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Laurie Webb - Dance With Me (Sky High Mix)

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Crimmi
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Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
Crimmi
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, May 28, 2010 at 11:25:21 AM

Artist: Laurie Webb
Title: Dance With Me (Sky High Mix)
Tags: Chan LollieVox FL Studio 7
BPM: 127
Filesize: 2717kb
Play Time: 02:33
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.39 stars, 141 notes)
  2. Hard (4.53 stars, 268 notes)
  3. Last Dance MiX (4.74 stars, 351 notes)
  4. Normal (4.37 stars, 183 notes)
Download: Laurie Webb - Dance With Me (Sky High Mix)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Redownload!!!

Straight out of the FL Chan, it's the best song i've heard on it =)
Added Normal diff. fixed the missing ogg problem.
Loogiesquared's Mod. thankx alot!
Cropped the OGG for filesize.
Modded Again Ensuring No More Mistakes Are Made.
Used blissfulyoshi's suggestion thanks for the tip.
Added Easy Short Version for newer players.
Used Eirene's Mod, and Added Insane.
All Difficulties Fixed through eee's Mod.
Used varq's suggestion.
Used Lokamp and Eirene's Suggestion on the new combos.
Fixed using Ema Skye's Suggestion.
All Nazi Sounds Fixed. thanks to varq on his mod. :D
Used Gens' Mod/Sugesstion.
Skin Problem Fixed Thanks To Gens and Mario Bros. 777
The Name is changed
ReFixing the map and skin change.
Refixed All Diffs With Correct Combos.
Used al2e10's mod.
Added a Taiko Diff. (Let Me Know If It's Good Or Not).
Used Dusty's Mod.
Used Xgor & AngelHoney's Mod.
Used CnF's Mod.
Renamed Insane to Last Dance MiX.
Used CnF's Mod Again.
Pubble Popped By SFG.
Used SFG's Mod.
Used Blissfulyoshi's Mod.
Pubbled By Blissfulyoshi.
Used arken1015's Taiko Mod.
Used Zerostarry's Mod.
Used whymeman's Mod.
Bubbled recieved from whymeman.
Bubble Popped By Starrodkirby86.
Used SRK86's Mod.
Used Rust45's Mod.
Removed Skin, Deleted [FL Chan's Taiko Dance], Remapping [Normal]
[Easy] & [Normal] Completely Re-Mapped.
Fixed [Hard] & [Last dance MiX]
[Easy] Re-Mapped.
Used Rust45's mod again.
Pubbled By Rust45.
Bubbled By mrtn.
Used whymeman's mod.
Used Larto's Mod.
Now I Wait Once Again..... =[
No Longer Woking On This Map, Thanks To Everybody Who Helped Me On This As I Resign My Mapping Here.
Last edited by Crimmi , edited 102 times in total.
anonymous_old
0 posts
Here since the beginning
anonymous_old
easy
SPOILER

Consider using a silent soft-sliderslide.wav and normal-sliderslide.wav, the beats are good, but the sliders have this odd metal grating noise the ruins it.

Crop the .mp3, because it's goes on way past where the notes end.

00:21:71 (5) : Spacing.
01:52:42 (4) : Spacing.
02:32:58 (8) : Spacing.

hard
SPOILER

Consider using a silent soft-sliderslide.wav and normal-sliderslide.wav, the beats are good, but the sliders have this odd metal grating noise the ruins it.

This is more "normal" imo.

00:53:60 (2) : Finish hitsound.
00:54:08 (3) : Delete.
01:37:19 (8,9) : Move back by 1 tick.
01:37:42 (9) : Extend by 1 tick.
01:38:96 (3) : Add a beat here with no hitsound.

There are some fundamental errors here, but the timing is spot-on and it shows promise. *star*
Eirene
577 posts
Joined December 2008
Eirene
Easy:

***
00:20:77 (4,5) - large spacing ... strange for an easy difficulty (deliberate ?)
00:22:66 (6,7,8) - and between these circles, it seems you have increased the distance (deliberate too ?)
( 00:26:44 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - idem
00:35:42 (3,4,5,6) - changing spacing distance again
etc ... )
the same problem all over the map, you should set the distance spacing at x0.9 or 1.0 (or maybe 1.1),
and then keep it for all the map (with distance snap activate of course)

00:23:60 (7,8,9) - you should make this part symetric, ie, the slider at the same distance of the 2 other circles
00:59:51 (8,9,1) - idem
02:12:26 (2,3,4) - idem

01:04:23 (5,6,7) - 6,7 lower for having an alignment

***
02:00:93 (1) - don't change it ! very fun slider :D


that's all for the easy



Hard :

the same spacing problem as the easy difficulty (even for a hard difficulty , it's not intuitive)

00:28:56 (8) - put it just a square on the left
00:46:75 (9) - a square lower
01:51:48 (2,3,4,5) - make a "perfect" square
02:13:45 (6) - copy the (5) and ctrl+H

and that's all !

the timeline is great, especialy spinners,
I would like to give you a star, but there are too many spacing problems
correct that and I give you one :)
eee
692 posts
Joined January 2008
eee
eeemod GO!!!

[Overall]
Set a consistent preview point for all the difficulties.
I delete the maps I mod after I finished (to prevent overload), and I deleted this after I finished, but I forgot to look at the other difficulties, [Normal] I'm sure doesn't have a preview point, which is unrankable.

