Returning the favor for modding my WIP map!
(Note: I noticed that you said you're shooting for approval with this map instead of ranking: therefore, a lot of these really are just suggestions, since approved maps tend not to have as strict design standards as ranked maps.)
[AoI Mix]
00:12:948-00:15:748 - Might I suggest fusing these into one spinner, unless you've got a reason for why these are separate.
00:32:148 - I'd suggest separating the start of the blue combo from the green stack; in general, if you're stacking notes, they should all be the same distance apart.
00:46:508 (Blue combo) - Either separate 4 from the rest of the stack, or separate 1/2 and 3/4 into two separate stacks. It's another inconsistant distance problem.
00:57:748 (Red combo) -
I really really like this.01:42:508 - Begone with this pesky note! It's totally unnecessary, and it screws up the beginning of the spinner that follows.
01:46:148 - See above.
01:53:748-01:59:948 -
Again, I really really like this.02:07:548 (2-4) - This spacing's really weird and unnatural for notes this far apart. I'd suggest either stacking them or spacing them out. The same for the 2-4 in the next 3 combos.
02:20:588-02:23:394 - See first suggestion.
02:23:781 - The offset for this timing section should be 143,770; as it currently is, it's a bit late. You'll need to fix the Kiai Time section with this adjustment, as well.
02:31:770 (Blue combo) - These stacks should really be separated; sticking them all in one is just too darn confusing.
02:36:570 - Begone with this note!
[Collab]
00:15:448 - Too short. Like I tell everyone who makes spinners like this, I'd run through Autoplay and see how it does on each spinner. Generally, if it can't get more than 2000 bonus points, then it's virtually impossible for a human player to complete the spinner, which is just flat out unfair (especially with this map's HP drain level; it's almost like the player's being set up for failure).
00:44:948-00:46:448 -
I absolutely LOVE this part right here.00:57:848-01:00:948 -
And here.01:18:648 (2-3) - Switch these. I see what you were going for, and I admire the creativity, but you can't honestly expect anyone to move that precisely that quickly.
01:14:348 (Blue and Red Combos) - Again, I like the
idea behind what you were going for, but those jumps are just too wide for anyone to hit with any sort of decent accuracy (especially that red combo). Same goes for these two combos in the flipped section.
01:46:148 -
Not as bad as the first spinner, but you may still want to lengthen it just a TINY bit.Overall, just shy of perfection, but a damned fine start. I can tell you and the mappers behind the collab difficulty have put a lot of effort into this, and for that, have a star.
