1. Alarido's Hard (3.05 stars, 418 notes)
2. Easy (1.82 stars, 222 notes)
3. Insane (4.24 stars, 186 notes)
4. Normal (2.04 stars, 304 notes)

Cherry Blossom wrote:

Awh my god.
By the way , Alarido, j'aime ton style o/
It reminds me of old mapping style on english songs o/

tellertheworld wrote:

hey~ railgun~

From as request

Alarido's Hard

1. AI mod
   
   ► Removing all the duplicates while Waiting for the host apply the appropriate changes.
   
2. 00:52:256 - add note here.Bacause 00:46:016 (4) - 00:49:856 (4) - which is space it before and after. If you space at 00:52:256 - , I feel that it is strange. ► A note here would request a remap on this section, because here I'd put the voices in evidence; so not added, but tested.
3. 01:09:776 (4) - overlap with 01:07:856 (2) - ? ► Done.
4. 01:29:936 (10) - move left more. ► Done.
5. 01:35:456 (4) - down more as well in flow? ► Made some adjustements here.
6. 02:08:336 (1,2,3,4,5) - I feel it is too slow in this part (rhythm). You space too more here but the rhythm is same at whole kiai time.You can make more note in the space place. ► As of pointed at that region of 00:52:256 - the voices are in evidence (some placements aren't alike), where one change would lead a remap. Kept the original plan.
7. 02:46:976 (1) - delete this spinner and circle here? Because the finish is very short and softly. ► Making the spinner end at 02:48:896 (shortened) as a middle-term change.
8. 03:09:056 (9) - change it? ↓↓ I think it is more beautiful. ► Changed :3
   

osu file format v12

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 43976
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
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[Metadata]
Title:US Boy
TitleUnicode:US Boy
Artist:Jena Lee
ArtistUnicode:Jena Lee
Creator:Project Railgun
Version:Alarido's Hard
Source:Ma référence
Tags:Project_Railgun Alarido xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx Kanari
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[Difficulty]
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OverallDifficulty:6
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332,192,144896,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,192,145376,1,0,0:0:0:0:
81,305,145856,2,0,B|112:336|112:336|204:336,1,135.000005149842
308,232,146816,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,120,147296,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,64,147536,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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208,120,148736,2,0,L|72:120,1,135.000005149842
216,288,150656,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,264,150776,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,240,150896,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,216,151016,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,192,151136,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,64,151376,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,64,151496,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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72,320,152576,2,0,L|164:320,1,90
254,244,153056,2,0,L|164:244,1,90
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440,64,154496,2,0,L|348:64,1,90
258,140,154976,2,0,L|348:140,1,90
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160,316,156416,5,0,0:0:0:0:
352,316,156896,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,157376,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,68,157856,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,68,158336,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,158816,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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116,228,159776,2,0,L|208:228,1,90
160,140,160256,2,0,L|68:140,1,90
120,56,160736,2,0,L|212:56,1,90
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306,228,162176,2,0,L|396:228,1,90
442,316,162656,2,0,L|352:316,1,90
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152,192,163616,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,68,164096,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,192,164576,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,158,164816,2,0,L|256:68,2,90
152,192,165536,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,316,166016,2,0,L|256:368,7,45
256,192,166976,12,0,168896,0:0:0:0:
176,280,174416,6,0,P|256:316|336:280,2,180
68,112,175856,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,48,176336,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,112,176816,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,248,177296,2,0,P|256:260|212:248,3,90
176,156,178256,6,0,P|256:120|336:156,2,180
256,336,179696,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,180176,12,0,181856,0:0:0:0:
184,72,182336,6,0,P|140:52|80:64,2,90
256,140,183056,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,72,183296,2,0,P|372:52|432:64,2,90
256,140,184016,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,140,185696,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,40,185936,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,88,186176,6,0,P|132:120|120:160,1,90
128,260,186656,2,0,L|208:304,1,90
305,303,187136,2,0,L|384:260,1,90
391,158,187616,2,0,P|377:116|344:88,1,90
256,40,188096,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,88,188336,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,132,188576,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,88,188816,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,132,189056,2,0,P|256:172|280:216,2,90
344,88,189776,6,0,P|424:120|424:204,1,180
256,308,190736,1,0,0:0:0:0:
87,203,191216,2,0,P|88:118|168:88,2,180
256,312,192656,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,224,192896,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,180,193136,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,92,193376,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,48,193616,6,0,P|80:48|32:120,2,180
344,48,195056,2,0,P|432:48|480:120,2,180
204,188,196496,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,280,196736,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,334,196976,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,280,197216,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,188,197456,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,96,197696,6,0,P|392:96|424:60,2,90,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,56,198416,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,96,198656,2,0,P|120:96|88:60,2,90
256,56,199376,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,156,199616,2,0,L|256:248,1,90
212,336,200096,2,0,P|256:348|300:336,2,90
168,248,200816,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,200,201056,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,248,201296,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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286,323,204416,1,0,0:0:0:0:
373,276,204656,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,188,204896,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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228,96,208016,1,0,0:0:0:0:
219,195,208256,1,0,0:0:0:0:
299,255,208496,1,0,0:0:0:0:
307,155,208736,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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220,172,212336,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,272,212576,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,172,212816,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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336,180,219776,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,124,220016,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,180,220256,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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344,52,223376,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,96,223616,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,52,223856,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,96,224096,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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344,36,225776,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,212,226256,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,36,226736,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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1. I don't french, dunno 100% what this song's all about
2. also i don't understand why you choose Miku as a Background if it's no vocaloid song
3. dunno if she should go in the tags then now that she's the bg no, is not part of song

