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Wakeshima Kanon - killy killy JOKER (TV Size)

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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年6月6日 at 上午 11:31:06

Artist: Wakeshima Kanon
Title: killy killy JOKER (TV Size)
Source: Selector Infected WIXOSS
Tags: Wish Across opening card game battle loli girl Project Selector J.C.STAFF ZZHBOY Rūko Kominato
BPM: 90
Filesize: 21861kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.85 stars, 104 notes)
  2. Hard (4.73 stars, 237 notes)
  3. Insane (4.89 stars, 365 notes)
  4. Normal (4.2 stars, 160 notes)
  5. ZZH's Insane (4.83 stars, 336 notes)
Download: Wakeshima Kanon - killy killy JOKER (TV Size)
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Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#5 Ranked Map.
Easy by me
Normal
Hard
ZZH"s Insane : by ZZHBOY
Insane by me


Map log
2014/4/22 Video added(Thanks IamKwaN offer webiste download).(I remove this first,because the update system problem.)
2014/4/23 Hitsound added.
2014/4/25 ZZH"s Insane added.
2014/5/15 Background change,video added.
Thanks mod
Sweet Vanilla
liangv587
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Selisi
hi smallboat~ mutual in game ask~ 1st> <
[General]
  1. add “ZZHBOY” in tags
  2. combo color 红色有两个颜色很相近的删掉一个吧
  3. widescreen support 建议统一
[Insane]
  1. 00:11:449 (6) - 这个circle后面接的是三连 咱认为这里放跳不太好 00:11:283 (5) - 咱觉得可以通过这里放跳调整下
  2. 00:14:366 (8,1) - 这个为什么分开那么远呀 inconsistent
  3. 00:15:783 (1) - 乃这个梗应该00:15:616 (6,1) - spacing和00:14:783 (2,3) - 一样呀
  4. 00:23:283 (4) - 这个太远了 试着移动到(60,52)
  5. 00:24:449 (1,2) - ctrl+G
  6. 00:35:783 - 从这里开始乃的跳咱不太理解 00:36:116 (2) - 这里乃没有放跳,但是00:36:783 - 放了,然后00:37:449 (2) - 又没有放 00:38:116 (5) - 然后又有跳...spacing感觉挺乱的 玩起来很不舒服 建议乃统一一下小间距的spacing 比如00:36:116 (2,3) - 和00:36:283 (3,4) - ,00:37:449 (2,3) - 和00:37:616 (3,4) -
  7. 00:43:283 (8,9,10,1) - 乃这个flow有问题呀...(咱建议乃00:43:449 (9,1) - ctrl+G then 00:43:783 (1) - 移动到(220,128)
  8. 00:47:631 (8,1) - 这里哪里可以这样跳呀 跳的也有限度一点> < 00:47:131 (5,8) - ctrl+G
  9. 00:51:131 (3,4,5,6) - 这里的flow不太好看 咱也不知道怎么办 乃可以试着自己调整下
  10. 00:53:798 (3,4) - 这里怎么能这么跳呀 要跳也应该是00:54:131 (5) - 跳呀...{建议00:53:798 (3) - move to(64,236);00:53:964 (4) - move to (220,316);00:54:131 (5) - move to (232,76); 00:54:298 (6) - move to (124,308)}
  11. 00:56:964 (10,11,1) - 位子不太对 move to (192,116)试试呢?
  12. 01:01:881 (3,4,1,2,3) - 黑1分
  13. 01:13:631 (3) - move to (160,332)
  14. 01:14:464 (1) - 这里建议不要折返 加一个滑条也挺好的
  15. 01:28:048 (6,1) - spacing太大了> <
  16. 01:28:964 (3) - 这个折返去掉要好些
[ZZ's Insane]
  1. 00:36:783 - 这里的音不加circle咩?
  2. 00:40:783 - ^
  3. 00:44:949 - 00:45:033 -
  4. 00:49:798 (1) - 这个滑条有些意义不明呀....
  5. 01:01:798 - 从这里就开始连打了
  6. 01:22:464 (3,4) - 这个spacing为什么突然变大了呀 咱以为是空了一个1/8拍呢
[Hard]
  1. 00:00:484 - 加滑条
  2. 00:09:783 - add circle
  3. 01:21:798 - ^
Normal和easy就补不查了, Good luck~
liangv587
船业!!

[ZZH's Insane]

主要说下节奏问题
00:08:283 (1) - 圈,00:08:449 (2) - 1/2滑条
00:09:116 (5) - 3/4滑条
00:12:783 (3) - 之后很诡异,这样改吧,前后综合一下改
00:22:783 (2) - 之后很诡异,这样改吧,前后综合一下改
00:25:783 (3) - 1/2滑条,不然节奏就断了
00:33:616 (2,3) - 这两个最好能重合
00:35:116 (1) - 向左,00:35:283 (2) - 向右,读图更容易
00:43:116 (5,6,7,8) - 合成两个滑条
00:44:949 - 很诡异,试试三连圈,00:45:283 - 1/2滑条
00:49:798 (1) - 非要减速的话0.75就够了,然后可以包住00:49:465 (2) - 的头,尾巴重合
00:55:131 (3) - 向左弯
排版方面,值得改进的地方太多,有条可以用的就是牵一发而动全身,免得有人说你乱摆的,也可以摆花样,不过这个更难,艺术细菌需求更高
音效也有点单调

[Insane]

这个难度感觉已经能rank辣
00:01:151 (1) - 这段可以在重拍上加clap(1,3白线)
00:24:116 (7) - 尾巴向右甩点,包住00:24:616 (2) - 同时尾巴被00:23:616 (6) - 包住
00:34:616 (2,3) - 换位
00:38:116 (5) - 1/2滑条
00:50:131 (5,1,2) - 这3个分别ctrl+G
00:54:298 (6) - 移到184,308
01:02:464 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - nice :)
01:06:131 (5,1) - 模仿01:03:798 (1,2) -
01:21:798 (3,4) - 这2个分别ctrl+G
ZZHBOY

Sweet Vanilla wrote:

[ZZ's Insane]
  1. 00:36:783 - 这里的音不加circle咩?加了
  2. 00:40:783 - ^这里跟voval就美丽
  3. 00:44:949 - 00:45:033 - ?
  4. 00:49:798 (1) - 这个滑条有些意义不明呀....拆开了
  5. 01:01:798 - 从这里就开始连打了暂时保留
  6. 01:22:464 (3,4) - 这个spacing为什么突然变大了呀 咱以为是空了一个1/8拍呢调均等前后间距了
587的mod有点主管 fixed some
美丽
SPOILER
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Title:killy killy Joker (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:killy killy Joker (TV Size)
Artist:Wakeshima Kanon
ArtistUnicode:Wakeshima Kanon
Creator:smallboat
Version:ZZH's Insane
Source:Selector Infected Wixxos
Tags:
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BeatmapSetID:168253

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64,164,43116,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,164,43283,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,92,43450,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,92,43616,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,92,43783,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,152,43949,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,156,44033,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,160,44116,1,8,0:0:0:0:
232,164,44199,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,168,44283,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,256,44449,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,260,44533,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,264,44616,2,0,L|300:292,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,296,45116,38,0,L|296:324,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,80,45616,1,0,0:0:0:0:
460,88,45699,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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424,328,46116,5,4,0:0:0:0:
424,328,46283,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,296,46465,6,0,P|276:300|312:308,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,204,46798,2,0,P|196:208|232:216,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,108,47131,2,0,P|148:112|184:120,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,16,47464,2,0,P|68:20|104:28,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,204,47798,5,0,0:0:0:0:
48,64,47965,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,300,48131,1,2,0:0:0:0:
52,152,48298,1,0,0:0:0:0:
68,352,48465,2,0,P|92:284|96:232,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,108,48798,2,2,P|156:116|192:152,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,152,49048,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,176,49131,6,0,P|257:193|344:180,1,135,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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460,56,49798,2,0,L|464:176,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,260,50131,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,188,50298,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,340,50464,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,160,50631,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,312,50797,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,128,50964,2,0,P|168:132|276:128,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,128,51464,1,2,0:0:0:0:
404,48,51631,2,0,P|420:88|432:108,1,45,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,140,51798,6,0,P|452:200|448:252,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,296,52131,2,0,P|280:296|324:272,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,40,52464,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,200,52631,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,117,52798,1,2,0:0:0:0:
196,144,52965,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,308,53131,6,0,P|128:276|160:216,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,24,53464,2,0,P|172:64|232:96,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,76,53798,2,0,P|384:108|352:168,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,360,54131,2,0,P|340:320|280:288,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,304,54381,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,304,54464,6,0,B|152:268|140:224|140:224|102:215|84:172,1,180,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,120,54964,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,288,55131,2,0,B|60:332|60:332|28:360,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,180,55464,2,0,L|216:204,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,248,55714,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,248,55798,6,0,L|416:284,1,180,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,160,56298,1,0,0:0:0:0:
484,240,56464,2,0,P|492:300|476:344,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,160,56798,2,0,P|364:100|380:56,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,120,57048,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,120,57131,6,0,L|256:120,1,180,4|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,48,57631,1,4,0:0:0:0:
192,212,57964,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,248,58130,1,10,0:0:0:0:
136,284,58297,2,0,L|40:312,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,296,58630,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,296,58797,1,10,0:0:0:0:
360,296,58964,2,0,L|408:296,1,45,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,304,59131,6,0,L|452:188,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,216,59381,2,0,L|396:100,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,44,59631,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,44,59714,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,44,59798,6,0,L|256:104,1,135,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,132,60131,2,0,P|232:152|184:160,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,132,60464,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,76,60631,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,120,60798,1,2,0:0:0:0:
208,76,60964,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,76,61048,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,76,61131,6,0,P|160:160|200:260,1,180,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,252,61631,2,0,P|324:220|268:224,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,320,61964,1,8,0:0:0:0:
76,300,62048,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,284,62131,1,8,0:0:0:0:
100,268,62214,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,248,62298,1,8,0:0:0:0:
124,232,62381,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,216,62464,6,0,P|212:220|304:180,1,135,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,124,62798,2,0,P|344:172|352:228,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,328,63131,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,232,63298,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,40,63464,1,2,0:0:0:0:
212,136,63631,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,232,63798,6,0,P|328:252|368:228,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,96,64131,1,2,0:0:0:0:
308,172,64298,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,292,64464,2,0,P|144:312|104:288,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,192,64797,1,2,0:0:0:0:
164,232,64964,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,316,65131,6,0,P|324:240|400:176,1,180,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,112,65631,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,48,65798,2,0,L|264:96,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,172,66131,2,0,L|244:220,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,177,66464,6,0,L|264:104,1,135,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,60,66798,2,0,P|216:136|200:160,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,248,67131,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,92,67298,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,211,67464,1,2,0:0:0:0:
295,61,67631,1,0,0:0:0:0:
295,61,67714,1,0,0:0:0:0:
295,61,67798,6,0,L|386:140,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,92,68131,2,0,L|207:171,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
217,323,68464,2,0,L|126:244,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,292,68797,2,0,L|305:213,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,52,69131,6,0,P|176:120|148:160,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,264,69464,2,0,P|184:272|224:300,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,332,69798,2,0,P|336:264|364:224,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,120,70131,2,0,P|328:112|288:84,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,64,70464,6,0,B|184:52|184:52|240:88,1,180,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,236,70964,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,140,71131,2,0,L|472:96,2,90,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,60,71631,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,60,71714,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,60,71798,6,0,B|184:32|184:32|80:48,1,180,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
47,208,72298,1,0,0:0:0:0:
195,346,72464,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,147,72631,1,0,0:0:0:0:
70,332,72798,1,2,0:0:0:0:
248,233,72964,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,233,73048,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,232,73131,6,0,P|332:192|396:208,1,135,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,232,73464,2,0,L|440:132,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,20,73798,2,0,L|303:106,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,212,74131,2,0,L|212:104,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,48,74464,6,0,P|168:72|76:64,1,135,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,48,74798,1,2,0:0:0:0:
96,164,74964,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,268,75131,2,0,P|118:284|73:283,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,204,75464,2,0,P|277:187|322:188,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,336,75798,6,0,L|428:160,1,135,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,172,76131,1,8,0:0:0:0:
484,4,76298,5,8,0:0:0:0:
436,140,76631,1,8,0:0:0:0:
436,140,76798,1,2,0:0:0:0:
436,140,76964,6,0,B|368:200|368:200|304:128|216:148,1,225,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,168,77464,2,0,L|136:76,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,240,77798,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,216,77964,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,244,78048,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,272,78131,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,136,78298,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,112,78381,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,88,78464,6,0,L|436:88,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,200,78798,2,0,L|368:200,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,144,79298,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,152,79381,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,160,79464,2,0,L|232:152,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,224,79798,2,0,L|280:232,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,324,80131,2,0,L|216:216,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,60,80464,6,0,L|300:208,1,135,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,248,80798,2,0,P|348:248|384:272,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,324,81131,2,0,P|168:324|132:300,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,104,81464,2,0,P|216:192|200:220,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,240,81798,6,0,B|128:240|128:240|196:268,1,135,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,296,82131,2,0,P|240:256|288:248,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,296,82464,2,0,B|404:244|404:244|385:194|384:144,1,180,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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256,148,84631,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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Topic Starter
smallboat

