This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年1月12日 at 17:36:56

Artist: Hanazawa Kana
Title: Renai Circulation
Source: Bakemonogatari
BPM: 120
Filesize: 3999kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (1.88 stars, 93 notes)
2. Hard (4.58 stars, 204 notes)
3. Insane (4.92 stars, 314 notes)

Download: Hanazawa Kana - Renai Circulation
Download: Hanazawa Kana - Renai Circulation (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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it is the first time i did a beatmap, i hope you can enjoy this,

it is the No.4 opening song of a japen anime ,Bakemonogatari .

if it is any problems in this map , please tell me and i will correct it . thx.

---UPDATE RECORD---

v1 first upload the map (2009-10-1)

v3 a lot of distance error is fixed , insane level is added (2009-10-7)

v5 mp3 with larger sound level is updated , small error is corrected in hard and inasne is fixed (2009-10-23)

v6 some problems found by AImod is fixed (2009-10-24)

v7 moded by James2250 Thanks ~>0<

v8 moded by osuplayer111 Thanks ! =]

v9 moded by SOGASOGAMO Thanks !^^

v10 moded by statementreply Thanks ~! @@

v11 moded by Kytoxid Thanks!

v12 moded by Alice Margatroid Thanks!

v13 moded by Lissette ! Thanks!

v14 moded by Zekira ! Thanks!

v15 moded by kino77 ! Thnks!

v16 moded by Nakata Yuji ! Thanks!

v17 moded by xxheroxx ! Thanks!

v18 moded by DJPop ! Thanks!

v19 moded by Leorda !Thanks!

v20 moded by Armin ! Thanks!

v21 moded by Samurai_X ! Thanks !

v22 moded by Tanmak ! Thanks !

v23 moded by Essien ! Thanks!

v24 Background size is fixed ~

v25 modded by osuplayer111 ~ Thanks!

Why no respond???

Is that my beatmap is very bad ?

Who can give me adivse and i will improve that...

Try joining #mod and asking the people there to take a look at your map for you.

If I get a chance I'll look at it tomorrow after I get home from work.

oh thanks....

but,i found that there is other player making this song ....

should i stop making this...?

You can do this song anyway, isn't a problem

oh i see... (the beatmap was updated just now)

osuplayer111 wrote:

You can do this song anyway, isn't a problem

Can you help me to mod this map ?

I would just make bpm 120.000
need preview point *under timing*

easy:
need more hitsounds
00:09:40 (1) - start at 00:09:16
00:15:16 - I dont think long break is needed right near the start of the song...try mapping this part and putting break later in song?
00:52:16 (3) - new combo?
01:15:17 (1) - extend by 1/4
sounds odd where it ends I would have a note at 01:28:16 to end it

hard:
00:12:66 (5,6,7) - make straight?
same break comment
00:31:79 (10,11) - redo this to follow song more..?
01:11:17 (1) - I would move this to center of grid *looks nicer*
01:12:92 (1,2) - spacing
01:13:17 (2) - extend by 1/4
01:14:55 (1) - take off new combo
01:19:17 (4) - new combo
01:20:42 (1) - take off new combo
01:24:55 (1) - ^
01:24:92 (2) - new combo here
01:27:18 (11) - extend by 1/4

insane:
00:03:54 (3) - extend by 1/4
00:05:54 (2) - ^
00:29:04 (7) - ^
00:32:17 (13) - extend by 1/2
00:32:79 (1) - delete this
00:52:16 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18) - make new combos in this
01:19:17 (10) - new combo
could use some more hitsounds

overall: good map but sometimes follows lyrics more than song (not good) which is why there are 1/4 comments..I would check over again to see if any other sliders in particular need changing
*star*

James2250 wrote:

I would just make bpm 120.000
need preview point *under timing*

easy:
need more hitsounds
00:09:40 (1) - start at 00:09:16
00:15:16 - I dont think long break is needed right near the start of the song...try mapping this part and putting break later in song?
00:52:16 (3) - new combo?
01:15:17 (1) - extend by 1/4
sounds odd where it ends I would have a note at 01:28:16 to end it

hard:
00:12:66 (5,6,7) - make straight?
same break comment
00:31:79 (10,11) - redo this to follow song more..?
01:11:17 (1) - I would move this to center of grid *looks nicer*
01:12:92 (1,2) - spacing
01:13:17 (2) - extend by 1/4
01:14:55 (1) - take off new combo
01:19:17 (4) - new combo
01:20:42 (1) - take off new combo
01:24:55 (1) - ^
01:24:92 (2) - new combo here
01:27:18 (11) - extend by 1/4

insane:
00:03:54 (3) - extend by 1/4
00:05:54 (2) - ^
00:29:04 (7) - ^
00:32:17 (13) - extend by 1/2
00:32:79 (1) - delete this
00:52:16 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18) - make new combos in this
01:19:17 (10) - new combo
could use some more hitsounds

overall: good map but sometimes follows lyrics more than song (not good) which is why there are 1/4 comments..I would check over again to see if any other sliders in particular need changing
*star*

