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44teru-k - Yami ~ Shoujo no Yume , Kyomu no Sekai ~

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[Twinkle]

Scorpiour wrote:

irc modded with mapper, fix several patterns

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20:39 Scorpiour: 有空?
20:39 [Twinkle]: 嗯
20:39 Scorpiour: irc mod吧
20:39 Scorpiour: 除了extra都是你自己做的?
20:40 [Twinkle]: 是的
20:40 Scorpiour: 恩
20:41 Scorpiour: 从Another开始好了
20:41 [Twinkle]: 好的
20:42 Scorpiour: 00:10:683 (1,2) - 这两个弄成直线的如何?我觉得现在这样扭过去有种“为了将就ds”的感觉
20:42 Scorpiour: http://puu.sh/8uxYs.jpg
20:42 Scorpiour: 之类
20:42 [Twinkle]: 直线的也好
20:43 [Twinkle]: 就是前面一轮也是直线的,怕重复了
20:43 [Twinkle]: 把弯的角度弄小一点?
20:44 Scorpiour: 随意你
20:44 Scorpiour: 00:40:682 (1) - 这里我想听听你放折返的理由
20:44 [Twinkle]: 这里背景音里的鼓声没了
20:45 Scorpiour: 恩
20:45 [Twinkle]: 节奏算是降下来了
20:45 [Twinkle]: 要是不折返还有两个note不知道放哪了orz
20:46 Scorpiour: :>
20:46 [Twinkle]: 这样正好能对称
20:46 Scorpiour: 01:00:106 (6) - 这里的跳突然没了
20:46 Scorpiour: 为什么呢
20:46 Scorpiour: 换个样式吗
20:47 [Twinkle]: 。咦,我没完全听懂
20:47 [Twinkle]: 跳没了?
20:47 [Twinkle]: 是没有跳到00:58:567 (6) - 这个位置吗?
20:47 Scorpiour: 因为前面一组在1/2和stream之间都是跳来跳去的
20:48 Scorpiour: 到这边变成1/2 + 原地stack到下一组stream了
20:48 Scorpiour: 想听听看你的想法
20:48 [Twinkle]: 00:56:836 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) -
20:48 [Twinkle]: 这些都是在一个pattern里面
20:49 Scorpiour: 恩
20:49 [Twinkle]: 下面00:59:528 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - 是另一个
20:49 Scorpiour: 恩
20:49 [Twinkle]: 这里突然换位置应是算作缓冲吧,铺垫作用
20:49 Scorpiour: 恩
20:50 [Twinkle]: 能让玩家感受到“马上要变换样式”的感觉
20:50 Scorpiour: 恩
20:50 [Twinkle]: 嗯,大概就是这样
20:50 Scorpiour: 01:13:375 (1) - 这里,节奏上和前面一样是4连下来的,然后选用了了slider的理由是?
20:52 [Twinkle]: 为下面突然出现的大间距连打铺垫一下
20:52 [Twinkle]: 01:13:375 (1) - 这个是加速的
20:52 Scorpiour: 下面的大间距连打我也有疑问的说
20:53 Scorpiour: 那组连打在节奏上听起来更像是两组旋律之间的过渡
20:54 [Twinkle]: 是的
20:54 Scorpiour: 一般来说,过渡的地方不是会更倾向于使用更平滑的方式,而不是这种如同突然爆发的一个高潮点来处理吗?
20:55 [Twinkle]: 一般来说的确是需要平滑一点
20:56 [Twinkle]: 这里我是想强调突然出现鼓声的冲击力。
20:56 Scorpiour: 所以我想要知道你选择的理由
20:56 Scorpiour: 恩,然后?
20:56 [Twinkle]: 然后就有了这个梗。
20:57 Scorpiour: 只是这样吗……唔
20:57 [Twinkle]: 音效上也是换了,然后鼓声出现。
20:57 Scorpiour: 恩
20:57 Scorpiour: 说实话01:13:375 (1) - 让人感觉有些违和
20:57 Scorpiour: 后面倒是纯粹的好奇
20:58 [Twinkle]: 这首歌的bpm也不是很高
20:58 [Twinkle]: 音的话基本4分拍都比较满。
20:58 Scorpiour: 恩
20:59 Scorpiour: 我可以看你自己打一遍Another吗?
20:59 Scorpiour: :>
20:59 [Twinkle]: 好
21:02 [Twinkle]: ;w;
21:02 [Twinkle]: 断了
21:02 Scorpiour: nice play :>
21:02 Scorpiour: 记得我们刚才说的要弄的那个slider的地方
21:02 Scorpiour: 来看Hyper吧
21:03 [Twinkle]: 嗯
21:03 Scorpiour: 起点向后延迟了很多呢
21:04 [Twinkle]: 对,前面4个都是一样的起点
21:04 Scorpiour: 00:12:221 (1,2,3) - 只是提示一下,这种stack要考虑到stack leniency的影响
21:05 [Twinkle]: 嗯,这里只是三个堆叠影响不是太大
21:07 Scorpiour: 00:44:913 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 这里的overlap看起来视觉效果不太好,能不能不要挡上?
21:07 [Twinkle]: 好
21:12 Scorpiour: -> advance
21:13 Scorpiour: 01:04:144 - 我觉得这里可以放个note,否则空空的感觉有些怪
21:14 Scorpiour: 后面那里也是
21:14 [Twinkle]: 好
21:16 Scorpiour: 比Hyper好一点,break太长了
21:16 Scorpiour: 下一个
21:18 Scorpiour: 恩Normal没啥大问题
21:19 [Twinkle]: 嗯,好像泡了的图不可以upload?
21:19 Scorpiour: 更新去吧
谢谢~ :):):)
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
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Koiyuki
wow
Meg
gratz 8-)8-)
Atrue
Gratz!
DenoisoGoiso
congratz wow gj 8-)
lightr
WOW nice!!!!!!!
Avena
Really fun map, gratz!
Though, there's one issue I've noticed that might warrant a disqualification, You kept the red combo color in the rest of the diffs that aren't Extra, I understand why it was used in Extra to emphasise certain patterns, but in the rest of the diffs it just goes against the scheme's calm and nice theme.
I'd suggest you to remove the red color from all diffs but Extra.
Fycho
gratz=L=
最后还是没来得及看音效
Topic Starter
[Twinkle]

Priti wrote:

Really fun map, gratz!
Though, there's one issue I've noticed that might warrant a disqualification, You kept the red combo color in the rest of the diffs that aren't Extra, I understand why it was used in Extra to emphasise certain patterns, but in the rest of the diffs it just goes against the scheme's calm and nice theme.
I'd suggest you to remove the red color from all diffs but Extra.
Oh, I dont think colours emphasise special patterns here, Extra is different because it's GD. :)
Topic Starter
[Twinkle]

Fycho wrote:

gratz=L=
最后还是没来得及看音效
那就请下次帮我看看啦 :)
Mikazuki
1st rank gratz
T_Terry_T
Congratulation!
Hope it's going to be the first of many ranked maps. ;)
Gabe
Hello there. I need to disqualify this map for a snapping issue on Another.

00:19:913 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - There is absolutely no 1/8 in the song, why doing that? Making it more challenging is not an answer..
I would like you to change it for something more realistic. For an example, I have made this, which sounds closer to the song:



When you are done with this, just pm me back and I will rerank it.
EJX
唔。。。。我说怎么没排名了。。。
Gabe
Everythings fine for myself.


Reranked.
Momoka
regratz!
Topic Starter
[Twinkle]
:):):)
pw384
recongratz!
EmingK
恭喜!

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