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LIGHTS - ICE

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Kitty McWittles
141 posts
Joined September 2008
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Kitty McWittles
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, November 26, 2009 at 5:40:15 PM

Artist: LIGHTS
Title: ICE
BPM: 110
Filesize: 10123kb
Play Time: 02:58
Difficulties Available:
  1. Fire (4.38 stars, 209 notes)
  2. Ice (1.93 stars, 66 notes)
Download: LIGHTS - ICE
Download: LIGHTS - ICE (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Finished [Fire], moved to Pending. Still waiting on getting a better mp3, but everything else is ready for modding.
(especially the clusterfuck part in [Fire] :D)

-James', Kytoxid's, and osuplayer's mods.
Last edited by Kitty McWittles , edited 3 times in total.
James2250
osu! Alumni
4,059 posts
Joined July 2008
James2250
*don't forget about background*

Ice:
If this is going to be your easiest diff then you will need to lower hp drain

Fire:
Looks good so far

*star*
Kytoxid
osu! Alumni
1,369 posts
Joined April 2009
Kytoxid
[General]

Needs a background; remember to set background colour similar to the actual background once you've found one.
Source? Tags?
Consider removing the countdown.
That MP3 is really soft; find a louder one, or use Audacity to make it louder?

It's pretty evident that grid snap was on for the whole beatmap in both cases; this causes some ugly formations and inconsistent spacing at times, especially when sliders come into play. Please readjust note positioning without grid snap.

Offset is way late, take 40 milliseconds off. (14,860)

[Ice]

00:54:071 (5,6) - Please don't cover up a repeat.
01:31:026 (1) - Very sudden jump in difficulty during Kiai.
01:33:071 (1,2,3) - Timing is way off.
01:44:035 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Ugly, please arrange more nicely.

[Fire]

Drain is too high; my bar was at 50% at the first break and I only missed one slider and had 90% acc...

00:54:013 (1,2,3,4) - Uneven spacing.

I'm guessing most of the breaks will be filled.

01:57:040 (1,2,3,4,5) - More uneven spacing, really watch for grid snap's issues.
02:04:049 (3,4) - Another issue with grid snap; notes don't get stacked neatly under endpoints.
02:05:031 (5,6) - Pretty evident here that you pretty much ran out of space to properly place notes, please rearrange.
02:22:022 (4) - Adjust the slider so that the endpoint falls more neatly on 6.
02:32:058 (3,4) - Spacing!
02:47:058 (1) - Could be more symmetrical, make sure the central tick falls in the middle and that the start and end points are on the same height.
02:54:013 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This chain is 1 slider too long.
02:58:022 (5) - Put this under the startpoint of 3.

Lemme know when it's done, and I'll take another look. :)
Kitty McWittles
141 posts
Joined September 2008
Topic Starter
Kitty McWittles
The basics - bg, combo colors, source, etc, I'll work on after I finish Fire.

Offset changed, HP drains lowered, countdown removed, working on getting a better MP3 and I'm working on changing a bunch of the "ugly" patterns.

Making most of Kytoxid's changes.
02:05:031 (5,6) - Pretty evident here that you pretty much ran out of space to properly place notes, please rearrange.
I actually didn't - and I'll think about rearranging :P

I'll resubmit after I finish [Fire], thought I was really hoping for more attention on 1:55-2:10ish since it's kinda clusterfucked x_x
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
New "Detailed" modding style for help maps <3

You don't have to follow my post, remember there are not directions, but suggestions!

[File Checking...]

Background: Yes.
Source: No. (Find some source if possible.)
Tags: No. (Add some tags.)
File Size: 10,3MB/24,00MB

[Overall]

Timing: BPM: 110,00 - Offset: 14.870 (Remember to resnap all notes.)

[Difficulties]

[Ice]

Increase HP Drain by 1 tick for balance with Overall difficulty?

00:29:004 (3,4) - Spacing.
00:54:013 (4) - New combo.

[Fire]

00:29:004 (4) - Slider repeat is partially hidden.
00:43:049 (5) - Add one repeat to this.
00:44:017 (6) - Shorten it by 1/4 and start here -> 00:44:314.
02:27:040 (7) - Hidden slider. Maybe because of the colour.
02:36:095 (7) - New combo.
Kitty McWittles
141 posts
Joined September 2008
Topic Starter
Kitty McWittles
Made all changes above.

I've still waiting on my friend who introduced me to LIGHTS to get a better mp3 and a source/some tags, I'll update all that as soon as I can after she gets back to me.
Infinity_old
286 posts
Joined October 2009
Infinity_old
~star
snowflakepixie
9 posts
Joined March 2013
snowflakepixie
I don't know if you're still checking this, but it's unranked and it's a good beatmap. Could I do a guest diff for something between Ice and Fire? Water maybe?
snowflakepixie
9 posts
Joined March 2013
snowflakepixie
Whoops, I posted the same thing twice.
Lights2_old
1 post
Joined June 2017
Lights2_old
Hey could you re-upload this? dl seems to be dead.. ;-;
BanchoBot
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BanchoBot
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