Tomohito Nishiura - Deserted Amusement Park · forum

NoHitter

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NoHitter 2009-10-19T15:23:51+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, January 01, 2007 at 1:10:20 AM

Artist: Tomohito Nishiura
Title: Deserted Amusement Park
Source: Professor Layton Luke Picarats Hat DS game NDS
Tags: Professor Layton and the Curious Village
BPM: 114
Filesize: 1391kb
Play Time: 01:16
Difficulties Available:

Mysterious (3.91 stars, 140 notes)
Questionable (1.91 stars, 86 notes)

Download: Tomohito Nishiura - Deserted Amusement Park
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Professor Layton and the Curious Village Album

Composer: Tomohito Nishiura
Source: Professor Layton and the Curious Village
Genre: Folk

This sad and melancholic song is from the deserted amusement park found inside St. Mystere.
It was left to disrepair after the founder of the village died.

Last edited by NoHitter 2012-04-25T12:47:34+00:00, edited 28 times in total.

Matma Rex

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Joined March 2009

Matma Rex 2009-10-19T18:20:37+00:00

Wee, another Layton map~

Just a couple of suggestions.

- I like that SB

- Set ferris.png as BG to generate nice thumbnail. It gets covered anyway.

[Questionable]
I suggest to raise slider tick rate to 1. It sounds much better, especcially on these sliders at beginning.
Why there are so many inherited sections? At least some aren't needed, like these 4 at very beginning.
01:09:66 (1,1) - it's not a good idea to put two spinners one after one like this.

[Mysterious]
00:20:71 (1,1,1) - bah.
00:27:55 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - I don't like silent endings on each (1).
00:31:63 (1) - doesn't fit IMO.

Also star.

Lokamp

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Joined January 2009

Lokamp 2009-10-19T18:45:13+00:00

Questionable
00:26:50 (2,3) - clap the 2nd, finish the other
00:31:76 (1,3,4) - clap the 3rd, finish the others
00:41:24 (2,3) - end these sliders with a clap

Mysterious
00:51:24 (1,2,3,4) - weird spacing... make the beats further from each others...
00:57:55 (2,3,4,5) - ^
01:03:87 (1,2,3,4) - ^

Another Professor Layton song mapped... and VERY organized! Star'd ;3

Jinxy

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Jinxy 2009-10-20T08:44:43+00:00

You is pro.

You gets star.

I is bad grammar.

lol.

jericho2442

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jericho2442 2009-10-21T09:55:06+00:00

[Questionable]
00:06:50 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - move this whole combo i bit right to it lines up with the next combo, it makes it look much better
(suggestion) 01:09:13 (3,1) - this jump feels uneeded for a easy

[Mysterious]
fine to me

nice maps, star

Mashley

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Joined September 2008

Mashley 2009-10-21T11:15:55+00:00

You need to cut your mp3. Otherwise, this is a very solid map. I love those strobes.

Nachy

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Nachy 2009-10-21T14:25:18+00:00

Zzzzzzzzz~

http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?zlrywmmyjt2

Azure_Kite

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Azure_Kite 2009-10-24T11:18:54+00:00

Here's my mod

Blue = Suggestion Red = Check this

[Questionable]
An offset of 257 works best for me in this diff. Make sure that all your notes land on the correct ticks after resnapping.
No other problems found

[Mysterious]
An offset of 257 works best for me in this diff. As with questionable, make sure that all your notes land on the correct ticks after resnapping, since 1/6 timing may change them undesirably. Just go through and fix up any that are incorrect afterwards.
You may also need to reset your timing points so that they make the notes you want silenced actually silenced.
Other than that, no problems found

You've done a good job on this one, too. Starred

bagnz0r

bagnz0r 2009-10-24T18:32:14+00:00

[Mysterious]
00:28:414 - Missing note here.
00:28:678 - Missing note here.
00:29:993 - Missing note here.
00:30:256 - Missing note here.

Ekaru

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Joined July 2008

Ekaru 2009-10-25T00:21:34+00:00

Questionable:

Delete all spinners but the last one. They're excessive and don't fit.

Mysterious:

I didn't like those short repeating sliders at the beginning, they didn't really fit.

Good job otherwise, star.

NoHitter

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NoHitter 2009-10-25T06:14:07+00:00

BagnoGamer wrote:
[Mysterious]
00:28:414 - Missing note here.
00:28:678 - Missing note here.
00:29:993 - Missing note here.
00:30:256 - Missing note here.

Followed some...

Ekaru wrote:
Questionable:

Delete all spinners but the last one. They're excessive and don't fit.

Lessened amount of spinners but not all.

Andrea

Beatmap Nominator

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Andrea 2009-10-25T13:55:52+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

NoHitter

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NoHitter 2009-10-25T14:05:50+00:00

osuplayer111 wrote:
[Questionable]

00:06:57 (1) - Too far from (6).

Changed

osuplayer111 wrote:
[Mysterious]

00:09:59 (1,2) - Too close from (5).
00:12:75 (1,2) - Too close from (4).

Looks fine to me...

statementreply

Pro Tester

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Joined June 2009

statementreply 2009-10-27T14:05:10+00:00

Nice map

My suggestions:

[Mysterious]
00:52:42 (6) - Move forward 1/8 to the white tick.
00:58:74 (7) - ^
01:05:05 (6) - ^
00:53:80 (1) - Move back 1/12 to the blue tick.
01:00:08 (3) - ^
01:06:39 (1) - ^
01:09:55 (1) - ^
01:12:88 (1) - Lengthen by 1/12, ending on the blue tick.

NoHitter

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NoHitter 2009-10-27T14:16:39+00:00

statementreply wrote:
[Mysterious]
00:52:42 (6) - Move forward 1/8 to the white tick.
00:58:74 (7) - ^
01:05:05 (6) - ^
00:53:80 (1) - Move back 1/12 to the blue tick.
01:00:08 (3) - ^
01:06:39 (1) - ^
01:09:55 (1) - ^
01:12:88 (1) - Lengthen by 1/12, ending on the blue tick. Added

The map is snapped to 1/6 in that part

Armin

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Armin 2009-10-27T14:46:18+00:00

[Questionable]

No problems found.

Mysterious

00:00:257 (1,2) Clap at the end
00:07:099 (3,4) ^
00:16:046 (1,1,1,1,1) ^
01:11:309 Remove the clap at the end

That's all for me. Starred!

ccbp

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Joined August 2009

ccbp 2009-10-27T15:08:55+00:00

all good to me, have a star

Kytoxid

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Kytoxid 2009-10-27T21:32:15+00:00

[Questionable/Mysterious]

I found the Kiai times a bit random, but there were no real problems here.

[Unthinkable]

Guessing that this isn't done.

Lemme know when you finish mapping Unthinkable, and I'll pass along a star.

Last edited by Kytoxid 2009-10-28T17:37:30+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Amodeus

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Amodeus 2009-10-28T13:52:26+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Behon

Elite Mapper

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Here since the beginning

Behon 2009-10-28T18:38:46+00:00

Questionable:
00:34:993 to 00:40:849 could use some sound effects.
Mysterious has a slider tick rate of 0.5 that suits this song much better. Make this difficulty the same.

Mysterious:
01:12:888 (Spinner): Get rid of the 1 circle after this and extend the spinner to end in its place.

Lizbeth

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Lizbeth 2009-10-29T17:02:49+00:00

Mysterious
00:25:52 - place this inhertited timing section before the note, not on top.

Questionable
fine

star

Vanmonky

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Vanmonky 2009-10-29T23:01:31+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

NoHitter