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你好!
基本上沒看出什麼大問題, 請容許我小nazi一下 (.

[General]
  1. Artist是Hinata Itigo才對吧? 沒意外的話如果不是特殊狀況都是大寫 (還是說其實有特殊狀況?!)


[Insane]
  1. 00:12:013 (2) - 這個改成彎的部分偏左邊跟00:12:643 (4) - 一樣可能會比較好看, 而且(1)是在(2)的右邊, 大概會flow一點
  2. 00:20:824 (4) - 我覺得這個跟00:19:146 (4) - overlap比較好一點, 這樣(1)~(4)的flow會變成直線. 相同的00:24:181 (4) - 也是放在x:168, y:304這附近比較好點
  3. 00:44:531 (3) - 這好像有點太靠近(4)了, 這樣(3,4)之間會有點擠擠的. (3)往左邊一點吧
  4. 00:47:468 (2,3,4) - 這樣好看些 (座標: (3) - > x:125, y:223, (4) - > x:101, y:135, 調完之後記得後面的(1)也調整一下)
  5. 01:02:992 (4,5) - 我覺得這中間可以再加個note 就跟01:02:468 (2) - 一樣. 因為(1,2)是同個距離, (4,5)也是同個距離, 而(4,5)之間的節奏比較疏一點自然就弱了一些


[愛撫's Hard]
  1. 00:31:104 (5) - 有點nazi, 不過能在往右邊偏個15度左右
  2. 01:05:510 (1,2,3,4) - 不等距嗎Q_Q 都弄成跳也不錯 (?


[Normal]
  1. 00:08:447 (1,2) - 可能我有點排斥這類flow出現在normal裡吧..總之這樣有點不是很乾淨就是了, 新手可能會把頭尾顛到過來按 (不過你覺得沒事的話就沒事..


[sammy's Easy]
  1. 00:02:153 (2) - 感覺這個能延長到白線(00:02:573 - )? 紅線上面那個音也沒有什麼必要去跟就是了
  2. 00:17:678 (1) - 換成slider然後結尾在00:18:097 - 去跟那個clap音?


這到底是日文歌還是中文歌啊...(ˊ=w=ˋ)
祝rank!
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happy623 wrote:

總算來了

General

  1. 考慮也把製作公司的名字也加進去 " Noesis " 加了
  2. 注意其實偏黑的note在玩的時候玩家把光暗調到最低會什麼都看不了233 你书的对。。已经换了

Normal

  1. 00:14:321 (7) - 我的話會把 他不折返直接到 00:14:740 - 完結, 因為你跟的是vocal 這樣比較不違和 改了~
  2. 00:34:461 (7) - 同上 改了~
  3. 00:26:069 (2) - 放上一點blanket? 之前没包好0.0

Insane

  1. orz都找不到什麼

orz 沒什麼好找的 , 快找BAT吧 好吧0.0 我去找狗
感谢mod~ :D

Flask wrote:

你好!
基本上沒看出什麼大問題, 請容許我小nazi一下 (. 没问题~nazi也很好

[General]
  1. Artist是Hinata Itigo才對吧? 沒意外的話如果不是特殊狀況都是大寫 (還是說其實有特殊狀況?!) 没啥特殊情况。。已经改成大写了


[Insane]
  1. 00:12:013 (2) - 這個改成彎的部分偏左邊跟00:12:643 (4) - 一樣可能會比較好看, 而且(1)是在(2)的右邊, 大概會flow一點 好 当时是想着这个和4方向相对所以做的 改了确实更舒服一些
  2. 00:20:824 (4) - 我覺得這個跟00:19:146 (4) - overlap比較好一點, 這樣(1)~(4)的flow會變成直線. 相同的00:24:181 (4) - 也是放在x:168, y:304這附近比較好點 这个没改 因为不太会做遮挡 感觉我遮挡做完之后好难看
  3. 00:44:531 (3) - 這好像有點太靠近(4)了, 這樣(3,4)之間會有點擠擠的. (3)往左邊一點吧 好的
  4. 00:47:468 (2,3,4) - 這樣好看些 (座標: (3) - > x:125, y:223, (4) - > x:101, y:135, 調完之後記得後面的(1)也調整一下) good~
  5. 01:02:992 (4,5) - 我覺得這中間可以再加個note 就跟01:02:468 (2) - 一樣. 因為(1,2)是同個距離, (4,5)也是同個距離, 而(4,5)之間的節奏比較疏一點自然就弱了一些 这个没加 因为音乐这里就是两处不一样 前面多个鼓点急促一些 间距用一样的是为了造这种先急促然后舒缓的感觉额