Sweet Vanilla wrote:

hi smallboat~ mutual in game ask~ 1st> <
[General]
  1. add “ZZHBOY” in tags
  2. combo color 红色有两个颜色很相近的删掉一个吧 阿 我忘了設combo顏色,現在都換了。
  3. widescreen support 建议统一
[Insane]
  1. 00:11:449 (6) - 这个circle后面接的是三连 咱认为这里放跳不太好 00:11:283 (5) - 咱觉得可以通过这里放跳调整下 調了些
  2. 00:14:366 (8,1) - 这个为什么分开那么远呀 inconsistent 連上去了
  3. 00:15:783 (1) - 乃这个梗应该00:15:616 (6,1) - spacing和00:14:783 (2,3) - 一样呀 調了些間距 有盡量保持一致
  4. 00:23:283 (4) - 这个太远了 试着移动到(60,52)
  5. 00:24:449 (1,2) - ctrl+G
  6. 00:35:783 - 从这里开始乃的跳咱不太理解 00:36:116 (2) - 这里乃没有放跳,但是00:36:783 - 放了,然后00:37:449 (2) - 又没有放 00:38:116 (5) - 然后又有跳...spacing感觉挺乱的 玩起来很不舒服 建议乃统一一下小间距的spacing 比如00:36:116 (2,3) - 和00:36:283 (3,4) - ,00:37:449 (2,3) - 和00:37:616 (3,4) - 好, 都維持同距了
  7. 00:43:283 (8,9,10,1) - 乃这个flow有问题呀...(咱建议乃00:43:449 (9,1) - ctrl+G then 00:43:783 (1) - 移动到(220,128) Almost fixed,換成其他方法
  8. 00:47:631 (8,1) - 这里哪里可以这样跳呀 跳的也有限度一点> < 00:47:131 (5,8) - ctrl+G 覺得沒什麼跳的突出的,而且有照flow放
  9. 00:51:131 (3,4,5,6) - 这里的flow不太好看 咱也不知道怎么办 乃可以试着自己调整下 恩改了一些
  10. 00:53:798 (3,4) - 这里怎么能这么跳呀 要跳也应该是00:54:131 (5) - 跳呀...{建议00:53:798 (3) - move to(64,236);00:53:964 (4) - move to (220,316);00:54:131 (5) - move to (232,76); 00:54:298 (6) - move to (124,308)} 改了
  11. 00:56:964 (10,11,1) - 位子不太对 move to (192,116)试试呢?這位子不接受,我調到其他地方了
  12. 01:01:881 (3,4,1,2,3) - 黑1分 那就不對稱了這裡。
  13. 01:13:631 (3) - move to (160,332)
  14. 01:14:464 (1) - 这里建议不要折返 加一个滑条也挺好的
  15. 01:28:048 (6,1) - spacing太大了> < 縮小了些
  16. 01:28:964 (3) - 这个折返去掉要好些現在還好 那麼這個再考慮
[Hard]
  1. 00:00:484 - 加滑条 想跟ins有個區別,不加了。
  2. 00:09:783 - add circle
  3. 01:21:798 - ^
^
Normal和easy就补不查了, Good luck~

謝謝甜香草 ~ ! :)




To 紙張 : ZZH阿你的難度重載一下,我只改標題 JOKER 和Combo色彩就這兩個。
Topic Starter
smallboat

liangv587 wrote:

船业!! iliangv587 业!!

[Insane]

这个难度感觉已经能rank辣 應該可以吧 找幾個mod我再找BAT試試
00:01:151 (1) - 这段可以在重拍上加clap(1,3白线)OK 還行
00:24:116 (7) - 尾巴向右甩点,包住00:24:616 (2) - 同时尾巴被00:23:616 (6) - 包住 這裡不改,因為要跟00:24:116 (7,1) - 做個弧度
00:34:616 (2,3) - 换位 OK 還行
00:38:116 (5) - 1/2滑条 OK 還行
00:50:131 (5,1,2) - 这3个分别ctrl+G 前面兩個用了 後面沒用
00:54:298 (6) - 移到184,308 雖然是可以 但不太好看 再考慮
01:02:464 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - nice :) : )
01:06:131 (5,1) - 模仿01:03:798 (1,2) - 恩也不錯 等下再看看要怎調整周圍的位置
01:21:798 (3,4) - 这2个分别ctrl+G OK 還行

謝謝 liangv587 ~ ! :)
Hollow Wings
m4m

General

  1. 01:05:131 (1) - 小船的diff里,像这种地方加了个音量15的绿线,我不太清楚现在rank规则是如何的,在我印象中绿线音量似乎15以下是不能设置在打击点上的?要么你去问问bat,如果不是当我没说;另外,如果只是为了单纯调整音效音量的话,还是建议和直接编辑音效文件,然后用sample系统就行了,既简单又保险
  2. 这种曲子你都用两个红线?不怕bat找茬么?而且感觉没必要啊233

Insane


  1. 00:59:131 (1,2,3) - 介于你全图的跳ds都大的可以,我建议你这个三分拍直接摆全屏跳,间距想怎么大都行
  2. 其他其实没啥好说的,我就说说自己对这图的看法吧。节奏方面其实说不出啥,非常正常向的下红白obj和stream,嗯。。。以后或许你可以考虑做点变化,加点3/4啊1/4什么的。排版方面给我一种依样画瓢般将梗套进图里的感觉,当然了我觉得这不失为一种使自己技术进步的手段,只是以后在作图的时候可以多想想怎样用梗可以用的更好,那样图给人的感觉会更加自然一些

ZZH's Insane

  1. 00:14:116 (6) - nc,不过这一块小提琴不跟不觉得可惜么
  2. 00:33:116 (1,2) - 后面00:33:949 (3,4,5) - 既然跟了小提琴,那么这里我建议干脆换成4个note,摆个ds渐小的梗,和00:33:949 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - 整体呼应一下
  3. 01:05:131 (1,2,1) - 这几个排排好可以相互stack的
  4. 嗯。。。嘛,有的时候我觉得自己也不能多说什么,毕竟我自己mapping skill也只是渣渣。我自认为唯一还可以的就是靠感觉做图这一项了,这种感性的东西无法用梗啊flow啊这种词来描述,我就随便说点东西:
    比如01:05:131 (1) - 一般来说长白线的obj是重音,视情况可以强调一下位置或者节奏,这里让我来摆我就会摆个跳。而vocal给我的感觉就是此处应该是顺flow而不是逆flow放滑条身子(试试看把这个滑条中间的control point移到361,265看看)
    再看了一遍这个diff,其实我觉得你的mapping思路还是不错的,只是很多地方用的梗给我一种太过拘束的感觉,另外排版还可以再好点,嗯

Hard

  1. 00:29:116 (4) - 减掉个折返?后面那些折返还好,这里稍微跟一下vocal的感觉好了
  2. 01:21:964 (3,4) - 为何我感觉这里换一下更好点

Normal

  1. 00:59:131 (1,2,3) - 这个节奏在normal里太难了吧。。。
  2. 01:23:131 (1,2) - ar那么低别stack吧,或者干脆换成滑条

Easy

  1. 01:21:131 (1,1) - 转盘和note时间间隔感觉太小,考虑换个梗。而且建议低难度里转盘后面的obj放在中心附近
废话说的有点多仅供参考不要全信,原因你懂的

good luck
Sellenite
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音效方面可能还要注意一下

[E & N]
我不知道whistle+clap是什么时候才放的..有时候没放,和tick clap一起听的话会显得时高时低,whistle听起来很大声,普通时候放个whistle就足够大声了

[Hard]
00:11:783 (1) - 这个的尾巴我不要音效后是很低的声音的,不明白为什么要w+c
00:12:783 (4) - 头取消whistle
00:13:449 (5) - 只要加finish,加30%绿线
00:22:783 取消whistle
00:22:949 (2) - 头加clap
00:23:449 (3) - 尾巴finish,加30%绿线
00:24:449 (1) - 尾巴加clap
00:39:449 (3) - nazi,可以blanket放好点
01:00:464 (2,3) - 弯曲之后然后放开点比较好,有点老图即视感
01:05:131 (1) - nazi,可以blanket放好点

[Insane]
00:00:595 (1) - 别要这个了,放在1/6上,尾stack也不好听,直接00:01:151开始
00:06:450 (1,2) - 这两个..其实不推荐这么放,最好把他们放开,例如像这样类似的
00:12:783 (5,8) - 意见和hard相同
00:22:783 (2) - 取消whistle
00:24:616 (2) - 加clap
00:42:283 改为40%,这里是需要强调的
00:51:464 (5) - 取消whistle,加clap
00:51:798 (1) - 不必用绿线降音
00:54:464 (1) - ^
01:02:464 (1) - ^
01:05:131 (1) - 40%
01:07:798 (1) - 不必用绿线降音
01:11:798 (1) - 40%
01:16:131 (2,3,4) - 都取消clap
01:16:631 (5) - 尾whistle改为clap
01:17:798 (3) - 头加clap
01:24:131 (3) - 取消whistle
01:25:464 (2) - whistle改为clap
01:29:048 觉得加个5-10%的绿线消音比较好

[ZZ]
00:14:116 (6) - NC
00:19:783 (5) - NC
00:20:616 (1) - 取消NC
00:26:449 (5) - NC
00:32:116 (2) - 放到像1/2的距离觉得有点坑,不过没什么问题
00:37:783 (1) - 取消NC
01:16:964 (1) - 头加finish?
不错,挺爽的

hope it help you!
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188,152,49048,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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160,188,50298,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,340,50464,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,160,50631,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,312,50797,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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208,76,61048,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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64,320,61964,1,8,0:0:0:0:
76,300,62048,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,284,62131,1,8,0:0:0:0:
100,268,62214,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,248,62298,1,8,0:0:0:0:
124,232,62381,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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304,124,62798,2,0,P|344:172|352:228,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,328,63131,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,232,63298,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,40,63464,1,2,0:0:0:0:
212,136,63631,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,232,63798,6,0,P|328:252|368:228,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,96,64131,1,2,0:0:0:0:
308,172,64298,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,292,64464,2,0,P|144:312|104:288,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,192,64797,1,2,0:0:0:0:
164,232,64964,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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398,179,65631,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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148,172,66131,2,0,L|244:220,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,177,66464,6,0,L|264:104,1,135,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,60,66798,2,0,P|216:136|200:160,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,248,67131,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,92,67298,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,211,67464,1,2,0:0:0:0:
295,61,67631,1,0,0:0:0:0:
295,61,67714,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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116,92,68131,2,0,L|207:171,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
217,323,68464,2,0,L|126:244,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,292,68797,2,0,L|305:213,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,52,69131,6,0,P|176:120|148:160,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,264,69464,2,0,P|184:272|224:300,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,332,69798,2,0,P|336:264|364:224,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,120,70131,2,0,P|328:112|288:84,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,64,70464,6,0,B|184:52|184:52|240:88,1,180,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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264,60,71631,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,60,71714,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,60,71798,6,0,B|184:32|184:32|80:48,1,180,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
47,208,72298,1,0,0:0:0:0:
195,346,72464,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,147,72631,1,0,0:0:0:0:
70,332,72798,1,2,0:0:0:0:
248,233,72964,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,233,73048,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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180,212,74131,2,0,L|212:104,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,48,74464,6,0,P|168:72|76:64,1,135,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,48,74798,1,2,0:0:0:0:
96,164,74964,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,268,75131,2,0,P|118:284|73:283,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,204,75464,2,0,P|277:187|322:188,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,336,75798,6,0,L|428:160,1,135,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,172,76131,1,8,0:0:0:0:
484,4,76298,5,8,0:0:0:0:
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436,140,76798,1,2,0:0:0:0:
436,140,76964,6,0,B|368:200|368:200|304:128|216:148,1,225,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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Topic Starter
smallboat

Hollow Wings wrote:

m4m

General

  1. 01:05:131 (1) - 小船的diff里,像这种地方加了个音量15的绿线,我不太清楚现在rank规则是如何的,在我印象中绿线音量似乎15以下是不能设置在打击点上的?要么你去问问bat,如果不是当我没说;另外,如果只是为了单纯调整音效音量的话,还是建议和直接编辑音效文件,然后用sample系统就行了,既简单又保险 好像有規定又好像沒有,但音量調20%了,應該不會找碴了?sample系統不會用233,那我有空再研究看看。
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  2. 这种曲子你都用两个红线?不怕bat找茬么?而且感觉没必要啊233 233沒關係啦就是不怕 發現這個跟colorful蠻類似的bpm所以就用上了這個變化

Insane


  1. 00:59:131 (1,2,3) - 介于你全图的跳ds都大的可以,我建议你这个三分拍直接摆全屏跳,间距想怎么大都行 說的堆 從1.8x變到2.8x應該夠遠了233?
  2. 其他其实没啥好说的,我就说说自己对这图的看法吧。节奏方面其实说不出啥,非常正常向的下红白obj和stream,嗯。。。以后或许你可以考虑做点变化,加点3/4啊1/4什么的。排版方面给我一种依样画瓢般将梗套进图里的感觉,当然了我觉得这不失为一种使自己技术进步的手段,只是以后在作图的时候可以多想想怎样用梗可以用的更好,那样图给人的感觉会更加自然一些
恩,擺的很像到處亂飛像蒼鷹一樣,也許這是我的style,梗的話真的是個問題,的確還須加強用量和表達。(可是看那麼多圖還沒有靈感 sad)

Hard

  1. 00:29:116 (4) - 减掉个折返?后面那些折返还好,这里稍微跟一下vocal的感觉好了
  2. 01:21:964 (3,4) - 为何我感觉这里换一下更好点

Normal

  1. 00:59:131 (1,2,3) - 这个节奏在normal里太难了吧。。。 好,2改成note了
  2. 01:23:131 (1,2) - ar那么低别stack吧,或者干脆换成滑条 好,改了,AR5還算低阿0.0?

