By AL2e10's Mod queue !!

[MX]
01:02:017 (2,3) A bit far
01:02:735 (2,3) A bit close
01:13:507 (2,3) A bit close
01:14:384 (3,4) A bit close
Ohh...There are many Whistle !!
Too noise !!

[Bmin Style]
00:54:039 (1-4) What is this ??

[Hard]
Fine !!

[Normal]
Many Whistle also !!

[Easy]
Fine !!

As your request.

[Normal]
00:11:075 (3) - Add clap.

I don't see anymore mistake. Star.

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al2e10 wrote:

Ohh...There are many Whistle !!
Too noise !!

i think whistles are fine.
i'll fix it another point it.

Hayonghaseyo!

[Easy]
00:16:379 (1) - Allign with 3
00:39:039 (2) - Allign with 1
01:00:262 (5) - Hold shift button and move around. If you spot some line in vertical in upper left, release it
01:02:017 (1,2,3) - Follow the pattern just like this

01:04:730 (2) - Just like this

01:07:443 (2,3) - Just like this


[Normal]
00:13:029 (5) - Allign with 4
00:18:136 (3) - Allign with 2

[Hard]
00:57:709 (2) - Ugly slider, changes slider

[Bmin Style]
00:22:283 (7) - Allign with 6
00:23:081 (11) - Allign with 11

Hmmmmmm. Not bad, star

EDIT : Sorry, I forgot to star

The no-vid link is broken... o_o Full Submit plz

Offset: 10629

Argh, you have some colour issue over there, Leorda
Fixed anyway

Download: Bermei. Inazawa & Urbatronic Chopstic - Melody (MoonFragrance) [Bmin Style].osu

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hmm. yea the no-video link isn't working

bmin
00:32:097 (3) - whistle sounds kinda weird
00:41:027 (1) - finish at beginning?
00:43:098 (1) - lower volume a little

hard
00:14:077 (x) - add note and clap?
00:14:094 (3) - no clap
00:15:041 (x) - note and clap
00:15:058 (6) - no clap
01:28:034 (6) - clap at end
00:14:061 (1) -maybe make a slider 1/2 note long and repeat it?
00:15:026 (3) - ^ [delete 2 and 4]

Yes wrote:

hmm. yea the no-video link isn't working
- yeah, i don't know reason why

hard
00:14:077 (x) - add note and clap?
00:14:094 (3) - no clap
00:15:041 (x) - note and clap
00:15:058 (6) - no clap
01:28:034 (6) - clap at end
00:14:061 (1) -maybe make a slider 1/2 note long and repeat it?
00:15:026 (3) - ^ [delete 2 and 4]
- fixed

thank you >w<~

Mod's Info:
Mine are all suggestions. You're free to follow or not this mod :3
I'll just mod the beats in your map, in all its forms, will not tell you to add or remove the beat <3
Remember to fix spacing after all modfiy :3

[General]
ok <3

[Easy]
01:29:299 (1) 2/4 before.

[Normal]
01:29:299 (1) 2/4 before.

[Hard]
01:04:246 (1) 4/4 before and extend by 4/4.

[Bmin Style]
Seems fine ^^

[MX]
Fine too ^^

And that's all for your map! hope you will ask me again for other maps-modding! Starred <3

tmokb93 wrote:

[color=#BF0000]
[Easy]
01:29:299 (1) 2/4 before.
[Normal]
01:29:299 (1) 2/4 before.

- it's for lyrics <_<

[Hard]
01:04:246 (1) 4/4 before and extend by 4/4.

