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Tune Up - Feel Fine (2009 Remix)

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ztrot
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ztrot
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, October 31, 2009 at 1:00:35 AM

Artist: Tune Up
Title: Feel Fine (2009 Remix)
Tags: Tune Up! Feel Fine
BPM: 145
Filesize: 4805kb
Play Time: 02:07
Difficulties Available:
  1. Fine (4.99 stars, 406 notes)
  2. Soft (4.3 stars, 235 notes)
Download: Tune Up - Feel Fine (2009 Remix)
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Pop for SB fix and resize
Ready for a bubble again
Last edited by ztrot , edited 9 times in total.
Lokamp
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Joined January 2009
Lokamp
Sounds fine ^^

Maybe set a finish on this slider's start [00:04:35 (3)]...
A star 4 you ;)
Krisom
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Krisom
Kiai times made my eyes bleed o_o, but I't may just be my eyes (OR the fact that it's 11pm alredy...)
Other than that, I really liked this one.

star
Sleep Powder
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Sleep Powder
Add Source and Tags

[Soft]
Seems a bit too hard for the easiest difficulty.
00:55:56 (4) - Add hitsounds here
00:56:28 (5) - and here
02:07:66 (1) - Maybe finish

[Fine]
00:46:25 (7) - Clap sounds weird here
01:15:63 (10) - Delete 9 and place the slider here...and adjust to previous end point and hitsound the end
02:07:77 (1) - Finish here too?
Kytoxid
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Kytoxid
Didn't really find any issues with playing, very cool map that fits the song well. I'll just point out some cosmetic things I noticed (which probably aren't that important as a whole).

[Soft]

00:23:39 (1,2,3,4) - This diamond looks a bit distorted, pull the 4 in closer by a bit?
00:33:32 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - First triangle is significantly flatter than the second one, lol.
00:39:94 (7) - New combo here instead of 00:41:59 (1)?
02:06:21 (1,2) - 2 is slightly higher than the 1.

[Fine]

00:22:56 (7,8) - These are a bit closer than the ones before them.
00:25:46 (9) - Move the endpoint 1 grid up, 1 grid left to coincide with the start of 6?
00:41:18 (1,2,3,4) - Looks kinda weird. I'd move 3 2 grids down, and 4 1 grid down, or something like that.
01:11:39 (3) - Goes a bit too close to the edge of my screen.
01:44:28 (1,2,3,4,5) - If you pull 3 and 4 together a bit closer, it could form 5 of the 6 points of a hexagon.
01:48:42 (5) - Slightly higher than 3.
02:03:94 (6) - If this is moved 1 grid down, it'll line up with the 5 as well as the endpoint of the 9.
anonymous_old
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anonymous_old
Soft
SPOILER

00:14:28 (2) : Spacing
01:25:46 (5) : Spacing
01:54:42 (3) : Spacing
00:50:70 : This part seems empty. Try mapping this part.
00:56:28 (5) : The first note that isn't in 1/2 and it might confuse beginners.
01:26:08 : Add a beat here. (?)
01:56:49 (3) : Move this forward by 2 ticks.
01:56:288 : Add a beat here.

Fine
SPOILER

00:15:11 (5) : Extend by 1 tick. (?)

A few errors here, but it's a nice SB.
gp0_old
174 posts
Joined July 2009
gp0_old
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
ztrot
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ztrot

greenpoint0 wrote:

Soft
00:28:35 (5) - Spinner, plz. Extend one whole beat.
00:50:908 - I feel the need to add 2 notes, 1/2 tick separation.
00:52:563 - ^
00:54:219 - ^ with a third note, separated by another 1/2 tick.
02:06:21 (1) - Y needs +1. Or:
02:06:63 (2) - Y needs -1. On 3rd grid setting.

Fine
00:13:04 (1,2,1) - Colorblindness anyone? Maybe darken magenta into violet-red.

Other than that, your off-the-grid mapping looks pretty mediocre well, I mean, I think it's okay...). Thanks to you, this shitty song will not be stuck in my head. And although it's been pounded into my head millions of times already, I cannot discern what the main chorus line is. "I will fight for you"?

You've numbed my ears, this song sucks, good map, you're drunk off your pants. Mission complete.
you're right it does say fight for you cuz it's a remix that's the only part of the song that has been changed tho besides the fact it's alot faster than the normal one Good job tho =]
Hitoshirenu Shourai
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Hitoshirenu Shourai
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
WyndII
777 posts
Joined October 2008
WyndII
a bubble in a WIP map?
¯\(°_o)/¯
ztrot
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ztrot
lol thanks moved to pending
Luneko
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Joined June 2009
Luneko
Cool map and Cool song ^^
Have a Star~
tieff
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Joined March 2009
tieff
What about feelfine.jpg in beatmap folder?

Rezist it to 1024x768 pixels.
ztrot
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ztrot
ehh it breaks the SB
Hitoshirenu Shourai
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After a 2nd look, I found the offset very slightly late. -4 to the current offset, please.
ztrot
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ztrot

Hitoshirenu Shourai wrote:

After a 2nd look, I found the offset very slightly late. -4 to the current offset, please.
I went with -2 but thanks for making me double check
Hitoshirenu Shourai
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Hitoshirenu Shourai

ztrot wrote:

Hitoshirenu Shourai wrote:

After a 2nd look, I found the offset very slightly late. -4 to the current offset, please.
I went with -2 but thanks for making me double check
See? At least I noticed it being a bit off. ^^

But yeah, since it's fixed, re-bubbling.
Jarby
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