:53:155 - and 00:53:620 - with the single notes. same like the previous reason like above actually becoz actually they have a same part of song done

• delete 00:59:783 - and change 00:59:899 - to be don. well i know that you want to add a triplet there and it flows nice too~ but after i consider again, this triplet is quite hard because the next notes after it are finisher+doublets and some 1/2 notes on the red strikes. probably this pattern will confusing the taiko players. so that's why i just delete 00:59:783 - so the player can be a bit relax before the more complicated pattern comes out
I deleted both instead, so it will have little pause which fit with vocal owo

• 01:07:224 - and 01:07:341 - same like above ^ same

• same on 01:13:503 - . delete it and change 01:13:387 - to be don and 01:13:852 - to be kat. i deleted it because it's quite confusing again for having triplet+5-plets from 01:13:155 - until end. so i delete the triplet to keep the 5-plets on the last part because the last 5-plets well to follow the last part of the song, so it'll be better to keep it. and then i change 01:13:387 - to be don and 01:13:852 - to be kat to keep the vocal pattern which you used. for the example like 00:58:271 - ~ 00:58:969 - done


====================

that's all from me. actually Muzukashii is already well but the Oni a bit improvement for the long stream. remember for having a good spread diff between the taikos. it's the most important.
call me back if you have done it :P
Thanks Ming~~!! 8-)
CXu
osu! Alumni
3,558 posts
Joined March 2009
CXu

mingmichael wrote:

[ Oni]

General
☞ okay!

Notes Structure
☞ there are some parts which consist streams a bit hard and it will make the spread diff between Muzu~Oni will be bad a bit. the suggestions are in the Notes box

☞ ah about the SV changes. some of the are too low and too hard to be played by the non-mod taiko players. try these :
00:00:597 - 0.80x
00:07:573 - 0.90x
00:41:992 - 0.90x
01:16:876 - 0.80x
00:45:248 - and 00:52:690 - 1.15x

Notes
• don on 00:33:155 - . beside for the low vocal (actually the vocal has dropped a bit and become a bit lower than 00:32:690 - ), this don will keep your o o o o patterns on 1/1 from 00:30:364 - . you can look this for the pattern that i mean :

it's from 00:30:364 - until 00:35:015 - . of course this pattern is more interesting to be played because it sounds like we play the beat of the drum while playing

• don on 00:35:713 - for the dropping vocal sound again. and also this will give a better pattern too which is o o o o o o o

• same on 00:40:596 - . change it to be don

• from 00:56:410 - until 01:00:131 - the patterns are actually hard and if we compare with the muzu diff, the spread diff isn't really well. okay look these


Oni~Muzukashii

Muzukashii just contains a simple pattern of 1/2 and with one triplet there (it'll not a triplet if chippy uses my mod). but on your Oni contains triplets and a long 1/2 streams. well i know that you want to follow the instruments and actually it's nice~ but after considering again for the spread diff, this should simplify a bit. well i have some suggestions below to simplify it a bit :
1. delete 00:57:224 - . actually it will be same like 00:48:969 - ~ 00:49:899 -
2. change 00:57:573 - to be don. but it's up to you on here because you actually want to follow the vocal with kat, don't you? but i would prefer with don to make the pattern a well (same like 00:48:969 - ~ 00:50:364 - )
3. delete 00:58:387 - and change 00:58:503 - ~ 00:58:736 - to be ooo-triplet
4. delete 00:58:852 - and 00:59:085 - , and change 00:58:969 - to be don (for the dropping vocal and it becomes lower than the previous notes)
5. change 00:59:201 - to be kat
6. delete 00:59:783 - and 01:00:015 -
7. you can add a finisher on 01:00:131 - to emphasize the vocal~ but it's up to you
you can look this if you're confused with the explanations above

• a finisher on 01:02:922 - . well yah we know that the finisher on the last pattern of 1/4 is allowed now. but i don't really recommend to use it on here because it's just two 1/4 notes actually. and even the note before the finisher comes has a different note from the finisher, it will be a bit hard to be played (even the BPM is 129). consider for the taiko players who will play your diff if they play with DT. ofc this oO pattern will be a bit confusing for them
just keep the finisher on 01:03:387 - is alright for the last "Hey Hey"

• same like above 01:10:364 - ^

• same again on the last part (01:12:922 - ~ end) for the stream. yah i know you want to follow the instruments, but consider again for this long stream if we compare with the Muzu for the spread diff. okay again i have some suggestions here :

actually the pattern is same like 00:58:038 - ~ 01:00:131 - because of the same vocals too. so why don't use a same pattern? :P actually it's interesting pattern

• you can add a finisher on 01:15:015 - to emphasize the last vocal
- I'd like to keep these the finishers during kiai at the same speed as the sped-up section later during the kiai, so keeping those at 1.20x. Changed the others.

- For the stream, I'm not really sure I want to change it or not. It just feels wrong to simplify it, especially considering it is the point where the chorus reaches a kind of peak in intensity, with the first stream as a buildup to that, so it makes sense to me to keep the stream, and have the next section of the kiai harder than the first (well atleast doubles and quadruples are harder in my experience). Obviously, I can't do anything about the difficulty in Muzu, and it's probably good not being too hard, but similarily I think simplifying it takes away some of that feeling, atleast for me. Maybe it's not that common in taikomapping (I haven't really done that much taiko), but having harder than the rest sections in std is pretty common from my experience. Anyhow, if it's a really big problem, I'll fiddle with it, but if possible, I'd like to keep the streams for the reason stated above.