- it isn't fit. it's on brass sounds.

sorry, no kudosu ;_;

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|Blue = Suggestion | Red = Change plz | Green = Design |

-Easy-
00:34:565 - Start spinner here and end at 00:35:841
01:36:000 (1) - 1 Grid left

-Normal-
00:55:015 (6) - Replace with a spinner or a non repeating slider

-Hard-
Nice :3

-Bmin-
Awesome

-MX-
00:22:012 (1) - Remove and add note at 00:22:437

-Overall-
Nice map :3
Have a Star~

Shulin wrote:

General:

~ Set BG color to black.
- why? @_@

Easy:

00:19:041 (1) - Finish end of slider?
- too loud <_<

MX:

01:37:027 (x) - Add a note?
- umm..... it isn't fit IMO

KillerRind wrote:

|
-Easy-
00:34:565 - Start spinner here and end at 00:35:841
- the spinner is on drum sounds <_<

-Normal-
00:55:015 (6) - Replace with a spinner or a non repeating slider
- i think that part is fine

-MX-
00:22:012 (1) - Remove and add note at 00:22:437
- that's fine too

others all fixed. thank you for modding :3

Overall
Delete .osb file and full submit

Easy
00:37:756 (1) - Confusing; You switched from placing notes on lyrics to beats. If I were a new player; I'd be tempted to hit the slider at 00:37:437 (But after that I'd be able to get the rest)

Hard
Just too many spinners.

MX
01:25:788 (1) - IMO, bad place for a spinner.

That's all. I ommited the diffs I saw no problems

NoHItter wrote:

Overall
Delete .osb file and full submit
- fixed :3

Easy
00:37:756 (1) - Confusing; You switched from placing notes on lyrics to beats. If I were a new player; I'd be tempted to hit the slider at 00:37:437 (But after that I'd be able to get the rest)
- they are on melody, so i'd not like to change them D:

Hard
Just too many spinners.
- i emphasize spinners on this diff, so i'd not like to change it too

MX
01:25:788 (1) - IMO, bad place for a spinner.
- fixed to slider

thank you for modding

[General]

1. What is "blank.png" used for?

[Normal]

01:21:095 (2) - Doesn't sounds good at all, try extending it to the next red tick.

[Hard]

1. Resnap all notes.
2. Why the low stack leniency? I don't like it much.

[Bmin Style]

1. Why the low stack leniency? I don't like it much.

00:36:480 - What? I'm pretty sure you forgot to set the Inhereted section 0.5x here.

[MX]

1. Why the low stack leniency? I don't like it much.

~ ~ ~

Aside from some small things, this is pretty safe to rank.

Gens wrote:

[General]

1. What is "blank.png" used for?

- to show all of the video

fixed :3 thank you for modding XD~

Just got my chance to upload my diff phew
Thanks for the mods

Download: Bermei. Inazawa & Urbatronic Chopstic - Melody (MoonFragrance) [Bmin Style].osu

[Bmin Style]
00:39:192 (9) - nazi, move a tiny bit left so that it lines up better
01:02:490 (4) - new combo
01:03:128 (7) - new combo
01:05:043 (7) - new combo
________________
all else seems fine, very nice maps have a star

All fixed. Thank you

Download: Bermei. Inazawa & Urbatronic Chopstic - Melody (MoonFragrance) [Bmin Style].osu

Easy
00:37:756 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - move one beat earlier (this way is easier to read ^^)
00:45:416 (4) - move one beat earlier and repeat 2 times

Normal
00:46:692 - this break time is weird , i think should be longer, end it at 00:53:873 (1)
01:14:139 (8) - remove one repeat
01:19:086 (6) - new combo and 01:19:565 - remove new combo (i think looks more logic like this ^^)

Bmin Style
00:11:267 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - you can put this like you did here 01:01:852 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3), and here 01:12:703 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) with new combo ^^
00:56:187 (7) - wrong spacing, is just a little thing, but this can mess up the stream ^^

MX
00:21:958 - add note?
00:59:777 - ^
01:14:937 - ^

Nice map
Star ^^

fixed :3

I didn't change the placement but fixed the newcombo
Thanks for the mod

Download: Bermei. Inazawa & Urbatronic Chopstic - Melody (MoonFragrance) [Bmin Style].osu

Use offset 10,607

Easy
No problems.

