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Kalafina - Sprinter

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Topic Starter
ccbp
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年2月1日 星期一 at 14:32:02

Artist: Kalafina
Title: Sprinter
Source: Kara no Kyoukai
Tags: kara no kyoukai sogasogamo cc kalafina kajiura yuki vibty99
BPM: 160
Filesize: 4452kb
Play Time: 03:24
Difficulties Available:
  1. hanyuu (4.98 stars, 733 notes)
  2. Insane (5 stars, 619 notes)
  3. Normal+ (4.53 stars, 321 notes)
  4. SOGABAKAMO (4.87 stars, 622 notes)
  5. Vibty99's Easy (1.09 stars, 85 notes)
Download: Kalafina - Sprinter
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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SOGABAKAMO (made by SOGASOGAMO ) and mine finished on25th. Oct

Special thanks for ero99 ( Vibty99) making a easy difficulty for me, he's good.

Anyone who has downloaded this map before 11/21, plz redownload, thx

Hanyuu's diff updated in Dec. 4.
Furawa
statementreply
too hard for me @_@
yaya
Your message contains too few characters.
Ana_Coppola
star~~~
square jump in soga diff~~warning~XD
xierbaliti
:)
TakeiHisashi
soga difficulty is more difficult than cc's,soga is a deivll~
Real_Imouto
shooting star
azuki
kakkoii >A<
-SiN-
soga, i dunno you're so pretty in this map. xD
Vibty99
Lisa
:( hentai soga
Alace
so many circles XD
miccoliasms
Happy Halloween >w</
dkey
Ranked期待
kioukiou
:)
Topic Starter
ccbp

kioukiou wrote:

:)
>A< oneesama~
MegaManEXE
Love the diamond jumps in SOGA's diff :D

CC's diff owned me lol

But it's a nice mapset, nothing really stuck out to me as being clearly wrong, so star time
Mafiamaster
Tags~
"kara no kyoukai sogasogamo cc kalafina kajiura yuki vibty99"
What or who is vibty99? Remove it from the tags unless it absolutely has to be there.

Source~
"kara no kyoukai"
Capitalize the source: "Kara no Kyoukai"

Easy~

Add source and tags.
ero99 made this? Add it the tags.

SOGABAKAMO~

Add source and tags.

CC's Difficulty~
Change difficulty name to something else. We know it's your difficulty but it doesn't tell us how hard or easy it is.
00:30:07 (2) - Note is offscreen.
More hitsounds would be nice.

So 1 Easy and 2 Insane's with border line max points? I recommend making a Normal.
Blackiris
KnK5, yay!
great maps - star!
yaya
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: 10006 Kalafina - Sprinter.rar
Topic Starter
ccbp
铁桶美
Mystearica
I don't think SOGA made that difficulty, feels way too easy to be a SOGA map >_>

Anyway, pretty good map, good luck with it and in the future.
nomedeusuarionaodisp
I don't know what I can suggest or try fixing here, possibly because Normal isn't finished and that's my area. But still, overall...
- Try removing some of the deathstreams, and try mapping more parts of the song. It's probably just me being myself, but... all those "hit hit hit hit pause hit hit" sound a bit weird, in my opinion.
- Make the map longer, please. Even though Insane's already at 14m... but you know, it cuts off right at the best part of the song! How come? :( I'm sure you can reduce the overall score by playing around with some of the combos.

...And now that I've read this post again, oh wow I'm awful. Nothing but personal quirks. But, even so... please condier my second point. This song is way too good to be mapped only halfway through - just think of it as a, uh, final Ouendan map, and that will give you the strength necessary to make this map simply amazing, even if it's a 5 minutes song.
Topic Starter
ccbp

nomedeusuarionaodisp wrote:

I don't know what I can suggest or try fixing here, possibly because Normal isn't finished and that's my area. But still, overall...
- Try removing some of the deathstreams, and try mapping more parts of the song. It's probably just me being myself, but... all those "hit hit hit hit pause hit hit" sound a bit weird, in my opinion.
- Make the map longer, please. Even though Insane's already at 14m... but you know, it cuts off right at the best part of the song! How come? :( I'm sure you can reduce the overall score by playing around with some of the combos.

...And now that I've read this post again, oh wow I'm awful. Nothing but personal quirks. But, even so... please condier my second point. This song is way too good to be mapped only halfway through - just think of it as a, uh, final Ouendan map, and that will give you the strength necessary to make this map simply amazing, even if it's a 5 minutes song.
Some nice modding here. :)

First I'm gonna tell you is that, I make plans before I map the song, including the placement of notes, difficulty, length and etc. I get your point, and I can see your passion to this song, but sorry I can't make any major changes to insane (if you are only talking about that). It's already finished. Even though I can reduce some of the streams/ OA/ etc. etc. Believe it or not, a 5-minute-map like this would be the way over 20m.

Normal is still under WIP. Since I'm running out of ideas now, it would probably take some more time before I finish the whole map.

Sincerely thanks for your suggestions, they do help me to make my maps better in the future. :)
Aakiha
rank期待
Sleepman
nice map~
Cyril Scarlet
:P ☆~
Hanyuu
Topic Starter
ccbp

Hanyuu wrote:

star :)
Oh my hanyuu you've made the maximum score in your diff beyond the rankable line. >_>
Can you make it within 17million, and make the diff suitable to that score? Otherwise it will probably be in trouble to get ranked. >_>

Another choice is I can apply your map to be approved, you don't need to make any changes to your maps.
Hanyuu
you can change what you want or remove it :D
Topic Starter
ccbp

Hanyuu wrote:

you can change what you want or remove it :D
:o
Faust
Ohh. I've been hoping for a beatmap of this soundtrack to surface! Thanks Vibty, you did a great job on it! ;)
minyeob
Ranked 期待 支持.