[Easy (Extended)]
See [Easy (Short)]
this time, some combos space pretty far for an Easy

[Easy (Short)]
I'd say too hard, but oh well. (?)
quickly,
I don't approve of high combos and 0.5 BPMs in an Easy map, but as I said above, "oh well" you can keep them.

[Normal]
I'd say too hard, but oh well.
You can lower the HP Drain n' Overall Diff a little, no?

[Hard]
01:36:83 (7) - I don't like the spacing here [(7) is too close to (6)]
02:14:15 (7) - I had no problem here, but you might want to distance space this.


[Insane]
01:01:64 (7) - it is unrankable to stack sliders above each other
01:30:69 (1) - begin spinner 1/2 earlier, end the same place
01:31:64 (1) - ^ right now, these are slightly unrankable, rule is that Autoplay should get 2000, some maps have gotten away with 1000, but auto doesn't even reach 1000 on these here spinners.
01:47:70 (1) - ^
01:55:26 (1,1) - ^
02:21:71 (9) - spacing [too close to (8)] also, new combo it, why not
02:29:27 (1) - just fix this spinners and the ones following
02:35:06 (1) - DELETE! I don't see why the map should end here~ and/or on a blue tick (it's just not right)

I'll star to get you on your way, you're getting some things right
XepherX3
625 posts
Joined September 2008
XepherX3
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Gens
osu! Alumni
3,485 posts
Joined August 2008
Gens
[General]
  1. First of all... why do you have a copy of the folder inside the song's folder? Delete and Full submit please.
  2. You may want to force default skin for this, since using other skins may get a weird result.
[Skin]
  1. In my opinion the skin's not necessary... many elements look ugly, so you should get a pro for that. :/
  2. Please fix the warning arrow.
[Normal]
  1. Check those combo markers... A 10+ combo is kind of long for a normal, and there are plenty of them.
  2. There are some spacing irregularities like at 02:12:26 (2,3,4), did you use distance snap? They don't bother me, but still, you need to recheck the map.
02:04:71 - Kiai Time should start here.

[Hard]

01:37:19 (8,9) - Please fix? I don't think they should go in blue ticks.
02:04:23 (5,6) - I don't think this is intuitive, please fix spacing.
02:04:71 - Kiai Time should start here, like Normal.

~ ~ ~

I have no problems with the map itself, just some minor stuff about the skin. :/
I'll star it once you fix all these things.
varq
104 posts
Joined February 2008
varq
WARNING: Massive amounts of nazi hit sound modding ahead

Easy
SPOILER
01:02:34 (4) - Slight off screen

-Have the whistle hit sounds on every other white tick throughout the whole beatmap

Normal
SPOILER
00:22:66 (7) - Whistle on tail of slider
00:24:55 (10) - ^
00:26:91 (2) - Whistle on head of slider
00:28:80 (5) - Whistle
00:34:00 (1) - Whistle on tail of slider, and the slider has a unnecessary white node next to the red one
00:35:89 (5) - Whistle on tail of slider
00:37:78 (8) - ^
00:47:23 (9) - ^
00:49:12 (1) - ^
00:51:01 (4) - ^
01:00:45 (1) - ^
01:02:34 (5) - ^
01:08:01 (11) - ^
01:09:90 (1) - ^
01:12:74 (6) - ^
01:13:68 (7) - ^
01:16:04 (11) - Whistle on head of slider
01:52:42 (4) - Add a whistle to the second hit as well
02:12:26 (2,3,4,8,9,10) - Spacing problem

Hard
SPOILER
00:23:13 (8) - Whistle
00:26:91 (5) - Whistle on head of slider
00:27:86 (6) - Whistle
00:29:27 (1) - Whistle on tail of slider
00:34:00 (1) - ^
00:36:35 (4) - Whistle on last hit of slider only
00:38:24 (8) - Whistle on third hit of slider only
00:39:67 (11) - Whistle on tail of slider
00:41:56 (1) - ^
01:49:59 (1) - Make the whistles match 01:53:37 (6)
00:51:01 (6) - Whistle on third hit of slider only
00:52:90 (1) - Whistle on tail of slider
00:53:60 (2) - Remove Whistle
00:57:15 (1) - Whistle
00:59:27 (7) - Whistle on last hit of slider only
01:00:45 (1) - ^
01:05:89 (1) - ^
01:17:46 (1,2,3,4) - Whistle on the head of these sliders
01:42:03 (7) - Whistle on second and fourth hit
01:44:39 (9) - Whistle
01:45:81 (11) - Whistle on tail of slider
01:45:81 (11) - Whistle on second and fourth hit only
01:51:95 (3) - Whistle
01:55:73 (8) - ^
01:57:15 (1) - Whistle on third hit only
01:59:51 (4) - Whistle
02:00:45 (6,1) - Spacing
02:04:23 (5,6) - ^
02:06:36 (3) - Whistle on last hit of slider
02:14:39 (8) - Whistle on tail of slider
02:18:41 (2) - Whistle
02:22:66 (8) - Whistle on third hit of slider only
02:25:49 (6) - ^
02:27:38 (9) - Remove Finish
02:27:86 (1) - Whistle
02:28:09 (2) - Remove whistle
02:29:04 (4) - ^

