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TERRA - Catharsis Garden

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ouranhshc
2,338 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
ouranhshc
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, December 15, 2009 at 7:31:01 PM

Artist: TERRA
Title: Catharsis Garden
Source: GuitarFreaks V6 & DrumMania V6
Tags: Jun Naoki NM Konami Bemani
BPM: 195
Filesize: 2666kb
Play Time: 01:42
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.99 stars, 257 notes)
  2. Normal (4.28 stars, 156 notes)
  3. Xgor's Easy (1.67 stars, 88 notes)
Download: TERRA - Catharsis Garden
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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BAT ready
Last edited by ouranhshc , edited 64 times in total.
Zekira
9,233 posts
Joined September 2008
Zekira
Offset: 978
ouranhshc
2,338 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
ouranhshc
thx
Dusty
870 posts
Joined June 2009
Dusty
I'll make a Normal once you figure out where Kiai is, if you want. nevermind.
Last edited by Dusty , edited 1 time in total.
EEeee
1,026 posts
Joined July 2008
EEeee
irc modding/suggestions, hope it was helpful, map was pretty cool, kept up with the pace of the song
Bass
1,846 posts
Joined January 2009
Bass
Star'd
xierbaliti
osu! Alumni
1,009 posts
Joined August 2008
xierbaliti
good mapset =w=

have a star
Jesss
814 posts
Joined November 2008
Jesss
Nice song...but let's see:

Hard
SPOILER
00:05:029 (8) - i don't like that slider position...'cause Slider over Slider is wrong method of mapping
00:14:006 (2) - move 9 grids (grid level 3)
01:01:044 (5,6) - Change positions...spacing is wrong
00:41:090 (7) - reccommended to be contiguous to sliders

Nice job!
Overall: check hitsounds and i reccommend to make a harder diff.
why do you volume down Whistle sounds? o.o

i do not mod Normal cuz it's not completed yet

Good Luck!!

Star ^^
Dusty
870 posts
Joined June 2009
Dusty
I've gotten sick of this song :(

pretty good, *star
Ekaru
3,617 posts
Joined July 2008
Ekaru
Normal:

00:13:090 (2) - Try making this and the following (4) hit circles instead of 1/2 sliders. I feel that it plays better this way.
00:34:021 (3) - Try making just a slider, it feels weird and can confuse newbies as it currently is.
00:39:075 (1) - Elevate the middle of the slider, making it more curved; it currently cross the top of 2, which *is* noticeable and not very pretty.
00:44:098 (1) - This just feels weird, and it ends in a weird spot, but if you extended it another repeat, would be hard for newbs. Try replacing it with a 3 1/1 stack, see if that works better for you.
00:58:052 (3) - Feels weird, try making a hit circle 1/2 later.
00:59:044 (5) - Feels weird, I recommend making a hit circle (where it currently is).
01:06:083 (2) - Same.
01:09:029 (7) - Move a bit so it isn't under the end of (6).

Good job otherwise.

Hard:

All I have to say is, increase the spacing of the 1/2s. As it is, I have trouble reading it.

Otherwise, good job, star. ~
Fuuko
486 posts
Joined June 2009
Fuuko
Fuuko's mod DEKIMASHITA! <333'

Check this.
Suggestion.

General :

Add tags.
Add source.
Try to make the colour combos match the background. A faint blue and a white should do it.
The mp3 and hitsounds are way too much loud. Please try to reduce it a little. This is an important issue.


Hard:

00:20:062 (1); Extend this by 1/2 beat.
That's all. :3
I like the song, so a nice star for you. Keep up the good work. <3
Kubu
555 posts
Joined August 2008
Kubu
Good map but :3... im waiting for harder diff
Star.
Beuchi
osu! Alumni
2,288 posts
Joined February 2009
Beuchi
Modding Time!

Here are some suggestions for your map. Of course you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me :D

Let's go!

