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Hanazawa Kana, Itou Shizuka, Toyosaki Aki - Minna no Namee w

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ts8zs
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ts8zs
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年4月21日 at 17:02:28

Artist: Hanazawa Kana, Itou Shizuka, Toyosaki Aki
Title: Minna no Namee wo Irete Kudasai
Source: D-fragments!
Tags: D-Frag! Diifuragu! ディーふらぐ! ed ending
BPM: 190
Filesize: 2470kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.99 stars, 212 notes)
  2. Normal (2.97 stars, 86 notes)
  3. Ts8zStyle (5 stars, 297 notes)
Download: Hanazawa Kana, Itou Shizuka, Toyosaki Aki - Minna no Namee wo Irete Kudasai
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Last edited by ts8zs , edited 19 times in total.
ak74
236 posts
Joined November 2011
ak74
Normal 00:44:179开始的break部分希望可以加点东西，教我mod图plz :(
ts8zs
2,123 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
ts8zs

ak74qbz95xm8 wrote:

Normal 00:44:179开始的break部分希望可以加点东西，教我mod图plz :(
nothing fixed & t/109978
Fycho
Global Moderator
2,479 posts
Joined August 2012
Fycho
如果还打算rank的话就不要用这种奇怪的unrankable的难度名了，rule已经换了
ps:m4m就不做了，最近req比较多而且我也没图
ts8zs
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Topic Starter
ts8zs

Fycho wrote:

如果还打算rank的话就不要用这种奇怪的unrankable的难度名了，rule已经换了
ps:m4m就不做了，最近req比较多而且我也没图
o(` · ~ · ′。)o 名字等被BAT喷再说……Ts8zS' tyle也不差233
(⊙﹏⊙)
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
求m4m

但是我没有图啊

没有图你说什么m4m

啊

送一分

233

wwwwwww

喵

233

233

233

wwwww

思考

四暗刻

2857

喵


General

  1. 英文标题逗号后面加个空格
Ts8zstyle

  1. 00:20:257 (2) - delete thsi note
  2. 00:38:652 (1,2) - add finish
  3. 01:24:443 (1) - 拉到1.5间距
  4. 01:24:601 (1) - 没事加什么kiai
  5. 我觉得00:06:441 (1,2,3) - 这种节奏的地方两个啪之间放跳比较合适
  6. 美丽
Hard

  1. 00:31:547 (7,1,2,1,2,3) - 闷声做大死 我觉得这梗比ins还难
  2. 建议去掉一半以上的newcombo
  3. 另外遮挡多了点 放ar-1吧 除了上面这个梗应该能看得清楚点
Normal

  1. 00:16:547 (1) - 没包好
图做的还可以, 中规中矩的样子
但是说实话选曲一般, 像这样很难做的出彩, 主要是太多复读机



edit: 就是啪啪滑条~啪啪滑条~的两个啪 我觉得有些重击感适合放跳 嘛 随便了
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ts8zs
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Topic Starter
ts8zs

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

General

  1. 英文标题逗号后面加个空格Fixed
Ts8zstyle

  1. 00:20:257 (2) - delete thsi note 缺音啊
  2. 00:38:652 (1,2) - add finish 歌曲没有……完全跟歌
  3. 01:24:443 (1) - 拉到1.5间距 好
  4. 01:24:601 (1) - 没事加什么kiai 喷
  5. 我觉得00:06:441 (1,2,3) - 这种节奏的地方两个啪之间放跳比较合适 只有一个啪啊……
  6. 美丽
Hard

  1. 00:31:547 (7,1,2,1,2,3) - 闷声做大死 我觉得这梗比ins还难 fixed
  2. 建议去掉一半以上的newcombo fixed
  3. 另外遮挡多了点 放ar-1吧 除了上面这个梗应该能看得清楚点fixed
Normal

  1. 00:16:547 (1) - 没包好Fixed
图做的还可以, 中规中矩的样子这居然中规中矩……我倒
但是说实话选曲一般, 像这样很难做的出彩, 主要是太多复读机我就是觉得这歌很诡异故意选的啊……就是想做复读机……

Thx for mod
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yf_bmp
Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper
1,630 posts
Joined December 2011
yf_bmp
[General]
不去掉滑条音?感觉去掉会清爽一些

[Insane]
00:11:810 (5,5) - 就这俩没重叠?,00:11:336 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 00:11:652 (4,4) - 不考虑下?
00:27:600 - add sth
00:30:758 (1,1) - too close
00:35:652 (6,7) - 给人些提示让这两个note让人第一反应是1/2的, 比如放近点或者后者用滑条之类
00:38:179 (5,6) - ^
00:40:389 (5,1) - 同样是没有之前的提示 让人不知道这里应该是什么节奏
00:40:942 (2,4,5) - 挤得慌,00:39:679 (2,4,5) - 这三个不挺好
00:43:705 (2,3) - 同样问题,00:43:389 (1,2) - 这个是一分拍的距离00:43:705 (2,3) - 却差不多一样的距离,之前也没有提示 容易让人混淆
00:51:284 (7,8) - 别短时间完全重叠 may be unrankable
00:56:653 (5) - 弯一下最好
01:06:442 (3,4) - ctrl+G更符合flow 难度也不怎么影响
01:08:021 (2,1) - too close
01:24:601 (1) - 为啥whistle 消音得了

[Hard]
00:10:230 (1,2) - 容易误读,00:05:178 (1,1) - 这里都是1/1的
00:24:442 (1,2,1,2) - 变个角度?以增加观赏性(可无视
00:29:179 (2,1,2,1,2) - ^
00:38:969 (2,1) - tooooooooooooo close
00:51:284 (1,2,1) - may be unrankable
00:56:021 (1,2,3) - 没摆圆
01:12:758 (1) - too close
01:11:179 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 有没有必要NC?因为之前你是NC的:01:01:074 (1,2,1,2,1,2)

[Normal]
00:15:284 (1,1) - 没包好
00:25:389 (4) - 包的太近,应该像这样:00:29:494 (2,4)
00:49:389 (3,1) - ^
00:54:126 (2,3) - ^
01:06:127 (4,1) - 没对称不好看,01:05:179 (3,4) - 这个就接近对称
01:20:337 (2,1) - /me hit 包子, 包好啊
01:22:232 (2,1) - ^

mod的有些匆忙 不过这些都是大体上的啦 乃自己类推一下可能会找出更多 good luck
ts8zs
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Topic Starter
ts8zs

yf_bmp wrote:

[General]
不去掉滑条音?感觉去掉会清爽一些懒

[Insane]
00:11:810 (5,5) - 就这俩没重叠?,00:11:336 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 00:11:652 (4,4) - 不考虑下? 嗯~ o(*￣▽￣*)o不考虑
00:27:600 - add sth fixed
00:30:758 (1,1) - too close姑且算是fixed
00:35:652 (6,7) - 给人些提示让这两个note让人第一反应是1/2的, 比如放近点或者后者用滑条之类NC
00:38:179 (5,6) - ^NC
00:40:389 (5,1) - 同样是没有之前的提示 让人不知道这里应该是什么节奏这个已经NC
00:40:942 (2,4,5) - 挤得慌,00:39:679 (2,4,5) - 这三个不挺好嗯表示紧凑感
00:43:705 (2,3) - 同样问题,00:43:389 (1,2) - 这个是一分拍的距离00:43:705 (2,3) - 却差不多一样的距离,之前也没有提示 容易让人混淆1.3和2差多远
00:51:284 (7,8) - 别短时间完全重叠 may be unrankable 再说w
00:56:653 (5) - 弯一下最好no
01:06:442 (3,4) - ctrl+G更符合flow 难度也不怎么影响又变回来了耶
01:08:021 (2,1) - too closeNC
01:24:601 (1) - 为啥whistle 消音得了歌曲自带

[Hard]
00:10:230 (1,2) - 容易误读,00:05:178 (1,1) - 这里都是1/1的盘旋的方式不一样
00:24:442 (1,2,1,2) - 变个角度?以增加观赏性(可无视华丽无视
00:29:179 (2,1,2,1,2) - ^接着无视
00:38:969 (2,1) - tooooooooooooo close哈？
00:51:284 (1,2,1) - may be unrankable不能吧
00:56:021 (1,2,3) - 没摆圆没看出来
01:12:758 (1) - too closeNC
01:11:179 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 有没有必要NC?因为之前你是NC的:01:01:074 (1,2,1,2,1,2) NC

[Normal]
00:15:284 (1,1) - 没包好 fixed
00:25:389 (4) - 包的太近,应该像这样:00:29:494 (2,4) no
00:49:389 (3,1) - ^no
00:54:126 (2,3) - ^no
01:06:127 (4,1) - 没对称不好看,01:05:179 (3,4) - 这个就接近对称
01:20:337 (2,1) - /me hit 包子, 包好啊fixed
01:22:232 (2,1) - ^ fixed

mod的有些匆忙 不过这些都是大体上的啦 乃自己类推一下可能会找出更多 good luck
3k4 4 mod
CET 6
365 posts
Joined August 2012
CET 6
包子~

General

好像说音乐文件要192kbs以下

Normal

没什么大问题 不过00:31:705 (1,2) - 这种缠绵的滑条莫名喜感
对了好像挺多都是跟vocal 不过你习惯这样吧，我的话可能会选择都跟白线


Hard

感觉滑条速度好快- -
00:15:757 (1) - 这个为啥变色了··
00:32:494 (2) - 这里开始的放在红线上的 因为排列使得间距变大使人一开始没反应过来
感觉你的重复重叠梗好神奇


Ts8zStyle

这种难度名应该是不让用了现在
00:01:389 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - 感觉这里逐渐往外扩大也不错的样子
00:42:442 (1) - 要不要弄成那种会抖的滑条不过后面排列可能又要动- - 还是这样吧··
00:49:863 (4) - 这里调下来是因为遮住前面的滑条吗?如果是的话应该遮没关系 或者改动一下形状


挺好玩的~GL！
ts8zs
2,123 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
ts8zs

CET 6 wrote:

包子~

General

好像说音乐文件要192kbs以下哇没注意……全都要改好麻烦QAQ

Normal

没什么大问题 不过00:31:705 (1,2) - 这种缠绵的滑条莫名喜感噗
对了好像挺多都是跟vocal 不过你习惯这样吧，我的话可能会选择都跟白线


Hard

感觉滑条速度好快- -EN一概0.8 HI一概1.6习惯了
00:15:757 (1) - 这个为啥变色了··(。﹏。*) 我错了……
00:32:494 (2) - 这里开始的放在红线上的 因为排列使得间距变大使人一开始没反应过来让他们思考一下吧
感觉你的重复重叠梗好神奇w


Ts8zStyle

这种难度名应该是不让用了现在 泡时再说……
00:01:389 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - 感觉这里逐渐往外扩大也不错的样子嗯~ o(*￣▽￣*)o保持吧
00:42:442 (1) - 要不要弄成那种会抖的滑条不过后面排列可能又要动- - 还是这样吧··听的东西不太一样w
00:49:863 (4) - 这里调下来是因为遮住前面的滑条吗?如果是的话应该遮没关系 或者改动一下形状主要就是想跳一下w


挺好玩的~GL！
Thx for modw
P o M u T a
2,284 posts
Joined December 2010
P o M u T a
hi.

[General]
  1. need add tag 'ディーふらぐ!' because, this anime title. usually people serach.
  2. Remove Enable countdown please. not need.
  3. Remove Letterbox during Breaks please. you not used letterbox. not need.
  4. Combo Color3 and Combo Color4 is red color. you try 4 other color? my suggest color is gray or green or pink or orange. (beceause BG color)
  5. add tag 'ed' and 'ending' please.
[Ts8zStyle]
  1. Really low OD. try +2 or +3.
  2. Slider Tick 2 better.
  3. this diffname unranked now.. you change Insane better.
  4. 00:01:403 (1,1) - remove clap. instead add finish better. fit sound.
  5. 00:06:455 (1,1) - ^
  6. 00:08:982 (1) - you forget clap here.
  7. 00:03:929 (1,2,3,4) - really boring pettern here.. try jump or make stream sound.
  8. 00:08:982 (1,2,3,4) - ^
  9. 00:50:667 (5) - add NC. more readable.
  10. 00:58:246 (1) - remove clap. instead add finish.
  11. 01:08:351 (1) - ^
  12. 01:15:930 (1,2,3,4) - again here.
  13. 01:20:983 (1,2,3,4) - ^
  14. 01:24:457 (1) - add finish?
  15. 00:51:930 - kiai time start... really low volume imo. try +20~30%.
[Hard]
  1. OD+1 HP+1
  2. 00:01:403 (1,1) - remove clap slider head. instead add finish slider head.
  3. 00:06:455 (1,1) - ^
  4. 00:15:771 (5) - 1/1 slider change rhythm better. so, more fit song.
  5. 00:45:614 (2,3) - add whistle slider head.
  6. 00:53:193 (1) - add finish slider head.
  7. 00:58:246 (1) - ^
  8. 01:08:351 (1) - ^
  9. 01:13:404 (1,1) - remove clap. instead add finish.
  10. 01:18:457 (1,1) - ^
  11. 01:24:141 (1) - add finish slider end?
[Normal]
  1. OD+1
  2. remove widescreen support please.
  3. 00:01:403 (1,1) - remove clap. instead add finish.
  4. 00:06:455 (1,1) - ^
  5. 00:34:245 (1) - add finish slider head.
  6. 00:40:719 (1) - remove NC.
  7. 00:43:088 - umm... this song tv size. so, breaktime bit boring imo.
  8. 00:50:667 (1) - end point (x:230 y:99) try. more good seems.
  9. 01:10:877 (1,3) - remove finish slider end. instead add finish.
  10. 01:18:457 (1,1) - ^ but, slider head.
  11. 01:24:299 (3) - add finish slider end?
good luck!
ts8zs
2,123 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
ts8zs

P o M u T a wrote:

hi.

[General]
  1. need add tag 'ディーふらぐ!' because, this anime title. usually people serach.
  2. Remove Enable countdown please. not need.
  3. Remove Letterbox during Breaks please. you not used letterbox. not need.
  4. Combo Color3 and Combo Color4 is red color. you try 4 other color? my suggest color is gray or green or pink or orange. (beceause BG color)
  5. add tag 'ed' and 'ending' please.
[Ts8zStyle]
  1. Really low OD. try +2 or +3.
  2. Slider Tick 2 better.
  3. this diffname unranked now.. you change Insane better.
  4. 00:01:403 (1,1) - remove clap. instead add finish better. fit sound.
  5. 00:06:455 (1,1) - ^
  6. 00:08:982 (1) - you forget clap here.
  7. 00:03:929 (1,2,3,4) - really boring pettern here.. try jump or make stream sound.
  8. 00:08:982 (1,2,3,4) - ^
  9. 00:50:667 (5) - add NC. more readable.
  10. 00:58:246 (1) - remove clap. instead add finish.
  11. 01:08:351 (1) - ^
  12. 01:15:930 (1,2,3,4) - again here.
  13. 01:20:983 (1,2,3,4) - ^
  14. 01:24:457 (1) - add finish?
  15. 00:51:930 - kiai time start... really low volume imo. try +20~30%.
[Hard]
  1. OD+1 HP+1
  2. 00:01:403 (1,1) - remove clap slider head. instead add finish slider head.
  3. 00:06:455 (1,1) - ^
  4. 00:15:771 (5) - 1/1 slider change rhythm better. so, more fit song.
  5. 00:45:614 (2,3) - add whistle slider head.
  6. 00:53:193 (1) - add finish slider head.
  7. 00:58:246 (1) - ^
  8. 01:08:351 (1) - ^
  9. 01:13:404 (1,1) - remove clap. instead add finish.
  10. 01:18:457 (1,1) - ^
  11. 01:24:141 (1) - add finish slider end?
[Normal]
  1. OD+1
  2. remove widescreen support please.
  3. 00:01:403 (1,1) - remove clap. instead add finish.
  4. 00:06:455 (1,1) - ^
  5. 00:34:245 (1) - add finish slider head.
  6. 00:40:719 (1) - remove NC.
  7. 00:43:088 - umm... this song tv size. so, breaktime bit boring imo.
  8. 00:50:667 (1) - end point (x:230 y:99) try. more good seems.
  9. 01:10:877 (1,3) - remove finish slider end. instead add finish.
  10. 01:18:457 (1,1) - ^ but, slider head.
  11. 01:24:299 (3) - add finish slider end?
good luck!
Except finish,Fixed most. Repled for 10 times,Sorry for short
Yauxo
1,622 posts
Joined June 2011
Yauxo
Hi there, m4m via chat :3

[Normal]
Looks well made to me, pretty much flawless.
00:08:982 (1) - Make a better blanket out of it. middle tick 1x right, last tick 1x down and 2x right
00:46:877 (1) - This one might be difficult to read for beginners. Try to move the downwards going part a little further away from the rest of the slider
01:24:615 (1) - Is the kiai time really needed for the spinner? :/

[Hard]
I really like the style of this (blankets to the maximum :3)
00:10:719 (2) - This Slider is hard to read since it has the same distance as the Sliders before it, yet is played 1/2 ticks before the others are. Consider resnapping this one.
00:16:087 (1) - Also harder to read due to the snapping. Move it to around 104/128 depending on how you want the movement to be. (or just let it overlap with 00:17:192 (3) - )
00:20:824 (4) - Spread this one abit. Like this http://puu.sh/72mi8.jpg
00:42:456 (1) - ^

Last kiaitime problem as above

[Tz8zStyle]
I dont think that this kind of diff name is allowed anymore, so you should probably rename this to Insane
Also, I think this one is awesome. Didnt see anything like this before and I like it alot!

Last kiaitime problem as above

GL with your mapset
ts8zs
2,123 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
ts8zs

Yauxo wrote:

Hi there, m4m via chat :3

[Normal]
Looks well made to me, pretty much flawless.
00:08:982 (1) - Make a better blanket out of it. middle tick 1x right, last tick 1x down and 2x right fixed
00:46:877 (1) - This one might be difficult to read for beginners. Try to move the downwards going part a little further away from the rest of the slider no,They should adjust this
01:24:615 (1) - Is the kiai time really needed for the spinner? :/ not really need,but for fun,It is my style:3

[Hard]
I really like the style of this (blankets to the maximum :3)
00:10:719 (2) - This Slider is hard to read since it has the same distance as the Sliders before it, yet is played 1/2 ticks before the others are. Consider resnapping this one. It isn't same as before
00:16:087 (1) - Also harder to read due to the snapping. Move it to around 104/128 depending on how you want the movement to be. (or just let it overlap with 00:17:192 (3) - ) Difficulties at start is good for players
00:20:824 (4) - Spread this one abit. Like this http://puu.sh/72mi8.jpg no,They should adjust this
00:42:456 (1) - ^ no,They should adjust this

Last kiaitime problem as above

[Tz8zStyle]
I dont think that this kind of diff name is allowed anymore, so you should probably rename this to Insane
Also, I think this one is awesome. Didnt see anything like this before and I like it alot! Same as norin:3

Last kiaitime problem as above

GL with your mapset
Thx for second mod~
Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki


M4M

  1. Black——My personal suggestions.
  2. Bold——Highly recommended.
  3. Red——(Maybe) Unrankable, you must fix it.

[General]
  1. 标题和罗马标题不要用顿号，因为国外是没有这种符号的。建议改成如下：
    Aritist: 花澤香菜, 伊藤静 & 豊崎愛生
    Romanised Aritist: Hanazawa Kana, Itou Shizuka & Toyosaki Aki
    做成和雪月花一样的方式比较好
  2. 最后的kiai是怎么回事？