1. I'd appreciate it if you got a bit more creative with sliders such as 00:13:856 (2) - i mean making one of the anchors a red one once in a while or doing something like this once in a while re-mapped everything
2. 00:15:776 (4) - while playing, the followcircle of the standard skin overlaps the HP bar, might not look so nice fixed in re-map
3. would consider using some custom clap for the bass starting in 00:21:056 - this sounds quite nice for me NEED HITSOUNDS, PM ME
4. maybe a blank.wav for your sliderslide would be cool to, dunno link me
5. 00:42:176 (1) - i heard spinners are the hard part for beginners since they tend to spin really big circles so they would need some time to recover afterwards, may take this into account here moved back 1/2
6. 00:52:256 (1,2,3,4) - rhythm suggestion (same would go for similar parts): done intentionally
   
7. 01:06:416 (4) - would maybe shorten this by one to go for the vocals on the red ticks here again (dunno if you want to skip a downbeat) i don't understand, is emphasis here of 2nd chorus
8. 01:41:696 (1) - if you want to go for another slidershape this one might look a bit more appealing i prefer the current slider
9. 01:43:616 (1) - same about the spinner moved back 1/2
10. 01:48:416 (5) - followcircle overlaps the hp bar again, so does the approachcircle changed
11. 01:49:376 (1) - maybe something like this..? changed
    

    364,104,109376,6,0,B|375:115|433:152|398:219|398:219|432:286|365:329,1,260

12. 02:04:256 (4) - blanket with 02:05:216 (1) - could be better, lol no intention to blanket here
13. 02:15:056 (4) - maybe like this? fixed
    
    

    180,92,135056,2,0,B|217:102|265:54|265:54|312:109|356:104|376:108,1,195

14. 03:17:696 - starting here I hear some other vocals that aren't represented in the storyboard, might consider adding them (I'm sure i hear a "French kiss" in the background here) you mean 02:15:776 - and 02:21:536 - ? I'll ask Kanari
15. 03:33:536 (2) - this overlap may be confusing for newbies since it starts loading the slidershape already around here 03:32:416 - the different combo color should help
16. 03:36:896 (1) - i tried myself on the heartslider and that's the result of me playing around with it for 10 mins heart does not match vocal, isn't wide enough
    
    

    192,290,216896,6,0,B|112:246|73:205|66:169|66:169|54:126|79:75|116:61|156:62|156:62|197:65|231:101|231:101|247:70|289:33|344:48|344:48|404:70|412:127|396:170|396:170|383:205|338:235,1,780

17. 03:48:176 - might map this sound for having the beatmap end with the last vocal instead of beat if you want to i prefer how it is now

Okoratu wrote:

Just saying that "Mod my Map OwO" isn't the most polite way to ask for this

SPOILER

208,271,216896,6,0,B|114:226|44:195|52:84|56:82|114:29|154:10|220:48|220:48|248:67|248:67|275:40|275:40|303:12|343:-8|407:-4|467:44|471:124|415:176|367:184,1,780

Okoratu wrote:

Just saying that "Mod my Map OwO" isn't the most polite way to ask for this

Alarido's Hard

• 
  

1. nice blankets ► Thanksies ~.~
2. 00:25:376 (1,2,3,4,5) - replace them with circles there's no need to overmap here ► Done.
3. 00:24:656 (9,10) - CRTL+G for flow maybe ► Done.
4. 00:32:576 (1,2,3,4) - replace them with 1/6 sliders, they fit the sounds you're mapping them to better ► Done.
5. 02:07:616 (7,8,9) - a triangle could be nicer here imo ► Done.
6. 02:30:656 (3,4,5,6,7) - might curve this a bit more (will play better for sure) ► Done.
7. 02:36:656 - add a circle ► Done.
8. 02:38:576 - ^ fits the vocals better ► Done.
9. 02:44:336 - ^ same, it's a bit boring ► Added... with pattern changes.
10. 02:57:296 (5) - Repeat sliders that repeat twice are kinda unintuitive imo, might shorten it by one, move it to 02:57:536 - , CRTL+G it and add a circle in 02:57:296 - ► Done.
    
    Example

    
11. 03:23:456 (5) - avoid directly reloading a slider in the same position or rotate it so that the repeat arrow is visible in the very beginning (repeat arrows should be visible throughout the time the whole slider is visible) ► Made several adjustements on the patterns and some re-arrangements too. Thx
12. 03:48:176 - add a cicle maybe also i don't really like the slidershape you used just before because it kind of breaks with your style ► Hm.... no note added. And I'm also open for other styles (Gonz, Sir Minelli, jonathanlfj...) . And fancy slidershapes too, depending on the song

Gl with your map!

• 
  Ca manque de Clap je pense, voilà quelques endroits où ça passerait bien, je te laisse extrapoler pour le reste de la map :
  
  SPOILER

  00:44:576(1) — Clap au reverse
  00:47:467(4)
  01:07:616(1) — Lui c'est moins important
  01:46:016(2)
  Etc.
  
  
  02:07:856(3) — Un reverse en moins et un cercle à la place ?
  03:24:656(4) — ^
  02:16:256(1) — Un finish pour aller avec la musique

• 
  
  00:39:296(7,8,9,10) — Inverser 8 et 10 pour mieux suivre le Flow ?
  
  Attention, la liste suivante contient juste les endroits où un Clap ne serait pas malvenu, ça donnerait plus de variété...
  
  
  SPOILER

  00:47:456(7)
  00:51:307(7)
  00:55:136(7)
  00:58:976(8)
  01:02:816(8)
  01:06:656(9)
  01:10:577(7)
  ...
  ...
  
  Etc., je pense que vous avez compris^^
  
  01:10:016(5) — Je ne comprends pas pourquoi il est placé comme ça ~~
  02:06:176(4) & 02:07:136(6) — Ils seraient bien en Ctrl+G non ?
  02:13:616(2) — Lui aussi
  02:30:656(3,4,5,6,7) — Je trouve ça un poil coton pour une Hard, d'autant plus que c'est surprenant car on ne retrouve de stream nulle part ailleurs.
  03:08:096(5,7) — Les permuter, encore une fois pour le Flow ?