Thank you! =]

I corrected the beatmap following your comments , see if it is ok or not..
sometimes follows lyrics more than song , but i have no idea to change it ...

Mod Info's:

Green: Suggestions, you don't have to fix, your choice.
Orange: You don't have to fix too, but is better if you do it.
Red: You have to fix this for sure!

Starts Suggestions:

All fine.

[Easy]

Snap correctly all circles with grid snap.

00:21:16 (6) - New combo.
00:23:16 (9) - Too far from (8).
01:04:91 (1) - I suggest to remove this note.

[Hard]

You have to follow distance snap. Some parts are too close.

00:30:79 (7) - New combo.
00:34:91 (1) - Too close from (8).
00:37:16 (1) - Too close from (12).
01:23:16 (1) - Too close from (5).

[Insane]

Same as hard. Use distance snap correctly please!

00:53:17 (1) - Too close from (6).

osuplayer111 wrote:

Mod Info's:

Green: Suggestions, you don't have to fix, your choice.
Orange: You don't have to fix too, but is better if you do it.
Red: You have to fix this for sure!

Starts Suggestions:

All fine.

[Easy]

Snap correctly all circles with grid snap.

00:21:16 (6) - New combo.
00:23:16 (9) - Too far from (8).
01:04:91 (1) - I suggest to remove this note.

[Hard]

You have to follow distance snap. Some parts are too close.

00:30:79 (7) - New combo.
00:34:91 (1) - Too close from (8).
00:37:16 (1) - Too close from (12).
01:23:16 (1) - Too close from (5).

[Insane]

Same as hard. Use distance snap correctly please!

00:53:17 (1) - Too close from (6).

Thanks! I fixed these problems . ^^

>w<化物语，I like
easy is good XD
hard:
00:28:29 (8) -
slider end 00:28:540(蓝线) 延长到 00:28:602(黄线) 我觉得这样会更符合音乐O-O
00:33:16 (2,3,4,5,6) -
orz 为什么那个6飞出来了XD
insane:
00:38:79 (13) -
我觉得这个note，前面蓝线再加一个note，然后这个拖后一格到红线会更好O-O
.-.都是些小建议，只代表个人观点 觉得不好可以无视,很喜欢这首歌,加油XD
star

SOGASOGAMO wrote:

>w<化物语，I like
easy is good XD
hard:
00:28:29 (8) -
slider end 00:28:540(蓝线) 延长到 00:28:602(黄线) 我觉得这样会更符合音乐O-O
00:33:16 (2,3,4,5,6) -
orz 为什么那个6飞出来了XD
insane:
00:38:79 (13) -
我觉得这个note，前面蓝线再加一个note，然后这个拖后一格到红线会更好O-O
.-.都是些小建议，只代表个人观点 觉得不好可以无视,很喜欢这首歌,加油XD
star

Thanks ~! 剛剛看到你說黃線的時候我還在想, 好像沒有黃線.... 原來是1/8 O.o"

恩，1/8 XD

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[Easy]

00:45:16 (4) - New combo?
00:55:16 (7) - Move it to the right to line up with the end of the previous slider?
01:06:66 (3) - Move it a bit to the right to line up with the previous note?
01:09:16 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Your 1/2 notes had a slight stack before this, so maybe move these closer.
01:23:16 (1,2,3) - I'd stay consistent with your previous pattern here if you wanted to use it.

[Hard]

00:15:91 (2,3,4) - Move upwards a bit?
00:30:41 (3,4) - Spacing.
00:39:16 (12,13) - New combo on these notes?
00:48:16 (9,1,2) - These are a bit close, previous 1/2s don't overlap. Maybe move the new combo onto the 9.
01:07:16 (7) - New combo?
01:22:53 (5) - Move down a bit.
01:27:16 (11) - New combo?

[Insane]

00:27:42 (1,2,3,4) - Hard to read these sliders.
00:31:66 (11) - New combo?
00:43:66 (6,7,8) - Move these to the left a bit.
01:02:17 (2,3,4) - A bit too close.
01:27:18 (11) - New combo?

