[General]
- 02:04:108 - Add BPM 50 here.
- Starting from 02:01:179 - until the end, all Timing Points including the 50 BPM needs to have first bar line omitted (F6 > Style > Check "Omit first bar line").
- 00:44:944 - Consider http://puu.sh/a3fIQ.jpg; this makes sure 00:47:061 - is played.
- 01:41:061 (4) - I took the liberty in making this look nicer https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1798714
135,125,101061,2,0,L|231:130,2,80,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,165,102120,6,0,P|57:65|182:40,1,245,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
- 00:37:885 (6) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1798724 This brings out the contrast in the cadence a little better.
- 01:19:532 (1,2) - A combo like http://puu.sh/a3gPG.jpg is more accurate to the lyrics.
- Combo patterning for most of the map is a little bit confusing - what are you using as your basis?
- 00:46:708 (1,1) - This doesn't play too well due to the pattern you have for 00:46:003 (1,1,1) - . The code below shows http://puu.sh/a3gHt.jpg
181,150,46356,6,0,P|216:162|253:171,1,75.9999979705811,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
- 01:35:767 (4) - New combo here.
- a-1.png - at 30120, you should keep scaling up until 34708 where fade is 0. This is to differentiate between the length of the held syllable "gu" (1/1) and "n" at 37532 (2/1). http://puu.sh/a3iaP.png
- a-3.png - the same. http://puu.sh/a3ic7.png
- 47061 - Consider scaling the large a-4.png from 1 to 1.2, and starting the fade of the smaller one at 0.8 instead of 1. http://puu.sh/a3huv.png and http://puu.sh/a3hvk.png.
- d-2.png, d-3.png, d-4.png should read from RIGHT to LEFT, since you are using the Eastern vertical bracket. http://puu.sh/a3hJR.jpg makes more sense.
- d-6.png, d-7.png, d-8.png should have the same treatment.