44teru-k - Yami ~ Shoujo no Yume , Kyomu no Sekai ~ · forum

Koiyuki

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2014-04-22T14:33:13+00:00

ids wrote:
Yuki's Extra

00:03:278 (4) - 蓝线考虑加whistle 好
00:50:682 (1,2,3,4) - 四边形不规则，建议调整懒
00:56:067 (1,2,3,4,1) - 建议调整弧形懒
01:01:836 (2,3,4,5,1) - 不在一条直线，这一部分的变距连打都不太直动了下
01:02:605 (2,3,4,5,1) - 建议调整弧形懒
01:57:221 (5,5) - 尾部和头部对齐？懒
break那一段空着可惜，末尾连打DS变动感觉不容易读图嗯，那个空着因为节奏不好抓

自己也改了点

Yuki

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Sellenite

1,092 posts

Joined September 2013

Sellenite 2014-04-23T10:01:00+00:00

from ingame
整个mapset都挺难...

[Beginner]
00:19:913 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - 根据BGM我觉得第二个1不应该是一个滑条，试试改为这样：

SPOILER

00:46:836 (1) - 取消NC
00:47:605 (2) - NC
00:49:144 (1) - 取消NC
01:06:067 (1) - ^
01:29:913 (3) - 这个是没什么音的

[Standard]
00:15:298 (1) - 取消NC
00:46:067 (1) - ^
00:47:605 (3) - NC
01:30:682 (1) - 最好还是DS放

[Advanced]
00:29:721 (3) - DS放好它
00:30:682 (1) - 折返之后接三连，跳得太厉害了,减少距离
00:38:374 (4) - NC
01:54:913 这里再加个三连？前面四个单点，后面只有三个三连，突然空了听起来怪怪的，不过有点难

[Hyper]
00:16:836 (4) - NC
00:17:605 (1) - 取消NC
00:35:202 (9) - finish前这个音太轻了，组成三连有点不妥，删去
00:43:759 (1) - 给5与1一些距离？与前面保持一致
00:49:913 (5) - 头删去clap，太大声了，或者改为finish也过得去
00:51:452 (5) - NC
00:52:990 (5) - ^
00:54:528 (1,2,3,4) - 如果是想减少距离的话就减少得太多了，稍微增大一下，不要重叠最好
01:00:298 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 这类的读图应该是在insane以上了，最好不要这么放，放近些或者换折返等
01:05:875 (2) - 这个的尾巴应该是用来打击的而不是用滑条尾代替，建议前后换一下节奏让他变打击，就像01:06:836 (1,3) 一样，是打击的
01:09:144 - 01:14:817，这里的打击音效，叮叮叮，我也不太建议，太空了，没什么打击感，可以换成与01:14:913 - 01:19:913 一样的音效，然后来一个渐变大声，可能会好一点，或者换成soft也挺好的
01:21:452 取消clap
01:31:067 加clap
01:32:605 ^
结尾的长连放在hyper实在太难了，或者你应该改名成insane？Advanced对于普通hard来说也是足够难的了

[Another]
叮叮叮音效与hyper保持一致意见
00:05:105 (1,2) - 尾巴都删去whistle
00:36:067 (3,4) - 都加whistle
01:14:913 (1,2,3,4) - 跳跃太大了，减少成之前那样

高难度不怎么会摸，所以another和extra就此略过了

hope it help you！
good luck~

[Twinkle]

179 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

[Twinkle] 2014-04-23T16:59:12+00:00

Sellenite wrote:
from ingame
整个mapset都挺难...

[Beginner]
00:19:913 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - 根据BGM我觉得第二个1不应该是一个滑条，试试改为这样：好
SPOILER

00:46:836 (1) - 取消NC 好
00:47:605 (2) - NC 好
00:49:144 (1) - 取消NC好
01:06:067 (1) - ^好
01:29:913 (3) - 这个是没什么音的这样打起来还行

[Standard]
00:15:298 (1) - 取消NC好
00:46:067 (1) - ^好
00:47:605 (3) - NC好
01:30:682 (1) - 最好还是DS放好

[Advanced]
00:29:721 (3) - DS放好它不太明白是什么意思，前面加了一个note
00:30:682 (1) - 折返之后接三连，跳得太厉害了,减少距离好
00:38:374 (4) - NC 好
01:54:913 这里再加个三连？前面四个单点，后面只有三个三连，突然空了听起来怪怪的，不过有点难好

