1. BGのサイズがぐちゃぐちゃなんで縦だけでも768になおして
2. 無音のsliderslide入れてください
3. PreviewTimeが統一されてないのと青線だと違和感があるので手前の白線の上あたりが一番いいと思います。
4. コンボカラーも統一してね
5. がいさんとなしゃさんの気合タイムがあってると思うからそっちにあわせたほうが自然だと思います。
6. soft-hitwhistle1っていうファイルは削除してね

alacat wrote:

yo

[General]

1. BGのサイズがぐちゃぐちゃなんで縦だけでも768になおして
2. 無音のsliderslide入れてください
3. PreviewTimeが統一されてないのと青線だと違和感があるので手前の白線の上あたりが一番いいと思います。
4. コンボカラーも統一してね
5. がいさんとなしゃさんの気合タイムがあってると思うからそっちにあわせたほうが自然だと思います。
6. soft-hitwhistle1っていうファイルは削除してね

1. Audio lead-in seem a bit too low for me, I'd suggest do audio lead-in of two for all diff, that way you get about 3 full beats to prepare before the map starts (if the player needs it.) Make sure you change to 2 for ALL diff
   
2. I'm really concerned about Normal and Hard Gap , will take another look to see if its better (after my mod) but it shouldn't be that bad, since the difficulty icons are in ascending order, there no's gap in them.
   
3. Add B_e_N_i into the tags, It would be easier to search name, very similar to what you do with Nasya.

1. 00:02:056 (3) - Start of slider here, should have a whistle added too it, the whole section after this have so many whistle, little strange not to have whistle here to stay consistent.
   
2. 00:46:550 (1) - End of this slider has really strong beat, needs more of a whistle to the end of this too.
   
3. 00:50:595 (3) - Obviously the slider overlap at the end is noticeably to you, at least make sure the end of slider is stacked with start of 00:48:236 (2) - to prevent the slider from looking ugly.
   
4. 00:53:292 (3,4) - Little strange for me , o.o? seems intentional but probably just want to turn into 1 slider here, the whistles don't sound really good with iit
   
   
5. 01:05:427 (1) - Spinner end feels, more appropriate at the red tick than white tick, since the instrument starts kicking in there, but this is entirely up to you :3
   
6. 01:31:045 (3) - Remove finish from the end, music stops so fast at the end of the slider.

1. 00:11:494 (1) - Unsnapped slider end
   
2. 00:11:831 (2) - ^
   
3. 00:12:505 (5) - ^
   
4. 00:25:988 (4) - For here, I think it would be more fun~ if you ctrl+g this whole slider, since next note is pretty much long hold and little boring to play, make it more challenging! and it make consistent to you jump at 00:31:719 (1) -
   
5. 01:25:314 (4) - ^
   
6. 00:49:247 (1,2) - On slider end, add claps on both of them , to match with the sounds in the instrument, pretty much.
   
7. 00:54:134 (3) - The whistle here, sound really really noisy, I'd suggest remove whistle here , and also maybe at 00:48:236 (2) - , 00:45:539 (2) - please reconsider remove some whistles too.
8. 00:59:696 (7) - Remove whistle at start?~

1. OD 8, is way too much for this diff, you don't map much circles , in fact its balanced , since OD 8 only really fit the kiai, everything else OD 8 not really fit. I suggest reduce OD to 7
   
2. 00:13:854 (4) - Use more DS here, it would make the map more fun, and since this is slider to slider jump, higher DS with jump fit well with the music and the your style of mapping.
   
3. 00:33:067 (1) - I'd suggest revise your rhythm , to this : since you want to map the triplet, like you did before at 00:27:505 (1,2,3) - you can try this :
   
   
4. 00:42:505 (1) - Heh, just to be honest. Little confusing to play. maybe remove one of the reverses and add note to replace the reverse? personally I find this better :
   
   
5. 01:01:045 (4) - Same as 00:13:854 (4) - , would be more fun that way.
   
6. 01:06:269 (2,3) - The square pattern here would look better if you moved this whole thing way more into the left, right now the square looks really weird to me.
   
7. 01:22:955 (1) - Wowowow , hmmm well this pattern is really harsh, but since it looks nice, its okay. but I really want you to decrease DS here, if you can . you'll get same effect.

Tari wrote:

[Nasya's Hard]

1. 00:11:494 (1) - Unsnapped slider end
   
2. 00:11:831 (2) - ^
   
3. 00:12:505 (5) - ^
   
4. 00:25:988 (4) - For here, I think it would be more fun~ if you ctrl+g this whole slider, since next note is pretty much long hold and little boring to play, make it more challenging! and it make consistent to you jump at 00:31:719 (1) -
   
5. 01:25:314 (4) - ^
   
6. 00:49:247 (1,2) - On slider end, add claps on both of them , to match with the sounds in the instrument, pretty much.
   
