bbj0920 wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue.

Tonari no Totoro's Oni

SPOILER

OD -1
00:59:231 (305) - d, There's even no beat drop I'll keep it, because it strengthens the rhythm, and I already put finishes all over the map when rhythm is like this. So why just here ?
01:31:308 (478) - k Yeah, why not
02:32:001 (786) - ^ Same, why not.

Krfawy wrote:

Hello! Mod request from my 'Bleeding Queue'! :3

First of all I want to say your mapset is quite hard... I don't really think the Normal difficulty is easy enough to be the easiest difficulty. I don't think it's a good choice to reduce notes and settings, I advice to make an Easy difficulty to make your spread more balanced. Now newer and less experienced players won't be able to enjoy this mapset too when it should be enjoyable by them when it's NHI spread.

Well, i can accept the fact that normal diff is a bit hard for the easiest diff. But it took me long time to get all these diff, so i don't really want to make an easy one. Plus my previous map worth without easy diff so...


Normal

1. 00:04:078 (1,2) - I know it matches music and follows it very well but consider deleting (1) and making NC at (2). Now it's reaaally hard to follow an accurate combination for players even if it's only Normal difficulty. Ok ok, i also updated this slider for the blaket sake.
2. 00:14:924 (1,2) - And please, consider making one short slider instead of two circles. BPM and SV are quite high so an accurate spacing is not the best thing for using so many circles at the moment because it makes your map Hard instead of Normal. Ok ok let's try it.
3. 00:26:924 (2,3,4) - I have a personal sugg estion here since I don't like it as it is n ow. Consider moving the middle point of the (2) slider to X=376 Y=92 and the very last point of the slider to X=308 Y=64. Then move (3) to X=244 Y=40 and move (4) to X=176 Y=24. I think it would make a bit better look and flow. : P Why not, but i don't found what does it really changes.
4. 00:28:308 (5,6,7) - That moment needs a bit polishing since the flow is not working as correctly as it could. My personal advice is to move two last points in the slider: 2nd to X=44 Y=176 and the 3rd to X=104 Y=240. Next step is to move (6) and (7) a little bit). If you use my advices, just move (6) to X=140 Y=264 and (7) the slider to X=208 Y=268. Now the flow should work better and spacing should be consistent. Ok done, i only move a bit down the last slider, it looks a bit high.
5. 00:40:078 (5,6) - I think it'd be a good idea to reduce this amount of circles because there's a huge load of them and sliders. I advice to make a slider instead of (5) and (6) so it would make it a bit more playable for those newer players. Ok, because the first sound is not so high, it works well.
6. 00:41:924 (2) - I feel very uncomfortable when playing with that circle. Please, consider removing this note because it's a bit hard right now. Ok
7. 00:53:924 (3) - Move this to X=188 Y=304. Believe me, but an accurate flow is not the best thing for newbies and I am pretty sure they will miss here many times. Right, i also downed the slider for having the same DS.
8. 00:56:001 (2,3,4,5) - That moment is something different than the previous beats used in this map. If I well remember map should use some kind of consistency especially in easier diffs, ofc expect special moments in the song. But now there's nothing really special so that'd be a really reasonable thing to use structures like before, for example: 00:38:462 (2,3,4,5,6) - this one (with changed (5,6) ofc) or 00:26:924 (2,3,4,5,6,7) . I'm agree with you, but with the placement of the next make it hard to make different placement, i keep notice it.
9. 01:06:616 (6) - The rhythm changes a bit so why not to use new combo here? Especially now it seems to be a bit too long. Ups
10. 01:41:231 (3,4,5) - If an accuarte combo used simpler composition, I'd say it's totally OK right now. But in my opinion there's so many notes at the moment, so consider making a slider instead of (3,4), or even (3,4,5). But I think it will be okay if you make slider instead of (3,4) only. It'd would be really reasonable because as I said there's sooo many notes and newer players can be hardly confused while playing it. I just deleted (4).
11. 02:00:155 (4) - Now there's so many objects at the moment and I don't think it's the best idea to put a reversing slider at the very moment. I highly recommend to shorten this slider for one 1/2 and to use CTRL + G, then move the thing to 02:00:155 . Now the spacing will be consistent and this moment won't make people wonder how they have to click since it's going to get more readable. I understand what you meaned, i just didn't Ctrl - G but space it to make it more readable, plus the two next sliders are joined in one big to make it easier to play.
12. 02:29:231 (2,3) - To be honest that flow scares me as it is... I really advice to change it as soon as possible. For example you might make a middle point in (2) the slider at X=442 Y=88 and you'd move (3) the circle to X=360 Y=140 then. That would improve the flow a lot. I just made a line, it will be easier now. I also update after for the same reason.
13. 03:01:078 (7) - Consider to create a new combo here because now it gets pretty big amount of notes in that one, and maybe even too big. Also I think it'd be used here to keep your NCing consistent. Yes but no, it will break the NC logic i put here.
14. 03:26:924 (1,2) - and 03:29:693 (6,7,8) - there's so many notes at the moment... Please consider making a slider instead of (1,2) to make it simpler to click since it's a Normal diff. And it'd be simpler too if you made a slider instead of (6) and (7) circles. Now it really feels uncomfortable to play this moment when there's so many notes. Yes for the first one, no for the second one, because there's a 1 white tick break, and a big slider reversed, the player is prepared for. There's no so much notes here.

Hard

1. 00:23:577 (6) - That circle is soooooooo hard to notice. It's really hard to notice it at first play. I had to play it something like 10 times to find how to play this circle because it's invisible under the previous slider. I know it can be your style, I understand it's something funny and that trick is even nice, but... Maybe for Insanes, please? It's Hard. I know Hard is supposed to be harder, but not that much, really. Personally I find it better if you put this circle just at the very end of the 00:23:231 (5) - slider or if you move it for example to X=111 Y=302. But please, don't harden this hard as right now. For me it would be more acceptable if AR was higher but now it's too slow to make people miss just because of that one circle which is not readable at all. Mistake by me, calm down, it was updated by the prevous mod. ^^
2. 00:30:385 (3,4,6,7) - I can't find this flow nicely as well. I really would appreciate if you move a bit thaem to improve it. For example (3) would be placed at X=208 Y=168 and (4) would be placed at X=172 Y=200. (6) would be placed at X=56 Y=120 and (7) at X=80 Y=80. Why not. :>
3. 00:36:847 (5) - It doesn't really look nice now... I know this anti-jump doesn't really need any flow (I am not sure if anti-jumps even have any flow) because it goes so slowly, but I don't think it really looks OK. Can you put it at X=72 Y=40, please? Just to make people think it's a tricky sausage with a nice flow. For the flow ok! xD
4. 00:49:770 (8) - And maybe it's a stupid suggestion, but I find this note better when it's placed at X=76 Y=376. It's not so stuppid, but it's very low, so i cannot place here, i will change the previous stream to make the flow better.
5. 02:20:231 (11) - This time it would work better if you move it to X=84 Y=160 I believe. I think it makes a nice shape and not boring because I don't think this moment needs the previous kind of shape. Just something different than before. I found it ugly to see. :<
6. 03:12:155 (8,1) - I don't really get this place of new combo. Don't you think it follows music that would be better to create NC at (8) so you can delete it at (1)? In my opinion it matches better. Yep and the pattern is easier to detect.