[Hyper]
00:16:836 (4) - NC 好
00:17:605 (1) - 取消NC 好
00:35:202 (9) - finish前这个音太轻了，组成三连有点不妥，删去好
00:43:759 (1) - 给5与1一些距离？与前面保持一致好
00:49:913 (5) - 头删去clap，太大声了，或者改为finish也过得去好，去了clap
00:51:452 (5) - NC 好
00:52:990 (5) - ^ 好
00:54:528 (1,2,3,4) - 如果是想减少距离的话就减少得太多了，稍微增大一下，不要重叠最好好
01:00:298 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 这类的读图应该是在insane以上了，最好不要这么放，放近些或者换折返等本来是难度名insane的，后来才改成hyper，感觉应该是hyper比insane要难吧？
01:05:875 (2) - 这个的尾巴应该是用来打击的而不是用滑条尾代替，建议前后换一下节奏让他变打击，就像01:06:836 (1,3) 一样，是打击的 ok
01:09:144 - 01:14:817，这里的打击音效，叮叮叮，我也不太建议，太空了，没什么打击感，可以换成与01:14:913 - 01:19:913 一样的音效，然后来一个渐变大声，可能会好一点，或者换成soft也挺好的这里不是很空呀，就是节奏比较低沉所以用了这个音效
01:21:452 取消clap 好
01:31:067 加clap好
01:32:605 ^好
结尾的长连放在hyper实在太难了，或者你应该改名成insane？Advanced对于普通hard来说也是足够难的了其实很多人更我说太难所以才改的Hyper

[Another]
叮叮叮音效与hyper保持一致意见
00:05:105 (1,2) - 尾巴都删去whistle 好
00:36:067 (3,4) - 都加whistle 好
01:14:913 (1,2,3,4) - 跳跃太大了，减少成之前那样这里是变节奏所以想来一个跳的，和后面的跳对应

高难度不怎么会摸，所以another和extra就此略过了

hope it help you！
good luck~

本来只是想找你打一下随便说说的，结果还这么认真写了这么多。太谢谢你了~

BeatofIke

4,166 posts

Joined September 2011

BeatofIke 2014-04-25T01:04:23+00:00

We did a 5 hour IRC mod. We made some huge adjustments with this map.

Long IRC Mod

15:12 [Twinkle]: Could you plz help my map a little bit? /w\
15:12 BeatofIke: >.<
15:13 [Twinkle]: I know you already have a lot >.<
15:14 [Twinkle]: Are you willing to do it? QAQ
15:14 BeatofIke: maybe >.<
15:14 *[Twinkle] is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/374400 44teru-k - Yami ~ Shoujo no Yume , Kyomu no Sekai ~]
15:15 [Twinkle]: I know this may not be the type of songs you like orz
15:15 [Twinkle]: but I hope it is fine for you~
15:15 BeatofIke: What's wrong with song?
15:16 [Twinkle]: I think this song is closed for ranking.
15:16 BeatofIke: oh >.<
15:17 [Twinkle]: Maybe have a quick IRC? >~<
15:19 BeatofIke: idk >.<
15:20 [Twinkle]: please >.<
15:21 BeatofIke: If I can even pass this map. >.<
15:22 BeatofIke: It won't be easy for me to approve this map >.<
15:22 [Twinkle]: maybe~ another diff is much easier now
15:31 [Twinkle]: extra is hard to pass but another is certainly passable
15:32 BeatofIke: I see >.<
15:34 [Twinkle]: ;w;
15:34 BeatofIke: yeah...there's no way I can approve this >.<
15:35 BeatofIke: You'll need to find a BAT with higher skill than me ;w
15:35 BeatofIke: maybe Frostmourne
15:35 [Twinkle]: ;w; he got to many requests
15:36 BeatofIke: oh >.<
15:36 BeatofIke: well, same with me anyways >.<
15:37 BeatofIke: spec me
15:37 [Twinkle]: BATs are busy, i respect to all BATs who have to deal with a lot of chats everyday
15:37 [Twinkle]: OK
15:37 BeatofIke:

15:49 BeatofIke: okay XD
15:52 [Twinkle]: Oh~ thank you very much!
15:52 BeatofIke: np

15:53 BeatofIke: when I can't pass a map, I just ask my brother to play it for me XD
15:53 [Twinkle]: good idea~ haha
16:01 BeatofIke: I will check Beginner first. Then I will move up

16:02 [Twinkle]: OK,
16:02 [Twinkle]: what should I do now?
16:02 BeatofIke: IRC mod?

