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Bermei.Inazawa & Urbatronic Chopsticks - Melody

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MoonFragrance
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MoonFragrance
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010년 1월 8일 금요일 at 오전 11:35:15

Artist: Bermei.Inazawa & Urbatronic Chopsticks
Title: Melody
Source: DJMAX
Tags: DJMAX Black Square Clazziquai Edition TECHNIKA Esprit Lee BF bmin11
BPM: 188
Filesize: 6663kb
Play Time: 01:36
Difficulties Available:
  1. Bmin Style (4.99 stars, 251 notes)
  2. Easy (1.24 stars, 74 notes)
  3. MX (5 stars, 268 notes)
  4. Normal (3.58 stars, 121 notes)
Download: Bermei.Inazawa & Urbatronic Chopsticks - Melody
Download: Bermei.Inazawa & Urbatronic Chopsticks - Melody (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Bermei. Inazawa & Urbatronic Chopstic - Melody

Composed by Bermei Inazawa
Arranged by Urbatronic Chopsticks
Visualized by BF
Vocal by Esprit Lee

in DJMAX Clazziquai Edition, Black Square, TECHNIKA :3

- For DJMAX Project >w<

Artist is changed. so please re-download this map :3
- 11 / 27 BG is changed better one. so please re-download this map :3
- 12/28 resize the backgrounds' size, so please re-download map :3
Last edited by MoonFragrance , edited 38 times in total.
La Valse
501 posts
Joined February 2009
La Valse
1빠 :)
bmin11
5,438 posts
Joined October 2008
bmin11
[모든 난이도]
00:56:067 (1) - 여기서부터 시작하는 kiai가 너무 길어보이는데 괜찮을지는 모르겠네요

[MAX]
01:29:046 (2) - 깜놀

이거말고는 플레이에 지장을 주는건 없네요.
저도 난이도 하나 시도해봐도 될까요? 맘에 안들면 그냥 냅두는 식으로요. 업로드를 못하다보니 남의 맵에 난이도 만드는 것 말고는 할수 있는게 없네요;;
Tanmak
896 posts
Joined August 2009
Tanmak
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
bmin11
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Joined October 2008
bmin11
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: Urbatronic Chopstic - Melody (MoonFragrance) [Style Bmin].osu
Last edited by bmin11 , edited 2 times in total.
Tanmak
896 posts
Joined August 2009
Tanmak
자..기숙사로 돌아와서 수업 전에 쓰는 모딩글입니다~ :D

[General]
1. 이거 작곡가는 베르메이 이나자와(Bermei inazawa) 아닌가요?
Urbatronic Chopstic은 단지 원곡을 어레인지한 걸로 알고 있어요.

2. 원곡이 다 끝날 때까지 가면 좋겠네요. 끝까지 노트 찍어달란 이야기는 아니고..-ㅅ-; 음 뭐랄까, 보통은 노트가 더 이상 없는 시점에서 게임이 끝나지만 그렇지 않은 경우도 있던데(이 때는 skip버튼이 뜨죠.) 그렇게 해주었으면 좋겠네요. 노트가 끝나는 시점에서 약간의 음악이 계속되고 동영상도 계속되고 하니까..

3. 음 이건 꼭 할 필요는 없는 것 같지만, 개인적으로는 두 번째, 세 번째 Kiai구성이 이상해요..음, 차라리 두 번째 Kiai를 세 번째 Kiai직전까지 설정해놓는게 좋겠네요. 다만 Hard, MX는 스피너가 있어서 효과가 잘 안 나타날 거에요. 그러기에 이건 선택.

[Normal]
00:45:102 (1,2) Stack(노트 겹침)을 풀었으면 좋겠네요. 전부터 똑같이 겹쳤는데 뜬금없이 박자가 달라지면 약간 혼란이 있을지도 모르겠군요.

[MX]
01:25:793 이건 제안이지만 Spinner 대신에 다른 노트를 집어넣는 게 좋을 것 같네요.
Spin-Spin-노트 단 두 개-또 Spin이란 구성이 약간 조금 이상하게 보여서 말이죠. (음, 뭐랄까, 한 곳에 스핀이 너무 자주 나온다는 느낌)

나머지는 괜찮네요.
음, Bmin님의 비트맵이 올린대로 그것도 한번 모딩해드리겠습니다.

