first this: 00:14:164 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - this stuff only should be on extra diff, it looks plays harder then it should be, you could replace it with notes, if you want to keep it as "Insane"

2nd: the whole kiai has crazy jumps that's are so big and fits for extra diff, and I only play insane diff and i couldn't even pass this...

[ Daniel ] wrote:

There is a problem loading the audio for the insane level

Urushi38 wrote:

ok I never use Extra for this mapset

Rakuen wrote:

( =`･ω･´) Rakuen's Modding Queue (NM/M4M)

Legend

Default = Normal mods
Blue = Strongly recommended
Red = Unrankable issue
Pink = Will be discussed if not changed

Hitsounds

• There are 2 hitsounds with delays here, use the modified version below:

1. 7 ms delay - http://puu.sh/dLQBu/3340fc1f69.wav , applies for:
   soft-hitwhistle2
   soft-slidertick39
   
2. 2 ms delay - http://puu.sh/dLQFS/e152137b98.wav , applies for:
   drum-hitwhistle

Normal

1. 00:21:831 (5) - Slider is off rhythm, try moving to 00:21:664 - . Nothing sounds at 00:21:831 - and 00:22:164 -
   No. There are certainly Cello sounds. I follow them.
2. 01:17:664 (3) - Whistle
3. 01:18:664 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - Hitsounds here a bit wrong, make the whistles at upbeats please, like 01:18:998 - , 01:19:664 - , 01:20:331 - etc.

Hard

1. 00:12:831 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Use 1.2x DS for all of them, looks neater
2. 00:58:998 (2) - Clap
3. Nice diff

momimann's Insane

1. Please use AR8.6
2. 00:10:998 (5) - Use same DS?
3. 00:23:831 (1) - NC not needed imo
   No change. ofc we can play wothout NC, but this NC makes playing better.
4. 00:40:998 - Clap
5. 01:22:998 - , 01:23:164 - , 01:23:331 (1) - Claps will sound better imo

Infected

1. 00:13:664 - Whistle
2. 00:49:331 (1) - Try to make the middle part more visible. Something like 01:11:998 (6) - or :
   
   Image

   
3. 01:02:164 (1) - Don't have to NC this I guess, it's readable (extra diff)

Call me back when you're ready!

Rakuen wrote:

Railgun's Easy

1. Please use AR3 flat I think the current ar fits the map better
2. 01:23:998 (1) - Inconsistent DS I do this intentionally to follow the instrumental. It's +0.05x i hope that's not an issue

1. 00:05:332 (1,2) - The 1/4 gap between these two sliders plus the angle of flow makes this very awkward at the beginning of the map. I usually got a 100 on the first slider. ctrl+g 00:05:998 (2) - works well and since there is a spinner afterwards you are not changing much
2. 00:12:914 (4,5,6) - This stream seems a little forced in my opinion. I think converting this to a 1/2 pattern works very nicely. Try something like this or something similar, follows the music well and plays to fit the music
   
   example

   
3. 00:39:831 (1,2,3,4) - I was seriously impressed by this pattern, it plays and flows really well! Nice job here
4. 00:53:998 (3,4,5,6) - The pattern can flow better imo. Try ctrl+g 4/5 and see how it plays
5. 01:11:331 (3) - I suggest you accent this slider with a new combo since it is obscured by 01:10:664 (1) - for the most part. Players with skins that do not have transparency in their slider tracks will have a hard time noticing this and the new combo will add more of a visual cue
6. 01:15:998 (1,2,3,1) - Really, the highlight of the map for me. I never get tired of playing this pattern and imo it fits the the vocal and music really well. Its not everyday you see something like this!

1. 01:15:164 (7,8,9) - The rhythm here is kinda awkward with the stronger vocals. Revise it to follow it more closer. Try something like this
   

1. 00:34:831 (8) - The slider ticks during this slider are very strong sounding, which may confuse the average hard player. I think removing them would be best or maybe try a different rhythm out

Lust wrote:

Lets get this back to where it should be.

[Infected]

1. 00:05:332 (1,2) - The 1/4 gap between these two sliders plus the angle of flow makes this very awkward at the beginning of the map. I usually got a 100 on the first slider. ctrl+g 00:05:998 (2) - works well and since there is a spinner afterwards you are not changing much
2. 00:12:914 (4,5,6) - This stream seems a little forced in my opinion. I think converting this to a 1/2 pattern works very nicely. Try something like this or something similar, follows the music well and plays to fit the music
   
   example

   
3. 00:39:831 (1,2,3,4) - I was seriously impressed by this pattern, it plays and flows really well! Nice job here
4. 00:53:998 (3,4,5,6) - The pattern can flow better imo. Try ctrl+g 4/5 and see how it plays
5. 01:11:331 (3) - I suggest you accent this slider with a new combo since it is obscured by 01:10:664 (1) - for the most part. Players with skins that do not have transparency in their slider tracks will have a hard time noticing this and the new combo will add more of a visual cue
6. 01:15:998 (1,2,3,1) - Really, the highlight of the map for me. I never get tired of playing this pattern and imo it fits the the vocal and music really well. Its not everyday you see something like this!

[momimann's Insane]
The volume of the hitsounds are rather quiet, especially for the parts after the beginning. I highly suggest you raise the volume on the green lines.

1. 01:15:164 (7,8,9) - The rhythm here is kinda awkward with the stronger vocals. Revise it to follow it more closer. Try something like this
   

[Hard]

1. 00:34:831 (8) - The slider ticks during this slider are very strong sounding, which may confuse the average hard player. I think removing them would be best or maybe try a different rhythm out

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