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smallboat
嗨,小黃瓜,QQ group mod req.

Hope you reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why.

  1. Red words: Should be fix it.
  2. Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
  3. Black words : In my personal opinion.

[General]

確定要Enable countdown? 還是取消吧。

[sammy's Easy]

00:18:523 (1) - 應該能再加一個note在這裡做結尾,加了難度也不會影響到最低難度。(或00:17:684 (1) - 換成長條拉到00:18:523。)
00:38:663 (1) - 為何不包 (2)? (又強迫症

[Normal]

00:16:425 (3) - 試著照弧度擺?
00:18:103 (6) - 我覺得換成長條拉到00:18:523也蠻適合做結束然後break。(其實這邊也可以不用break,這邊後面也可擺個簡單的滑條或note,別跟easy一樣空的?)
00:32:789 (3) - 弧度
00:51:250 (3) - 用00:48:733 (1,2,3) 的這幾個的頭呈三角形?
01:05:726 (2) - 取消一折返移後面一格,前面加一note然後與01:05:516 (1) 重疊,蠻有感覺。

[yf's Hard]

00:02:998 (4) - 感覺部分疊在00:03:208 (5) 上比較帶感,這邊疊在尾端沒什麼感覺。
00:09:292 (3) - 用Ctrl+J不就對稱Pattern了嗎? 建議改了(改了記得Ctrl+g)。
00:15:586 (1) - 故意部分疊?
00:16:635 (4) - (69|43),用裡面的角包住(3)結尾。
00:28:173 (6) - 挑個沒疊好
00:32:369 (2) - 或許前端可以疊起來。
00:38:663 (1) - 連續四個spin感覺好敷衍,把第2跟4的spin換掉擺節奏吧?(或13)
00:57:964 (1) - 或許可來個Ctrl+g。
01:05:516 (1,2,3,4) - 或許可以來個大跳,後面三個疊著似乎沒什麼效果。

[Insane]

00:16:635 (1,2) - 疊00:18:103 (5) 比較美觀。
00:19:781 (3) - 2都有疊好這怎不疊好。
00:21:040 (1,2) - 或許可以複製(1)的來使用CTRL+H做個對稱。
00:23:138 (3) - 疊 00:21:879 (1) 比較有效果。
00:23:348 (4) - 疊 00:22:089 (2) 比較有效果。
00:24:816 (2) - 或許可以疊 00:25:656 (3) 頭。
00:29:852 (6) - (360|293)試試?
00:32:788 (4) - 尾端沒疊好。
00:34:257 (3) - 三角形?
00:35:306 (1) - 是不是忘了finish啊?
00:37:614 (3) - (497|88)?
00:39:502 (4,1) - 這邊仔細聽有一個跳點可以跳,這邊同距放沒感覺。
00:41:180 (3) - ^
00:42:858 (1) - ^
00:44:537 (3) - ^
00:45:376 (1) - 或許能+finish
00:46:005 (4) - 怎麼這個節奏會在結尾了? 還是換成note或slider做個跳吧。(像你這個 00:47:893 (3) 的節奏就在頭我覺得比較好。)
00:51:879 (6) - 同距擺看看?
00:53:767 (1) - 我覺得疊 00:52:928 (5) 比較flow?
00:55:446 (1) - 不跟前面疊嗎?
01:01:949 (8) - 我會想擺(236|61)左右的位置,現在放這裡有點擠。
01:03:418 (5) - 這也能拉開點距離。
01:04:677 (1,2,3,4) - 全選移到(144|75)上試試(如果改了,上面那個(5)可以用開頭疊(1))
01:05:516 (1,2,3,4) - 234拉開點距離,與1來個跳? 這節奏明顯的是大跳。

後面clap部分那個我覺得也可以跳,看你要不要拉開點距離了。

[Other]
1.If you have any mod above problems, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you ranked.
3.Hope my mod is useful to you.
Topic Starter
kamisamaaa

smallboat wrote:

嗨,小黃瓜,QQ group mod req.

Hope you reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why.

  1. Red words: Should be fix it.
  2. Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
  3. Black words : In my personal opinion.