Gunsillie wrote:

Bonjour! Par échange de M4M :

[Hard]

Globalement rien à redire, mais voici mes quelques avis :

• 
  
  00:39:296(7,8,9,10) — Inverser 8 et 10 pour mieux suivre le Flow ? ► Oui, j'ai fait le change dans ici.
  
  Attention, la liste suivante contient juste les endroits où un Clap ne serait pas malvenu, ça donnerait plus de variété...
  
  
  SPOILER

  00:47:456(7)
  00:51:307(7)
  00:55:136(7)
  00:58:976(8)
  01:02:816(8)
  01:06:656(9)
  01:10:577(7)
  ...
  ... ► Oui, ces claps sont bonnes. (:
  
  Etc., je pense que vous avez compris^^ ► Oui
  
  01:10:016(5) — Je ne comprends pas pourquoi il est placé comme ça ~~ ► Symétrie.
  02:06:176(4) & 02:07:136(6) — Ils seraient bien en Ctrl+G non ? ► Non, ce pattern n'a été fait en particulier pour ce flow.
  02:13:616(2) — Lui aussi ► Non. C'est un flow parfait pour le Hard diff.
  02:30:656(3,4,5,6,7) — Je trouve ça un poil coton pour une Hard, d'autant plus que c'est surprenant car on ne retrouve de stream nulle part ailleurs. ► Oui, c'est vrai ~.~ enton j'ai le modifié par deux 1/4 sliders plus une note.
  03:08:096(5,7) — Les permuter, encore une fois pour le Flow ? ► Oui.

Voilà, c'est tout ce que je peux vous apporter à mon niveau, bonne chance pour la suite !

toybot wrote:

hihi, mod request

[Alarido's Hard]
reminds me of andrea's older style, lol
00:19:616 (6) - how about making this a reverse slider instead? to cover that one note in the vocals ► Added 1 reverse.
00:32:576 (1,2,3,4) - just make these circles instead. -.- its noisy and make no sense really ► Done.
01:43:376 (4,5,6,7,8) - might be able to make this into a star pattern instead? would be more fun. just make sure to nc (4) for that sake ► Done.
01:56:576 (9) - put this at x256 y44, might be better to play and read ► Sure.
02:30:656 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - maybe use drum hitsound for these instead? put at 70% volume if you do ► Done.
02:46:976 (1) - make this spinner silent ► Done.
03:31:856 (7,8,9,10,11) - not a big fan of this pattern, but i can't really think of anything to make it better given the amount of space you have ► This pattern was inspired by jonathanlfj's style. [/notice]

Well that's it. I kind of have an idea for the last lyric in the SB though. how about you just make the the line slightly glow at the last beat then fade? and when it fades make it fade in place, not move diagonally downwards. that movement seemed a bit... weird? i don't really know haha

Good luck ! (baka crystal ^^)

1. 01:06:416 (3,4) - more than one reverse would be confusing for normal players. maybe arrange like this? make the 2nd leg of the slider (3) more curved too. Emphasis of 2nd chorus, no change.
2. 01:52:736 (4) - maybe put this right in the middle? to highlight the symmetry a bit Moved to (263, 48) to overlap 01:55:616 (3) - and 01:58:736 (2) -
3. 02:54:416 - make this green tick's volume softer by 10-20%, its too loud for this really quiet section Done
   00:58:256 (4) - even though the sliders have been pretty cool, this one kind of looks ugly.. change to this? Changed
4. 01:25:376 (5) - make this straight instead? the curve seems to not flow well Was waiting for someone to notice this (:

• Your map likes to go in circles a lot, dunno if you want it that way but it's like my eyes are getting dizzy
  Your maps are always made so nicely, so this will be a short mod cause I'm bad~
  00:47:936 (1) - you have a lot of sliders like this in this map, they're kinda boring imo, you could change it to something like this? http://puu.sh/93ClP.jpg
  02:47:216 (1) - I don't think this spinner is needed here
  03:19:136 (4) - new combo

• 00:22:976 (5) - new combo
  00:38:336 (5) - new combo
  00:43:136 (9) - ^
  00:58:976 (8,9) - I would change these to a slider, like this http://puu.sh/93CW6.jpg
  01:22:496 (1,2,3) - to stack or not to stack, I can't decide
  01:29:216 (7) - new combo
  01:55:856 (6) - ^
  02:07:616 (7) - move to x:412 y:136
  02:08:096 (9) - move to x:340 y:69
  02:30:656 (3) - new combo
  02:41:216 (5) - ^
  02:46:976 (1) - I don't think this spinner is needed, but it wouldn't hurt to keep it in
  03:31:856 (7) - new combo
  03:31:856 (7) - ^

1. Hnnnnnng, the storyboard so naisu. Does it need epilepsy warning because it pulses or no? I'm not sure on that one. I made the pulses very minimal. I do not believe that this requires an epilepsy warning (compared to the other ranked maps with huge flashes everywhere).

1. 00:47:936 (1) - you have a lot of sliders like this in this map, they're kinda boring imo, you could change it to something like this? http://puu.sh/93ClP.jpg the current sliders are for emphasis; your slider does not follow vocal
2. 02:47:216 (1) - I don't think this spinner is needed here This is Alarido's decision.
3. 03:19:136 (4) - new combo i follow the 2/1 downbeat, this part just has the most circles; no change

Indeed wrote:

Hi Railgun, as promised.

(...)

