-Nanaka- wrote:

リクエストありがとうございます

[Insane]

1. 00:12:842 (3,4) - 形が違い見た目が悪いので４をコピペしませんか＃　http://puu.sh/9bGCr/40e4cf0376.jpg
2. 00:15:118 - addNoteで３連に、次の連打も入りやすくなると思います
3. 00:15:202 (5) - 同じく　00:14:191 (1) - これをCtrl+H+J
   ↑を受け入れた場合00:15:033 (4) - これも位置調整お願いします
4. 00:15:539 (2) - x276 y64に移動
5. 00:18:236 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ここら一帯ごちゃごちゃして汚いのでコード使ってみてください
   回転などで単発位置調整してます
   

   84,312,18236,6,0,P|128:332|180:328,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   308,220,18573,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   256,120,18741,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   256,316,18910,5,8,0:0:0:0:
   428,208,19078,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   256,120,19247,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   256,316,19415,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   96,248,19584,6,0,L|56:136,1,90,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   181,85,19921,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   246,195,20090,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   335,97,20258,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   143,177,20427,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   352,208,20595,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   260,24,20764,1,0,0:0:0:0:

6. 00:28:348 (3) - Ctrl+G
7. 00:29:022 (1,3) - ここも＃同様です１をコピペするといいと思います
   もっというなら00:29:528 (2) - このblanketが左右対称になる位置が綺麗です、x44y256辺り　http://puu.sh/9bHBS/c1b390b138.jpg
8. 00:30:202 (4) - ↑を受け入れた場合 x120y48へ移動
9. 00:31:045 (3) - ここもCtrl+Gした方が流れいいです
10. 00:30:876 (2) - ついでにこの子もx263y142に置いてあげるとGood
11. 00:32:393 (3) - 同じくG
12. 00:32:224 (2) - この子はx245y214
13. 00:32:899 (4) - Ctrl+Gを受け入れた場合x358 y196に置いてあげると見た目も流れも良いかと
14. 00:42:505 (1) - 最近こういうの見なかったので新鮮で好きです ty
15. 00:43:854 (1,5) - ここまでのClap全削除提案00:54:640 (1) - 盛り上がるのはここからで、それまでのスネアは何を拾ってるのか分からず曲とも合ってないと思います もう少し考えてみるので一応キープで～
16. 00:46:213 (8) - 前のパートから変調が見られないのにここでいきなり30％は混乱しました00:43:854 (1) - ここから30.40統一で良いかと
17. 00:53:207 - addNoteで３連に曲調にも合うと思います
18. 00:59:191 (7,8) - 詰まってるのでx443y120に
19. 00:59:275 - ここにも３連合うと思いますが、ここはお任せします
20. 01:09:472 (2,3) - ここも前のパターンを引き継ぎ このままでいきます～
    01:09:472 (2) - x336y256 ^
    01:09:641 (3) - x244y344へ ^
    
21. 01:10:146 (1) - 上の提案を受け入れた場合1.2で飛ぶとかっこよくなると思うのでx446y362へ ^
22. 01:16:550 (1) - てまえと同じように少し傾けましょう　http://puu.sh/9bMMH/ef2f3fb3d6.jpg
23. 01:18:488 - addNoteで３連に
24. 01:25:314 (4) - 近すぎるので２の頭にスタックさせたほうが打ちやすいかと
25. 01:25:483 (5) - 01:24:640 (2) - のパターンを引き継ぎ微調整しませんか？　http://puu.sh/9bMRO/64752ebc34.jpg
26. 01:25:820 (6,7,8) - ここはスタックではなく３角作ったほうが良いと思います　http://puu.sh/9bN3C/1bf9a36eb9.jpg
27. 01:29:022 (1,3,3) - この３つを少し移動してあげれば綺麗になり打ちやすくなります　http://puu.sh/9bNbX/15731388f4.jpg

[NewCombo]