[Normal]
  1. 00:08:447 (1,2) - 可能我有點排斥這類flow出現在normal裡吧..總之這樣有點不是很乾淨就是了, 新手可能會把頭尾顛到過來按 (不過你覺得沒事的話就沒事.. 我觉得其实还好吧0.0 懒得改了


這到底是日文歌還是中文歌啊...(ˊ=w=ˋ) 日本人唱的中文歌=L= :)
祝rank! 感谢
真心感谢mod啊0.0 简直好人!
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KiyoshiX101 wrote:

[Hard]
00:42:013 (1) - As much as I love this beautiful slider, that much I hate to tell you that it MIGHT me unrankable cause it's blocking the path of the slider which must be clear from the beginning to the end. i think it's clear enough since the slider end is not overlapped entirely
This one's is fun to play, nothing else to see, great job :3.

happy623 wrote:

yf's Hard

  1. 00:33:202 (1) - 刪NC, 然後 00:34:461 (5) - 加NC, 因為你本來的NC pattern在 00:13:272 (1) - NC了
  2. 00:35:720 (7) - 同樣跟一下你的pattern, 這裡也應該NC, 後面的NC刪走
  3. 00:59:636 (1) - 同樣刪NC, 你NC在 00:52:922 (5) 也沒啊, 刪了之後在 01:00:475 (7) - 加NC

NC有些小改动:3

Flask wrote:

你好!
基本上沒看出什麼大問題, 請容許我小nazi一下 (.

[General]

[愛撫's Hard]
  1. 00:31:104 (5) - 有點nazi, 不過能在往右邊偏個15度左右 hao
  2. 01:05:510 (1,2,3,4) - 不等距嗎Q_Q 都弄成跳也不錯 (? 算啦
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[KiyoshiX101]
00:25:650 (2,3) - Make a blanket? done
00:25:650 (2,3) - You could do that here too.done
00:31:104 (4,1) - Also fix the blanket here.done
00:55:440 (1,2) - Maybe reverse the slider so the flow helps the new players to go to the next circle easier, I find it difficult as it is now.
nope...Making everything easy to read will be boring
[happy623]
恩沒什麼特別問題
>A<
[Flask]
00:02:153 (2) - 感覺這個能延長到白線(00:02:573 - )? 紅線上面那個音也沒有什麼必要去跟就是了 done
00:17:678 (1) - 換成slider然後結尾在00:18:097 - 去跟那個clap音?
我更喜欢这种粘滞感0 0

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posted
okay~all diffs are updated
posted
Hi, from QQ.

Insane

  1. 00:25:125 (4) - 這個我好像聽不到背景音樂有音;反而我在00:24:601 跟00:24:706 都聽到了
  2. 00:25:020 (3,4) - 這個1/4 Prev: 7.64x -o-
  3. 00:39:496 (1,2,3,4) - 這裡的梗可以跟00:42:852 (1,2,3,4) 一樣
  4. 01:04:671 (1,2,3,4) - 這個可以玩更遠的梗,因為01:04:671 (1) 比01:03:831 (1) 更大聲

yf's Hard

  1. 00:11:279 - 漏了個音
  2. 00:31:838 (8) - 這個放在00:31:419 才對音欸 ._.