[Hard]

• 00:22:976 (5) - new combo ► kept for combo pattern
  00:38:336 (5) - new combo ► kept, same reason as prior
  00:43:136 (9) - ^ ► added to emphasize symmetry and also for avoiding numberings go so high
  00:58:976 (8,9) - I would change these to a slider, like this http://puu.sh/93CW6.jpg ► changed, but with changes to adapt to a symmetry.
  01:22:496 (1,2,3) - to stack or not to stack, I can't decide ► kept the stacks, it's the way the song feels (to me) in this part.
  01:29:216 (7) - new combo ► added to emphasize both patterns.
  01:55:856 (6) - ^ ► not needed imho ~.~
  02:07:616 (7) - move to x:412 y:136 ► done
  02:08:096 (9) - move to x:340 y:69 ► kept. The prior mod gave me a good idea.
  02:30:656 (3) - new combo ► kept for further opinions, but for me, the NC is not needed.
  02:41:216 (5) - ^ ► kept for combo pattern (perhaps a change here may be possible in the future)
  02:46:976 (1) - I don't think this spinner is needed, but it wouldn't hurt to keep it in ► kept (may be a thing to ask a Bat about)
  03:31:856 (7) - new combo ► kept for combo pattern
  03:31:856 (7) - ^ ► ^

Overall very nice mapset, hope it gets ranked!

1. 00:17:696 (2) - Some nazi modding stuff here, but recommended on any map you do. Try to make the red node overlap the slider tick in the middle This will make the ball hit the edge exactly on the tick instead of slightly before or after. | http://puu.sh/9hGo0.jpg
2. 00:47:936 (1) - The way the slider has that bit of straightness at the start and the uneven curving doesn't really appeal on the aesthetics side. If you want, you can go a bit more simple and make one similar to this: http://puu.sh/9hHhF.jpg | I notice you use a lot of these types of sliders throughout the song though, so I'm gonna just leave this one as the only thing I'll mention. Chances are you'd rather keep it as is.
3. 00:52:256 (1) - x364 y278 for a perfect stack.. that is if you didn't adjust the previous mod. Just control+g the last slider to see the coordinates.
4. 00:56:816 (2) - Minor flow suggestion. How about a slider like this? | http://puu.sh/9hIda.jpg | This will make the flow into (3) much more natural so it doesn't seem like a note that was thrown off to the side | Lower the tail end a little, and then move the middle node closer to the first and add a red.
5. 01:00:896 (2) - x287 y91 if you want the perfect stack | move 01:02:816 (4) - as well and readjust the other notes to fit.
6. 01:05:216 (3) - same idea as 17 seconds. Try moving the red node so it changes direction on the red tick. I found x491 y97 to be decent
7. 01:07:616 (1,2) - Selecting both, move these x-1 and y+2 (x131 y58)
8. 01:09:536 (3) - Try moving the second node to around x340 y104 | http://puu.sh/9hJjM.jpg | This gives a slightly better curve and looks more like a natural circle. (maybe try x336 or x332 as well!)
9. 01:11:216 (1) - How about an upwards curve for this?
10. 01:25:376 (5) - For proper flow. Move this to x292 y264 and maybe consider moving the middle node down a few grids as well. http://puu.sh/9hFUs.jpg
11. 01:32:096 (3,1) - Move these +1 on x to x405 so they stack with the previous (1) slider
12. 01:41:696 (1) - Because you have that extra finish. why not break these up into two sliders? | Like so: http://puu.sh/9hK7F.jpg | I used x336 y212 for the second slider
13. 01:49:376 (1) - If you want to create something symmetrical, I highly suggest using the grid in combination with control+h or control+j. | http://puu.sh/9hKnr.jpg | The key is to have all of the nodes not move when pressing one of those said two hotkeys. In this case, using control+J to adjust the 2nd, 4th, and 5th (last) nodes. After that, move the Red node in the middle so it lines up perfectly with the tick (like in the picture) Make sure to control+J lots to see if your nodes are lined up. Just give me a shout if you need help with this.
14. 01:51:296 (3) - Missing whistle on head?
15. 02:05:216 (1,2) - Control+G the (1) twice (This is very important to do when making symmetry as control+g changes the shape if the nodes aren't snapped). Delete the (2), copy the (1) and use Control+H and then Control+G to make this perfectly symmetrical (fix hitsounds/nc as needed). Adjust the upcoming (3) after
16. 02:10:976 (4) - Same suggestion as 1:09 since this slider is pretty similar. | copy paste the 01:09:536 (3) - maybe? unless it is different.
17. 02:33:296 (1) - You could probabaly remove these NCs if you want to stay consistent. They are as follows:
18. 02:37:136 (1) -
19. 02:40:976 (1) -
20. 02:44:816 (1) - This is to keep your 2 measure NC consistency. Mostly optional, but it does fit nicely.
21. 02:39:776 (2) - If you want a proper stack. Move this to x282 y31.
22. 02:45:536 (2) - Try making this come off of a diagonal like 02:43:616 (2) - does | Try moving this to about x252 y152 and then adjusting it so the curve is a bit lower | http://puu.sh/9hMd8.jpg as a brief example
23. 03:23:456 (3) - I'm assuming this finish isn't supposed to be here as it seems like it was accidently copied over.
24. 02:06:656 (2) - heading backwards on the sound. because of 03:23:456 (3) - you have a whistle on the tail. and then don't have a whistle at 01:06:416 (4) - on the second note. Ahhhhhhhh ;_; Try to make these sections similar. Also 03:36:896 (1) - while you're at it. Just go between these and change them so they're consistent to what you want.
25. 02:47:216 (1) - Remove the whistle at the end of this spinner, and change the volume to 5% | This calm part doesn't really call for any big hitsounds.
26. 03:01:136 (5) - Perfectly symmetrical is x451 y226 with the end of 02:58:736 (1) -
27. 03:27:776 (4) - & 03:43:136 (4) - Same as 1:09?
28. 03:33:536 (2) - I highly recommend you move this slider so it isn't stacked underneath the previous (3) The shape is different but it's a little hard to recognize without much time. This will require you to move some stuff around but you have a lot of open space in the middle and top right to place notes

