1. Easy (1.1 stars, 95 notes)
2. Insane (3.06 stars, 258 notes)

Charlotte wrote:

Hi #modreqs

Gene

Artist→種田 梨沙,綾 洲崎, 田所あずさ, 市道 真央
Romanised Artist→Risa Taneda, Aya Suzaki, Azusa Tadokoro, Mao Ichimichi
Title→いちばん星　(TV Size)
Romanised Title→Ichiban Boshi　(TV Size)
Source→Brynhildr in the Darkness

Hard

File→Open .osu in Notepad→BeatmapID 423498

Good luck

Number5 wrote:

M4M
Easy
00:02:438 (3) - 位置应是260,277 fixed
00:03:015 (1) - 距离问题 fixed
00:03:881 (2) - 距离问题 fixed
00:06:188 (1) - 距离问题 fixed
00:09:650 (1) - 距离问题 fixed
00:13:112 (1) - 距离问题 fixed
00:19:458 (1) - 距离问题 fixed
00:22:342 (4) - 出界 fixed
00:28:688 (4) - 位置应是194,71 fixed
00:29:265 (1) - 距离问题 fixed
00:36:188 (2) - 位置应是169,197 fixed
00:46:573 (4) - New Combo fixed
00:48:881 (6) - New Combo fixed
00:55:804 (6,1) - 位置应是282,83 fixed
00:56:958 (1) - 距离问题 fixed
01:02:150 (1) - 距离问题 fixed
01:06:188 (1,2) - 位置应是65,247 fixed
01:10:227 (5) - 位置应是218,103 fixed
01:15:419 (1,2) - 位置应是136,318 fixed
01:18:304 (1,2) - 位置应是36,135 fixed
01:20:035 (1) - 距离问题 fixed
01:21:765 (1) - 距离问题 fixed
01:22:342 (2) - 不好看 建议改成这样 change

01:23:496 (1) - 距离问题 fixed
01:26:381 (1) - 声音太大 fixed
Hard
00:00:419 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Hard的非高潮部分不要放大跳 比较喜欢这样 该insane可行？
00:01:573 (3,4,5) - 不好看 而且不建议在Hard放Anti-Jump
00:06:765 (3,4) - 不要放Anti-Jump
00:13:256 (4,5) - 太难 而且打起来不舒服
00:15:996 (5,6,1) - 太难
00:18:881 (5,6) - 非高潮部分不要放这样的跳
00:20:612 (3,4) - 太难
00:22:342 (8,9) - 太难
00:37:631 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - 做连打请用Convert Slider To Stream fixed
00:47:727 (1,2,3,4) - 不好看 改成了重叠
01:06:188 (1,2,3,4) - 不好看 同上
01:06:765 (5,1,2) - 太难
01:18:737 (7,8) - 太难 而且打起来不舒服
01:25:083 (5,6,7,1,2,3) - 做连打请用Convert Slider To Stream

SkyBearer245 wrote:

M4M!!

~~

General

it says "TV Size" but no video please remove that

Finish Hitsound on every Spinner Ends

Easy

00:03:015 : move a little bit for Spacing Purposes change

00:25:227 : same^^ change

Like this

00:27:535 : ^ since you this ^ , move this like this (remember your hitcircle #4 is stacked there dont forget ) change

Hard

00:23:496 : NC fixed

00:33:592 : NC keep

00:37:631 : NC fixed

01:07:573 : Align it properly to the hit circle 3 from 01:00:131 1:07:573？

01:18:304 : NC fixed

That's All~~

1. Remove check "Widescreen support"(You don't used StoryBoard) and "letterbox during breaks"
2. Kiai start 00:48:881 Kiai End 01:25:804
3. recommend preview point on 00:48:015

1. 00:03:881 (2,3) - blanket
2. 00:09:650 (4) - NC and finish on head of slider. and clap on end of slider.
3. 00:11:381 (6) - clap (add clap next white tick like 00:12:535, 00:13:688 ...)
4. 00:13:112 (1,2) - switch NC
5. 00:13:688 (2) - finish on end of slider
6. 00:13:688 (2,3) - blanket
7. 00:17:150 (6,7) - Don't stack on Easy Diff. it's unrankable!
8. 00:17:150 (6,7) - finish on end of slider
9. 00:20:035 (2,3,4,1) - same! stacking on Easy diff is not good!
10. 00:24:073 (3) - clap on head of slider than end of slider
11. 00:27:535 (6) - 00:27:535 (6) -
12. 00:48:881 (1) - finish
13. 01:23:496 (3) - NC
14. 01:26:381 (1) - end on 01:28:112