Normal

  1. 01:05:510 (1,2,3) - 這裡太難,又stack又1/2,用紅點做個滑條就好 :3

薩米's Easy

  1. 00:17:678 (1) - 這個NC去掉,這個NC在我看來是沒意義的,他跟00:17:258 (3) 這個是同一段的音樂,所以不用NC
  2. 00:31:104 (4,1) - 請包好
  3. 00:47:048 (2,3) - 這樣放flow得更好啊
  4. 01:05:510 (1) - 這個用紅點來凸出中間那兩個音吧

posted
Insane
00:31:943 (1) - 我注意到你用了很多这种非常偏的右下角位置。这个位置由于是板子死角,玩起来是比较卡手的。不推荐用。
00:33:832 (2) - ^
其他的等你re了我再全部都看一遍,到时候edit这个post就好
posted
[General]


  1. Fine.
[Easy]
  1. 00:06:768 (3) - 00:27:747 (4) - blanket
  2. 00:08:447 (1,3) - 00:25:650 (2) - 其实在我看来这些blanket都没有做到最好 不过EZ无所谓 你看着修吧 上面那些就建

    议改改
  3. 00:31:104 (4) - 歪了 注意间距 拉一下屁股的锚点
[Normal]
  1. 00:09:286 (2,3,4) - 考虑一下3根同样的滑条各转120度摆法 http://puu.sh/7vX5l.jpg或http://puu.sh/7vX7j.jpg 我偏

    向前者
  2. 00:18:097 (6) - 弯一点或者索性变直的
  3. 00:31:104 (4) - 复制00:32:153 (2) - 然后CTRL+H+J
[Hard]

  • AR+1
  1. 00:12:223 (2) - 这里小跳而不是00:12:433 (3) -
  2. 01:06:034 (4) - add
[Insane]

  • HP-1
  1. 00:06:559 (1) - 间距有点远 try 260,281
  2. 00:11:279 (5) - delete 这个太突兀了 也不好听
  3. 00:31:419 (5) - ^
  4. 00:44:111 (2) - 这里而不是前面
  5. 00:45:999 (4) - 00:46:629 (3) - 和这个开头stack
  6. 01:06:139 (4) - 太远了 移到450,222 花花和lks都用过这类梗 看起来高大上 考虑一下

7天怎么还是1kd :o
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IamKwaN wrote:

Hi, from QQ.

Insane

  1. 00:25:125 (4) - 這個我好像聽不到背景音樂有音;反而我在00:24:601 跟00:24:706 都聽到了 你书的对
  2. 00:25:020 (3,4) - 這個1/4 Prev: 7.64x -o- 错觉系列
  3. 00:39:496 (1,2,3,4) - 這裡的梗可以跟00:42:852 (1,2,3,4) 一樣 没必要吧感觉
  4. 01:04:671 (1,2,3,4) - 這個可以玩更遠的梗,因為01:04:671 (1) 比01:03:831 (1) 更大聲
嗯 调整了


Normal

  1. 01:05:510 (1,2,3) - 這裡太難,又stack又1/2,用紅點做個滑條就好 :3
感觉这样节奏听着比较好听 先保留


Chloe wrote:

[General]


  1. Fine.
[Normal]
  1. 00:09:286 (2,3,4) - 考虑一下3根同样的滑条各转120度摆法 http://puu.sh/7vX5l.jpg或http://puu.sh/7vX7j.jpg 我偏

    向前者 感觉完全没必要。。
  2. 00:18:097 (6) - 弯一点或者索性变直的 变弯了
  3. 00:31:104 (4) - 复制00:32:153 (2) - 然后CTRL+H+J
同觉得没必要

[Insane]

  • HP-1 你书的对
  1. 00:06:559 (1) - 间距有点远 try 260,281 2.0X一点不远啊。。这个音比较重的
  2. 00:11:279 (5) - delete 这个太突兀了 也不好听
  3. 00:31:419 (5) - ^ 这里感觉听着不错的 不过前面有个地方有点突兀删了
  4. 00:44:111 (2) - 这里而不是前面 啥意思
  5. 00:45:999 (4) - 00:46:629 (3) - 和这个开头stack 这里是1.2距离的梗
  6. 01:06:139 (4) - 太远了 移到450,222 花花和lks都用过这类梗 看起来高大上 考虑一下 嗯哼~

7天怎么还是1kd :o 我也不清楚啊 之前ora球摸也是 7天了1KD 不知道啥情况
感谢mod啊:D
posted
just changed Chloe's first point