1. At the beginning, you should consider adding some soft whistle or other hitsounds. At least every big white tick or two. Maybe some custom hitsounds would work as well. Anything would be nice.
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2. Going off of 00:59:456 (1,3) - Consider
3. 00:45:056 (3) - Missing whistle
4. 01:45:536 (1,3) - Missing whistles
5. 03:02:336 (1,3) - Get some whistles on this as well to be consistent.
6. 03:17:696 (1,3) - ^
7. 03:33:536 (2,4) - ^
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8. 01:01:856 (5) - If you added the whistles to each section like this: 00:59:456 (1,3) - with the whistles at the end. This would include doing it to almost every clap note except the final one in the short kiai, and the first half of the long Kiai. I would recommend it.
9. So all in all. Whistle on the first 3 clap notes, and then clap on the 4th. Repeat. It would make it as filled as it needs to be making a nice sounding difficulty.
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10. 01:49:376 (1) - This should have a finish because of 00:47:936 (1) - (Otherwise remove and ignore next)
11. 03:06:176 (1) - ^
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12. 01:03:296 (1) - If you do add the above mod. Consider this spot for a finish as well.
13. 02:04:736 (1) -
14. 03:21:536 (1) -
15. 03:36:896 (1) - all the same as above.
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16. 00:58:976 (8) - Missing clap on head
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17. 00:51:536 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - and similar patterns. Try adding some whistles to these. A good example is how Railgun did it with using a whistle every 2nd red tick.
18. Example: 00:51:536 (1,2,3,4,8) - (1)'s head, (2), (3)'s reverse, (4), (8)'s head. Repeat (note that (1) and (8) are the same note.
19. And because of the above, I HIGHLY recommend you NC the (8) instead of the (1) after it. This will keep consistency!
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20. 03:47:696 - Try ~15% volume on this spot to reduce the volume of the slider tick, and last note a little bit. 80% is really high

Lanturn wrote:

U S BOY U U S BOY
U S GIRL U U S GIRL

When I first modded this map, you had that applause thing going off.. so it was pretty much a finish every 3 seconds and they were applausing over the applause... ahhh >_>

Then I redownloaded the map and everything is nice <3

[General]
Kiai:
00:51:536 - in Normal & 00:51:776 - in Hard and similar kiai's to this in the song (ends of the small kiai)
I would recommend syncing these up if possible. either way works. Depends if you want to follow the drums or the vocals. ► @Railgun, feel free to adjust Kiai starting/ending in my diff at your own discretion, to get it equal in both diffs.

[Arlaido's Symmetry... err Hard]
Due to the symmetry, There really isn't much to suggest. The main thing is that there is a severe lack of hitsounding. It really sounds dead without only a few every now and then. ► The confirmation of the things I used to say to myself, about I'm the weaker on hitsounding >_>

1. At the beginning, you should consider adding some soft whistle or other hitsounds. At least every big white tick or two. Maybe some custom hitsounds would work as well. Anything would be nice.
   --
2. Going off of 00:59:456 (1,3) - Consider
3. 00:45:056 (3) - Missing whistle
4. 01:45:536 (1,3) - Missing whistles
5. 03:02:336 (1,3) - Get some whistles on this as well to be consistent.
6. 03:17:696 (1,3) - ^
7. 03:33:536 (2,4) - ^
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8. 01:01:856 (5) - If you added the whistles to each section like this: 00:59:456 (1,3) - with the whistles at the end. This would include doing it to almost every clap note except the final one in the short kiai, and the first half of the long Kiai. I would recommend it.
9. So all in all. Whistle on the first 3 clap notes, and then clap on the 4th. Repeat. It would make it as filled as it needs to be making a nice sounding difficulty.
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10. 01:49:376 (1) - This should have a finish because of 00:47:936 (1) - (Otherwise remove and ignore next) ► Not applied, this and everything alike
11. 03:06:176 (1) - ^
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12. 01:03:296 (1) - If you do add the above mod. Consider this spot for a finish as well.
13. 02:04:736 (1) -
14. 03:21:536 (1) -
15. 03:36:896 (1) - all the same as above.
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16. 00:58:976 (8) - Missing clap on head
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17. 00:51:536 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - and similar patterns. Try adding some whistles to these. A good example is how Railgun did it with using a whistle every 2nd red tick. ► Good idesas.
18. Example: 00:51:536 (1,2,3,4,8) - (1)'s head, (2), (3)'s reverse, (4), (8)'s head. Repeat (note that (1) and (8) are the same note.
19. And because of the above, I HIGHLY recommend you NC the (8) instead of the (1) after it. This will keep consistency! ► Fix'd
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20. 03:47:696 - Try ~15% volume on this spot to reduce the volume of the slider tick, and last note a little bit. 80% is really high ► Made 25% because there's a rule saying nothing can be inaudible (which at Larto's times would be allowed)

So basically.. Nazi mod for railgun, and a hitsound mod for Arlaido!