16:03 [Twinkle]: ok im ready to start.
16:08 BeatofIke: Beginner looks good, but some of the hitsounds are inconsistent with the mapset
16:08 [Twinkle]: ok
16:10 BeatofIke: We'll do the hitsounding later, after I checked all difficulties

16:10 [Twinkle]: sure~
16:11 BeatofIke: 00:39:913 (3,4) - These sliders looks weird. I'll just copy-paste 00:38:375 (1,2) -
16:11 BeatofIke: since the music sounds the same.
16:11 [Twinkle]: all right
16:11 BeatofIke: It's better to just use the same sliders/rhythm
16:14 [Twinkle]: done~
16:14 BeatofIke: 01:26:067 (2) - move the first point at 76|232.
16:14 BeatofIke: looks better now

16:15 [Twinkle]: Oh, you are so careful.
16:15 [Twinkle]: fixed
16:15 BeatofIke: Yes, hue hue. >:)
16:16 BeatofIke: 01:29:913 (3) - Make this circle a slider

16:16 BeatofIke: so it's more consistent with the previous rhythms
16:17 [Twinkle]: I see
16:17 BeatofIke: that's it for Beginner

16:18 BeatofIke: moving to Standard
16:18 BeatofIke: oh and, if I go too fast, tell me to slow down XD
16:19 [Twinkle]: XD ok
16:20 BeatofIke: 00:11:836 (2) - It's more readable if you stack this note at the start of 00:12:221 (3) -
16:21 BeatofIke: stacking a note at the slider end can sometimes confuse a novice player

16:21 [Twinkle]: 00:13:375 (4) - This one the same?
16:21 BeatofIke: yup!
16:21 [Twinkle]: I will pay attention to this next time~
16:21 BeatofIke: I was just about to point that one out XD
16:22 [Twinkle]: \o/
16:22 BeatofIke: just go ahead and stack 00:13:375 (4) - with the start of 00:13:759 (1) -
16:22 BeatofIke:

16:23 [Twinkle]: done
16:23 BeatofIke: 00:13:759 (1) - You don't really need this combo

16:23 BeatofIke: oops
16:23 BeatofIke: wrong one
16:23 BeatofIke: 00:21:452 (1) - this one XD
16:23 BeatofIke: same with 00:24:528 (1) -
16:25 [Twinkle]: QAQ im baka, sometimes add new combo randomly.
16:28 BeatofIke: 00:35:682 (1,2,3,4) - You can actually make a star pattern here

16:30 [Twinkle]: ok, i will try
16:30 BeatofIke: or a diamond pattern

16:33 BeatofIke: Here is an example: http://puu.sh/8m42j.jpg
16:34 [Twinkle]: Oh I know
16:35 [Twinkle]: i thought it was like http://puu.sh/8m49W.jpg
16:35 BeatofIke: okay, that works

16:35 BeatofIke: 00:47:221 (4) - Move this note at 476|252
16:36 BeatofIke: 00:59:913 (3,4) - These notes are off-grid D:
16:38 BeatofIke: You might have to re-arrange this slider: 00:56:836 (1) -
16:38 [Twinkle]: OK~
16:39 BeatofIke: okay, I founs a solution

16:39 BeatofIke: ready?

16:39 [Twinkle]: yes
16:40 BeatofIke: 00:56:836 (1) - Move the second red point at 68|96 and the last point at 172]96
16:40 BeatofIke: now you can just move the next notes a bit down

16:41 BeatofIke: for example, move this slider 00:58:375 (2) - at 328|28
16:42 [Twinkle]: good it works
16:42 BeatofIke: sweet

16:43 BeatofIke: 01:23:759 (2,2) - It's better to not stack these circles at the slider end

16:45 [Twinkle]: OK i will stack it at the head of 01:24:528 (1) -
16:45 [Twinkle]: the same as 01:26:836 (2) -
16:46 BeatofIke: okay

16:52 BeatofIke: 01:46:067 (1) - try moving this slider somewhere else so it does not overlap with 3
16:55 [Twinkle]: OK, fixed
16:56 BeatofIke: okay

16:56 [Twinkle]: moved it to the right of 01:46:836 (2) -
16:57 BeatofIke: nice

16:57 BeatofIke: That's it for Standard
16:57 BeatofIke: moving to advanced
16:58 BeatofIke: brb
16:59 [Twinkle]: sure, waiting for you.
17:09 BeatofIke: okay
17:10 [Twinkle]: here we go, Advanced
17:14 BeatofIke: 00:13:759 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern is hard to follow >.<
17:15 BeatofIke: just change these patterns into 2 triples or sliders
17:16 [Twinkle]: can I just delete 2?
17:16 [Twinkle]: 00:13:855 (2) - this one
17:17 BeatofIke: okay
17:19 BeatofIke: 00:29:144 (1,2,3) - Try moving thse circles at 356|248.