- For the Finishers, I don't think cathering to DT should be an issue. The map should be played with no mod, and any extra mods a player decides to add is their own choice basically. As for finishers in general, I personally have never had a problem with playing them, although I'm still fairly new to taiko.
Also both the "Oh" and "Hey Hey" has that echo-like sound to it, and personally I like the consistency. Again, if it's a big problem, I'll change it, but if possible, I'd like to keep them.

- Fixed everything else.

====================


that's all from me. actually Muzukashii is already well but the Oni a bit improvement for the long stream. remember for having a good spread diff between the taikos. it's the most important.
call me back if you have done it :P
Thanks again!

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mingmichael
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mingmichael
i've discussed with another BAT about the finisher problem



so even it's kkkD, it should be kkkd or k kd without the finisher 01:02:922 - ; 01:10:364 -
CXu
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CXu

Did I miss something?
mingmichael
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mingmichael

CXu wrote:


Did I miss something?
yeah it's right for the rule for the stream, but it must contain 8 or more notes with easy patterns for the stream. for the example ooooooooO , ooooooooO , ooooooooO. now yours are doublet on 01:02:806 (224,225) - and 4-plets on 01:10:016 (254,255,256,257) - . yeah even the finisher has an opposite color of the previous notes, but it is not qualify. and yours isn't a stream actually, it's just a 4-plets on 01:10:016 (254,255,256,257) -
CXu
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CXu
Well, fine I'll change it. That should be explicitly stated in the rules though, as even 3 notes https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Stream classifies as a stream according to the wiki, and most people I know consider streams to be notes of length 3 or more (so arguably the doubles aren't allowed with the current wording either, but eh I didn't really think much about it.)


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mingmichael
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Joined May 2012
mingmichael
kay here you go

;)
xChippy
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Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
xChippy
Thanks ming!! 8-)
Krisom
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Joined April 2009
Krisom
Let's take a look at this ok?

General
Why not add some audo lead in? Something around 1000 should be fine, just manually edit the .osu file.
Can you please link me to a source that says that this should not be TV Size? Because if that's the case,I'll have to call the cops for something.

Insane
In it's current state, I can't pass this. Take this in mind according to my bubbling criteria. (however, I found this to be because of the high HP rather than the actual diff of the set)
I feel AR 8,7 is too much for this, specially in the slow part at the start.
HP drain also feels higher than what it should, take in mind that you have a very slow part at the start.
00:30:364 (1,2,3,4,1) - I found this jump (3,4,1) hard to read due to the fact that (1,2,3) is spaced so closely, and then (3,4) is spaced normally and you go BAM jump into (1) (which is partially hidden under (3)). You might benefit from stacking (4), making (1) nor be hidden under (3)'s body or remove the jump. Your choice ~
00:58:271 (1,2,3,4) - I have never been a fan of these "2014 1/4 sliders". You kids nowdays and your silly techniques~. Anyway, I found this to be a very mean spike on the difficulty of the map, considering that up until this point not many Insane patterns have been introduced.
00:59:201 (1,2,3,4) - This spacing right after such a wide spacing in the previous combo plays counterintuitively, since there's no musical cue whatsoever that makes you think you should slow down, if anything, the music is actually becoming more loud.
00:59:666 (1,2,3,4) - I am quite sure that this place is actually in 1/6 rather than 1/8. If you add a softwhistle (not a custom one) to these sliders is quite easy to hear that, actually. Why not try this?
01:00:480 (2,3) - I found this rhythm easier to read when you add a non-custom whistle (I like the normal one, but soft is ok too) on (2)'s and (3)'s sliderstart.
01:02:341 (3,4) - 01:04:201 (2,3) - 01:07:922 (2,3) - 01:09:783 (2,3) - ^same
01:02:922 (5,6) - These shouldn't last 3/4. There's nothing in the music either at 01:03:271 - nor at 01:03:736 - . You can benefit way more from the music if you make these 1/2 long and make them a slider-mirror jump or something. Oh, and add finishes (soft) OR whistles (normal) to each start to match the "Hey"'s in the music.
01:05:248 (6) - Something else should be added to the sliderstart to emphasise the "Ohhh" at (6)'s start.
01:05:713 (1,2,3) - No. Make the spacing even. There's no musical cue for (1,2) having a wider spacing than (2,3). Heck, you want something pretty? Take (2), stack under (1), rotate 120 degrees. Take (3), stack under (2), rotate 120 degrees.BAM TRIANGLE JUMP WITH EVEN SPACING YOU DON'T EVEN HAVE TO MODIFY THE NEXT PATTERN WHAT IS THIS MAGIC?
01:08:969 (6,1) - This could look and flow much better if you made it follow the flow of (6).
You alredy have a lot of flor-cutting patterns near this section.
01:10:364 (4,5) - Same as 01:02:922 (5,6)
01:11:759 (3) - This needs something to emphasise the "HEY" in the backgound. A finish, a whistle, I duuno, the clap doesnt seems enough to me.
01:13:155 (1,2,3,4) - I guess that this is ok unlike the previous one I mentioned given the fact that it's so close to the end of the map and you have alredy introduced the player to other hard patterns.

This was nice.