Easy

  1. 01:21:131 (1,1) - 转盘和note时间间隔感觉太小,考虑换个梗。而且建议低难度里转盘后面的obj放在中心附近
废话说的有点多仅供参考不要全信,原因你懂的 恩好,那我把後面的1先去掉好了

good luck

謝謝 Hollow Wings ~ !

Sellenite wrote:

from ingame
音效方面可能还要注意一下

[E & N]
我不知道whistle+clap是什么时候才放的..有时候没放,和tick clap一起听的话会显得时高时低,whistle听起来很大声,普通时候放个whistle就足够大声了 這個再看看

[Hard]
00:11:783 (1) - 这个的尾巴我不要音效后是很低的声音的,不明白为什么要w+c 真的感覺有點吵 那我就把whistle去了
00:12:783 (4) - 头取消whistle
00:13:449 (5) - 只要加finish,加30%绿线 好,3個dif都加了
00:22:783 取消whistle

00:22:949 (2) - 头加clap 沒鼓聲 不加
00:23:449 (3) - 尾巴finish,加30%绿线 加了 30太大聲 加了20
00:24:449 (1) - 尾巴加clap
00:39:449 (3) - nazi,可以blanket放好点
01:00:464 (2,3) - 弯曲之后然后放开点比较好,有点老图即视感
01:05:131 (1) - nazi,可以blanket放好点

[Insane]
00:00:595 (1) - 别要这个了,放在1/6上,尾stack也不好听,直接00:01:151开始 這個的話我先去掉好了
00:06:450 (1,2) - 这两个..其实不推荐这么放,最好把他们放开,例如像这样类似的
00:12:783 (5,8) - 意见和hard相同
00:22:783 (2) - 取消whistle
00:24:616 (2) - 加clap
00:42:283 改为40%,这里是需要强调的
00:51:464 (5) - 取消whistle,加clap
00:51:798 (1) - 不必用绿线降音 加到40
00:54:464 (1) - ^ ^
01:02:464 (1) - ^ ^
01:05:131 (1) - 40% ^
01:07:798 (1) - 不必用绿线降音 加到55
01:11:798 (1) - 40%
01:16:131 (2,3,4) - 都取消clap
01:16:631 (5) - 尾whistle改为clap
01:17:798 (3) - 头加clap
01:24:131 (3) - 取消whistle 再考慮 因為這鼓聲蠻重
01:25:464 (2) - whistle改为clap
01:29:048 觉得加个5-10%的绿线消音比较好

hope it help you!恩,音效方面很有用,感激。
random rank~

謝謝Sellenite ~ !
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
送mod


Insane

  1. 00:14:199 (6,7,8) - 我觉得这个串这么放比较好 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1552158
  2. 00:20:283 (3,5) - blanket要往外面一点的
  3. 00:40:283 (3,4) - 这两个滑条尾的声音消掉一点比较好听 我觉得ww
  4. 00:46:199 (4,6) - 最好在这里加个串 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1552171
  5. 01:15:798 (1,4,5,1) - 这几个滑条头加finish
  6. 最后一段感觉可以多加些finish, 可是加了又觉得不合适.-.
ZZH's Insane

  1. 00:14:116 (6,7,8) - zz
  2. 00:44:616 (9) - 把这个滑条的速度调成0.5x 下一个再调回去
  3. 00:49:131 (1) - 这个音别消啊 听着不舒服了
  4. 01:15:798 (1,1,1) - 滑条头加finish
  5. 01:27:464 (3) - 这样摆 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1552195
  6. 转盘尾音消了吧
Hard

  1. 00:35:116 (3) - 去掉一个转向, 没必要加的 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1552199
  2. 01:07:464 (4) - missing whistle
  3. 01:15:798 (3,4,1) - 3的滑条头+4+1的滑条头 加上finish
  4. 01:23:131 (1,2) - 这个滑条放成一个单点比较好.-.
Normal

  1. 图本身没啥问题 不过我觉得 前面一堆跟鼓二分拍 到了kiai那段速唱反而都是单点 没有突出重点
  2. 要是前面简单些 kiai那里用滑条之类的摆满二分拍我觉得会好一些
  3. 不过反正是normal 233
后来我想了一下 那地方放四方跳多好 真是可惜
Jemmmmy
[insane]
00:08:783 (1,2,3,4,5) - 不摆成弧线?
00:28:783 (4,5,6) - 等边三角形?
01:01:131 (1) -
01:18:131 (5,6,7,8,1) - 调整下,让滑条顺着连打的方向
01:23:631 (3,1) - 换一换nc
01:28:548 (6,1) - 间距跟01:28:048 (6,1) - 一样
[ZZH's in]
00:13:616 -
00:29:783 (1,2,3,4) - 和后面的滑条头摆成一条弧线
00:33:783 - note
00:44:866 -
[hard]
00:22:449 (1,2) - 包好
00:31:116 (2) - 换成两个滑条?
00:33:449 (2) - ^
01:01:798 (1,2,1) - 间距相同
ZZHBOY

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

ZZH's Insane

  1. 00:14:116 (6,7,8) - zz 改了下
  2. 00:44:616 (9) - 把这个滑条的速度调成0.5x 下一个再调回去
  3. 00:49:131 (1) - 这个音别消啊 听着不舒服了
  4. 01:15:798 (1,1,1) - 滑条头加finish
  5. 01:27:464 (3) - 这样摆 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1552195
  6. 转盘尾音消了吧all fixed

Jemmmmy wrote:

[ZZH's in]
00:13:616 - ?o.o
00:29:783 (1,2,3,4) - 和后面的滑条头摆成一条弧线nope 摆不下...
00:33:783 - note
00:44:866 - 这里改了下
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236,248,55798,6,0,L|416:284,1,180,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,160,56298,1,0,0:0:0:0:
484,240,56464,2,0,P|492:300|476:344,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,160,56798,2,0,P|364:100|380:56,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,120,57048,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,120,57131,6,0,L|256:120,1,180,4|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,48,57631,1,4,0:0:0:0:
192,212,57964,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,248,58130,1,10,0:0:0:0:
136,284,58297,2,0,L|40:312,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,296,58630,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,296,58797,1,10,0:0:0:0:
360,296,58964,2,0,L|408:296,1,45,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,304,59131,6,0,L|452:188,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,216,59381,2,0,L|396:100,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,44,59631,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,44,59714,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,44,59798,6,0,L|256:104,1,135,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,132,60131,2,0,P|232:152|184:160,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,132,60464,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,76,60631,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,120,60798,1,2,0:0:0:0:
208,76,60964,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,76,61048,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,76,61131,6,0,P|160:160|200:260,1,180,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,252,61631,2,0,P|324:220|268:224,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,320,61964,1,8,0:0:0:0:
76,300,62048,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,284,62131,1,8,0:0:0:0:
100,268,62214,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,248,62298,1,8,0:0:0:0:
124,232,62381,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,216,62464,6,0,P|212:220|304:180,1,135,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,124,62798,2,0,P|344:172|352:228,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,328,63131,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,232,63298,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,40,63464,1,2,0:0:0:0:
212,136,63631,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,232,63798,6,0,P|328:252|368:228,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,96,64131,1,2,0:0:0:0:
308,172,64298,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,292,64464,2,0,P|144:312|104:288,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,192,64797,1,2,0:0:0:0:
164,232,64964,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,316,65131,6,0,P|360:264|400:176,1,180,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
398,179,65631,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,48,65798,2,0,L|264:96,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,172,66131,2,0,L|244:220,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,177,66464,6,0,L|264:104,1,135,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,60,66798,2,0,P|216:136|200:160,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,248,67131,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,92,67298,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,211,67464,1,2,0:0:0:0:
295,61,67631,1,0,0:0:0:0:
295,61,67714,1,0,0:0:0:0:
295,61,67798,6,0,L|386:140,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,92,68131,2,0,L|207:171,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
217,323,68464,2,0,L|126:244,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,292,68797,2,0,L|305:213,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,52,69131,6,0,P|176:120|148:160,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,264,69464,2,0,P|184:272|224:300,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,332,69798,2,0,P|336:264|364:224,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,120,70131,2,0,P|328:112|288:84,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,64,70464,6,0,B|184:52|184:52|240:88,1,180,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,236,70964,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,140,71131,2,0,L|472:96,2,90,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,60,71631,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,60,71714,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,60,71798,6,0,B|184:32|184:32|80:48,1,180,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
47,208,72298,1,0,0:0:0:0:
195,346,72464,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,147,72631,1,0,0:0:0:0:
70,332,72798,1,2,0:0:0:0:
248,233,72964,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,233,73048,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,232,73131,6,0,P|332:192|396:208,1,135,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,232,73464,2,0,L|440:132,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,20,73798,2,0,L|303:106,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,212,74131,2,0,L|212:104,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,48,74464,6,0,P|168:72|76:64,1,135,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,48,74798,1,2,0:0:0:0:
96,164,74964,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,268,75131,2,0,P|118:284|73:283,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,204,75464,2,0,P|277:187|322:188,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,336,75798,6,0,L|428:160,1,135,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,172,76131,1,8,0:0:0:0:
484,4,76298,5,8,0:0:0:0:
436,140,76631,1,8,0:0:0:0:
436,140,76798,1,2,0:0:0:0:
436,140,76964,6,0,B|368:200|368:200|304:128|216:148,1,225,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,168,77464,2,0,L|136:76,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,240,77798,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,216,77964,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,244,78048,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,272,78131,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,136,78298,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,112,78381,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,88,78464,6,0,L|436:88,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,200,78798,2,0,L|368:200,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,144,79298,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,152,79381,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,160,79464,2,0,L|232:152,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,224,79798,2,0,L|280:232,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,324,80131,2,0,L|216:216,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,60,80464,6,0,L|300:208,1,135,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,248,80798,2,0,P|348:248|384:272,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,324,81131,2,0,P|168:324|132:300,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,104,81464,2,0,P|216:192|200:220,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,240,81798,6,0,B|128:240|128:240|196:268,1,135,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,296,82131,2,0,P|240:256|288:248,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,296,82464,2,0,B|404:244|404:244|385:194|384:144,1,180,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,108,82881,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,64,82964,2,0,L|312:96,2,90,0|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,104,83798,6,0,L|293:127,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,264,84131,2,0,L|218:240,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,94,84464,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,148,84631,1,0,0:0:0:0:
359,201,84798,1,8,0:0:0:0:
460,260,84964,1,0,0:0:0:0:
460,260,85131,2,0,L|480:140,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
359,201,85464,1,2,0:0:0:0:
152,240,85631,2,0,B|200:248|200:248|260:232,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,208,85964,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,64,86298,5,0,0:0:0:0:
404,76,86381,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,88,86464,2,0,L|264:120,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,96,86798,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,152,86964,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,208,87131,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,292,87298,21,0,0:0:0:0:
219,310,87381,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,325,87464,2,0,L|132:300,1,45
56,248,87631,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,87714,12,0,89131,0:0:0:0:
Topic Starter
smallboat

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

送mod

Insane

  1. 00:14:199 (6,7,8) - 我觉得这个串这么放比较好 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1552158 好,然後stream方向改了一下。
  2. 00:20:283 (3,5) - blanket要往外面一点的 沒關係 就這樣吧,反正這裡都對稱應該沒什麼美觀問題 :)
  3. 00:40:283 (3,4) - 这两个滑条尾的声音消掉一点比较好听 我觉得ww
  4. 00:46:199 (4,6) - 最好在这里加个串 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1552171 雖然不知為什麼 但還是加了
  5. 01:15:798 (1,4,5,1) - 这几个滑条头加finish 勉強接受 加了
  6. 最后一段感觉可以多加些finish, 可是加了又觉得不合适.-. 恩 我再想看看 應該已經沒什麼漏了
Hard

  1. 00:35:116 (3) - 去掉一个转向, 没必要加的 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1552199 改了,然後變成兩個1/2slider,我覺得後面那鼓聲需要壓到。
  2. 01:07:464 (4) - missing whistle 加了
  3. 01:15:798 (3,4,1) - 3的滑条头+4+1的滑条头 加上finish
  4. 01:23:131 (1,2) - 这个滑条放成一个单点比较好.-.
Normal

  1. 图本身没啥问题 不过我觉得 前面一堆跟鼓二分拍 到了kiai那段速唱反而都是单点 没有突出重点
  2. 要是前面简单些 kiai那里用滑条之类的摆满二分拍我觉得会好一些 我會再試一下的
  3. 不过反正是normal 233 233..
后来我想了一下 那地方放四方跳多好 真是可惜 哪裡?