17:20 BeatofIke: It follows the music better

17:22 [Twinkle]: yes it is!
17:23 BeatofIke: 00:38:374 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Move this pattern a grid up

17:25 [Twinkle]: ok
17:25 BeatofIke: 01:32:990 (1) - You don't need this combo XD
17:27 [Twinkle]: oops, again
17:28 BeatofIke: okay, that's it for advanced
17:29 BeatofIke: now to Hyper )
17:30 [Twinkle]: go go go \o/
17:30 BeatofIke: okay

17:30 BeatofIke: 00:11:452 (1) - You don't need combo *runs*
17:31 [Twinkle]: baka as usual @.@
17:31 BeatofIke: same as 00:16:452 (1) - XD
17:31 BeatofIke: uguu ;w
17:32 [Twinkle]: not bad sometimes, fix these are pretty quick i think\w/
17:33 BeatofIke: 01:00:490 (2,3) - players will probably hate you for this pattern XD
17:34 BeatofIke: same for 01:01:259 (2,3) - and 01:02:028 (2,3) -
17:35 [Twinkle]: ;w; i think it may depends
17:35 BeatofIke: 01:54:913 (4,1) - This jump is HUGE XD
17:36 BeatofIke: but it playable
17:36 [Twinkle]: OK i will pull 01:53:759 (1,2,3,4) - closer
17:40 [Twinkle]: http://puu.sh/8m9ek.jpg
17:40 BeatofIke: better

17:41 [Twinkle]: after change 01:55:298 (1) - is 3.75 from pervious
17:42 BeatofIke: Okay, that's it for Hyper

17:42 BeatofIke: Hyper was pretty good
17:43 BeatofIke: moving to Another
17:43 [Twinkle]: thanks
17:46 BeatofIke: Move this pattern a grid down
17:46 BeatofIke: since the end of 4 is touching the HP bar
17:47 [Twinkle]: 00:11:452 (1,2,3,4) - this one?
17:47 BeatofIke: yes
17:47 BeatofIke: same with 00:22:221 (1,2,3) -
17:48 [Twinkle]: OK
17:52 [Twinkle]: 00:28:375 (3) - this one the same i think~
17:59 BeatofIke: yes
18:05 BeatofIke: give me a sec
18:06 BeatofIke: I'm still doing something
18:06 [Twinkle]: OK
18:21 BeatofIke: sorry for delay ;w
18:22 [Twinkle]: It is fine

18:23 BeatofIke: 00:29:528 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - You could probably make this a triangle pattern
18:23 BeatofIke: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1543966
18:24 BeatofIke: notice how 00:30:298 (5,6) - stacks with the start of 00:32:028 (8) -
18:25 [Twinkle]: cool~
18:27 BeatofIke: That's it for Another

18:30 [Twinkle]: great! one more to go.
18:30 BeatofIke: Extra is guest diff, so we can;t really IRC mod XD
18:31 [Twinkle]: hum
18:31 [Twinkle]: the mapper of Extra is one of my friends
18:31 BeatofIke: okay, as long as he/she don't mind

18:31 [Twinkle]: maybe i can show him the chat

18:31 BeatofIke: okay

18:35 BeatofIke: OMG, SO PRO
18:35 BeatofIke: My brother wasn't lying XD
18:35 BeatofIke: This map is pro

18:35 BeatofIke: The hitsounding as even good
18:35 BeatofIke: is*
18:36 [Twinkle]: yeah
18:36 BeatofIke: but why the drain is too low? XD
18:36 BeatofIke: There's so many combo sections on this map
18:36 BeatofIke: including streams
18:37 BeatofIke: I'll increase it to 6
18:37 BeatofIke: Well, guess that's it for Yuki's Extra :/
18:38 BeatofIke: upload map once you are finished

18:38 [Twinkle]: OK, i think he dont mind changing this
18:38 [Twinkle]: I can just change drain to 6 for him. he's really a pro mapper Orz
18:39 BeatofIke: okay
18:43 [Twinkle]: Uploaded again~
18:43 BeatofIke: okay
18:51 BeatofIke: okay time for recheck

18:51 [Twinkle]: sure, ready
18:51 BeatofIke: Beginner, Another and Extra are good now, so I won't recheck those

18:53 [Twinkle]: okay, mainly for hitsounds?
18:54 BeatofIke: re-checking Standard
19:00 BeatofIke: 00:29:144 (1,2) - How about this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1544028
19:00 BeatofIke: hue hue
19:01 BeatofIke: I prefer 1/1 sliders

19:02 [Twinkle]: ok looks nice
19:02 BeatofIke: I only used 4 points for these sliders
19:02 BeatofIke: let me give you the points

19:04 BeatofIke: 00:29:144 (1) - First point: 194|156, second point (red): 166|192, third point 134|232, last point: 150\280
19:06 BeatofIke: 00:29:913 (2) - First point: 216|330, second point: 266|334, third (red) point: 298|293, last point: 326\257
19:07 [Twinkle]: Oh so helpful!
19:07 BeatofIke:

19:07 BeatofIke: you going to have to move 00:30:682 (3,4) - though

19:08 [Twinkle]: yes
19:08 [Twinkle]: it is easy to move these two
19:09 BeatofIke: 00:59:913 (3,4) - These slider shapes can be a bit better