Hard
*Try to search for a place where to add a spinner please. You could even add one at 01:21:527 - up to 01:28:038 - to map the fade out (If you do this, try to convince the other mappers to do the same)
00:14:317 (5,6,7) - Remember, this is the hard diff, try to avoid having such spikes in the spacing. At least add a NC in (6) to mark the jump. Reduce this if you can too. (you'll notice that I won't mention this for 00:29:201 (5,6,7) - , that's because the whole combo has that spacing).
00:33:155 (3,1) - Don't do antijumps in the hard diff please, speacially if there's no musical cue for one (there is none in this place). You added a circle at 00:31:992 (4) - , so this makes you think that (1) will follow that (4)'s rhythm. If you want to make the cursor stop due to the vocals, a stack would be a much better option.
01:01:527 (5) - 01:02:923 (4,5) - All these "Oh!" and "Hey Hey" feel like they are lacking something hitsoundwise to give them more emphasis. Check my suggestions for Insane. (I won't mention them again, you can pick these up)

This was a very nice diff. Good job!

Normal
Please make the kiais even between difficulties. There's no change in the rhythm you're mapping to make this differently to the other diffs.
01:01:527 (4) - 01:02:923 (6) - Check what I mentioned on Hard an Insane about these "Oh!"s and "Hey Hey!"s, I think adding louder hitsounds (finishes-normal whistles) gives this more power :P
01:15:248 (1,1) - This is too close for the normal. Also, take in mind that you make the player click on an offbeat after a spinner. That's kind of hard for the normal difficulty players. Why not do a pretty slider instead of the spinner? The sliderticks will help the player understand where to click next.
01:21:527 (1) - Add more timing sections to make the fadeout gradual, not so sudden.

This difficulty was nice. I think you could get rid of some slider overlaps like 00:54:318 (5,6) - , they dont play nice on slow SVs. Your choice though. (say "your choice" to a mapper and you'll get a "no" 85% of the time, hehe :P)

Easy
01:15:015 (1,1) - Too close after the spinner for an easy. https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Easy
Check my suggestions for the "Oh"! and "Hey Hey"! of the chorus on the other diffs :P

There's nothing wrong with this diff. Well, except for the spinner being to close to another object :'(

Good luck, i hope this mod helps the next BAT and helps your map go easely through the qualify wihout any unrank :)
Lanturn
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Lanturn
Krisom

Krisom wrote:

Hard
*Try to search for a place where to add a spinner please. You could even add one at 01:21:527 - up to 01:28:038 - to map the fade out (If you do this, try to convince the other mappers to do the same) I copied the spinner from insane. It seems like the best spot to have one.
00:14:317 (5,6,7) - Remember, this is the hard diff, try to avoid having such spikes in the spacing. At least add a NC in (6) to mark the jump. Reduce this if you can too. (you'll notice that I won't mention this for 00:29:201 (5,6,7) - , that's because the whole combo has that spacing). I adjusted the spacing to be more consistent like 29 seconds.
00:33:155 (3,1) - Don't do antijumps in the hard diff please, speacially if there's no musical cue for one (there is none in this place). You added a circle at 00:31:992 (4) - , so this makes you think that (1) will follow that (4)'s rhythm. If you want to make the cursor stop due to the vocals, a stack would be a much better option. A lot of people have commented on this already, so I'm going to change this. I would love to keep the 1/1 spacing, so I rearranged some notes. This should be much more readable now.
01:01:527 (5) - 01:02:923 (4,5) - All these "Oh!" and "Hey Hey" feel like they are lacking something hitsoundwise to give them more emphasis. Check my suggestions for Insane. (I won't mention them again, you can pick these up) I'm not too big of a fan of doublehitsounding, but I'll make an exception this time. I boosted the volume from 60 to 70% and added soft whistles to those vocal heavy parts.

Thanks for the amazing mod!

My research on the title.

Official Site: http://avex.jp/boa/discography/ (scroll down a little, hard to miss all 4 albums lol)
Second Source: http://www.fairytail-tv.com/contents/discography/
I looked through all of the OSTs, official selling sites, and elsewhere and could not find anything with the TV Size suffix.

EDIT: I'm also questioning the Source in general for Fairy Tail. On any official site, Fairy Tail is listed in all captials. Simple google search for the japanese website brings up two official links: http://puu.sh/b9wtm.png
Source: FAIRY TAIL


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Creator:xChippy
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xChippy
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Topic Starter
xChippy
Krisom

Krisom wrote:

Let's take a look at this ok?

General
Why not add some audo lead in? Something around 1000 should be fine, just manually edit the .osu file.
Can you please link me to a source that says that this should not be TV Size? Because if that's the case,I'll have to call the cops for something. Call dem cops see Lanturn's post :P

Insane
In it's current state, I can't pass this. Take this in mind according to my bubbling criteria. (however, I found this to be because of the high HP rather than the actual diff of the set)
I feel AR 8,7 is too much for this, specially in the slow part at the start.
HP drain also feels higher than what it should, take in mind that you have a very slow part at the start. oh snap these diff settings, woops fixed o-o

00:30:364 (1,2,3,4,1) - I found this jump (3,4,1) hard to read due to the fact that (1,2,3) is spaced so closely, and then (3,4) is spaced normally and you go BAM jump into (1) (which is partially hidden under (3)). You might benefit from stacking (4), making (1) nor be hidden under (3)'s body or remove the jump. Your choice ~ stacked (4) and did something else with one

00:58:271 (1,2,3,4) - I have never been a fan of these "2014 1/4 sliders". You kids nowdays and your silly techniques~. Anyway, I found this to be a very mean spike on the difficulty of the map, considering that up until this point not many Insane patterns have been introduced. This should be fine imo, there have been previous 1/4 spams and player should have gotten used to it already + the bpm is relatively low, so it is easy to adapt.