Neat map. Star.

Easy
00:44:16 (3,4,5,6,7) - Even for an easy it feels really boring. Try placing this with more imagination :/
There's no really spacing errors or timing or something but, I think you'll need to try to be more creative with placements of notes in the grid. More nice alignments, cool shapes for sliders, etc. Just look at lots of maps by popular mappers. :3
Also I think you'll need more hitsound mod. It's not that they are bad placed but it feels a bit empty (it could be just me)
Hard
00:44:64 (2,3,4) - I don't really like those 3 claps. Try removing (3)'s one.
Just as easy it feels a bit empty. For example there's some hitsound on a part and then here it's empty:
00:46:16 (1,2,3,4,5) : maybe be a bit more creative, and if you don't feel like you can, then, try posting on modding queue that says they like to mod hitsounds.
00:54:16 (10) - clap at the end?
01:01:16 (1,2,3,4) - It could be nazi to say such a thing but, it would look better parallel each other. Then after you can recheck spacing but seriously I doubt there would be a big error after, I mean, lots of people don't care about such a spacing compare to the timeline, I guess. O:
01:05:16 (2) - This slider feels unwanted, either change the end point so it matches more the rhythm either delete it and change with notes or decomposed sliders (would be better I think, more a map is creative more it's good to see and to play I guess)
Just like easy: try to be more creative with slider shapes, notes placements, hitsounds.. And also some parts look like easy with a bit more notes too much. Also, I don't like the end, it feels like an easy or a normal. This hard have got really easy and hard parts.. Diversify a bit more, maybe?

Insane
00:13:16 (1,2) - hitsounds? It's suddenly so empty D:
01:05:16 (1) - Same as hard.
And, also, same as easy and hard for other comments, and similar to hard at some parts.. It would have been much better if you just delete all notes before making difficulties, not to keep the same notes at same parts, but, lots of popular mappers do that too, but I never really liked this, especially for new mappers ;_; But huh.. Well.

Overall it's a good start but try to keep in mind what I said above :3
Also awesome song, you have my star

Thanks ~!

Kytoxid and Alice Margatroid =]

Hi!

Easy
Remove that lil breaktime
01:27:78 (6) - remove this note, and place a little slider.... start point: 01:27:53, and end point:01:27:78

Hard
00:10:66 (5,6,7) - move the triplet half beat earlier
00:12:29 - add note, 00:12:79 - remove this one
00:21:29 (2) - remove this note
00:22:29 (2) - ^
00:32:16 (9) - end point at 00:32:66
01:05:16 (2) - end point at 01:05:66 and repeat if you do, obviously 01:06:16 (3) - remove this note

Insane
00:18:91 (4) - remove 2 repeat, if you do......
00:19:66 (5) - move to the prev blue tick and......
00:19:79 - add note
00:24:91 - ^
00:25:04 - ^
00:44:41 - add note?

Star!

Lissette wrote:

Hi!

Easy
Remove that lil breaktime
01:27:78 (6) - remove this note, and place a little slider.... start point: 01:27:53, and end point:01:27:78

Hard
00:10:66 (5,6,7) - move the triplet half beat earlier
00:12:29 - add note, 00:12:79 - remove this one
00:21:29 (2) - remove this note
00:22:29 (2) - ^
00:32:16 (9) - end point at 00:32:66
01:05:16 (2) - end point at 01:05:66 and repeat if you do, obviously 01:06:16 (3) - remove this note

Insane
00:18:91 (4) - remove 2 repeat, if you do......
00:19:66 (5) - move to the prev blue tick and......
00:19:79 - add note
00:24:91 - ^
00:25:04 - ^
00:44:41 - add note?

Star!

Thanks!

Offset: 1161

That's it for now...

@whoever is spying on me: ...am I sounding monotonous? ._.

Zekira wrote:

Offset: 1161

That's it for now...

@whoever is spying on me: ...am I sounding monotonous? ._.

Thanks! I changed !

who is spying on you?0.0

很好听哒歌呀~>w<~
还是那句,note color有碍瞻观~不过也不影响啦~
[Easy]
00:44:66(x)-Add a note here?
01:07:66(x)-^

[Hard]
00:14:16(2)-Add one reverse?
00:28:29(8)-End here 00:28:54?
00:30:79(3,4)-Spacing?
00:31:66(7,8)-^
00:48:41(1)-Clap?
00:53:16(7,8)-Spacing?
00:53:78(9,10,11,12)-^
01:04:41(8,9)-New combo?
01:19:16(1,2)-Spacing?