Normal
No problems.

Hard
00:51:160 (9) - Why make this note so quiet? It'd be better if we could hear it.
00:57:703 (2) - Shorten by 1/2 so it ends on the note in the vocals

Bmin Style
No problems.

MX
00:57:543 - Add a note here? The pause just feels a little empty and somewhat breaks the flow
00:59:777 - ^

Nicely done.

Agent Spin Here wrote:

Use offset 10,607
- i think it's too early <_<

Hard
00:51:160 (9) - Why make this note so quiet? It'd be better if we could hear it.
- fixed

00:57:703 (2) - Shorten by 1/2 so it ends on the note in the vocals
- it's on brass sound

MX
00:57:543 - Add a note here? The pause just feels a little empty and somewhat breaks the flow
- fixed

00:59:777 - ^
- that part it on drum sounds.

thank you for modding XD

Umm...
Nice song and good luck for this XD

Here's my star :3

Hi I'm a nazi pro.

[Normal]
00:33:926 (1) - Whyyyy new combo?

[MX]
01:15:097 (1) - Unlock new combo maybe?

Fix and recall me

Alright. Sorry for the delay. Let's get into this.

Easy:
There are a lot of strong hits that aren't supported by notes and also a lot of syncopated notes which aren't prepped. This makes the map harder to read.

00:13:022 (4) - Move this 1/2 beat left make it a 1/2 beat long slider.
00:14:299 (1) - prep this note.
00:15:575 (3) - There is a strong hit on the beat before this note
00:37:756 (1) - Have something leading up to this. I'd say put in a slider that ends on the beat before this note.
00:45:416 (4) - Try putting a note on the beat before this slider.
00:53:873 (1) - prep this
00:57:224 (1,2,3) - I think this would be easier to read if the first two notes were a slider and the slider was two notes.
00:59:777 (5) - Try putting a note on the beat before this note
01:04:246 (1) - Try putting a note on the beat before this note
01:21:639 (1) - prep this note
01:29:618 (2) - prep this note

That should be a start at least. I'll need to see it again after these changes are made

Normal:
The beginning feels a lot better in this map. There are still a few spots later that I think should be looked at.

00:53:873 (1) - Try having two notes lead into this note a 1/2 beat apart
00:57:224 (1) - Try a note on the beat before this
01:20:363 (3) - There's a strong hit on the beat before this slider

Also, check every time you change from being on the beat to off the beat and make sure it feels natural. Having a rest of a beat and a half should only be done when the music makes it incredibly obvious. (i.e. Not every time it happens here).

Hard:
That feels much better. Usually when the beats are following the actual rhythm of the music, the prepping for moving in and out of syncopation takes care of itself. There are a few phrases that start on upbeats, though. Make sure that you aren't missing some strong downbeats when that happens.

That's all I have for now. You seem to be a bit spinner happy on these maps. I hope my comments help.

arkiandruski wrote:

Alright. Sorry for the delay. Let's get into this.

Easy:
There are a lot of strong hits that aren't supported by notes and also a lot of syncopated notes which aren't prepped. This makes the map harder to read.

00:13:022 (4) - Move this 1/2 beat left make it a 1/2 beat long slider.
00:14:299 (1) - prep this note.
00:15:575 (3) - There is a strong hit on the beat before this note
00:37:756 (1) - Have something leading up to this. I'd say put in a slider that ends on the beat before this note.
00:45:416 (4) - Try putting a note on the beat before this slider.
00:53:873 (1) - prep this
00:57:224 (1,2,3) - I think this would be easier to read if the first two notes were a slider and the slider was two notes.
00:59:777 (5) - Try putting a note on the beat before this note
01:04:246 (1) - Try putting a note on the beat before this note
01:21:639 (1) - prep this note
01:29:618 (2) - prep this note

That should be a start at least. I'll need to see it again after these changes are made

Normal:
The beginning feels a lot better in this map. There are still a few spots later that I think should be looked at.

00:53:873 (1) - Try having two notes lead into this note a 1/2 beat apart
00:57:224 (1) - Try a note on the beat before this
01:20:363 (3) - There's a strong hit on the beat before this slider

Also, check every time you change from being on the beat to off the beat and make sure it feels natural. Having a rest of a beat and a half should only be done when the music makes it incredibly obvious. (i.e. Not every time it happens here).

Hard:
That feels much better. Usually when the beats are following the actual rhythm of the music, the prepping for moving in and out of syncopation takes care of itself. There are a few phrases that start on upbeats, though. Make sure that you aren't missing some strong downbeats when that happens.

That's all I have for now. You seem to be a bit spinner happy on these maps. I hope my comments help.

There're too many moddings @_@
i'll just say this, i can't what you intended say - prep or strong beats..... of something -
and i'll don't fix diff cuz diff will be more harder if i fix them - i don't think easy needs 1/2 beats, cuz BPM is too high -
also, i think syncopated notes can represent melody more better, so i'll not fix them <_< sorry.

and i fixed new combo, but unfortunately, minyeob seems to be afk ;_;

I don't know a better way to say prepping notes, but especially in easy maps if you change from on the beat to off the beat or from 1 and 3 to 2 and 4, you need something to lead into it so it's easier to read. Read the first post in my modding queue for ways to fix that.

Strong hits means I feel a strong beat that's not supported, which means I try to hit notes before the circle reaches them which causes me to miss. For most strong hits, I tell you exactly where they are.

if i prep or fix strong beats, notes are not going to be right imo.
or you should give me the way to fix them.

your modding is too abstrct ;_;

I figured it might be hard to understand, so I went ahead and reworked the Easy map a bit. It isn't perfect and may be a bit over mapped at times, but maybe it will give you an idea of what I'm thinking and give you a starting point to work from.

Note I just changed the rhythm. I didn't do anything with spacing or try to make the lines look good.

Take what you like, alter the rest.

Download: Bermei. Inazawa & Urbatronic Chopstic - Melody.osz

arkiandruski wrote:

I figured it might be hard to understand, so I went ahead and reworked the Easy map a bit. It isn't perfect and may be a bit over mapped at times, but maybe it will give you an idea of what I'm thinking and give you a starting point to work from.

Note I just changed the rhythm. I didn't do anything with spacing or try to make the lines look good.

Take what you like, alter the rest.

No. Its just awful just because you don't like the map doesn't mean you have to completely change the style.

sorry, arkiandruski. your example changed whole my mapping style.
soory to reject it <_<

Bmin Style~
Add bmin11 to the tags in the difficulty.
His difficulty doesn't have the countdown enabled. Either enable it or disable the countdown in the rest of the difficulties.

Other things~
I honestly don't see a reason why there is lead-in time in all the difficulties if there is already 10 seconds at the beginning of the song. Remove lead-in time please!

There is no space after Bermei. / Also use "Chopsticks" instead of "Chopstic"
So the correct artist is: "Bermei.Inazawa & Urbatronic Chopsticks"

"blank.png" is currently not being used. If you're going to use it, then use it. Otherwise delete it and do a full submit.

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fixed
and Unabled Countdown all diff

Lead-in time is still at 1.5 seconds on all difficulties.
Put it down to 0.

Edit: Ah, I see it now. Video just pops up with 0 lead in time.
You got lucky this time, lol.
Bubbled~

Sweat Jesus

Alright then, ranked.

Wow wait a sec, Video game (Japanese)??
Is there anyway to fix that to Korean?

Fixed that for you.

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Whoops. I guess I misread the sources....

Why did [Hard] get randomly moved before being ranked?

DeathxShinigami wrote:

Why did [Hard] get randomly moved before being ranked?

Oh ya, I just realized that O_o I wonder why

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A simple re add onto this thread should get worked and alls you need is someone with super awesome uploading skills to add it into the set.