00:59:201 (1,2,3,4) - This spacing right after such a wide spacing in the previous combo plays counterintuitively, since there's no musical cue whatsoever that makes you think you should slow down, if anything, the music is actually becoming more loud. Not sure, those 1/4 slider jumps weren't even that big. They only are in big in Numbers. Due to the slider leniency you don't even have to move your cursor.

00:59:666 (1,2,3,4) - I am quite sure that this place is actually in 1/6 rather than 1/8. If you add a softwhistle (not a custom one) to these sliders is quite easy to hear that, actually. Why not try this? I'll ask some opinions about this one

01:00:480 (2,3) - I found this rhythm easier to read when you add a non-custom whistle (I like the normal one, but soft is ok too) on (2)'s and (3)'s sliderstart. I don't really think it fits imo :<, and neither would it help much to read. Just my opinion >:(

01:02:341 (3,4) - 01:04:201 (2,3) - 01:07:922 (2,3) - 01:09:783 (2,3) - ^same ^

01:02:922 (5,6) - These shouldn't last 3/4. There's nothing in the music either at 01:03:271 - nor at 01:03:736 - . You can benefit way more from the music if you make these 1/2 long and make them a slider-mirror jump or something. Oh, and add finishes (soft) OR whistles (normal) to each start to match the "Hey"'s in the music. There are pretty clear drums in the music tho at those places :O so I'd rather keep them as is, as they also fit with the section nicely

01:05:248 (6) - Something else should be added to the sliderstart to emphasise the "Ohhh" at (6)'s start.

01:05:713 (1,2,3) - No. Make the spacing even. There's no musical cue for (1,2) having a wider spacing than (2,3). Heck, you want something pretty? Take (2), stack under (1), rotate 120 degrees. Take (3), stack under (2), rotate 120 degrees.BAM TRIANGLE JUMP WITH EVEN SPACING YOU DON'T EVEN HAVE TO MODIFY THE NEXT PATTERN WHAT IS THIS MAGIC? ITS MAGIC, fixed lol

01:08:969 (6,1) - This could look and flow much better if you made it follow the flow of (6).
You alredy have a lot of flor-cutting patterns near this section. Hmm not sure, imo it flows and looks fine as-is. The down and than upwards flow.

01:10:364 (4,5) - Same as 01:02:922 (5,6) same drums are present here

01:11:759 (3) - This needs something to emphasise the "HEY" in the backgound. A finish, a whistle, I duuno, the clap doesnt seems enough to me.

01:13:155 (1,2,3,4) - I guess that this is ok unlike the previous one I mentioned given the fact that it's so close to the end of the map and you have alredy introduced the player to other hard patterns.

This was nice.

Easy
01:15:015 (1,1) - Too close after the spinner for an easy. https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Easy done~
Check my suggestions for the "Oh"! and "Hey Hey"! of the chorus on the other diffs :P

There's nothing wrong with this diff. Well, except for the spinner being to close to another object :'(

Good luck, i hope this mod helps the next BAT and helps your map go easely through the qualify wihout any unrank :)
About the ''Hey and Oh'' I'll try to find a fitting hitsounds :3, cuz I tried using what I have and it didnt fit at all :< Went with Normal finishes owo. Sorry about some denies but I think it's mostly our styles are conflicting
Thanks for modding~~!!
@Lanturn hmm yeah seems like its indeed FAIRY TAIL, well I guess I'll change it than~
riffy
osu! Alumni
8,060 posts
Joined December 2010
riffy
Goooossssh, I am finally here.

[General]
  1. I believe that orange and bright-yellow colours are too bright and do not work well with the BG. Would you mind fading them a bit to make them look more fitting and comfortable to players' eyes?
[Easy]
  1. You should add a spinner here. The diff needs at least one spinner, so,players' scores will vary a least a bit when the map gets ranked.
  2. Due to rather tricky and slow rhythm in the beginning I would reduce both OD and HP by 0,5. This would make the diff more playable and make sense with the rhythm, so, why not?
  3. 00:04:317 (1) - as the tail of this slider is too close to the previous hitobject, some newbies may mistakenly hit it. To avoid this misunderstanding and to make the pattern look neater, please, try to place the tail somewhere else.
  4. 00:56:410 (1,2) - there is a very strong beat at the red tick (00:57:108) and to emphasize it, we could use a 3/2 slider here. Example.
  5. 01:01:062 (2) - minor - since it is overlapped with the HP Bar a little bit, yu probably would like to move it down a little bit.
  6. 01:02:922 (5,1) - minor - this is the only overlap like this in the whole diff, therefore, it looks a bit lonely/random here. Mind replacing this pattern in order to make the diff look more consistent?

