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Laurie Webb - Dance With Me (Sky High Mix)

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Gens
You still haven't fixed some things. :(

First of all, the Ki-bar. There's still some pixely stuff in there, and looks very ugly IMO.
Second, the Author. I've never seen Artist/artist in any beatmap before, and peppy recently unranked a beatmap to replace "and" with "&", so watch out.
Third, the Kiai time in Easy should start at 00:49:120. Also, make sure the Kiai is the same on all difficulties!
Fourth, check your new combos! Guide yourself with the music. If you don't know how to fix it, send me an IRC PM and I'll point them out.
Fifth (lolwut), delete the first Inhereted section on all difficulties, it's not necessary.

[Normal]

02:10:037 (5) - Spacing.

This isn't a full, complete mod, I know, but I'm more interested to do this in IRC rather than here (since it'll be a rather long list). PM me in IRC if you're interested.
Lilac

CrimmiSkye wrote:

NOTE: I'm Also Doing A FL Studio Project, So To Those That Are Interested Let Me Know Through PM And I'll Comply With You <3
I personally like this song. I'm interested in mapping other songs but I've don't know which one.
XepherX3
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Topic Starter
Crimmi

MarioBros777 wrote:

CrimmiSkye wrote:

NOTE: I'm Also Doing A FL Studio Project, So To Those That Are Interested Let Me Know Through PM And I'll Comply With You <3
I personally like this song. I'm interested in mapping other songs but I've don't know which one.
Ok Personally You Should Start With JAHA- Dreams IMO. If You Want A Challenge Do Electroconductor-Midnight.

I'm Gonna Map Raquel.J - You Are The One.
al2e10
By AL2e10's Mod !!

[Insane]
00:13:215 (1,1,1) I don't know why you are make many spinner, You can use one.
00:30:223 (1,2,1,2...) Why you are make many New combo ??
00:34:002 (1,2) Specing !!
01:37:781 (12) New combo?
01:43:923 (1,2) Specing !!
01:45:104 (4,5) Specing !!
02:00:931 (1,2,1,2...) Why you are make many New combo ??
02:32:230 (2,3) Specing!!

Hold on !!
[All]
You should make know what you are doing !!
And the slider is ugly, you should make it better ~

But, Good job !!
Star !!
Sushi
First of All : Correct useless timing sections. like the one at the very begining.
The rythm is constant, so you may have only inheriting timing sections.
and set your BPM to 127.000 instead of 127.001

[Easy Short]
00:28:080 (4,5) - Align
00:42:050 (3) - ^
00:55:073 (2,1) - ^
01:04:023 (1) - make it nicer?

[Normal]
00:23:060 (2,3,4) - Center (4) ?
00:45:034 (4) - new combo?
00:59:098 (6) - move this 1 grid right for (1) to be centered.
01:01:040 (2) - too close imo
01:06:012 (5) - ^
01:16:004 (2) - ^
01:41:056 (3,5,6) - Symetry, and align (5) and (6)?

[Hard]
00:19:035 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Gaaaah unconstant spacing in the same combo
00:24:055 (6,7) - align
00:45:034 (6) - new combo?
00:47:023 (1) - remove new combo
01:02:034 (6,1) - align
01:51:048 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - make (5,6,7) similar to (2,3,4)
02:03:076 (4) - symetry?
02:29:004 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Gaaaaah spacing

[Insane]
01:36:036 (8) - new combo
01:42:003 (2) - ^
01:44:086 (2,3,4,5) - Spacing. that's Obvious. I stop spacing for now, See what I'll said below.
02:12:074 (2,3) - align
02:34:000 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Symetry.

[Taiko]
I'm not an expert Taiko modder but
Rhythm change overlaps some notes. forbidden, imo.
02:29:027 (1,2,3,4) - do NOT use Big notes in streams.
I don't know if breaks are good for taiko. (in the original game, no breaks...)



About spacing.....

