1. Saya (4,24 stars, 1067 notes)

ritsu-tanaika wrote:

thats a really long song, approval?

Kocari wrote:

Tari and Kacari's Modding Queue

You called and here I am

[MARATHON]

00:47:048 (2) - Try to center that note a little bit more http://puu.sh/7ozIq.jpg Fixed

00:48:026 (5) - Try moving that note over to where the note (2) was originally at because I felt that the the transition was weird from note ending on the bottom going to all the way up again to go back down http://puu.sh/7ozSV.jpg Done!

00:53:733 (1,2,3) - I tried something like this to keep it balanced and symmetrical http://puu.sh/7ozW7.jpg I'll keep mine

00:55:689 (2,3,4) - Made the formation like this and tried to kept what you have being doing by adding the single note to where previous slider ended http://puu.sh/7ozY9.jpg I usually don't stack notes on slider tail

00:57:320 (2,3,4) - Maybe do something like this keeps balance and simple transitions to the next combo http://puu.sh/7ozZT.jpg Nopee :/

01:02:211 (5) - Move that slider but a bit to keep it straight with the previous note Not needed

01:03:026 (2) - Again place the single note on the ending slider http://puu.sh/7oA3w.jpg But it's cool

01:47:211 (4) - Move that slider end a little bit more to the left to keep it centered with the other two sliders ok!

02:04:657 (2) - Possibly move that note here to make the sequence move diagonally because where it was placed before seems a bit weird to me http://puu.sh/7oAeV.jpg I placed it like that to avoid diagonal pattern xD

02:13:624 (2) - Move over like this to form a perfect triangle and at the same time at 02:15:091 (2) - move that note to where you moved the slider to make that triangle 02:15:907 (1) - move this too what I said before because when I looked through it, I thought this would be better positions for them. Your way works too I'll keep mine >.<

02:53:733 - Moved the slider end a little to the right like this http://puu.sh/7oAqd.jpg to continue the pattern generated from this slider 02:53:424 (4) I don't like that pattern, that's why i placed it like that

03:17:537 (2) - My thing but maybe move note right here http://puu.sh/7oAvy.jpg I wanna keep a curve flow here so sorry >.<

03:45:907 (1,2,3) - Sort of have this formation I feel to bring all sliders pointing to the next note and some pointed in the middle http://puu.sh/7oADQ.jpg I don't like how you placed (1) :c

03:56:668 (2) - Move that note up a bit to match with slider (4) and putting that note directly in the center of slider (3) http://puu.sh/7oAGJ.jpg No

05:02:863 (3) - Move slider up a bit to perfectly align with note (2) I hate lineal patterns

05:24:140 - Move note 3 more spaces to the left ok desuu~~

05:43:787 (2) - Move note 2 over a bit to get http://puu.sh/7oAPU.jpg Donee~~


I did the best I could was feeling tired but I got the job done since you asked I can definitely see this beatmap ranked [centre]in the future so in the meantime get this map to as many stars needed, I will help you with anything you need just PM me

Thank youu~~
I'm really happy

• Hitsounds:

1. 00:02:863 (3) - Just to be consistent, don't you think you should remove the whistle on the head of this slider?
2. 00:31:233 (3) - Following your whistle patterns the whistle on the head of this note sounds out of place. Remove the whistle?
3. 00:43:298 (1) - How about a finish here just to emphasize the beginning of the new section. Your finish is quiet enough that it doesn't overpower the note with the current volume.
4. 00:56:015 (4) - Clap on head doesn't fit well. It sounds better without it, so try removing it.
5. 01:42:483 (2) - Missing clap
6. 02:01:233 (5) - It kinda goes against the song but it sounds so much better with a Normal addtion clap on the head instead of the auto addition clap you have.
7. 02:04:657 (2,3) - Maybe try lowering the volume of the clap on the (3)? It kind of sticks out a lot when focusing on the hitsounds.
8. 02:30:907 (3) - Missing clap note on the tail? Nevermind, I think this was intentional
9. 02:41:994 (4,5,6,7) - Maybe try adding an auto clap somewhere in here? It feels a bit bland with only normal hits for this length of time. (Try reducing the music volume and leaving effects up high to see what I mean)
10. 02:58:624 (4) - Add a normal clap to the tail? For awhile in this section you use the same hitsound pattern over and over and this goes on for about 12ish seconds.
11. 03:13:869 (5) - Is this supposed to be a Normal clap?
12. 03:13:950 (6) - if the above mod applies, auto clap on tail?
13. 03:54:059 (2) - Missing auto clap on tail. Unless this is intentional.
14. 03:55:689 (4) - Missing auto clap on tail?
15. 04:13:135 (2) - Auto clap on head?
16. 04:22:428 (1) - I'm guessing this whistle body is intentional?
17. 04:47:537 (1) - 5% volume on tail?
18. 05:14:602 (4) - Remove whistle from the end of the slider? It feels rather forced and stands out.
19. 05:26:994 (7) - Again, not sure if you intended to skip this auto clap on the tail here or not.
20. 05:47:863 (6) - ^
21. 06:03:352 (5) - Try an auto clap on the tail of this, and listen to this section again.
22. 06:16:885 (3) - whistle on head?

• Rhythm/Placement:

1. 00:21:124 (1,2,3,4) - Any reason why these aren't evenly spaced? looks a bit messy on this end how the (4) is way out compared to (1,2,3) | Try checking the distance spacings and maybe move them up by .1 or something each time.
2. 00:29:439 (2,3) - It might make more sense to have this start with sliders on the white tick to follow the music better. Like 00:31:559 (1,2,3,4) -
3. 02:35:472 (4) - Stack the tail end with the previous (2) instead of 02:33:841 (4) -
4. 03:42:483 (4,5) - Nazi stack better(or can you without breaking too many blankets?)
5. 06:11:178 (7) - Nazi. Maybe move the tail end of this over to the left 1 grid.
6. 06:16:761 (2) - This should be 1/8th back on the red tick no? Slowing down to 25% has the note playing there.
7. 06:39:222 (3) - Again on this. I'm not sure but it hits slightly before the blue tick, maybe on a 1/8th?

P A N wrote:

legendary lazy useless mod
03:32:374 (4,1) - move to 224|260 for better blanket
03:43:787 (3) - better blanket?

nice map nice hs nice bg nice avatar good luck.

1. 01:13:298 (5) -
2. 01:47:211 (4) -
3. 02:31:885 (5) -
4. 02:49:494 (4) -

1. 04:59:276 (2) - Finish(Start)
2. 04:59:928 (5) - ^

1. I recommend AR8 for this map due to the nature of the song and the map structure
2. offset-15
3. 03:24:059 (3) - Is hard to beat　x36 y180
4. 05:32:863 (1) - This variable is very dangerous、Try to as shown in the figure?
   Pattern１http://puu.sh/8zQCn.jpg、２http://puu.sh/8zQTG.jpg、３http://puu.sh/8zPem.jpg
   If you accept　05:32:863 (1) - Remove　whistle(End)
   06:15:907 (1) - Umm....How about this one?http://puu.sh/8zPEN.jpg

1. Beat Snap Divisor is no problem in 1/4
2. bit rate of mp3 is still more than 192 kbps

1. 00:13:950 (2) - add whistle(head)?
2. 00:32:537 (4) - Ctrl+G?
3. 04:06:124 (5) - add clap (tail)
4. 05:04:168 (5) - same 05:09:385 (5)
5. 05:20:472 (2) - remove clap, add auto additions finish
6. 06:16:763 (2) - move 06:16:722

Lanturn wrote:

BG Suggestion: http://puu.sh/7xQKD.jpg

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sb thing

1. 00:02:898 (3,4) - Maybe make this a better blanket
2. 00:25:072 (1,2) - Overlap looks squished and not very well done, I would avoid it or make 1's shape less crowded
3. 00:40:724 (1) - Slider slow down is sudden, too slow, and doesn't play very well
4. 00:57:355 (2) - Instead of having the slider tick be so loud, why not have another object in its place. The rhythm will be more interesting, and will be more fun to play. Having an active hitsound on a passive object (the slider tick) is pretty blah. The vocals should not be emphasized here, the beat should
5. 01:10:724 (1) - ^ and basically for all of the sliders that do this
6. 01:22:463 (1) - Same slider slow down thingy
7. 01:26:050 (4,1) - (Nazi) Blanket can be improved
8. 01:45:289 (5,1) - Overlap doesnt look very appealing and looks crowded
9. 02:15:616 (4) - I would stagger this slider a bit from its place so that its not completely overlapped by 02:14:637 (1) - making it easier to read
10. 02:21:159 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Awkward flow, you go down with 2 to 3 and then to the left suddenly and then back again right with the slider
11. 02:25:072 (1) - Slider slow down thing
12. 02:38:605 (2,4) - Avoid this overlap lmao
13. 03:08:768 (1,2,3) - Lower the spacing here, you just went from anti-jumps to huge ass jumps
14. 03:43:822 (3) - ctrl+g for nicer flow
15. 05:32:898 (1,2) - Wow this slow down is VERY confusing because of how 05:32:898 (1) - is stacked directly underneath 05:32:246 (5) - . Their sizes are about the same plus the momentum from the previous pattern will cause a player to sliderbreak here
16. 06:45:942 - Maybe add a spinner for a fade out effect?

Lust wrote:

From #modreq

wow this looks a lot like my older style

[Saya]
Are you really going to name a diff "Saya" when it is already in the title of the song Yeah
HP+1 should provide for nice balance. Also will help add pressure with all those artsy NCs you do

1. 00:02:898 (3,4) - Maybe make this a better blanket
2. 00:25:072 (1,2) - Overlap looks squished and not very well done, I would avoid it or make 1's shape less crowded I love it :3
3. 00:40:724 (1) - Slider slow down is sudden, too slow, and doesn't play very well Nah ;D
4. 00:57:355 (2) - Instead of having the slider tick be so loud, why not have another object in its place. The rhythm will be more interesting, and will be more fun to play. Having an active hitsound on a passive object (the slider tick) is pretty blah. The vocals should not be emphasized here, the beat should Nahh
5. 01:10:724 (1) - ^ and basically for all of the sliders that do this Just nah
6. 01:22:463 (1) - Same slider slow down thingy No changee owo
7. 01:26:050 (4,1) - (Nazi) Blanket can be improved Fixed
8. 01:45:289 (5,1) - Overlap doesnt look very appealing and looks crowded No changees
9. 02:15:616 (4) - I would stagger this slider a bit from its place so that its not completely overlapped by 02:14:637 (1) - making it easier to read Ok :/
10. 02:21:159 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Awkward flow, you go down with 2 to 3 and then to the left suddenly and then back again right with the slider Changed a bit :3
11. 02:25:072 (1) - Slider slow down thing
12. 02:38:605 (2,4) - Avoid this overlap lmao Ok
13. 03:08:768 (1,2,3) - Lower the spacing here, you just went from anti-jumps to huge ass jumps But these jumps are easy ;3
14. 03:43:822 (3) - ctrl+g for nicer flow Yeah
15. 05:32:898 (1,2) - Wow this slow down is VERY confusing because of how 05:32:898 (1) - is stacked directly underneath 05:32:246 (5) - . Their sizes are about the same plus the momentum from the previous pattern will cause a player to sliderbreak here Sliderbreak OP
16. 06:45:942 - Maybe add a spinner for a fade out effect? No I dont like too much the spinners :/