19:12 [Twinkle]: yes
19:13 BeatofIke: How about this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1544054
19:14 BeatofIke: I couldn't think of any alternatives >.<
19:14 [Twinkle]: It is great!
19:15 [Twinkle]: im poor at making slider shapes orz
19:15 BeatofIke: IT takes lots practice
19:15 BeatofIke: lots 0f*
19:16 BeatofIke: I'll give you the points then, some points are the same
19:16 BeatofIke: but first, add a new red point at 120|180. That will be the new second point
19:17 [Twinkle]: you can only give the points for the left one~ i can deal with the right one
19:17 BeatofIke: Move first point at 40|180
19:18 BeatofIke: move third point 116|124
19:18 BeatofIke: move tha last point at 144|8
19:18 BeatofIke: hope that works
19:19 [Twinkle]: works~
19:19 BeatofIke: yay

19:20 BeatofIke: and of course copy/paste the slider and yada yada
19:20 [Twinkle]: Done~
19:20 BeatofIke: okay

19:21 [Twinkle]: really looks better \o/
19:21 BeatofIke: that's it for Standard

19:21 BeatofIke: nice

19:22 BeatofIke: oh wait,
19:25 BeatofIke: 01:46:067 (1,2) - How about you just copy/paste 01:47:605 (3,4) - and filp it, and center the pattern?

19:25 BeatofIke: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1544077
19:25 BeatofIke: looks cleaner

19:27 [Twinkle]: ok!
19:28 BeatofIke: You need to move 01:49:144 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - at 344|272 afterwards

19:29 BeatofIke: and move 01:58:759 (1) - at 188|340
19:29 BeatofIke: that should do it

19:31 [Twinkle]: ok finished~
19:32 BeatofIke: okay

19:32 BeatofIke: Standard should be good now

19:32 BeatofIke: moving to Hyper
19:32 BeatofIke: I mean advanced XD
19:33 [Twinkle]: OK XD
19:33 BeatofIke: 00:10:586 (1,2,3,4,5) - This rhythm looks random, but cool XD
19:34 BeatofIke: 00:29:721 (4) - stack 4 with 00:29:528 (3) -
19:34 [Twinkle]: :3
19:35 [Twinkle]: OK
19:35 BeatofIke: so they each have 2 cirlces
19:37 BeatofIke: okay that's it for advanced

19:37 BeatofIke: lol
19:38 BeatofIke: lastly, Hyper
19:39 BeatofIke: 01:55:293 - This green timing section is unsnapped!
19:39 BeatofIke: move this timing setction at 01:55:298
19:40 [Twinkle]: sure.. this one is hard to find
19:43 BeatofIke: 01:00:490 (2,3) - This (along with 01:01:259 (2,3) - and 01:02:028 (2,3) -) are the only pattern that concerns me >.<
19:43 BeatofIke: other than that Hyper is good to go

19:45 [Twinkle]: could i move these three notes inside out?
19:45 BeatofIke: You can try moving 01:00:682 (3) - at 32|56

19:45 [Twinkle]: 01:00:682 (3,3,3) -
19:45 BeatofIke: If you like

19:46 [Twinkle]: it is the same as what I think!
19:46 BeatofIke: okay

19:47 BeatofIke: You can also add a reverse if you perfer that XD
19:48 [Twinkle]: that drums there are not suit for slider ends i think
19:49 BeatofIke: alrighty then

19:49 [Twinkle]: drums sounds are pertty strong
19:49 [Twinkle]: all right, fixed i think
19:50 BeatofIke: okay upload

19:50 [Twinkle]: like the way done in 01:00:682 (3) -
19:50 BeatofIke: your map is getting hotter...
19:51 [Twinkle]: took in your great heat \o/
19:51 BeatofIke: owo
19:51 [Twinkle]: uploaded
19:53 BeatofIke: okay

19:54 BeatofIke: Much better

19:56 BeatofIke: 01:49:144 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - For standard. This spacing is a bit off. Move this whole pattern at 344|256
19:57 BeatofIke: 01:58:759 (1) - afterwards, move this slider at 188|324.
19:57 BeatofIke: Advanced and Hyper is good to go.
19:58 [Twinkle]: done
19:58 BeatofIke: Upload when you finished. Getting even hotter..
20:00 [Twinkle]: OK, uploaded
20:00 BeatofIke: okay

20:00 BeatofIke: Sweet, everything is good now

20:01 [Twinkle]: finally~ really great improvment for me <3
20:04 BeatofIke:

I still need to check the hitsounding, but that will be for another time.
Giving this map a star for now!

Atrue

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Atrue 2014-04-29T04:19:00+00:00

加油~ XD

BeatofIke

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Joined September 2011

BeatofIke 2014-05-01T00:53:58+00:00

After a 2nd round of IRC modding. I'm giving this map a chance!
Good Luck!

[Twinkle]

179 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

[Twinkle] 2014-05-01T00:56:15+00:00

BeatofIke wrote:
After a 2nd round of IRC modding. I'm giving this map a chance!
Good Luck!