謝謝Ar3 ~ ! :)
lovekotori
加油ww
is good map w
i like ww
:)
Topic Starter
smallboat

Jemmmmy wrote:

[insane]
00:08:783 (1,2,3,4,5) - 不摆成弧线?咦 不是擺成弧了? 不過我稍微還是移動了一點。
00:28:783 (4,5,6) - 等边三角形? 恩稍微把6往上了一點
01:01:131 (1) - 調整了一點
01:18:131 (5,6,7,8,1) - 调整下,让滑条顺着连打的方向 好 改變了弧度
01:23:631 (3,1) - 换一换nc ok 可以
01:28:548 (6,1) - 间距跟01:28:048 (6,1) - 一样 原本想來個1/4note 跳 那還是別跳好了 fixed

[hard]
00:22:449 (1,2) - 包好
00:31:116 (2) - 换成两个滑条? 如果拆開的話 這邊就成好多1/2 感覺DT會被黑 這兩個再考慮
00:33:449 (2) - ^ ^
01:01:798 (1,2,1) - 间距相同 OK用1.0x

謝謝 Jemmmmy ~ ! :)
10crystalmask01
Hey, M4M here :)
[Insane]
00:09:116 (5) - Should be NC instead of 00:08:783 (1) - , because clearly this note is the one starting on the main downbeat, which marks as the next rhythmic cycle.

00:20:116 (2,3) - Nazi suggestion )sorry!) please fix the blanket:


00:20:949 (5,6) - ^ Same suggestion as above.

00:24:449 (1,1) - Move more apart so they're not attached to each other.

01:23:797 (3) - Should be NC instead of 01:23:631 (1) - , because this is the first object to appear when Kai time officially ends.

01:28:131 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Hmm interesting. Try changing & adding the hitsound drum clap onto these objects, to match those funny beats heard in the music.

[ZZH's Insane]
00:34:616 (2,3) - Try adding drum clap onto these objects, to match those funny beats heard in the music.

[Hard]

00:09:783 (2,3,4,5) - Consider remapping the rhythm here:

Mainly because of the long slider, which currently sounds very off atm. When moving it to play on 00:10:283 instead, it will match the violins long quarter-note.

00:10:949 (6,7) - Try swapping them, and adjust their timing positions to this:

The hit circle sounds better on 00:10:949, because on this part you hear the violin note come to an abrupt finish on the note. Then, with the sldier on 00:11:283 it will run smoothly with the violins long quarter-note.

00:46:465 (1) - Replace with a flipped version of 00:46:798 (2) - like this:

It creates a neater flow imo.

[Normal/Easy]
Ok

Good luck!
ZZHBOY

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Hey, M4M here :)

[ZZH's Insane]
00:34:616 (2,3) - Try adding drum clap onto these objects, to match those funny beats heard in the music. added :)
Topic Starter
smallboat

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Hey, M4M here :)
[Insane]
00:09:116 (5) - Should be NC instead of 00:08:783 (1) - , because clearly this note is the one starting on the main downbeat, which marks as the next rhythmic cycle. Sure, added.

00:20:116 (2,3) - Nazi suggestion )sorry!) please fix the blanket: No,I keep the symmetry.


00:20:949 (5,6) - ^ Same suggestion as above. ^

00:24:449 (1,1) - Move more apart so they're not attached to each other. Okay,stack the 00:24:616 (2) .

01:23:797 (3) - Should be NC instead of 01:23:631 (1) - , because this is the first object to appear when Kai time officially ends. Sure,NC set here.

01:28:131 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Hmm interesting. Try changing & adding the hitsound drum clap onto these objects, to match those funny beats heard in the music. Okay,add drum clap from 01:28:214 (2) to (6).

[Hard]

00:09:783 (2,3,4,5) - Consider remapping the rhythm here:

Mainly because of the long slider, which currently sounds very off atm. When moving it to play on 00:10:283 instead, it will match the violins long quarter-note. Thia part I consider it,because I test many times,ther is no problems here.

00:10:949 (6,7) - Try swapping them, and adjust their timing positions to this:

The hit circle sounds better on 00:10:949, because on this part you hear the violin note come to an abrupt finish on the note. Then, with the sldier on 00:11:283 it will run smoothly with the violins long quarter-note. ^

00:46:465 (1) - Replace with a flipped version of 00:46:798 (2) - like this:

It creates a neater flow imo. Okay,fixed

[Normal/Easy]
Ok

Good luck!

Thank 10crystalmask01 ~ ! :)
moonlightleaf
[ZZH's Insane]

00:09:783 (2) - 改俩单点

00:12:783 (3,1) - ctrl+g那种节奏

00:14:283 (2) - 折返?

00:14:783 补note

00:20:449 (3,4) - 试试这种节奏

00:21:116 (5,6) - ctrl+g那种节奏

00:23:949 (6) - 俩连接滑条试试

00:31:783 (1) - 复制后面的2到这里blanket

00:33:616 (2,3,4,5,6) - 差flow

00:34:949 (4) - 删

00:39:616 (6) - ctrl+g

00:44:616 (1,1) - 怎么感觉特别坑

00:59:631 (3) - 单点?

01:05:131 (1,2,1) - 要叠就认真叠,感觉敷衍

01:08:131 (2,3) - 分别 ctrl+g

01:10:964 (2,6) - stack

01:15:798 (1) - 红线收

01:16:798 (3) - 删比较好

01:27:464 (3) - 滑条到红线

最后转盘结尾有点....

不怕 有小船在 rank不是梦 :)
- TiRaFiouS -
[ZZH是紙張QVQ]
00:06:450 (1) - 加長到00:06:450 (1) -
00:12:699 (2) - 00:13:116 (1) - 00:13:366 (3) - remove
00:13:866 (6) - ^
00:13:866 (6) - ^
00:16:949 (1,2,3) - 可以小聲一點?
00:17:449 (1,2,3,4,5) - .....((為啥不跟人聲?感覺好單調...
00:20:616 (3,4,5) - Ctrl G
00:21:783 (1) - remove
00:24:449 (1,2,3) - (1)(2)是一組(3)放再(2)後面是不是不太好
01:24:964 (6,7) - Ctrl G
Mao


M4M, love the song~


  1. Unrankable Issue
  2. Recommended to fix
  3. Highly Suggested
  4. Suggestion
  5. Just my own opinion / Comment

General
  1. The Source is Selector Infected WIXOSS not Selector Infected Wixxos
  2. Artist: 分島花音
  3. Add Rūko Kominato to your Tags, if somebody searches for this name, he will find your set C:

Easy
  1. 00:07:783 (2) - Move to 141|267 for a better circular transition here.
  2. 00:10:449 (3) - Pretty high variation from the previous and the next object's distances here. You might want to make them constant ><
  3. 00:31:783 (3) - Replace this with a y-flipped version of 00:30:449 (1) - . Would create some cool symmetry here :D
  4. 00:40:866 (3) - Unneeded inherited point. Consider removing it.
  5. 00:59:798 (1,2,3) - Make them symmetrical, it could create a nice effect here.
  6. 01:17:798 (3) - What have you done here? x-x This doesn't even fit the music. I think it's by accident xD
  7. Nothing really outstanding here. I personally don't like 1,4 Spacing with 180 BPM since the Distances are pretty high :V

Normal
  1. 00:04:817 (2) - I'd suggest consistent spacing here. Looks like that's what you wanted :b
  2. 00:36:783 (3) - Place at 226|326
  3. 00:40:866 (8) - Unneeded inherited point. Consider removing it.
  4. 00:43:783 (1,2,3) - The red ticks you've mapped with the slider tails aren't really important since they are just some quiet beats that don't really need to be mapped. Also ignoring 00:45:283 - , which is a really strong sound, feels wrong to me :c
  5. 00:54:131 (6,1) - The transition felt a bit weird due to the movement of the square being interrupted with the slider point so straight downwards. I'd suggest to follow the curve of 00:53:798 (5,6) - .
  6. 01:10:464 (1) - 20% sounds a bit quiet here, it#s basically the same 01:05:131 (1) - , so use 40% here as well.
  7. 01:11:798 (3) - The finish here sounds a bit overdone. If you remove it, you can't here any sign that there has to be a finish in the music.
  8. 01:16:964 (3) - The Head is so quiet and the Tail so loud. The tail shocked me a bit while playing. Consider making a fluent transiton from the quiet to the louder one.
  9. Nice!

Hard
  1. 00:15:283 (3) - Maybe replace this with an about -105° rotated version of the previos one for a consitent look of this pattern?
  2. 00:17:116 (1) - Whistle on the start, as you did in Insane.
  3. 00:18:116 (4,5) - This gap felt a bit empty to me since the vocals are pretty strong on the red tick. Also a beat is hearable.
  4. 00:36:283 (2) - The spacing is a bit inconsistent here. Consider fixing this for a constant since almost everything is snapped.
  5. 00:43:783 (2) - Why does this have soft sampleset on when 00:44:449 (3) - doesn't? :c
  6. 00:59:381 (3) - X should be 256 to be on the axis.
  7. 01:03:131 (3) - Inconsitant spacing! Try to avoid this for curves like this. It just looks as you wanted to space these but failed :/
  8. 01:12:464 (3) - This overlaps 01:11:798 (1) - 's tail is a bit weird since it looks like these should be kind of a cross between two curved sliders and crosses don't overlap the ends of each other, don't you think so? A 90° rotated version of 01:11:798 (1) - would make this look a bit better.
  9. Cool Hard Diff :D I personally don't like the gap between Hard and the Insane, since both Insanes are pretty hard.

ZZH'sInsane
  1. 00:14:449 (3) - I dont know if a break here is a good idea, especially since you've mapped the sections starting at 00:17:449 (1) - , which is basically the same. Also none of the other diffs actually have this. Even though it's a GD I'd remove it :c
  2. 00:32:449 (3) - How about CTRL+G here. It would make the flow a bit better, epsecially to the following object + triplett due to a circular movement, which you've already used a lot in the map before.
  3. 00:39:199 (4) - If you listen to the vocals very close, you can hear that the vocals are pretty strong at 00:39:283 (4) - , which seems a bit weird since the slider's tail isn't a clickable object. See my suggestion in the screenshot below.
  4. 00:40:283 (1,2,1) - These kicked me off a bit because the beat between those is a strong here ;-;
  5. 01:16:131 (2) - Why is the spacing so low here? You've spaced the other ones with about 1,10 DS :c I know it forms a triplet with 01:16:631 (2) - , but the consistency here is more important :V Also you can just simply do the triplet with 1,10, since it's not 1/4.
  6. Nice flow! C:

Insane
  1. 00:05:151 (4) - This feels a bit overmapped to me, since the violin holds that note. I'd suggest a 1/1 Slider here, since the red tick definitely doesn't need to be mapped imo C:
  2. 00:14:366 (4) - The transition here felt a bit awkward to me due to the angle of the stream. Maybe a curve could make the feel here better!
  3. 00:17:449 (2) - A clap on the head would fit your pattern. It sounds a bit empty here, since you've mapped the same one before with a clap :c
  4. 00:33:116 (1,2,3,4) - If you listen closely you can hear that 00:33:283 - , 00:33:616 - and 00:33:949 - have pretty strong notes on them. Definitely louder and stronger than the fade of this sound, which is on the blue ticks. So I'd suggest the following rhythm.
  5. 00:50:798 (2) - This kicked me off in playtest. I'd suggest CTRL+G here to follow the previous slider's curve movement a bit smoother.
  6. 01:07:798 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - This is so messy x-x Everything overlaps and is so close to each other. I'd suggest you to make something similiar to 00:51:798 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - . This was awesome :c
  7. 00:58:298 (5) - Finish on the head, since it's the same as 00:57:631 -
  8. 01:00:131 (2,3) - The transition here is really bad in my opinion since I expected that I have to go to the location of 01:00:798 (4) - . I'd suggest you to switch 01:00:464 (3,4) - .
  9. 01:09:798 (3,4,5,6) - How about a perfect square here? :c
  10. Cool C:

Please reply! I hope it was helpful and good luck! :3
ZZHBOY

Mao wrote:

ZZH'sInsane
  1. 00:14:449 (3) - I dont know if a break here is a good idea, especially since you've mapped the sections starting at 00:17:449 (1) - , which is basically the same. Also none of the other diffs actually have this. Even though it's a GD I'd remove it :c this part just has a little vocal without obvious drumbeats so i set a break here.As for things starting at 00:17:449, i just want to make it natural or not suddenly start at 00:19:783
  2. 00:32:449 (3) - How about CTRL+G here. It would make the flow a bit better, epsecially to the following object + triplett due to a circular movement, which you've already used a lot in the map before. yep, good idea!
  3. 00:39:199 (4) - If you listen to the vocals very close, you can hear that the vocals are pretty strong at 00:39:283 (4) - , which seems a bit weird since the slider's tail isn't a clickable object. See my suggestion in the screenshot below.accepted
  4. 00:40:283 (1,2,1) - These kicked me off a bit because the beat between those is a strong here ;-;i deleted the finish sound effect here so it may be better here
  5. 01:16:131 (2) - Why is the spacing so low here? You've spaced the other ones with about 1,10 DS :c I know it forms a triplet with 01:16:631 (2) - , but the consistency here is more important :V Also you can just simply do the triplet with 1,10, since it's not 1/4.i turn it into 1.0 ds now.-.
  6. Nice flow! C: thx

moonlightleaf wrote:

[ZZH's Insane]

00:09:783 (2) - 改俩单点

00:12:783 (3,1) - ctrl+g那种节奏

00:14:283 (2) - 折返?