[Insane]
00:08:66(8)-New combo?
00:25:54(x)-Add a note here?
00:40:30(x)-^
00:32:91(x)-^

Star~

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Easy:
01:09:015 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Too hard for easy, imo. Keep it in if you want.

Nice for easy.

Hard:
The only thing I would advise against is the streams in the beginning. Some of the 5 note streams might be a bit tricky for hard, and I would advise keeping them in insane only.

Insane:
00:13:016 (1,2) - This is Insane. You could change these into streams.
00:29:003 (7) - Change this into multiple notes too.
For some reason, it felt easier than hard. It was probably just me, but I felt that it was worth mentioning.


In general, an easy map to mod because of the lack of problems. A good thing for both of us, and I'm starring this.

Nakata Yuji wrote:

Easy:
01:09:015 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Too hard for easy, imo. Keep it in if you want.

Nice for easy.

Hard:
The only thing I would advise against is the streams in the beginning. Some of the 5 note streams might be a bit tricky for hard, and I would advise keeping them in insane only.

Insane:
00:13:016 (1,2) - This is Insane. You could change these into streams.
00:29:003 (7) - Change this into multiple notes too.
For some reason, it felt easier than hard. It was probably just me, but I felt that it was worth mentioning.


In general, an easy map to mod because of the lack of problems. A good thing for both of us, and I'm starring this.

Thanks ^^ fixed

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xxheroxx wrote:

Mod Info's:

Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.

Starts Suggestions:

All seems ok.

[Easy]

00:53:015 (5) - New combo
01:25:015 (3) - ^

[Hard]

00:36:003 (8) - 1/4 <-
00:36:028 (9,10,11,12) - 1/4 <- and add a circle at 00:36:659 -no

[Insane]

00:15:016 (8) - New combo
00:36:161 (x) - add a circle
01:03:016 (5) - New combo
01:07:016 (11) - ^

Starred~

Thanks~ moded

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DJPop wrote:

~Easy~
00:13:016 (1) - add hitclap at end
00:15:016 (4) - ^
00:17:016 (1) - ^
00:19:016 (4,5) - ^
00:21:066 (2) - add hitclap
00:22:016 (3) - add hitclap at end
00:23:066 (5) - add hitclap
00:24:016 (6) - remove hitclap
00:29:016 (5) - new combo

~Hard~
00:13:016 (1) - add hitclap at 5th note
00:14:016 (2) - ^
00:15:016 (1) - add hitclap at end
00:16:016 (4) - use repeat slider
00:20:066 (3) - add hitclap
00:21:041 (1) - add hitclap at 3rd note
00:22:041 (2) - ^
00:23:016 (1) - add hitclap at end
00:24:016 (1) - remove hitclap
00:24:410 - add circle with hitclap
00:40:015 (13) - new combo
00:54:015 (10) - ^

~Insane~
00:13:066 (5) - add hitclap
00:14:066 (5) - ^
00:15:016 (1) - add hitclap at end
00:16:016 (4) - use repeat slider
00:19:053 (5) - add hitclap
00:20:016 (8) - ^
00:31:066 (11) - new combo
00:38:078 (13,14) - move 1/4 left
01:27:016 (11) - new combo


+Star

Thanks ! All comment are fixed ~!

very nicely done, no major problems i could fine,

what i will say though is that there is a few nazi problems in each of the maps, i wont point them out, just make you aware that they are there for if you wanna fix them

star

jericho2442 wrote:

very nicely done, no major problems i could fine,

what i will say though is that there is a few nazi problems in each of the maps, i wont point them out, just make you aware that they are there for if you wanna fix them

star

Thanks ^^

[All Difficulty]
Some addition for all difficulty
00:41:159 - Set the kiai time here to 00:56:159
00:57:159 - Set the kiai time here to 01:11:158

[Easy]
00:24:660 (x) - Make a circle here with clap hitsound
01:11:158 (1) - No new combo
01:11:408 (x) - Remove this break

[Hard]
00:21:410 (1) - No new combo
01:11:158 (1) - ^
01:11:408 (x) - Remove this break

[Insane]
01:11:161 (1) - No new combo
01:11:408 (x) - Remove this combo

Good song! Star

Leorda wrote:

[All Difficulty]
Some addition for all difficulty
00:41:159 - Set the kiai time here to 00:56:159
Added
00:57:159 - Set the kiai time here to 01:11:158
No