Edit

[Style bmin]

00:39:357 (1,2,3) 리듬 사운드가 좀 이상합니다. 다른 형태로 노트를 짜는 게 좋겠네요.
00:43:985 - 이 스피너를 00:46:378에서 끝나도록 해주세요.
01:05:846 (1) New combo 해제
01:06:165 (2,3,4,5) 하드라고는 하지만 헷갈리네요. 이들을 Slide로 만드는 것을 추천. 그리고 2는 New combo.
01:26:591 (1,2,3,4) New combo만 빼면 위와 같습니다.
bmin11
5,438 posts
Joined October 2008
bmin11

Tanmak wrote:

[Style bmin]

00:39:357 (1,2,3) 리듬 사운드가 좀 이상합니다. 다른 형태로 노트를 짜는 게 좋겠네요. 다른 사람이 이 노트에 대해 모딩하면 고칠께요. 전 맘에 들어서 말이죠;;
00:43:985 - 이 스피너를 00:46:378에서 끝나도록 해주세요. ㄳㄳ
01:05:846 (1) New combo 해제 으음.... 이거는 잘 모르겠지만 고쳤어요
01:06:165 (2,3,4,5) 하드라고는 하지만 헷갈리네요. 이들을 Slide로 만드는 것을 추천. 그리고 2는 New combo.
이걸 못보면 그 눈돌아가는 삼각형도 못할텐데.... 그리고 이건 하드 인세인 사이쯤 위치
01:26:591 (1,2,3,4) New combo만 빼면 위와 같습니다. 위와 같음
Download: Urbatronic Chopstic - Melody (MoonFragrance) [Style Bmin].osu
Jinxy
2,777 posts
Joined February 2009
Jinxy
I think it should be called [Bmin Style].

[Easy]
01:12:070 (1,2,3,4) - Move half a beat to the right.
01:15:580 (1) - ^
01:21:644 (1,2) - ^
01:29:304 (1,2) - ^

[Normal]
00:53:878 (1,2,3) - ^ like [Easy]

[Hard]
01:29:304 (1,2) - ^ like [Normal]

[Bmin]
01:34:570 (6) - Nazi: Move one tick up and one tick left.

[MX]
Nothing found.


Nice song, and a great map to go along with it. Starred!
bmin11
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Joined October 2008
bmin11
01:34:570 (6) - Nazi: Move one tick up and one tick left.
yay, that worked. Thank you

Download: Urbatronic Chopstic - Melody (MoonFragrance) [Bmin Style].osu
Fuuko
486 posts
Joined June 2009
Fuuko
Fuuko's mod DEKIMASHITA! <3333'

Easy:

0:36:804 - Exactly in this time, I think it's missing a note. Try to put a circle ( clapped ), here, and test it. :3
That's all. The other diffs were perfectly made. :3
Star ( of course ;) ) and keep up the good work. ;*
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
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Joined August 2008
Andrea
[Overall]

BPM: 188,00 - Offset: 10.636 (Remember to resnap all notes.)

[Easy]

00:34:025 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:45:042 (4) - New combo.

[Normal]

00:58:346 (X) - Add a note here.
01:09:019 (7) - New combo.

[Hard]

00:26:059 (3) - New combo.
00:54:099 (6) - ^
01:12:007 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - These patterns have different spacing from the others.

[Bmin Style]

Some spinners give only 2000 with auto, but it's ok :D

00:36:016 (10,1) - Spacing.
01:08:071 (13) - Sounds bad.
01:15:089 (7) - New combo.
01:16:053 (1) - Remove new combo.

[MX]

01:01:085 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - These patterns have different spacing from the others.
01:12:070 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - ^
bmin11
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Joined October 2008
bmin11
[Bmin Style]

Some spinners give only 2000 with auto, but it's ok

00:36:016 (10,1) - Spacing.
01:08:071 (13) - Sounds bad.
01:15:089 (7) - New combo.
01:16:053 (1) - Remove new combo.
I don't know of spinners, but heard that the limite is 2000 with auto
Yup, spacing makes sense and
01:08:071 (13) - Sounds bad.
Don't know of this one. I tried

Download: Urbatronic Chopstic - Melody (MoonFragrance) [Bmin Style].osu
Ra-s
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Joined May 2009
Ra-s
스타를 줘도 안아까워요
DeathxShinigami
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DeathxShinigami
[Bmin Style]
00:58:002 (5,6,7,8) - I truely hate this pattern plus its kinda ztrotish.

Orz~

Edit: While playing I didn't the way how this sounded with the vocals

00:55:095 (1) - Blah. doesn't lead well with the vocal.