1. 00:15:202 (1) - 不要なNC
2. 00:37:112 (5) - 前後のパターンを見る感じここに入れるとバランス良くなるかと
3. 01:10:820 (3) - 盛り上がるのはここから(KiaiTimeなど)なので手前削除しここにNC
4. 01:14:865 (2) - 手前削除しここに
5. 01:16:213 (10) - 次のを削除しここに
6. 01:22:955 (7) - 飛びますしここにもあると分かり易いかと

InsaneはNCのバランスと見た目が少し気になったのでそこを改善すればよさそうです
言葉使いが変になってる所あると思いますが許してください

以上です、頑張ってください
mod time: 5 hours

-Nanaka- wrote:

[Hard]

1. 00:01:719 (2) - 縦より寝かせたほうがいいかと
   OK!
2. 00:45:539 (2,2) - この音取りは曲に合ってなく混乱を招くと思います、こういうのはどうですか？
   00:45:202 (1,2) - ここから　http://puu.sh/9bOpB/d385f95c59.jpg
   00:47:899 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/9bOsg/04107e9a1b.jpg
   また指摘きたら変えてみようと思います…
3. 01:27:168 (2) - 手前の１に重ねたほうが見やすく綺麗かと　http://puu.sh/9bOFZ/6ada14e3b2.jpg
   OK!
4. 01:31:887 (1) - 手前のパターン引き継ぎx440 y136はどうですか？
   このままでいきます
   
   ナイスハードだと思います

Supi wrote:

Insane

00:16:382 (1,2,3,4) - 1スライダーの位置と向きを少し変えて(1,2,3,4)で５角形を作ると綺麗にみえ 若干変えました～
01:21:943 (2) - ここは01:21:606 (1)をコピペ OK_

1. BGのサイズがぐちゃぐちゃなんで縦だけでも768になおして
2. 無音のsliderslide入れてください
3. PreviewTimeが統一されてないのと青線だと違和感があるので手前の白線の上あたりが一番いいと思います。
4. コンボカラーも統一してね
5. がいさんとなしゃさんの気合タイムがあってると思うからそっちにあわせたほうが自然だと思います。
6. soft-hitwhistle1っていうファイルは削除してね

alacat wrote:

yo

[General]

1. BGのサイズがぐちゃぐちゃなんで縦だけでも768になおして
2. 無音のsliderslide入れてください
3. PreviewTimeが統一されてないのと青線だと違和感があるので手前の白線の上あたりが一番いいと思います。
4. コンボカラーも統一してね
5. がいさんとなしゃさんの気合タイムがあってると思うからそっちにあわせたほうが自然だと思います。
6. soft-hitwhistle1っていうファイルは削除してね

1. Audio lead-in seem a bit too low for me, I'd suggest do audio lead-in of two for all diff, that way you get about 3 full beats to prepare before the map starts (if the player needs it.) Make sure you change to 2 for ALL diff
   
2. I'm really concerned about Normal and Hard Gap , will take another look to see if its better (after my mod) but it shouldn't be that bad, since the difficulty icons are in ascending order, there no's gap in them.
   
3. Add B_e_N_i into the tags, It would be easier to search name, very similar to what you do with Nasya.

1. 00:02:056 (3) - Start of slider here, should have a whistle added too it, the whole section after this have so many whistle, little strange not to have whistle here to stay consistent.
   
2. 00:46:550 (1) - End of this slider has really strong beat, needs more of a whistle to the end of this too.
   
3. 00:50:595 (3) - Obviously the slider overlap at the end is noticeably to you, at least make sure the end of slider is stacked with start of 00:48:236 (2) - to prevent the slider from looking ugly.
   
4. 00:53:292 (3,4) - Little strange for me , o.o? seems intentional but probably just want to turn into 1 slider here, the whistles don't sound really good with iit
   
   
5. 01:05:427 (1) - Spinner end feels, more appropriate at the red tick than white tick, since the instrument starts kicking in there, but this is entirely up to you :3
   
6. 01:31:045 (3) - Remove finish from the end, music stops so fast at the end of the slider.