Thank you!

Sellenite

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Joined September 2013

Sellenite 2014-05-01T01:03:15+00:00

哇，恭喜！
BeatofIke we love you ！\:D/

Scorpiour

2,633 posts

Joined May 2011

Scorpiour 2014-05-01T10:13:59+00:00

irc modded with mapper, fix several patterns

Ranked~~!!

irc log

20:39 Scorpiour: 有空?
20:39 [Twinkle]: 嗯
20:39 Scorpiour: irc mod吧
20:39 Scorpiour: 除了extra都是你自己做的？
20:40 [Twinkle]: 是的
20:40 Scorpiour: 恩
20:41 Scorpiour: 从Another开始好了
20:41 [Twinkle]: 好的
20:42 Scorpiour: 00:10:683 (1,2) - 这两个弄成直线的如何？我觉得现在这样扭过去有种“为了将就ds”的感觉
20:42 Scorpiour: http://puu.sh/8uxYs.jpg
20:42 Scorpiour: 之类
20:42 [Twinkle]: 直线的也好
20:43 [Twinkle]: 就是前面一轮也是直线的，怕重复了
20:43 [Twinkle]: 把弯的角度弄小一点？
20:44 Scorpiour: 随意你
20:44 Scorpiour: 00:40:682 (1) - 这里我想听听你放折返的理由
20:44 [Twinkle]: 这里背景音里的鼓声没了
20:45 Scorpiour: 恩
20:45 [Twinkle]: 节奏算是降下来了
20:45 [Twinkle]: 要是不折返还有两个note不知道放哪了orz
20:46 Scorpiour: :>
20:46 [Twinkle]: 这样正好能对称
20:46 Scorpiour: 01:00:106 (6) - 这里的跳突然没了
20:46 Scorpiour: 为什么呢
20:46 Scorpiour: 换个样式吗
20:47 [Twinkle]: 。咦，我没完全听懂
20:47 [Twinkle]: 跳没了？
20:47 [Twinkle]: 是没有跳到00:58:567 (6) - 这个位置吗？
20:47 Scorpiour: 因为前面一组在1/2和stream之间都是跳来跳去的
20:48 Scorpiour: 到这边变成1/2 + 原地stack到下一组stream了
20:48 Scorpiour: 想听听看你的想法
20:48 [Twinkle]: 00:56:836 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) -
20:48 [Twinkle]: 这些都是在一个pattern里面
20:49 Scorpiour: 恩
20:49 [Twinkle]: 下面00:59:528 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - 是另一个
20:49 Scorpiour: 恩
20:49 [Twinkle]: 这里突然换位置应是算作缓冲吧，铺垫作用
20:49 Scorpiour: 恩
20:50 [Twinkle]: 能让玩家感受到“马上要变换样式”的感觉
20:50 Scorpiour: 恩
20:50 [Twinkle]: 嗯，大概就是这样
20:50 Scorpiour: 01:13:375 (1) - 这里，节奏上和前面一样是4连下来的，然后选用了了slider的理由是？
20:52 [Twinkle]: 为下面突然出现的大间距连打铺垫一下
20:52 [Twinkle]: 01:13:375 (1) - 这个是加速的
20:52 Scorpiour: 下面的大间距连打我也有疑问的说
20:53 Scorpiour: 那组连打在节奏上听起来更像是两组旋律之间的过渡
20:54 [Twinkle]: 是的
20:54 Scorpiour: 一般来说，过渡的地方不是会更倾向于使用更平滑的方式，而不是这种如同突然爆发的一个高潮点来处理吗？
20:55 [Twinkle]: 一般来说的确是需要平滑一点
20:56 [Twinkle]: 这里我是想强调突然出现鼓声的冲击力。
20:56 Scorpiour: 所以我想要知道你选择的理由
20:56 Scorpiour: 恩，然后？
20:56 [Twinkle]: 然后就有了这个梗。
20:57 Scorpiour: 只是这样吗……唔
20:57 [Twinkle]: 音效上也是换了，然后鼓声出现。
20:57 Scorpiour: 恩
20:57 Scorpiour: 说实话01:13:375 (1) - 让人感觉有些违和
20:57 Scorpiour: 后面倒是纯粹的好奇
20:58 [Twinkle]: 这首歌的bpm也不是很高
20:58 [Twinkle]: 音的话基本4分拍都比较满。
20:58 Scorpiour: 恩
20:59 Scorpiour: 我可以看你自己打一遍Another吗？
20:59 Scorpiour: :>
20:59 [Twinkle]: 好
21:02 [Twinkle]: ;w;
21:02 [Twinkle]: 断了
21:02 Scorpiour: nice play :>
21:02 Scorpiour: 记得我们刚才说的要弄的那个slider的地方
21:02 Scorpiour: 来看Hyper吧
21:03 [Twinkle]: 嗯
21:03 Scorpiour: 起点向后延迟了很多呢
21:04 [Twinkle]: 对，前面4个都是一样的起点
21:04 Scorpiour: 00:12:221 (1,2,3) - 只是提示一下，这种stack要考虑到stack leniency的影响
21:05 [Twinkle]: 嗯，这里只是三个堆叠影响不是太大
21:07 Scorpiour: 00:44:913 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 这里的overlap看起来视觉效果不太好，能不能不要挡上？
21:07 [Twinkle]: 好
21:12 Scorpiour: -> advance
21:13 Scorpiour: 01:04:144 - 我觉得这里可以放个note，否则空空的感觉有些怪
21:14 Scorpiour: 后面那里也是
21:14 [Twinkle]: 好
21:16 Scorpiour: 比Hyper好一点，break太长了
21:16 Scorpiour: 下一个
21:18 Scorpiour: 恩Normal没啥大问题
21:19 [Twinkle]: 嗯，好像泡了的图不可以upload？
21:19 Scorpiour: 更新去吧