-Neipezi wrote:

pkhg owo/ Haii \owo
from #modreq

[Saya]
-Sources "Little Busters! Ecstasy" And "リトル バスターズ!" Change Ok
03:58:822 (8) - grid up 1? Fixed x.x
04:33:876 (1) - add to clap tail? i hear the drum Added
04:34:203 (2) - clap add? No
04:35:344 (6) - ^ Added
04:37:463 (3) - change the sound of a drum hitsound? lol I forgot it, thanks :3
04:38:116 (5) - add to clap head
04:38:931 - ,04:39:094 - how about add a circle here? I'll think about that :/
04:57:518 - ^ ^
04:59:637 (3) - NC add? Ok
05:03:550 (4) - crtl + g? I wanna keep this spaced properly owo
05:41:050 (3) - x228 y64 and 05:41:376 (4) - x304 y84 move? (4) and (6) By the interval is not good. Fixed
06:04:203 (1) - add to clap head? I'll just keep the finish
06:36:811 (3) - when I play this inconvenience, and sounds awkward. would you like to add circle 06:37:137 - instead? Ok, done >.o
06:33:550 (5) - NC add? Not needed I guess
06:37:463 (4) - arrow to add here? ^
06:38:442 - do you want to add a circle? No
06:40:724 (1,2,3,4) - 1/3 timing Really thanks, idk why I didn't tried it before :3
06:44:311 (5,7) - NC add? Not needed :/

good lucky~ and i like it Hitsound

EvilElvis wrote:

yo
01:02:572 (6,1,2,3) - well i don't like the way gow it plays, but sadly can't any idea to suggest so ignore me lol
01:21:811 (1,2,3,4) - this patterns flows strange, suggestion (3 and 4 stacked): Ok, but I didn't moved (2,3)

SPOILER

01:24:746 (1,1) - stack them please But it's cool without it, btw I'll think a bit more xD
01:27:681 (1,2) - about this and same overlaps : well, maybe it's way too subjective, but it looks messy and killing all movement here. Consider moving sliders like this : Ok, done

SPOILER

also 01:27:681 (1,2,3) - try to add finishes on heads
01:32:898 (1,2,3) - ^same about finishes
^if you accepting finishes here, you can continue this hitsound pattern by adding finish here 01:34:203 (1) - on head, 01:34:692 (3) - here and here 01:35:181 (6) - again on head
and ofc dont forget to use this hitsounds pattern for the rest of kiai
I tried it but I didn't liked it, it doesn't fit for me :/
02:18:550 (1,2) - you can move them like this:

SPOILER

^if you accept this move 02:19:529 (3) - to something about x:233 y:25 to avoid big jump Done
03:24:746 (7,8,1) - make a better triangle here please Thanks for pointing out this, I played a bit with the area around it too :3

SPOILER

03:38:116 (1,2,3) - well it looks and flows bad, consider moving it like this : Thanks for pointing out this too, I just ctrl+g (3)

SPOILER

05:22:137 (1,1) - stack them Same as before x3
05:41:050 (3) - you should add nc here Added here 05:40:724 (1) - instead
06:16:757 (2,3,4) - it plays kinda sad, really, but i can't suggest anything because i have no ideas yeah :c

Pretty nice map, just don't forget to check finishes and overlaps \o/

Aka wrote:

hi :х remember u req me to mod this? i bet no lol I don't remember ._.

anyway, there is nothing really to complain about, im gonna mention just some minor stuff


general stuff

・imo the red combo colour youre using now is way too bright and sharp. on 100% dim this colour feels bad imo.. mind changing it to r238 g53 b57? its a bit softer for eyes and doesnt hurt anything ty <3


saya

・01:19:203 (4) - mind ctrl-j there for smoother flow? Done!