[General]

確定要Enable countdown? 還是取消吧。  嗯 取消了~之前没注意过这东西0.0

[Normal]

00:16:425 (3) - 試著照弧度擺?fix
00:18:103 (6) - 我覺得換成長條拉到00:18:523也蠻適合做結束然後break。(其實這邊也可以不用break,這邊後面也可擺個簡單的滑條或note,別跟easy一樣空的?)改成滑条了 这里map或者空着再想想额
00:32:789 (3) - 弧度fix
00:51:250 (3) - 用00:48:733 (1,2,3) 的這幾個的頭呈三角形? 这个不改 是为了能有一个流畅的flow额
01:05:726 (2) - 取消一折返移後面一格,前面加一note然後與01:05:516 (1) 重疊,蠻有感覺。fix

[Insane]

00:16:635 (1,2) - 疊00:18:103 (5) 比較美觀。  fix
00:19:781 (3) - 2都有疊好這怎不疊好。fix
00:21:040 (1,2) - 或許可以複製(1)的來使用CTRL+H做個對稱。  这啥意思?这两个是note?
00:23:138 (3) - 疊 00:21:879 (1) 比較有效果。fix
00:23:348 (4) - 疊 00:22:089 (2) 比較有效果。fix
00:24:816 (2) - 或許可以疊 00:25:656 (3) 頭。fix
00:29:852 (6) - (360|293)試試?fix
00:32:788 (4) - 尾端沒疊好。fix
00:34:257 (3) - 三角形? 这个保留
00:35:306 (1) - 是不是忘了finish啊? 没忘 本来加了 但是后来觉得有点吵 不太适合finish又去掉了
00:37:614 (3) - (497|88)?  类似的改了
00:39:502 (4,1) - 這邊仔細聽有一個跳點可以跳,這邊同距放沒感覺。  
00:41:180 (3) - ^
00:42:858 (1) - ^
00:44:537 (3) - ^  这些有些改了有些没变额
00:45:376 (1) - 或許能+finish  感觉不合适0.0这歌都不太适合finish 太吵了
00:46:005 (4) - 怎麼這個節奏會在結尾了? 還是換成note或slider做個跳吧。(像你這個 00:47:893 (3) 的節奏就在頭我覺得比較好。) 嗯 这个改了 一直觉得不太舒服
00:51:879 (6) - 同距擺看看?fix
00:53:767 (1) - 我覺得疊 00:52:928 (5) 比較flow?fix
00:55:446 (1) - 不跟前面疊嗎?fix
01:01:949 (8) - 我會想擺(236|61)左右的位置,現在放這裡有點擠。 改了别的
01:03:418 (5) - 這也能拉開點距離。fix
01:04:677 (1,2,3,4) - 全選移到(144|75)上試試(如果改了,上面那個(5)可以用開頭疊(1))  这里感觉没啥必要额
01:05:516 (1,2,3,4) - 234拉開點距離,與1來個跳? 這節奏明顯的是大跳。 okay 我纠结了好久没放跳 既然都觉得适合跳那就跳~

後面clap部分那個我覺得也可以跳,看你要不要拉開點距離了。  这首歌感觉不是很想做太跳0.0 所以一般都是小的距离变化什么的0.0

[Other]
1.If you have any mod above problems, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you ranked.
3.Hope my mod is useful to you.
感谢小船的mod=L= :)
我图比较蠢0.0
Koiyuki


M4M

  1. Black——My personal suggestions.
  2. Bold——Highly recommended.
  3. Red——(Maybe) Unrankable, you must fix it.

[General]
  1. 这combo color选的不太好,对比太强烈,而且那俩灰的暗BG后根本看不清

[萨米球]
  1. 00:06:774 (3,4) - blanket
  2. 00:08:453 (1,2) - ^
  3. 00:25:656 (2,3) - ^
  4. 00:26:495 (3,4) - 间距
  5. 00:31:110 (4) - 有点出去了
  6. 00:31:110 (4,1) - 建议easy不要这么放

[小黄瓜]
  1. 没啥问题

[爱抚姥爷]
  1. 00:05:096 (1) - 头上加个whi?
    神hard

[娘包黄瓜]
  1. 整幅图的单点摆放还有很大的提升空间,可以摆的再有创意一点
  2. 00:32:159 (2) - 稍微往右下移动一点
  3. 01:06:145 (4) - 叠在2尾巴好了

挺好的
最后祝您身体健康
yf_bmp
too many mods so that i won't reply for everyone
thank you for your modding. changed much

update:
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Topic Starter
kamisamaaa
change the offset and all update
toybot
no dap queue ~

O.o song is so weird !!!

probably won't have many suggestions, sorry ;;

[sammy's Easy]
00:08:447 (1) - finish does not sound good here, remove?
00:29:845 (3,4,1) - these seem a bit too close to each other, maybe space it out a bit? i mean space it horizontally

[Normal]
00:08:447 (1) - remove finish from this too
00:18:097 (6) - nc, it seems like its own separate piece
00:48:727 (1,2,3) - this combo makes the corner a bit.. cluttered? maybe rearrange something like this: so that players might not get kind of confused of how close (1) and (3) are
01:04:671 (1) - does this really need nc..?