00:14:783 补note

00:20:449 (3,4) - 试试这种节奏

00:21:116 (5,6) - ctrl+g那种节奏

00:23:949 (6) - 俩连接滑条试试

00:31:783 (1) - 复制后面的2到这里blanket

00:33:616 (2,3,4,5,6) - 差flow

00:34:949 (4) - 删

00:39:616 (6) - ctrl+g

00:44:616 (1,1) - 怎么感觉特别坑

00:59:631 (3) - 单点?

01:05:131 (1,2,1) - 要叠就认真叠,感觉敷衍

01:08:131 (2,3) - 分别 ctrl+g

01:10:964 (2,6) - stack

01:15:798 (1) - 红线收

01:16:798 (3) - 删比较好

01:27:464 (3) - 滑条到红线

最后转盘结尾有点....

不怕 有小船在 rank不是梦 :)

Piyoko_9796 wrote:

[ZZH是紙張QVQ]
00:06:450 (1) - 加長到00:06:450 (1) -
00:12:699 (2) - 00:13:116 (1) - 00:13:366 (3) - remove
00:13:866 (6) - ^
00:13:866 (6) - ^
00:16:949 (1,2,3) - 可以小聲一點?
00:17:449 (1,2,3,4,5) - .....((為啥不跟人聲?感覺好單調...
00:20:616 (3,4,5) - Ctrl G
00:21:783 (1) - remove
00:24:449 (1,2,3) - (1)(2)是一組(3)放再(2)後面是不是不太好
01:24:964 (6,7) - Ctrl G
你们都zz fixed some don't hit me (/me runs

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Topic Starter
smallboat

Mao wrote:



M4M, love the song~ Thanks !


  1. Unrankable Issue
  2. Recommended to fix
  3. Highly Suggested
  4. Suggestion
  5. Just my own opinion / Comment

General
  1. The Source is Selector Infected WIXOSS not Selector Infected Wixxos fixed
  2. Artist: 分島花音 changed
  3. Add Rūko Kominato to your Tags, if somebody searches for this name, he will find your set C:
okay,added

Easy
  1. 00:07:783 (2) - Move to 141|267 for a better circular transition here. fixed
  2. 00:10:449 (3) - Pretty high variation from the previous and the next object's distances here. You might want to make them constant >< fixed DS
  3. 00:31:783 (3) - Replace this with a y-flipped version of 00:30:449 (1) - . Would create some cool symmetry here :D fixed
  4. 00:40:866 (3) - Unneeded inherited point. Consider removing it. fixed
  5. 00:59:798 (1,2,3) - Make them symmetrical, it could create a nice effect here. fixed,move (3) make symmetry.
  6. 01:17:798 (3) - What have you done here? x-x This doesn't even fit the music. I think it's by accident xD oh~ I didn"t notice here, fixed !
  7. Nothing really outstanding here. I personally don't like 1,4 Spacing with 180 BPM since the Distances are pretty high :V
Then I"ll consider reduce the DS here (perhaps I will use 1.2~1.3 or no chaNge the DS )

Normal
  1. 00:04:817 (2) - I'd suggest consistent spacing here. Looks like that's what you wanted :b Okay,keep 1.2x
  2. 00:36:783 (3) - Place at 226|326 fixed
  3. 00:40:866 (8) - Unneeded inherited point. Consider removing it. fixed
  4. 00:43:783 (1,2,3) - The red ticks you've mapped with the slider tails aren't really important since they are just some quiet beats that don't really need to be mapped. Also ignoring 00:45:283 - , which is a really strong sound, feels wrong to me :c fixed
  5. 00:54:131 (6,1) - The transition felt a bit weird due to the movement of the square being interrupted with the slider point so straight downwards. I'd suggest to follow the curve of 00:53:798 (5,6) - . fixed ,keep the curve.
  6. 01:10:464 (1) - 20% sounds a bit quiet here, it#s basically the same 01:05:131 (1) - , so use 40% here as well. Add volume, but I add 30% here.
  7. 01:11:798 (3) - The finish here sounds a bit overdone. If you remove it, you can't here any sign that there has to be a finish in the music. I think this finish is fine, so I have no remove here.(Have a downbeat)
  8. 01:16:964 (3) - The Head is so quiet and the Tail so loud. The tail shocked me a bit while playing. Consider making a fluent transiton from the quiet to the louder one. Remove the finish in head.
  9. Nice!

Hard
  1. 00:15:283 (3) - Maybe replace this with an about -105° rotated version of the previos one for a consitent look of this pattern? I think it is fine :)
  2. 00:17:116 (1) - Whistle on the start, as you did in Insane. Okay,added.
  3. 00:18:116 (4,5) - This gap felt a bit empty to me since the vocals are pretty strong on the red tick. Also a beat is hearable. Okay,follow the vocal here,fixed
  4. 00:36:283 (2) - The spacing is a bit inconsistent here. Consider fixing this for a constant since almost everything is snapped. fixed
  5. 00:43:783 (2) - Why does this have soft sampleset on when 00:44:449 (3) - doesn't? :c I think it is fine :)
  6. 00:59:381 (3) - X should be 256 to be on the axis. fixed
  7. 01:03:131 (3) - Inconsitant spacing! Try to avoid this for curves like this. It just looks as you wanted to space these but failed :/ fixed
  8. 01:12:464 (3) - This overlaps 01:11:798 (1) - 's tail is a bit weird since it looks like these should be kind of a cross between two curved sliders and crosses don't overlap the ends of each other, don't you think so? A 90° rotated version of 01:11:798 (1) - would make this look a bit better. Okay,then I don"t overlap here. fixed.
  9. Cool Hard Diff :D I personally don't like the gap between Hard and the Insane, since both Insanes are pretty hard.
Okay, thanks !

Insane
  1. 00:05:151 (4) - This feels a bit overmapped to me, since the violin holds that note. I'd suggest a 1/1 Slider here, since the red tick definitely doesn't need to be mapped imo C: fixed
  2. 00:14:366 (4) - The transition here felt a bit awkward to me due to the angle of the stream. Maybe a curve could make the feel here better! [/color] fixed
  3. 00:17:449 (2) - A clap on the head would fit your pattern. It sounds a bit empty here, since you've mapped the same one before with a clap :c fixed
  4. 00:33:116 (1,2,3,4) - If you listen closely you can hear that 00:33:283 - , 00:33:616 - and 00:33:949 - have pretty strong notes on them. Definitely louder and stronger than the fade of this sound, which is on the blue ticks. So I'd suggest the following rhythm. good,fixed
  5. 00:50:798 (2) - This kicked me off in playtest. I'd suggest CTRL+G here to follow the previous slider's curve movement a bit smoother. changed
  6. 01:07:798 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - This is so messy x-x Everything overlaps and is so close to each other. I'd suggest you to make something similiar to 00:51:798 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - . This was awesome :c Okay,change a bit here
  7. 00:58:298 (5) - Finish on the head, since it's the same as 00:57:631 - added
  8. 01:00:131 (2,3) - The transition here is really bad in my opinion since I expected that I have to go to the location of 01:00:798 (4) - . I'd suggest you to switch 01:00:464 (3,4) - . changed
  9. 01:09:798 (3,4,5,6) - How about a perfect square here? :c Okay,change square here.
  10. Cool C:
Thanks !

Please reply! I hope it was helpful and good luck! :3
Very useful !

Thanks Mao ~ ! Hoo~~I spend so long time to fix now,I"ll check ur map soon ! :)
Mafumafu
As ZZH requested
Newbie and a little nazimodder, so sorry if there is no help!

Excellent song and map!

[General]

AI mod says:

In hard diff: 01:02:798 (2) - unsnapped end http://puu.sh/8th7Q.jpg

[ZZH's Insane]

酷炫

00:09:783 (2) - 可以把这个2这样摆一下:http://puu.sh/8thht.jpg

00:09:949 (3,5) - 隔开的远一些
00:10:449 (5,1) - 这样叠flow猴一些:http://puu.sh/8thll.jpg 还可以包一下2

00:17:449 (1,2,3,4) - 这排列sad,试试:http://puu.sh/8ubWB.jpg
(1的尾巴4的尾巴2的尾巴 1的尾巴4的尾巴2的尾巴分别成正三角形 for a better flow 好看的pattern)
00:19:116 (1,2,3,4) - 弄个音量渐增?
00:26:449 (1,3) - 包好啊
00:27:116 (3) - 加whistle
00:29:116 (6) - 加whistle跟背景钢琴貌似?
00:35:449 (1,3) - 不跟背景加些音效?
00:31:783 (1) - 没叠好
00:41:116 (2,3,4,5,6) - 节奏有些乱,应该是1/2滑条往下摆啊 00:42:116 (6) - 这个的结尾是重音了,应该是一个1/1滑调的开头
00:55:464 (4) - 开头没叠好
00:59:131 (1,2,3) - 这种坚强的我觉得可以用下变速 比如说:第一个1.00x 第二个1.25x 第三个1.5x然后互相包一起,每个都nc
01:03:798 (1,3) - 避免重叠
01:04:464 (4,6) - 用4包6
美丽
[Normal and Hard]
都很好了
只是个人觉得Normal有些难了,我觉得normal和hard只差了半颗多星,感觉spread不是很接得上
[Easy]
00:14:449 (1) - 试试这样http://puu.sh/8udkD.jpg
因为这个是一个长slider,且包含多个vocal,所以只接一个弯滑条不太能体现vocal,所以弄成有拐点的,正好可以把拐点放在vocal的位置上
00:19:783 (1,2) - 包好http://puu.sh/8udsG.jpg
00:27:449 (4,1,2) - 建议放成这样:124正三角形http://puu.sh/8udwt.jpg
00:59:798 (1,2) - 建议加上音效强调一下vocal
01:01:131 (3) - ^
01:10:464 (1,3) - 对称,好看的pattern
没啦~ :)

PS:做这个mod的时候就想起了我刚开始做图时,小船大大的mod。。虽然那张图现在还没rank。。不过回想起来真的是好感动,可是当时什么都不懂啊TwT
谢谢!
ZZHBOY

Regraz wrote:

As ZZH requested
[ZZH's Insane]

酷炫

00:09:783 (2) - 可以把这个2这样摆一下:http://puu.sh/8thht.jpg

00:09:949 (3,5) - 隔开的远一些
00:10:449 (5,1) - 这样叠flow猴一些:http://puu.sh/8thll.jpg 还可以包一下2

00:17:449 (1,2,3,4) - 这排列sad,试试:http://puu.sh/8ubWB.jpg
(1的尾巴4的尾巴2的尾巴 1的尾巴4的尾巴2的尾巴分别成正三角形 for a better flow 好看的pattern)
00:19:116 (1,2,3,4) - 弄个音量渐增?
00:26:449 (1,3) - 包好啊
00:27:116 (3) - 加whistle
00:29:116 (6) - 加whistle跟背景钢琴貌似?
00:35:449 (1,3) - 不跟背景加些音效?
00:31:783 (1) - 没叠好
00:41:116 (2,3,4,5,6) - 节奏有些乱,应该是1/2滑条往下摆啊 00:42:116 (6) - 这个的结尾是重音了,应该是一个1/1滑调的开头改了下
00:55:464 (4) - 开头没叠好
00:59:131 (1,2,3) - 这种坚强的我觉得可以用下变速 比如说:第一个1.00x 第二个1.25x 第三个1.5x然后互相包一起,每个都nc加了个变速没搞nc
01:03:798 (1,3) - 避免重叠
01:04:464 (4,6) - 用4包6
美丽