~All Diffs~
- Add Tags and Source.
- Add custom colours? The ones you have don't fit with the background =(

~Normal~
00:52:067 (1) - Extend this to 0:55:131.
01:01:013 (9) - New Combo.
01:42:020 (1) - Start it on 01:41:901

~Hard~
00:40:067 (5) - Extend to white tick.
00:45:075 (4) - Use 0.0 Distance snap here to perfectly overlap the end point of the previous slider.

Good map! *star*
Wizard Of Orz
965 posts
Joined May 2008
Wizard Of Orz
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Fuuko
486 posts
Joined June 2009
Fuuko
Should I win kds for this? <3'



Download: TERRA - Catharsis Garden (ouranhshc) [Hard].osu
ouranhshc
2,338 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
ouranhshc
thx for the back up copy
Lunah_old
Lunah_old
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: TERRA - Catharsis Garden.osz
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ouranhshc
2,338 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
ouranhshc

LoweH wrote:

Fix the Whistle sound, is too acute

Modification with that sound


Starred
Thank you so much
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
New "Detailed" modding style for help maps <3

You don't have to follow my post, remember there are not directions, but suggestions!

[File Checking...]

Background: Yes.
Source: Yes.
Tags: Yes.
File Size: 2,73MB/24,00MB

[Overall]

Timing: BPM: 195,00 - Offset: 990 (Remember to resnap all notes.)

[Difficulties]

[Normal]

This difficulty is too hard for be the most easier. Create an easy, please.

00:35:043 (1,2,3,4,1) - A bit too hard for the most easier difficulty.
01:10:067 (3,4) - Spacing. Too close.
01:36:097 (1,1,1,1) - Too hard for a normal.

[Hard]

Why volume here is different respect the "Normal" difficulty?

Soft custom finish is too loud. Lower the volume.

00:18:021 (1,1,1,1,1) - Too much new combos here. Seems out of all the map.
01:34:052 (1,1,1,1) - ^
01:41:090 (1) - Silence the end of this spinner.
Crimmi
1,947 posts
Joined June 2009
Crimmi
Here You Go. ^.^

Download: TERRA - Catharsis Garden (ouranhshc) [Crimmi-Sane].osu
ouranhshc
2,338 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
ouranhshc
im srry but im really not liking it though. im probably not going to use it
jockeytiyan
1,269 posts
Joined July 2009
jockeytiyan
I enjoyed test-playing both diffs. The map is ok, I didn't find anything wrong except for the beat placement. It only looks a bit cramped up sometimes. But yeah, have a star~
Shulin
1,189 posts
Joined August 2009
Shulin
General:

- Find a new mp3? ~ I think a better quality mp3 would make the map awesome, plus you could turn the hitsound volume to max. It's no so bad lol.

Normal:

I enjoyed this.

00:14:037 (4) - Custom whistle should probably be on the start of this slider since its on every other one before it.
00:18:022 (1) - ^ Because it sounds odd without it.
00:42:022 (5) - Custom whistle seems out of place on the very last repeat.
00:50:022 (4) - New combo imo (following the lyrics), remove new combo from 00:51:014 (1) - if you take this suggestion.

Gameplay is great, no problems there imo.

Hard:

~ BG color to black on this difficulty.

Some of the slider shapes here do feel a little random:

00:10:068 (3) - Looks out of place.
00:11:091 (6) - ^ - At least try and make these to look alike lol they cover the same distance on the timeline.
00:20:006 (4) - Place the start of this on the start point of 00:18:083 (2) -
00:33:045 (4) - Looks ugly?
01:07:029 (3) - This was is random, I'd redraw this one.

Nice no major issues, good gameplay :D

~ Star
ouranhshc
2,338 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
ouranhshc

Shulin wrote:

General:

- Find a new mp3? ~ I think a better quality mp3 would make the map awesome, plus you could turn the hitsound volume to max. It's no so bad lol.

Normal:

I enjoyed this.