-Could you go through the whole map again with distance snap on? The spacing is really weird throughout the whole map. (EX: 00:19:82 (2,3), 00:20:77 (4,5), 00:24:08 (10,2,3) - The spacing is different for all of these)
-Also a lot of things are really unaligned, so I could nazi mod this a lot, but I'd rather not, so please look for these. (EX: 00:19:82 (2,4) - These slider's aren't straight, 00:28:56 (8,9) - Unsymmetrical)

Insane
SPOILER
00:28:33 (4) - Whistle on tail
00:30:22 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Whistles only on underlined numbers
00:33:76 (3,4) - Delete these two
00:35:18 (7) - Remove whistle
00:35:42 (8) - Whistle
00:35:89 (9,10,11,12) - This sounds really weird
00:37:78 (1) - Whistle only on third hit of slider
00:39:19 (2) - Whistle
00:39:43 (3) - Remove Whistle
00:39:67 (4,5,6,7) - Whistle only on heads of sliders
00:41:56 (1) - Whistle on tail of slider
00:49:12 (3) - New combo
00:51:24 (10) - Remove Whistle
00:51:48 (11) - Whistle
00:51:71 (12) - Remove Whistle
00:52:19 (14) -^
00:52:42 (15) - Whistle on head of slider
01:04:23 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Why is spacing increase here?
01:07:30 (11) - Whistle
01:07:54 (12) - Remove Whistle
01:07:78 (13) - Whistle
01:08:01 (1) - Finish
01:09:90 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Whistle on 3 and 7 only
01:09:90 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Make this symetrical
01:11:79 (1,2) - Inconsistent spacing within the same combo
01:12:50 (2,3,4) & 01:14:39 (10,11,12) - Change these patterns hit sounds to Whistle, Normal, Normal
01:12:50 (2,3,4) - This pattern is should be introduced earlier in the song, because it totally threw me off here.
01:12:97 (5,6) - ^
01:28:09 (5,6) - ^
01:27:15 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Whistles on white ticks only
01:36:36 (1,2) - Whistles on sliders heads
01:37:78 (5) - Not aligned in between (3,4)
01:38:01 (6,10) - Whistle on ends of sliders
01:42:03 (2) - Whistle
01:45:10 (4) - Remove Whistle
01:45:81 (6,7,8,9) - Whistles on white ticks only
01:48:88 (1) - Whistle on second hit
01:53:37 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Whistle on 4 and 6 only
01:55:26 (1) - Remove clap
02:05:53 (2) - Feels like a random offbeat, move to white tick
02:06:60 (4) - Whistle
02:10:37 (1,2,3) - Whistles on heads of sliders only
02:11:79 (4) - Whistle on first and last hit
02:17:46 (1,2,3) - Whistle only on 1
02:22:66 (5) - Whistle
02:25:02 (4) - ^
02:25:26 (5) - Remove Whistle
02:28:33 (11) - Whistle
02:28:56 (13) - Remove Whistle
02:30:22 (1) - Whistle
02:30:45 (3) - Remove Whistle
02:32:11 (1,2,3) - ^ Last 2 comments


-I suggest using more claps, or removing all clap hit sounds, because when you do hear them, they really stick out.
-No offense, by why is this named "Crimmi's Insane"?

Overall:
-Fix the skin elements, as many have mentioned before. (Ki markers and Warning arrows)
Hitoshirenu Shourai
osu! Alumni
990 posts
Here since the beginning
Hitoshirenu Shourai
Resubmit, I only got Hard and Insane modes when I downloaded it. Also, from what I saw, timing seems a little off. Try -4 to current, IMO.
Crimmi
1,947 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
Crimmi
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Cyril Scarlet
osu! Alumni
3,877 posts
Joined May 2009
Cyril Scarlet
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Ema Skye
91 posts
Joined June 2008
Ema Skye
hi guy =)

Easy Short Ver.
00:34:947(2,3) : shouldn't they be closer ? maybe i'm wrong you know x)
00:39:199(9) : you should push it a tick to the right; it's not lined with the 8 ;)
00:42:979(3,4) : ^
01:04:711(5,6) : shouldn't they be further this time ^^ ?

Normal :
00:28:806(5) : push it a tick up
01:01:404(2,3,4,7,8,9) : shouldn't they be further to one another following the previous spacing =o ?
02:09:435(7,8,9) : ^
02:16:049(3,4,5) : ^
02:17:938(1,2,3,8,9,10) : ^

Hard :
sorry but it always changes of distance snapping =(, i had a doubt for the others but for the diff it become obvious

Insane:
01:04:238 : first chorus : did you want the changing of spacing ?

Star, because your map deserve to be looked at, but try to fiw these problems of spacing, redo all the hard diff with the distance snap, pay attention not to change the distance snaping =/.

Bye =D
Crimmi
1,947 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
Crimmi

Ema Skye wrote:

Insane:
01:04:238 : first chorus : did you want the changing of spacing ?
No it's ok i haven't any complaints about it yet but i'll let you know about it.