[Easy]
00:24:660 (x) - Make a circle here with clap hitsound
No
01:11:158 (1) - No new combo
No , Since it is a jump
01:11:408 (x) - Remove this break
No

[Hard]
00:21:410 (1) - No new combo
fixed
01:11:158 (1) - ^
No , Since it is a jump
01:11:408 (x) - Remove this break
No

[Insane]
01:11:161 (1) - No new combo
No , Since it is a jump
01:11:408 (x) - Remove this combo
No

Thanks~- =]

[Easy]

00:17:161 Clap at the end
00:21:661 Clap ( don't forget the clap-rythm)
00:24:661 (x) Add a hitcircle
00:31:161 Clap at the end
00:35:161 ^
00:40:161 Clap at the start
01:17:161 Spacing
01:22:161 Clap

[Hard]

00:13:161 Clap on the fourth repeat
00:14:161 Whistle at the start
00:59:411 Clap
00:59:661 Remove clap
01:07:911 Incomplete slider, move prolong the last way point, also respect the spacing.
01:18:536 Clap
01:25:536 (4,7) Claps

[Insane]

00:11:411 Clap
00:44:411 (x) Add a hitcircle

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[Easy]
00:18:016 (2,3) - Add a note between?
00:20:016 (5) - Cut length in half, add a repeat
01:27:016 (3,4,5) - Lower the volume to match the song fading out

[Hard]
00:13:016 (1,2) - Take off 3 repeats? (end on white ticks)
00:21:041 (2) - Take off 2 repeats? ^
00:22:041 (2) - ^
00:28:078 (9) - Remove
00:28:028 (8) - Delete the slider point in the middle so it ends on the white tick
00:31:028 (6) - Remove clap?
00:38:078 (11) - ^
01:27:016 (1,2) - Lower the volume of these to match the song fading out

[Insane]
00:44:078 (3) - Remove clap?
01:27:016 (1,2) - Lower volume to match song fade out

Cute song, I like it a lot Have a star~

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Hello~

[General]
00:57:161 - 01:12:661 Kiai..
And disable Kiai other time part.

[Hard]
01:07:911 (5) Make longer to 01:08:661
01:08:911 Add note?

[Insane]
00:20:161 (8) Longer to white tick. And add clap in end part.
00:18:911 - 00:22:911 Make like a picture. Of course you can apply this.
And, I suggest add note 00:21:536 and 00:22:536.
Ah, Red arrow is clap.

00:36:036 (8) Remove clap.

Starred.

About Hard:
0.57: The 3-4 and 7-8 are too quick (in my opinion). Perhaps some more spacing?

Tanmak wrote:

Hello~

[General]
00:57:161 - 01:12:661 Kiai..
And disable.....

All fixed =]

DragonsWhip wrote:

About Hard:
0.57: The 3-4 and 7-8 are too quick (in my opinion). Perhaps some more spacing?

I think it is ok

Easy:
00:46:661 (x): Add a note?
01:11:411 (B): Break not really needed.

Hard:
00:24:661 (3): Move a grid left then down to match with 1,2.
01:11:411 (B): Break not really needed.

Insane:
no problems found.

Remember, suggestions, not orders ~
star

Essien wrote:

Easy:
00:46:661 (x): Add a note?
01:11:411 (B): Break not really needed.

Hard:
00:24:661 (3): Move a grid left then down to match with 1,2.
01:11:411 (B): Break not really needed.

Insane:
no problems found.

Remember, suggestions, not orders ~
star

fixed~ =] thanks

...whoops, I forgot to star before lol. Well I'm modding this again anyway so...

[Insane]
00:44:016 (1) - I dunno, but this jump feels a bit too sudden

[Hard]
01:08:091 (6) - though it looks OK while in normal mode, it's apparently already offscreen... o_o

That's it for now.

I don't really see any technical errors.... just suggestions
[Easy] is more like [Normal] and [Hard] is more like Insane due to streams. Maybe change their name and [Insane] could be called [Extra] or any other names.

[Insane]
01:02:066 (4) - Looks bad. You agree, right?
01:27:078 (2) - [Don't have to change] Move this slider to the red tick and place a note on this timing. Slider should end at the same place (white tick)

Cuuuuuuttteeeee~.

Takuma wrote:

Cuuuuuuttteeeee~.

Oh , i just fixed a very small problems and update the map.
It seems that be non-bubbled O.o "?

Max Background size= 1024x768
Your Background size= 1365x768

Please resize it~

minyeob wrote:

Max Background size= 1024x768
Your Background size= 1365x768

Please resize it~

fixed =]