Good luck <3

1. 00:17:696 (2) - Some nazi modding stuff here, but recommended on any map you do. Try to make the red node overlap the slider tick in the middle This will make the ball hit the edge exactly on the tick instead of slightly before or after. | http://puu.sh/9hGo0.jpg ok
2. 00:47:936 (1) - The way the slider has that bit of straightness at the start and the uneven curving doesn't really appeal on the aesthetics side. If you want, you can go a bit more simple and make one similar to this: http://puu.sh/9hHhF.jpg | I notice you use a lot of these types of sliders throughout the song though, so I'm gonna just leave this one as the only thing I'll mention. Chances are you'd rather keep it as is. no
3. 00:52:256 (1) - x364 y278 for a perfect stack.. that is if you didn't adjust the previous mod. Just control+g the last slider to see the coordinates. ok
4. 00:56:816 (2) - Minor flow suggestion. How about a slider like this? | http://puu.sh/9hIda.jpg | This will make the flow into (3) much more natural so it doesn't seem like a note that was thrown off to the side | Lower the tail end a little, and then move the middle node closer to the first and add a red. ok
5. 01:00:896 (2) - x287 y91 if you want the perfect stack | move 01:02:816 (4) - as well and readjust the other notes to fit. changed pattern for symmetry
6. 01:05:216 (3) - same idea as 17 seconds. Try moving the red node so it changes direction on the red tick. I found x491 y97 to be decent ok
7. 01:07:616 (1,2) - Selecting both, move these x-1 and y+2 (x131 y58) ok
8. 01:09:536 (3) - Try moving the second node to around x340 y104 | http://puu.sh/9hJjM.jpg | This gives a slightly better curve and looks more like a natural circle. (maybe try x336 or x332 as well!) I prefer the current pattern.
9. 01:11:216 (1) - How about an upwards curve for this? minor changes
10. 01:25:376 (5) - For proper flow. Move this to x292 y264 and maybe consider moving the middle node down a few grids as well. http://puu.sh/9hFUs.jpg major flow changes
11. 01:32:096 (3,1) - Move these +1 on x to x405 so they stack with the previous (1) slider Does not flow with current pattern.
12. 01:41:696 (1) - Because you have that extra finish. why not break these up into two sliders? | Like so: http://puu.sh/9hK7F.jpg | I used x336 y212 for the second slider I prefer the current slider. Emphasis of 2nd main chorus.
13. 01:49:376 (1) - If you want to create something symmetrical, I highly suggest using the grid in combination with control+h or control+j. | http://puu.sh/9hKnr.jpg | The key is to have all of the nodes not move when pressing one of those said two hotkeys. In this case, using control+J to adjust the 2nd, 4th, and 5th (last) nodes. After that, move the Red node in the middle so it lines up perfectly with the tick (like in the picture) Make sure to control+J lots to see if your nodes are lined up. Just give me a shout if you need help with this. I use Ctrl+C + Ctrl+V + Ctrl+H + Ctrl+G. No change.
14. 01:51:296 (3) - Missing whistle on head? fixed
15. 02:05:216 (1,2) - Control+G the (1) twice (This is very important to do when making symmetry as control+g changes the shape if the nodes aren't snapped). Delete the (2), copy the (1) and use Control+H and then Control+G to make this perfectly symmetrical (fix hitsounds/nc as needed). Adjust the upcoming (3) after fixed oO
16. 02:10:976 (4) - Same suggestion as 1:09 since this slider is pretty similar. | copy paste the 01:09:536 (3) - maybe? unless it is different. No change to the original pattern.
17. 02:33:296 (1) - You could probabaly remove these NCs if you want to stay consistent. They are as follows: no, emphasis of US BOY US BOYYYY US BOY US BOYYYYY
18. 02:37:136 (1) - ^
19. 02:40:976 (1) - ^
20. 02:44:816 (1) - This is to keep your 2 measure NC consistency. Mostly optional, but it does fit nicely. ^
21. 02:39:776 (2) - If you want a proper stack. Move this to x282 y31. fixed and made things more centered / symmetrical
22. 02:45:536 (2) - Try making this come off of a diagonal like 02:43:616 (2) - does | Try moving this to about x252 y152 and then adjusting it so the curve is a bit lower | http://puu.sh/9hMd8.jpg as a brief example changed
23. 03:23:456 (3) - I'm assuming this finish isn't supposed to be here as it seems like it was accidently copied over. Was for emphasis, but removed for consistency
    
    
24. 02:06:656 (2) - heading backwards on the sound. because of 03:23:456 (3) - you have a whistle on the tail. and then don't have a whistle at 01:06:416 (4) - on the second note. Ahhhhhhhh ;_; Try to make these sections similar. Also 03:36:896 (1) - while you're at it. Just go between these and change them so they're consistent to what you want. minor changes
25. 02:47:216 (1) - Remove the whistle at the end of this spinner, and change the volume to 5% | This calm part doesn't really call for any big hitsounds. lowered volume by 5%, whistle stays
26. 03:01:136 (5) - Perfectly symmetrical is x451 y226 with the end of 02:58:736 (1) -
27. 03:27:776 (4) - & 03:43:136 (4) - Same as 1:09? No change.
28. 03:33:536 (2) - I highly recommend you move this slider so it isn't stacked underneath the previous (3) The shape is different but it's a little hard to recognize without much time. This will require you to move some stuff around but you have a lot of open space in the middle and top right to place notes changed

1. 00:13:856 (2,4)- Why not same shape ? Same shape is boring.
2. 00:46:016 (3,4)- Blanket no ? And if you do it, change 00:44:096 (1)-. Added more curve.
3. 01:07:616 (1,2)- Blanket it. Stacks with the previous 01:06:416 (4) -.
4. 01:46:978 (4,5)- Blanket ? Symmetry is here.
5. 01:57:296 (1,3)- Why not align them to get a nice triangle ? Fixed thanks.
6. 02:02:336 (2,3)- Blanket if you want. Blanket does not follow flow.
7. 02:14:576 (3,4,1)- Why not do something more symetrical ? Emphasis of break start.
8. 03:33:536 (2,3)- Improve a little this blanket. Well I actually hate this pattern, had to move things because of a previous mod. I'll try to re-map later.

Nozhomi wrote:

Heyo Railgun. You ask me ig (was an exeption right ? ^^).
Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why to improve my futur mods.
If you've any question, ask me in-game.

- Alarido's Hard :

1. 00:21:056 (1,3)- Ctrl + G them, so you'll get a better flow like that. ► Ok.
2. 02:07:616 (7,8,9,1)- What do you think about that http://puu.sh/9DG2O/677a43d361.jpg ? If you do it don't forget to CTRL + J 02:09:776 (3)- ► Très bon (:

Wow really good map !

1. "Ma référence" is album name. So please this from source to the tags instead.
   
