Kibbleru wrote:

i think we can do this again hue

1. if you have link to metadata itll be helpful q:
2. can u make the Storyboard so that it works for widescreen users as well D:? i don't think it'd be that hard to do.

1. i still suggest you try to keep your NC to every measure (like i suggested a while ago lol). But as long as you can justify it i won't force you.

1. 00:08:061 (2) - should be 1/6!
2. 00:19:003 (4) - space this out a bit so that the jump to 00:19:179 (5) - would be smoother
   
   SPOILER

   
3. uhh NCing for this diff is also kinda inconsistent :X it seems like you're jumping from every 1 measure/NC to every 3 measures/NC..
4. 01:02:767 - i found it weird that you would leave this empty but map a weaker sound like 01:02:591 (5) -

1. 01:28:356 (4,1) - i really don't know why you would stack these :X makes it rather awkward to play
   01:36:826 (3,4) - ^
   01:46:356 (3,1) - ^
2. 02:02:040 (1,1) - i think you can change the SV for these sliders to make them play more consistently (as in the slider speed).

1. 00:49:179 (5) - nazi - blanket :C
2. 00:59:767 (1,1) - so like the guideline told us 4 beats after a spinner for easy diff but i will ask around to see if it's acceptable in a case like this :X
   01:16:708 (1,1) - ^
   01:33:650 (1,1) - ^ etc lol
   01:50:591 (1,1) - ^

Kibbleru wrote:

[general]

if you have link to metadata itll be helpful q:
https://remywiki.com/Element_of_SPADA

can u make the Storyboard so that it works for widescreen users as well D:? i don't think it'd be that hard to do.
For now, I just untick the widescreen support, cuz with it on would be worse... More importantly,I don't know how to deal with sb actuallly...

[another]

i still suggest you try to keep your NC to every measure (like i suggested a while ago lol). But as long as you can justify it i won't force you.
OK, I fixed most of them. I still leave some unfixed for clear pattern

[hyper]

00:08:061 (2) - should be 1/6! Fixed

00:19:003 (4) - space this out a bit so that the jump to 00:19:179 (5) - would be smoother Fixed

uhh NCing for this diff is also kinda inconsistent :X it seems like you're jumping from every 1 measure/NC to every 3 measures/NC..
I think his NC looks more reasonable than mine. so I fixed several but not too much (1-3 NC changes).

01:02:767 - i found it weird that you would leave this empty but map a weaker sound like 01:02:591 (5)
It's fine, the blank between 01:02:591 (5) and 01:02:944 (1) is a good intro for incoming 1/1

[normal]

01:28:356 (4,1) - i really don't know why you would stack these :X makes it rather awkward to play
01:36:826 (3,4) - ^
01:46:356 (3,1) - ^
Fixed

02:02:040 (1,1) - i think you can change the SV for these sliders to make them play more consistently (as in the slider speed).
No, if that, people can't figure out if there is a sv change

[Mei's Easy]

00:49:179 (5) - nazi - blanket :C Fixed

00:59:767 (1,1) - so like the guideline told us 4 beats after a spinner for easy diff but i will ask around to see if it's acceptable in a case like this :X
01:16:708 (1,1) - ^
01:33:650 (1,1) - ^ etc lol
01:50:591 (1,1) - ^[/
I wonder this too, cuz it's waltz beat.

Kibbleru wrote:

the current ranked version has SPADA

but I will ask somebody to check.

Kibbleru wrote:

might as well say this now :X. can you make the normal a bit harder? i think you could use a bit more 1/2s? or something?
asked some qats and concluded i think you should do this :X

those wrote:

Great map. Top 5 short maps 2014 彡

Giralda wrote:

omg can't wait for this to get ranked GOGOGO

those wrote:

2015

Plasmapie wrote:

Its a very fun map The map timing was perfect, it wasn't very difficult, and the storyboard was beautiful!

Kencho wrote:

From qq群 request

[General]

1. SB裡面114826到125308的SB load都是5.0x以上，SB load超過5.0x以上不允許超過5秒，你這個太久了，可能需要改一下
   我和SBer商量一下，因为没看到rules里面有这一条。谢谢提醒

[Another]

1. 00:00:473 - 整個圖沒有轉盤，所以在這裡加個轉盤到00:03:650 - 如何？ 感觉不是很有必要，前面的节奏挺空的，放转盘感觉有点过了
   01:16:708 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 這個難度只有4.05星，沒什麼跳，但放這個長連打會不會太難了，不過不改也行
   不算很长，最多就是9连，中间还有reverse做衔接
   02:04:108 (1) - 這個放去正中間怎麼樣啊
   待定，因为这里有变速，我觉得还是按着DS来最好。

[wantuole's Hyper]

1. 00:00:473 - 和Another難度說的一樣，加個轉盤在這裡到00:03:650 - 如何？ 还是算了
   00:29:061 (6) - NC？
   00:34:356 (4) - NC 00:35:061 (1) - No NC
   这三个地方感觉NC后不好看啊，而且这首歌是瓦尔兹拍的，拿4/4的方法NC会很奇怪的。这就是为什么以前和现在我都搞不懂该怎么NC的原因。
   後面還有些NC問題，建議每兩條大白線NC一次（有些特別的梗例如00:46:003 (1,1,1) - 可以忽略）
   00:55:532 (1,2,3) - 弄成等距？
   我还是尊重原mapper的意愿吧，更何况这里的flow感觉还不错。
   01:01:885 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這個有點太難，345間距可以再小點，我個人偏向這樣放 Fixed，缩短了3到4的距离
   01:19:885 (1,2,3) - 這裡1/1拍的地方間距可以再大點，要和1/2的地方清楚分明間距 我觉得他这样处理挺好的，stack1已经让1/2和1/1区分开了。这里的节奏也缓和下来了，有理由可以用小间距

[Normal]

1. 00:00:473 - 和上面難度說的一樣，加個轉盤在這裡到00:03:650 - 如何？ 同上
   00:29:061 (5,1) - 這裡DS變成1.03x了，稍微修正一下吧
   01:54:473 (4,1) - 這裡DS突然1.42x了
   Fixed
   

[Mei's Beginner]

1. 00:00:473 - 和上面難度說的一樣，加個轉盤在這裡到00:03:650 - 如何？ 同上
   00:34:356 (5,1) - DS變成1.42x了 Fixed

挺好的圖，其他沒什麼大問題，祝順利起飛

Thanks for your mod!

Kibbleru wrote:

I think I can check this now

I don't think SPADA needs to be in tags

also I would like to ask someone for metadata

Kibbleru wrote:

nvm rebub

Kibbleru wrote:

z

Frey wrote:

Kibbleru wrote:

z

got the pictures cut

You're the kindest person in my osu life! thx kibb <3

Reditum wrote:

storyboard check

Sooo you're not using color1, color2, color3, color4, colourless, snow, or z in the storyboard

and in the .osb, d-1. and d-5 have 2 periods (aka they're like "d-1..png") so I'm not sure if that affects anything, but it's worth fixing.

Can't pop this but uhhhh you should get that fixed.

updated

Fycho wrote:

Qualified. Good luck on ranked.

Flask wrote:

恭喜frey~

好久不見玩脫了

Irreversible wrote:

Beautiful map + sb!