<------Netherlands Antilles' #1 Taiko Player :) :D ;)
Lokamp
2,530 posts
Joined January 2009
Lokamp
Easy short ver.
00:26:091 (2) - start this slider with a whistle
00:50:006 (2,5) - finish on the beat and on the slider's start

Normal
00:21:071 (1,2) - new combo on 2nd, remove new combo from 1st
00:41:056 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - it looks very similar from the Easy mode... try to invent something original!
00:56:067 (4) - new combo
01:04:023 (6) - ^
01:08:001 (11,1) - new combo on 11th, remove new combo on 1st
01:11:079 (3) - new combo
01:42:003 (5) - ^
01:57:015 (8,1) - new combo on 8th, remove new combo from 1st
02:08:049 (6,1) - new combo on 6th, remove new combo from 1st
02:12:026 (2,1) - new combo on 2nd, remove new combo from 1st
02:16:004 (3) - new combo
02:27:038 (3) - ^
02:31:016 (4) - ^

Hard
00:22:066 (7) - new combo
00:26:044 (4) - ^
00:29:027 (1,2) - new combo on 2nd, remove new combo from 1st
00:37:078 (8) - new combo
00:39:067 (11) - ^
00:45:034 (6) - ^
01:42:003 (7) - ^
02:12:026 (2) - ^
02:19:082 (5) - ^

Insane
00:56:091 (13) - new combo
01:13:068 (7) - ^
02:06:060 (4) - ^
02:12:050 (5) - ^
02:19:082 (4) - ^
02:27:038 (8) - ^

There is a lot of work to to with new combos, but the rest was Ok. Here's your star! ;3
Eirene
577 posts
Joined December 2008
Eirene
well, the map much better now, there always are some spacing a bit weird but it's now minor issues

I just highlighted some things you should change.

Hard :
02:03:076 (4,5,6) - same distance between these 3 circles
02:25:049 (6) - move few squares on the left

Insane :
00:20:030 (4) - don't use grid snap to place it
00:58:033 (1) - ^
01:00:093 (5) - ^
01:37:078 (5) - ^
01:42:026 (3) - ^
00:46:005 (9) - a square down
01:59:004 (2,3,4,5) - make a square ?
02:04:023 (1,2) - a square up

I will look at other difficulties later.
Cyril Scarlet
osu! Alumni
3,877 posts
Joined May 2009
Cyril Scarlet
oops,

plz don't give kudosu to me because I just Post and didn't MOD anything =w="
EEeee
1,026 posts
Joined July 2008
EEeee
Easy Short Ver.
00:36:083 (5) - new combo goes a bit hit at this point, and this being an Easy, add new combo here
00:44:086 (5) - ^
00:57:015 (5) - ^
01:04:023 (5) - ^
01:08:001 (5) - kk listen closely, add new combo here
01:09:090 (1) - remove it here
01:11:079 (3) - add new combo here

Normal
02:18:088 (4) - new combo, this is a bit tricky and needs a new combo, since spacing is too close to previous note

Hard
01:34:047 (1) - move this to the right, twice, on a "tiny" grid lvl, so that 2,3, , , , can be spaced properly

Insane
looks good :P

*star, , , , well only if u Dance with me :3
Teara
osu! Alumni
814 posts
Joined June 2009
Teara
Very Nice! No major error's found, the following are just suggestions :)
+Star

[Easy Short Ver.]

01:02:034 (4) - :(

[Normal]

01:02:034 (5) - :(
01:40:014 (2) - Move a few grid spaces right, until its underneath 1. fix the rest :)
01:58:009 (3) - Align with 1

02:00:093 (1) - :) lol nice!

Not gonna nazi the rest, thats your job, just go through the diff and do some minor alignments, its not bad as it is, but it will look more profesional if everything is neatly layed out :)

Good job!

[Hard]

01:00:045 (1) - < Offscreen a bit

Like normal, nazi this a little bit too, make sliders more smoother/some placement issues, but nice map!

[Insane]

01:10:038 (3) - Move 2 grid spaces to the left
01:10:061 (4) - Move 2 grid spaces to the right
01:10:085 (5) - Move 4 grid spaces to the left
01:11:008 (6) - Move 6 grid spaces to the right
01:11:032 (7) - Move 2 grid spaces to the left
01:11:056 (8) - Move 2 grid spaces to the right

02:34:000 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - ouch, 1 combo please ;(
Crimmi
1,947 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
Crimmi
NOTE: I'm Also Doing A FL Studio Project, So To Those That Are Interested Let Me Know Through PM And I'll Comply With You <3

Songs In This Project Are:
Electroconductor - Midnight
Laurie Webb - Aren't You Clever (w/Mr. Special)
Solid Inc. - What I've Found
Fuego96 - FL Chan
Blake Reary - Hanging On
Raquel J. - You Are The One
JAHA - Dreams
LollieVox/Laurie Webb - Dance With Me (Blake Reary's Sky High Mix)
Lilac
Elite Mapper
1,515 posts
Joined December 2008
Lilac
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Gens
osu! Alumni
3,485 posts
Joined August 2008
Gens
You still haven't fixed some things. :(

First of all, the Ki-bar. There's still some pixely stuff in there, and looks very ugly IMO.
Second, the Author. I've never seen Artist/artist in any beatmap before, and peppy recently unranked a beatmap to replace "and" with "&", so watch out.
Third, the Kiai time in Easy should start at 00:49:120. Also, make sure the Kiai is the same on all difficulties!
Fourth, check your new combos! Guide yourself with the music. If you don't know how to fix it, send me an IRC PM and I'll point them out.
Fifth (lolwut), delete the first Inhereted section on all difficulties, it's not necessary.

[Normal]

02:10:037 (5) - Spacing.

This isn't a full, complete mod, I know, but I'm more interested to do this in IRC rather than here (since it'll be a rather long list). PM me in IRC if you're interested.
Lilac
Elite Mapper
1,515 posts
Joined December 2008
Lilac

CrimmiSkye wrote:

NOTE: I'm Also Doing A FL Studio Project, So To Those That Are Interested Let Me Know Through PM And I'll Comply With You <3
I personally like this song. I'm interested in mapping other songs but I've don't know which one.
XepherX3
625 posts
Joined September 2008
XepherX3
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Crimmi
1,947 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
Crimmi

MarioBros777 wrote:

CrimmiSkye wrote:

NOTE: I'm Also Doing A FL Studio Project, So To Those That Are Interested Let Me Know Through PM And I'll Comply With You <3
I personally like this song. I'm interested in mapping other songs but I've don't know which one.
Ok Personally You Should Start With JAHA- Dreams IMO. If You Want A Challenge Do Electroconductor-Midnight.

I'm Gonna Map Raquel.J - You Are The One.
al2e10
1,101 posts
Joined August 2008
al2e10
By AL2e10's Mod !!

[Insane]
00:13:215 (1,1,1) I don't know why you are make many spinner, You can use one.
00:30:223 (1,2,1,2...) Why you are make many New combo ??
00:34:002 (1,2) Specing !!
01:37:781 (12) New combo?
01:43:923 (1,2) Specing !!
01:45:104 (4,5) Specing !!
02:00:931 (1,2,1,2...) Why you are make many New combo ??
02:32:230 (2,3) Specing!!

Hold on !!
[All]
You should make know what you are doing !!
And the slider is ugly, you should make it better ~

But, Good job !!
Star !!
Sushi
osu! Alumni
2,989 posts
Joined October 2008
Sushi
First of All : Correct useless timing sections. like the one at the very begining.
The rythm is constant, so you may have only inheriting timing sections.
and set your BPM to 127.000 instead of 127.001

[Easy Short]
00:28:080 (4,5) - Align
00:42:050 (3) - ^
00:55:073 (2,1) - ^
01:04:023 (1) - make it nicer?

[Normal]
00:23:060 (2,3,4) - Center (4) ?
00:45:034 (4) - new combo?
00:59:098 (6) - move this 1 grid right for (1) to be centered.
01:01:040 (2) - too close imo
01:06:012 (5) - ^
01:16:004 (2) - ^
01:41:056 (3,5,6) - Symetry, and align (5) and (6)?

[Hard]
00:19:035 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Gaaaah unconstant spacing in the same combo
00:24:055 (6,7) - align
00:45:034 (6) - new combo?
00:47:023 (1) - remove new combo
01:02:034 (6,1) - align
01:51:048 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - make (5,6,7) similar to (2,3,4)
02:03:076 (4) - symetry?
02:29:004 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Gaaaaah spacing

[Insane]
01:36:036 (8) - new combo
01:42:003 (2) - ^
01:44:086 (2,3,4,5) - Spacing. that's Obvious. I stop spacing for now, See what I'll said below.
02:12:074 (2,3) - align
02:34:000 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Symetry.

[Taiko]
I'm not an expert Taiko modder but
Rhythm change overlaps some notes. forbidden, imo.
02:29:027 (1,2,3,4) - do NOT use Big notes in streams.
I don't know if breaks are good for taiko. (in the original game, no breaks...)



About spacing.....
In All your diffs (do not apply to taiko) You have many Spacing problems. the problem is not a style problem, but you have many spacing changes wich are not justified or are completely wrong (in the few exemples i gave in the mod post, you'll see what I'm talking about)

If you don't correct these incorrect spacing, you may have problems for rank.
That's what i had to say.
Anyway, this map is simple and that fits the song well.
I hope you'll correct the spacing stuff.
Star~
Dusty
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Dusty
[Normal]
01:05:018 (2,3,4,5) - Weird spacing. Please re-distance snap (2,3,4) or make them closer together
01:51:048 (2,3,4) - ^

[Hard]
I think you should just go through and re-apply distance snap to everything.

[Taiko]
02:28:009 (1) onwards - What's with all the rapid spinners?

[Insane]
00:32:082 (12,13) - Distance snap?
00:34:000 (1,2) - ^?

In my opinion, you should increase the circle size and then make the notes father away from each other, but that's a lot of work.
Xgor
Elite Mapper
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Joined April 2009
Xgor
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
AngelHoney
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Joined May 2009
AngelHoney
insane

00:31:876 (8) - remove ?
00:32:113 (9) - new combo?
00:35:892 (5) - to 00:36:601 and 00:36:128 (6) - to 00:35:892
00:36:837 (7,8) - ^
02:15:445 (10) - remove?

hard

00:49:120 - remove kiai time?

nice map~ star :) :)
Card N'FoRcE
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Card N'FoRcE
- General:
  • There's an unused timing section with the same offset of the main timing section. Better remove it to avoid problems. :P
    I'm pretty sure BPM should be 127,000, not 127,001. Please try it and see if it's good.
    Also, now that you opened the Timing palel: the last timing section is useless and it's not inherited. Remove it please
- Easy Short Version:
  • .Opinions:
    No problems here ^^
- Normal:
  • .Opinions:
    .Suggestions:
    00:35:892 (5,6) - it plays fine, but i really think you should move 6 farther, it's obviously a wrong spacing.
    00:39:199 (12) - Yeah, it's a nazi thing, but moving it a square up will make it a lot nicer ;)
    .Errors/Mistakes:
    00:46:758 (3,4) - WUT? Oh no, this doesn't work, sorry. I'm sure this happened because of 0.5x Distance snap. Fix it manually.
    02:00:458 (9,1) - oh god again ^
- Hard:
  • .Opinions:
    This difficulty lacks KIAI time.
    .Suggestions:
    00:26:443 (9) - Add new combo; 00:26:916 (1) - remove new combo
    02:17:938 (1) - again, a nazi spacing to make it look better: move it 2 squares to the right.
- Insane:
  • .Opinions:
    This difficulty lacks KIAI time.
    Not so much "Insane", actually D:
    .Suggestions:
    02:03:765 (13) - add new combo; 02:04:002 (1) - remove new combo
    .Errors/Mistakes:
    01:19:593 - please inherit this section.
    01:43:923 (1,2) - spacing D:
- FL chan's Taaiko Dance:
  • Sorry, i'm not good at modding taiko difficulties D:
Before starring i want the "Errors/Mistakes" fixed, please.
Ask me again when you're done ^^
Card N'FoRcE
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Card N'FoRcE wrote:

- General:
the last timing section is useless and it's not inherited. Remove it please
>.<

Also, i missed this in Insane >.<:
01:42:978 (6,7,8,9) - move them to the left to fix spacing

Star, the map is good now.
Fix those two little things and let me know; i'll protobubble ^^
Card N'FoRcE
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Ok, it should be fine now ^^

Have your deserved proto-bubble :)
Yuukari-Banteki
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Yuukari-Banteki
[Easy]
this could benefit a lot from not being a metronome map, but its rankable in its current state.........

[Normal]
01:15:577 (1,2,3) - spacing?
again, your map is metronomic and not particularly interesting

[Hard]
00:39:199 (1,2,3,4,5) - spacing
00:47:231 (1,2,3) - ^
in fact, use AImod on your map, please
01:41:088 (5,6,1) - spacing
02:12:978 (3,4) - stack the endpoints

[Taiko]
reduce hitvolume by 2 ticks throughout

[Last]
01:59:513 (5) - spacing
02:04:710 (5,6,7) - keep same bpm within combo plz
really, AImod is cool


popping ur pubble
Crimmi
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Crimmi

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Easy]
this could benefit a lot from not being a metronome map, but its rankable in its current state.........orz..I'll Try To Make It Better :)

[Normal]
01:15:577 (1,2,3) - spacing? Fixed
again, your map is metronomic and not particularly interesting Fixed

[Hard]
00:39:199 (1,2,3,4,5) - spacing Fixed
00:47:231 (1,2,3) - ^ Fixed
in fact, use AImod on your map, please NOTE: AImod had require me to take Distance Snap off certain sections so don't blame me for any cirumstances therefore. O.o
01:41:088 (5,6,1) - spacing Fixed
02:12:978 (3,4) - stack the endpoints Fixed

[Taiko]
reduce hitvolume by 2 ticks throughout Fixed

[Last]
01:59:513 (5) - spacing Fixed
02:04:710 (5,6,7) - keep same bpm within combo plz Fixed
really, AImod is cool Fixed BUT: AImod caused my spacing at 01:11:734 to end up as mess...But Fixed That. That's WHY i don't use AImod :(



popping ur pubble
CURSE YOU AImod!! double orz....T.T i hope it's satisfactory now. :)
blissfulyoshi
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blissfulyoshi
3 osb files... Remove the 2 extra ones.
Why does your remaining .osb file contain a file that is not in your song folder? Also the background item you put in your .osb file makes easy run to the end of the song, so I suggest making that part of the .osb difficulty specific. in short, you might want to remove all 3 .osb files.

You might want to remove "FL" from the tags since it is already in the source.
Why do some of the diffs contain an extra uninherited timing section at the end?
Note: I did not understand what you followed for the combos too well and I did not really know what I would snap combos to in the song, so I did not perform a combo mod.

Easy Short Version:
Timing section mod:
00:03:767 - unneeded inherited timing section, please remove
02:00:694 - unneeded timing section, please remove

Normal:Why is the hitsound volume higher than the other diffs?
Timing section mod:
00:03:767 - unneeded inherited timing section, please remove

Hard:
Timing section mod:
00:03:767 - unneeded inherited timing section, please remove

FL Chan's Taiko Dance:
The hitsounds are too loud in this diff
Normal mod:
00:33:530 (1) - this is the only finish hitsound in the early part of the song, so it is a little weird

Timing section mod:
00:03:767 - unneeded inherited timing section, please remove
00:49:120 - a quarter note before this timing section, make a timing section with the same settings but no kiai to transition from normal to soft hitsounds

Last Dance MiX:
Timing section mod:
00:47:113 - unneeded timing section, please remove
02:00:694 - ^

===================================
Nice map with very few flaws. Star. (I probably will re-p-bubble it after you fix it)

Did the sb fix.