Insane

1. 00:20:462 (6) - To be honest... In my opinion it would be OK if this slider was longer for a reversing 1/4 or if there was a circle instead of that slider, so spinner would start sooner. Just my opinion on that kind of hitsounding. If i change it, it wil break the pattern. So no.
2. 01:39:155 (5) - I am not sure or if you did it on a purpose, but there's no clap at the very end of the slider. I know there's that synthesiser sound which is a bit louder at the very moment, but it doesn't mean that you should or can avoid a clap here since it breaks hitsound consistency. Sorry mistake T_T
3. 01:39:847 (8) - To be honest that would be a good place for NC to keep consistency. I agree too.
4. 01:49:885 (4) - Just a suggestion, but maybe add a clap here? I know it's not the best moment for it but I guess it doesn't really sound bad and is even cool. Why not, but i add clap for the next one to not make it confuse so.
5. 01:57:962 (6,7) - I know there's not too much space but try to make it look a bit better becaue now those two circles look random and they break the flow. Maybe stack them at (6) or at the very end of the (5) slider? Stack on the slider so.
6. 00:42:040 (6) - Maybe move this circle to X=344 Y=276 because now it doesn't look as nice as it could IMO. Also it doesn't really plays so well >.< 352 280, it's better imo.
7. 02:03:847 (3) - I don't really think it's a correct use of a slider here. Personally I find it better with one circle instead of that 1/4 slider because now it doesn't even sound OK in my opinion. Better having a pattern. :<
8. 02:31:078 (1,2) - To be honest I have a feeling that (1) the slider is not a good place for NC and I find it better for (2) because of how it sounds. I just think it follows the music better. Yep!
9. 03:31:770 (1) - I can't notice anything special in this moment. Does it really need NC here? If not, then I advice just to delete NC here. Yep, because it follows the NC logic imo

Good luck! Please, reply on my mod what you didn't use.

Muzukashii
01:36:385 (2) - delete | give sound for big Don Don.
02:30:847 (107,108) - ctrl + g | 02:31:078 - kat | kd kd dkk It fits well, but it break all the same pattern, plus it's a muzukashii, so i found it hard to make this whole pattern. I keep notice it
02:49:308 (60) - move to 02:49:539 (60) - Why not

Muzukashii

OD -1 Nope, OD 5 is good for taiko imo, without good arguments, i won't change it.
00:26:462 (17) - k ok
00:38:693 (67) - ^ ok
00:55:308 (17,18,19) - kkd Nope, because how it sounded.
01:45:155 (34) - k yep
02:15:385 (44) - ^ yep
03:25:539 (195,196) - ^ yep
Too high SV, imo. Unless you change it, at least, plz no speed change. I will make test to find the best SV.

bbj0920 wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue.

00:52:539 (90) - k k
01:21:385 (171) - D
03:34:308 (444) - ^ both these are soft so better leave as small
Awesome

Genocide wrote:

i don't like the song >< It's not a song, it's a music, there's no lyrics you know, lel
Requested from moehue
by owner

[Oni]
00:11:347 (44) - delete Done
00:57:616 (294) - kat? Nope, pitch is lower here
01:42:962 - don Duh, no ! There's nothing here
01:43:193 and 01:43:308 don Same, why would I do this
01:55:078 (589,590,591) - k dk Mmmmh... I like my kd kd combo, but I'll keep this in mind.
02:41:808 (845,846) - ctrl + g | you must consistent by this Mh. The dk follows the pitch.

That's all
good luck

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Gabe wrote:

cc toé.

Normal

1. 00:05:231 (3) - Je ne te suggère pas de faire ceci, tu peux pas faire un blanket avec un spacing aussi petit, quoi. Donc bon, la seule chose qui pourrait être sympa ici, serait de le déplacer entre le (1,2) pour faire une petite forme triangulaire. Du coup, je te suggère de faire la même chose pour 00:08:924 (3) - . Vu qu'il y a eu un update ca a du etre fixé, et au pire il y a un Ds de 1.10 pour éviter l'overlapping.
2. 00:27:616 (3,4) - Ça te tentes pas de mettre ces deux cercles un peu plus droit avec la fin du slider précédent? Updated avec le précédent mod (pour les suivantes je dirais -> ULM).
3. 00:43:078 (5) - Comme dit au prem ier point, ça ne fait pas très beau puisqu'on ne voit pas la ligne qui délimite le slider, donc un blanket n'est pas la bonne solution! 00:45:616 (2) - Pareil pour ici Pour les blankets, je metterais un DS de 1.1, le l'impact en terme de difficulté ne sera pas visible.
4. 01:06:616 (6) - Mais il est où le nouveau combo? Ajoutes-en un! ULM
5. 01:40:308 (2) - coucou. 01:52:308 (3) - coucou encore. ULM²
6. 01:54:847 (1) - Tu vois? Ceci est la parfaite exemple dont je te suggère fortement d'utiliser une autre technique, on ne voit absolument pas les lignes du cercle. Oui, on sait qu'il y a un cercle, mais on voit pas sa limite.. 1.10
7. 02:09:385 (1) - Avec ce cercle, je te suggère fortement de le déplacer un peu plus vers le bas-gauche, car il "overlap" le slider précédent. Donnes-lui plus de place ;w; Waiw
8. 02:27:155 (6) - cc toi. cc ULM

La seule chose que je vois le plus, c'est bien ces "blankets", je ne te les suggères pas avec un spacing petit. Je pense qu'avec ce DS ca sera mieux.

Hard

1. 00:07:539 (1) - Je comprend que t'as fait un blanket avec le cercle précédent, mais as-tu pensé à la "ligne" que t'as fait avec (6,7,8,9,10)? Tu devrais peut-être suivre la consistence et déplacer le slider pour poursuivre la ligne. Par la suite, puisque la forme du slider ne ferait plus un blanket avec le cercle, tu pourras l'arranger. (Hope you understand my point..) Yep
2. 00:14:462 (8) - Je ne suis pas sûr si le jump est approprié pour cette séquence. Je te suggère de le déplacer à environ x:352 y:368 . Ça va pouvoir faire une ligne avec les deux objets suivant. Disons que c'est deux notes qui se distinguent de la musique, j'ai voulu les mettre en avant, de plus ton positionnement fait que le DS est différent, ce qui casse un peu le tout. :<
3. 00:16:308 (5,6,7) - J'adore! :3 :>
4. 00:25:539 (7) - Le blanket peut être mieu fait, seriously D: :< Titch me how 2 blanket plz.
5. 00:42:616 (5) - Tu devrais pas stack c'te cercle là avec le début de 00:41:462 (2) - à la place? Seems like it would be better. Par la suite, fait sûr de t'occuper de la consistence du spacing suivant. Non car ça casse la ligne que tu as souligné au début de la hard
6. 00:51:847 - Je sais pas comment je dois expliquer ça, mais je trouve qu'il n'y a pas de logique avec le rythme à partir de ce Kiai jusqu'à 01:02:924 - . Il n'y a absolument aucune consistence.. Pour les sliders streams, je compte les garder ainsi, j'aime bien donner ce type de difficulté plutot que des streams circles par contre à 56:116, oui c'est du grand n'importe quoi x_x
7. 01:19:539 (7) - On peut voir que ce slider pourrait être déplacé pour faire une meilleure forme avec les trois objets précédents. Je vois pas ou tu veux en venir. :<
8. 01:44:693 (4,5,6) - Je ne comprend pas ce pattern, ça ne joue pas très bien.. Ça te dirais de faire autre chose afin d'avoir un meilleur flow? Oui c'est vrai updated.
9. 01:47:462 (1) - Le spacing n'est pas consistent.. Oups
10. 01:54:616 (1) - Pareil comme le point précédent. Oui mais ici je compte garder pour le pattern, let's see it.
11. 03:06:616 (1,2,3,4,5) - Je suis triste de voir une forme d'étoile.. raté. ;w; Les (3,4,5) ne sont pas bien placés pour faire une forme ainsi, tu devrais t'occuper de ça. Updated

Spacing, flow, fait attention. :<

Insane
J'ai peur..