   SPOILER

   Where this song originate from. This field should generally only be included for Anime or Video Game songs, and occasionally for Novelty (Movies, TV, or Internet) songs. If the song is from an anime or video game, or is famous for its use as a TV or movie theme, the title of that source goes here.
   Rock and Pop songs should generally leave the field blank. This is not to be used for things like album titles.

1. This mapping is so many that you mapping to follow the vocal. So I suggest that may use regular soft-whistle in some part. I think it would fit with this song. For example at 02:54:416 ~ 03:02:336.
   
2. 00:15:296 (3) - It causes me felt weird sound since using whistle here. So may you remove it?
   
3. 00:19:136 (3) - ^
   
4. 00:22:016 (3) - Why you don't put whistle here? Please add it in slider begin to follow the rhythm.
   
5. 00:23:936 (6) - ^
   
6. 00:25:856 (2) - ^
   
7. 00:27:776 (5) - ^
   
8. 00:35:936 (5) - Add whistle here to follow the rhythm.
   
9. 00:36:416 (1) - This flow is weird. Please fix this pattern to be better, which I suggest that may 2nd point of slider to down like this picture imo.
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 00:47:456 (4) - Move this to x:436 y:172 to cause 00:46:016 (3) blanket this. Then move next note a bit to fix about spacing.
    
11. 01:02:816 (4) - I want this is flow better by fix this pattern a bit, which I suggest that may move 2nd point to x:288 y:56, and move last point to x:320 y:56 like this picture.
    
    SPOILER

    
12. 01:06:416 (4) - Add whistle in slider begin and slider 2nd repeat.
    
13. 01:22:496 ~ 01:30:176 - Please add whistle like in 00:21:056 ~ 00:28:736 , because it seems these don't difference about the rhythm.
    
14. 01:41:696 (1) - Change this is 2 regular sliders instead of using repeating slider. I think it may not cause boring with playing.
    
15. 02:02:816 (3) - Try this blanket with 02:02:336 (2) would be look better imo.
    
16. 02:05:216 (1) - Please remove whistle on slider begin and end.
    
17. 02:30:656 (1) - Remove whistle. It doesn't fit with the vocal.
    
18. 02:33:296 (1) - I understand that you want add NC to follow "US boy", but you can remove NC.
    
19. 02:37:136 (1) - ^
    
20. 02:40:976 (1) - ^
    
21. 02:47:216 (1) - I think this spinner is unnecessary for use here, but it's up to you if you want to remove it?
    
22. 02:54:416 ~ 03:02:336 - I think you shouldn't use whistle in this part anything, because I felt that whistle is too loud. Sp please remove whistle on this part all, or may use regular soft-whistle.
    
23. 03:34:496 (3) - Move this to x:316 y:196 would be better?
    
24. 03:47:216 (5) - Remove whistle please.

1. Please consider about adding whistle or some other, because some parts seem it can add more hitsound than this. Especially, some parts I want to mention are on 00:28:736 ~ 00:40:256 & 01:30:176 ~ 01:43:616 , which I want to add whistle on all white lines and some rhythm related.
   
2. 00:21:536 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - You can add whistles these all, because seem whistle would fit with this rhythm.
   
3. 00:25:856 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
   
4. 00:28:736 (1) - I prefer to use drum-sampleset on slider begin. Because it's fit with the rhythm, but however, you don't have to change this soft-whistle by you may change addition is "soft", which you can choose on left-top of windows mapping.
   
5. 00:44:096 (1) - Why you use whistle to follow instead of clap on slider end? I felt this part was really weird sound.
   
6. 00:45:056 (3,4) - ^ Please consider both slider end, too.
   
7. 00:47:936 (1) - Remove whistle on slide of this slider. I heard something on that.
   
8. 00:59:456 (1) - Same with 00:44:096 (1).
   
9. 01:00:416 (3) - Same with 00:47:936 (1). Then please add clap on slider end again.
   
10. 01:01:856 (5) - This, too. Please change whistle is clap instead. It would be more fit with the rhythm than.
    
11. 01:06:076 - You can add a circle here.
    
12. 01:22:496 (1,2,3,4) - Please try to don't stack these. I think that these look weird when I read.
    
13. 01:22:976 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Same with 00:21:536 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9).
    
14. 01:26:816 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - ^
    
15. 01:45:536 (1,3,6) - Same with 00:44:096 (1).
    
16. 02:00:896 (1,3,6) - ^
    
17. 03:02:336 (1,3,6) - ^
    
18. 03:17:696 (1,3,6) - ^
    
19. 03:33:536 (2,4,5) - ^
    
20. 03:38:816 (6) - Use 1/2 slider would be better? Seems 1/4 slider doesn't fit to use.
    
21. 03:41:936 (3) - Use Ctrl+G? I prefer like this more than.
    
22. 03:47:216 (5) - Whistle on slider begin is too loud. So please remove it.

Winek wrote:

Symmertry is a bad good mapping style

1. Idk how to mod hypersymmetry maps. Sorry, but your mapset's already nice.

Alarido wrote:

I L♥ve symmetry =(^_^)= and good flow (:

Alarido wrote:

I L♥ve symmetry =(^_^)= and good flow (:

^_^

Cherry Blossom wrote:

Alarido wrote:

I L♥ve symmetry =(^_^)= and good flow (:

^_^

If someone disagrees, i will kill him, i swear.
/me hides

1. "Ma référence" is album name. So please this from source to the tags instead. ok
   
   SPOILER

   Where this song originate from. This field should generally only be included for Anime or Video Game songs, and occasionally for Novelty (Movies, TV, or Internet) songs. If the song is from an anime or video game, or is famous for its use as a TV or movie theme, the title of that source goes here.
   Rock and Pop songs should generally leave the field blank. This is not to be used for things like album titles.