Edit 2: p-bubbled

Download: Laurie Webb - Dance With Me (Sky High Mix) (CrimmiSkye) [Hard].osu

Download: Laurie Webb - Dance With Me (Sky High Mix) (CrimmiSkye) [Last Dance MiX].osu

Download: Laurie Webb - Dance With Me (Sky High Mix) (CrimmiSkye) [Normal].osu
Zerostarry
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Zerostarry
[Hard]
00:23:609 (5,6) - Perhaps redo this combo...? It looks untidy.
Crimmi
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Crimmi

Zerostarry wrote:

[Hard]
00:23:609 (5,6) - Perhaps redo this combo...? It looks untidy.Fixed
arien666
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arien666
I won't pop Proto-bubble :3[

[FL Chan's Taiko Dance]
Except 1st timing section, delete all

Reasons wrote:

N and S don't affect Taiko hitsound.
Actually, 1st x0.5 part is useless.
2nd x0.5 part seems weird if play on Taiko mod.
SPOILER

Begin


End
02:05:419(3) - Delete Finish
02:06:127(9) - ^
02:08:017(10) - ^
02:29:277(1,2,3,4,5) - NOT good. Consider deleting Finish or changing pattern :3
02:31:639(5) - Delete Finish
02:33:529(5) - ^



Good song :3
And keep going XD

Here's my star :3
Hanyuu
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Hanyuu
wow very good!
whymeman
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whymeman
[Easy Short Version]

Noticed the spacing is a bit jumpy in some parts like @ 00:46:758 (7,8). Make sure the spacing is consistant and easy to read for complete novices.

[Normal]

Also has some spacing errors, but distance snap might have not been used or may have been adjusted.
Examples: 00:34:002 (1,2), 00:35:892 (6,7), 00:58:569 (6,7,8).

Make sure to double check into that.

[Hard]

Looks nice so far, but you have some spacing jumps that AIMod doesn't see (ex: 00:23:136 (3,4,5), 00:34:002 (1,2) ).

Also.... changed the distance snap rate at 02:04:710?

[Last Dance MiX]

Also had a bit of spacing trouble. The spacing is a bit wavy with the notes a bit more far apart, then closer together.

Last thing to point out is that the comboburst seems a bit too tall. Taller than the height pippi is (default comboburst). Make sure to check into that as well, but liking the beat flow of the map though. Taiko seems well done so far, remind me to do a recheck when you're done so I can mod more into it again.
Crimmi
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Crimmi

whymeman wrote:

[Easy Short Version]

Noticed the spacing is a bit jumpy in some parts like @ 00:46:758 (7,8). Make sure the spacing is consistant and easy to read for complete novices. Fixed

[Normal]

Also has some spacing errors, but distance snap might have not been used or may have been adjusted.
Examples: 00:34:002 (1,2), 00:35:892 (6,7), 00:58:569 (6,7,8).Fixed

Make sure to double check into that.

[Hard]

Looks nice so far, but you have some spacing jumps that AIMod doesn't see (ex: 00:23:136 (3,4,5), 00:34:002 (1,2) ).

Also.... changed the distance snap rate at 02:04:710? I Warned SFG About AIMod's Conflict With The Distance Snap..... But Fixed

[Last Dance MiX]

Also had a bit of spacing trouble. The spacing is a bit wavy with the notes a bit more far apart, then closer together.

Last thing to point out is that the comboburst seems a bit too tall. Taller than the height pippi is (default comboburst). Make sure to check into that as well, but liking the beat flow of the map though. Taiko seems well done so far, remind me to do a recheck when you're done so I can mod more into it again.I've Accidently Made FL Chan A Bit Too Big In Photoshop....>.>
whymeman
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whymeman
[Easy Short Version]

00:46:758 (7,8) - Just need to close the extra gap on this one. Don't forget to shift the notes before/after to even the spacing.

Also, don't forget to resize that comboburst.
Crimmi
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Crimmi

whymeman wrote:

[Easy Short Version]

00:46:758 (7,8) - Just need to close the extra gap on this one. Don't forget to shift the notes before/after to even the spacing.

Also, don't forget to resize that comboburst. Fixed
whymeman
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whymeman
Had the notes a bit too close together on easy, it would be a good idea to space it out so it don't confuse the new players http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4647

Also, here is the fixed comboburst.

Edit: Alright then, bubbled.

Edit #2: Alright then, rebubbled. Becareful this time alright?

Starrodkirby86
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>:

[Normal]:
02:26:442 (3,1) - Hm, seems a bit close. You can try moving (1) a wee bit more left or something.

[Last Dance MiX]:
02:04:710 (5) - New combo~
02:05:183 (6,7,8) - Nazi: Make this look a little more even? XD

Your map needs a hitcircleoverlay.png. You may also want to add more to the spinner? O.o It seems very unfinished with only having an approachcircle.

There seems to be useless SB on [Hard] and [Last Dance MiX]. Were you going somewhere with that?

There's also unused files. images.jpg and the .osb are unused. Remove them. oxo (though images.jpg is pretty cute <3)

Is FL Studio 7 a valid source? If you answer yes to one of the following questions, then it sure is...
Is this song most famous from FL Studio 7 (e.g. Theme Song)?
Was this song part of some example music made from FL Studio? Kind of like...Template things?

