00:21:457 - to 00:22:088 - I've noticed this in pretty much every diff, but there are times when you leave the columns empty. Try and rearrange some of the notes to avoid this.
re-arrange some00:41:036 - I'd consider adding another note in 1 for the crash here.
i think it would better for 2 note00:46:878 (46878|6,46878|0,47036|2,47036|1) - These sounds are such quiet rims and hihats, I feel that using a double for them is overdoing it. I suggest to reduce the rim and hihat notes to singles only in this case.
i think it should be re-arrange00:47:351 (47351|1,47351|2) - ^^ similar to the above, a double feels overchorded.
i follow same statement to above00:48:141 (48141|2,48141|0,48220|3,48220|4) - Honestly, at this point, I feel like these quiet sounds are made into doubles just for the sake of making the difficulty hard. I'd reduce these to singles too since you can barely hear them clearly.
re-arrange00:48:141 (48141|0,48141|2,48220|4,48220|3,75772|5,75772|1,75851|4,75851|2,75930|3,75930|6,76009|1,76009|4) - I'm really sure that these are ghost notes. The guitar doesn't separate the notes but rather it's just a slide, so a single LN like 01:15:772 (75772|0) - is fine.
removed01:25:878 - Add another note here since it's a crash like 01:26:193 (86193|6,86193|0,86193|2,86193|5) -
i'm realy sure this is not crash 01:32:983 (92983|2,92983|3,93062|1,93062|4,93141|3,93141|5,93141|0) - Try making this more symmetrical like this
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6562906 no thanks01:33:457 (93457|0,93457|3,93457|5,93772|2,93772|6,93772|4) - I also think it'd be nice if the LNs were on one hand, and the short notes on the other, to get a back and forth effect like this
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6562923 i think this pattern doesn't have any problem01:44:903 (104903|4,104903|1,104982|3,104982|6,105061|1,105061|5) - I think this pattern is a bit messy to read. Maybe use this instead
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6562948 02:00:930 (120930|0,120930|2,120930|4,120930|6) - I don't think you need a quad for this seeing as there isn't even a crash, but only a kick. I think at most, a triple would be fine.
actually, it is not the quad or double pattern things. i used different pattern in different phase and i make the density much same. in that mean in every single phase the note count is same but the diffiuct would be different02:04:561 (124561|3,124561|1,124640|2,124640|4) - Control J (make sure to move the hitsounds) and move 02:04:482 (124482|2) - to 4 to get a more roll like pattern.
no thanks03:28:878 (208878|6,209193|3,209509|1,209825|5,210141|2,210457|0,210772|5,211088|1) - etc. These LNs are cool and all, but for consistency, start them at 03:18:614 - instead. It's weird to change up a mapping style in the middle of a section when the music doesn't give you a clear transition between parts where you can vary the style.
in this section i use "rapid" pattern for non-LN phase, then when the LN phase i will not use "rapid: stiyle to avoid confusing thingsDiscussed Extraordinary with a friend and this is what he came up with (I'm basically just quoting him):
00:17:049 (17049|6) - Better to start at 00:16:102 - and end at the same place for the vocal since you were following it in the beginning.
for the first things, which one you hear ? the vocal or the noise sound ? i used to follow noise sound in this phase00:21:141 (21141|4) - Move to column 3 to avoid a 3 note stack with 00:20:825 (20825|4,20983|4,21141|4) -
arranged00:21:457 (21457|3) - Move to col 3 to avoid 00:21:141 (21141|3,21457|3,21615|3) - or LNs surrounding a note.
done00:23:509 (23509|4,23509|1,23588|3,23588|0,23667|1,23667|4) - Try this for better playability
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6563157 will stay at this pattern00:25:720 -
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6563211 Easier to read due to the jumptrill kind nature
no, thankyou00:26:983 (26983|5) - move to column 5, more comfortability, as there is no reason to have 00:26:983 (26983|5,26983|0,27141|5,27141|0) -, but with the density, it's unavoidable to have 1 jack. "Jacks are mostly clap with drum, but drum with drum are not 1/2 jacked. Shouldn't it be the other way around?"
done00:26:983 (26983|5) -
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6563261 nicer to play
done00:30:141 (30141|5,30299|5,30457|5) - Anchor, try this
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6563282 actually, its guitar lead00:31:167 (31167|0,31246|2) - Swith columns and move 00:31:246 (31246|3) - to column 6
is the LN much weird if change column ?