In All your diffs (do not apply to taiko) You have many Spacing problems. the problem is not a style problem, but you have many spacing changes wich are not justified or are completely wrong (in the few exemples i gave in the mod post, you'll see what I'm talking about)

If you don't correct these incorrect spacing, you may have problems for rank.
That's what i had to say.
Anyway, this map is simple and that fits the song well.
I hope you'll correct the spacing stuff.
Star~
Dusty
[Normal]
01:05:018 (2,3,4,5) - Weird spacing. Please re-distance snap (2,3,4) or make them closer together
01:51:048 (2,3,4) - ^

[Hard]
I think you should just go through and re-apply distance snap to everything.

[Taiko]
02:28:009 (1) onwards - What's with all the rapid spinners?

[Insane]
00:32:082 (12,13) - Distance snap?
00:34:000 (1,2) - ^?

In my opinion, you should increase the circle size and then make the notes father away from each other, but that's a lot of work.
Xgor
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
AngelHoney
insane

00:31:876 (8) - remove ?
00:32:113 (9) - new combo?
00:35:892 (5) - to 00:36:601 and 00:36:128 (6) - to 00:35:892
00:36:837 (7,8) - ^
02:15:445 (10) - remove?

hard

00:49:120 - remove kiai time?

nice map~ star :) :)
Card N'FoRcE
- General:
  • There's an unused timing section with the same offset of the main timing section. Better remove it to avoid problems. :P
    I'm pretty sure BPM should be 127,000, not 127,001. Please try it and see if it's good.
    Also, now that you opened the Timing palel: the last timing section is useless and it's not inherited. Remove it please
- Easy Short Version:
  • .Opinions:
    No problems here ^^
- Normal:
  • .Opinions:
    .Suggestions:
    00:35:892 (5,6) - it plays fine, but i really think you should move 6 farther, it's obviously a wrong spacing.
    00:39:199 (12) - Yeah, it's a nazi thing, but moving it a square up will make it a lot nicer ;)
    .Errors/Mistakes:
    00:46:758 (3,4) - WUT? Oh no, this doesn't work, sorry. I'm sure this happened because of 0.5x Distance snap. Fix it manually.
    02:00:458 (9,1) - oh god again ^
- Hard:
  • .Opinions:
    This difficulty lacks KIAI time.
    .Suggestions:
    00:26:443 (9) - Add new combo; 00:26:916 (1) - remove new combo
    02:17:938 (1) - again, a nazi spacing to make it look better: move it 2 squares to the right.
- Insane:
  • .Opinions:
    This difficulty lacks KIAI time.
    Not so much "Insane", actually D:
    .Suggestions:
    02:03:765 (13) - add new combo; 02:04:002 (1) - remove new combo
    .Errors/Mistakes:
    01:19:593 - please inherit this section.
    01:43:923 (1,2) - spacing D:
- FL chan's Taaiko Dance:
  • Sorry, i'm not good at modding taiko difficulties D:
Before starring i want the "Errors/Mistakes" fixed, please.
Ask me again when you're done ^^
Card N'FoRcE

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

- General:
the last timing section is useless and it's not inherited. Remove it please
>.<

Also, i missed this in Insane >.<:
01:42:978 (6,7,8,9) - move them to the left to fix spacing

Star, the map is good now.
Fix those two little things and let me know; i'll protobubble ^^
Card N'FoRcE
Ok, it should be fine now ^^

Have your deserved proto-bubble :)
Yuukari-Banteki
[Easy]
this could benefit a lot from not being a metronome map, but its rankable in its current state.........