Actually, this was for something else on irc not relating at all to this map. Disregard this.
Last edited by DeathxShinigami , edited 1 time in total.
bmin11
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Joined October 2008
bmin11

DeathxShinigami wrote:

[Bmin Style]
00:58:002 (5,6,7,8) - I truely hate this pattern plus its kinda ztrotish.

Orz~

Edit: While playing I didn't the way how this sounded with the vocals

00:55:095 (1) - Blah. doesn't lead well with the vocal.
I'll not change that ztrotish pattern
and 00:55:095 (1) - is not based on vocal, but I'll try to make it better, since I started to hate it
Actually, I'll keep it for now
MoonFragrance
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Topic Starter
MoonFragrance

DeathxShinigami wrote:

I truely hate this pattern plus its kinda ztrotish.
lol by the way, thanks for kudosu star >w<~
Nakagawa-Kanon
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Nakagawa-Kanon
star~
DJPop
osu! Alumni
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Here since the beginning
DJPop
~Easy~
Fine.

~Normal~
00:45:010 (1,2) - use 1 slider
01:21:096 (3) - not symmetric

~Hard~
00:51:016 (9) - sounds weird
00:54:838 - add note
00:56:912 - ^
00:57:072 - ^
01:25:063 (2) - move up right to make the pattern more curve

~Bmin Style~
00:18:061 (1) - start on 00:18:375
00:55:047 (1) - new combo
01:03:045 (9) - spacing
01:08:024 (10) - new combo
01:35:037 (1) - start on left blue tick
01:36:080 (1) - ^

~MX~
Fix your file name.
01:01:085 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - move down 1 grid (Lv3)
01:06:000 (7) - delete
01:20:052 (4) - start slider on next red tick, add circle instead


+Star
Sure
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Joined February 2009
Sure
[Hard]
00:54:051 (5) - 스페이싱


[Bmin Style]
00:55:047 (5) - 뉴 콤보
01:02:049 (4,5,6) - 서로 조금씩 더 떨어뜨려 주세요


[MX]
오프셋이 다른 난이도랑 다릅니다. 맞춰주세요.
MX : 10,634
Others : 10,636

00:55:015 (5) - 뉴 콤보


이 외 난이도는 저에겐 괜찮아 보이네요.
별~★
bmin11
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bmin11
Fixed everything that has been suggested and some personal changes too

Download: Urbatronic Chopstic - Melody (MoonFragrance) [Bmin Style].osu
Diasios
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Diasios
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bmin11
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bmin11
All fixed. Thanks for the Newcombo. I forgot to fix it :o
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anonymous_old
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Here since the beginning
anonymous_old
Normal
SPOILER

00:19:089 (5) : It would seem to be a bad idea at first, but I highly suggest that you add a beat here.

Hard
SPOILER

00:19:089 (2) : Add a beat here.
00:41:027 (1,2,3) : Spacing.
00:55:095 (1) : Perhaps too ninja of a slider.

BMin Style
SPOILER

00:12:055 (9,10,11) : Switch the 9 with the 10, then respace.
01:08:024 (1) : New combo.
01:08:024 (1,2,3) : I dislike how 1 and 3 are stacked.
01:09:035 (6) : Move between 4 and 5. (screenshot)
01:15:026 (3,4,5) : Ain't diggin' dat stack, dawg.
01:26:059 (1,2,3,4) : Ain't diggin' dat stack, dawg.
bmin11
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bmin11
00:12:055 (9,10,11) : Switch the 9 with the 10, then respace. It's a jump
01:08:024 (1) : New combo. xxheroxx fixed it for me
01:08:024 (1,2,3) : I dislike how 1 and 3 are stacked. Fixed
01:09:035 (6) : Move between 4 and 5. (screenshot) Don't want to
01:15:026 (3,4,5) : Ain't diggin' dat stack, dawg. I like my stack
01:26:059 (1,2,3,4) : Ain't diggin' dat stack, dawg. I like my stack

All done. Replaced it.

Download: Urbatronic Chopstic - Melody (MoonFragrance) [Bmin Style].osu
Lokamp
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Lokamp
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Kytoxid
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Kytoxid
[General]

You have THREE .osb files in your song folder, please delete two.
.flv video is not recommended, consider converting it to .avi.

Judging from all the chaos in the '07 Class Idea thread, 0.2 Stack Leniency needs to be changed.

Timing on Normal is off by 1 millisecond. XD

blank.png is storyboarded twice, identically. Any reason?