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[IamKwan]
00:17:678 (1) - 這個NC去掉,這個NC在我看來是沒意義的,他跟00:17:258 (3) 這個是同一段的音樂,所以不用NC
OK
00:31:104 (4,1) - 請包好
OK
00:47:048 (2,3) - 這樣放flow得更好啊
其实通过flow的反向强调4是本意...
01:05:510 (1) - 這個用紅點來凸出中間那兩個音吧

[Chloe]
00:06:768 (3) - 00:27:747 (4) - blanket
00:08:447 (1,3) - 00:25:650 (2) - 其实在我看来这些blanket都没有做到最好 不过EZ无所谓 你看着修吧 上面那些就建议改改
00:31:104 (4) - 歪了 注意间距 拉一下屁股的锚点

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[Metadata]
Title:Nyan Hou no Outa
TitleUnicode:娘包のおうた
Artist:Hinata Ichigo
ArtistUnicode:日向苺
Creator:kamisamaaa
Version:sammy's Easy
Source:Cure Girl
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posted
all diff update!
posted
Just a few things to fix!
[Easy]
  1. 01:03:412 (2) - Inconsistent spacing between 1 and 3. Please fix. Also consider re-angling this slider at 3.

[Normal]
  1. 00:21:873 (1) - Please consider giving newer players some time to recover. Reduce spinner so it ends at 00:24:391.
  2. 01:03:831 (1) - The end of this slider end is off-grid. The y-coordinates should not be over 384 units. Currently 385.
posted
Oh Ike ♡
posted

BeatofIke wrote:

Just a few things to fix!
[Normal]
  1. 00:21:873 (1) - Please consider giving newer players some time to recover. Reduce spinner so it ends at 00:24:391. Ammm..I want to keep this. because this song just 143BPM . 1/1 is enough in the normal diff imo=L+ sorry for this ;)
  2. 01:03:831 (1) - The end of this slider end is off-grid. The y-coordinates should not be over 384 units. Currently 385. okay fix
haha thank you Beatoflke :D
waiting for my GDer~
posted
!!! I'll check soon after getting a bubble :D go go~
posted

alacat wrote:

!!! I'll check soon after getting a bubble :D go go~
wa~thank you alacat :D so moe~
posted
alacat moe~ Bubbled!
posted
COME ON
posted
nyan

[General]
  1. Artist: Nyanhou no Outa
    I think "娘包" is compound word. so you don't need to use space between. for example .. Touhou
  2. Tag Suggestion: visual novel eroge Yamada
    The name of this character is Yamada.
  3. Preview time is unsnapped, Please check it and use at here. 00:04:985 -


[Easy]


  • ocean o_o
  1. 00:04:671 - clap
  2. 00:31:104 (4) - This slider tail is out of screen, pls fix it then, i feel this part looks crowded 00:29:845 (3,4) - i hope you put more spacing between.
  3. 00:38:657 - hmm ... I don't agree to change slider speed in this difficulty. i guess This part would make beginners confused. So you should consider useing x1.0 speed to this part.
  4. 01:02:153 (1,2,3) - Please check this part about distance.


[Normal]
  1. 00:18:727 - Is this necessary ?
  2. 00:21:873 (1,1) - Agree with BeatofIke, Please try to think about it for beginners again.
  3. 01:06:139 - clap


[Hard]
  1. 00:04:461 (3) - hmm .. I'd remove this note for better rhythm or turn down the volume. I feel it's a bit loud.
  2. 00:38:657 (1) - i don't agree this slider. as you can look this image, i guess this slider would confuse many players. So i hope you consider remaking a slider for player. If you do that, it prevents the player from misreading.

    then, please check this rule from Ranking Criteria.


[Insane]
  1. 00:10:964 (4,5) - why don't you put in straight line between (4) and (5) for flow ? it would be more natural. Please try to make it like this image
  2. 00:17:887 - missing a whistle
  3. 01:04:671 (5,6) - I recommend you to use more spacing than previous part 01:03:831 (1,2) -. it's better to follow the volume gradually. then, it would fit well with this kind of music.
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