[Normal]
  1. 为什么很多finish全部用clap代替了啊，不一个个说了太多了，然后你整个diff都是clap……
  2. 00:15:298 (1) - 头finish
  3. 00:20:035 (3) - 干嘛不做成和前面一样的？
  4. 00:25:403 (4) - 这里怎么又没NC，要么你就把00:15:298 (1) - NC去掉
  5. 00:30:456 (4) - ^
  6. 00:31:719 (1,2,3) - 2没包好1的尾巴导致也没包好3
  7. 00:34:245 (1,2,3) - ^
  8. 00:31:719 (1) - 头fin
  9. 00:34:245 (1) - ^
  10. 00:43:719 - 这段break觉得没啥存在感不如放个转盘
  11. 00:49:403 (3) - 头whi
  12. 00:58:246 (1) - repeat上clap
  13. 01:00:772 (1) - 头fin
  14. 01:08:351 (1) - repeat上clap
  15. 01:13:720 (2,3,1,2) - 这里感觉节奏不太对，应该移后1/2，01:13:720 - 这里改加一个note
  16. 01:23:036 (1) - 改成这里01:23:351 - 一个note算了

[Hard]
  1. 问题一样，感觉是fin的地方加上了clap
  2. 总算知道前面打的时候哪里奇怪了，ar7,190bpm，sv还1.6，根本不是搭配起来的三维啊，你这滑条速度明显过快了
  3. 00:12:771 (1,2,3) - 个人认为单纯地重复有点无聊 不如1,2ctrl+g,3ctrl+g一下，而且你原来00:13:087 (3,1) - 的距离也不太好读
  4. 00:17:824 (1,2,3) - 换个梗？
  5. 00:20:824 (4) - 这个能再拉好点么- -
  6. 00:50:667 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 一样难读
  7. Hard和Insane kiai用一样的梗没问题么

[Ts8zStyle]
  1. ok diff名可以改过来了么？
  2. 问题一样，感觉是fin的地方加上了clap
  3. 00:22:719 (1,2,3,4) - 这个建议和hard的一样，整体反过来放.-.
  4. 00:57:614 (5) - 尾巴和3stack？
  5. 01:13:404 - 最后这段和前面一模一样 至少该该间距换换方向什么的吧

Good luck~
Chloe
1,160 posts
Joined April 2011
Chloe
As special case :C

[General]

  1. 01:24:457 - 我觉得这里放个KIAI没啥意思 最好删了
[Normal]
  1. 00:03:929 (1,2) - 00:07:087 (2,2) - 这种overlap放在normal真是一点都不合适 而且就算你想用 那么00:08:982 (1,2) - 这组也要一样啊
  2. 00:20:035 (3) - 改成和 00:14:982 (3,1) - 一样？ 毕竟你后面那2组00:25:087 (3,4) - 00:30:140 (3,4) - 都是一样的
  3. 01:08:351 (1,1) - 我觉得这种快速制图法真是很糟糕 反正我不太喜欢用
  4. 01:24:299 (3) - add 和01:24:457 (4) - 重叠 位置139,273

[Hard]
  1. 00:21:614 (1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - 我觉得这段做的不错啊 老实说前一段虽然挑不出啥问题 但我总觉得质量不是很好
  2. 00:34:245 (1) - 我觉得可以拉开点间距
  3. 00:47:824 (1) - 可以考虑和00:48:140 (3) - 的尾巴stack
  4. 00:50:351 (1) - 换成1/3
  5. 01:24:615 (1) - spinner结尾静音更好 whistle也不需要