1. 00:02:150 (4) - move to (44,316)
2. 00:03:592 (2) - Ctrl+G
3. 00:05:035 (5,1) - Switch NC
4. 00:05:035 (5,1,2,3,4) - add whistle like you added
5. 00:09:650 (2) - finish on head of slider
6. 00:10:227 (3,3) - don't add clap on 00:10:804. add clap on 00:10:227
7. 00:10:515 (1) - remove NC
8. 00:14:265 (1) - finish on head of slider
9. 00:18:881 (5,1) - switch NC
10. 00:25:515 (4) - finish on head of slider
11. 00:27:823 (5) - finish on end of slider
12. 00:45:708 (1) - recommend drum finish
13. 01:18:881 (5,1) - switch NC
14. 01:25:948 (1) - same to Easy diff's mod

TaMul wrote:

From your M4M Queue!

[General]

1. Remove check "Widescreen support"(You don't used StoryBoard) and "letterbox during breaks" done
2. Kiai start 00:48:881 Kiai End 01:25:804 fixed
3. recommend preview point on 00:48:015

fixed

[Easy]
HP -1 change
Slider Velocity is so high to Easy Player! Please change SV. change to 1.10

1. 00:03:881 (2,3) - blanket
2. 00:09:650 (4) - NC and finish on head of slider. and clap on end of slider.
3. 00:11:381 (6) - clap (add clap next white tick like 00:12:535, 00:13:688 ...)
4. 00:13:112 (1,2) - switch NC
5. 00:13:688 (2) - finish on end of slider
6. 00:13:688 (2,3) - blanket
7. 00:17:150 (6,7) - Don't stack on Easy Diff. it's unrankable!
8. 00:17:150 (6,7) - finish on end of slider
9. 00:20:035 (2,3,4,1) - same! stacking on Easy diff is not good!
10. 00:24:073 (3) - clap on head of slider than end of slider
11. 00:27:535 (6) - 00:27:535 (6) -
12. 00:48:881 (1) - finish
13. 01:23:496 (3) - NC
14. 01:26:381 (1) - end on 01:28:112

fixed

You used lots of staking pattern. It make confused to Easy Player. make more easily!

[Insane]

1. 00:02:150 (4) - move to (44,316) keep
2. 00:03:592 (2) - Ctrl+G good!
3. 00:05:035 (5,1) - Switch NC fixed
4. 00:05:035 (5,1,2,3,4) - add whistle like you added done
5. 00:09:650 (2) - finish on head of slider good!
6. 00:10:227 (3,3) - don't add clap on 00:10:804. add clap on 00:10:227 fixed
7. 00:10:515 (1) - remove NC done
8. 00:14:265 (1) - finish on head of slider good!
9. 00:18:881 (5,1) - switch NC done
10. 00:25:515 (4) - finish on head of slider done
11. 00:27:823 (5) - finish on end of slider done
12. 00:45:708 (1) - recommend drum finish done
13. 01:18:881 (5,1) - switch NC done
14. 01:25:948 (1) - same to Easy diff's mod

fixed

it's all. good luck!

xLoupGarou wrote:

Nyan - pasu~
Here to Mod

I edited your wallpaper . Hope you like it . I just made a few changes though < Link

Easy

HP Drain - 2
OD - 2
Notes Seems Fine

Insane

HP Drain - 6
OD - OK
LOL , Great Map ( Even the AImod didn't saw any problems nor do I )Such Great Modders

That's All - Nice Song -
Good Luck~

Streliteela wrote:

你好，m4m
[general]
Timing和BPM没啥问题，但打击感有点弱，注意尽量不要把白线节奏压在滑条尾，这样虽然音效无影响但打击感会很受影响。另外注意ds，间距什么的有些随意性太大了显得有些杂乱; nc也很乱，建议每隔一定数量的白线换一次nc, 不要乱加
[Insane]
00:02:150 (4,5) - 请打开ds，把这两个note和3滑条尾调整好，等间距
00:03:015 (1) - ctrl+g，然后调整00:03:592 (2) - 和滑条1包好
00:06:765 (3) - 间距太大
00:12:823 (1,2,3,4,5) - 重新调整一下形状
00:19:458 (6) - 这滑条用的不好，建议改成几个note这样节奏好些：
00:21:044 - 加note
00:26:092 (5) - 微调一下这个滑条，和滑条4完全平行
00:37:631 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 节奏不好，改：
00:41:092 (1,2) - 这里没必要跳
00:47:727 (1,2,3,4) - 四连好坑爹orz
00:50:900 (1,2,3) - 三个同时选中，调整到x:272 y:168
00:51:621 - 加note
00:59:842 (1,2,3) - 换个位置，这里flow不太好
01:03:015 (4,5,6) - 三个滑条ds调一下。。尽量一致
01:05:612 (5,6,7) - 这地方不适合三叠，因为是一个长音，请考虑使用滑条
01:06:188 (1,2,3,4) - 这里节奏很奇怪。。而且四叠坑爹，建议改
01:10:083 - 加note
01:17:438 (8) - 这里也是一个长音，建议改成滑条
01:24:650 (3,4) - 节奏太怪了，形状也不好看，建议这一块重新做
[Easy]
nc还是太乱，不一一说明了
00:02:438 (3) - 建议和滑条尾分开，新人不好判断这里
00:32:727 (5,6) - 包好
00:41:381 (3,4) - ^
01:07:342 (2,3,4) - ^
01:15:996 (6,7) - ^
01:20:612 (2,1) - ^
01:25:227 (1) - 去掉折返改成单滑条，转盘提前到 01:25:804 -

嘛不好意思我不清楚rules怎么了。。反正我发的时候我楼上的这位说他正在写mod还没写完所以我也不知道事实上他已经写好了。。无所谓了，就当是我路过来mod了你的图，希望对你有所帮助。。刚才我把mod的内容放到box里面了，估计你没看见所以现在我把box删掉把里面的东西露出来

FuFuLu wrote:

Hi, I came from your M4M queue.

[Easy]

Overall speaking,
1) the slider velocity is quite fast but the distance between the slider is small, which may cause newbies feeling difficult to get the rhythm;
2) the overlappings maybe confusing for newbies;
3) better set new combos in the 1st beat of every 1~2 bars (4~8 beats)
4) you should use hitsounds;
5) try not to make the slider ends at the 1st beat of every bar, it would make the rhythmic feeling rather weak. (I think you should pay more attention to these two. 請參考樓下的 General)

00:02:438 (3) - Better not overlap this. Newbies may feel hard to read.
00:03:015 (1,2,3) - In this case, newbies will tend to hit the 3rd slider too early. Check the distance between your sliders, try making the distance similar or equal. You may use "Distance Snap" to help you.
00:05:035 (3) - New Combo
00:07:919 (3) - " "
00:09:650 (4) - " "
00:11:958 (7) - " "
I'm gonna skip the rest objects where there should be NCs.

00:17:150 (6,7) - Better not overlap (I'm gonna skip the same problem)

SV change to 1.1and remap

[Insane]

00:05:035 (5) - New combo here, but not here 00:05:612 (1) - fixed
00:09:362 (1) - remove this and extend your spinner for 1/2 beat keep
00:09:650 (2) - NC
00:10:515 (1) - remove NC
00:10:804 (3) - NC fixed
00:11:669 (1) - remove NC fixed
00:11:958 (3) - NC fixed
00:12:823 (1) - remove NC fixed
00:13:112 (3) - NC fixed
Problems with new combos are the same as Easy (gonna skip the same problem)

00:13:256 (4,5) - Don't overlap keep
00:38:352 (6,1) - " " keep
01:18:737 (4,5) - " " keep

00:47:727 (1,2,3,4) - either change 1,2,3 into a reverse slider, or just use 1/4 but not 1/6 keep
01:06:188 (1,2,3,4) - " " keep
01:24:650 (3,4) - " " keep

After all, imo, your map is quite good, and I feel there're almost nothing to criticise with after testing your map.
Good luck for ranking
哎呀~我怎麼不用中文...