[yf's Hard]
00:06:559 (4) - maybe just move this down 4 grids? tiny grid
00:11:384 (1) - remove nc
00:35:510 (6) - nc
01:01:314 (1,2) - you could do the same with these sliders as you've done before, lower the sv of them, but just a suggestion of consistency :p

[Insane]
00:11:279 (5,6) - maybe move (5) like this?:00:12:013 (2) - you should curve this like (4) after it
00:46:209 (5) - nc
01:05:929 (3) - you should move this down until it doesn't touch outside of grid, but just me kind of nazi

gl!
Topic Starter
kamisamaaa

toybot wrote:

no dap queue ~

O.o song is so weird !!! sad to hear this :(

probably won't have many suggestions, sorry ;;

[Normal]
00:08:447 (1) - remove finish from this too sorry I think finish is suit here
00:18:097 (6) - nc, it seems like its own separate piece keep this. the begin of slider is a group with prev
00:48:727 (1,2,3) - this combo makes the corner a bit.. cluttered? maybe rearrange something like this: so that players might not get kind of confused of how close (1) and (3) are actually current flow is better
01:04:671 (1) - does this really need nc..? just make a little beautiful :)

[Insane]
00:11:279 (5,6) - maybe move (5) like this?: stack feel better to me
00:12:013 (2) - you should curve this like (4) after it I think current is okay
00:46:209 (5) - nc okay~fix
01:05:929 (3) - you should move this down until it doesn't touch outside of grid, but just me kind of nazi it doesn't touch the health line

gl!
thank you for modding :)
sammy711
[smallboat]

00:18:523 (1) - 應該能再加一個note在這裡做結尾,加了難度也不會影響到最低難度。(或00:17:684 (1) - 換成長條拉到00:18:523。)
我喜欢这种拖延感w

00:38:663 (1) - 為何不包 (2)? (又強迫症 包了

[M酱]
00:06:774 (3,4) - blanket fix
00:08:453 (1,2) - ^fix
00:25:656 (2,3) - ^fix
00:26:495 (3,4) - 间距 fix
00:31:110 (4) - 有点出去了 fix
00:31:110 (4,1) - 建议easy不要这么放 低难度也不能太无聊...啊

[toybot]
00:08:447 (1) - finish does not sound good here, remove? 00:05:090 (1) - keep consistent with this one
00:29:845 (3,4,1) - these seem a bit too close to each other, maybe space it out a bit? i mean space it horizontally Using patterns like these makes the map not be so boring :(

code
osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 5013
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
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[Metadata]
Title:Nyan Hou no Outa
TitleUnicode:娘包のおうた
Artist:Hinata itigo
ArtistUnicode:日向苺
Creator:kamisamaaa
Version:sammy's Easy
Source:Cure Girl
Tags:galgame curegirl sammy711 yf_bmp
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[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:2
OverallDifficulty:2
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[Luxord]
M4M

[Easy]
00:25:650 (2,3) - Make a blanket?
00:25:650 (2,3) - You could do that here too.
00:31:104 (4,1) - Also fix the blanket here.
00:55:440 (1,2) - Maybe reverse the slider so the flow helps the new players to go to the next circle easier, I find it difficult as it is now.

[Normal]
00:38:657 (1) - Make this slider more symmetric, looks like it looses from the end of the slider. It's a bit upper.
Just that

[Hard]
00:42:013 (1) - As much as I love this beautiful slider, that much I hate to tell you that it MIGHT me unrankable cause it's blocking the path of the slider which must be clear from the beginning to the end.
This one's is fun to play, nothing else to see, great job :3.

[Insane]
00:25:020 (3,4,1,2,3) - That spacing is kinda too much.
00:31:104 (4,5,6) - ^
00:58:796 (1,2,3) - ^
01:02:153 (1,2,3) - ^
But it's not that fatal, they are playable at least.


Great map :3 the issues are very poor so have a star :3 good luck!
Topic Starter
kamisamaaa

KiyoshiX101 wrote:

M4M

[Normal]
00:38:657 (1) - Make this slider more symmetric, looks like it looses from the end of the slider. It's a bit upper.
Just that

[Insane]
00:25:020 (3,4,1,2,3) - That spacing is kinda too much. just 2.12x is really normal in insane diff imo
00:31:104 (4,5,6) - ^
00:58:796 (1,2,3) - ^
01:02:153 (1,2,3) - ^ same here
But it's not that fatal, they are playable at least.


Great map :3 the issues are very poor so have a star :3 good luck!
thanks for mod and star :)
happy623
總算來了

General

  1. 考慮也把製作公司的名字也加進去 " Noesis "
  2. 注意其實偏黑的note在玩的時候玩家把光暗調到最低會什麼都看不了233

sammy's Easy

  • 恩沒什麼特別問題

Normal

  1. 00:14:321 (7) - 我的話會把 他不折返直接到 00:14:740 - 完結, 因為你跟的是vocal 這樣比較不違和
  2. 00:34:461 (7) - 同上
  3. 00:26:069 (2) - 放上一點blanket?

yf's Hard

  1. 00:33:202 (1) - 刪NC, 然後 00:34:461 (5) - 加NC, 因為你本來的NC pattern在 00:13:272 (1) - NC了
  2. 00:35:720 (7) - 同樣跟一下你的pattern, 這裡也應該NC, 後面的NC刪走
  3. 00:59:636 (1) - 同樣刪NC, 你NC在 00:52:922 (5) 也沒啊, 刪了之後在 01:00:475 (7) - 加NC

Insane

  1. orz都找不到什麼

orz 沒什麼好找的 , 快找BAT吧
Flask
你好!
基本上沒看出什麼大問題, 請容許我小nazi一下 (.

[General]
  1. Artist是Hinata Itigo才對吧? 沒意外的話如果不是特殊狀況都是大寫 (還是說其實有特殊狀況?!)
[Insane]
  1. 00:12:013 (2) - 這個改成彎的部分偏左邊跟00:12:643 (4) - 一樣可能會比較好看, 而且(1)是在(2)的右邊, 大概會flow一點
  2. 00:20:824 (4) - 我覺得這個跟00:19:146 (4) - overlap比較好一點, 這樣(1)~(4)的flow會變成直線. 相同的00:24:181 (4) - 也是放在x:168, y:304這附近比較好點
  3. 00:44:531 (3) - 這好像有點太靠近(4)了, 這樣(3,4)之間會有點擠擠的. (3)往左邊一點吧
  4. 00:47:468 (2,3,4) - 這樣好看些 (座標: (3) - > x:125, y:223, (4) - > x:101, y:135, 調完之後記得後面的(1)也調整一下)
  5. 01:02:992 (4,5) - 我覺得這中間可以再加個note 就跟01:02:468 (2) - 一樣. 因為(1,2)是同個距離, (4,5)也是同個距離, 而(4,5)之間的節奏比較疏一點自然就弱了一些
[愛撫's Hard]
  1. 00:31:104 (5) - 有點nazi, 不過能在往右邊偏個15度左右
  2. 01:05:510 (1,2,3,4) - 不等距嗎Q_Q 都弄成跳也不錯 (?
[Normal]
  1. 00:08:447 (1,2) - 可能我有點排斥這類flow出現在normal裡吧..總之這樣有點不是很乾淨就是了, 新手可能會把頭尾顛到過來按 (不過你覺得沒事的話就沒事..
[sammy's Easy]
  1. 00:02:153 (2) - 感覺這個能延長到白線(00:02:573 - )? 紅線上面那個音也沒有什麼必要去跟就是了
  2. 00:17:678 (1) - 換成slider然後結尾在00:18:097 - 去跟那個clap音?
這到底是日文歌還是中文歌啊...(ˊ=w=ˋ)
祝rank!
Topic Starter
kamisamaaa

happy623 wrote:

總算來了

General

  1. 考慮也把製作公司的名字也加進去 " Noesis " 加了
  2. 注意其實偏黑的note在玩的時候玩家把光暗調到最低會什麼都看不了233 你书的对。。已经换了

Normal

  1. 00:14:321 (7) - 我的話會把 他不折返直接到 00:14:740 - 完結, 因為你跟的是vocal 這樣比較不違和 改了~
  2. 00:34:461 (7) - 同上 改了~
  3. 00:26:069 (2) - 放上一點blanket? 之前没包好0.0

Insane

  1. orz都找不到什麼

orz 沒什麼好找的 , 快找BAT吧 好吧0.0 我去找狗
感谢mod~ :D

Flask wrote:

你好!
基本上沒看出什麼大問題, 請容許我小nazi一下 (. 没问题~nazi也很好

[General]
  1. Artist是Hinata Itigo才對吧? 沒意外的話如果不是特殊狀況都是大寫 (還是說其實有特殊狀況?!) 没啥特殊情况。。已经改成大写了
[Insane]
  1. 00:12:013 (2) - 這個改成彎的部分偏左邊跟00:12:643 (4) - 一樣可能會比較好看, 而且(1)是在(2)的右邊, 大概會flow一點 好 当时是想着这个和4方向相对所以做的 改了确实更舒服一些
  2. 00:20:824 (4) - 我覺得這個跟00:19:146 (4) - overlap比較好一點, 這樣(1)~(4)的flow會變成直線. 相同的00:24:181 (4) - 也是放在x:168, y:304這附近比較好點 这个没改 因为不太会做遮挡 感觉我遮挡做完之后好难看
  3. 00:44:531 (3) - 這好像有點太靠近(4)了, 這樣(3,4)之間會有點擠擠的. (3)往左邊一點吧 好的
  4. 00:47:468 (2,3,4) - 這樣好看些 (座標: (3) - > x:125, y:223, (4) - > x:101, y:135, 調完之後記得後面的(1)也調整一下) good~
  5. 01:02:992 (4,5) - 我覺得這中間可以再加個note 就跟01:02:468 (2) - 一樣. 因為(1,2)是同個距離, (4,5)也是同個距離, 而(4,5)之間的節奏比較疏一點自然就弱了一些 这个没加 因为音乐这里就是两处不一样 前面多个鼓点急促一些 间距用一样的是为了造这种先急促然后舒缓的感觉额
[Normal]
  1. 00:08:447 (1,2) - 可能我有點排斥這類flow出現在normal裡吧..總之這樣有點不是很乾淨就是了, 新手可能會把頭尾顛到過來按 (不過你覺得沒事的話就沒事.. 我觉得其实还好吧0.0 懒得改了
這到底是日文歌還是中文歌啊...(ˊ=w=ˋ) 日本人唱的中文歌=L= :)
祝rank! 感谢
真心感谢mod啊0.0 简直好人!
yf_bmp

KiyoshiX101 wrote:

[Hard]
00:42:013 (1) - As much as I love this beautiful slider, that much I hate to tell you that it MIGHT me unrankable cause it's blocking the path of the slider which must be clear from the beginning to the end. i think it's clear enough since the slider end is not overlapped entirely
This one's is fun to play, nothing else to see, great job :3.

happy623 wrote:

yf's Hard

  1. 00:33:202 (1) - 刪NC, 然後 00:34:461 (5) - 加NC, 因為你本來的NC pattern在 00:13:272 (1) - NC了
  2. 00:35:720 (7) - 同樣跟一下你的pattern, 這裡也應該NC, 後面的NC刪走
  3. 00:59:636 (1) - 同樣刪NC, 你NC在 00:52:922 (5) 也沒啊, 刪了之後在 01:00:475 (7) - 加NC

NC有些小改动:3

Flask wrote:

你好!
基本上沒看出什麼大問題, 請容許我小nazi一下 (.

[General]

[愛撫's Hard]
  1. 00:31:104 (5) - 有點nazi, 不過能在往右邊偏個15度左右 hao
  2. 01:05:510 (1,2,3,4) - 不等距嗎Q_Q 都弄成跳也不錯 (? 算啦
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sammy711
[KiyoshiX101]
00:25:650 (2,3) - Make a blanket? done
00:25:650 (2,3) - You could do that here too.done
00:31:104 (4,1) - Also fix the blanket here.done
00:55:440 (1,2) - Maybe reverse the slider so the flow helps the new players to go to the next circle easier, I find it difficult as it is now.
nope...Making everything easy to read will be boring
[happy623]
恩沒什麼特別問題
>A<
[Flask]
00:02:153 (2) - 感覺這個能延長到白線(00:02:573 - )? 紅線上面那個音也沒有什麼必要去跟就是了 done
00:17:678 (1) - 換成slider然後結尾在00:18:097 - 去跟那個clap音?
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Topic Starter
kamisamaaa
okay~all diffs are updated
IamKwaN
Hi, from QQ.

Insane

  1. 00:25:125 (4) - 這個我好像聽不到背景音樂有音;反而我在00:24:601 跟00:24:706 都聽到了
  2. 00:25:020 (3,4) - 這個1/4 Prev: 7.64x -o-
  3. 00:39:496 (1,2,3,4) - 這裡的梗可以跟00:42:852 (1,2,3,4) 一樣
  4. 01:04:671 (1,2,3,4) - 這個可以玩更遠的梗,因為01:04:671 (1) 比01:03:831 (1) 更大聲

yf's Hard

  1. 00:11:279 - 漏了個音
  2. 00:31:838 (8) - 這個放在00:31:419 才對音欸 ._.

Normal

  1. 01:05:510 (1,2,3) - 這裡太難,又stack又1/2,用紅點做個滑條就好 :3

薩米's Easy

  1. 00:17:678 (1) - 這個NC去掉,這個NC在我看來是沒意義的,他跟00:17:258 (3) 這個是同一段的音樂,所以不用NC
  2. 00:31:104 (4,1) - 請包好
  3. 00:47:048 (2,3) - 這樣放flow得更好啊
  4. 01:05:510 (1) - 這個用紅點來凸出中間那兩個音吧

Oracle
Insane
00:31:943 (1) - 我注意到你用了很多这种非常偏的右下角位置。这个位置由于是板子死角,玩起来是比较卡手的。不推荐用。
00:33:832 (2) - ^
其他的等你re了我再全部都看一遍,到时候edit这个post就好
Chloe
[General]

  1. Fine.
[Easy]
  1. 00:06:768 (3) - 00:27:747 (4) - blanket
  2. 00:08:447 (1,3) - 00:25:650 (2) - 其实在我看来这些blanket都没有做到最好 不过EZ无所谓 你看着修吧 上面那些就建

    议改改
  3. 00:31:104 (4) - 歪了 注意间距 拉一下屁股的锚点

[Normal]
  1. 00:09:286 (2,3,4) - 考虑一下3根同样的滑条各转120度摆法 http://puu.sh/7vX5l.jpg或http://puu.sh/7vX7j.jpg 我偏

    向前者
  2. 00:18:097 (6) - 弯一点或者索性变直的
  3. 00:31:104 (4) - 复制00:32:153 (2) - 然后CTRL+H+J

[Hard]

  • AR+1
  1. 00:12:223 (2) - 这里小跳而不是00:12:433 (3) -
  2. 01:06:034 (4) - add

[Insane]

  • HP-1
  1. 00:06:559 (1) - 间距有点远 try 260,281
  2. 00:11:279 (5) - delete 这个太突兀了 也不好听
  3. 00:31:419 (5) - ^
  4. 00:44:111 (2) - 这里而不是前面
  5. 00:45:999 (4) - 00:46:629 (3) - 和这个开头stack
  6. 01:06:139 (4) - 太远了 移到450,222 花花和lks都用过这类梗 看起来高大上 考虑一下

7天怎么还是1kd :o
Topic Starter
kamisamaaa

IamKwaN wrote:

Hi, from QQ.

Insane

  1. 00:25:125 (4) - 這個我好像聽不到背景音樂有音;反而我在00:24:601 跟00:24:706 都聽到了 你书的对
  2. 00:25:020 (3,4) - 這個1/4 Prev: 7.64x -o- 错觉系列
  3. 00:39:496 (1,2,3,4) - 這裡的梗可以跟00:42:852 (1,2,3,4) 一樣 没必要吧感觉
  4. 01:04:671 (1,2,3,4) - 這個可以玩更遠的梗,因為01:04:671 (1) 比01:03:831 (1) 更大聲
嗯 调整了


Normal

  1. 01:05:510 (1,2,3) - 這裡太難,又stack又1/2,用紅點做個滑條就好 :3
感觉这样节奏听着比较好听 先保留


Chloe wrote:

[General]

  1. Fine.
[Normal]
  1. 00:09:286 (2,3,4) - 考虑一下3根同样的滑条各转120度摆法 http://puu.sh/7vX5l.jpg或http://puu.sh/7vX7j.jpg 我偏

    向前者 感觉完全没必要。。
  2. 00:18:097 (6) - 弯一点或者索性变直的 变弯了
  3. 00:31:104 (4) - 复制00:32:153 (2) - 然后CTRL+H+J
同觉得没必要

[Insane]

  • HP-1 你书的对
  1. 00:06:559 (1) - 间距有点远 try 260,281 2.0X一点不远啊。。这个音比较重的
  2. 00:11:279 (5) - delete 这个太突兀了 也不好听
  3. 00:31:419 (5) - ^ 这里感觉听着不错的 不过前面有个地方有点突兀删了
  4. 00:44:111 (2) - 这里而不是前面 啥意思
  5. 00:45:999 (4) - 00:46:629 (3) - 和这个开头stack 这里是1.2距离的梗
  6. 01:06:139 (4) - 太远了 移到450,222 花花和lks都用过这类梗 看起来高大上 考虑一下 嗯哼~

7天怎么还是1kd :o 我也不清楚啊 之前ora球摸也是 7天了1KD 不知道啥情况
感谢mod啊:D
yf_bmp
just changed Chloe's first point

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sammy711
[IamKwan]
00:17:678 (1) - 這個NC去掉,這個NC在我看來是沒意義的,他跟00:17:258 (3) 這個是同一段的音樂,所以不用NC
OK
00:31:104 (4,1) - 請包好
OK
00:47:048 (2,3) - 這樣放flow得更好啊
其实通过flow的反向强调4是本意...
01:05:510 (1) - 這個用紅點來凸出中間那兩個音吧

[Chloe]
00:06:768 (3) - 00:27:747 (4) - blanket
00:08:447 (1,3) - 00:25:650 (2) - 其实在我看来这些blanket都没有做到最好 不过EZ无所谓 你看着修吧 上面那些就建议改改
00:31:104 (4) - 歪了 注意间距 拉一下屁股的锚点

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[Metadata]
Title:Nyan Hou no Outa
TitleUnicode:娘包のおうた
Artist:Hinata Ichigo
ArtistUnicode:日向苺
Creator:kamisamaaa
Version:sammy's Easy
Source:Cure Girl
Tags:galgame curegirl Noesis sammy711 yf_bmp
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Topic Starter
kamisamaaa
all diff update!
BeatofIke
Just a few things to fix!
[Easy]
  1. 01:03:412 (2) - Inconsistent spacing between 1 and 3. Please fix. Also consider re-angling this slider at 3.
[Normal]
  1. 00:21:873 (1) - Please consider giving newer players some time to recover. Reduce spinner so it ends at 00:24:391.
  2. 01:03:831 (1) - The end of this slider end is off-grid. The y-coordinates should not be over 384 units. Currently 385.
yf_bmp
Oh Ike ♡
Topic Starter
kamisamaaa

BeatofIke wrote:

Just a few things to fix!
[Normal]
  1. 00:21:873 (1) - Please consider giving newer players some time to recover. Reduce spinner so it ends at 00:24:391. Ammm..I want to keep this. because this song just 143BPM . 1/1 is enough in the normal diff imo=L+ sorry for this ;)
  2. 01:03:831 (1) - The end of this slider end is off-grid. The y-coordinates should not be over 384 units. Currently 385. okay fix
haha thank you Beatoflke :D
waiting for my GDer~
alacat
!!! I'll check soon after getting a bubble :D go go~
Topic Starter
kamisamaaa

alacat wrote:

!!! I'll check soon after getting a bubble :D go go~
wa~thank you alacat :D so moe~
BeatofIke
alacat moe~ Bubbled!
yf_bmp
COME ON
alacat
nyan

[General]
  1. Artist: Nyanhou no Outa
    I think "娘包" is compound word. so you don't need to use space between. for example .. Touhou
  2. Tag Suggestion: visual novel eroge Yamada
    The name of this character is Yamada.
  3. Preview time is unsnapped, Please check it and use at here. 00:04:985 -
[Easy]


  • ocean o_o
  1. 00:04:671 - clap
  2. 00:31:104 (4) - This slider tail is out of screen, pls fix it then, i feel this part looks crowded 00:29:845 (3,4) - i hope you put more spacing between.
  3. 00:38:657 - hmm ... I don't agree to change slider speed in this difficulty. i guess This part would make beginners confused. So you should consider useing x1.0 speed to this part.
  4. 01:02:153 (1,2,3) - Please check this part about distance.
[Normal]
  1. 00:18:727 - Is this necessary ?
  2. 00:21:873 (1,1) - Agree with BeatofIke, Please try to think about it for beginners again.
  3. 01:06:139 - clap
[Hard]
  1. 00:04:461 (3) - hmm .. I'd remove this note for better rhythm or turn down the volume. I feel it's a bit loud.
  2. 00:38:657 (1) - i don't agree this slider. as you can look this image, i guess this slider would confuse many players. So i hope you consider remaking a slider for player. If you do that, it prevents the player from misreading.
    then, please check this rule from Ranking Criteria.
[Insane]
  1. 00:10:964 (4,5) - why don't you put in straight line between (4) and (5) for flow ? it would be more natural. Please try to make it like this image
  2. 00:17:887 - missing a whistle
  3. 01:04:671 (5,6) - I recommend you to use more spacing than previous part 01:03:831 (1,2) -. it's better to follow the volume gradually. then, it would fit well with this kind of music.
Topic Starter
kamisamaaa

alacat wrote:

nyan

[General]
  1. Artist: Nyanhou no Outa
    I think "娘包" is compound word. so you don't need to use space between. for example .. Touhou oh i got it :D
  2. Tag Suggestion: visual novel eroge Yamada okay~fixed
    The name of this character is Yamada.
  3. Preview time is unsnapped, Please check it and use at here. 00:04:985 - fixed
[Easy]


  • ocean o_o haha I think so :)
  1. 00:38:657 - hmm ... I don't agree to change slider speed in this difficulty. i guess This part would make beginners confused. So you should consider useing x1.0 speed to this part. it's suit for music imo. and two speed is similar. maybe let him keep this?
[Normal]
  1. 00:18:727 - Is this necessary ? not necessary. but I feel nice with a break here :)
  2. 00:21:873 (1,1) - Agree with BeatofIke, Please try to think about it for beginners again. okay fixed
  3. 01:06:139 - clap added
[Insane]
  1. 00:10:964 (4,5) - why don't you put in straight line between (4) and (5) for flow ? it would be more natural. Please try to make it like this image
    change the placement to make a less didtance between 4 5
  2. 00:17:887 - missing a whistle added
  3. 01:04:671 (5,6) - I recommend you to use more spacing than previous part 01:03:831 (1,2) -. it's better to follow the volume gradually. then, it would fit well with this kind of music. fixed.

thanks alacat nyan :)
still waiting for my GDers :o they have to stay at shool until the weekend :(
萨米和爱抚姥爷你们记得先重新下载再改mod啊 我改标题tag什么的了~
sammy711
[alaにゃ]
ocean o_o はじめてのランク向けなので リズムのところに気を配ったんです><
00:04:671 - clap 付けました
00:31:104 (4) - This slider tail is out of screen, pls fix it then, i feel this part looks crowded 00:29:845 (3,4) - i hope you put more spacing between.
パタン変えました
00:38:657 - hmm ... I don't agree to change slider speed in this difficulty. i guess This part would make beginners confused. So you should consider useing x1.0 speed to this part.
1.0にしました ついでにパタンの移り変えも多少伴っていました
01:02:153 (1,2,3) - Please check this part about distance.
はい!

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01:03:412 (2) - Inconsistent spacing between 1 and 3. Please fix. Also consider re-angling this slider at 3.
Re-angeled

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260,88,53342,2,0,L|267:167,1,80,2|2,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,272,53761,5,2,0:2:0:0:
100,316,53971,1,2,0:2:0:0:
88,308,54076,1,2,0:2:0:0:
76,300,54181,2,0,L|84:216,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
0,108,54601,6,0,L|8:168,1,60.0000022888184,8|2,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
88,132,55020,2,0,L|80:72,1,60.0000022888184,2|2,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
80,72,55440,5,2,0:0:0:0:
196,44,55650,1,2,0:2:0:0:
208,52,55755,1,2,0:2:0:0:
220,60,55860,2,0,L|212:139,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
148,208,56279,2,0,L|155:287,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,296,56699,2,0,L|268:216,1,80,2|2,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,112,57118,5,2,0:2:0:0:
436,68,57328,1,2,0:2:0:0:
448,76,57433,1,2,0:2:0:0:
460,84,57538,2,0,L|452:163,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
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416,252,58377,2,0,L|424:312,1,60.0000022888184,2|2,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
308,380,58796,6,0,L|292:264,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
284,288,59111,1,2,0:2:0:0:
284,288,59216,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,252,59426,1,2,0:2:0:0:
104,284,59636,2,0,L|120:168,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
272,128,60055,2,0,L|163:172,1,80,2|2,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,60,60475,6,0,L|144:131,1,80,2|2,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
136,108,60789,1,2,0:2:0:0:
136,108,60894,1,2,0:0:0:0:
116,204,61104,1,2,0:2:0:0:
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368,248,61734,2,0,P|407:244|445:256,1,80,2|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,340,62153,5,2,0:0:0:0:
320,332,62363,1,2,0:2:0:0:
312,340,62468,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,348,62573,2,0,P|272:348|244:344,1,60.0000022888184,0|2,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
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160,180,63622,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,208,63831,5,2,0:0:0:0:
92,132,64041,1,2,0:2:0:0:
84,124,64146,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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264,208,65090,2,0,P|264:176|268:148,1,60.0000022888184,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,60,65510,5,2,0:0:0:0:
424,156,65720,1,10,0:0:0:0:
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Topic Starter
kamisamaaa
all diff updated!
and change insane diff name to Cucmber :D
alacat
Recheck ~

alacat wrote:

  1. Artist: Nyanhou no Outa
^ Please check this ;) seems fine other diffs to me !
Topic Starter
kamisamaaa

alacat wrote:

Recheck ~

alacat wrote:

  1. Artist: Nyanhou no Outa
^ Please check this ;) seems fine other diffs to me !
fixed!
alacat
ok ;)

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Congrats :33
10crystalmask01
Oh god what is this song? xD

Grats anyways!
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