1. 00:11:494 (1) - Unsnapped slider end
   
2. 00:11:831 (2) - ^
   
3. 00:12:505 (5) - ^
   
4. 00:25:988 (4) - For here, I think it would be more fun~ if you ctrl+g this whole slider, since next note is pretty much long hold and little boring to play, make it more challenging! and it make consistent to you jump at 00:31:719 (1) -
   
5. 01:25:314 (4) - ^
   
6. 00:49:247 (1,2) - On slider end, add claps on both of them , to match with the sounds in the instrument, pretty much.
   
7. 00:54:134 (3) - The whistle here, sound really really noisy, I'd suggest remove whistle here , and also maybe at 00:48:236 (2) - , 00:45:539 (2) - please reconsider remove some whistles too.
8. 00:59:696 (7) - Remove whistle at start?~

1. OD 8, is way too much for this diff, you don't map much circles , in fact its balanced , since OD 8 only really fit the kiai, everything else OD 8 not really fit. I suggest reduce OD to 7
   
2. 00:13:854 (4) - Use more DS here, it would make the map more fun, and since this is slider to slider jump, higher DS with jump fit well with the music and the your style of mapping.
   
3. 00:33:067 (1) - I'd suggest revise your rhythm , to this : since you want to map the triplet, like you did before at 00:27:505 (1,2,3) - you can try this :
   
   
4. 00:42:505 (1) - Heh, just to be honest. Little confusing to play. maybe remove one of the reverses and add note to replace the reverse? personally I find this better :
   
   
5. 01:01:045 (4) - Same as 00:13:854 (4) - , would be more fun that way.
   
6. 01:06:269 (2,3) - The square pattern here would look better if you moved this whole thing way more into the left, right now the square looks really weird to me.
   
7. 01:22:955 (1) - Wowowow , hmmm well this pattern is really harsh, but since it looks nice, its okay. but I really want you to decrease DS here, if you can . you'll get same effect.

Tari wrote:

[Nasya's Hard]

1. 00:11:494 (1) - Unsnapped slider end
   
2. 00:11:831 (2) - ^
   
3. 00:12:505 (5) - ^
   
4. 00:25:988 (4) - For here, I think it would be more fun~ if you ctrl+g this whole slider, since next note is pretty much long hold and little boring to play, make it more challenging! and it make consistent to you jump at 00:31:719 (1) -
   
5. 01:25:314 (4) - ^
   
6. 00:49:247 (1,2) - On slider end, add claps on both of them , to match with the sounds in the instrument, pretty much.
   
7. 00:54:134 (3) - The whistle here, sound really really noisy, I'd suggest remove whistle here , and also maybe at 00:48:236 (2) - , 00:45:539 (2) - please reconsider remove some whistles too.
8. 00:59:696 (7) - Remove whistle at start?~

Tari wrote:

Hi B e N i ~

Red : Must be Fixed
Blue : Highly Fix
Black : Suggestion

[Guy's Normal]

1. 00:02:056 (3) - Start of slider here, should have a whistle added too it, the whole section after this have so many whistle, little strange not to have whistle here to stay consistent. - fixed
   
2. 00:46:550 (1) - End of this slider has really strong beat, needs more of a whistle to the end of this too. - fixed
   
3. 00:50:595 (3) - Obviously the slider overlap at the end is noticeably to you, at least make sure the end of slider is stacked with start of 00:48:236 (2) - to prevent the slider from looking ugly. - fixed
   
4. 00:53:292 (3,4) - Little strange for me , o.o? seems intentional but probably just want to turn into 1 slider here, the whistles don't sound really good with iit - fixed
   
   
5. 01:05:427 (1) - Spinner end feels, more appropriate at the red tick than white tick, since the instrument starts kicking in there, but this is entirely up to you :3 - hmm, i think that current spinner end fit the song so keep it~
   
6. 01:31:045 (3) - Remove finish from the end, music stops so fast at the end of the slider. - okay

Tari wrote:

[General]

1. Audio lead-in seem a bit too low for me, I'd suggest do audio lead-in of two for all diff, that way you get about 3 full beats to prepare before the map starts (if the player needs it.) Make sure you change to 2 for ALL diff
   
2. I'm really concerned about Normal and Hard Gap , will take another look to see if its better (after my mod) but it shouldn't be that bad, since the difficulty icons are in ascending order, there no's gap in them.
   
