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smallboat

Joined January 2010

smallboat 2014-04-05T17:18:26+00:00

嗨二妹，好多post，懷疑要sprank 直覺。 ~~干作了一周BAT美麗check就這樣塔馬的放兩周還等不到check真SAD~~

[General]

1.我之前拿的是舊檔案up過了後，現在tag還是不一致，試著再重新貼上一次GDer使一致。
2.Widescreen support 不一致，ins忘了勾。

[Yuki's Easy]

00:29:067 (2) - 這個人聲加whistle似乎有不錯的效果。
00:31:734 (2) - 我覺得應該能跟上面對應是加whistle，而不是finish。
00:47:067 (1) - 或許應該尾端要空一格白線比較好掌握下一個節奏，個人意見。
00:59:067 (2) - 感覺尾端忘了加whistle強調vocal
01:19:067 (1) - 為何不讓中間描點對準Y軸成一個對稱圖形? 然後左邊尖端高了點.

Nazi,後面那一根草歪了。

[Normal]

00:09:067 (2) - 前端+whistle可突出音樂
00:11:067 (1,2) - 兩個硬包不太好看
00:14:400 (2) - 同00:09:067
00:24:067 (3) - 故意沒疊好?
00:30:567 (2) - 覺得這也是重音能加finish突顯效果。
00:38:234 (2,4) - 不如都換成1/2跟人聲
00:47:734 (3) - 尾端去掉finish，沒重音，無理由加。
00:58:400 (3,4) - 1都有加whistle，這邊全加whistle強調人聲。
01:17:067 (2) - 前端whistle

後面也是一根草歪。

[Hard] 00:48:734 timing線可刪去

00:03:234 (2) - 加whistle與4對應
00:06:734 (6) - 前端whistle
00:11:900 (4) - 加whistle節奏聽的會舒服點。
00:23:067 (1) - 尾端沒重音為何finish，無理。
00:30:067 (1,2,3) - 1尾端，2和3加finish試試? 重音。
00:33:067 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 或許間距能再放小一點作anti-jump.
00:50:567 (5) - 為何不ctrl+g?
00:52:400 (1,2,3,4) - 沒互相對稱呢
00:59:234 (4) - Ctrl+G比較好點5。

後面也是一根草歪。

[615's Insane]

就只有615的轉盤結束跟大家不一樣。

00:10:984 (5) - (388|332)做個弧度?
00:13:067 (5) - Ctrl+g不就順flow了?
00:27:567 (3) - 重音怎不加finish?
00:28:400 (1) - (28|128)比較順暢flow。
00:30:234 (2) - 重音怎不加finish?
00:41:567 (1) - 可以加個finish或whistle強調人聲。
00:58:900 (1,2,3) - 這邊都唱出來的vocal所以我覺得可以加finish在這裡。
01:15:234 (2) - 不完全重疊嗎?
01:18:400 (5) - 或許開頭能加whistle。

[Teller's Insane]

有些重音加得很奇怪，聽得有些吵雜。

00:02:067 (8) - 紅線不需要加finish，這邊無重音，無理。連續3個finish有點noisy。
00:04:234 (6,8) - 藍線whistle聽的不是很舒服，remove it?
00:05:067 (9) - 少一個note跟vocal。
00:06:567 (3) - 不是重音，搬去finsh。(搬去這個會聽得比較流暢)
00:10:900 (7) - 這個1/4note間距有點小，放大到0.80x比較好讀。(個人意見，可能我喜歡作圖連打間距比較大一點。)
00:11:734 (2) - 加finish也是可以，不過建議還是remove。
00:12:400 (3) - 中間和尾端去掉finish，連續3個也是太吵雜。
00:15:734 (5) - 全去finish，頭尾whistle。
00:21:900 (2,3,4) - 23那麼遠，34又那麼近，不如放在(228|152)來平均間距，順便5包3。00:22:400 (5) 可以移到(152|68)試試。
00:26:817 (3,4,5,6) - 不好看的slider，而且又容易miss，還是用1/4比較適當。
00:37:900 (2,2,2,2) - finish的音效都把音樂蓋住了，建議可以remove藍線的finish。
00:43:234 (1,2) - 2個之間怎這麼近，明明之間還有一個白線的距離。
00:43:567 (2,3) - 這2跟3之間跟vocal的這段怎沒做? (會讓玩家沒辦法掌握何時click)
00:44:734 (1) - 尾端沒重音remove finish。
00:45:234 (2) - 沒疊好
00:59:234 (2) - 疊00:58:400 (2) 會很flow。
01:01:067 (6) - 紅線不需要finish。
01:02:400 (4) - ^
01:04:067 (6) - 疊01:02:400 (4) 。
01:08:567 (2,4,6,8) - 一樣remove藍線finish，不然很吵。
01:11:400 (2,4,6) - overmap，沒節奏在這裡。(參考615 ins diff 和二妹 diff )
01:16:400 (1,2,3,4) - 節奏是可以，但這個pattern似乎不太好看。

[Insane]

00:07:567 (4) - 為何不移到(252|220)左右位置成個圓形? 這樣看起來覺得好像放歪。
00:08:734 (5) - 尾端去掉whistle，與後面的whistle相對應這樣音效比較好聽。
00:11:400 (3) - 有點突出的感覺。
00:14:067 (5) - 尾端疊好?
00:18:067 (3,4) - 2個ctrl+g不就flow?
00:23:400 (4) - 我覺得ctrl+g比較順。
00:23:734 (5) - 如果上面那個用了這個疊 00:22:234 (2) 頭。
00:30:567 (4,5) - 尾端whistle感覺有點違和。
00:35:067 (1) - 尾端whistle去掉?
00:36:900 (6) - 再跳一點，移到(68|96)包3?
00:40:067 (2) - 覺得疊00:38:734 (1) 比較有感覺。
00:45:067 (1) - 再稍微調一下就變五角了
00:48:234 (1,2) - 也是覺得尾端whistle有點違和
00:50:234 (4) - 開頭忘了finish?
00:51:567 (4) - ^
00:58:900 (1,2) - 也是覺得尾端whistle有點違和
01:08:900 (1,1) - 加finish
01:09:900 (1) - ^
01:11:734 (2,2) - ^

後面草歪。

二妹Good Luck ~ !

草歪=綠線(草)歪了

Last edited by smallboat 2014-04-06T01:56:27+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

moonlightleaf

1,847 posts

Joined September 2011

Topic Starter

moonlightleaf 2014-04-06T01:00:05+00:00

to smallboat

都修惹我把提到的音效其他diff没的也加惹

草歪惹这个没看懂

感谢mod

太难rank惹我还是不收GD惹= =对Teller感到非常抱歉

615你的已经mod很多了啊再这么懒也不收你的GD惹

Teller's Insane dl here

-Teina-

371 posts

Joined October 2013

-Teina- 2014-04-06T05:33:41+00:00

moonlightleaf wrote:
to smallboat

都修惹我把提到的音效其他diff没的也加惹

草歪惹这个没看懂

感谢mod

太难rank惹我还是不收GD惹= =对Teller感到非常抱歉

615你的已经mod很多了啊再这么懒也不收你的GD惹

Teller's Insane dl here

好吧~
那你繼續努力吧

-Teina-

371 posts

Joined October 2013

-Teina- 2014-04-06T06:02:50+00:00

smallboat wrote:

嗨二妹，好多post，懷疑要sprank 直覺。 ~~干作了一周BAT美麗check就這樣塔馬的放兩周還等不到check真SAD~~

[General]

1.我之前拿的是舊檔案up過了後，現在tag還是不一致，試著再重新貼上一次GDer使一致。
2.Widescreen support 不一致，ins忘了勾。

[Yuki's Easy]

00:29:067 (2) - 這個人聲加whistle似乎有不錯的效果。
00:31:734 (2) - 我覺得應該能跟上面對應是加whistle，而不是finish。
00:47:067 (1) - 或許應該尾端要空一格白線比較好掌握下一個節奏，個人意見。
00:59:067 (2) - 感覺尾端忘了加whistle強調vocal
01:19:067 (1) - 為何不讓中間描點對準Y軸成一個對稱圖形? 然後左邊尖端高了點.

Nazi,後面那一根草歪了。

[Normal]

00:09:067 (2) - 前端+whistle可突出音樂
00:11:067 (1,2) - 兩個硬包不太好看
00:14:400 (2) - 同00:09:067
00:24:067 (3) - 故意沒疊好?
00:30:567 (2) - 覺得這也是重音能加finish突顯效果。
00:38:234 (2,4) - 不如都換成1/2跟人聲
00:47:734 (3) - 尾端去掉finish，沒重音，無理由加。
00:58:400 (3,4) - 1都有加whistle，這邊全加whistle強調人聲。
01:17:067 (2) - 前端whistle

後面也是一根草歪。

[Hard] 00:48:734 timing線可刪去

00:03:234 (2) - 加whistle與4對應
00:06:734 (6) - 前端whistle
00:11:900 (4) - 加whistle節奏聽的會舒服點。
00:23:067 (1) - 尾端沒重音為何finish，無理。
00:30:067 (1,2,3) - 1尾端，2和3加finish試試? 重音。
00:33:067 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 或許間距能再放小一點作anti-jump.
00:50:567 (5) - 為何不ctrl+g?
00:52:400 (1,2,3,4) - 沒互相對稱呢
00:59:234 (4) - Ctrl+G比較好點5。

後面也是一根草歪。

[615's Insane]

就只有615的轉盤結束跟大家不一樣。

00:10:984 (5) - (388|332)做個弧度?
00:13:067 (5) - Ctrl+g不就順flow了?
00:27:567 (3) - 重音怎不加finish?
00:28:400 (1) - (28|128)比較順暢flow。
00:30:234 (2) - 重音怎不加finish?
00:41:567 (1) - 可以加個finish或whistle強調人聲。
00:58:900 (1,2,3) - 這邊都唱出來的vocal所以我覺得可以加finish在這裡。
01:15:234 (2) - 不完全重疊嗎?
01:18:400 (5) - 或許開頭能加whistle。

[Teller's Insane]

有些重音加得很奇怪，聽得有些吵雜。

00:02:067 (8) - 紅線不需要加finish，這邊無重音，無理。連續3個finish有點noisy。

紅線一直沒FINISH喔
00:04:234 (6,8) - 藍線whistle聽的不是很舒服，remove it?

這個都一直沒whistle
00:05:067 (9) - 少一個note跟vocal。

00:05:067 - 加了圈
00:06:567 (3) - 不是重音，搬去finsh。(搬去這個會聽得比較流暢)

搬了去00:06:400 (2) -
00:10:900 (7) - 這個1/4note間距有點小，放大到0.80x比較好讀。(個人意見，可能我喜歡作圖連打間距比較大一點。)

fixed
00:11:734 (2) - 加finish也是可以，不過建議還是remove。

改小聲一點吧
00:12:400 (3) - 中間和尾端去掉finish，連續3個也是太吵雜。

一直都是中間和尾端去finish喔
00:15:734 (5) - 全去finish，頭尾whistle。

抱歉因為不會再改不把新的hitsound pattern加入了所以試不到這個效果
00:21:900 (2,3,4) - 23那麼遠，34又那麼近，不如放在(228|152)來平均間距，順便5包3。00:22:400 (5) 可以移到(152|68)試試。

00:22:400 (5,2) - 是blanket的 / 00:21:734 (1,2) - 和 00:22:067 (3,4) - 是平均的這個排版出現了多次了喔
00:26:817 (3,4,5,6) - 不好看的slider，而且又容易miss，還是用1/4比較適當。

fixed
00:37:900 (2,2,2,2) - finish的音效都把音樂蓋住了，建議可以remove藍線的finish。

藍線的finish 一直都是沒有喔
00:43:234 (1,2) - 2個之間怎這麼近，明明之間還有一個白線的距離。

fixed
00:43:567 (2,3) - 這2跟3之間跟vocal的這段怎沒做? (會讓玩家沒辦法掌握何時click)

個人節奏覺得這樣比較好抱歉不能給你原因T_T
00:44:734 (1) - 尾端沒重音remove finish。

尾端一直沒finish喔
00:45:234 (2) - 沒疊好

疊好的話 stack leniency會發揮作用令00:46:151 (2) - 會移位
00:59:234 (2) - 疊00:58:400 (2) 會很flow。

thank~ fixed
01:01:067 (6) - 紅線不需要finish。

一直都是沒finish呀尾端
01:02:400 (4) - ^:arrow: 一直都是沒finish呀尾端
01:04:067 (6) - 疊01:02:400 (4) 。

節奏沒變突然做個jump會很奇怪
01:08:567 (2,4,6,8) - 一樣remove藍線finish，不然很吵。:arrow: 一直都是沒finish的說 slider的尾端
01:11:400 (2,4,6) - overmap，沒節奏在這裡。(參考615 ins diff 和二妹 diff )

fixed
01:16:400 (1,2,3,4) - 節奏是可以，但這個pattern似乎不太好看。

fixed

感覺大大耐心幫我mod
這是最後的修改吧....

音效方面你可能需要redwonload喔~

祝小moon你rank圖成功~

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osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 43184
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 1
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Title:MERRY MERRY MERRY MENU... Ne!
TitleUnicode:MERRY MERRY MERRY MENU...ね!
Artist:Tamura Yukari
ArtistUnicode:田村ゆかり
Creator:moonlightleaf
Version:Teller's Insane
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409,310,69567,2,4,L|364:296,1,47.5
184,284,69900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
58,327,70067,2,4,L|104:340,1,47.5
172,356,70234,5,0,0:0:0:0:
172,356,70317,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,356,70400,1,2,0:0:0:0:
236,224,70567,1,2,0:0:0:0:
236,224,70650,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,224,70734,1,2,0:0:0:0:
328,124,70900,2,0,L|432:140,1,95
492,208,71234,5,4,0:0:0:0:
236,224,71567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,280,71734,1,4,0:0:0:0:
328,124,72067,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,8,72234,1,4,0:0:0:0:
144,280,72567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,170,72734,6,0,B|88:144|64:144|64:144|68:84,1,95
140,96,72984,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,96,73067,2,0,L|139:156,1,47.5
288,300,73400,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,300,73734,5,2,0:0:0:0:
380,264,73900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,208,74067,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,248,74234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,128,74400,5,2,0:0:0:0:
312,80,74567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,264,74734,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,312,74900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,248,75067,22,2,P|100:284|80:324,2,95,4|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,228,75567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,264,75734,2,2,P|428:228|448:188,2,95,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,292,76400,5,6,0:0:0:0:
152,292,76484,1,2,0:0:0:0:
148,292,76567,2,0,L|80:292,1,47.5
96,292,76734,2,0,P|72:252|52:188,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,48,77067,5,2,0:0:0:0:
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188,136,78400,2,2,P|168:88|124:60,2,95
256,192,78817,12,0,81734,0:0:0:0:

[Insane]

00:07:567 (4) - 為何不移到(252|220)左右位置成個圓形? 這樣看起來覺得好像放歪。
00:08:734 (5) - 尾端去掉whistle，與後面的whistle相對應這樣音效比較好聽。
00:11:400 (3) - 有點突出的感覺。
00:14:067 (5) - 尾端疊好?
00:18:067 (3,4) - 2個ctrl+g不就flow?
00:23:400 (4) - 我覺得ctrl+g比較順。
00:23:734 (5) - 如果上面那個用了這個疊 00:22:234 (2) 頭。
00:30:567 (4,5) - 尾端whistle感覺有點違和。
00:35:067 (1) - 尾端whistle去掉?
00:36:900 (6) - 再跳一點，移到(68|96)包3?
00:40:067 (2) - 覺得疊00:38:734 (1) 比較有感覺。
00:45:067 (1) - 再稍微調一下就變五角了
00:48:234 (1,2) - 也是覺得尾端whistle有點違和
00:50:234 (4) - 開頭忘了finish?
00:51:567 (4) - ^
00:58:900 (1,2) - 也是覺得尾端whistle有點違和
01:08:900 (1,1) - 加finish
01:09:900 (1) - ^
01:11:734 (2,2) - ^

後面草歪。

二妹Good Luck ~ !

草歪=綠線(草)歪了

Last edited by -Teina- 2014-04-09T08:53:08+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

-Neipezi

-Neipezi 2014-04-06T06:38:44+00:00

hihi:3/

[General]
- Audio lead-in conflicts with 615's Insane diff.
- Tags "tellertheworld" remove
- Color Settings

[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,66,160
Combo2 : 255,128,192
Combo3 : 255,128,255
Combo4 : 255,77,255

[Yuki's Easy]
00:24:400 (1) - add whistle tail
01:19:067 (1) - placed in the center? add whistle tail

[Normal]
00:24:400 (1) - add whistle tail
00:25:234 (2) - whistle add
00:27:067 (1) - add whistle tail
00:27:900 (2) - whistle add
00:28:234 (3) - whistle add on the head
00:39:734 (5) - 1/1 slide short change? so, here's the vocals and fit it, then 00:40:400 (1) to move. and 00:41:234 (1) - NC remove

00:58:400 (3) - add whistle tail
00:59:234 (4) - whistle add

[Hard]
00:05:067 (7) - whistle add?
00:10:734 (4) - why soft:C2 did you use? i'm soft:C1 is recommended that you use.
00:48:067 (5) - then go to 00:48:234 - , 00:48:067 - to circle add. this vocal beat
01:08:067 - 01:08:234 - circle add? vocal
01:18:734 (4) - clap add on the head

[Insane]
00:05:400 - same as Hard
00:28:900 - here is circle add
00:52:400 (1) - finish add
00:52:734 (3,3) - clap add?

[615's Insane]
00:09:734 (1,2) - change location?

00:10:984 (5) - x384 y328 move
01:16:400 (1,2,3,4,5) - pattern is difficult to play x.x
01:17:067 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:19:067 (1) - 01:21:734 - spinner end?

good lucky'w'/

moonlightleaf

1,847 posts

Joined September 2011

Topic Starter

moonlightleaf 2014-04-06T07:29:26+00:00

to -Neipezi

color maybe no so fit , o.o 2pink ? so not change

all fix

thanks for modding ^^/

to yuki&615 好像loadin 得在txt里面改还得复制别的难度的，直接改好像还是不行我试过的难道我bug了,你们看着改额

P A N

2,166 posts

Joined December 2011

P A N 2014-04-06T08:53:25+00:00

from my queue :3

[General]

I agree with 615, I think spinner end on 01:21:067 sounds better. but honestly I want you to map all of it even on the fade-out. you can map it while decrease the volume by up to the song's sound.

because I think the spinner is a bit not fit with song well too. maybe consult with BAT about this.
btw what is this http://puu.sh/7XX4y.jpg it's look like... nah nevermind.

[Insane]

00:12:400 (3) - change to 1/2 slider and add note on 00:12:734 are more fit with the song imo.
00:16:400 (1,2,3,4,5) - star is not symmetry imo.
00:16:400 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - I fix this pattern to be symmetry and clean for you, pleaseeeee try it before reject, i'm try hard here.

128,224,16400,5,4,0:0:0:0:
192,84,16567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,80,16734,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,184,16900,1,8,0:0:0:0:
56,164,17067,2,0,P|32:208|40:260,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,244,17400,2,0,P|292:200|284:148,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,84,17734,5,2,0:0:0:0:
360,152,17900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,184,18067,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,52,18234,1,2,0:0:0:0:
352,224,18400,2,0,P|368:272|352:320,2,95,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,84,18900,21,0,0:0:0:0:
96,212,19067,1,2,0:0:0:0:
257,220,19234,2,0,L|352:224,2,95,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

00:21:234 (2,3,4) - try to make their spacing balance? like about 2.07x or 2.1x
00:30:900 (5) - you can make it more flow to change it like this http://puu.sh/7XVeH.jpg
00:35:567 - hmm add note here would be fit too but if you want to follow just a vocal it's ok.
00:45:234 (2,4) - move to 36|96 , 28|196 for better star.
00:55:734 (1,3,4) - move to 52|36 , 152|52 , 8|124 for better star.
01:06:734 (4,5) - try to to balance spacing. it would be great.

[615]

00:16:400 (1,2,4) - move to 452|344 , 484|256 , 405|200 for better star.
01:02:400 (3,4) - I think 1/2 is more fit on this part. please reconsider.
01:11:067 (1) - should be 160|340.
01:15:400 (4) - something funny here.

[Hard]

00:05:734 (1,2,3,4,5) - try this? better star imo http://puu.sh/7XXdy.jpg

256,160,5734,5,4,0:0:0:0:
316,268,5900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,216,6067,1,2,0:0:0:0:
328,192,6234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,284,6400,2,0,P|200:292|176:324,1,70

00:07:067 (7,8,9,10,11) - try this rhythm instead, it's really fit with the song. http://puu.sh/7XXhm.jpg
00:37:734 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - make a pattern here? example: http://puu.sh/7XXn5.jpg
00:47:567 (2,5) - move 67|131 , 152|96 for better star.

[Normal]

00:58:400 (3) - move center to 299|246 for better blanket.
looks fine for me :3

[Yuki]

00:44:400 (1) - what about just note here and add 1/2 slider or note on 00:44:734, I think yeah sound need to be click.
00:55:067 (1,2) - ^
nice easy diff :3

that's all GL

moonlightleaf

1,847 posts

Joined September 2011

Topic Starter

moonlightleaf 2014-04-06T10:07:22+00:00

to P A N

I agree with 615, I think spinner end on 01:21:067 sounds better. but honestly I want you to map all of it even on the fade-out. you can map it while decrease the volume by up to the song's sound.

because I think the spinner is a bit not fit with song well too. maybe consult with BAT about this.---OK end at 01:21:067 , map all i think can be not , just in my opinion, maybe consult with BAT

btw what is this http://puu.sh/7XX4y.jpg it's look like... nah nevermind.---in fact , i don't know what it is ’= =‘ sorry

[Insane]

all fix then

00:16:400 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - your code is very nice~

[hard]

all fix then

00:05:734 (1,2,3,4,5) - nice code

00:37:734 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - make a pattern here? example: http://puu.sh/7XXn5.jpg --very beautiful

[Normal]

all fix

thanks for modding ^^/

PS: insane 的变速滑条没法换颜色了（准确的说我点NC小箭头完全没用，摁Q倒是能换色，但是全是按着颜色顺序的，bug了? 但是别人能弄我却不可以，真美丽！等能弄了我再补上

Koiyuki

2,525 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2014-04-06T10:44:27+00:00

currently no change, thanks for modding :3

[Hijiri Byakuren]

154 posts

Joined April 2010

[Hijiri Byakuren] 2014-04-06T11:50:07+00:00

[Yuki's Easy]
00:48:400 (2) - 节奏应该在这里 00:48:234 (2)
00:59:067 (2) - ……………………00:58:900 (2)

[Normal]
建议1.0 DS 太紧了.怎么做flow?

00:47:734 (3,4) - 是什么节奏？不如模仿这段00:58:400 (3,4) - 的节奏呢

感觉就是太紧看着很不舒服
我看你很多长滑条都是勉强拉出来的
没什么美感

[Hard]
建议多用clap
你自己摆的节奏用whistle太轻。不好找节奏
00:07:067 (1,2) - 建议折返条
或者这个00:07:567 (3) - 删了
不过还是建议00:07:067 (1,2,3,4,5) 和 00:08:400 (1,2) - 交换一下节奏后面的到前面前面的到后面

00:12:400 (1,2,3,4) - 柑橘节奏不对怪怪的
改 or
00:12:900 (2) - 00:13:400 (4) -00:14:067 (2,4) - clap
00:16:067 (4) - finish
00:15:734 (3) - whistle

我觉得在歌手唱之前遵循00:05:734 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - 的节奏就是 X X X X XX XX XXX XXX . XXX X XXX X X-X-X X
你自己摆的节奏实在是有点奇怪

00:17:234 (4) - 删
00:17:400 (5) - to 00:17:567
or
00:17:567 00:18:900 加note
or
00:17:400 (5) - 00:18:734 (5) - 不摆节奏
00:17:567 00:18:900 加note

00:22:900 (5) - 我发现你滑条前面的那根红线都不加节奏的那里明明有个お

00:41:067 (5) - 删

00:42:567 (5) - 这种地方就应该强调啊用finish啊用什么whistle啊

00:48:067 (5,6) - CTRL G 这里你不觉得节奏怪吗？

00:58:734 (3) - 删
00:58:400 (2) - 单折返
00:58:900 (3) - NOTE

01:00:067 (1) - 这里应该slider啊

我觉得你HARD下节奏得花功夫。。各种不顺

[Insane]
00:00:401 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 我建议你这里关掉DS 既然你12 12 都表示出来了中间干嘛不拉开？

00:05:067 (3) - 其实我觉得这个音完全不需要在前面那根红线结束就行了

00:10:400 (5) - finish啊

00:12:400 (3) - 建议折返删4

00:36:400 (4) - NC

00:53:734 (5) - 建议去折返加NOTE

00:54:234 (1,2,3) - 1,2弄成滑条 3开始连打
00:55:067 (8) - 这应该是slider

01:08:400 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 2 2 2 2 关掉DS 要做出那种断的感觉别是这样的啊

00:58:900 (1,2,3) - 这仨你不觉得关掉DS更有感觉吗？比如这样

总感觉没什么感觉啊。。。
感觉应该是关DS的你都开着

[615's Insane]
00:10:817 加NOTE
or
00:10:900 (4) - NC
00:11:067 (1) - 去掉NC

00:13:400 (6) - 不觉得 CTRL G 打起来更顺吗？

00:21:067 (3,4,5,6,1) - 不好看
00:22:067 (3) - 而且这个也被挡住了

01:16:400 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 最后还摆这连打是要给一分的节奏吗？

moonlightleaf

1,847 posts

Joined September 2011

Topic Starter

moonlightleaf 2014-04-06T12:41:08+00:00

to Hijiri Byakuren

[Hard]

我觉得在歌手唱之前遵循00:05:734 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - 的节奏就是 X X X X XX XX XXX XXX . XXX X XXX X X-X-X X
你自己摆的节奏实在是有点奇怪 ---没改

[Insane]

00:05:067 (3) - 其实我觉得这个音完全不需要在前面那根红线结束就行了 ---没改

00:54:234 (1,2,3) - 1,2弄成滑条 3开始连打好

00:55:067 (8) - 这应该是slider ---之前就是滑条被人说改单点真是还是滑条好

others fix

感谢mod ^^/

YoshinoSakura

340 posts

Joined January 2011

YoshinoSakura 2014-04-06T16:28:28+00:00

P A N wrote:
[615]

00:16:400 (1,2,4) - move to 452|344 , 484|256 , 405|200 for better star. fixed
01:02:400 (3,4) - I think 1/2 is more fit on this part. please reconsider.1/2 is definitely better but i want some fast beats here
01:11:067 (1) - should be 160|340. ok
01:15:400 (4) - something funny here. haha fixed

-Neipezi wrote:
[615's Insane]
00:09:734 (1,2) - change location? nice idea
00:10:984 (5) - x384 y328 move ok
01:16:400 (1,2,3,4,5) - pattern is difficult to play x.x
01:17:067 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ just a stream x.x
01:19:067 (1) - 01:21:734 - spinner end? nope

[Hijiri Byakuren] wrote:
[615's Insane]
00:10:817 加NOTE
or
00:10:900 (4) - NC
00:11:067 (1) - 去掉NC 这里没啥问题啊

00:13:400 (6) - 不觉得 CTRL G 打起来更顺吗？有道理

00:21:067 (3,4,5,6,1) - 不好看啊啊啊这里改了n次惹
00:22:067 (3) - 而且这个也被挡住了有道理

01:16:400 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 最后还摆这连打是要给一分的节奏吗？正因为有这个给一分的player都给不出来

谢mod

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: MARRY ME.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 43184
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
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[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
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TitleUnicode:MERRY MERRY MERRY MENU...ね!
Artist:Tamura Yukari
ArtistUnicode:田村ゆかり
Creator:moonlightleaf
Version:615's Insane
Source:
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BeatmapID:395511
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[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
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//Background Colour Transformations
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108,100,74900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,352,75067,5,0,0:0:0:0:
412,192,75234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,192,75317,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,192,75400,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,256,75567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,92,75734,2,0,P|368:100|328:140,2,90,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,196,76400,5,0,0:0:0:0:
56,244,76484,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,280,76567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
68,328,76650,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,352,76734,2,0,P|156:328|172:280,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,352,77067,5,0,0:0:0:0:
388,304,77150,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,304,77233,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,256,77317,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,256,77400,2,0,B|270:235|258:215|258:215|242:195|258:171,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,256,77734,5,0,0:0:0:0:
66,153,77900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
283,122,78067,1,8,0:0:0:0:
125,274,78234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,79067,12,0,81067,0:0:0:0:

yanlu

539 posts

Joined November 2010

yanlu 2014-04-06T18:38:06+00:00

Hi.
mod from your pm.

(我是接續幾天mod的有些你可能已經改掉了:o

[Insane]
00:07:067 (3) - 換個方向比較順... http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1486415
00:08:734 (5,1) - 位置相對有點近...比較縮的感覺..感覺1應該放更下面一點
00:10:400 (5) - 弧度在大一點 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1486428
00:13:734 (1,2,3,4,5) - 1-4跟5的夾角讓我覺得很卡..
00:16:734 (3,4) - 對調位置
00:25:067 (4) - 為什麼這個是角角的其他是圓弧的呢
00:28:900 - add a note 在5的原地
00:32:900 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1486441
00:35:734 (2,3) - 拉開一點間距
00:54:734 (4,5,6,7,8) - 這個弧=-=好醜
01:08:234 (2) - 這個note我會建議你不要stack 因為跟後面幾個是不同的
>>有些地方不夠細緻...既然想直就要夠直想做圓弧就要夠圓弧歪斜什麼的...>~<;

[Hard]
00:40:900 (4) - 改成slider?
00:44:067 (4,5) - ^
00:46:400 (2,3,4,5,6) - 這裡頗難過的...
>>這個難度的排列感覺有些隨便...233

[615's Insane]
00:18:400 (5) - 跟前面的一樣弄彎的?
00:25:234 (4) - ctrl+g
00:26:067 (2) - ctrl+g
00:37:400 (4) - 結束在00:37:567 - 紅線就好
00:43:734 (2) - nc
01:16:400 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 233333
*kiai副歌的地方我很喜歡'w'*

[Normal]
00:11:734 (2) - x104/y296
00:25:734 - ~00:26:567 - 太空啦加點甚麼吧
00:37:734 (1,2) - 怪怪的節奏(x)
01:06:234 (2) - 改成從01:06:067 - 開始的slider
01:06:567 - add note
01:15:067 (3) - 為什麼要來回完全跟音樂不搭.-.
01:17:734 (3) - ^

[Yuki's Easy]
00:00:401 (1) - nazi--:第5個點位置x304/140 第六個點x396/y228
00:24:400 (1) -
00:36:400 (2) - end in 00:36:900 - ?
00:48:400 (2) - 取消來回然後從00:48:567 - 開始
00:52:400 (1) - 我覺得這slider不要來回然後拉個特殊形狀會比現在好:v
00:59:067 (2) - 跟前面一樣的問題?
01:19:067 (1) - 放對稱??
>>呒啥問題ˊwˋ
-----------------------
>>最想讓我吐槽的就是妳的combo color..!Orz
拜託既然不想讓紅色重複出現就整個改掉吧//弄跟BG相似的顏色不是更好嗎啊(喂

不多說..以上純屬個人意見僅供參考233

moonlightleaf

1,847 posts

Joined September 2011

Topic Starter

moonlightleaf 2014-04-07T01:19:25+00:00

to yanlu妹妹

[Hard]

>>這個難度的排列感覺有些隨便...233 ---233 满世界坑就我掉惹进去爬不出来还越挖越深ww

[Normal]

00:37:734 (1,2) - 怪怪的節奏(x) ---滑条点+惹1 然后没改

其他的都改惹

感谢mod ^^/

- KaTZ -

- KaTZ - 2014-04-07T11:44:59+00:00

[Insane]
00:54:567 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 排成直線吧

新人mod完全看不出有什麼問題啊

祝早日rank

ts8zs

2,100 posts

Joined May 2011

ts8zs 2014-04-08T06:56:39+00:00

~~这个Insane槽点略多导致我想直接做个Insane……但是好懒滚来滚去……~(～o￣▽￣)～o 。。。滚来滚去……o～(＿△＿o～) ~。。。~~整个mapset都是槽点._.
[iNSANE]
00:01:900 (3) - DEL A REVERSE
……大写锁定了= =b
00:10:400 (5) - 提前1/4结束加个note
00:21:734 (1,2) - 节奏互换
00:41:067 (4,5) - ^
00:47:734 (2,3) - 换一下flow能（稍微）好一点
00:53:734 (5) - reverse
01:18:400 (5) - blanket & flow
总之就是flow问题很大，然后滑条头注意在重音上就好._.
[615]
……难度……都od8了= =b
00:18:400 (5,6) - flow
00:39:734 (1,2) - 稍微歪一下吧
话说kiai那段奇葩的滑条为了凸显啥……你是想拉着玩么
01:08:734 (2,2,2,2) - 都去掉= =
01:15:734 (6) - ……Ctrl+G能好些
01:16:400 (1,2,3,4,5) - 01:17:067 (1,2,3,4,5) - ………………算了
[Hard]
00:12:900 (2) - 同insane 滑条头最好在重音上._.
00:43:234 (1) - ……有点难受
00:44:400 (1) - 意义何在
00:49:650 - 少点啥
[Normal]
00:24:067 (3) - 去掉吧
00:26:734 (5) - ^
00:47:734 (3) - 移开啦
[Yuki's Easy]
00:47:067 (1,2) - ._.
00:57:734 (1,2) - ^
01:19:067 (1) - M
._.

moonlightleaf

1,847 posts

Joined September 2011

Topic Starter

moonlightleaf 2014-04-08T12:34:55+00:00

to ts8zs

all fix except:

[Insane]

00:10:400 (5) - 提前1/4结束加个note ---不改

感谢mod ^^/

Okoratu

Global Moderator

4,720 posts

Joined May 2012

Okoratu 2014-04-08T15:25:08+00:00

Hi!

This one is from my modding Queue:

[Insane]
Because this one is very well made I'd just like to drop by some suggestions:

00:40:734 (3) - You might consider moving this one away from 00:40:067 (2) - for those reasons:
1. The jump from 00:39:400 (2) - to 00:39:734 (1) - is bigger than the jump from 00:40:067 (2,3) -
2. The first jump ^ only needs half the time and thus it might cause the player to have to wait for some time
01:00:400 - For the part that starts here and ends 01:05:734 -, You might try the following
1. Set the Volume to 80%
2. Add a finish on every white tick
3. See how it sounds
01:01:900 (3) - You might want to try to stack this one with the end of 01:01:067 (3) - properly because you're stacking alot in this map
01:10:484 - You might Switch to the drumset from here to 01:10:984 - and do the following:
1. Set the volume to 60%
2. 01:10:734 - add a clap
3. 01:10:900 - add a finish

[615's Insane]

General:
Your Kiai Time should be consistent with the other Diffs in this mapset, so you should consult moonlightleaf about it in order to reach a consistent solution

00:26:567 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - This one annoys me a bit because it overlaps: did you try to use something similar to this one (with not that much spacing) to this one there already 00:14:400 (1,2) - , if not i suggest you move this whole pattern up a bit
I suggested the following for the Insane Diff aswell
01:00:400 - For the part that starts here and ends 01:05:734 -, You might try the following
1. Set the Volume to 80%
2. Add a finish on every white tick
3. See how it sounds

I hope this was in some way helpful...
GL,
~Oko

-Faded-

752 posts

Joined December 2012

-Faded- 2014-04-08T17:11:52+00:00

Hey there~

General

You should add some tags to your set that aren't guest mappers.

The spinner in all difficulties but easy seems quite unnecessary, you should make it so that the spinner is at 01:21:734 (1) - in all diffs and map the parts that were previously part of the spinner with other notes.

Yuki's Easy

00:05:734 (1) - This note seems a bit too close to the slider head of 00:05:734 (1) - and you can even see a tiny overlap you should move this further away imo

00:11:067 (1,2) - Maybe you could make these two blanket eachother? Just a suggestion~

00:13:734 (1) - Would be better flow if you ctrl+g this then move it so the spacing is fine.

00:15:067 (2) - If you did what I've posted before then ctrl+g this as well to retain the pattern you had before.

00:20:400 (3) - I can see you were trying to have this in the same spot as the slider end of 00:17:734 (2) - , but it's not spaced too correctly, and the triangle isn't looking too good either.

A large portion of the map plays well after that.

01:01:734 (2) - I think this would look slightly better as a curved slider imo.

01:04:401 (2) - ^

Normal

00:08:400 (1,2) - You could curve these sliders for better visuals imo, like this:

It would be a good idea to make the curved sliders the same as 00:07:067 (3) - to keep slider consistency.

00:39:734 (3) - You could move this around a bit so it blankets the slider end of 00:38:734 (2) - since I think it might look a bit better.

01:12:067 (2,1) - This overlap looks ugly in my opinion, and the typical normal player might not even be able to read it. So I think you should change it.

Hard

00:20:400 (4) - Move this to x:307 y:235 for a perfect stack with the slider end of 00:19:567 (2) -

00:20:734 (5,2) - Not too fond of how these notes overlap in a bad way inside the editor. You should move some notes around so that 00:22:067 (2) - is stacked with the start of 00:22:067 (2) - and is still spaced properly.

00:48:234 (6) - What is up with hat silent hitsound ;w; Personally I find it very confusing, and I'm sure other players do too. Please add a hitsound.

00:59:234 (4,5) - You could make these two notes a blanket or something? Just curve 00:59:234 (4) - so that it wraps around 00:59:567 (5) -

615's Insane

00:09:066 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think it would flow a lot better if you ctrl+g this entire stream.

00:45:734 (1) - I'm not really a fan of this slider shape personally. Try this maybe:

Insane

00:05:900 (2) - You should move this so it's not touching the slider end of 00:05:067 (3) - since it looks quite bad.

00:39:734 (1,2) - Not a fan of this stack, try moving 00:40:067 (2) - to a place like x:430 y:183

Well, I tried. Good luck on rank!

-Teina-

371 posts

Joined October 2013

-Teina- 2014-04-09T09:34:54+00:00

說好的mod~

From in-game mod request.

00:08:234 - 加個音節奏沒在這裡斷開吧
00:36:900 (3) - ctrl + g 太遠了這樣會更好flow?
00:44:067 (3) - 試下刪除這個

00:07:567 (2) - 放在X:308 Y:56 好似FLOW會更好.
00:34:400 (5) - NC

沒什麼大問題

00:21:400 - 加個圈試試

00:19:734 (2) - 不要在easy難度做不同的距離. 可以放在x:276 y:312 . 或者將00:19:067 (1) - 放在x:412 y:340 和 00:19:734 (2) - 放在x:232 y:276
00:59:067 (2) - blanket it

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