[Insane]
  1. 00:01:561 (2) - 我觉得这个和00:01:718 (3) - stack更好 better flow better design
  2. 00:02:824 (2) - 00:06:613 (2) - 00:07:876 (2) - ^
  3. 00:03:297 (4) - 话说这个还没拉好啊 看approach rate
  4. 00:04:561 (1,1,1) - 都NC
  5. 00:09:613 (2,3) - ^
  6. 00:10:245 (3,4) - 这俩当中都是1/4节奏啊 可以换个串
  7. 00:12:613 (1,2,3) - 151,139
  8. 00:14:350 (4) - 间距太大了.. 我建议这里保持1.6XDS try 315,78
  9. 00:19:561 (2) - 这边的间距.... 为什么前后不一样 有啥特别的理由么？
  10. 00:21:614 (3) - 注意blanket
  11. 00:24:298 (2) - 节奏有点怪 我感觉这里需要一个停顿来配合你这DIFF的其余停顿 考虑一下删了如何
  12. 00:39:456 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:40:719 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这俩三角各自的单点之间间距不一样 感觉不是很好
  13. 00:46:719 (5,6) - add for better rythem and flow
  14. 00:48:930 (6) - 为什么这里DS是0.9X而不是1.0X 细节啊细节
  15. 00:51:298 (3,4) - 不要重叠 拉开一点距离 还可以换个角度啥的 比如 http://puu.sh/74D0U.jpg
  16. 01:03:298 (1,2,3,1,2) - 我觉得你这边一直堆在一起有点无聊 而且我觉得这边如果有些停顿会好有趣点 http://puu.sh/74Dab.jpg
  17. 01:06:141 (1,2,3,4,5) - flow不是很好 建议弧度平滑点
  18. 01:07:088 (1,2,3,4,1) - 五角会好点
  19. 01:13:404 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - 和开头一样
  20. 01:23:036 (1,1,1,1,1) - 排列的干净点呗 这不好看啊

Good luck <3.
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Hatori-kun
84 posts
Joined December 2012
Hatori-kun
I think you should put TV size ver. in title according to vgmdb: http://vgmdb.net/album/43072
Mint
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Joined February 2013
Mint
Name: ミンナノナマエヲイレテクダサイ
Romanised: Minna no Namae wo Irete Kudasai
Artist: 花澤香菜，伊藤静 & 豊崎愛生

No video? http://puu.sh/7oMt9.avi
Baltabek
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Baltabek
RANK! PLS!
Azure
771 posts
Joined November 2010
Azure
[Ts8zStyle]
  1. 00:01:718 (3,4,5) 雖然我不知道你這3個slider的間距要這麼奇怪，但像後面00:53:193 (1,2,3) 這樣子弄好不是很好嗎，而且00:01:561 (2,4) 這還overlap實在不怎麼好看哪...
  2. 00:03:929 (1,2,3,4) 這間距為什麼不一樣...就算是Insane，簡單的4個note把它擺好才不會讓人覺得你這圖做得很隨便哪
  3. 00:14:982 NC意義不明
  4. 00:35:666 - 00:41:666 這段散狀note我不知道該怎麼說，要是我自己我大概也不會擺，不過你這樣的擺法估計player得看著圈圈打
  5. 01:13:404 我看你這段是複製貼上，那問題跟前面一樣
  6. 01:13:876 unsnapped
[Hard]
  1. 我說這Hard的間距怎麼亂七八糟的，為甚麼有的時候1/1跟1/2的距離是一樣的... 還有這Hard的遮擋也太難了吧
  2. 這個看起來比Insane好多了，只是間距的問題有點亂
[Noaml]
  1. 01:07:088 (1,1) 你確定要再Normal這樣擺?
太久沒摸圖了抱歉啊，說實在的我覺得這歌不好做啊
ts8zs
2,123 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
ts8zs

Azure wrote:

[Ts8zStyle]
  1. 00:01:718 (3,4,5) 雖然我不知道你這3個slider的間距要這麼奇怪，但像後面00:53:193 (1,2,3) 這樣子弄好不是很好嗎，而且00:01:561 (2,4) 這還overlap實在不怎麼好看哪... 本来只是绕圈觉得有点无聊
  2. 00:03:929 (1,2,3,4) 這間距為什麼不一樣...就算是Insane，簡單的4個note把它擺好才不會讓人覺得你這圖做得很隨便哪 没开DS……
  3. 00:14:982 NC意義不明你i说得对
  4. 00:35:666 - 00:41:666 這段散狀note我不知道該怎麼說，要是我自己我大概也不會擺，不過你這樣的擺法估計player得看著圈圈打故意这么摆的
  5. 01:13:404 我看你這段是複製貼上，那問題跟前面一樣……稍微改了一下
  6. 01:13:876 unsnapped
[Hard]
  1. 我說這Hard的間距怎麼亂七八糟的，為甚麼有的時候1/1跟1/2的距離是一樣的... 還有這Hard的遮擋也太難了吧
  2. 這個看起來比Insane好多了，只是間距的問題有點亂
00:11:508 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 这部分是半速._. 改了下绿线让它看起来是1.x ....
[Noaml]
  1. 01:07:088 (1,1) 你確定要再Normal這樣擺?
Noaml
太久沒摸圖了抱歉啊，說實在的我覺得這歌不好做啊我觉得还好啊
说实在的才发现发错图了:< 本来想发农林那张的……你还有图要M4M么,存ticket也行……虽然说价值不高 ._.
Azure
771 posts
Joined November 2010
Azure

ts8zs wrote:

说实在的才发现发错图了:< 本来想发农林那张的……你还有图要M4M么,存ticket也行……虽然说价值不高 ._.
我忘了這行
Minna no Namae wo Irete Kudasai

行啊 發link給我ticket吧
Akemi_Homura
1,509 posts
Joined February 2011
Akemi_Homura
Hi~~! ts8zs~! :3
From M4M~

  • [General]
  1. Add AudioLeadIn 1000ms.(Start is fast.)

  • [Normal]
  1. I think OD 3 is better.
  2. 00:06:455 (1) ~ 00:08:982 (1) - I think this part too compact. you can spread them~ :3

  • [Hard]
  1. Slider Velocity is same with Insane diff. Please decrese this. I think 1.4 is okay~
  2. 00:15:771 (5,1) - I think this rhythm is more fit to music(because vocal is singing from 00:15:771 to 00:16:087.)
  3. 00:25:561 (3) - stack perfectly with end of slider.

  • [Ts8zStyle]
  1. HP 7 (becuase Hard is 6)
  2. 00:11:666 (4) - I think this note too far from next slider.I know you want jump.. but DS is 5.14.. too jumpy~!
  3. 00:12:929 (4) - ^
  4. 01:22:246 (3) - move this note to 152,48.so make perfect triangle shape.
  5. 01:22:720 (1) - move to 256,96. then you can make this clean shape.

Nice song and mapset~!
GL to rank~ :)
DozeHow
29 posts
Joined August 2010
DozeHow
Hi there

Ts8zStyle

00:03:613 (5) - 稍微拉远一点 更漂亮。可以理解为跟另外两个slider关于中间的note对称
00:04:561 (2,3,4) - 这里的节奏可以听伴奏。比如放成一堆短slider跳来跳去之类的<.<（同 01:16:562 (2,3,4) - ）
00:07:403 (5) - 这个东西就跟第一点同理了……仔细调整一下更美观而且稍稍加一点点难度也好。或者你可以考虑放成逐渐变远。
00:14:508 (5,1) - 这排列略坑 建议换一下slider方向然后调整一下位置。
00:16:166 (8,9,1) - 明明放的是跟前面00:15:456 (5,6) - 一样的距离，可是却隔了好久……当然听节奏能听出来，不过建议改一下
00:39:456 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 这里的排列就真的很坑了……第一遍听完全推断不出来节奏，看也看不出来。建议调整一下位置。
01:01:088 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - 略重复。可以听一下人声或者伴奏，选择一个放连打。
01:23:667 (1,1,2) - 建议调整位置，尤其是最后一个slider和note。
整体而言需要继续调整位置，而且其实这歌的伴奏很多地方可以放连打……我的意思是连打太少<.<
还有不少地方听着虽然是没音乐的，但是其实可以放slider占位。
坐等修改后版本……

Hope this map rank as fast as it could~ :)
SnowNiNo_
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
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Joined April 2013
SnowNiNo_
  • [Ts8zStyle]
  1. 00:02:824 (2,4) - 試著stack會好看許多
  2. 00:03:929 (1) - 這邊有很重的音 建議間距擺大一點來強調這個note
  3. 00:07:719 (1) - 同上
  4. 00:14:666 - 這邊的音很重不建議用滑條尾
  5. 00:28:877 (1,2) - 1>2的間距也可擺大一點 後面一樣
  6. 01:07:088 (1,2,3,4) - 間距可以越來越大來express這邊的vocal
  7. 01:15:930 (1) - 恩一樣
  8. 01:19:720 (1) - ^
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