[Normal]
01:15:577 (1,2,3) - spacing?
again, your map is metronomic and not particularly interesting

[Hard]
00:39:199 (1,2,3,4,5) - spacing
00:47:231 (1,2,3) - ^
in fact, use AImod on your map, please
01:41:088 (5,6,1) - spacing
02:12:978 (3,4) - stack the endpoints

[Taiko]
reduce hitvolume by 2 ticks throughout

[Last]
01:59:513 (5) - spacing
02:04:710 (5,6,7) - keep same bpm within combo plz
really, AImod is cool


popping ur pubble
Topic Starter
Crimmi

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Easy]
this could benefit a lot from not being a metronome map, but its rankable in its current state.........orz..I'll Try To Make It Better :)

[Normal]
01:15:577 (1,2,3) - spacing? Fixed
again, your map is metronomic and not particularly interesting Fixed

[Hard]
00:39:199 (1,2,3,4,5) - spacing Fixed
00:47:231 (1,2,3) - ^ Fixed
in fact, use AImod on your map, please NOTE: AImod had require me to take Distance Snap off certain sections so don't blame me for any cirumstances therefore. O.o
01:41:088 (5,6,1) - spacing Fixed
02:12:978 (3,4) - stack the endpoints Fixed

[Taiko]
reduce hitvolume by 2 ticks throughout Fixed

[Last]
01:59:513 (5) - spacing Fixed
02:04:710 (5,6,7) - keep same bpm within combo plz Fixed
really, AImod is cool Fixed BUT: AImod caused my spacing at 01:11:734 to end up as mess...But Fixed That. That's WHY i don't use AImod :(



popping ur pubble
CURSE YOU AImod!! double orz....T.T i hope it's satisfactory now. :)
blissfulyoshi
3 osb files... Remove the 2 extra ones.
Why does your remaining .osb file contain a file that is not in your song folder? Also the background item you put in your .osb file makes easy run to the end of the song, so I suggest making that part of the .osb difficulty specific. in short, you might want to remove all 3 .osb files.

You might want to remove "FL" from the tags since it is already in the source.
Why do some of the diffs contain an extra uninherited timing section at the end?
Note: I did not understand what you followed for the combos too well and I did not really know what I would snap combos to in the song, so I did not perform a combo mod.

Easy Short Version:
Timing section mod:
00:03:767 - unneeded inherited timing section, please remove
02:00:694 - unneeded timing section, please remove

Normal:Why is the hitsound volume higher than the other diffs?
Timing section mod:
00:03:767 - unneeded inherited timing section, please remove

Hard:
Timing section mod:
00:03:767 - unneeded inherited timing section, please remove

FL Chan's Taiko Dance:
The hitsounds are too loud in this diff
Normal mod:
00:33:530 (1) - this is the only finish hitsound in the early part of the song, so it is a little weird

Timing section mod:
00:03:767 - unneeded inherited timing section, please remove
00:49:120 - a quarter note before this timing section, make a timing section with the same settings but no kiai to transition from normal to soft hitsounds

Last Dance MiX:
Timing section mod:
00:47:113 - unneeded timing section, please remove
02:00:694 - ^

===================================
Nice map with very few flaws. Star. (I probably will re-p-bubble it after you fix it)

Did the sb fix.

Edit 2: p-bubbled

Download: Laurie Webb - Dance With Me (Sky High Mix) (CrimmiSkye) [Hard].osu

Download: Laurie Webb - Dance With Me (Sky High Mix) (CrimmiSkye) [Last Dance MiX].osu

Download: Laurie Webb - Dance With Me (Sky High Mix) (CrimmiSkye) [Normal].osu
Zerostarry
[Hard]
00:23:609 (5,6) - Perhaps redo this combo...? It looks untidy.
Topic Starter
Crimmi

Zerostarry wrote:

[Hard]
00:23:609 (5,6) - Perhaps redo this combo...? It looks untidy.Fixed
arien666
I won't pop Proto-bubble :3[

[FL Chan's Taiko Dance]
Except 1st timing section, delete all

Reasons wrote:

N and S don't affect Taiko hitsound.
Actually, 1st x0.5 part is useless.
2nd x0.5 part seems weird if play on Taiko mod.
SPOILER

Begin


End
02:05:419(3) - Delete Finish
02:06:127(9) - ^
02:08:017(10) - ^
02:29:277(1,2,3,4,5) - NOT good. Consider deleting Finish or changing pattern :3
02:31:639(5) - Delete Finish
02:33:529(5) - ^



Good song :3
And keep going XD

Here's my star :3
Hanyuu
wow very good!
whymeman
[Easy Short Version]

Noticed the spacing is a bit jumpy in some parts like @ 00:46:758 (7,8). Make sure the spacing is consistant and easy to read for complete novices.