    I feel like it could use just a little bit more work to get a bit better. Just a little bit more attention is required here, I think.
[Xinely's Normal]
  1. The gap between Easy and Normal and gap between Normal and Hard are very different. To make them more balanced, I would increase diff settings on this diff. // Try Approach Rate 5 (4,5 would do just fine, too). CS 3,5 and HP 3,5. Is what I would prefer to see here.
  2. 00:13:852 - a very different sound kicks in at that point, so, using a slider here does notsound like a good idea, to me. Why don't you try to use something like this?
    Note: 00:28:504 (3) - I would thing about doing the same here.
  3. 00:24:783 - the downbeat is unstressed and it does not work well with the music here, I think. An 1/1 slider + a circle would do it better + the downbeat will get emphasizeed. This is what I'd use

    Some of the patterns look messy to me, but I guess it happens due to mapper's style. The rhythm is fine, although sometimes ignored drums (@00:51:294) were quite confusing to me.
[Lanturn's Hard]
  1. 00:07:573 (3,4,5) - the BPM is low and this part is very soft. + There're very quiet beats, everything is very relaxing and a triplet feels a bit too intense for this part, why not to replace it with a simple repeated 1/4 slider? It would be a bit more njoyable at this part, I think.
  2. 00:18:038 (3,4) - the jump feels exaggerated. I like the idea of having a jump here, but I believe that you should reduce DS signficantly, since the music is not very intense. Somewhat around x2,0~ would be better, I think.
    Note: 00:25:480 (2,3) - speaking about jumps, you could add one here, it would fit nicely. <3
  3. 00:59:201 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - minor - as the shape of the stream looks a bit messy, why not try something better-lloking here? Example.

    That was cool! I liked this diff. :)
[Insane]

  1. Krisom wrote:

    I feel AR 8,7 is too much for this, specially in the slow part at the start.
  2. 00:08:969 (4,4) - these sliders' tail represent nothing in music, I would rather use circles or at least use 5% vlolume to make the tails less loud.
    Note: 00:25:596 - yeah, you really should try to make the tails less loud.
  3. 00:14:899 (2,3,4,1,2) - as a playre, I feel uncomfortable with jumps>antijumps patterns. The DS change is too intense and just confuses me. Basically, if you will use the same (regular) DS for the whole combo, it would get much more understandable to me.
  4. 00:44:783 (5) - placing NCs on 1/4 jumps emphasizes them and makes them more playable, since NCs give some extra HP.
    Note: 01:07:108 (8) - the same.
  5. 01:02:922 (5) - as both vocals and slider velocity change her, a new combo would fit just perfectly. It would also make the changes much more readable.
    Note: 01:05:248 (6) - yes, exactly the same.

    Pretty nice, although I feel like some NCs are missing.
Overall, it is nice. I generally like the diffs, but I feel like they could get even better!

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Best of luck!
Xinely
5,014 posts
Joined April 2012
Xinely
basically fixed all and do much remap here since this was i mapped for Normal under 2 stars on last time . but now i make them harder >_<

thanks krisom bakari o/

osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Masayume Chasing.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 44201
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

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Title:MASAYUME CHASING
TitleUnicode:MASAYUME CHASING
Artist:BoA
ArtistUnicode:BoA
Creator:xChippy
Version:Xinely's Normal
Source:FAIRY TAIL
Tags:opening CXu Lanturn Xinely フェアリーテイル 보아 Tv Size 正夢
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xChippy
1,941 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
xChippy

-Bakari- wrote:

Goooossssh, I am finally here.

[General]
  1. I believe that orange and bright-yellow colours are too bright and do not work well with the BG. Would you mind fading them a bit to make them look more fitting and comfortable to players' eyes? fixed
[Easy]
  1. You should add a spinner here. The diff needs at least one spinner, so,players' scores will vary a least a bit when the map gets ranked.
  2. Due to rather tricky and slow rhythm in the beginning I would reduce both OD and HP by 0,5. This would make the diff more playable and make sense with the rhythm, so, why not?
  3. 00:04:317 (1) - as the tail of this slider is too close to the previous hitobject, some newbies may mistakenly hit it. To avoid this misunderstanding and to make the pattern look neater, please, try to place the tail somewhere else.
  4. 00:56:410 (1,2) - there is a very strong beat at the red tick (00:57:108) and to emphasize it, we could use a 3/2 slider here. Example.
  5. 01:01:062 (2) - minor - since it is overlapped with the HP Bar a little bit, yu probably would like to move it down a little bit.
  6. 01:02:922 (5,1) - minor - this is the only overlap like this in the whole diff, therefore, it looks a bit lonely/random here. Mind replacing this pattern in order to make the diff look more consistent?
    all fixed

    I feel like it could use just a little bit more work to get a bit better. Just a little bit more attention is required here, I think.
[Insane]

  1. Krisom wrote:

    I feel AR 8,7 is too much for this, specially in the slow part at the start.
    No idea what happened, I was sure I had fixed this in the previous mod
  2. 00:08:969 (4,4) - these sliders' tail represent nothing in music, I would rather use circles or at least use 5% vlolume to make the tails less loud.
    Note: 00:25:596 - yeah, you really should try to make the tails less loud.
  3. 00:14:899 (2,3,4,1,2) - as a playre, I feel uncomfortable with jumps>antijumps patterns. The DS change is too intense and just confuses me. Basically, if you will use the same (regular) DS for the whole combo, it would get much more understandable to me.
  4. 00:44:783 (5) - placing NCs on 1/4 jumps emphasizes them and makes them more playable, since NCs give some extra HP.
    Note: 01:07:108 (8) - the same.
  5. 01:02:922 (5) - as both vocals and slider velocity change her, a new combo would fit just perfectly. It would also make the changes much more readable.
    Note: 01:05:248 (6) - yes, exactly the same. all fixed, also did some self-modding

    Pretty nice, although I feel like some NCs are missing.
Overall, it is nice. I generally like the diffs, but I feel like they could get even better!