PS:小船大大 应该是船业大大
code
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yf_bmp
Sry for delaying

Notice:

  1. Red: Be unrankable
  2. Blue: Be important
  3. Black: Suggestions
[General]
soft-hitnormal2音效不太适合,建议是吧这个音效作为Addition而不是Sampleset

[Insane]
00:06:450 (1) - 红线结束会比较合理一些 音乐这里的衔接并不是很紧凑
00:08:283 - 这个音加上为好
00:23:283 (4,5,6) - 这三个不等距的弧线真是比较蛋疼...建议等距
00:25:116 (2) - normalfinish没必要 不合曲
00:30:449 (1) - ^
00:38:449 (1) - 00:38:949 (3) - 00:39:616 (1) - 这三个头finish
00:43:949 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - 就是这里 我觉得soft-hitnormal2不是很适合
00:45:783 (3) - 尾finish
01:01:131 (1) - 太长的滑条很影响kiai的节奏啊...
01:18:048 (4,5,6,7,8) - 这个串摆平滑一些
01:28:548 (6,1) - 这种距离对player很不友好 而且这里也不太适用 建议与之前距离相等, 后面滑条跳可以增大些

[ZZHBOY]
00:20:449 - 前后联系看这里适合加note
00:43:783 (1) - 这个圈放这里没感觉啊 建议这个做成跳和下面的连打对应
00:44:783 - 不要忽略鼓点了
00:57:964 (3,4,5) - 00:58:630 (6,7,8) - 间距不好 kiai这样有失感觉啊
01:02:464 (1) - 3/4不妥 建议1/2
01:26:131 - 音吃了

01:27:714 (1) - 红线结束

[Hard]
00:31:116 (2) - 去掉折返合理些
01:27:798 (1) - 红线结束

低难度看不出什么
Star!
GL :D
ZZHBOY

yf_bmp wrote:

[ZZHBOY]
00:20:449 - 前后联系看这里适合加note
00:43:783 (1) - 这个圈放这里没感觉啊 建议这个做成跳和下面的连打对应不好 移开了一点
00:44:783 - 不要忽略鼓点了
00:57:964 (3,4,5) - 00:58:630 (6,7,8) - 间距不好 kiai这样有失感觉啊不好
01:02:464 (1) - 3/4不妥 建议1/2不好
01:26:131 - 音吃了
01:27:714 (1) - 红线结束不好

GL :D
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ZZHBOY
xChippy
yo

[General]
  1. Isn't this an anime opening sooo where is the video ;w;
  2. Several unused inherited points in the lower diffs please check them
[Insane]
  1. 00:14:783 (2) - Try a ctrl+G here plays alot more comfortable for me
  2. 00:17:783 (3,4,5,6,1) - Try this for a more natural flow cuz your current feels a bit weird --> the first triangle (3,4,5) has a nice zigzag but (6,1) is waay to sharp and doesnt flow natural imo.
  3. 00:34:783 (3,4) - Ctrl+g those? will have a nice jump to (5) and flows good imo
  4. 00:38:949 (3) - Add a finish here there is a cymbal crash
  5. 00:39:616 (1) - Same here, listen with earphones or something else you'll hear a cymbal crash
  6. 00:44:449 (7,8,9) - Your skipping a really loud beat here 00:44:783 with this slider 00:44:616 (9) - imo doesnt play really fine like this, try this:
    Rythm:

    And a little pattern suggestion:
  7. 00:45:783 (3) - Missing clap at the head and missing finish at the end, You have it at your hard o3o, reminder! lower the volume of the finish so it doesnt overwhelm the kiai's one
  8. 00:55:798 (6) - add a NC for consistency
  9. 00:56:464 (8) - Meh imo better to keep the vocals here by extending this 1/2 and removing this note 00:56:798 (9) - since its the same as this 00:55:798 (6) - and imo would be weird otherwise :O
  10. 01:02:464 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Has onllyyyy 1/2 imo you could use 1/1 a bit more here by following vocal a bit better for example at these places: 01:05:131 - 01:05:798 - but up to you ofc but consider adding some
  11. 01:15:798 (1) - Slider looks weird imo maybe just do a blanket with (4)?
  12. 01:17:798 (3) - Break into 2 circles instead is better, for vocal and imo the stream play more comfortable that way
    Nice diff~
[ZZH]
  1. 00:08:449 (2) - Missing clap here or whistle idk which you prefer here but I'd go with clap
  2. 00:23:116 - such an awkward blank here.. next notes are following the instrument and the instrument is starting here, imo you should put a note here and fix up the pattern afterwards
  3. 00:26:449 (1,3) - Try making a blanket here o-o? cuz currently it looks really messy.
  4. 00:30:949 (2) - Meh this stack doesnt play good imo try moving it to 376|116 for better flow
  5. 00:33:616 (2,3,4,5,6) - idk what are you following here o-o Try to make some diversity by putting sliders to follow the violin or to follow the vocal or even better 00:33:116 (7) - break this slider and follow the violin and afterwards put slider for the upcoming vocal.
    00:40:949 (1) - Remove NC and add NC here 00:41:116 (2) -
    00:41:116 (2,3,4,5,6) - This plays reaaaly awkward cuz of this 00:41:449 (3,4) - imo the active clicking should be at the white tick and not at the end cuz of the rapid claps your following here soo try this rythm:

    with stacks like this (Pattern):
    and reminder all white tick clap here for this combo
  6. 00:42:449 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - okay.. lol and here you have it like that but here it doesnt fit lol this rythm is not compatible with the pattern your using here, imo you should try something else.
  7. 00:44:616 (1) - Your skipping a major beat here OAO 00:44:783 - maybe try this rythm?
    Rythm:

    Pattern:
  8. 00:46:116 (1) - Missing clap here or actually a finish I hear a cymbal here consider adding one but if you agree turn the volume a bit down so it doesnt overwhelm the finish on the kiai start.
  9. 00:54:131 (4,5,1) - - Fix the distance a bit to big here, ppl may mistake this as 1/2 especially when playing HR.
  10. 00:57:964 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Meh I dont agree with those anti jumps cuz they just dont fit the music but oh well up to you o3o
  11. 01:00:048 (2) - weird distance snap here make it consistent with (1) and (3) or stack it with (3) cuz this just looks so weird ><
  12. 01:02:464 (1) - Shorten this slider with 1/4 the blue tick just doesnt fit here...
  13. 01:14:131 (4,1) - Might be a bit to close o3o move (4) a bit further away? maybe around 160|268
  14. 01:14:464 (1) - remove this whistle here from the head
  15. 01:23:798 (1) - Remove normal sample set and put a finish here instead cuz its the same as 00:09:116 (5) - and here you have a finish and also finish is better o3o
    Pretty decent diff but looks a bit messy here and there but with a few nazi mods it should be good to go!
[Hard]
  1. 00:05:151 (4) - Ctrl+G flows alot better (3) curve is going up so its better to have the head up o3o and it wont effect the flow with the next note o3o
  2. 00:10:449 (5,6) - Fix this blanket a bit look at the Approach circle o3o
  3. 00:18:116 (4,5,6) - Try this?
    Flows better imo cuz currently the curve of (5) is jammering the flow
  4. 00:42:116 (4,5) - nazi fiix the stack o3o
  5. 00:54:464 (1,3) - Blanket could be done neater here
  6. 01:19:798 (1,2,3) - Nazi fix the stack o3o
  7. 01:20:464 (4,5,6) - ^
    Nice aswell tho I dont agree with these sliders with 2 repeats like this 00:48:465 (8) - but its just personal preference.
[Normal]
  1. First of all OD+1 to balance the set
  2. 00:22:449 (1,2,3) - Doesnt really look neat and also doesnt flow really good imo try this?
  3. 00:41:116 (1) - Why a finish here, no indication in the music for it or something else, imo you should remove it.
  4. 00:45:783 (4) - Missing clap here
  5. 00:46:116 (5) - Lower the volume a bit, to noisy like this imo
  6. 00:47:798 (3,4,5,6) - How about some zigzag for more natural flow:
  7. 01:11:798 (4,5,6,7) - errr turn those into two 1/2 slider to follow the vocal better? this plays a bit weird atm imo
  8. 01:15:798 (1,2) - Rythm is weird here cuz your skipping the major beats here try this:
[Easy]
  1. 00:38:449 (1,2) - Plays awkward imo again your not focusing on the major beats >< try this:
  2. 00:41:116 (1) - Same as normal about the finish here
  3. 01:15:798 (1) - Meh skipping major beats here making this feel awkward try this:
  4. 01:17:798 (4) - Shorten this slider by 1/2 imo plays alot better and 1/2 in easy is meh
  5. 01:20:464 - uuh add 1/2 slider here o-o with a clap at the end.
    Good easy but dont agree with some 1/2 but w/e o3o
Well hope this was helpful o3o contact me if you some things weren't clear~
ZZHBOY

xChippy wrote:

yo
[ZZH]
  1. 00:08:449 (2) - Missing clap here or whistle idk which you prefer here but I'd go with clapadded
  2. 00:23:116 - such an awkward blank here.. next notes are following the instrument and the instrument is starting here, imo you should put a note here and fix up the pattern afterwards i like this
  3. 00:26:449 (1,3) - Try making a blanket here o-o? cuz currently it looks really messy.fixed
  4. 00:30:949 (2) - Meh this stack doesnt play good imo try moving it to 376|116 for better flowyep
  5. 00:33:616 (2,3,4,5,6) - idk what are you following here o-o Try to make some diversity by putting sliders to follow the violin or to follow the vocal or even better 00:33:116 (7) - break this slider and follow the violin and afterwards put slider for the upcoming vocal.
    00:40:949 (1) - Remove NC and add NC here 00:41:116 (2) - done
    00:41:116 (2,3,4,5,6) - This plays reaaaly awkward cuz of this 00:41:449 (3,4) - imo the active clicking should be at the white tick and not at the end cuz of the rapid claps your following here soo try this rythm:

    with stacks like this (Pattern):
    and reminder all white tick clap here for this combo
  6. 00:42:449 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - okay.. lol and here you have it like that but here it doesnt fit lol this rythm is not compatible with the pattern your using here, imo you should try something else.
  7. 00:44:616 (1) - Your skipping a major beat here OAO 00:44:783 - maybe try this rythm?i want to stress vocal here.-.
    Rythm:

    Pattern:
  8. 00:46:116 (1) - Missing clap here or actually a finish I hear a cymbal here consider adding one but if you agree turn the volume a bit down so it doesnt overwhelm the finish on the kiai start.
  9. 00:54:131 (4,5,1) - - Fix the distance a bit to big here, ppl may mistake this as 1/2 especially when playing HR.
  10. 00:57:964 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Meh I dont agree with those anti jumps cuz they just dont fit the music but oh well up to you o3o
  11. 01:00:048 (2) - weird distance snap here make it consistent with (1) and (3) or stack it with (3) cuz this just looks so weird ><
  12. 01:02:464 (1) - Shorten this slider with 1/4 the blue tick just doesnt fit here...done
  13. 01:14:131 (4,1) - Might be a bit to close o3o move (4) a bit further away? maybe around 160|268u r right o3o
  14. 01:14:464 (1) - remove this whistle here from the headdone
  15. 01:23:798 (1) - Remove normal sample set and put a finish here instead cuz its the same as 00:09:116 (5) - and here you have a finish and also finish is better o3o
    Pretty decent diff but looks a bit messy here and there but with a few nazi mods it should be good to go!
thank for your mod and your praise 8-)
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Topic Starter
smallboat
Sorry for delay reply , I "m busy before. (mapping another one

Regraz

Regraz wrote:

As ZZH requested
Newbie and a little nazimodder, so sorry if there is no help!有幫到一些!

Excellent song and map!

[General]

AI mod says:

In hard diff: 01:02:798 (2) - unsnapped end http://puu.sh/8th7Q.jpg 忘了看到這個,fixed.

[Normal and Hard]
都很好了
只是个人觉得Normal有些难了,我觉得normal和hard只差了半颗多星,感觉spread不是很接得上 沒關係 就這樣吧,或許有空NM節奏會改一下

[Easy]
00:14:449 (1) - 试试这样http://puu.sh/8udkD.jpg 嗯好,拐的已壓在vocal上。
因为这个是一个长slider,且包含多个vocal,所以只接一个弯滑条不太能体现vocal,所以弄成有拐点的,正好可以把拐点放在vocal的位置上
00:19:783 (1,2) - 包好http://puu.sh/8udsG.jpg
00:27:449 (4,1,2) - 建议放成这样:124正三角形http://puu.sh/8udwt.jpg Ok接受
00:59:798 (1,2) - 建议加上音效强调一下vocal 不加音效,我覺得加whistle還是有點突出,但是這裡我加了音量10%給全部diff
01:01:131 (3) - ^ ^
01:10:464 (1,3) - 对称,好看的pattern 似乎因為間距無法重疊上去,但這裡有再重擺一下對稱pattern。
没啦~ :)

PS:做这个mod的时候就想起了我刚开始做图时,小船大大的mod。。虽然那张图现在还没rank。。不过回想起来真的是好感动,可是当时什么都不懂啊TwT 後來下載看了一下有進步很多,你那張我是覺得差不多可以泡了,只是太鼓BAT有點難找,因為都不怎麼活躍或是不接req,我推薦可以找外國太鼓BAT試試,之前第一張和第二張通霄找太鼓BAT要ICON,太累,所以暫時我的圖先沒找太鼓GD,省了一道額外要太鼓ICON的手續。(除非太鼓BAT有15個我就找GD)。
谢谢!