[Normal]

Also has some spacing errors, but distance snap might have not been used or may have been adjusted.
Examples: 00:34:002 (1,2), 00:35:892 (6,7), 00:58:569 (6,7,8).

Make sure to double check into that.

[Hard]

Looks nice so far, but you have some spacing jumps that AIMod doesn't see (ex: 00:23:136 (3,4,5), 00:34:002 (1,2) ).

Also.... changed the distance snap rate at 02:04:710?

[Last Dance MiX]

Also had a bit of spacing trouble. The spacing is a bit wavy with the notes a bit more far apart, then closer together.

Last thing to point out is that the comboburst seems a bit too tall. Taller than the height pippi is (default comboburst). Make sure to check into that as well, but liking the beat flow of the map though. Taiko seems well done so far, remind me to do a recheck when you're done so I can mod more into it again.
Topic Starter
Crimmi

whymeman wrote:

[Easy Short Version]

Noticed the spacing is a bit jumpy in some parts like @ 00:46:758 (7,8). Make sure the spacing is consistant and easy to read for complete novices. Fixed

[Normal]

Also has some spacing errors, but distance snap might have not been used or may have been adjusted.
Examples: 00:34:002 (1,2), 00:35:892 (6,7), 00:58:569 (6,7,8).Fixed

Make sure to double check into that.

[Hard]

Looks nice so far, but you have some spacing jumps that AIMod doesn't see (ex: 00:23:136 (3,4,5), 00:34:002 (1,2) ).

Also.... changed the distance snap rate at 02:04:710? I Warned SFG About AIMod's Conflict With The Distance Snap..... But Fixed

[Last Dance MiX]

Also had a bit of spacing trouble. The spacing is a bit wavy with the notes a bit more far apart, then closer together.

Last thing to point out is that the comboburst seems a bit too tall. Taller than the height pippi is (default comboburst). Make sure to check into that as well, but liking the beat flow of the map though. Taiko seems well done so far, remind me to do a recheck when you're done so I can mod more into it again.I've Accidently Made FL Chan A Bit Too Big In Photoshop....>.>
whymeman
[Easy Short Version]

00:46:758 (7,8) - Just need to close the extra gap on this one. Don't forget to shift the notes before/after to even the spacing.

Also, don't forget to resize that comboburst.
Topic Starter
Crimmi

whymeman wrote:

[Easy Short Version]

00:46:758 (7,8) - Just need to close the extra gap on this one. Don't forget to shift the notes before/after to even the spacing.

Also, don't forget to resize that comboburst. Fixed
whymeman
Had the notes a bit too close together on easy, it would be a good idea to space it out so it don't confuse the new players http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4647

Also, here is the fixed comboburst.

Edit: Alright then, bubbled.

Edit #2: Alright then, rebubbled. Becareful this time alright?

Starrodkirby86
>:

[Normal]:
02:26:442 (3,1) - Hm, seems a bit close. You can try moving (1) a wee bit more left or something.

[Last Dance MiX]:
02:04:710 (5) - New combo~
02:05:183 (6,7,8) - Nazi: Make this look a little more even? XD

Your map needs a hitcircleoverlay.png. You may also want to add more to the spinner? O.o It seems very unfinished with only having an approachcircle.

There seems to be useless SB on [Hard] and [Last Dance MiX]. Were you going somewhere with that?