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Best of luck!
Thanks Bakari~!!
Lanturn
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Lanturn
Bakari

-Bakari- wrote:

[Lanturn's Hard]
  1. 00:07:573 (3,4,5) - the BPM is low and this part is very soft. + There're very quiet beats, everything is very relaxing and a triplet feels a bit too intense for this part, why not to replace it with a simple repeated 1/4 slider? It would be a bit more njoyable at this part, I think. I agree. I changed this.
  2. 00:18:038 (3,4) - the jump feels exaggerated. I like the idea of having a jump here, but I believe that you should reduce DS signficantly, since the music is not very intense. Somewhat around x2,0~ would be better, I think. Changed to: http://puu.sh/bcrj8.jpg | 3 -> 4 is 1.99 now. This actually flows pretty nicely.
    Note: 00:25:480 (2,3) - speaking about jumps, you could add one here, it would fit nicely. <3 I actually don't want to put a jump in this specific spot. I have a previous jump on the start of this measure and another jump on the next measure so I don't want to overuse it.
  3. 00:59:201 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - minor - as the shape of the stream looks a bit messy, why not try something better-lloking here? I'd prefer to keep the straightness, however you were completely right about how messy the stream was. I also NC'd at 00:59:666 so it is easier to see the reverse slider. This is what I ended up with: http://puu.sh/bcrwx.jpg

    That was cool! I liked this diff. :)

Thanks a lot for the mod Bakari! | Can you do the colors on my diff xChippy?

nvm. I just didn't update the diff for the tags. (baka me ;_;)

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xChippy
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Topic Starter
xChippy
All updated, fixed colours in all diffs.
@Lanturn lol xD
CXu
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CXu
Graveyard pls
Nyanmaru_old_1
Nyanmaru_old_1
...
xChippy
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Topic Starter
xChippy
Revived pls
Senritsu
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Senritsu
Bubble pls
HabiHolic
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HabiHolic
bubbled
No_Gu
2,954 posts
Joined January 2011
No_Gu
from my queue

[Easy]
01:03:852 (1,3) - it's bad to hide a arrow under a slider.i'm not 100% about if this is ok
01:18:736 (2) - not a united spacing

[Normal]
00:07:341 (3) - is there any reason to set such rhythm here? 00:07:341 - no sound
00:21:062 (4) - not out but,it couldn't be better if you can make it up a little
00:41:760 (1,2,3) - it do catch vocal here,but it sounds really odd.1 follows inst but 2,3 sounds bad
00:58:969 (6) - a little touch HP bar

[Hard]
00:42:457 (3) - no need to normal sampleset,right?and it's rather noisy
00:59:201 (3,4,5,6) - it's better to simplfy this to a slider like next one
01:00:131 - why change a weak clap from here?

[Insane]
00:30:364 (1,2,3) - could be better if you can make them father,the present set is a little confusing
00:33:620 (5) - no sound in the end,and,I don't think there is any sound need to be fitted by this 3/4
00:34:783 (4) - move it up a little
00:37:806 (1) - ^
01:00:480 (2) - had to say,after a stream + 1/8 sliders stream end,it's hard to react this is 1/4

I'm not very fond of your curved sliders' shape,I think you can improve them better in your further maps.except this,ok enough
Call me back
xChippy
1,941 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
xChippy

No_Gu wrote:

from my queue

[Easy]
01:03:852 (1,3) - it's bad to hide a arrow under a slider.i'm not 100% about if this is ok
01:18:736 (2) - not a united spacing

[Insane]
00:30:364 (1,2,3) - could be better if you can make them father,the present set is a little confusing
00:33:620 (5) - no sound in the end,and,I don't think there is any sound need to be fitted by this 3/4
00:34:783 (4) - move it up a little
00:37:806 (1) - ^
01:00:480 (2) - had to say,after a stream + 1/8 sliders stream end,it's hard to react this is 1/4 it plays fine for me tho :<, and I don't know what to do else without ruining the emphasize on the song

I'm not very fond of your curved sliders' shape,I think you can improve them better in your further maps.except this,ok enough
Call me back
No comment = fixed
Thanks No_Gu! 8-)
Xinely
5,014 posts
Joined April 2012
Xinely

No_Gu wrote:

from my queue

[Normal]
00:07:341 (3) - is there any reason to set such rhythm here? 00:07:341 - no sound vocal sound here so i keep it
00:21:062 (4) - not out but,it couldn't be better if you can make it up a little
00:41:760 (1,2,3) - it do catch vocal here,but it sounds really odd.1 follows inst but 2,3 sounds bad
00:58:969 (6) - a little touch HP bar

I'm not very fond of your curved sliders' shape,I think you can improve them better in your further maps.except this,ok enough
Call me back
thanks gu ~

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Lanturn
osu! Alumni
3,912 posts
Joined March 2012
Lanturn