Streliteela wrote:

你好，m4m
[general]
Timing和BPM没啥问题，但打击感有点弱，注意尽量不要把白线节奏压在滑条尾，这样虽然音效无影响但打击感会很受影响。另外注意ds，间距什么的有些随意性太大了显得有些杂乱; nc也很乱，建议每隔一定数量的白线换一次nc, 不要乱加
[Insane]
00:02:150 (4,5) - 请打开ds，把这两个note和3滑条尾调整好，等间距 fixed
00:03:015 (1) - ctrl+g，然后调整00:03:592 (2) - 和滑条1包好 fixed
00:06:765 (3) - 间距太大 keep
00:12:823 (1,2,3,4,5) - 重新调整一下形状 change
00:19:458 (6) - 这滑条用的不好，建议改成几个note这样节奏好些： keep
00:21:044 - 加note keep
00:26:092 (5) - 微调一下这个滑条，和滑条4完全平行 fixed
00:37:631 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 节奏不好，改： 有音keep
00:41:092 (1,2) - 这里没必要跳 keep
00:47:727 (1,2,3,4) - 四连好坑爹orz keep
00:50:900 (1,2,3) - 三个同时选中，调整到x:272 y:168 fixed
00:51:621 - 加note 考虑

00:59:842 (1,2,3) - 换个位置，这里flow不太好 特意摆的
01:03:015 (4,5,6) - 三个滑条ds调一下。。尽量一致 keep
01:05:612 (5,6,7) - 这地方不适合三叠，因为是一个长音，请考虑使用滑条 keep
01:06:188 (1,2,3,4) - 这里节奏很奇怪。。而且四叠坑爹，建议改 keep
01:10:083 - 加note added
01:17:438 (8) - 这里也是一个长音，建议改成滑条 考虑
01:24:650 (3,4) - 节奏太怪了，形状也不好看，建议这一块重新做 keep
[Easy]
nc还是太乱，不一一说明了
00:02:438 (3) - 建议和滑条尾分开，新人不好判断这里 keep
00:32:727 (5,6) - 包好
00:41:381 (3,4) - ^
01:07:342 (2,3,4) - ^
01:15:996 (6,7) - ^
01:20:612 (2,1) - ^
01:25:227 (1) - 去掉折返改成单滑条，转盘提前到 01:25:804 -nice

嘛不好意思我不清楚rules怎么了。。反正我发的时候我楼上的这位说他正在写mod还没写完所以我也不知道事实上他已经写好了。。无所谓了，就当是我路过来mod了你的图，希望对你有所帮助。。刚才我把mod的内容放到box里面了，估计你没看见所以现在我把box删掉把里面的东西露出来

1. put space in romanised title tag: "Ichiban Boshi (TV Size)"
2. source 应该用日本的名字: Gokukoku no Brynhildr. 吧 "brynhildr in the darkness" 放在 tags 里面
3. also "ending", "ed" in tags
4. 最后的spinner可以extend 到 01:28:688
5. 你的hard 跟 insane 为什么是一样 的？不小心把一个copy过去吗？
6. 你要 normal difficulty 在 hard 和 easy 中间

1. 00:00:419 (1,2) - blanket
2. 00:01:573 (2,3) - easy/normal 千万不要把 circle stack 在 slider end 上面
3. 00:06:188 (1,2,3) - blanket
4. 00:13:112 (2,3) - blanket
5. 00:25:227 (1,2) - blanket
6. 00:38:496 (3,1) - blanket
7. 00:53:496 (4,1) - blanket
8. 00:57:535 (2,3) - blanket
9. 01:25:227 (2) - repeat, 在吧 01:25:804 (1) - move back
10. 如果你不懂 "blanket" 是什么:
    SPOILER

    [img]osu.ppy.sh/ss/1729850[/img]

1. insane can have higher HP drain, especially since you have so many new combos
2. 00:07:198 (1,1) - best to have at least 1 beat between spinner and object
3. 00:13:255 (2,3) - stream 和slider不要stack
4. 00:38:352 (6,1) - ^
5. 01:18:737 (4,1) - ^
6. 00:19:890 她们在唱歌，所以要把东西方在这里
7. 00:21:044 ^
8. 00:48:881 (3,4) - 她们唱歌有个字在00:49:313可是这是蓝tick。你可以 remove (4),把（3）做3/4 beat 长，再repeat一次。又可以把 hit circle 放在00:49:313，就像你在01:09:650 (4,5,6) - 做的. 这里最好要管。
9. 00:51:621 ^
10. 00:53:929 ^
11. 01:01:429 ^
12. 01:07:775 ^
13. 01:12:390 ^
14. 01:19:458 (1,2) - blanket
15. 01:16:285 (4,5) - ^