There's also unused files. images.jpg and the .osb are unused. Remove them. oxo (though images.jpg is pretty cute <3)

Is FL Studio 7 a valid source? If you answer yes to one of the following questions, then it sure is...
Is this song most famous from FL Studio 7 (e.g. Theme Song)?
Was this song part of some example music made from FL Studio? Kind of like...Template things?

If you have the source there just because the song is made in FL Studio, then that's really...eh...weak? XD It's much preferable for a tag. I mean, I can just make something out of my ORGMaker from Cave Story and then call that as my source, but it wouldn't be a valid one.

Also, replace your comboburst.png with whymeman's. If you have the original image of that girl, then post it here so I can help you get a clean pic of FL-chan. It looks like yours was done by a Magic Wand without Anti-Alias.

Oh yeah, I don't think you should type Status: xx because you can't ever edit it once it's bubbled. :P Up to you though. XD

orz I shouldn't type this late. <3
Topic Starter
Crimmi
Here's The Original.

Topic Starter
Crimmi

Starrodkirby86 wrote:

>:

[Normal]:
02:26:442 (3,1) - Hm, seems a bit close. You can try moving (1) a wee bit more left or something.
Fixed.
[Last Dance MiX]:
02:04:710 (5) - New combo~
02:05:183 (6,7,8) - Nazi: Make this look a little more even? XD Fixed.

Your map needs a hitcircleoverlay.png. You may also want to add more to the spinner? O.o It seems very unfinished with only having an approachcircle. Need Help On That.Removed The Skin =[

There seems to be useless SB on [Hard] and [Last Dance MiX]. Were you going somewhere with that? SB Removed.

There's also unused files. images.jpg and the .osb are unused. Remove them. oxo (though images.jpg is pretty cute <3)

Is FL Studio 7 a valid source? If you answer yes to one of the following questions, then it sure is...
Is this song most famous from FL Studio 7 (e.g. Theme Song)? Yes.
Was this song part of some example music made from FL Studio? Kind of like...Template things? Yes.

If you have the source there just because the song is made in FL Studio, then that's really...eh...weak? XD It's much preferable for a tag. I mean, I can just make something out of my ORGMaker from Cave Story and then call that as my source, but it wouldn't be a valid one.

Also, replace your comboburst.png with whymeman's. If you have the original image of that girl, then post it here so I can help you get a clean pic of FL-chan. It looks like yours was done by a Magic Wand without Anti-Alias. Combo Burst Removed.... Forget About It... =[

Oh yeah, I don't think you should type Status: xx because you can't ever edit it once it's bubbled. :P Up to you though. XD

orz I shouldn't type this late. <3
rust45
[Easy]
Nazi: 00:23:609 (1) - Please stack better under (5).
Nazi: 00:24:081 (2) - Please stack better under (6).
Nazi: 00:45:341 (6) - Please stack better under (4) so it looks nicer. Turning off grid snap here will help.
This really is short, to the point where it feels a tad lazy, I'll let this go due to the amount of diffs, but I really think easies should be longer than this.

[All Diffs except Easy and Last Dance]
02:35:300 - The timing section here is red when it should be green.

[Normal]
Kinda of a lot of 1/2s for Normal
02:00:931 (1) - 1/2 speed on a Normal? I don't agree with that. Besides, it doesn't work as well as it does in hard.

[Hard]
02:00:931 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This is odd, you half the speed but double the spacing, if I hadn't had watched this in the editor first, I probably would've bombed it.

[Taiko]
Where's the kiai in the first chorus? The other diffs have it.
IIRC breaks in taiko are non-authentic and since this is a taiko only map, it shouldn't have that break, besides, it won't affect the gameplay. This can be achieved by opening the .osu, looking under the [Events] areas and finding "//Break Periods" there should be one line there, delete it and save. But if you do anything in the editor it will come back, so make sure it's gone everytime.

[Last Dane MIX]
00:45:577 (7,8,9) - Kinda hard to see due to being under the slider.
Minor: 02:24:080 (2) - Kinda hard to tell it's a slider, but I got it first time, not sure if others will be so lucky though.