No_Gu wrote:

from my queue

[Hard]
00:42:457 (3) - no need to normal sampleset,right?and it's rather noisy Alright. changed.
00:59:201 (3,4,5,6) - it's better to simplfy this to a slider like next one I think this is perfectly acceptable. Its a really easy and straightforward stream.
01:00:131 - why change a weak clap from here? Not sure what you mean. I pretty much always use the Normal Finish on these types of notes.
I reduced the distances of some notes slightly to help balance the difficulty better. Sorry this took so long to reply to. Thanks for the mod by the way :)

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384,84,6178,6,0,L|456:44,2,70,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,64,6876,1,2,0:0:0:0:
176,304,7573,2,0,L|176:360,2,35,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,240,8038,6,0,P|160:192|144:112,1,140,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,84,8736,1,2,0:0:0:0:
72,168,8969,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,144,9899,6,0,B|384:224|384:224|436:280,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
508,260,10597,1,2,0:0:0:0:
468,184,10829,1,8,0:0:0:0:
140,104,11759,6,0,L|140:28,2,70,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,184,12457,1,2,0:0:0:0:
152,256,12690,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,288,13620,5,2,0:0:0:0:
410,172,13852,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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410,172,14085,1,8,0:0:0:0:
300,216,14317,1,0,3:0:0:0:
197,155,14550,2,0,L|165:187,1,35,8|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
293,101,14899,2,0,L|325:69,1,35,8|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
300,216,15248,1,8,0:0:0:0:
300,216,15364,1,8,0:0:0:0:
300,216,15480,6,0,L|220:216,1,70,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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100,320,16410,2,0,P|68:248|68:184,1,140,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
221,66,17341,6,0,P|258:78|282:110,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,184,17806,1,0,0:0:0:0:
215,143,18038,1,2,0:0:0:0:
352,116,18271,2,0,P|380:180|348:256,1,140,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
312,328,18969,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,328,19201,6,0,L|156:328,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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112,268,20829,1,0,3:0:0:0:
180,220,21062,6,0,P|248:236|320:220,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,112,21759,2,0,P|196:96|124:112,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,156,22457,1,2,0:0:0:0:
56,156,22573,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,156,22690,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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232,336,23620,1,2,0:0:0:0:
300,288,23852,2,0,P|331:219|302:161,1,140,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
248,224,24550,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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300,288,25480,1,2,0:0:0:0:
217,302,25713,2,0,P|169:250|184:168,1,140,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
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312,204,28271,1,0,3:0:0:0:
264,312,28503,5,0,0:0:0:0:
192,216,28736,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,216,28852,1,0,3:0:0:0:
192,216,28969,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,204,29201,1,0,3:0:0:0:
372,100,29434,2,0,L|428:68,1,35,8|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
256,112,29783,2,0,L|204:144,1,35,8|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
416,192,30131,1,0,1:0:0:0:
416,192,30248,1,0,1:0:0:0:
416,192,30364,6,0,P|401:261|328:308,1,140,4|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
264,272,31062,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,228,31294,2,0,L|56:300,1,140,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
20,216,31992,1,0,0:0:0:0:
60,136,32224,6,0,L|144:89,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,92,32690,2,0,P|248:108|272:140,1,70,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,168,33155,2,0,P|160:232|180:300,1,140,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
360,344,34085,6,0,B|336:300|336:300|300:280|300:280|275:237,1,140,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
288,148,34783,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,35015,2,0,P|441:213|497:182,1,140,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
428,124,35713,1,0,3:0:0:0:
352,76,35945,6,0,L|264:76,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,36,36410,2,0,L|200:36,1,70,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,120,36876,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,200,37108,2,0,P|80:172|68:128,2,70,0|0|0,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,248,37806,6,0,L|272:248,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,212,38271,1,0,1:0:0:0:
268,160,38503,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,212,38736,2,0,P|440:216|480:164,1,140,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
392,136,39434,1,0,0:0:0:0:
291,278,39666,6,0,P|232:312|172:284,1,140,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
109,217,40364,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,160,40596,2,0,L|248:224,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,80,41062,2,0,L|180:16,1,70,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,68,41527,5,0,1:0:0:0:
356,68,41759,2,0,L|422:131,2,70,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,192,42457,2,0,L|316:276,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,264,42922,2,0,L|392:216,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,328,43387,5,2,0:0:0:0:
148,237,43620,1,8,0:0:0:0:
148,237,43736,1,0,3:0:0:0:
148,237,43853,1,8,0:0:0:0:
190,103,44085,1,0,3:0:0:0:
328,78,44318,2,0,L|384:46,1,35,8|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
322,195,44666,2,0,L|266:227,1,35,8|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
440,216,45015,1,8,0:0:0:0:
440,216,45132,1,8,0:0:0:0:
440,216,45248,6,0,P|388:288|320:308,1,154.000004699707,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,252,45945,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,312,46178,2,0,L|96:344,1,77.0000023498536,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,248,46643,2,0,L|48:152,1,77.0000023498536,8|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