謝謝 Regraz ~ ! :)
yf_bmp

yf_bmp wrote:

Sry for delaying 沒關係,臥巢回這一篇我才發現忘了給老爺KD,sorry。

Notice:

  1. Red: Be unrankable
  2. Blue: Be important
  3. Black: Suggestions
[General]
soft-hitnormal2音效不太适合,建议是吧这个音效作为Addition而不是Sampleset 因為我是綠化大使不會用這個....現在我是覺得聽的還好,這裡先不變。

[Insane]
00:06:450 (1) - 红线结束会比较合理一些 音乐这里的衔接并不是很紧凑
00:08:283 - 这个音加上为好 老爺說的堆
00:23:283 (4,5,6) - 这三个不等距的弧线真是比较蛋疼...建议等距 好,把4下移了下面點。
00:25:116 (2) - normalfinish没必要 不合曲
00:30:449 (1) - ^ ^
00:38:449 (1) - 00:38:949 (3) - 00:39:616 (1) - 这三个头finish 還可行,改了
00:43:949 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - 就是这里 我觉得soft-hitnormal2不是很适合 的確是有點不好,那這先保持
00:45:783 (3) - 尾finish
01:01:131 (1) - 太长的滑条很影响kiai的节奏啊... 很好的建議,改了
01:18:048 (4,5,6,7,8) - 这个串摆平滑一些
01:28:548 (6,1) - 这种距离对player很不友好 而且这里也不太适用 建议与之前距离相等, 后面滑条跳可以增大些
OK,這邊等距了
[Hard]
00:31:116 (2) - 去掉折返合理些 恩很多人說這裡,改了
01:27:798 (1) - 红线结束

低难度看不出什么
Star! 謝謝!
GL :D

謝謝 yf_bmp ~ ! :)

xChippy wrote:

yo yo!

[General]
  1. Isn't this an anime opening sooo where is the video ;w; Because the update problem,so I remove this first.
  2. Several unused inherited points in the lower diffs please check themOkay,I"ll check this to delete.
[Insane]
  1. 00:14:783 (2) - Try a ctrl+G here plays alot more comfortable for me Okay,changed
  2. 00:17:783 (3,4,5,6,1) - Try this for a more natural flow cuz your current feels a bit weird --> the first triangle (3,4,5) has a nice zigzag but (6,1) is waay to sharp and doesnt flow natural imo. Sure,change a bit.
  3. 00:34:783 (3,4) - Ctrl+g those? will have a nice jump to (5) and flows good imo Okay,changed.
  4. 00:38:949 (3) - Add a finish here there is a cymbal crash Already added before.
  5. 00:39:616 (1) - Same here, listen with earphones or something else you'll hear a cymbal crash ^
  6. 00:44:449 (7,8,9) - Your skipping a really loud beat here 00:44:783 with this slider 00:44:616 (9) - imo doesnt play really fine like this, try this: Okay,changed
    Rythm:

    And a little pattern suggestion:
  7. 00:45:783 (3) - Missing clap at the head and missing finish at the end, You have it at your hard o3o, reminder! lower the volume of the finish so it doesnt overwhelm the kiai's one Added,reduce 30% volume here.
  8. 00:55:798 (6) - add a NC for consistency fixed
  9. 00:56:464 (8) - Meh imo better to keep the vocals here by extending this 1/2 and removing this note 00:56:798 (9) - since its the same as this 00:55:798 (6) - and imo would be weird otherwise :O Okay,already extended and added NC at 00:56:964 (1) .
  10. 01:02:464 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Has onllyyyy 1/2 imo you could use 1/1 a bit more here by following vocal a bit better for example at these places: 01:05:131 - 01:05:798 - but up to you ofc but consider adding some
    Although your suggestion is good, but I select keep this here.
  11. 01:15:798 (1) - Slider looks weird imo maybe just do a blanket with (4)? Okay,fixed
  12. 01:17:798 (3) - Break into 2 circles instead is better, for vocal and imo the stream play more comfortable that way Okay,change 2 notes.
    Nice diff~ Thanks !
[Hard]
  1. 00:05:151 (4) - Ctrl+G flows alot better (3) curve is going up so its better to have the head up o3o and it wont effect the flow with the next note o3o Okay,changed.
  2. 00:10:449 (5,6) - Fix this blanket a bit look at the Approach circle o3o Okay :D
  3. 00:18:116 (4,5,6) - Try this? Okay,changed.
    Flows better imo cuz currently the curve of (5) is jammering the flow
  4. 00:42:116 (4,5) - nazi fiix the stack o3o fixed :)
  5. 00:54:464 (1,3) - Blanket could be done neater here Move a bit.
  6. 01:19:798 (1,2,3) - Nazi fix the stack o3o fixed :)
  7. 01:20:464 (4,5,6) - ^ ^
    Nice aswell tho I dont agree with these sliders with 2 repeats like this 00:48:465 (8) - but its just personal preference.I think it is fine in the rhythm ,I select follow the vocal here
[Normal]
  1. First of all OD+1 to balance the set Okay
  2. 00:22:449 (1,2,3) - Doesnt really look neat and also doesnt flow really good imo try this? fixed
  3. 00:41:116 (1) - Why a finish here, no indication in the music for it or something else, imo you should remove it. Okay,deleted.
  4. 00:45:783 (4) - Missing clap here Already added.
  5. 00:46:116 (5) - Lower the volume a bit, to noisy like this imo Turn down 20 % volume.
  6. 00:47:798 (3,4,5,6) - How about some zigzag for more natural flow: Okay,fixed.
  7. 01:11:798 (4,5,6,7) - errr turn those into two 1/2 slider to follow the vocal better? this plays a bit weird atm imo Okay,change 1/2 slider for this 4 notes.
  8. 01:15:798 (1,2) - Rythm is weird here cuz your skipping the major beats here try this: Good,fixed.
[Easy]
  1. 00:38:449 (1,2) - Plays awkward imo again your not focusing on the major beats >< try this: Okay,fixed.
  2. 00:41:116 (1) - Same as normal about the finish here Deleted.
  3. 01:15:798 (1) - Meh skipping major beats here making this feel awkward try this: fixed.
  4. 01:17:798 (4) - Shorten this slider by 1/2 imo plays alot better and 1/2 in easy is meh Okay,fixed.
  5. 01:20:464 - uuh add 1/2 slider here o-o with a clap at the end. Okay,changed.
    Good easy but dont agree with some 1/2 but w/e o3o 030
Well hope this was helpful o3o contact me if you some things weren't clear~Sure,every suggest I have understand it,very useful ~ 030 !

Thanks xChippy ~ ! :) hoo~reply finish ! So long ~~ 030"
Kenezz
Heeey

[Easy]
  1. 00:33:116 (1,2,1) - This could be so hard to rookie players since (2) is on an red tick after a little pause when (1) is on white tick, so confusing. Then I suggest add an 1/4 slider on 00:33:116 (deleting 1 and 2 obviously) to follow the track and avoid the 1/2~1/2 spacing with 00:34:449 (1). Also you'll not need another nc because the new slider follows the track too. http://puu.sh/8IVAG.jpg. If you don't add with this at least try to avoid that slider on red tick, really is hard to follow.
  2. 00:40:616 (4) -This slider don't convinced me at all because if you want follow the voice like the previous beats, then this slider should end up on 00:41:116, as it is now feels awkward because on that red tick the track and the voice doesn't mark anything so here's my suggestion: Move the spinner by 1/2 forwards and shorten by 1/2, then extend the slider by 1/2 and add a finish at the end. http://puu.sh/8IWon.jpg
[Normal]
  1. 00:24:449 (1,2) - Add an slider instead those circles, just to be consistent with 01:23:131 (1) or here add two stacked circles idk.
  2. 01:13:131 (1) - Check the spacing, is slightly different here. You can move 01:12:464 (5) a bit to the right and voilà~
[Hard]
  1. 00:07:783 (2,3) - The spacing between these circles is kinda confusing, as it now feels like 1/2~1/2 or 1/1~1/1 when actually is 2/1~2/1, then I suggest move (3) away (2) or maybe stack (2) and (3). Try to fix this somewhat.
  2. 00:11:449 (7) - Stack this circle properly with the tail of the previous slider.
  3. 00:24:949 (2) - The new combo should start here because you follow the voice in the next combo and this circle follow the voice of the next phrase as well. Just like the easy or normal.
  4. 00:24:449 (1) - Maybe add two cricles instead this slider and make something like 01:23:131 (1,2) jump, jump~
  5. 00:56:464 (7) - Rotate by 13° anti-clockwise and ajust the slider to the tail of the previous to make something like this: http://puu.sh/8K2qw.jpg. If you add don't forget fix the spacing with the next circle.
[Insane]
  1. 00:14:116 (1) - The NC is needless since the previous and this follow the same part of the track.
  2. 00:55:131 (3) - Maybe move the control point of the tail to make a blanket with the previous slider, somethins like this: http://puu.sh/8LyXU.jpg
  3. 00:56:964 (1) - I can't see the reason to add a nc here, delete it please.
  4. 01:00:464 (3) - The flow on the slider could be better if you move the central control point downwards and if you add then, 01:00:798 (4) - Delete this and copy/paste 01:00:131 (2) in this place. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1604494. Really I think this improves the flow in these and the next slider.
  5. 01:02:131 (1) - Remove this NC too.
  6. 01:23:631 (3) - Start the new combo here because this triplet belong to the next part of the track.
[ZZH's Insane]
  1. 00:08:366 - I can't hear anything here then, why you placed a beat here? *overmap* The slider tail really sounds off, maybe remove the slider and only leaves a circle on 00:08:283. You can stack the two circles if you want. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1617814
  2. 00:24:199 (7) - Same thing like the previous point, *overmap* Considers remove this circle then.
  3. 00:24:949 (1) - I think this NC is needless, maybe remove it.
  4. 00:35:449 (1) - Same as before.
  5. 00:44:616 (1) - Change the SV for .75 instead .5, now this slowdown is actually bit awkward since the song don't mark something like a slowdown and .5 is too slow.
  6. 00:46:116 (1) - The NC is needless because these circles follows the same rhythm like the previous.
  7. 00:57:964 (3) - This change of the spacing requires new combo so add one here.
  8. 01:00:048 (2) - Same as 00:08:366 & 00:24:199 (7), overmap thing, remove this circle maybe.
  9. 01:25:131 (7) - Maybe add new combo, now this is a bit longer than the others.
  10. Well in general I don't understand your spacement, in some parts you used this type of spacing 00:57:048 (5,1) with 1/4 ~1/4 beats and in others parts something like this: 01:13:131 (1,2) ¯\__(ツ)__/¯
    The flow is kinda weird in some parts of the map but meeh. Just one thing more, please, really try to do something with those circles overmaped.
And the m4m ends here
I love this anime and this song and kanon AAH
Good luck then~
ZZHBOY

Kenezz wrote:

Heeey

[ZZH's Insane]
  1. 00:08:366 - I can't hear anything here then, why you placed a beat here? *overmap* The slider tail really sounds off, maybe remove the slider and only leaves a circle on 00:08:283. You can stack the two circles if you want. turn your volume up ,you can find here has a sound clearly. playing by 0.25-speed absolutely can show the sound here, i promise.
  2. 00:24:199 (7) - Same thing like the previous point, *overmap* Considers remove this circle then.otherwise, i followed the sound of breathe in here.Else, this can emphasize the strong beat at 00:24:449 - and will make it play better
  3. 00:24:949 (1) - I think this NC is needless, maybe remove it.seems fine
  4. 00:35:449 (1) - Same as before.in fact, i set a new combo here mean to distinguish the 1/4 slider and next circles.it can help player to read the rhythm here easier so i decide to keep this nc
  5. 00:44:616 (1) - Change the SV for .75 instead .5, now this slowdown is actually bit awkward since the song don't mark something like a slowdown and .5 is too slow.first, lower sv can create a sense of hierarchy on the sound.Also, if I use 0.75 sv instead, this slider will mach longer than next one to make it ugly in vision.sv for 0.5 is fine here imo.
  6. 00:46:116 (1) - The NC is needless because these circles follows the same rhythm like the previous.you are right.removed.-.
  7. 00:57:964 (3) - This change of the spacing requires new combo so add one here.yep.added!
  8. 01:00:048 (2) - Same as 00:08:366 & 00:24:199 (7), overmap thing, remove this circle maybe.em.........i change previous slider into 3/4slider finally.....i really want to follow the long vocal here so.....QAQQQQ
  9. 01:25:131 (7) - Maybe add new combo, now this is a bit longer than the others.
  10. Well in general I don't understand your spacement, in some parts you used this type of spacing 00:57:048 (5,1) with 1/4 ~1/4 beats and in others parts something like this: 01:13:131 (1,2) ¯\__(ツ)__/¯
    The flow is kinda weird in some parts of the map but meeh. Just one thing more, please, really try to do something with those circles overmaped.
;w;
And the m4m ends here
I love this anime and this song and kanon AAH
Good luck then~
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312,112,78381,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,88,78464,6,0,L|436:88,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,200,78798,2,0,L|368:200,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,144,79298,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,152,79381,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,160,79464,2,0,L|232:152,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,224,79798,2,0,L|280:232,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,324,80131,2,0,L|216:216,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,60,80464,6,0,L|300:208,1,135,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,248,80798,2,0,P|348:248|384:272,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,324,81131,2,0,P|168:324|132:300,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,104,81464,2,0,P|216:192|200:220,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,240,81798,6,0,B|128:240|128:240|196:268,1,135,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,296,82131,2,0,P|240:256|288:248,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,296,82464,2,0,B|404:244|404:244|385:194|384:144,1,180,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,108,82881,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,64,82964,2,0,L|312:96,2,90,0|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,104,83798,6,0,L|293:127,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,264,84131,2,0,L|218:240,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,94,84464,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,148,84631,1,0,0:0:0:0:
359,201,84798,1,8,0:0:0:0:
460,260,84964,1,0,0:0:0:0:
460,260,85131,2,0,L|480:140,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
359,201,85464,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,240,85631,2,0,B|200:248|200:248|260:232,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,199,85964,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,148,86131,1,8,0:0:0:0:
428,64,86298,5,0,0:0:0:0:
404,76,86381,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,88,86464,2,0,L|264:120,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,96,86798,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,152,86964,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,208,87131,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,292,87298,21,0,0:0:0:0:
219,310,87381,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,325,87464,2,0,L|132:300,1,45,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,248,87631,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,87714,12,0,89131,0:0:0:0:
Topic Starter
smallboat

Kenezz wrote:

Heeey Hihi Kenezz ~ !

[Easy]
  1. 00:33:116 (1,2,1) - This could be so hard to rookie players since (2) is on an red tick after a little pause when (1) is on white tick, so confusing. Then I suggest add an 1/4 slider on 00:33:116 (deleting 1 and 2 obviously) to follow the track and avoid the 1/2~1/2 spacing with 00:34:449 (1). Also you'll not need another nc because the new slider follows the track too. http://puu.sh/8IVAG.jpg. If you don't add with this at least try to avoid that slider on red tick, really is hard to follow.Okay,change rhythm and NC here.
  2. 00:40:616 (4) -This slider don't convinced me at all because if you want follow the voice like the previous beats, then this slider should end up on 00:41:116, as it is now feels awkward because on that red tick the track and the voice doesn't mark anything so here's my suggestion: Move the spinner by 1/2 forwards and shorten by 1/2, then extend the slider by 1/2 and add a finish at the end. http://puu.sh/8IWon.jpg Okay,change slider here.But the spinner head seems have a bit close,so I move to 00:41:449 (1) here.




[Normal]
  1. 00:24:449 (1,2) - Add an slider instead those circles, just to be consistent with 01:23:131 (1) or here add two stacked circles idk.Okay,changed.
  2. 01:13:131 (1) - Check the spacing, is slightly different here. You can move 01:12:464 (5) a bit to the right and voilà~Forgot notice DS here,fixed.
[Hard]
  1. 00:07:783 (2,3) - The spacing between these circles is kinda confusing, as it now feels like 1/2~1/2 or 1/1~1/1 when actually is 2/1~2/1, then I suggest move (3) away (2) or maybe stack (2) and (3). Try to fix this somewhat. Sure,then I select stack (2)(3)here.
  2. 00:11:449 (7) - Stack this circle properly with the tail of the previous slider. fixed
  3. 00:24:949 (2) - The new combo should start here because you follow the voice in the next combo and this circle follow the voice of the next phrase as well. Just like the easy or normal.Added
  4. 00:24:449 (1) - Maybe add two cricles instead this slider and make something like 01:23:131 (1,2) jump, jump~ Good,I forgot use jump here,fixed.
  5. 00:56:464 (7) - Rotate by 13° anti-clockwise and ajust the slider to the tail of the previous to make something like this: http://puu.sh/8K2qw.jpg. If you add don't forget fix the spacing with the next circle.Sure,fixe this slider.
[Insane]
  1. 00:14:116 (1) - The NC is needless since the previous and this follow the same part of the track. Okay,fixed
  2. 00:55:131 (3) - Maybe move the control point of the tail to make a blanket with the previous slider, somethins like this: http://puu.sh/8LyXU.jpg Sure,move up a bit.
  3. 00:56:964 (1) - I can't see the reason to add a nc here, delete it please. Sure,delete this NC.
  4. 01:00:464 (3) - The flow on the slider could be better if you move the central control point downwards and if you add then, 01:00:798 (4) - Delete this and copy/paste 01:00:131 (2) in this place. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1604494. Really I think this improves the flow in these and the next slider. Sure,change slider flow here.
  5. 01:02:131 (1) - Remove this NC too. fixed
  6. 01:23:631 (3) - Start the new combo here because this triplet belong to the next part of the track. Okay,add NC here.
And the m4m ends here
I love this anime and this song and kanon AAH wow,I like it,too and I like "kanon" this singer.
Good luck then~Thanks Kenezz ~ !
All updated.
Kenezz
Re-check time~

[General]
  1. AiBat said: http://puu.sh/8W2K5.png Check the start of the second kiai on Insane and ZZH's Insane, is different by 1 ms
[Hard]
  1. 00:44:530 - Unsnapped inherited section, should be in 00:44:533
That's all, call me back when you have applied the changes.
Topic Starter
smallboat

Kenezz wrote:

Re-check time~

[General]
  1. AiBat said: http://puu.sh/8W2K5.png Check the start of the second kiai on Insane and ZZH's Insane, is different by 1 ms
Okay,fixed to all consistent.

[Hard]
  1. 00:44:530 - Unsnapped inherited section, should be in 00:44:533 Okay,fixed.


That's all, call me back when you have applied the changes.Sure!
EDIT:Updated

To Kenezz : Perhaps the AiBat program detect a bug,I am quite confirm this first and second kiai time number are consistent (green and white line. )
Kenezz
Okay, seems fine to me.
Bubbies
tuwari
nice map :)
Tari
Good Job <3

go rank it now :D
BeatofIke
Re-bubbled due to timing fix!
wcx19911123
不用kd了

[ZZH's Insane]
00:59:116 - 这里开始直到01:16:949 - 感觉finish吓得有点多。。我觉得可以根据歌曲来remove一些

[Insane]
01:28:949 - 这地方感觉单个note就可以了,更合曲点

话说我感觉总体音效有点小声,尤其finish系,我建议换个别的或者把files改大声点。。
明天看看timing
ZZHBOY

wcx19911123 wrote:

不用kd了

[ZZH's Insane]
00:59:116 - 这里开始直到01:16:949 - 感觉finish吓得有点多。。我觉得可以根据歌曲来remove一些

[Insane]
01:28:949 - 这地方感觉单个note就可以了,更合曲点

话说我感觉总体音效有点小声,尤其finish系,我建议换个别的或者把files改大声点。。
明天看看timing
帮我直接把01:03:783 -
01:09:116 - 这两个finish去掉好了
Topic Starter
smallboat

wcx19911123 wrote:

不用kd了

[Insane]
01:28:949 - 这地方感觉单个note就可以了,更合曲点

话说我感觉总体音效有点小声,尤其finish系,我建议换个别的或者把files改大声点。。 finish音量已用工具調高了點,然後總體音量調高10~15%,但我finish還是不想太大聲 所以+了5~10%左右
明天看看timing 等你
謝了長喜抽空前來check,updated.

WIXOSS GOGO!
wcx19911123
[ZZH's Insane]
忘了video
顺带一说finish的音效文件都换了,你还是redl一下,然后改改。。现在的finish太大声了
然后有些tick音感觉也很诡异00:49:290 - 00:51:123 - 像这些,这种最好都改改

edit: we fixed the timing(changed offset from 1117 to 1124 after finding some ppl's opinions), changed a few hitsounds files, and some patterns in some diffs
fine now, rebubbled
captin1
Did some irc, looks good!

ranked

SPOILER
2014-06-05 21:50 captin1: easy: 00:14:456 (1) - you can move the white slider point to the right, to make the curve look neater http://puu.sh/9h1A4.jpg
2014-06-05 21:51 smallboat: agree, fixed
2014-06-05 21:54 captin1: 00:19:790 - unsure about this section, this is the only one where you use 1/2 during the fast bpm, I have a couple ways you could change the rhythm to keep it 1/1 spacing
2014-06-05 21:55 captin1: 00:21:456 (3) - starting 1/2 later at 00:21:623 - , 00:22:790 (2) - ending 1/2 earlier at 00:23:290 -
2014-06-05 21:55 captin1: up to you if you agree
2014-06-05 21:55 smallboat: okay agree
2014-06-05 21:55 captin1: after that easy is good
2014-06-05 21:55 smallboat: okay
2014-06-05 21:57 captin1: normal: 00:20:790 (3) - you could move 1/2 earlier to 00:20:623 - , since you follow the instrument more in this section, rather than the vocal
2014-06-05 21:58 smallboat: okay
2014-06-05 22:00 captin1: 00:39:956 - these notes are too soft, you should add another timing section at 00:39:956 - back to regular volume of 55%
2014-06-05 22:01 smallboat: is add a green line set 55% volume?
2014-06-05 22:01 captin1: yes
2014-06-05 22:02 smallboat: okay agree :)
2014-06-05 22:04 captin1: 01:16:956 - here too, should add a green line at 75% volume
2014-06-05 22:04 smallboat: aggre added
2014-06-05 22:04 smallboat: *agree
2014-06-05 22:05 captin1: after that normal is good
2014-06-05 22:05 smallboat: okay thx
2014-06-05 22:07 captin1: hard: 00:40:790 (4) - why is this reduced to 20%? I think it should be kept at normal volume, so remove the green lines here
2014-06-05 22:09 smallboat: ahh~ I set the error volume,sorry ,then I deleted this line,fixed
2014-06-05 22:10 captin1: 01:16:623 (5) - same here, I think this is too soft
2014-06-05 22:11 smallboat: okay,deleted this line
2014-06-05 22:12 smallboat: another diff I have checked and deleted ,too
2014-06-05 22:12 captin1: cool
2014-06-05 22:13 smallboat: :D
2014-06-05 22:14 captin1: insane 00:46:123 - stream is too soft >< unless you already fixed
2014-06-05 22:14 smallboat: 030
2014-06-05 22:15 smallboat: so suggest no stream here?
2014-06-05 22:15 captin1: suggest raising volume
2014-06-05 22:16 smallboat: okay agree
2014-06-05 22:18 captin1: 01:12:790 (4) - I think a placement more like this would feel much more comfortable to play http://puu.sh/9h3eE.jpg
2014-06-05 22:19 smallboat: okay agree! nice
2014-06-05 22:21 captin1: 01:17:456 (2) - I think a ctrl+g here would feel better as well. You could move 3 more down and right if you'd like it to still have larger spacing
2014-06-05 22:22 smallboat: okay fixed
2014-06-05 22:23 captin1: 00:53:790 (3) - add NC? if you do, 01:09:790 (3) - here as well
2014-06-05 22:24 smallboat: okay ,agree.I"ll add NC here
2014-06-05 22:25 captin1: 00:29:123 (6) - NC? would fit in the pattern better
2014-06-05 22:26 smallboat: okay,agree add NC here.
2014-06-05 22:26 captin1: 00:42:290 (6) - here as well,
2014-06-05 22:27 smallboat: okay
2014-06-05 22:28 captin1: should be good, and nothing important to mention in ZZH's diff
2014-06-05 22:29 captin1: go ahead and update
2014-06-05 22:30 smallboat: really? but ZZH"finish hs not feel noisy?
2014-06-05 22:30 captin1: I think it's fine
Kyouren
Gratzz!! smallboat and ZZHBOY!!^^
HanzeR
nicee
Oyatsu
Congratz! :)
Sorry, I'm not sure but maybe tittle is only "killy killy JOKER"? Not have "(TV Size)"



Source: http://selector-wixoss.com/ at "Music" tab
captin1
did some discussion and asked around, and this current title is the right one to use in this case. thanks for bringing it up though
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