[Ero]
Pro.

[SOGA - Normal+ - Hanyuu]
Lead in time 不一致

[SOGA]
Evil ^^

[Hanyuu]
If you want to decrease the max score. Just add a break ^^

[Insane]
Pure/Easy map ^^
Most awesome diff.
Topic Starter
ccbp
All fixed!
Thank you very much miny. :)
minyeob
All right.
Starrodkirby86
Sorry about the pop. >:

[Vibty99's Easy]:
This difficulty I'm really confused about...mainly of the 2 minute intro. The longest I've seen is Light Song, 45 seconds or so...And I'm not really in any idea of what to do here. Exclusive Storyboard prompting to skip? @.@ No idea...

02:26:326 (1,2) - Spacing error. ): Maybe distance (1) farther away?

[Normal+]:
Hmm...I see SC:1, and a whole lot of them...but there aren't any custom hitsounds for that?

[SOGABAKAMO]:
wwwwwwwwwwwwwww soga awwwwwwwesome

[hanyuu]:
This difficulty barely has any hitsounds, if any at all. o_e On the plus side, the mapping is well-done, making some sort of balance. However, I noticed that there's a bunch of Custom Override 2s for Normal, which are non-existant (N:C2, that is). Check that out, please~

Easy and Insane seem to have NC:2 as well, but they're on a virtually mute part (Those muted spinners), so I don't think they'll concern anyone.

This map is awesome, though. ^^
Topic Starter
ccbp

Starrodkirby86 wrote:

Sorry about the pop. >:

[Vibty99's Easy]:
This difficulty I'm really confused about...mainly of the 2 minute intro. The longest I've seen is Light Song, 45 seconds or so...And I'm not really in any idea of what to do here. Exclusive Storyboard prompting to skip? @.@ No idea... No idea as well...>_>

02:26:326 (1,2) - Spacing error. ): Maybe distance (1) farther away? fixed

[Normal+]:
Hmm...I see SC:1, and a whole lot of them...but there aren't any custom hitsounds for that? fixed

[SOGABAKAMO]:
wwwwwwwwwwwwwww soga awwwwwwwesome yea

[hanyuu]:
This difficulty barely has any hitsounds, if any at all. o_e On the plus side, the mapping is well-done, making some sort of balance. However, I noticed that there's a bunch of Custom Override 2s for Normal, which are non-existant (N:C2, that is). Check that out, please~ I added some hitsounds for hanyuu, and fixed the custom override problem.

Easy and Insane seem to have NC:2 as well, but they're on a virtually mute part (Those muted spinners), so I don't think they'll concern anyone. fixed

This map is awesome, though. ^^
AngelHoney
Insane

00:07:388 (9) - 這個slider感覺怪怪的
00:50:326 (1) - 這一段開始的finish聲有點響?(也許是我個人的問題吧0.0
01:20:138 (8) - 移除?
01:33:638 (8) - ^ (01:33:450 (7) - 變為slider ?
01:35:138 (8) - ^
01:38:138 (8) - 移除 ?
02:07:013 (2,3) - 感覺好奇怪 (02:07:763 (5) - 移除 ?
02:13:013 (2) - 移除 ? 或者這一段連打重做?

感覺這圖的連打稍微掛下...(特別是排列...都是原地連打...

hanyuu

02:26:326 (2) - new combo ?

SOGABAKAMO

nice

Normal+

nice

Normal

感覺是Normal+的半成品....更像是Easy...

Vibty99's Easy

中間段的slider很吵0.0


nice map :) :)

star~
Topic Starter
ccbp

AngelHoney wrote:

Insane

00:07:388 (9) - 這個slider感覺怪怪的 你说得对
00:50:326 (1) - 這一段開始的finish聲有點響?(也許是我個人的問題吧0.0 我喜欢响的soft finish 0.0//////
01:20:138 (8) - 移除?
01:33:638 (8) - ^ (01:33:450 (7) - 變為slider ?
01:35:138 (8) - ^
01:38:138 (8) - 移除 ?
02:07:013 (2,3) - 感覺好奇怪 (02:07:763 (5) - 移除 ?
02:13:013 (2) - 移除 ? 或者這一段連打重做? 以上我觉得没有特别的问题

感覺這圖的連打稍微掛下...(特別是排列...都是原地連打... 不错
hanyuu

02:26:326 (2) - new combo ?

SOGABAKAMO

nice

Normal+

nice

Normal

感覺是Normal+的半成品....更像是Easy... 没错,因为我改过名字了,你看到的normal已经永远的消失了……

Vibty99's Easy

中間段的slider很吵0.0


nice map :) :)

star~
总而言之,这张图是我比较早期的作品,现在看来当然是觉得有很多的问题,不过我想还是就这样保留原来的样子,也算是我作图经历中的一段重要的回忆吧。
Breeze
SB code:
SPOILER
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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用记事本打开Vibty99's Easy的osb文件
[Events]之后找到这些code
[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"sprinter.jpg"
//Break Periods
2,176526,180886
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)

//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,0,0,0

用我的code复制过去覆盖上面红色的部分
SB文件夹解压后放进歌曲文件夹就可以,然后再full submit
Download: SB.rar
Starrodkirby86
Let's do this.
minyeob
Let's do this.
Furawa
yeah
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