3. Add B_e_N_i into the tags, It would be easier to search name, very similar to what you do with Nasya.

[Insane]

1. OD 8, is way too much for this diff, you don't map much circles , in fact its balanced , since OD 8 only really fit the kiai, everything else OD 8 not really fit. I suggest reduce OD to 7
   
2. 00:13:854 (4) - Use more DS here, it would make the map more fun, and since this is slider to slider jump, higher DS with jump fit well with the music and the your style of mapping.
   
3. 00:33:067 (1) - I'd suggest revise your rhythm , to this : since you want to map the triplet, like you did before at 00:27:505 (1,2,3) - you can try this :
   
   
4. 00:42:505 (1) - Heh, just to be honest. Little confusing to play. maybe remove one of the reverses and add note to replace the reverse? personally I find this better :
   
   
5. 01:01:045 (4) - Same as 00:13:854 (4) - , would be more fun that way.
   
6. 01:06:269 (2,3) - The square pattern here would look better if you moved this whole thing way more into the left, right now the square looks really weird to me.
   
7. 01:22:955 (1) - Wowowow , hmmm well this pattern is really harsh, but since it looks nice, its okay. but I really want you to decrease DS here, if you can . you'll get same effect.

Tari wrote:

Changed BG to more fitting size, and add missing video in hard

Rebubbled (ノ･ω･)ノ

1. 00:44:528 (3,4) - Using the same DS as 00:44:865 (4,5) is quite misleading as the rhythm gaps between them are totally different. Try reducing the DS of 00:44:528 (3,4) like what u did on 00:47:224 (3,4) .
2. 00:50:258 (4,7) - Stack them perfectly.
3. 00:53:966 - Add a circle here to follow the instrument strictly? as the stress is quite heavy.
4. 01:31:887 (1,2) - Swap these objects? It makes more sense since vocal stress are on 01:31:887 and 01:32:056, while 01:32:224 is just echo.

1. Disable Widescreen support as other diffs.
2. 00:20:932 (1,2,3,4) - It's quite surprising these 1/3 patterns are using even larger DS than those in Insane. Please reduce them a bit to a level similar to or smaller than Insane by the scaling function of editor.

IamKwaN wrote:

[Hard]

1. Disable Widescreen support as other diffs.
   ok
2. 00:20:932 (1,2,3,4) - It's quite surprising these 1/3 patterns are using even larger DS than those in Insane. Please reduce them a bit to a level similar to or smaller than Insane by the scaling function of editor.
   ok

IamKwaN wrote:

[Insane]

1. 00:44:528 (3,4) - Using the same DS as 00:44:865 (4,5) is quite misleading as the rhythm gaps between them are totally different. Try reducing the DS of 00:44:528 (3,4) like what u did on 00:47:224 (3,4) . keep
2. 00:50:258 (4,7) - Stack them perfectly. Fixed
3. 00:53:966 - Add a circle here to follow the instrument strictly? as the stress is quite heavy. Fixed
4. 01:31:887 (1,2) - Swap these objects? It makes more sense since vocal stress are on 01:31:887 and 01:32:056, while 01:32:224 is just echo. Fixed

1. 01:32:224 - Decrease the volume to 50% as the current finish is too loud.

1. These should be snapped as 1/6, try http://puu.sh/bwTz0/a39d2c8829.jpg or http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2029232 using 1.5x DS to avoid overlap.

IamKwaN wrote:

Ah, just several points. No KD.
[Insane]

1. 01:32:224 - Decrease the volume to 50% as the current finish is too loud.

IamKwaN wrote:

ShiraKai wrote:

おめしゅ

Melophobia wrote:

Nice map.