7. 00:54:134 (3) - The whistle here, sound really really noisy, I'd suggest remove whistle here , and also maybe at 00:48:236 (2) - , 00:45:539 (2) - please reconsider remove some whistles too.
8. 00:59:696 (7) - Remove whistle at start?~

Tari wrote:

Hi B e N i ~

Red : Must be Fixed
Blue : Highly Fix
Black : Suggestion

[Guy's Normal]

1. 00:02:056 (3) - Start of slider here, should have a whistle added too it, the whole section after this have so many whistle, little strange not to have whistle here to stay consistent. - fixed
   
2. 00:46:550 (1) - End of this slider has really strong beat, needs more of a whistle to the end of this too. - fixed
   
3. 00:50:595 (3) - Obviously the slider overlap at the end is noticeably to you, at least make sure the end of slider is stacked with start of 00:48:236 (2) - to prevent the slider from looking ugly. - fixed
   
4. 00:53:292 (3,4) - Little strange for me , o.o? seems intentional but probably just want to turn into 1 slider here, the whistles don't sound really good with iit - fixed
   
   
5. 01:05:427 (1) - Spinner end feels, more appropriate at the red tick than white tick, since the instrument starts kicking in there, but this is entirely up to you :3 - hmm, i think that current spinner end fit the song so keep it~
   
6. 01:31:045 (3) - Remove finish from the end, music stops so fast at the end of the slider. - okay

Tari wrote:

[General]

1. Audio lead-in seem a bit too low for me, I'd suggest do audio lead-in of two for all diff, that way you get about 3 full beats to prepare before the map starts (if the player needs it.) Make sure you change to 2 for ALL diff
   
2. I'm really concerned about Normal and Hard Gap , will take another look to see if its better (after my mod) but it shouldn't be that bad, since the difficulty icons are in ascending order, there no's gap in them.
   
3. Add B_e_N_i into the tags, It would be easier to search name, very similar to what you do with Nasya.

[Insane]

1. OD 8, is way too much for this diff, you don't map much circles , in fact its balanced , since OD 8 only really fit the kiai, everything else OD 8 not really fit. I suggest reduce OD to 7
   
2. 00:13:854 (4) - Use more DS here, it would make the map more fun, and since this is slider to slider jump, higher DS with jump fit well with the music and the your style of mapping.
   
3. 00:33:067 (1) - I'd suggest revise your rhythm , to this : since you want to map the triplet, like you did before at 00:27:505 (1,2,3) - you can try this :
   
   
4. 00:42:505 (1) - Heh, just to be honest. Little confusing to play. maybe remove one of the reverses and add note to replace the reverse? personally I find this better :
   
   
5. 01:01:045 (4) - Same as 00:13:854 (4) - , would be more fun that way.
   
6. 01:06:269 (2,3) - The square pattern here would look better if you moved this whole thing way more into the left, right now the square looks really weird to me.
   
7. 01:22:955 (1) - Wowowow , hmmm well this pattern is really harsh, but since it looks nice, its okay. but I really want you to decrease DS here, if you can . you'll get same effect.

Tari wrote:

Changed BG to more fitting size, and add missing video in hard

Rebubbled (ノ･ω･)ノ

1. 00:44:528 (3,4) - Using the same DS as 00:44:865 (4,5) is quite misleading as the rhythm gaps between them are totally different. Try reducing the DS of 00:44:528 (3,4) like what u did on 00:47:224 (3,4) .
2. 00:50:258 (4,7) - Stack them perfectly.
3. 00:53:966 - Add a circle here to follow the instrument strictly? as the stress is quite heavy.
4. 01:31:887 (1,2) - Swap these objects? It makes more sense since vocal stress are on 01:31:887 and 01:32:056, while 01:32:224 is just echo.

1. Disable Widescreen support as other diffs.
2. 00:20:932 (1,2,3,4) - It's quite surprising these 1/3 patterns are using even larger DS than those in Insane. Please reduce them a bit to a level similar to or smaller than Insane by the scaling function of editor.

IamKwaN wrote:

[Hard]

1. Disable Widescreen support as other diffs.
   ok
2. 00:20:932 (1,2,3,4) - It's quite surprising these 1/3 patterns are using even larger DS than those in Insane. Please reduce them a bit to a level similar to or smaller than Insane by the scaling function of editor.
   ok

IamKwaN wrote:

[Insane]

1. 00:44:528 (3,4) - Using the same DS as 00:44:865 (4,5) is quite misleading as the rhythm gaps between them are totally different. Try reducing the DS of 00:44:528 (3,4) like what u did on 00:47:224 (3,4) . keep
2. 00:50:258 (4,7) - Stack them perfectly. Fixed
3. 00:53:966 - Add a circle here to follow the instrument strictly? as the stress is quite heavy. Fixed
4. 01:31:887 (1,2) - Swap these objects? It makes more sense since vocal stress are on 01:31:887 and 01:32:056, while 01:32:224 is just echo. Fixed

1. 01:32:224 - Decrease the volume to 50% as the current finish is too loud.

1. These should be snapped as 1/6, try http://puu.sh/bwTz0/a39d2c8829.jpg or http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2029232 using 1.5x DS to avoid overlap.

IamKwaN wrote:

Ah, just several points. No KD.
[Insane]

1. 01:32:224 - Decrease the volume to 50% as the current finish is too loud.

IamKwaN wrote:

ShiraKai wrote:

おめしゅ

Melophobia wrote:

Nice map.