116,104,47108,5,2,0:0:0:0:
211,153,47341,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,87,47573,2,0,P|329:57|385:50,1,77.0000023498536,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
454,101,48038,1,2,0:0:0:0:
468,208,48271,1,8,0:0:0:0:
468,208,48503,1,8,0:0:0:0:
196,272,48969,6,0,P|256:324|360:336,1,154.000004699707,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,324,49666,1,0,0:0:0:0:
468,248,49899,1,2,0:0:0:0:
468,156,50131,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,80,50364,1,8,0:0:0:0:
324,92,50596,6,0,L|280:156,1,77.0000023498536,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,184,51062,2,0,L|172:120,1,77.0000023498536,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,260,51527,2,0,L|164:324,1,77.0000023498536,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,360,51992,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,252,52224,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,160,52457,1,0,1:0:0:0:
280,160,52573,1,0,1:0:0:0:
280,160,52690,6,0,P|252:83|291:14,1,154.000004699707,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,92,53387,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,212,53620,2,0,B|156:236|156:236|64:236,1,154.000004699707,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,152,54317,1,0,3:0:0:0:
256,308,54550,6,0,L|336:308,1,77.0000023498536,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,220,55015,2,0,L|344:220,1,77.0000023498536,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,160,55480,1,2,0:0:0:0:
280,160,55713,1,8,0:0:0:0:
148,214,55945,2,0,P|156:254|200:290,1,77.0000023498536,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,212,56410,6,0,B|92:180|96:144|96:144|132:148|168:128,1,154.000004699707,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,84,57108,2,0,P|260:134|238:190,1,77.0000023498536,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,256,57573,2,0,P|328:206|350:150,1,77.0000023498536,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,208,58038,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,336,58271,6,0,L|240:328,1,77.0000023498536,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,236,58736,2,0,L|252:244,1,77.0000023498536,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,256,59201,1,0,1:0:0:0:
370,260,59317,1,0,1:0:0:0:
400,264,59434,1,0,1:0:0:0:
430,268,59550,1,0,1:0:0:0:
460,272,59666,6,0,L|486:242,3,38.5000011749268,8|0|0|0,1:2|1:0|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
499,215,60131,5,4,1:0:0:0:
434,149,60364,1,2,0:0:0:0:
434,149,60480,2,0,P|370:145|334:157,2,77.0000023498536,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
478,135,61062,2,0,P|474:67|454:43,1,77.0000023498536,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
383,30,61527,1,10,0:0:0:0:
109,148,61992,5,4,0:3:0:0:
196,118,62225,1,2,0:0:0:0:
196,118,62341,2,0,P|260:114|296:126,2,77.0000023498536,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,142,62923,2,0,P|160:210|180:234,1,77.0000023498536,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
273,323,63387,2,0,P|269:255|249:231,1,77.0000023498536,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,264,63852,6,0,L|420:200,1,77.0000023498536,4|2,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,174,64201,2,0,P|430:128|456:74,2,77.0000023498536,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
470,208,64783,1,2,0:0:0:0:
468,300,65015,1,0,0:0:0:0:
397,359,65248,2,0,P|355:368|323:360,1,77.0000023498536,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
245,308,65713,5,4,0:3:0:0:
166,259,65945,1,0,0:0:0:0:
67,280,66178,1,8,0:0:0:0:
33,185,66410,2,0,B|33:106|33:106|97:62,1,154.000004699707
176,24,67108,1,8,0:0:0:0:
251,74,67341,1,0,1:0:0:0:
274,94,67457,1,0,1:0:0:0:
292,118,67573,6,0,L|332:210,1,77.0000023498536,4|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
310,233,67922,2,0,P|268:246|225:236,2,77.0000023498536,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,214,68503,1,2,0:0:0:0:
407,139,68736,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,54,68969,1,10,0:0:0:0:
136,192,69434,5,4,0:3:0:0:
200,256,69667,1,2,0:0:0:0:
200,256,69783,2,0,P|264:260|300:248,2,77.0000023498536,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,232,70365,2,0,L|80:296,1,77.0000023498536,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,144,70829,2,0,L|144:80,1,77.0000023498536,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,40,71294,6,0,L|304:40,1,77.0000023498536,4|2,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,64,71643,2,0,P|304:104|332:148,2,77.0000023498536,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,32,72225,1,2,0:0:0:0:
412,96,72457,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,188,72690,2,0,P|357:220|299:227,1,77.0000023498536,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,232,73155,5,4,0:3:0:0:
188,156,73387,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,68,73620,1,8,0:0:0:0:
124,88,73852,2,0,P|96:163|129:229,1,154.000004699707,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,300,74550,1,0,1:0:0:0:
208,318,74666,1,0,1:0:0:0:
237,328,74783,1,0,1:0:0:0:
267,330,74899,1,0,1:0:0:0:
256,192,75015,12,0,76410,0:0:0:0:
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198,190,77574,1,2,0:0:0:0:
424,48,78736,6,0,P|417:86|396:113,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,48,79201,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,48,79434,1,2,0:0:0:0:
388,324,80596,6,0,L|460:324,2,70,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,276,81294,1,2,0:0:0:0:
xChippy
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xChippy
all updated~
No_Gu
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No_Gu
[Insane]
00:37:806 (1) - sorry my fault..i mean same with 00:33:620 (5) -

[Normal]
00:06:178 (2,3) - still feel strange...in fact it's better to set a slider at 00:06:876 to 00:07:341 following the vocal.and 00:07:573 is a beginning of new inst sound...
xChippy
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xChippy
Hmm well its for the vocal that keeps holding there, also there is nothing to emphasize on 00:38:038 - anyways ;w; . if it is that uncomfy I'll change
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