1. 00:16:539 (1,2) - Pourquoi un combo avec deux cercles..? Parce que foezoziofzefoize
2. 00:38:924 (1) - Le speed est très soudain, si on regarde le spacing des deux derniers objets. Ceci était juste une remarque. Le speed est pour le boost et le spacing est le même, en terme de chiffre oui on voit que c'est différent, mais vu que le SV de 1.5x modifier le Spacing mathématiquement, visuellement c'est le meme.
3. 01:19:078 (1,2) - Tsé quand trop c'est trop? Je te suggère très fortement de rapprocher ces cercles un petit peu, mais de garder l'idée de faire un jump, mais pas un géant jump comme celle-là.. MAIS CA FAISAIT 4.20... 42 KWA FOEJGJRGJREGERPGOJRO... Fixed
4. 01:41:001 (12,1,2) - J'aime vraiment pas le flow ici, si il y en as un. Tu veux pas faire autre chose ici? Oui sauf que après ca casse le pattern suivant en terme de spacing.
5. 02:09:847 (2,3) - Euh.. non. Ne fais pas ça D:. Premièrement, les objets sont consistent sur la timeline et deuxièmement, ils s'overlapent, ce qui ne fait pas très chic. Je te suggère de les déplacer à un autre endroit. Ca devrait etre mieux now.
6. 02:23:693 - Il manque pas un objet ici? Je te suggère quelque chose comme ceci: http://puu.sh/bfvDG/df806c346d.jpg , et pour le slider (16), met s'y un slowdown, ça va fonctionner avec la musique c: Oui on pourrait y mettre un objet mais ta solution ne résoud en rien le problème évoqué, de plus pourquoi faire un slowdown? Les autre pattern n'en n'ont pas, je vois pas pourquoi je ferais une exception pour celui-ci, en revanche je vais appliquer ton mod pour ta proposition afin de garder une constance.
7. 02:43:078 (3,4,5) - Pour être honnête, ça peut être mieu.. Oui mais je compte garder cette fleche. :<

bonne chance, gros caca

edit: mon notepad a merdé

Sorry for very long delay, school started 2 days ago and I got really demotivated.

Normal
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00:42:155 (2,3) - Move apart, Spacing is not equal to 00:42:847 (3,4) - The 1.1 DS is normal because of blanket, i want to make it readeble.


01:40:078 (1,2) - Move 2 away, keep it blanketed Yep

03:29:693 (5,6,7) - 5 is just slightly to far from 6 Fixed.


Hard
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00:09:847 (7,8) - 8 to close to 7, does not look pretty. Wtf i did here? Oo

02:40:078 (3,4,5) - 5 would feel alot better if you used the same spacing as 3 to 4 Yep but if i do that, the 5th will overlapp the slider before


Insane
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00:52:308 (3) - move 1 grid to right and 1 grid down to be the same as rest of combo I updated the all pattern to get a the "same" DS on the whole stream.

01:01:539 (3,4,5) - Equal spacing between these 3 would look very nice at this spot for the difference of 0.03..., wow such nazi

02:03:847 (3) - Replace this with a single, farther note, ending on a blue tick into a spinner does not usually sound right NO NO NO NO AND NO, i won't change these kind of stream, it's really confusing to play it on the key board.

02:15:731 (3,4,5) - Looking at the rest of the map, i feel it would be more fun if 5 was a bit farther away. Ok but the spacing will be i little bit high, so let's try it.

Nwolf wrote:

woof from queue :3

oh wow the other taiko mods are kinda short. BEWARE THEN

[Pasha's Taiko Oni]

Rename to Pasha's Oni for diff name consistency ok, modified

Ah, and you know, it's Gezo did the SV changes. We did it too on Paladin, from the same artist. I'm gonna see with him if we do some changes or not. ~

00:20:462 - 00:22:193 - I dislike this SV effect a lot, it doesn't read well and doesn't feel necessary at all.
00:49:770 - 00:51:847 - again, the weird slow down and then sv increase doesn't go well neither
01:21:385 - 01:23:924 - SV problem again, but this one is even more important because on sightread players might 01:23:924 (445,446) - read this as 1/2 even though it's a 1/4 doublet and THAT shouldn't happen
01:21:385 - to 02:05:693 - This is a calm part, map as such. There's quite a lot of overmap especially at the beginning which shouldn't be there at all, e.g. 01:25:770 (452,453,454,455,456,457,458,459,460,461,462,463,464,465,466,467,468) - (mostly the 1/4 here) Done ~
02:03:847 - Same SV as ~20 seconds
03:31:770 (1104,1105,1107,1106,1108,1109,1111,1110,1112,1113,1115,1114,1117,1116,1118,1119) - Somehow all notes are there twice, fix that Wtf, Aldwych, what have you done ? o.o


Good luck!

Nwolf wrote:

woof from queue :3

oh wow the other taiko mods are kinda short. BEWARE THEN

[Muzukashii]

You will not keep the 777 notes even though that sounds kinda cool No i will!

Let's do some quick comparison first

From 00:00:155 - to 00:07:539 -

Futsuu didn't even map it (which is okay)
Muzukashii is basically non-stop 1/2, 3/4 notes do not give the player enough time to rest with a total of 26 notes
Oni has more breaks for the player to rest, ending in a total of 28 notes Ok i've put some breaks on the calm parts.

What I want to say is, keep the amount of notes low here. It's a calm part, map it accordingly. The density you have here is even higher than that of an average Muzukashii, with moderate BPM. The kiai seems to be mapped less dense than this even though it has 1/4 - it has more 1/1 breaks

And because I'm such a baka, the mentioned part obv goes until 00:20:462 - and the amount of notes should reduce a good amount

00:32:001 (40,41,42,43,44,45) - A pattern like this is generally not recommended for Muzukashii. Also doesn't really fit the song or the way you mapped Fixed
00:44:231 (87) - Delete to have a break here Done
00:44:462 (87,88,89) - Reconsider if you want this triplet Moved the triplet
00:55:308 (17,18,19) - A triplet like this (xxo/xoo) shouldn't be used in a long 1/2 pattern like this. I would even suggest to delete the first two notes of this triplet, again for break. Done
01:11:001 (87,88,89,90) - Why did you suddenly use doublets here? I mean okay, 2nd kiai half, you planned on changing rhythm a bit but you would have to start right at the start of the 2nd kiai half 01:06:616 - here, like 01:07:078 (70,71,72,73) - making this doublets Used the doublets on all kiai and for the second one.
01:12:616 (94,95,96,97,98,99,100,101,102,103,104,105,106,107,108,109) - Again, add a break and change the doublets if you changed ^
01:18:385 (122,123,124,125) - Doublets again if you changed ^

01:36:155 - to 02:03:847 - Same as intro Same

hm I guess I don't have to point out similar issues in the rest of the map. Try to make the non-kiai parts less dense than the kiai parts, mainly to emphasise that the song actually is stronger in the kiai, not outside of it.

And last but not least, fix the SV. 1.6 base SV with 1.2 multiplier is way too fast, for the song and a Muzukashii. Keep 1.0x across the song or change SV to 1.4. Would prefer first suggestion. 1.4

Good luck!

Moo-Chan wrote:

From my modding queue~

[Insane]

1. 00:03:155 (11,12) - This breaks the flow of the map when the music doesn't warrant it, I'd make the 12 follow the curve of the slider Yep fixed, my bad.
2. 00:08:347 (3,4) - Making this an anti-jump makes it play kinda weird, I wouldn't do it Why all people don't like anti-jump? If i fix that, i've to change all of my pattern.
3. 00:11:693 (3,4) - You skipped a beat between these right here 00:11:924 - And? It's not a beat and if i add an object here, i've to update all my pattern. Too much work for nothing
4. 00:13:885 (9,10) - Blanket these Yep, i've also updated after.
5. 00:25:539 (7) - You could make this slider a little more funky looking cause of the way the song sounds if you wanted Yea? And people after will say, delete this one it's so unreadable blablabla ppy said it's ugly blablabla, so no.
6. 00:32:347 (4,6) - This overlap is a little meh Meh! I keep notice on this one, because it doesn't impact the readeability (i don't know if it's correct) of the slider.
7. 00:40:308 (6) - Could make a funky shape like I said before ^
8. 00:46:308 (1,2) - Blanket better Tried.
9. 00:47:001 (3,4) - ^
10. 01:18:155 (3) - I'd ctrl+G this cause it just feels better imo Not on the flow imo.
11. 01:41:462 (1) - Move this to x:193 y:249 to make the slider end be perfectly under the slider start of 3 Ok
12. 01:55:078 (3,5) - This slight overlap is ugly Yep fixed.
13. 01:58:770 (3,4,5) - This just looks...ew Srsly, wtf i did here ><
14. 02:08:462 - missed a beat here Here i'm no following the beats, plus it braks the pattern, plus it will be confusing to play on the keyboard and how to read it.
15. 02:22:308 (10) - NC I accept, to make the pattern more readable
16. 02:26:924 (10,11) - Could blanket better Why do you find it bad? :<
17. 02:32:462 (4,5) - Could blanket these Tried to
18. 02:42:155 (15,1) - Blanket better Tried.
19. 02:50:924 (5,6) - ^ Tried
20. 02:52:655 - Missing a beat here Added.
21. 03:05:231 (2,3) - Blanket better Tried, but this one is a blaket nazi (ye gramar nazi U no?).
22. 03:06:847 (5,6) - Blanket Fixed.
23. 03:13:539 (4,5) - Blanket Fixed

Good luck with your map~

General

Normal

00:08:001 (2,3) - Overlap sur la reverse arrow de 2 qui est pas très beau.
00:15:385 (2,3) - Cet overlap pourrait etre évité en inclinant le slider dans l'autre sens et / ou en le courbant.
00:29:231 (7) - Pas mieux comme ça pour le flow ? : http://puu.sh/btYJO/9a209f0b32.jpg
00:42:847 (3,4) - Corrige un peu ton blanket
00:40:770 (1) - Décale le 3éme tick de ce slider a 340|304 il sera plus beau
01:37:308 (3,5) - Overlap ???
01:41:693 (4,5) - Dommage pour ce blanket
01:46:770 (6,2) - En revanche la ce serait possible...
01:54:155 (6,1,2) - Un peu nazi mais ces blankets sont bof..
02:26:001 (5,6) - ^
03:25:078 (4,5) - Il s'est passé quoi là ? C'est unrankable.

Hard

Insane

- Lumi - wrote:

General

R.A.S

Normal

00:08:001 (2,3) - Overlap sur la reverse arrow de 2 qui est pas très beau.
00:15:385 (2,3) - Cet overlap pourrait etre évité en inclinant le slider dans l'autre sens et / ou en le courbant. Je l'ai courbé un peu.
00:29:231 (7) - Pas mieux comme ça pour le flow ? : http://puu.sh/btYJO/9a209f0b32.jpg Fixed
00:42:847 (3,4) - Corrige un peu ton blanket Fixed
00:40:770 (1) - Décale le 3éme tick de ce slider a 340|304 il sera plus beau ok
01:37:308 (3,5) - Overlap ??? Fixed
01:41:693 (4,5) - Dommage pour ce blanket Un peu fixé
01:46:770 (6,2) - En revanche la ce serait possible... Je veux des exemples concrets. Ici y'a un pattern, alors osef du blanket.
01:54:155 (6,1,2) - Un peu nazi mais ces blankets sont bof.. Je ne me souviens pas avoir été aussi nazi avec toi oO
02:26:001 (5,6) - ^ ^
03:25:078 (4,5) - Il s'est passé quoi là ? C'est unrankable. Dunno

Hard

00:08:001 (2,3) - Pas parfaitement parfait ce blanket, si tu regardes bien le bord du slider tu verra.. Ca devrait être mieux
00:15:385 (2,3,4) - Assez dur de percevoir le rythme là, essaie de faire un slider plutôt..? Non. C'est pas une normale
00:36:616 (4,5,1) - Là ça peut porter a confusion vu que tes triplets ont le même spacing MAIS ARRETEZ AVEC CETTE ZONE LA, C'EST FAIT EXPRES FFS!
00:53:001 (5,6,8,1) - C'est volontaire ces overlaps..? Oui..
01:13:308 (5) - Flow meilleur dans l'autre sens CTRL + J et replace le C'est fou a quel point je trouve cette suggestion moche. C'est moche comme flow et visuellement aussi.
01:42:847 (8,1) - Blanket de boeuf Non pattern de cheval.
02:20:001 (10,11,1) - Confusion comme 00:36:616 (4,5,1) fix it ? *Ne pas s'énerver*
02:35:693 (2,3,4,5) - Dur pour une hard.. pareil pour les suivantes. Tu n'a mentionné aucun des pattern similaire du prédécent kiaï, je considère que c'est pas si difficile que ca, en plus le flow est parfait, je l'offre sur un plateau doré celle-là

Insane

00:32:001 (3,4) - Là c'est pas le rhythme du tout. J'ai baissé, le hitsound sur les fin de sliders, en revanche le pattern je le changerai pas.
01:02:924 (1) - Bof la forme Donne moi des exemples et/ou explications, sa ça je ne changerai pas.
01:05:462 (3) - Ctrl + G pour réparer le flow Ouais je le concède.
01:07:539 (6,7) - Blanket Possible Ok
02:53:462 (2) - Ctrl + G Raison? Moi j'en voit pas si c'est que ca casse encore + le flow.
03:10:078 - Circle ? Non, aucun flow possible.
03:12:385 - ^ Raison?

Voilà, belle map et bonne chance pour la suite. [/color]

Nwolf wrote:

woof from queue :3

oh wow the other taiko mods are kinda short. BEWARE THEN

[FutsuuZoda]

OD --> 4 because aaaaaah 3 is too lenient imo k
Also suggesting more flexible volumes to emphasis calm/loud parts better (kinda like Pacha's Oni) lazy, and that seems k for the few notes it has

00:18:616 (8) - Even though it is not as strong as 00:14:924 (5) - maybe make it a big note too? Would be a bigger difference to the other dons then despite having a stronger don I'd rather keep it as a simple don (don't want too many big notes)
00:22:308 - Wow kiai flash pls done for the same reason as paladin, i don't want too much kiai.
00:28:308 (27,28,29,30,31) - 5-plet rude, get rid of a note k
00:36:616 (48) - Delete so there's a larger break, it's kinda non-stop 1/1 k
02:04:308 (220,221) - Kats so the drum base on the previous dons is kinda more emphasised done (also it's emphasized lel)
02:38:462 (311) - Strangely this is the only 2nd/4th beat that is not mapped as kat this kiai. Yes, you might have follow the sound going up on the current kat but 02:45:847 (334) - here it repeats and is mapped with the snare kat as usual lolfailed

Overall I'm not really a fan of neither the 5-plets nor the density in this diff (mainly the kiais), it doesn't feel right for a Futsuu even though the BPM is low.

[Pacha taco sv]
00:20:462 - 00:22:193 - I dislike this SV effect a lot, it doesn't read well and doesn't feel necessary at all. yu no paladin :w: (that one will need rework i admit - i'll try to find something good in the following days.)
00:49:770 - 00:51:847 - again, the weird slow down and then sv increase doesn't go well neither maybe get rid of the whole slowdown and keep the speedup only is a good solution
01:21:385 - 01:23:924 - SV problem again, but this one is even more important because on sightread players might 01:23:924 (445,446) - read this as 1/2 even though it's a 1/4 doublet and THAT shouldn't happen this is more of a map-wise problem; let's ask some players of every level if they misread or not.


Good luck!

mintong89 wrote:

Hi, M4M.

[Muzukashii]

00:56:001 (205,206,207,208,209,210) - These sound too hard for Muzukashii player imo, the player might be not able to click kd to kd fastly and will miss. So try k dd dd k? Ok i did the same for all patterns, it fits good.
01:03:385 - ^ same and apply to same pattern at after this.
01:54:616 (400,401,402) - Kkk is unrankable. Check this for more information. Yep sorry! :<
01:59:924 (422,423,424) - Same ^

Good Luck!

mintong89 wrote:

Hi, M4M.

[Pacha's Taiko Oni]
Uncheck "Widescreen Support". This unused at Taiko.Fixed

00:14:578 (59) - Any reason to put to blue line? It seem didn't fit any sound of the song and it quite awkward at gameplay. Move to 00:14:462 - here? The previous patterns shows 3/4 distance, so 'ill keep it on this one.
00:27:847 - => 00:29:462 - The pattern rhythm at here seem didn't fit with song and it quite different to other pattern you made before. Try k d k dk dk d k? Imo, a visual example would be better cause i've to change all the part and i don't know where these notes goes, and i found my self good.
00:35:231 - => 00:36:155 - The flow of gameplay at here quite weird, how about kdk d d k or change to other else? I found it weird too but i prefer kdk dd dk, i think it's better.
00:48:616 (241) - k here to follow clap/snare ? I changed the part to kddk dddk. Better to hear.
02:03:616 (628) - k, the sound at here at least isn't lower than 02:03:847 (629) - this. Done
02:11:693 (675) - k here to continue the d k d k pattern rhythm. Yea but no, follow the d k d pattern isn't necessary here, plus, the sound doesn't diserve a k.
02:26:462 - => 02:27:616 - These sound weird too, I'd prefer you to make these to k dk dkdk k. Yea, it fits well.
02:34:539 (800) - The SV at here is weird and unnecessary, player might be confuse because of misread kd to k d. You can delete the green line or delete the k the previous note. Gezo said #Paladin, so i'm gonna respect it.
02:37:078 (814) - k, the sound pitch of the song is higher than 02:37:308 (815) - this place.
02:44:462 (859) - ^
02:51:847 (902) - ^ Done ^3
03:31:770 - => 03:34:308 - wtf is these... New feature.

Good Luck!

Tician wrote:

So many mods already, hope I can find anything wrong x.x You did don't worry

General

Timing Check - OK
Settings - a dark-purple Combocolour would be nice too^^ Added + changing a bit the current violet one.
AIMod - OK

Insane

Testplay: Feels like too much Lifedrain. I completely disagree with 130 BPM stream-jumps, streamjumps is something for extra diffs, never saw it in insane. There are some strange spaces you used not fitting to the song

00:08:001 (2,3,4) - fix the spacing here pls, it feels terrible to play Ok (cause you're not the only one you notice it) but i keep the stack on 4,5 to prepare for the jump coz of the unflow
00:36:385 (4,5,1) - same here it's not fitting Well ok... i will change it by stacking the 5th on 1st, let's try this
00:52:308 (3,4,5,6,7) - looks nice but like I said i disagree wth those spaced streams, that's something for Extra not for insane Ok so i didn't change the main pattern but i've reduced the DS between all circles and the 2 littles sliders + updated the flow on theses one, we've not a better approch for the next stream.
00:52:885 (8) - hearing the sound it would fit better of you start the slider 1/4 earlier and delete the circle instead Why not.It's not so bad, but i won't make a curve slider to keep the same pattern as before
01:00:270 (8) - ^ Same but curving this time, and i've updated the DS, changed to 1.0 on stream
01:16:885 (13) - delete, fitting more to the sound I disagree, if you said the 12th, yea, but here no. :<
01:41:001 (5,1,2) - even if it's blanket this is looking bad, use a triangle for the 3 points in the middle, blank a bit and it will be better =) I don't really understand what you really wanted to, but i found a problem i fixed it (maybe i'm doing what you want to).
01:41:462 (1) - I can imagine you don't want to ctrl+g this? If not how about using the bow of 01:41:001 (5) - to the other direction for a better flow Fixed + changing the direction of 4th for the flow
02:08:347 (2) - even if there is a sound this ruins the rhythm, try to use circles 02:08:231 and/or 02:08:462 and
02:19:770 (11,12,1) - space stacked
02:21:155 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3) - This needs a bit more symmetry it has (coz i used the rotate tool), or make a solution.
02:43:770 (5) - move it to 02:43:885 sounds much better I don't found why, plus it'll be hard to make a good slider by the previous slider pattern

Hard

Testplay: Same spacing-issues as insane. I miss a spread, this feels same like insane, just a little less objects
I would recommend using 3.5 CS Accepted

00:36:616 (4,5,1) - spacing same as insane
00:38:924 (1,2,3) - would be better of you rotate it so 00:38:462 (7,2) - will overlap Tried
00:43:424 I am missing a object here for the sound Waat?
00:52:770 (4) - use only a circle here instead to fit the music Imo it's not really fit well. And it's weird to play it on the keyboard.
01:00:039 (3,4) - ^ same
01:13:193 (4) - you don't need it here, delete Right
02:20:001 (10,11,1) - spacing Same as others
02:40:539 (5) - move it closer to the head of 02:39:385 (2) - so the distance of 02:39:155 (1,2,3,4,5) - them all looks nice (even if they were switched) I don't really understand what you really want, plus here the DS between the 4th and 6th is the same

normal

Testplay: What have you done with the DS? This diff needs a completely rework with a DS of 1.1 or 1.2 to avoid this overlaps and ugly blankets Maybe, but right now, i don't really have time for a complete rework.

00:42:847 (3,4) - this blanket is terrible, just as an example I saw you sometime higher the DS, use only 1 DS and keep that the whole easy diff. I will not metnion any other bad blankets caused by the DS I'd corrected the nearest one
01:37:078 (2,3,4) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2207170 try this for a better active/passive playing Ok
01:44:462 (2,3,4) - ^ ^
Btw normaly claps land on the upbeats (2nd and 4th white tick) I think that woul fit better Keep noticing it
02:24:155 (1,2) - 02:24:962 there is a sound here, I would prefer if you try this it fits perfectly https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2207192
Updated
I think some of the spinner got too less time after them for newbies to recoordinate themselves I find them good enough imo.

All in all a good song, nice maps, take a star for it =)

GyroX20 wrote:

Hi!!, From your modding queue

[Normal]

00:02:462 (4) - Make this slider go with the beat of the song Ugly to hear, and this slider is the easiest way to fit the music.
00:23:693 (2,3,4) - Maybe try to blanket these This will be so messy.
00:27:847 (4) - Curve this little stream towards the next note In preparation for the next slider, ok.
00:56:001 (2,3) - Blanket Cannot without a huge spacing.
02:00:616 (5) - This slider doesn't go with the beat Why? have you got another solution? Before this large one, it was a 3/4 x 5 slider-reversed. So i have to simplify this part for a normal diff one.

[Hard]

00:37:078 (1) - This slider vel. is really fast and really sudden, i think you should either remove it or lower it To 1.20 last modification about this part.
02:53:347 (6,7) - Possibly change these two to a circle and a repeating slider Accorded
03:00:155 (5,6) - Why not blanket these Coz of pattern, i don't want a 100% blanket mapset.

[Insane]

00:37:078 (1) - Same as the hard, this is really sudden and really fast Coz it's insane, so i'm gonna keep it, and will change if a bat will say it
01:14:001 (7) - NC Accorded
01:14:462 (1) - Remove NC
02:03:385 (1,2,3) - Why did you decrease the slider vel. here? Featured, moved to the origin
02:26:001 (8) - NC Yep
02:18:616 (7) - ^ ^
02:40:770 (8) - ^ ^
02:37:078 (6) - Start combo here instead of here: 02:37:539 (1) Okay
02:48:385 (8) - NC
02:51:847 (7) - ^
03:03:155 (7) - ^ Ok x3

Hope this map gets ranked!

Breezy wrote:

Hi! M4M from your queue! Don't forget to mod my map! https://osu.ppy.sh/s/208506

I won't be able to mod Taiko at all, just standard!

Normal

SPOILER

00:02:462 (4) - Why not just turn this slider into something like 00:00:155 (1,2) It would have better flow in my opinion. Coz the second part is different from the begining so i cannot make the same stuff.

00:20:462 - You should add a circle here instead, and move the spinner to 00:20:693 Not sure though since spinners with a short time might be difficulty for some players. Yep why not, the spinner is enough large.

00:46:078 - Adding a circle here would sound better. Yep, but no, since it's the easiest diff of the map, i have to put some "breaks" to relax the beginners.

01:15:847 (5) - If you want, you could make this slider go vertically down towards the reverse slider, instead of it going diagonally up. Hmmm no, pefering follow the flow done before and try not to overlapping the next slider.

01:38:001 (4) - Maybe turn this into a slider? If you do, end it at 01:38:231 "Breaks"

02:00:616 (6) - Something about this slider doesn't fit in that well to me. I suggest maybe just removing it and keep with the current flow of the beat. Actually, the main beat is 3/4, so make something different than this big slider without a blank is not really possible and easy to play for beginners.

02:13:078 (1) - Try to make this reverse slider end towards the next note instead of away from it. Updated, it's more readable.

02:17:924 - Adding a circle here would give better flow. Let's try it.

03:21:847 (4) - Instead of this slider, I think it would look nice and play better if you make the head and tail of this as 2 seperate notes. Yep, nice choice.

Hard

SPOILER

00:07:078 (9) - You could probably find a better placement for this note. It kind of throws you off of where the next circle will appear. Maybe but this circle is not the problem and moving it won't make it easier to play, and a really want a jump here. :<

00:26:693 (2) - I think a triplet here would be better in my opinion. Yep, the slider sound is ugly here, fixed.

00:32:924 (5) - Why not just end this slider at 00:33:385 instead of adding a note there? It sounds interesting, and i wanted to keep what i did on the whole hard and insane as finishing this kind of slider at 3/4.

00:37:770 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - You should do this same pattern somewhere around 00:39:385 But it brokes my pattern. :'<

00:41:462 (2) - Triplet here fits in better. Yep, totally

00:52:308 (2,3,4) - Pretty cool pattern! Fits in well! Thank you! <3 #Paladin² cc Gezo

00:55:539 (1) - Why start a NC here? I think you just start a NC at 00:55:770 (2) Makes more sense

01:57:847 (8,9) - At around here, you could create a doublet (however you want to call it ) I listened to the song closely and you could make one around there. Yep you right, i can make a circle between these 2 one, but currently the pattern i use to make a jump, so i cannot add something around here without chaging a lot just for a doublet, but i you think i'm wrong or that's not what you meaned, i encourage you to explain me. :>

02:10:078 (3) - Triplet here would play better. Sure m9

02:11:462 (7) - This is the only slider in this whole map that I saw that is it out of place and doesn't fit in, I suggest adding regular notes somewhere in place of the slider. Well also the next one, i've updated this part, which fits better now. I also added NC better for better reading comprehension.

02:12:385 (9) - Same thing with this slider, it just doesn't play well. ^

02:26:001 (5,6,7) - A triangle pattern would look cooler. ILLUMINATI COMFIRMED!! WOW WOW WOW! More seriously, why not, but the next pattern will make it hard to join with a triangle, moreover when i need flow.

02:40:539 (5) - The spacing on this note compared to 02:40:078 (3,4) looks a bit awkward. I think you might have done this so that it doesn't interfere with the slider at 02:39:385 (2) How about you stack 5 on the head of 2? In this situation i've to change the whole next pattern, so 'im trying with deleting the circle (3) and finish the slider (2) at it's position.

02:49:078 (12) - Looks a bit uneven with 02:48:616 (10,11) About what?

02:56:347 - Add a circle here? Would play better with a bigger stream considering that it's almost the end of the Kiai. Kay'

03:26:462 (5) - I think you had a similar pattern like this in the beginning of the map, it's better to place it somewhere so that it doesn't throw off the player. Even a player on Hard might have trouble with this. I don't really understand the problem. If it's stacking then i rotate the slider (3) to make it appear clearly, else i need more explain.

Insane

SPOILER

00:00:155 (1,2,3) - Kind of an awkward placement of notes right at the beginning of the song, don't you think?

00:11:001 (14) - These combos reach quite a high number, maybe start some new combos earlier where you think it would be appropriate? I didn't see any other part of the map with a combo going this high.

00:11:231 (1,2,3) - Would look cool if you made some kind of triangular pattern with these.

00:26:231 (2) - I think you placed this a little too far, but that's up to you. (Edit: I see that these are common patterns within the map. I think you should only use these on the most intense parts though.)

00:41:001 (2) - Same thing with this one, it's quite a jump, especially with how fast you have to do it.

00:51:847 (1) - Having something like this right after a spinner could easily throw off a player, I would place this a bit closer, maybe towards the middle.

00:56:001 (2,3,4,5,6) - This shape is awkward, especially for a stream. I know you could probably make this look better.

01:08:924 (1,2,3,4,5) - Maybe curve this stream?

01:16:308 (9,10,11,12,13,14) - I'm not sure if you intended this, but some of the circles look a bit uneven.

01:36:616 - Cool use of hitsounds!

01:46:770 (5,6,7) - I feel that you could find a better placement for these. Maybe at 296/296?

02:04:078 - This is a suggestion, but I think you could add a large stream here.

02:16:770 (1) - The placement of this should be closer to the end of the tail of the preceding slider. It plays awkwardly if too far.

02:38:708 (8) - This part might be a little too hard to hit, especially on how fast you need to move the cursor.

03:08:462 (1) - A triplet here sounds good.

03:10:078 - Adding a circle here would give a better flow in my opinion.

03:25:078 (6,7,8,9) - Instead of this current pattern, maybe space them farther apart from each other in a diagonal like way?

Overall, pretty cool map! Reminds me of the older maps.

Aldwych wrote:

GyroX20 wrote:

00:37:078 (1) - Same as the hard, this is really sudden and really fast Coz it's insane, so i'm gonna keep it, and will change if a bat will say it

_Gezo_ wrote:

écoute ce qu'il dit abriti il a raison xdjk

Now it's an illuminati!

Amethyianous wrote:

Mod request from the "just a Little Mod Queue."

- : a mod
+ : an oppinion


[General]
- Delete osb since there's no storyboard. lel lel, i've osb file? wot?

[Normal]
+ The diff is good mapping.

- 00:02:001 (3,4) - I think this pattern and the music is not fit, it feels like akward sound. http://puu.sh/d0S8O/52792453c1.jpg it may be perfect to the + music.
- 00:09:847 (4) - ^, this thing too is akward. the pattern is up to you, at least it fits the music.
- 00:17:231 (5) - ^

For these 3, i have to reject to proposition, coz it's the easiest diff, and making circles with 3/4 distance is confusing for new players, for confirmed no ofc.

+ Maybe you can be ignore them, because it's yourselves.

- 00:28:308 (5,6,7) - Make it more perfect. sure m8
Fixes: the (6) distance snap, and the (7) will be the more same with the (5)

code

60,104,28308,2,0,P|44:176|104:240,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,264,29001,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,300,29231,2,0,P|268:304|318:258,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

+ 02:35:693 (1,2,3,4,5) - This objects looks like a stream for newbs. Deleting the (2)

[Hard]
+I really enjoyed this diff. Good joob bro.

- 00:01:539 (4,5) - Why not made it like this? http://puu.sh/d0ST9/e29c10bb18.jpg make it like "( (" isn't good, but proper if the (5) is CTRL+G-ed. Ye why not.
- 00:22:308 to 00:51:847 - just the streams. ?
- 00:32:924 (5) - Make it like a zig zag slider, it will fit the music, i believe. Ye you right, but i did a kind of "zig zag" at the begining, and modders said it's unnapropriate coz players have to see clearly the slider.
- 00:42:616 (9) - New Combo. Yep
+ 00:56:231 (2) - This slider is so ugly for me. Curved it less.
- 01:36:155 (1,2,3) - That distance snap is not good. Fix it. I prefer the (1) is moved. Upsss, also fixed the blanket.
- 01:54:847 (2) - This overlap doesn't give me some taste for the gameplay. Move the yellow slider.
- 01:56:462 (6) - I'd better to make it straight slider. Not a good taste flow. Accorded.
- 02:11:231 (10) - New Combo? Already did on the previous mod, but earlier to make it easy to read the whole pattern.
- 02:19:078 (8) - New Cembe? Ye
- 02:22:770 (9) - Na Kamba? Earlia.
- 03:17:693 (5) - No Na Kombeh? In orda to follow the previous Kombeh, i will still keep this Kamba.
- 03:17:693 (5) - I would have this reversed pattern. http://puu.sh/d0TQf/7b8a18af18.jpg For the pattern, no. :<

git guder

[Insane]
+I am enjoyed this to. damnit you make gud meps

- 00:02:001 (6) - Whistle + New Combo?
- 00:06:155 (9) - ^ ye x2
- 00:09:385 (7) - New combo? Nope, keeping the previous combo set. :>
- 00:29:001 (5) - You have to reserve this. (CTRL+G) wat is reserve? lel. Why? Coz my current pattern, makes the flow better.
- 00:53:693 (2) - ^ ^
- 01:02:924 (1) - Move the 2nd white thick to this position: x228 y348. it makes the curve more like curve. loyo wtf how looks like the slider now! xDD Nvm you're talking about the 3rd (starting on the begining not left to right.
- 02:43:078 (3,4,5) - um Look at the hit circle. It doesn't make an illuminati, i mean triangle. move the (5) to this position: x136 y224. Now it's an illuminati!
HAHAHAHHA, so i move a little bit the 4th to not make it inequals in terms of DS, ok now just https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kGJR4ju6DVY
I think im gonna end it here.

Good luck on your map. i hope it's ranked.

Kenterz wrote:

Here comes my mod :3

baguette

LE BAGUETTE POUR LE DESSERT!!

Normal

00:01:078 (2,4) - Essaye de faire en sorte que la deuxième partie de ces sliders (après le red anchor) soient parallèle, ça peut être intéressent comme pattern. A la base c'était un slider similaire au 1er, mais vu que personne remarquera la différence, j'ai appliqué ton mod.
00:08:001 (2,3) - Aaaarf y'a un léger overlap ici, je te conseille de bouger un peu (2) pour éviter ce problème (j'ai aussi un peu changé (1) dans mon screen pour éviter l'overlap avec (3) quand il est tout droit, et au passage j'ai fait un blanket) :

SPOILER

C'est dans ce genre de situations que j'aime avoir le code. :> Mais j'ai pu faire qqch de similaire.
00:08:924 (3,4) - Tu peux aussi faire le même genre de pattern avec le bkanket que tu a fait juste avant (pour (2,3)), je pense que ça rendra mieux que actuellement. La seule chose que je peux faire actuellement, c'est agrandir le DS, je peux pas faire un blanket propre et garder un flow avec le combo suivant. :/
00:13:539 (4) - Tu pourrais presque lui ajouter un reverse, et puis y'aura une justification au placement de 00:14:924 (1) qui parait un peu bizarre (le mouvement que ça créé est pas top) On va tenter le reverse bien que je suis pas méga fan du 3/4 spacing, on va dire que le flow l'emporte ici.
00:16:308 (3,4) - Ce pattern rend assez moche... Je te conseille soit de faire un beau blanket en ignorant la distance snap, ou alors de bouger (4) d'un carreau vers la gauche, ça rend assez bien aussi. J'opte pour la solution la plus feignasse (a savoir le move).
00:17:231 (5) - C'est dommage que le finish soit à la fin d'un slider, c'est un emphasized beat donc ça serait mieux qu'il soit cliqué pour moi. Kwa? Je l'ai supprimé mais j'ai pas compris le "cliqué".
00:25:539 - C'est juste un avis personnel, mais je pense que ça aurait bien rendu avec la musique s'il y avait un slider ici. Oui mais d'un coté ca simplifie la tache au niveau des NC (oui excuse de merde en passant). Et vu que si je le fais pour celui-ci, bah ca sera pareil pour les autres donc work++
00:57:155 (4,5) - Tu devrais bouger un peu ces deux cercles pour qu'ils soient bien alignés avec la forme de (2) (représenté par un slider violet dans le screen ci-dessous) : Fixed avec ta technique

SPOILER

01:54:155 (6,1,2) - Les distance snap entre (6,1) et (1,2) ne sont pas les mêmes, et ça se voit quand on regarde comment est construit le blanket. Tu devrais corriger ça je pense, en bougeant 01:54:847 (1,2) d'un carreau vers le haut Parfait
02:24:616 (2,3,4,5) - Ce pattern est bizarre, on dirait un mélange entre "ces 4 objects sont alignés" et "c'est 4 objects forment un arc de cercle". Le mélange entre les deux rends le tout assez particulier, je te conseille de choisir entre l'un des deux. Ligne, plus simple a créer.
02:29:231 (2,3,4) - Ici, la distance snap entre (2,3) et (3,4) est pas la même, et ça se voit, donc je te conseille de le changer. J'ai changé le 2 en un slider de 1, par contre le pattern entier a été bougé pour que le flow reste correct.
(02:40:539 (4) - Ce slider est tellement bien placé <3 OwO)
03:01:078 (7) - Je te conseille d'ajouter un NC ici, car cette partie en manque clairement d'un. Oups, my bad