If you have the source there just because the song is made in FL Studio, then that's really...eh...weak? XD It's much preferable for a tag. I mean, I can just make something out of my ORGMaker from Cave Story and then call that as my source, but it wouldn't be a valid one.

Also, replace your comboburst.png with whymeman's. If you have the original image of that girl, then post it here so I can help you get a clean pic of FL-chan. It looks like yours was done by a Magic Wand without Anti-Alias.

Oh yeah, I don't think you should type Status: xx because you can't ever edit it once it's bubbled. :P Up to you though. XD

orz I shouldn't type this late. <3
Crimmi
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Crimmi
Here's The Original.

Crimmi
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Crimmi

Starrodkirby86 wrote:

>:

[Normal]:
02:26:442 (3,1) - Hm, seems a bit close. You can try moving (1) a wee bit more left or something.
Fixed.
[Last Dance MiX]:
02:04:710 (5) - New combo~
02:05:183 (6,7,8) - Nazi: Make this look a little more even? XD Fixed.

Your map needs a hitcircleoverlay.png. You may also want to add more to the spinner? O.o It seems very unfinished with only having an approachcircle. Need Help On That.Removed The Skin =[

There seems to be useless SB on [Hard] and [Last Dance MiX]. Were you going somewhere with that? SB Removed.

There's also unused files. images.jpg and the .osb are unused. Remove them. oxo (though images.jpg is pretty cute <3)

Is FL Studio 7 a valid source? If you answer yes to one of the following questions, then it sure is...
Is this song most famous from FL Studio 7 (e.g. Theme Song)? Yes.
Was this song part of some example music made from FL Studio? Kind of like...Template things? Yes.

If you have the source there just because the song is made in FL Studio, then that's really...eh...weak? XD It's much preferable for a tag. I mean, I can just make something out of my ORGMaker from Cave Story and then call that as my source, but it wouldn't be a valid one.

Also, replace your comboburst.png with whymeman's. If you have the original image of that girl, then post it here so I can help you get a clean pic of FL-chan. It looks like yours was done by a Magic Wand without Anti-Alias. Combo Burst Removed.... Forget About It... =[

Oh yeah, I don't think you should type Status: xx because you can't ever edit it once it's bubbled. :P Up to you though. XD

orz I shouldn't type this late. <3
rust45
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rust45
[Easy]
Nazi: 00:23:609 (1) - Please stack better under (5).
Nazi: 00:24:081 (2) - Please stack better under (6).
Nazi: 00:45:341 (6) - Please stack better under (4) so it looks nicer. Turning off grid snap here will help.
This really is short, to the point where it feels a tad lazy, I'll let this go due to the amount of diffs, but I really think easies should be longer than this.

[All Diffs except Easy and Last Dance]
02:35:300 - The timing section here is red when it should be green.

[Normal]
Kinda of a lot of 1/2s for Normal
02:00:931 (1) - 1/2 speed on a Normal? I don't agree with that. Besides, it doesn't work as well as it does in hard.

[Hard]
02:00:931 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This is odd, you half the speed but double the spacing, if I hadn't had watched this in the editor first, I probably would've bombed it.

[Taiko]
Where's the kiai in the first chorus? The other diffs have it.
IIRC breaks in taiko are non-authentic and since this is a taiko only map, it shouldn't have that break, besides, it won't affect the gameplay. This can be achieved by opening the .osu, looking under the [Events] areas and finding "//Break Periods" there should be one line there, delete it and save. But if you do anything in the editor it will come back, so make sure it's gone everytime.

[Last Dane MIX]
00:45:577 (7,8,9) - Kinda hard to see due to being under the slider.
Minor: 02:24:080 (2) - Kinda hard to tell it's a slider, but I got it first time, not sure if others will be so lucky though.

That's it, call back later and I'll pubble.
Crimmi
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Crimmi
Ok. Re-Mapping [Normal] and [FL Chan's Taiko Dance] So It's Moved Back To W.I.P. for now, It Shouldn't take that long.
rust45
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rust45
[Easy]
00:47:231 (8) - 1/2 sliders IMO would confuse Noobs, and I don't think this one is intuitive enough so they'll not be confused.

[Hard]
Minor: 00:47:231 (1) - Extend this to where (2) and delete (2), this is to help establish that it's half time and so the spacing makes more sense, the way the slider is now it's hard to tell that the BPM actually slowed because it's so short.
Nazi: 01:02:349 (6) - This is noticeably crooked.


That's it, you're close to a pubble. But I didn't note out much, so please, no kudos.
Crimmi
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Crimmi

rust45 wrote:

[Easy]
00:47:231 (8) - 1/2 sliders IMO would confuse Noobs, and I don't think this one is intuitive enough so they'll not be confused. Fixed
[Hard]
Minor: 00:47:231 (1) - Extend this to where (2) and delete (2), this is to help establish that it's half time and so the spacing makes more sense, the way the slider is now it's hard to tell that the BPM actually slowed because it's so short.
Nazi: 01:02:349 (6) - This is noticeably crooked. Fixed


That's it, you're close to a pubble. But I didn't note out much, so please, no kudos.
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