Asagi

1,020 posts

Joined March 2013

Asagi 2014-05-01T10:18:11+00:00

wow 1st rank
Gratz :3

[Twinkle]

179 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

[Twinkle] 2014-05-01T10:18:26+00:00

Scorpiour wrote:
irc modded with mapper, fix several patterns

Ranked~~!!

irc log
20:39 Scorpiour: 有空?
20:39 [Twinkle]: 嗯
20:39 Scorpiour: irc mod吧
20:39 Scorpiour: 除了extra都是你自己做的？
20:40 [Twinkle]: 是的
20:40 Scorpiour: 恩
20:41 Scorpiour: 从Another开始好了
20:41 [Twinkle]: 好的
20:42 Scorpiour: 00:10:683 (1,2) - 这两个弄成直线的如何？我觉得现在这样扭过去有种“为了将就ds”的感觉
20:42 Scorpiour: http://puu.sh/8uxYs.jpg
20:42 Scorpiour: 之类
20:42 [Twinkle]: 直线的也好
20:43 [Twinkle]: 就是前面一轮也是直线的，怕重复了
20:43 [Twinkle]: 把弯的角度弄小一点？
20:44 Scorpiour: 随意你
20:44 Scorpiour: 00:40:682 (1) - 这里我想听听你放折返的理由
20:44 [Twinkle]: 这里背景音里的鼓声没了
20:45 Scorpiour: 恩
20:45 [Twinkle]: 节奏算是降下来了
20:45 [Twinkle]: 要是不折返还有两个note不知道放哪了orz
20:46 Scorpiour: :>
20:46 [Twinkle]: 这样正好能对称
20:46 Scorpiour: 01:00:106 (6) - 这里的跳突然没了
20:46 Scorpiour: 为什么呢
20:46 Scorpiour: 换个样式吗
20:47 [Twinkle]: 。咦，我没完全听懂
20:47 [Twinkle]: 跳没了？
20:47 [Twinkle]: 是没有跳到00:58:567 (6) - 这个位置吗？
20:47 Scorpiour: 因为前面一组在1/2和stream之间都是跳来跳去的
20:48 Scorpiour: 到这边变成1/2 + 原地stack到下一组stream了
20:48 Scorpiour: 想听听看你的想法
20:48 [Twinkle]: 00:56:836 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) -
20:48 [Twinkle]: 这些都是在一个pattern里面
20:49 Scorpiour: 恩
20:49 [Twinkle]: 下面00:59:528 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - 是另一个
20:49 Scorpiour: 恩
20:49 [Twinkle]: 这里突然换位置应是算作缓冲吧，铺垫作用
20:49 Scorpiour: 恩
20:50 [Twinkle]: 能让玩家感受到“马上要变换样式”的感觉
20:50 Scorpiour: 恩
20:50 [Twinkle]: 嗯，大概就是这样
20:50 Scorpiour: 01:13:375 (1) - 这里，节奏上和前面一样是4连下来的，然后选用了了slider的理由是？
20:52 [Twinkle]: 为下面突然出现的大间距连打铺垫一下
20:52 [Twinkle]: 01:13:375 (1) - 这个是加速的
20:52 Scorpiour: 下面的大间距连打我也有疑问的说
20:53 Scorpiour: 那组连打在节奏上听起来更像是两组旋律之间的过渡
20:54 [Twinkle]: 是的
20:54 Scorpiour: 一般来说，过渡的地方不是会更倾向于使用更平滑的方式，而不是这种如同突然爆发的一个高潮点来处理吗？
20:55 [Twinkle]: 一般来说的确是需要平滑一点
20:56 [Twinkle]: 这里我是想强调突然出现鼓声的冲击力。
20:56 Scorpiour: 所以我想要知道你选择的理由
20:56 Scorpiour: 恩，然后？
20:56 [Twinkle]: 然后就有了这个梗。
20:57 Scorpiour: 只是这样吗……唔
20:57 [Twinkle]: 音效上也是换了，然后鼓声出现。
20:57 Scorpiour: 恩
20:57 Scorpiour: 说实话01:13:375 (1) - 让人感觉有些违和
20:57 Scorpiour: 后面倒是纯粹的好奇
20:58 [Twinkle]: 这首歌的bpm也不是很高
20:58 [Twinkle]: 音的话基本4分拍都比较满。
20:58 Scorpiour: 恩
20:59 Scorpiour: 我可以看你自己打一遍Another吗？
20:59 Scorpiour: :>
20:59 [Twinkle]: 好
21:02 [Twinkle]: ;w;
21:02 [Twinkle]: 断了
21:02 Scorpiour: nice play :>
21:02 Scorpiour: 记得我们刚才说的要弄的那个slider的地方
21:02 Scorpiour: 来看Hyper吧
21:03 [Twinkle]: 嗯
21:03 Scorpiour: 起点向后延迟了很多呢
21:04 [Twinkle]: 对，前面4个都是一样的起点
21:04 Scorpiour: 00:12:221 (1,2,3) - 只是提示一下，这种stack要考虑到stack leniency的影响
21:05 [Twinkle]: 嗯，这里只是三个堆叠影响不是太大
21:07 Scorpiour: 00:44:913 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 这里的overlap看起来视觉效果不太好，能不能不要挡上？
21:07 [Twinkle]: 好
21:12 Scorpiour: -> advance
21:13 Scorpiour: 01:04:144 - 我觉得这里可以放个note，否则空空的感觉有些怪
21:14 Scorpiour: 后面那里也是
21:14 [Twinkle]: 好
21:16 Scorpiour: 比Hyper好一点，break太长了
21:16 Scorpiour: 下一个
21:18 Scorpiour: 恩Normal没啥大问题
21:19 [Twinkle]: 嗯，好像泡了的图不可以upload？
21:19 Scorpiour: 更新去吧