The difficulties themselves look fine, there's some nitpicks that I could make about alignment and the like, but overall, they're fine. Star~
bmin11
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Joined October 2008
bmin11
Bmin Style
00:54:035 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - set soft sounds for these beats (maybe set soft finish on 3rd and 4th purple and clap on 2nd, 4th and 6th blue) Thank you
01:23:024 (3) - whistle here Sounds weird
01:35:028 (spinner,3) - whistle the spinner's end and the next 3rd yellow beat Thank you
Download: Bermei. Inazawa & Urbatronic Chopstic - Melody (MoonFragrance) [Bmin Style].osu
Dusty
870 posts
Joined June 2009
Dusty
I was going to mod this a couple weeks ago but forgot.

[Easy]
The whole thing feels awkward...

[Normal]
00:53:561 (x) - Add something here? (1,2,3) feel awkward
00:54:051 (3) - Sliderize?
00:58:029 (x) - Add a note?
00:58:348 (x) - Add a note?

[The harder difficulties]
OK as far as I can tell.

*star
al2e10
1,101 posts
Joined August 2008
al2e10
By AL2e10's Mod queue !!

[MX]
01:02:017 (2,3) A bit far
01:02:735 (2,3) A bit close
01:13:507 (2,3) A bit close
01:14:384 (3,4) A bit close
Ohh...There are many Whistle !!
Too noise !!

[Bmin Style]
00:54:039 (1-4) What is this ??

[Hard]
Fine !!

[Normal]
Many Whistle also !!

[Easy]
Fine !!
Vanmonky
986 posts
Joined June 2009
Vanmonky
As your request.

[Normal]
00:11:075 (3) - Add clap.

I don't see anymore mistake. Star.
bmin11
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Joined October 2008
bmin11
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MoonFragrance
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Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
MoonFragrance

al2e10 wrote:

Ohh...There are many Whistle !!
Too noise !!
i think whistles are fine.
i'll fix it another point it.
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
Hayonghaseyo!

[Easy]
00:16:379 (1) - Allign with 3
00:39:039 (2) - Allign with 1
01:00:262 (5) - Hold shift button and move around. If you spot some line in vertical in upper left, release it
01:02:017 (1,2,3) - Follow the pattern just like this

01:04:730 (2) - Just like this

01:07:443 (2,3) - Just like this


[Normal]
00:13:029 (5) - Allign with 4
00:18:136 (3) - Allign with 2

[Hard]
00:57:709 (2) - Ugly slider, changes slider

[Bmin Style]
00:22:283 (7) - Allign with 6
00:23:081 (11) - Allign with 11

Hmmmmmm. Not bad, star

EDIT : Sorry, I forgot to star :(


Last edited by Leorda , edited 1 time in total.
Zekira
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Joined September 2008
Zekira
The no-vid link is broken... o_o Full Submit plz

Offset: 10629
bmin11
5,438 posts
Joined October 2008
bmin11
Argh, you have some colour issue over there, Leorda
Fixed anyway

Download: Bermei. Inazawa & Urbatronic Chopstic - Melody (MoonFragrance) [Bmin Style].osu
kino77
909 posts
Joined March 2009
kino77
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Yes_old
525 posts
Joined May 2009
Yes_old
hmm. yea the no-video link isn't working :cry:

bmin
00:32:097 (3) - whistle sounds kinda weird
00:41:027 (1) - finish at beginning?
00:43:098 (1) - lower volume a little

hard
00:14:077 (x) - add note and clap?
00:14:094 (3) - no clap
00:15:041 (x) - note and clap
00:15:058 (6) - no clap
01:28:034 (6) - clap at end
00:14:061 (1) -maybe make a slider 1/2 note long and repeat it?
00:15:026 (3) - ^ [delete 2 and 4]
MoonFragrance
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Topic Starter
MoonFragrance

Yes wrote:

hmm. yea the no-video link isn't working :cry:
- yeah, i don't know reason why :cry: :cry:

hard
00:14:077 (x) - add note and clap?
00:14:094 (3) - no clap
00:15:041 (x) - note and clap
00:15:058 (6) - no clap
01:28:034 (6) - clap at end
00:14:061 (1) -maybe make a slider 1/2 note long and repeat it?
00:15:026 (3) - ^ [delete 2 and 4]
- fixed :D
thank you >w<~
Mok
1,226 posts
Joined August 2009
Mok
Mod's Info:
Mine are all suggestions. You're free to follow or not this mod :3
I'll just mod the beats in your map, in all its forms, will not tell you to add or remove the beat <3
Remember to fix spacing after all modfiy :3

[General]
ok <3

[Easy]
01:29:299 (1) 2/4 before.

[Normal]
01:29:299 (1) 2/4 before.