SPOILER

・01:51:159 (1,2) - blanket ;о Fixed
・02:01:594 (1,2,3) - it has pretty strange flow overall and completely differs a lot from your style.. you can make them flow better ..maybe at least like this I don't think so, I've already used it before and here too 02:06:811 (1,2,3) - but rotated

SPOILER

・03:06:811 (1) - the 0.25x is way tooooo slow. i testplayed nearly 5 times and somehow sliderbroke several times D: could u add at least +0.5? ..for every 0.25x slider I already asked for testplays and this 05:32:898 (1) - seems to be the problem, so no changes
・05:30:616 (2,3) - flow is broken there, by rotating the (3) slider im sure it should be solved but i like it :c
・06:17:898 (1,1,1) - - i missed there twice while testplaying lol. not sure 100% why but i hear a sound there 06:18:061 - which is messing up the rhythm of your (1,1,1) pattern.. stick to the rhythm you did before there 06:12:029 (3,4,1) - . Changed a bit :3

SPOILER

・06:39:855 (4,5) - as you were following the piano, they should be snapped by 1/3 to make players be sure these 06:40:724 (1,2,3,4) - are 1/3 I didn't noticed that is wasn't 1/3 thanks ;3


and thats all from me ;_; i like your style there i think its time to make this to pending already and move further imo, good luck and im sorry :'c

Gamu wrote:

hello~ Request from Gamu's Standard Modding Queue

[ General]

1. You shouldn't have both silence the soft-slidertick4 and soft-sliderslide4. I'd suggest that you remove the slidertick4.
   

   Ranking Criteria wrote:

   you cannot silence both slider ticks and slider slides together.

   I'll see later what i can do
2. About Source: リトルバスターズ! エクスタシー Thanks
   Space is not necessary between the "リトル" and "バスターズ!".
3. About Tags: 朱鷺戸沙耶
   Do you want to add the "character name" in Japanese? Yeah

[ Saya]

1. 00:03:876 (5) - 1 grid down in order to create the perfect triangle. I dont want a perfect triangle, I want (3) in the middle of (5)'s path
   
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2. 00:29:474 (2) - Why don't you unify the spacing of the Next and Prev in order to better the appearance? I feel it is really good. Done i guess :/
3. 00:32:572 (4) - Look at the your flow of ever, I think that this should be CTRL + G. It's a little variation, I'll keep it
4. 00:36:485 (3) - I prefer this form is change to be the same as the 00:36:811 (1). Idk how to explain my mapping style but this is one of the things that i always do :3
   
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5. 00:51:159 (1) - Flow to the next circle is bad from this slider. You need to review again the orientation. Ok, Changed a bit
   
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6. 01:10:724 (1) - Things like same as above. Move to x:252 y:188. It's on purpose, that's how i map
7. 01:24:583 (1,1) - I think these new combos are not necessary. It is not a particularly complex sound, and i don't know the meaning to add a new combos. There's not a meaning, just it's cool x3
8. 01:30:942 (3) - I prefer a straight slider here. Do you think flow will be better? Changed a bit
9. 03:08:931 (1,1) - The same as 01:24:583 (1,1) Same too xD
10. 04:16:594 (4) - Add a clap at the end point. it's missing. Added
11. 04:19:855 (1) - ^ at the start point.^
12. 04:22:300 (5) - ^ ^
13. 04:32:898 (6,1) - Swap these new combos in order to maintain the consistency of the new combo. Ok
14. 04:38:116 (5) - Add a new combo for the same reason as above.Ok
15. 04:53:768 (6,1) - The same as 04:32:898 (6,1).
16. 04:56:376 (5) - The same as 04:38:116 (5).
17. 05:21:974 (1,1) - The same as 01:24:583 (1,1).Fixed all
18. 05:01:594~05:19:855 - I will propose a some normal-hitclap. if you want to fix them, i recommend that you fix all. I'm ignoring all the drum sounds and following the vocals, also I prefer whistles
    -05:03:550 (4) - Add a normal-hitclap (Additons: Normal and clap) at the start point. In addition, remove a whistle.
    -05:06:159 (2) - ^
    -05:08:768 (3) - ^
    -05:11:376 (3) - ^
    -05:13:985 (3) - ^
    -05:16:594 (2) - ^
    -05:18:550 (5) - Here is the end point.
19. 05:39:420 (4) - Add a new combo here!Added

gooood map <3