谢谢~

[CSGA]Ar3sgice

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[CSGA]Ar3sgice 2014-05-01T10:27:11+00:00

送一分111111

Koiyuki

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Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2014-05-01T10:28:49+00:00

wow

Meg

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Joined August 2012

Meg 2014-05-01T10:56:42+00:00

gratz

Atrue

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Atrue 2014-05-01T11:02:25+00:00

Gratz!

DenoisoGoiso

681 posts

Joined April 2013

DenoisoGoiso 2014-05-01T11:14:11+00:00

congratz wow gj

lightr

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Joined October 2011

lightr 2014-05-01T13:02:32+00:00

WOW nice!!!!!!!

Avena

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Joined December 2012

Avena 2014-05-01T13:14:08+00:00

Really fun map, gratz!
Though, there's one issue I've noticed that might warrant a disqualification, You kept the red combo color in the rest of the diffs that aren't Extra, I understand why it was used in Extra to emphasise certain patterns, but in the rest of the diffs it just goes against the scheme's calm and nice theme.
I'd suggest you to remove the red color from all diffs but Extra.

Fycho

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Joined August 2012

Fycho 2014-05-01T13:19:13+00:00

gratz=L=
最后还是没来得及看音效

[Twinkle]

179 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

[Twinkle] 2014-05-01T13:45:58+00:00

Priti wrote:
Really fun map, gratz!
Though, there's one issue I've noticed that might warrant a disqualification, You kept the red combo color in the rest of the diffs that aren't Extra, I understand why it was used in Extra to emphasise certain patterns, but in the rest of the diffs it just goes against the scheme's calm and nice theme.
I'd suggest you to remove the red color from all diffs but Extra.

Oh, I dont think colours emphasise special patterns here, Extra is different because it's GD.

[Twinkle]

179 posts

Joined October 2012

Topic Starter

[Twinkle] 2014-05-01T13:46:41+00:00

Fycho wrote:
gratz=L=
最后还是没来得及看音效

那就请下次帮我看看啦

Mikazuki

34 posts

Joined July 2011

Mikazuki 2014-05-01T16:29:55+00:00

1st rank gratz

T_Terry_T

13 posts

Joined October 2013

T_Terry_T 2014-05-01T19:13:52+00:00

Congratulation!
Hope it's going to be the first of many ranked maps.

Aurele

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Aurele 2014-05-01T21:28:05+00:00

Hello there. I need to disqualify this map for a snapping issue on Another.

00:19:913 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - There is absolutely no 1/8 in the song, why doing that? Making it more challenging is not an answer..
I would like you to change it for something more realistic. For an example, I have made this, which sounds closer to the song: