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Tamura Yukari - MERRY MERRY MERRY MENU... Ne!

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moonlightleaf
CN
1,778 posts
Joined September 2011
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moonlightleaf
to Hijiri Byakuren

[Hard]

我觉得在歌手唱之前遵循00:05:734 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - 的节奏 就是 X X X X XX XX XXX XXX . XXX X XXX X X-X-X X
你自己摆的节奏实在是有点奇怪 ---没改

[Insane]

00:05:067 (3) - 其实我觉得这个音完全不需要 在前面那根红线结束就行了 ---没改

00:54:234 (1,2,3) - 1,2弄成滑条 3开始连打 好

00:55:067 (8) - 这应该是slider ---之前就是滑条被人说改单点 真是 还是滑条好

others fix

感谢mod ^^/
YoshinoSakura
CN
340 posts
Joined January 2011
YoshinoSakura

P A N wrote:

[615]

00:16:400 (1,2,4) - move to 452|344 , 484|256 , 405|200 for better star. fixed
01:02:400 (3,4) - I think 1/2 is more fit on this part. please reconsider.1/2 is definitely better but i want some fast beats here
01:11:067 (1) - should be 160|340. ok
01:15:400 (4) - something funny here. haha fixed

-Neipezi wrote:

[615's Insane]
00:09:734 (1,2) - change location? nice idea
00:10:984 (5) - x384 y328 move ok
01:16:400 (1,2,3,4,5) - pattern is difficult to play x.x
01:17:067 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ just a stream x.x
01:19:067 (1) - 01:21:734 - spinner end? nope

[Hijiri Byakuren] wrote:

[615's Insane]
00:10:817 加NOTE
or
00:10:900 (4) - NC
00:11:067 (1) - 去掉NC 这里没啥问题啊

00:13:400 (6) - 不觉得 CTRL G 打起来更顺吗？有道理

00:21:067 (3,4,5,6,1) - 不好看 啊啊啊这里改了n次惹
00:22:067 (3) - 而且这个也被挡住了 有道理

01:16:400 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 最后还摆这连打是要给一分的节奏吗？正因为有这个给一分的player都给不出来
谢mod

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: MARRY ME.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 43184
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 63900,71734
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.4

[Metadata]
Title:MERRY MERRY MERRY MENU... Ne!
TitleUnicode:MERRY MERRY MERRY MENU...ね!
Artist:Tamura Yukari
ArtistUnicode:田村ゆかり
Creator:moonlightleaf
Version:615's Insane
Source:
Tags:[Minakami Yuki] 615915887
BeatmapID:395511
BeatmapSetID:161089

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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84,160,55067,6,0,B|64:116|100:76|100:76|168:128|164:28|248:96,1,215.999993408203,4|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,324,55734,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,168,55900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,336,56067,1,8,0:0:0:0:
504,248,56234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,256,56400,6,0,B|248:284|244:336|244:336|216:352|184:332|184:332|152:312|124:328,1,215.999993408203,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
131,324,57067,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,108,57234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
20,280,57400,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,148,57567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
24,172,57734,6,0,B|28:120|104:116|104:116|104:52|168:24,1,215.999993408203,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,148,58234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,268,58400,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,108,58567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,48,58734,1,8,0:0:0:0:
100,296,58900,6,0,B|112:348|112:348|176:368,1,107.999996704102,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,108,59234,2,0,B|408:56|408:56|344:36,1,107.999996704102,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,48,59567,2,0,P|168:97|180:148,1,107.999996704102,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,168,59900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,308,60067,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,308,60150,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,292,60234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,268,60317,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,240,60400,6,0,P|200:200|184:136,1,107.999996704102,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,224,60734,2,0,P|36:272|40:332,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,216,61067,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,44,61234,2,0,P|424:92|428:156,2,107.999996704102,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,260,61734,6,0,B|404:316|352:316|352:316|304:364|256:344,1,215.999993408203,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,204,62234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,320,62400,2,0,P|96:352|96:380,2,53.9999983520508
56,176,62734,2,0,P|24:192|0:212,2,53.9999983520508
156,60,63067,6,0,P|204:56|276:72,1,107.999996704102,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,328,63400,2,0,P|340:332|268:316,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,204,63734,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,204,63900,2,0,P|395:193|341:197,2,107.999996704102,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,328,64400,6,0,B|344:344|312:312|312:312|280:320|280:320|248:256|188:304,1,215.999993408203,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,372,64900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,220,65067,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,64,65234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,204,65400,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,40,65567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,212,65734,6,0,P|384:262|376:328,1,107.999996704102,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,288,66067,1,2,0:0:0:0:
468,236,66234,1,0,1:0:0:0:
240,288,66567,5,2,0:0:0:0:
468,236,66734,1,2,0:0:0:0:
324,24,66900,2,0,B|256:32|232:92|232:92|180:72|140:116,1,215.999993408203,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
336,136,67400,1,0,1:0:0:0:
116,324,68067,1,2,0:0:0:0:
116,324,68234,1,2,0:0:0:0:
116,324,68400,6,0,P|116:280|128:228,1,90,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
176,124,68734,1,10,0:0:0:0:
128,328,68900,6,0,P|128:284|140:232,1,90,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
188,128,69234,1,2,0:0:0:0:
140,332,69400,6,0,P|140:288|152:236,1,90,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
204,132,69734,1,2,0:0:0:0:
152,336,69900,6,0,P|152:292|164:240,1,90,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
220,136,70234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,296,70400,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,168,70567,1,8,0:0:0:0:
104,168,70650,1,8,0:0:0:0:
104,168,70734,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,68,70900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,340,71067,6,0,B|204:340|204:340|252:360,1,90,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
176,240,71567,2,0,B|220:240|220:240|268:260,1,90,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
196,144,72067,2,0,B|240:144|240:144|288:164,1,90,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
220,48,72567,2,0,B|264:48|264:48|312:68,1,90,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
156,336,73067,1,0,1:0:0:0:
68,40,73400,1,4,0:0:0:0:
344,296,73734,5,4,0:0:0:0:
328,132,73900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,292,74067,1,8,0:0:0:0:
412,192,74234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,136,74400,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,380,74567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,92,74734,1,8,0:0:0:0:
108,100,74900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,352,75067,5,0,0:0:0:0:
412,192,75234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,192,75317,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,192,75400,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,256,75567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,92,75734,2,0,P|368:100|328:140,2,90,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,196,76400,5,0,0:0:0:0:
56,244,76484,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,280,76567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
68,328,76650,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,352,76734,2,0,P|156:328|172:280,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,352,77067,5,0,0:0:0:0:
388,304,77150,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,304,77233,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,256,77317,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,256,77400,2,0,B|270:235|258:215|258:215|242:195|258:171,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,256,77734,5,0,0:0:0:0:
66,153,77900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
283,122,78067,1,8,0:0:0:0:
125,274,78234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
163,59,78400,2,0,P|150:111|190:231,1,180,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,79067,12,0,81067,0:0:0:0:
yanlu
TW
539 posts
Joined November 2010
yanlu
Hi.
mod from your pm.

(我是接續幾天mod的有些你可能已經改掉了:o

[Insane]
00:07:067 (3) - 換個方向比較順... http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1486415
00:08:734 (5,1) - 位置相對有點近...比較縮的感覺..感覺1應該放更下面一點
00:10:400 (5) - 弧度在大一點 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1486428
00:13:734 (1,2,3,4,5) - 1-4跟5的夾角讓我覺得很卡..
00:16:734 (3,4) - 對調位置
00:25:067 (4) - 為什麼這個是角角的其他是圓弧的呢
00:28:900 - add a note 在5的原地
00:32:900 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1486441
00:35:734 (2,3) - 拉開一點間距
00:54:734 (4,5,6,7,8) - 這個弧=-=好醜
01:08:234 (2) - 這個note我會建議你不要stack 因為跟後面幾個是不同的
>>有些地方不夠細緻...既然想直就要夠直 想做圓弧就要夠圓弧 歪斜什麼的...>~<;

[Hard]
00:40:900 (4) - 改成slider?
00:44:067 (4,5) - ^
00:46:400 (2,3,4,5,6) - 這裡頗難過的...
>>這個難度的排列感覺有些隨便...233

[615's Insane]
00:18:400 (5) - 跟前面的一樣弄彎的?
00:25:234 (4) - ctrl+g
00:26:067 (2) - ctrl+g
00:37:400 (4) - 結束在00:37:567 - 紅線就好
00:43:734 (2) - nc
01:16:400 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 233333
*kiai副歌的地方我很喜歡'w'*

[Normal]
00:11:734 (2) - x104/y296
00:25:734 - ~00:26:567 - 太空啦 加點甚麼吧
00:37:734 (1,2) - 怪怪的節奏(x)
01:06:234 (2) - 改成從01:06:067 - 開始的slider
01:06:567 - add note
01:15:067 (3) - 為什麼要來回 完全跟音樂不搭.-.
01:17:734 (3) - ^

[Yuki's Easy]
00:00:401 (1) - nazi--:第5個點位置x304/140 第六個點x396/y228
00:24:400 (1) -
00:36:400 (2) - end in 00:36:900 - ?
00:48:400 (2) - 取消來回 然後從00:48:567 - 開始
00:52:400 (1) - 我覺得這slider不要來回 然後拉個特殊形狀會比現在好:v
00:59:067 (2) - 跟前面一樣的問題?
01:19:067 (1) - 放對稱??
>>呒啥問題ˊwˋ
-----------------------
>>最想讓我吐槽的就是妳的combo color..!Orz
拜託既然不想讓紅色重複出現就整個改掉吧//弄跟BG相似的顏色不是更好嗎啊(喂
不多說..以上純屬個人意見僅供參考233
moonlightleaf
CN
1,778 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf
to yanlu妹妹

[Hard]

>>這個難度的排列感覺有些隨便...233 ---233 满世界坑 就我掉惹进去 爬不出来 还越挖越深ww

[Normal]

00:37:734 (1,2) - 怪怪的節奏(x) ---滑条点+惹1 然后没改

其他的都改惹

感谢mod ^^/
- KaTZ -
- KaTZ -
[Insane]
00:54:567 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 排成直線吧

新人mod完全看不出有什麼問題啊 :(
祝早日rank
ts8zs
CN
2,008 posts
Joined May 2011
ts8zs
这个Insane槽点略多导致我想直接做个Insane……但是好懒 滚来滚去……~(～o￣▽￣)～o 。。。滚来滚去……o～(＿△＿o～) ~。。。整个mapset都是槽点._.
[iNSANE]
00:01:900 (3) - DEL A REVERSE
……大写锁定了= =b
00:10:400 (5) - 提前1/4结束加个note
00:21:734 (1,2) - 节奏互换
00:41:067 (4,5) - ^
00:47:734 (2,3) - 换一下flow能（稍微）好一点
00:53:734 (5) - reverse
01:18:400 (5) - blanket & flow
总之就是flow问题很大，然后滑条头注意在重音上就好._.
[615]
……难度……都od8了= =b
00:18:400 (5,6) - flow
00:39:734 (1,2) - 稍微歪一下吧
话说kiai那段奇葩的滑条为了凸显啥……你是想拉着玩么
01:08:734 (2,2,2,2) - 都去掉= =
01:15:734 (6) - ……Ctrl+G能好些
01:16:400 (1,2,3,4,5) - 01:17:067 (1,2,3,4,5) - ………………算了
[Hard]
00:12:900 (2) - 同insane 滑条头最好在重音上._.
00:43:234 (1) - ……有点难受
00:44:400 (1) - 意义何在
00:49:650 - 少点啥
[Normal]
00:24:067 (3) - 去掉吧
00:26:734 (5) - ^
00:47:734 (3) - 移开啦
[Yuki's Easy]
00:47:067 (1,2) - ._.
00:57:734 (1,2) - ^
01:19:067 (1) - M
._.
moonlightleaf
CN
1,778 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf
to ts8zs

all fix except:

[Insane]

00:10:400 (5) - 提前1/4结束加个note ---不改

感谢mod ^^/
Okoratu
DE
4,709 posts
Joined May 2012
Okoratu
Hi!

This one is from my modding Queue:

[Insane]
Because this one is very well made I'd just like to drop by some suggestions:
  1. 00:40:734 (3) - You might consider moving this one away from 00:40:067 (2) - for those reasons:
    1. The jump from 00:39:400 (2) - to 00:39:734 (1) - is bigger than the jump from 00:40:067 (2,3) -
    2. The first jump ^ only needs half the time and thus it might cause the player to have to wait for some time
  2. 01:00:400 - For the part that starts here and ends 01:05:734 -, You might try the following
    1. Set the Volume to 80%
    2. Add a finish on every white tick
    3. See how it sounds
  3. 01:01:900 (3) - You might want to try to stack this one with the end of 01:01:067 (3) - properly because you're stacking alot in this map
  4. 01:10:484 - You might Switch to the drumset from here to 01:10:984 - and do the following:
    1. Set the volume to 60%
    2. 01:10:734 - add a clap
    3. 01:10:900 - add a finish
[615's Insane]

General:
Your Kiai Time should be consistent with the other Diffs in this mapset, so you should consult moonlightleaf about it in order to reach a consistent solution

  1. 00:26:567 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - This one annoys me a bit because it overlaps: did you try to use something similar to this one (with not that much spacing) to this one there already 00:14:400 (1,2) - , if not i suggest you move this whole pattern up a bit
  2. I suggested the following for the Insane Diff aswell
    01:00:400 - For the part that starts here and ends 01:05:734 -, You might try the following
    1. Set the Volume to 80%
    2. Add a finish on every white tick
    3. See how it sounds

I hope this was in some way helpful...
GL,
~Oko
-Faded-
GB
752 posts
Joined December 2012
-Faded-
Hey there~

General

You should add some tags to your set that aren't guest mappers.

The spinner in all difficulties but easy seems quite unnecessary, you should make it so that the spinner is at 01:21:734 (1) - in all diffs and map the parts that were previously part of the spinner with other notes.

Yuki's Easy

00:05:734 (1) - This note seems a bit too close to the slider head of 00:05:734 (1) - and you can even see a tiny overlap you should move this further away imo

00:11:067 (1,2) - Maybe you could make these two blanket eachother? Just a suggestion~

00:13:734 (1) - Would be better flow if you ctrl+g this then move it so the spacing is fine.

00:15:067 (2) - If you did what I've posted before then ctrl+g this as well to retain the pattern you had before.

00:20:400 (3) - I can see you were trying to have this in the same spot as the slider end of 00:17:734 (2) - , but it's not spaced too correctly, and the triangle isn't looking too good either.

A large portion of the map plays well after that.

01:01:734 (2) - I think this would look slightly better as a curved slider imo.

01:04:401 (2) - ^

Normal

00:08:400 (1,2) - You could curve these sliders for better visuals imo, like this:

It would be a good idea to make the curved sliders the same as 00:07:067 (3) - to keep slider consistency.

00:39:734 (3) - You could move this around a bit so it blankets the slider end of 00:38:734 (2) - since I think it might look a bit better.

01:12:067 (2,1) - This overlap looks ugly in my opinion, and the typical normal player might not even be able to read it. So I think you should change it.

Hard

00:20:400 (4) - Move this to x:307 y:235 for a perfect stack with the slider end of 00:19:567 (2) -

00:20:734 (5,2) - Not too fond of how these notes overlap in a bad way inside the editor. You should move some notes around so that 00:22:067 (2) - is stacked with the start of 00:22:067 (2) - and is still spaced properly.

00:48:234 (6) - What is up with hat silent hitsound ;w; Personally I find it very confusing, and I'm sure other players do too. Please add a hitsound.

00:59:234 (4,5) - You could make these two notes a blanket or something? Just curve 00:59:234 (4) - so that it wraps around 00:59:567 (5) -

615's Insane

00:09:066 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think it would flow a lot better if you ctrl+g this entire stream.

00:45:734 (1) - I'm not really a fan of this slider shape personally. Try this maybe:


Insane

00:05:900 (2) - You should move this so it's not touching the slider end of 00:05:067 (3) - since it looks quite bad.

00:39:734 (1,2) - Not a fan of this stack, try moving 00:40:067 (2) - to a place like x:430 y:183


Well, I tried. Good luck on rank!
-Teina-
HK
371 posts
Joined October 2013
-Teina-
說好的mod~

From in-game mod request.

  1. 00:08:234 - 加個音 節奏沒在這裡斷開吧
  2. 00:36:900 (3) - ctrl + g 太遠了 這樣會更好flow?
  3. 00:44:067 (3) - 試下刪除這個
  1. 00:07:567 (2) - 放在X:308 Y:56 好似FLOW會更好.
  2. 00:34:400 (5) - NC
  1. 沒什麼大問題
  1. 00:21:400 - 加個圈試試
  1. 00:19:734 (2) - 不要在easy難度做不同的距離. 可以放在x:276 y:312 . 或者將00:19:067 (1) - 放在x:412 y:340 和 00:19:734 (2) - 放在x:232 y:276
  2. 00:59:067 (2) - blanket it
moonlightleaf
CN
1,778 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf

Okoratu wrote:

Hi!

This one is from my modding Queue:

[Insane]
Because this one is very well made I'd just like to drop by some suggestions:
  1. 00:40:734 (3) - You might consider moving this one away from 00:40:067 (2) - for those reasons: - i think no problem for DS
    1. The jump from 00:39:400 (2) - to 00:39:734 (1) - is bigger than the jump from 00:40:067 (2,3) -
    2. The first jump ^ only needs half the time and thus it might cause the player to have to wait for some time
  2. 01:00:400 - For the part that starts here and ends 01:05:734 -, You might try the following --- noisy , so no fix
    1. Set the Volume to 80%
    2. Add a finish on every white tick
    3. See how it sounds
  3. 01:01:900 (3) - You might want to try to stack this one with the end of 01:01:067 (3) - properly because you're stacking alot in this map ---fix
  4. 01:10:484 - You might Switch to the drumset from here to 01:10:984 - and do the following: --- i don't know how to do , so no fix
    1. Set the volume to 60%
    2. 01:10:734 - add a clap
    3. 01:10:900 - add a finish
打包615

thanks for modding ^^/
Last edited by moonlightleaf , edited 1 times in total.
moonlightleaf
CN
1,778 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf
to Fluttershy03

all fix , except
[General]
The spinner in all difficulties but easy seems quite unnecessary, you should make it so that the spinner is at 01:21:734 (1) - in all diffs and map the parts that were previously part of the spinner with other notes. --i want to spinner to end , and the music fade in start here


[Hard]

00:20:734 (5,2) - Not too fond of how these notes overlap in a bad way inside the editor. You should move some notes around so that 00:22:067 (2) - is stacked with the start of 00:22:067 (2) - and is still spaced properly. --- haven't undersand , so no fix


to tellertheworld

all fix except

[Insane]

00:08:234 - 加個音 節奏沒在這裡斷開吧 ---不加

00:44:067 (3) - 試下刪除這個 --- 不删

[Normal]

00:21:400 - 加個圈試試 ---不加



thanks for modding ^^/
Koiyuki
CN
2,524 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki
will check mod soon
Koiyuki
CN
2,524 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki

-Neipezi wrote:

[Yuki's Easy]
00:24:400 (1) - add whistle tail √
01:19:067 (1) - placed in the center? add whistle tail not necessary imo, and the songs' volume is low so no whi ><

[Hijiri Byakuren] wrote:

[Yuki's Easy]
00:48:400 (2) - 节奏应该在这里 00:48:234 (2)
00:59:067 (2) - ……………………00:58:900 (2)
看来认为这样的人多，so fixed

yanlu wrote:

[Yuki's Easy]
00:00:401 (1) - nazi--:第5個點位置x304/140 第六個點x396/y228
00:24:400 (1) -
00:36:400 (2) - end in 00:36:900 - ? 改了下pattern
00:48:400 (2) - 取消來回 然後從00:48:567 - 開始 前面节奏改了
00:52:400 (1) - 我覺得這slider不要來回 然後拉個特殊形狀會比現在好:v 嗯，还是来回吧，来回拉个特殊形状好了><
00:59:067 (2) - 跟前面一樣的問題? ^
01:19:067 (1) - 放對稱??
>>呒啥問題ˊwˋ
( ´ ▽ ` )ﾉ nazi懒改了

ts8zs wrote:

[Yuki's Easy]
00:47:067 (1,2) - ._. .-.
00:57:734 (1,2) - ^ ^
01:19:067 (1) - M 可以理解成marry也可以理解成mtb，yeah
._.

Fluttershy03 wrote:

Yuki's Easy

00:05:734 (1) - This note seems a bit too close to the slider head of 00:05:734 (1) - and you can even see a tiny overlap you should move this further away imo fixed

00:11:067 (1,2) - Maybe you could make these two blanket eachother? Just a suggestion~ unnecessary

00:13:734 (1) - Would be better flow if you ctrl+g this then move it so the spacing is fine. easy is with no flow lol

00:15:067 (2) - If you did what I've posted before then ctrl+g this as well to retain the pattern you had before. ^

00:20:400 (3) - I can see you were trying to have this in the same spot as the slider end of 00:17:734 (2) - , but it's not spaced too correctly, and the triangle isn't looking too good either. I keep that

A large portion of the map plays well after that.

01:01:734 (2) - I think this would look slightly better as a curved slider imo. :P

01:04:401 (2) - ^ :P
Thanks for modding

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xVirtualNinjax
US
121 posts
Joined December 2013
xVirtualNinjax
[Easy]

00:00:401 (1) - I would probably make this slider symmetrical instead of the current shape, or at least make it horizontally flat rather than a horizontal tilt, to make the slider look more presentable and easy for a new player while still looking awesome and cool.

00:24:400 (1) - I would change the end of the slider since new players don't really know how to deal with end sliders like that, and they may just continue going in the curve resulting in an easy fail. I would move the end so it isn't overlapping with the other parts of the slider.

[Normal]

00:33:734 (3) - I would probably add a finish here to keep hitsound consistency and to build up to Kiai Time.

01:01:734 (3) - ^^, but more for consistency and just general build up to the ending

[Hard]

Just because it's a hard diff doesn't mean you should not follow DS at all. At least keep a somewhat consistent spacing excluding jumps and breaks. I can't really mod this too much atm due to inconsistent spacing.

[615's Insane]

00:06:067 (2,3,4,5,6) - I would make this star formation equally spaced to keep the formation beautiful and still a good challenge due to jumps rather than ugly, unequal spacing.

00:12:400 (1,2,3,4) - I would probably change this to a square formation to make the shape of the 4 circles something common and expected.

00:17:900 (2,3,4,5) - Evenly space the star formation for same reason as earlier.
YoshinoSakura
CN
340 posts
Joined January 2011
YoshinoSakura
麻麻二妹真能找mod

yanlu wrote:

[615's Insane]
00:18:400 (5) - 跟前面的一樣弄彎的? 弄湾了就不对称惹
00:25:234 (4) - ctrl+g 好
00:26:067 (2) - ctrl+g 就不顺惹
00:37:400 (4) - 結束在00:37:567 - 紅線就好
00:43:734 (2) - nc 破坏规律惹
01:16:400 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 233333 咦这里很难么
*kiai副歌的地方我很喜歡'w'* 谢谢baka璐璐

ts8zs wrote:

[615]
……难度……都od8了= =b
00:18:400 (5,6) - flow 没看懂orz
00:39:734 (1,2) - 稍微歪一下吧 好的
话说kiai那段奇葩的滑条为了凸显啥……你是想拉着玩么 抄的。。
01:08:734 (2,2,2,2) - 都去掉= = 这里有音才加的。。
01:15:734 (6) - ……Ctrl+G能好些 改了下
01:16:400 (1,2,3,4,5) - 01:17:067 (1,2,3,4,5) - ………………算了 :o 这里很难么

Okoratu wrote:

[615's Insane]

General:
Your Kiai Time should be consistent with the other Diffs in this mapset, so you should consult moonlightleaf about it in order to reach a consistent solution actually i think my kiai time is better /me runs

00:26:567 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - This one annoys me a bit because it overlaps: did you try to use something similar to this one (with not that much spacing) to this one there already 00:14:400 (1,2) - , if not i suggest you move this whole pattern up a bit
decided to keep this
I suggested the following for the Insane Diff aswell
01:00:400 - For the part that starts here and ends 01:05:734 -, You might try the following
Set the Volume to 80%
Add a finish on every white tick
See how it sounds GD has more freedom,especially hitsound.I needn't follow Insane's hitsound completely.

Fluttershy03 wrote:

615's Insane

00:09:066 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think it would flow a lot better if you ctrl+g this entire stream. it's okay imo

00:45:734 (1) - I'm not really a fan of this slider shape personally. Try this maybe: just a blanket

xVirtualNinjax wrote:

[615's Insane]

00:06:067 (2,3,4,5,6) - I would make this star formation equally spaced to keep the formation beautiful and still a good challenge due to jumps rather than ugly, unequal spacing. sorry i like unequal spacing jump :o

00:12:400 (1,2,3,4) - I would probably change this to a square formation to make the shape of the 4 circles something common and expected. at least it's in a good shape

00:17:900 (2,3,4,5) - Evenly space the star formation for same reason as earlier. then there will be no space for the slider
thx for your mod~

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moonlightleaf
CN
1,778 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf
to xVirtualNinjax

all fix

thanks for modding ^^/
moonlightleaf
CN
1,778 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf

- KaTZ - wrote:

[Insane]
00:54:567 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 排成直線吧 ---好的 仔细一看还真的歪了= = 因为改mod的时候缩小 为了方便看网页，没注意

新人mod完全看不出有什麼問題啊 :(
祝早日rank
[改了N次MP3了啊 还是原来的好 orz 求不说最后转盘部分]
Cloudchaser
CL
2,352 posts
Joined May 2012
Cloudchaser
M4M from your queue o/

General
  • Spinners are a bit inconsistent in all the diffs.
    You need to work more in the NCs in your diffs! (Insane and Normal)

Insane
  1. I suggest you make the combos a bit more higher x_x
  2. 00:19:733 (1) - remove NC
  3. 00:20:400 (8) - Add NC
  4. 00:21:067 (3) - Remove NC
  5. 00:22:900 (1) - Remove NC
  6. 00:33:067 (3,4,5) - I suggest you something like this
  7. 00:40:734 (3) - NC because of downbeat in 00:40:067 (2) -
  8. 00:41:567 (1) - NC
  9. 00:51:900 (1) - This NC is senseless, remove it.
  10. 00:54:234 (1) - Make a better blanket please with (5)
  11. 01:18:400 (5) - I hate being so nazi but can you make this more curved? just for make a better blanket.
  12. 01:19:817 (1) - ? I think this spinner is so forced here x_x

    Funny diff.


Hard
  1. 00:49:650 (2,3) - Stack this note, actually is confusing current spacing.
  2. 01:14:900 (4,5) - Make something like this


615's insane
  1. Remove the last kiai
  2. 00:50:234 (3) - Ugly ;w; it doesn't fit with your other sliders! Can you make another shape?
  3. 00:00:401 (1,2,3,4,5) - Add NCs as you did here: 01:08:400 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) -

Normal
  1. 00:08:400 (1) - Move the slider's tail a grid right
  2. 00:25:234 (2) - blanket
  3. 00:41:650 (1) - This spinner is too sudden, move it at least to the red line


Good luck!
PinkHeart
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PinkHeart
某人的request转移给我了 不过我不大会mod图 随便看着改吧

[Easy]

00:54:234 - 新人打图也是跟vocal吧 这里应该可以加东西

[Normal]

00:25:234 (2) - blanket明显歪了 往右偏一点
00:39:734 (3) - 这也不太好看 是不是干脆连带后面的note一起往右移再重新摆这个slider
00:39:734 (3) - normal好像不能接这么紧的spinner

[Hard]
好难
00:49:650 (2,3) - 这么大间距？

[Insane]

00:22:067 (2) - 这好卡手……
01:19:150 - 这里为啥空下了？
说实话我感觉卖萌歌应该多弄点好看的梗 现在这个嘛……

[615]
跳下这么大 真是可怕
00:13:067 (5,6,1) - 1后面挺好的 但是前面一直到56都是逆时针转圈 这接不上吧
00:23:067 (1,2,3,4,5) - 我觉得应该在这用五边形 而不是最后那个
00:45:734 (1) - 是想和4做blanket吗？歪了
01:14:567 (6,7,8,1) - 这么大跳
最后那段大连打感觉没前面那么好……叫做有失水准？（咦你有什么资格谈论别人的水准
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