[Hard]
01:04:246 (1) 4/4 before and extend by 4/4.

[Bmin Style]
Seems fine ^^

[MX]
Fine too ^^

And that's all for your map! hope you will ask me again for other maps-modding! Starred <3
MoonFragrance
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Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
MoonFragrance

tmokb93 wrote:

[color=#BF0000]
[Easy]
01:29:299 (1) 2/4 before.
[Normal]
01:29:299 (1) 2/4 before.

- it's for lyrics <_<

[Hard]
01:04:246 (1) 4/4 before and extend by 4/4.

- it isn't fit. it's on brass sounds.
sorry, no kudosu ;_;
Shulin
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Shulin
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Luneko
842 posts
Joined June 2009
Luneko
|Blue = Suggestion | Red = Change plz | Green = Design |

-Easy-
00:34:565 - Start spinner here and end at 00:35:841
01:36:000 (1) - 1 Grid left

-Normal-
00:55:015 (6) - Replace with a spinner or a non repeating slider

-Hard-
Nice :3

-Bmin-
Awesome

-MX-
00:22:012 (1) - Remove and add note at 00:22:437

-Overall-
Nice map :3
Have a Star~
MoonFragrance
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Topic Starter
MoonFragrance

Shulin wrote:

General:

~ Set BG color to black.
- why? @_@

Easy:

00:19:041 (1) - Finish end of slider?
- too loud <_<

MX:

01:37:027 (x) - Add a note?
- umm..... it isn't fit IMO

KillerRind wrote:

|
-Easy-
00:34:565 - Start spinner here and end at 00:35:841
- the spinner is on drum sounds <_<

-Normal-
00:55:015 (6) - Replace with a spinner or a non repeating slider
- i think that part is fine

-MX-
00:22:012 (1) - Remove and add note at 00:22:437
- that's fine too
others all fixed. thank you for modding :3
NoHitter
osu! Alumni
3,785 posts
Joined June 2009
NoHitter
Overall
Delete .osb file and full submit

Easy
00:37:756 (1) - Confusing; You switched from placing notes on lyrics to beats. If I were a new player; I'd be tempted to hit the slider at 00:37:437 (But after that I'd be able to get the rest)

Hard
Just too many spinners.

MX
01:25:788 (1) - IMO, bad place for a spinner.

That's all. I ommited the diffs I saw no problems
MoonFragrance
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Topic Starter
MoonFragrance

NoHItter wrote:

Overall
Delete .osb file and full submit
- fixed :3

Easy
00:37:756 (1) - Confusing; You switched from placing notes on lyrics to beats. If I were a new player; I'd be tempted to hit the slider at 00:37:437 (But after that I'd be able to get the rest)
- they are on melody, so i'd not like to change them D:

Hard
Just too many spinners.
- i emphasize spinners on this diff, so i'd not like to change it too

MX
01:25:788 (1) - IMO, bad place for a spinner.
- fixed to slider
thank you for modding :D
Gens
osu! Alumni
3,485 posts
Joined August 2008
Gens
[General]
  1. What is "blank.png" used for?
[Normal]

01:21:095 (2) - Doesn't sounds good at all, try extending it to the next red tick.

[Hard]
  1. Resnap all notes.
  2. Why the low stack leniency? I don't like it much.
[Bmin Style]
  1. Why the low stack leniency? I don't like it much.
00:36:480 - What? I'm pretty sure you forgot to set the Inhereted section 0.5x here.

[MX]
  1. Why the low stack leniency? I don't like it much.
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Aside from some small things, this is pretty safe to rank. :)
MoonFragrance
1,929 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
MoonFragrance

Gens wrote:

[General]
  1. What is "blank.png" used for?
- to show all of the video :)
fixed :3 thank you for modding XD~
bmin11
5,438 posts
Joined October 2008
bmin11
Just got my chance to upload my diff phew
Thanks for the mods :)

Download: Bermei. Inazawa & Urbatronic Chopstic - Melody (MoonFragrance) [Bmin Style].osu
jericho2442
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1,918 posts
Joined March 2009
jericho2442
[Bmin Style]
00:39:192 (9) - nazi, move a tiny bit left so that it lines up better
01:02:490 (4) - new combo
01:03:128 (7) - new combo
01:05:043 (7) - new combo
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all else seems fine, very nice maps ;) have a star
bmin11
5,438 posts
Joined October 2008
bmin11
All fixed. Thank you :)

Download: Bermei. Inazawa & Urbatronic Chopstic - Melody (MoonFragrance) [Bmin Style].osu
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