00:14:037 (4) - Custom whistle should probably be on the start of this slider since its on every other one before it.done
00:18:022 (1) - ^ Because it sounds odd without it.done
00:42:022 (5) - Custom whistle seems out of place on the very last repeat.done
00:50:022 (4) - New combo imo (following the lyrics), remove new combo from 00:51:014 (1) - if you take this suggestion.done

Gameplay is great, no problems there imo.

Hard:

~ BG color to black on this difficulty.done

Some of the slider shapes here do feel a little random:

00:10:068 (3) - Looks out of place.done
00:11:091 (6) - ^ - At least try and make these to look alike lol they cover the same distance on the timeline.fixed
00:20:006 (4) - Place the start of this on the start point of 00:18:083 (2) -nah
00:33:045 (4) - Looks ugly?its "was" ugly
01:07:029 (3) - This was is random, I'd redraw this one.fixed

Nice no major issues, good gameplay :D

~ Star
Yay
Jarby
2,963 posts
Joined August 2008
Jarby
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Lokamp
2,530 posts
Joined January 2009
Lokamp
Normal
00:36:006 (2) - end it with finish
01:22:022 (3) - new combo
01:36:099 (1,2,3,4) - end these sliders with finish

Hard
01:08:022 (6) - end it with whistle
01:41:060 (4) - finish on this slider's start and end

Another lovely map well-packed means another star for you ;3
Wizard Of Orz
965 posts
Joined May 2008
Wizard Of Orz

ouranhshc wrote:

im srry but im really not liking it though. im probably not going to use it
lol
ShokuMasterLord
28 posts
Here since the beginning
ShokuMasterLord
Suggestions:
Hard:
00:19:913 (3) try making 4 closer to 3.
01:39:451-01:41:759 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) pretty, but move them towards the center; they're too far away.

Normal:
Looks cramped. Perhaps if you changed it to a higher ud or a lower circle size.
00:59:451(5) not sure if this is intentional but the stack would go on the five to match up with the vocals.

Very nice job.
Here's a star.
AngelHoney
2,155 posts
Joined May 2009
AngelHoney
nice map~

star :) :)

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hard

01:00:083 (4) - 01:00:836 to 01:00:836?

01:01:014 (5) - 01:01:143 to 01:01:451?

01:05:060 (3) - repeat to this slider ?

00:18:022 (1,2,3,4) - 0.5*bpm?

01:14:083 (1,2,3,4) - 0.5*bpm?

01:34:052 (1,2,3,4) - 0.5*bpm?
Crazy Jay
482 posts
Joined October 2008
Crazy Jay
wow,it's really an awesome map,I like it.>w<~
[Normal]
nice

[Hard]
00:14:374(3,4,5) - how about change it like this?
00:51:143(1,2,3) - how about add a note at 00:50:990

Star~~~
ouranhshc
2,338 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
ouranhshc

AngelHoney wrote:

nice map~

star :) :)

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hard

01:00:083 (4) - 01:00:836 to 01:00:836?wut.

01:01:014 (5) - 01:01:143 to 01:01:451?wut.

01:05:060 (3) - repeat to this slider ?done

00:18:022 (1,2,3,4) - 0.5*bpm?nah

01:14:083 (1,2,3,4) - 0.5*bpm?nah

01:34:052 (1,2,3,4) - 0.5*bpm?nah


Crazy Jay wrote:

wow,it's really an awesome map,I like it.>w<~
[Normal]
nicethx XD

[Hard]
00:14:374(3,4,5) - how about change it like this?[attachment=0:251a1]example.jpg[/attachment:251a1]done
00:51:143(1,2,3) - how about add a note at 00:50:990done

Star~~~
ShaggoN
689 posts
Joined September 2008
ShaggoN
Blue: Sugestion. Should take good effects.
Green: Notification or cosmetic issue. May, but don't have to be fixed.
Yellow: Should be fixed.
Red: Have to be fixed.