Hard

00:08:001 (2,3,5) - La distance entre (3) et la queue de (2) et entre (5) et la queue de (2) est pas la même, ça pourrais être intéressent de faire en sort qu'elle soit égale (c'est juste une suggestion) Exact, mais je ne peux pas faire un truc parfait, j'ai préféré faire une distance presque similaire et faire en sorte que le slider 7 se stack sur le 2
00:12:616 (3,4,5) - Pourquoi ce jump ? (je dis juste ça parce que ça parait un peu random) Auditivement ca parait correct. Je garde cette remarque au cas ou j'ai une autre remarque. :>
00:18:270 (9) - Tu pourrais essayer de l'écarter un peu de (8) car on pourrais facilement penser que y'a 1/2 beat d'écart alors que non. Essaye peut être de le placer à x36|y200 par exemple ? Seems legit, en + tu me permet de ne pas modifier le reste. :>
00:31:770 (1,2,3) - Je pense que avoir la même distance entre (1,2) et (2,3) pourrais se révéler intéressent comme pattern. C'est vrai que c'était pas consistent en terme de DS donc done. >
00:40:308 (4,6) - Pourquoi ne pas avoir un sliderslide avec un whistle comme pour 00:25:539 (7,5) ? My bad
00:56:231 (2,3) - Tu pourrais peut être avoir la même distance ici qu'entre 00:56:924 (3,4,5,6,7) pour continuer le pattern ? Yeye, mais je suis pas fan du résultat.
01:42:847 (8,1) - La distance snap est trop faible, on dirait pas que c'est du 3/4 de différence mais plutot du 1/2 de différence =/ J'ai reverse le 1 et 2 ca devrait aller mieux now, pas niveau flow par contre. :<
02:05:693 (1) - Pourquoi cette accélération si soudaine ? (c'est pas vraiment gênant lors du play mais c'est la seule fois ou tu le fais) La double notif non :> Plus serieusement ces accélérateurs sont plus considérés comme des boost par rapport à la précédente séquence musicale (c'est pas faux²)
02:20:462 (1) - ^
02:56:001 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Le rond est assez mal fait, je te conseille de faire un slider rond, de le sélectionner, d'aller dans l'onglet "Compose", de sélectionner "Convert Slider to Stream", de choisir le nombre de circle et d'admirer le résultat (cette dernière étape est facultative) OMFG 3illuminati5me!
03:11:116 (4) - Ce circle ne correspond pas à un beat dans la musique, il est donc overmappé et DOIT être détruit =/ Y U not NO taiko? :q

Insane

AiMod il te dit que t'as pas snappé tes kiai à 00:22:307 et 00:22:423. Ah? Perso il me le dit pas mais okay.

00:11:231 (1,2,3) - C'est juste une suggestion, mais je te conseille de les rapprocher, ça fait un peu êtrange actuellement, et c'est difficile de savoir quand faut appuyer =/ Done
00:13:770 (8) - Tu pourrais ajouter un whistle comme tu as fait pour 00:12:039 (4) ? Effectivement c'est plus cohérent comme ça.
00:26:001 (1,2) - Wow.. Le jump est vraiment large, c'est assez chaud à jouer comparé aux patterns précedents En fait je me retouve bloqué sur cette situation car je fais un overlap avec le slider 5, du coup j'ai complêtement déplacé le 2, on a un flow correct et un jump de 2, ce qui est un peux mieux. Also le banket du 5 a été amélioré.
00:40:770 (1,2) - ^ Pareil qu'au dessus, c'est passé a 1.5.
01:09:616 (6,7,8,9,10) - La distance snap parait vraiment élevée ici... Plusieurs players pourrait faire des miss ici et ça serai dommage =/ Exact, il est repassé a 1.
01:14:924 (6,7) - Comparé aux distance snap lors du stream, celui là est vraiment faible, on dirait du 1/4 d'écart. Je te conseille te le bouger par exemple autour de x288|y176 Pas mal du tout ca!
01:37:770 (6,2) - Un peu embêtant l'overlap.. Tu pourrais stacker leurs queue peut être ? (cette phrase est vraiment bizarre xD) HUEHUEHUAHUE
01:47:231 (1,2) - Jump encore assez difficile pour une partie de la musique assez lente. Tu peux essayer de bouger (2) à x160|y192 ? Kay'
01:51:501 (3) - Cette note est overmappé car il n'y a pas de beat qui lui corresponde dans la musique, ils faut donc l'enlever. Oui mais par contre je dois bouger le 2 afin d'avoir une consistance dans les DS.
01:52:770 (7) - Tu pourrais rajouter un NC ici, ça suivrai ta logique de placement de new combo. Yep
02:49:308 (5,1) - La distance snap laisse clairement penser que y'a 1/4 d'écart là, essaye de doubler la distance snap je pense. Peux pas. :> Autant essayer un stack, ca se vera visuellement que c'est un 1/2 :>
02:52:308 (2,3,4) - Pourquoi ne pas essayer de faire blanket ces sliders avec (3) ? Déja un blanket avec le 1 et essayer des pattern différent.

Très bonne map, elle est fun à jouer en plus :3

Bonne chance pour le rank :3

Project Railgun wrote:

Rank soon!

imoutosan wrote:

From queue, sorry for delay (also sorry for delay. :>)

[Normal]

00:07:539 (1,2) - use 1.2x ds since you used 1.2x between 2,3 to keep consistent okay
01:40:078 (1,2) - ^ 1.1 so, it's better.

This diff isn't very good-looking imo. but I got no idea to help, sorry.

[Hard]

00:00:155 (1) - x48 y128 Why not, the flow isn't that bad.
00:05:231 (4,5) - jump is a bit too big imo. you don't need to stack the circles. try this? Nope coz you create inconsistent DS between your circles.

00:17:578 (8,9) - too close Since the previus mod it's not. :>
01:58:770 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - nice idea Thanks. :>
02:01:308 (8,2) - don't stack notes on reverse arrows Well coz it's 2 sliders, i don't think it's a problem, keep noticing this.

Same to normal. It may be hard to improve its looking just by some mods. Look through some others‘ maps to get some ideas?

[Insane]

00:07:308 (5) - x220 y336 Why not.

Not much to say. Some big jumps such as 00:26:001 (1,2) - are not reasonable imo.
Map still need some work. Maybe you need more experience in stantard mapping. Sorry I can't help much.

Good futsuu. No need to change anything

- Love1yV1ruS - wrote:

Ummm... From my modding queue

Muzukashii

00:30:616 (105) - 1/4 forward (the melody of song is sooooooo strong!)
00:38:001 (133) - 1/4 forward
00:45:385 (163) - 1/4 forward
01:41:231 (354) - d to k? it's a muzukashi, so i won't do ddk pattern coz players have to learn simple triplet pattern.
01:55:539 (404) - 1/4 forward
01:57:385 (413) - 1/4 forward
02:02:924 (436) - 1/4 forward Noop, here a i prefer follow the finish hitsound.
02:28:770 (533) - 1/4 forward

For the others 1/4, these were applied coz you riht, it fits much better.

SkyDevil wrote:

Soo recently they added a custom song mode on Geometry Dash and someone made a level of this song too which reminded me of this map

thus I checked this map and noticed you didn't add a soft-slidertick yet for normal .w. so uh have a link http://puu.sh/daaQP/c2b8aa254a.wav