That's it, call back later and I'll pubble.
Topic Starter
Crimmi
Ok. Re-Mapping [Normal] and [FL Chan's Taiko Dance] So It's Moved Back To W.I.P. for now, It Shouldn't take that long.
rust45
[Easy]
00:47:231 (8) - 1/2 sliders IMO would confuse Noobs, and I don't think this one is intuitive enough so they'll not be confused.

[Hard]
Minor: 00:47:231 (1) - Extend this to where (2) and delete (2), this is to help establish that it's half time and so the spacing makes more sense, the way the slider is now it's hard to tell that the BPM actually slowed because it's so short.
Nazi: 01:02:349 (6) - This is noticeably crooked.


That's it, you're close to a pubble. But I didn't note out much, so please, no kudos.
Topic Starter
Crimmi

rust45 wrote:

[Easy]
00:47:231 (8) - 1/2 sliders IMO would confuse Noobs, and I don't think this one is intuitive enough so they'll not be confused. Fixed
[Hard]
Minor: 00:47:231 (1) - Extend this to where (2) and delete (2), this is to help establish that it's half time and so the spacing makes more sense, the way the slider is now it's hard to tell that the BPM actually slowed because it's so short.
Nazi: 01:02:349 (6) - This is noticeably crooked. Fixed


That's it, you're close to a pubble. But I didn't note out much, so please, no kudos.
rust45
Alright, it's all fine in my eyes now,

here is your Proto-Bubble
Starrodkirby86
Now that Taiko is gone, I don't think you really need FL_chan_by_jamuko copy.png anymore...

[Hard] and [Last Dance MiX] both have useless storyboard of the background. o.o Can you please remove that?

Yeah, it's all fine otherwise...
Topic Starter
Crimmi
Ok, Can i Have my bubble back?? =]
aRiskOfRain
Fine.
Sakura
All fine, +Star
mrtn
bubbled
whymeman
From 02:00:931 ~ 02:04:710 has no beat to use the hitnotes.

A spinner would work much nicer here than the notes.

Alright, lets try this again then x2
Topic Starter
Crimmi
which diffs?
=[ Never Mind.

Edit: Spinners Added =[

Now It's Take A Long While To Get It Bubbled Again =[
DeathxShinigami
Think you mean getting close to a heart but whatever ^^;
abalee
I don't know why I could got that file but others couldn't :o

Topic Starter
Crimmi

abalee wrote:

I don't know why I could got that file but others couldn't :o
Something Is Wrong With The BSS, I Deleted It Like SRK Said And Full Submitted It And No One Else Has That File O.O

Now I Have To Re Pop It Again To Make Sure It's Really Gone.

Edit 1: It's Gone Now Should Be All Better Now =]
Larto
Use less spinners in your next maps =(

Insane:
k

Hard:
00:47:231 (1,2,3,4) - I can't say I like how suddenly made the spacing change. The slider slowdown is okay, but don't change the spacing just for that.

Normal:
00:25:499 (1) - too short for a normal?

Easy:
01:32:585 (1) - A bit too short for Easy.. maybe.
02:16:049 (1) - ^
Larto
okay
whymeman
Noticed something was missing. You need the hit0.png to complete the hitscore skin or else it would look odd with other skins. After that, it should be good enough.
Topic Starter
Crimmi
Blargh........
Topic Starter
Crimmi

whymeman wrote:

Noticed something was missing. You need the hit0.png to complete the hitscore skin or else it would look odd with other skins. After that, it should be good enough.Fixed.
whymeman
Alright then. Bubbled back.
Gens
Well, the BG doesn't look that bad, plus I can't find something better.

Let's put an end to this!
Xgor
Woo congratulation for the rank Crimmi!
Topic Starter
Crimmi

Xgor wrote:

Woo congratulation for the rank Crimmi!
Thank You And All Who Had Faith In Me And This Map. LOVE YOU ALL!!! <3
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