[Normal]
  1. 00:04:052 (3,4) - Little spacing issue
[Hard]
  1. 00:02:083 (1) - Move it one grid down to make line with 2 and 3. Looks better imo.
Awesome job. I love hitsound work. Starr'd
Lybydose
osu! Alumni
2,024 posts
Joined January 2009
Lybydose
Offset feels a bit late, try -15ms

Normal:

The section from 00:30:048 to 00:37:056 follows a rhythm that isn't really very intuitive (at least for "normal"). The whistle placement also makes the whole thing seem wrong. This also happens later in the song around 01:20:094 and 01:26:048. You're setting the whistles to sync up with the lyrics, but the map is not following the lyrics, so it ends up sounding strange.

01:12:068 (1) - extend this by 1/2 to the red tick

Hard:

Much better now with the increased OD.

01:24:022 (6) - This slider is kind of strange. It sounds better if you end it at 01:24:022 to follow the vocals (and maybe put a custom whistle on it?)
01:27:056 - maybe add a circle?

hitsound suggestions for hard:

00:18:022 (1,2,3,4,5) - The whistles sound better me if placed on the 1, 3, and 5 start points, instead of the 2 and 4.
01:34:052 (1,2,3,4) - the whistles sound out of place here
01:36:099 (1) - maybe place a whistle here to go with the rest of the pattern
01:40:068 (1) - ^

You might want to make an easier difficulty too.
arien666
6,290 posts
Joined May 2009
arien666
[Normal]
00:05:29(4,5) - They're close with (3)'s end than other's. Maybe you need to check them :3
01:09:29(7,8) - ^ but (6)'s end

[Hard]
00:08:97(2) - [Suggestion] How about move a little up to align with (1)'s end?
00:45:74(4) - A little stack issue :3 [Suggestion] How about move a little down?
00:48:05(3) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid down?
00:48:82(6) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid left?
00:56:97(2) - [Minor suggestion] How about align with 00:56:35(1)'s end?
01:28:66(1,2,3,4) - [Suggestion] How about make line pattern with (1)'s end,(2),(3),(4)'s start?

:3...
TERRA song XD
Good map and good luck for you XD

Here's my star :3
Aoitenshi
711 posts
Joined February 2009
Aoitenshi
This is a very well done beatmap, STAR!
Xgor
Elite Mapper
2,534 posts
Joined April 2009
Xgor
Here is mine :D (Change the name of the difficulty if you want)
Download: TERRA - Catharsis Garden (ouranhshc) [Xgoeasy].osu

I couldn't find anything wrong with the other diffs and i loved how action packed Hard are! :D
*star*
0_o
2,155 posts
Joined December 2008
0_o
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Card N'FoRcE
osu! Alumni
4,058 posts
Here since the beginning
Card N'FoRcE
- General:
  • KIAI section is really long. I suggest KIAI from 00:57:605 to 01:17:297 and from 01:27:143 to the end.
    If you are not willing to follow that suggestion, at least fix the beginning of the KIAI section: it should start at 00:57:605
- Xgoeasy:
  • .Opinions:
    Please capitalize the E in the name of the difficulty :P
- Normal:
  • .Opinions:
    Map is good, but everything in the last part is 1/1 D:
- Hard:
  • .Suggestions:
    00:14:35 (3) - missing hitsound at the beginning?
    00:47:074 (1) - ok, it's a new combo, but i still think that it would be better to move it farther :P
Good job ^^
Star'd
Mafiamaster
osu! Alumni
3,460 posts
Joined July 2008
Mafiamaster
Xgor~
Add Xgor to the tags in this difficulty.

Normal~
00:02:83 - Remove new combo.
00:03:29 (3) - New combo.
00:04:06 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:04:52 (4) - New combo.

Kiai seems a bit long as stated by Card N'FoRcE.
Please reduce the length of your Kiai Time on all difficulties.

Edit: Bubbled!
ouranhshc
2,338 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
ouranhshc
thank you mafia
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
I can't rank maps for the first week, So I have to reject your request. Sorry :(
ouranhshc
2,338 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
ouranhshc

osuplayer111 wrote:

I can't rank maps for the first week, So I have to reject your request. Sorry :(
its ok. it got bubbled while it was in your queue
ztrot
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