1. This mapping is so many that you mapping to follow the vocal. So I suggest that may use regular soft-whistle in some part. I think it would fit with this song. For example at 02:54:416 ~ 03:02:336. i prefer the current hitsounds, no change
   
2. 00:15:296 (3) - It causes me felt weird sound since using whistle here. So may you remove it? i think it fits, no change
   
3. 00:19:136 (3) - ^
   
4. 00:22:016 (3) - Why you don't put whistle here? Please add it in slider begin to follow the rhythm. i do blue blue red blue pattern
   
5. 00:23:936 (6) - ^
   
6. 00:25:856 (2) - ^
   
7. 00:27:776 (5) - ^
   
8. 00:35:936 (5) - Add whistle here to follow the rhythm.
   
9. 00:36:416 (1) - This flow is weird. Please fix this pattern to be better, which I suggest that may 2nd point of slider to down like this picture imo. ok
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 00:47:456 (4) - Move this to x:436 y:172 to cause 00:46:016 (3) blanket this. Then move next note a bit to fix about spacing. moved to x:435 y:178
    
11. 01:02:816 (4) - I want this is flow better by fix this pattern a bit, which I suggest that may move 2nd point to x:288 y:56, and move last point to x:320 y:56 like this picture. i prefer symmetry, no change
    
    SPOILER

    
12. 01:06:416 (4) - Add whistle in slider begin and slider 2nd repeat. sounds nice, added to similar parts as well
    
13. 01:22:496 ~ 01:30:176 - Please add whistle like in 00:21:056 ~ 00:28:736 , because it seems these don't difference about the rhythm. fixed
    
14. 01:41:696 (1) - Change this is 2 regular sliders instead of using repeating slider. I think it may not cause boring with playing. i want to keep this slider, no change
    
15. 02:02:816 (3) - Try this blanket with 02:02:336 (2) would be look better imo. ok
    
16. 02:05:216 (1) - Please remove whistle on slider begin and end. ok
    
17. 02:30:656 (1) - Remove whistle. It doesn't fit with the vocal. it follows the beat here, no change
    
18. 02:33:296 (1) - I understand that you want add NC to follow "US boy", but you can remove NC. i prefer the new combo, no change
    
19. 02:37:136 (1) - ^
    
20. 02:40:976 (1) - ^
    
21. 02:47:216 (1) - I think this spinner is unnecessary for use here, but it's up to you if you want to remove it? i prefer with spinner, no change
    
22. 02:54:416 ~ 03:02:336 - I think you shouldn't use whistle in this part anything, because I felt that whistle is too loud. Sp please remove whistle on this part all, or may use regular soft-whistle. i prefer with hitsounds, i did lower the volume, no change
    
23. 03:34:496 (3) - Move this to x:316 y:196 would be better? ok
    
24. 03:47:216 (5) - Remove whistle please. i prefer with the hitsound, no change

Nichiyouki wrote:

Hi, sorry for late mod

► Applied everything from your mod, inclusive where you see blue phrases, and except where there are setences in red.

[Alarido's Hard]

1. Please consider about adding whistle or some other, because some parts seem it can add more hitsound than this. Especially, some parts I want to mention are on 00:28:736 ~ 00:40:256 & 01:30:176 ~ 01:43:616 , which I want to add whistle on all white lines and some rhythm related.
   
2. 00:21:536 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - You can add whistles these all, because seem whistle would fit with this rhythm. ► Feels perfect (:
   
3. 00:25:856 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
   
4. 00:28:736 (1) - I prefer to use drum-sampleset on slider begin. Because it's fit with the rhythm, but however, you don't have to change this soft-whistle by you may change addition is "soft", which you can choose on left-top of windows mapping. ► Good idea (: I never used this button, tested and working :3
   
5. 00:44:096 (1) - Why you use whistle to follow instead of clap on slider end? I felt this part was really weird sound.
   
6. 00:45:056 (3,4) - ^ Please consider both slider end, too.
   
7. 00:47:936 (1) - Remove whistle on slide of this slider. I heard something on that.
   
8. 00:59:456 (1) - Same with 00:44:096 (1).
   
9. 01:00:416 (3) - Same with 00:47:936 (1). Then please add clap on slider end again.
   
10. 01:01:856 (5) - This, too. Please change whistle is clap instead. It would be more fit with the rhythm than.
    
11. 01:06:076 - You can add a circle here.
    
12. 01:22:496 (1,2,3,4) - Please try to don't stack these. I think that these look weird when I read.
    
13. 01:22:976 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Same with 00:21:536 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9).
    
14. 01:26:816 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - ^
    
15. 01:45:536 (1,3,6) - Same with 00:44:096 (1).
    
16. 02:00:896 (1,3,6) - ^
    
17. 03:02:336 (1,3,6) - ^
    
18. 03:17:696 (1,3,6) - ^
    
19. 03:33:536 (2,4,5) - ^
    
20. 03:38:816 (6) - Use 1/2 slider would be better? Seems 1/4 slider doesn't fit to use.
    
21. 03:41:936 (3) - Use Ctrl+G? I prefer like this more than.
    
22. 03:47:216 (5) - Whistle on slider begin is too loud. So please remove it.

Nice mapset and good flow. but I want you check about some hitsound, because I think it doesn't enough yet to use these. So please find more mods about my mention.

Good luck~

Edit: Modded the Normal diff Modded all diffs.

-Yuzuriha-inori- wrote:

Alarido's Hard


02:33:536 http://www.fastpic.jp/images.php?file=8720225611.jpg

02:36:416 http://www.fastpic.jp/images.php?file=3292820187.jpg

03:31:856 Hard to see

mod thanks~

-Yuzuriha-inori- wrote:

Normal

01:41:696 There are many repeat emphasis of vocal + storyboard
03:24:656 ^ emphasis of 2nd/3rd chorus of main

01:45:536 http://www.fastpic.jp/images.php?file=4699532384.jpg emphasis of shift, also see 03:17:696 (1,2,3,4) -

good song yes (:

mod thanks~